I wanna pass some ideas past you guys

[Vivace]

As some of you know, I have been currently running a fan fiction called Renegade. Anway, as I have said within the thread I will be leaving room for a sequel intitled Hunter. Now, in between my sequel and the fic I'll be doing another fic in between. I have three in mind, I decieded to drop Anicent in favor of a Beast Boy based fic. Anyway tell me which idea sounds the most intriguing to you.

1. Delegate, a fan fiction about a member of Starfire's family but it takes another turn. I would like to do one about her brother. I can't tell you much but as the fic's name implies, he is a diplomatic reprisentive. Would be written in Third Person.
2. Pieces, a fan fiction about Cyborg and him couping with his robot form. Will go some into his past and how he got the body in the first place. Would be written in First Person.
3. The Cure, as Robin still searches for Slade, Beast Boy seaches for a Cure to Terra's petrification more relientless than Robin ever quested for Slade. Would be written in Third Person.

So please post feedback on your favorite of the three. I'll most likely end up writing them all at one time or another but what one you want done after Renegade is your choice.

[T.T.Raven4]

3 or 2. 3 would be better than 2, but 2 would be better than 1. Gasp. So many numbers.

[Matt A]

"Pieces" sounds like the most interesting one: there are very few fics about Cyborg, and there are even fewer fics about the Titans' pasts. So, obviously, there's a big gap to fill there.

[Vivace]

Pieces was what I am leaning on right now mainly because he's one of if not my favorite character. But Just in case you people were wondering, I am pretty far from done with Renegade as I said we are in Act I of my little Three Act play. Act I is drawing to a close meaing I have 2/3s of the story left to do after that.

[T.T.Raven4]

Originally Posted by Welshie's Mate

"Pieces" sounds like the most interesting one: there are very few fics about Cyborg, and there are even fewer fics about the Titans' pasts. So, obviously, there's a big gap to fill there.

That's another thing to keep in mind. Welshies Mate is correct here.

[Crowgirl]

Originally Posted by Welshie's Mate

"Pieces" sounds like the most interesting one: there are very few fics about Cyborg, and there are even fewer fics about the Titans' pasts. So, obviously, there's a big gap to fill there.

What he said.

[Raven37]

Originally Posted by Welshie's Mate

"Pieces" sounds like the most interesting one: there are very few fics about Cyborg, and there are even fewer fics about the Titans' pasts. So, obviously, there's a big gap to fill there.

Yes. What he said. #2 sounds good.

-Raven37

[Everlasting]

I would like to see #2 because I like Cyborg, and as mentioned, there are few fics about him.

or

I would also want to see #3 because Slade's my favorite villain and I'm I love it when Robin obsesses over him. And I'm a BBT fan...

[Vivace]

So I've got a lota people going for Pieces. Now for those of you who know my work, Do 'yall think I can pull it off?

[Red X Unmasked]

You know, these are some interesting ideas, but I like 2. In fact, what would be really good for you to do (or maybe I'll do it when I'm done with my other stories)? It'd be awesome if there was a story revolved around only origins. Like it would have the Titans narrorating it themselves and they could be like talking into a camera like "The Confessional Booth" on those reality TV shows. Or they could just be righting this stuff in their diaries or something.
You know what, I think that'll be my next fic. I'll call it "Confessions of a Titan".
Coolzies!

[Vivace]

Okay looks like I'm going to have to go to the copywright offices and get this thing copywrighted it seems SOME people want to steal my ideas...

[Red X Unmasked]

Originally Posted by Vivace

Okay looks like I'm going to have to go to the copywright offices and get this thing copywrighted it seems SOME people want to steal my ideas...

1) I'd like to see you try and copyright a story based on characters that have already been copyrighted

and

2) I wasn't trying to copy you. I simply gave you an idea for a good plot for a fic, and I was thinking that if you wouldn't/couldn't/didn't want to use, then maybe I'd type up that story when I'm done with my other ideas. I don't see how that is copying when I made the idea.
Maybe there was some miscommunication or something.

[Vivace]

Originally Posted by Red X Unmasked

1) I'd like to see you try and copyright a story based on characters that have already been copyrighted

and

2) I wasn't trying to copy you. I simply gave you an idea for a good plot for a fic, and I was thinking that if you wouldn't/couldn't/didn't want to use, then maybe I'd type up that story when I'm done with my other ideas. I don't see how that is copying when I made the idea.
Maybe there was some miscommunication or something.

So, I'm still right so you are going to have to just get over it. Thanks for the ideas though suriously. If I don't get to it first, I'll just read what you post.

[Aquagirl15]

right, what they said. i really like Cyborg, he's one of my fav of the titans. i've always been wondering how Cyborg got his robotic body cause none of the episodes explain it. it would be cool to see how you make it. so i'm guessing 2, 2, or make your readers angry. jk. so yeah i'd got w/ 2 these people know how to give advice believe me.

[Red X Unmasked]

Originally Posted by Vivace

So, I'm still right so you are going to have to just get over it. Thanks for the ideas though suriously. If I don't get to it first, I'll just read what you post.

I'll get over "it" when I find out what you were "still right" about. but you're welcome .

[Allen CARR]

Just keep writing Vivace, look at me, i have a record number of stories going. Some of them are on like the 4th or fifth page. I just plum forgot to update them. My next one, is gonna be about Cyborg and Beastboy taking a road trip around america, and haveing some far out adventures.

[Vivace]

You just had to make good stories didn't you. Now i'm going to have to read that when you do it. Along everything else I'm trying to catch up on. I chose to join at a bad time I guess. Mabye I'll spend all weekend catching up on my fic reading plus continuing Renegade.

[Vivace]

THis would be the basic opening for Pieces. As I said before this is written from Cyborgs point of view. Tell me what you think:


It's like being in a void. It is a swirling nothingness that connects two worlds, a cold forbidding place where time seems to stand still. In this place, there are no hopes. There are no dreams.

That's what sleep is like for me. I supposed it's a lot like being dead. I wouldn't know. It's been this way so long I forget how normal people sleep. My parents had to wipe my memory of whatever happend to me. They said that it was too traumatizing. All I really know about it is that it cost both my body and my older brother's life. My cold comatomic mechanical body beings to hum, signaling that it's time to wake up.The lights turn on all throughout my body, and I begin getting visual feedback from my mechanical eye. I survey the area around me in a tinted red.

What the-!? My computer's on! I bet it was Beast Boy! Man, it bettter not have a virus; I do NOT wan't to repeat that exprience.

My pysical body begins to stimulate. My human eye begins to see in a fuzzy unclear vision. I take my arm up and wipe away the sleep from it. My sense begin to become active again, sight, hearing, smell, and touch. In whatever happend to me, it caused my taste buds to die, or be distoryed or whatever. All I know is that now nanobots now live on my tounge sending messages to my brain. It's pretty cool because I can turn them on and off, very useful when sampling some of Star's food, and I use that term lightly.

All of my senses are now up and my systems are running at one-hundred-percent. I walk up to my computer and see what's up. Hmmm, Looks like it's not BB's fault. I got an email. Let's see....

Help me! Four guys, they kiddnapped me! Please! I'm at the docks at area 5! PLZ! I don't know what to do!
-Jacob

Well looks like it's time to stop pondering my past and explaining all my cool fetures to myself and get to work.



What do you think? I would expand on this idea and stuff.

P.S. Renegade Chapter 8 coming up today.

[Matt A]

That was pretty cool! I'm guessing that Jacob has links with Cy's past...

[T.T.Raven4]

That was cool! I liked it. I get the feeling this'll turn out pretty cool. Go with this idea. I'd love to see more.