Fantistic 4 AND the TEEN TITANS IN.....DOOMSDAY ALERT!

[Allen CARR]

If you have any problems understanding the DCUAs new Fantastic 4, please read the team bios herehttp://forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=131439

Chapter 1-The Two Families shall meet


Inside the Fantastic 4 Watch Tower in Metropolis, MR.Fantastic sat in his bedroom room, focused on his computer, his thumbs clicked the mouse.He shook his head, and a look of disbelief comes on his face.



The room door, then opened. A beautiful, dark haired woman, wearing a black dress, walked in.she had a smile on her face, and then shook her head, when she saw MR.Fantastic.

"Bruce, stop working, we are gonna be late for the party." said the woman.

Bruce turned and faced her.

"Its our Party Diana, we can afford to be late. Besides thers a huge amount of energy, comeing from Jump City." replied Bruce.

Diana walked over, and Grabbed Bruces arm, and they walked out the room. The two headed down an elevator, and arrived on the 1st floor, dozens of people are gathered. From reporters, to senators, Diana and Bruce entered the bright room. The crowd turned, and applauded thier entrance, Bruce and Diana gave a short waive. They walked down, to the bottom floor, and the crowd swarmed them.


"Wonderwoman, are you and Mr. Fantastic, planning on kids." asked a random reporter.

"We......we." Diana paused.

Bruce took her buy her arm, and walked through the crowd. They sat and a table, reserved for them. Then, a tall Bulky man, with jet black hair, and wearing a black suit,and glasses, walks up to them.

"Hey Clark, enjoying the party?" asked Diana.

"Its okay, but i rather be working out, then doing this." Replied Clark.

Diana laughed, Bruce didn't respond at all. a Red blur, then zoomed across the room, and came up to the 3 of them. The Blur stopped moveing, and Flash stoodr, in his red suit.


"Hey guys, this party sucks." said Flash.

Diana sighed, and Bruce just shook his head.

"Its suppose to be a party, celebrateing us, and why are you wearing your costume?" asked Diana.

"Cause, i wanted to add some color to this dull party sis." replied Flash with a smile.

Clark smacked him on the back of his head.

"Jeez Wally, its called a black tie party!" said Clark.

Wally rubbed his head, and then just shrugged at Clark. A huge alarm, then went off in the room.

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JUMP CITY:


The Titans were engaged in battle, with strange green creatures! Robin thew Birdarangs at them, while Cyborg was blasting them, with his cannon! Beastboy laid on the ground knocked out, and Raven, and Star laid next to him. Theyfought next to a pizza shop, citizens ran from the massive battle.

"Cyborg, don't give up, we almost got them!" yelled Robin.


Cy noded, then continued blasting on the green creatures! The creatures, were comeing out a huge portal, which had opened in a bank. Robin ran out of rangs, and proceeded in fighting off the monsters, useing his bo staff! Beastboy, Raven, and Star finally awoke. Beatsboy turned into a T-REX, and starting biteing threw the monsters! Starfire blasted on them, as they continued comeing out the portal.

"Thats it!" yelled Raven. "Azarth Metron Zinthos! she yelled.



Raven uses her power, and picks up all the creatures, and then tosses them back into the portal. The portal then shuts behind them, leaving the Titans releaved!


"Good job Rae." said Cyborg.

Raven noded to him. Robin then looked around.

"What is it Robin?" asked Starfire?

"I want to know where that portal came from." replied Robin.

The others all noded.

"Maybe we can tell you." said a voice.


The Titans all turned around, and saw MR.Fantastic come walking out a ship.



TO BE CONTINUED..................................

[Kregor8]

Dude, you are the number one most freakin' ambitious person I've ever come across. This is what, 22 stories that you've written one chapter for? That's ambitious.
I hate to sound harsh now, but your puctuation is awful.
At least you didn't use the style of writing that you used in so many of your stories (see below for an example).
Robin: "I want to know where that portal came from.
Mr. Fantastic: "Maybe we can tell you."
So, in not using that, you've improved sigifigantly over the other stuff of yours I've read. May I suggest a little focus, though? I'm not trying to be harsh. I'm trying to help you improve. Pick one story out of 22 that you absolutely love, and work on only that story until it is done. Think of what you want to say, and write it. Then find some pictures. If you can't find any pics, don't sweat it! The best stories on this board are completely pictureless! So, don't stress out, but apply yourself. Or at least, that's my advice.

7<regor

[T.T.Raven4]

*Gets ready to say all of that but Kregor says it first*

Um...Correct. Kregor is right. You NEED to pick one story.

[Crowgirl]

I totally agree with Kregor8. Honestly, I didn't want to be the one to say it, but he said everything I wanted to.

And no offense, but this is probably the last story of yours I'm going to post on. We gave you advice to stick to one story, but you're not even listening to us. Actually, you're not listening to anyone who has told you that.

Interesting plot however. But you tried messing with Aladdin, and I'm not sure that went well. DO NOT mess up this.