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A True Friend (Teen Titans Fanfic)
Ok, this is a Teen Titans fanfic with Jinx and Terra as the main characters. If you don't really like those characters then I suggest you don't read, because they are in every chapter. I know the title sounds like it will be that sappy story with two people becoming best friends, but I couldn't think of anything else. Especially since they are talking about betrayal a lot throughout the story. The other main Titans come along, so don't worry. I wrote this on FF.net(no one's really reading it...) but I will post it here too.
Summary: Jinx, who is annoyed with her friends Gizmo and Mammoth for the last time goes back West to Jump City. While she is there, she finds something incredible, and someone who might change her life forever. Chapter One: Underground Treasure So they were at their third headquarters, Mr. Brother Blood and his students in the H.I.V.E., and they were hearing a speech from the headmaster himself, about the recent events. "This place is very well hidden so they can't find us here," Brother Blood told his students at their new school. A young girl, Jinx, was sitting with her two best friends in the back of the H.I.V.E's auditorium scoffed as soon as she heard that statement. Gizmo, one of her best friends was listening intently to Brother Blood's speech/lecture. He even took notes about it for crying out loud! He was a bald one, and his color he wore was green. The rest of himself was covered in tech. Jinx sometimes wondered why he never put the goggles that sat on the top of his head on his eyes. She didn't bother to ask though, because who wants to listen to a 45 minute explanation of that anyway? In her opinion though, it was much better than what they were listening to then. Gizmo was about 4 years younger than Jinx, but 10 years smarter. He was about 3 feet shorter, but 20 times more prepared. Jinx was a good fighter and all-one of the best actually, but she didn't take it as seriously as little Gizmo. She was just doing her job which was being a villain. Her other friend, Mammoth was waiting anxiously for lunch. Jinx heard his stomach growl once or twice even if he had stolen food from the cafeteria located with him. A big muscular guy like that's got to eat though. Unlike Gizmo, Mammoth was twice as big as Jinx. He had a brown thick hair that went to his shoulders and even a beard. He wore black with yellow bracelets and a yellow "M" on the front of his outfit. His shoes were HUGE...and yellow. Jinx was smarter than him and she knew that for a fact. She was probably better prepared than him for an attack. He was the strength of their team though, and that helped a lot. "They can't find us here," she said in a mocking tone, "Just like last time..." she said under her breath in her regular voice. She played with the pink pigtail on the left side of her head and thought about this last time. Last time the ever popular Teen Titans sent one of their members to spy on the H.I.V.E due to having to take care of three raids in one week. Their chosen one to go and foil their plans was Cyborg; the half man half robot that she didn't really care for before he came to the H.I.V.E. But then she remembered. It was not Cyborg who acted as their friend, danced with her at the Sadie Hawkins Dance and was one of the top students at their little evil school. It was Stone. Anyway, a few months later the Titans came back to see what Brother Blood was up to thanks to this Aqualad guy who told them the H.I.V.E was hidden under water and destroying his precious home. She did not see the Titans at all that time, but she heard kids around the school talking about it and she also heard that another one of her close friends named Bumblebee was a spy. Her so-called friend worked for the other side. "Which now brings us to here," Jinx said, while talking to herself again. The third; and hopefully the last headquarters. She zoomed back into reality. "To prevent anymore interruptions to my plan, we'll have triple training hours to be ready." The depressed students awed. The students at the H.I.V.E lost interest in Brother Blood’s plans and came to the point that they didn’t really care if the Teen Titans came back or not. "Anything that looks strange, or anyone who seems strange is to be reported to me," he continued, "those who do not..." 'Blah, Blah, Blah' That's all that Jinx and most of the other students in the H.I.V.E were hearing. Does this guy ever stop talking? She began to zoom out of reality again, and her eyes fluttered as she was about to fall asleep. "Hey Jinx!" a gruff voice yelled in her ear. "What?!" she shouted back at Mammoth. "You ok? You've been sitting here with that annoyed look on your face the whole time." "Yeah, and you've been talking to yourself too," Gizmo added, "Can't you pipe down? I'm trying to take notes." "And I'm trying to sleep. Leave me alone you guys...just this once." Mammoth shrugged and Gizmo was already back to listening to the headmaster but unfortunately for Gizmo, Brother Blood had ended his speech and the auditorium was scattered with clapping. It was finally lunch. ******* Lunch was a special...whatever it was and Gizmo, Mammoth, and Jinx sat at their usual table. Everyone understood that it was their table and their table only. While they were eating, Gizmo took out something from his backpack. "Whas tha?" Mammoth asked with his mouth full. "It's a TI-92 you clutch head," Gizmo responded, "Stole it from that new electronics store on Civilax Avenue. The best calculator I know of." "You sure about that?" Jinx asked. "Duh. Come on Mammoth, let's go play Worm." Jinx finished eating and watched her two friends play "Worm" she guessed the object of the game was to catch as many worms as you can and fuel up some plane which was in the shape of a bird. You had to make it to the worm king. Although the game sounded stupid, Jinx actually wanted to give it a try. "Hey guys, can I play?" "Um..no," Gizmo responded while not looking up from the calculator. For some reason Jinx felt insulted. If she was in the mood she'd hit him so hard he wouldn't be able to feel it. Instead she asked, "Why not?" "Because it uses superior nano technology and a microchip and has a strong CPU which you don't know how to use." (AN: I don’t' really know all that technical vocabulary for calculators. What Gizmo is saying is pure junk I've heard over the years.) "And besides," he added before Jinx could say anything, "you're just a stupid girl." He and Mammoth guaffled at Gizmo's words. Now, Jinx was in the mood to hit him. She didn’t care if he was just joking. Jinx stood up and got her powers ready. "Can a stupid girl do this?" A wave of pink came from her hands and threw the two boys backwards. A few people in the lunchroom gasped and waited what would happen next, but the dispute didn't last long because a voice boomed out, "JINX!!" It was Brother Blood- and she knew she was in much trouble now. Don't bring that kind of behavior to my school. I thought you knew better than that. For you it's 6 times extra training and while you're doing that, you're going to learn how to control your temper," he said with a smirk. Wow, he was one to talk. "But-" "Are you arguing with me young lady? Training room; NOW!" Jinx slowly followed the headmaster while glaring back at Gizmo and Mammoth who were howling with laughter. Would she ever have a true friend? ******* The young pink-haired girl stood in the training room, while cameras of the school staff watched her. She ran the obstacle course a few times and got bored. She was sitting down whether or not the cameras were watching her. Deep in thought, Jinx looked out the window. She needed to take a walk. A long walk. Jinx turned to the camera and fired a jinx at it. Then she climbed up the honeycombs on the side of the wall and jumped out. Since the headquarters was practically in the middle of nowhere, she decided to run as fast as she could to the city. Not the nearest city, but the city they were at before they headed East-Jump City. Maybe she could do something to take her anger off her friends such as causing trouble for everyone else. ******* Since it was in the middle of the day, it was pretty quiet outside for Jump City. She needed an audience to cause trouble. For some reason, this day's events were prettyodd because the ground soon started shaking and started to cave in. Many rocks went underground and very soon she joined them. When Jinx came back to her conscience, she was face to face with a statue in the shape of a girl about her age. Being the big bad villain she was, she couldn't be scared. It was just a giant rock…in the shape of a kid. She'd seen rocks in the shape of George Washington's head before so it wasn’t that strange. Rocks from above when the ground caved in were still falling. Jinx looked up and down at the statue, wondering what it was. She looked down to read the plaque which had writing on it, but the statue glowed yellow and the rocks that made it blew off. Jinx fell back and after much dust cleared away from her eyes, she observed what was left of the statue. But she didn’t see a statue, she saw a girl who was covered in dirt still standing there with her eyes closed. Her hair which looked to be blond before looked brown due to all of the dirt. She wore blue armor which had ripped cloth attached to it. After a long silence and a break of strange events, the girl opened her blue eyes to say out loud, "It's about time I got that to work." She took one look at Jinx, while Jinx took one look at her, and in unison they both screamed. *** What did you think? I have chapters 2,3,4 and 5 done but I wanted to see what people thought. Last edited by Everlasting; 12-27-2004 at 12:39 PM. |
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Firsties!!! Yay!!!
Look, this is awesome. And by awesome, I mean awesome. Terra and Jinx totally rock, so you chose great characters. Also, you depict the entire H.I.V.E. greatly. Can't wait for more!
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Wow! Thanks for the comments guys. I'll put my chapter two on if more people like it.
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Yes! Post more!!!
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Personally, this is my favorite chapter. It's one of those chapters that they are all nice to each other and it's all smiles at the end. I forgot to mention this is a BB/T and Cy/Jinx(I had to give Cy some love! Everyone's ignoring him in their fics.) type story...so yeah.
Chapter Two: Until We Get Bored Terra seemed to be the one who recovered first, but there was something more amazing she realized as she stared at the outside world in awe. "Wow," she said, "I'm actually alive..." Jinx, who was watching her the whole time stumbled backwards and managed to say, "Who...no, what are you?" Terra tried to walk down a rock she was standing on and fell down face forward. She quickly got up and still didn't answer Jinx's question. "I'm Terra," she said, "and I have no clue what I'm doing here. I've been encased in a rock for so long...that I forgot how it happened." She looked at the armor she wore and the "S" engraved on it, and it meant nothing. "Who are you?" To Jinx, the girl said a lot for someone who was trapped for so long. She guessed she was trapped for months and was amazed that she survived with no food or water for so long. ‘This Terra girl must be some kind of miracle,’ she thought. A miracle that she felt was the only one who acknowledged it. She decided to reply to the girl's question but she was still surprised at what Terra said. "Er...I'm Jinx. But let's go back a few steps...you've been encased in that rock for how long?" She was beginning to feel sorry for the girl, but she just couldn’t feel sorry for anyone. Jinx was a villain and villains showed no mercy. She wondered what it must have felt to be trapped that long and forget most everything before it happened. It was like Terra had to start over because of that. "For a pretty long time," Terra responded as she brushed off dirt, "Probably for almost a year. Um..do you know what happened to me?" Jinx shook her head. "I don't think anyone knows what happened to you." ******* "Tell me everything you remember," Jinx told the girl after they had both settled down a few hours later. She knew the H.I.V.E members and Brother Blood would be wondering where she was. But she was all the way across the country, why bother even going back? Half of Jinx was telling her to help this mystery girl, because it looks like she'd had enough. The other half was telling her to take advantage of Terra; let her join the bad side. But if she found out Jinx was doing that, it would be like she betrayed her, after Terra really thought she was her friend. 'My friend?' she thought, 'She's not my friend though anyway. She's a mental case that was trapped in a rock. I already have enough idiots for friends anyway.' "I told you, I don't remember anything. The rocks, the armor...anything! All I know is that I have some kind of earth and rock moving power. That's how I got out. It took a long time though." "Yes, I can see that," Jinx said while looking at her hair and skin which had dirt and scratches on it. "But you have some kind of earth powers huh? Do you think you could get us out from underground?" "I'll try." Terra lifted a rock from underneath them and they and they rose up to the hole above where the ground opened up. They could see there were caution signs taped around the hole which must have been put there earlier. ‘And they didn't even check to see if anyone was in the hole before that?’ Jinx thought, ‘What a bunch of-’ "It's dark. What do we do now?" Terra asked Jinx. "I don't know," Jinx told her and while thinking about her escape from the H.I.V.E she added, "I truly don't know." "You don't have a place to live?" Terra asked her. "Well that's great." She turned to see a police car sitting near the caution signs and pointed. "Maybe we can ask them for help." "The cops? Are you kidding? They'd throw me in jail as soon as they saw the pink tuft of the side of my head." While looking back at Terra who looked at her with a questioning look she said, "I mean, that's not so great of an idea. We'll pull through by ourselves." "What do you mean the police will throw you in jail? What did you do?" Jinx chuckled. "What didn't I do? Look, maybe the police can help us.” Jinx’s villain instincts began to kick in. “You can go distract him. Ask him anything you want and I'll go jack the car and maybe we’ll go someplace fun." "But you just said he'd throw you in jail." "Just do it." Desperate for help, Terra walked towards the police vehicle and knocked on the window. He rolled down the window. "Do you have a problem ma'am?" "Can you come out? I have a problem I need to show you." He got out and to Terra's surprise he left the keys in the ignition. ‘He must be a newbie.’ Meanwhile Jinx was quietly crawling on the top of the car. He tilted down his sunglasses and looked at her. "What do you-" Suddenly, as if he was struck by lightning, he looked at her in awe. "Wait a minute, blond hair, blue armor, "S" on the chest...you're that girl who helped that psychopath take over the city! I thought the guys at the station said the Titans finished you and him off. Some crimes just aren't solved till' many months later. Young lady, you're under arrest!" Before Terra could say anything, Jinx grabbed her by the arm and dragged her into the car. She hit 'brake' and shifted into drive. "One of the many things I've learned from Gizmo," she said while looking back at the angry shouting policeman through the rearview window, "I guess he's not so bad after all." ******* "Um...where are we going?" Terra asked. "Wherever we want, until we get bored. Me and Gizmo and Mammoth do this all the time. It's pretty fun." ‘Why haven't I tried this without them before?’ she thought. "Who are Gizmo and Mammoth?" "Nevermind." They were pretty quiet for most of the time, and to tell the truth Jinx didn't really know exactly where they were going. Not that that was a problem. They were on a pretty much deserted rocky road. "Who are the 'Titans'?" Terra asked her, breaking the silence. The car screeched to a halt, getting it stuck in a puddle of mud. "You know the Titans?" "Well...no. The policeman said I helped a psycho take over the city, and the Titans had finished me off. Why? Do you know who they are?" "Yeah, I know who they are. I definitely know who they are. They are one of the biggest reasons why my life is miserable. We go way back to when my friends and I had to destroy them for this guy. I forgot his name." "Can you tell me what happened?" Terra asked, "I kind of want to know about who 'finished me off.'" ******* An hour later they were still driving, and it took exactly that amount of time for Jinx to tell about her history with the Titans. "So their names are Robin, Raven, Starfire, Cyborg, and Beast Boy? Those are funny names," Terra said with a giggle. "There are more, remember? Aqualad and Bumblebee are honorary Titans, but I have a feeling they have more of those." "And you say your friends Cyborg and Bumblebee both snuck into your school to spy on you guys. Why would they do that? That's like betraying someone." "I know. They did it because good always overcomes evil." "Did they ever mention me?" "Not that I know of. I usually don't make friendly conversations with my enemies." Jinx blinked for a minute and said, "Actually, I think I've heard that Beast Boy one mention you before." "Beast Boy huh?" Terra asked, "So he never mentioned why they were against me?" "Well, it was usually, 'Remember when Terra used to do this?' or 'Remember when Terra used to do that?' It was usually nice sappy things. Funny he said those things in the middle of a battle. I don't really care what the green guy says anyway." "He's green? How did that happen? Did I do that?" "Don't know, don't care and you must be feeling really guilty about what the policeman said to you. How would you take over a city anyway? I can't even do that. Who did he say you were helping take over the city again?" "His name was Slade." "Oh yeah...that was the guy that wanted us to destroy the Teen Titans...I can't believe I forgot a name like that. Wish he asked me to help him take over." Terra thought about the conversation while they sat in the car. 'I must have had a horrible past.' she thought, 'Everyone in Jump City must hate me. Why does Beast Boy have fond memories? If I was friends with him, why would I try to take over the city?’ "You said Beast Boy said nice things about me, but the Titans were said to have gotten rid of me." Terra started, "Did we get in a fight or something? Are the Titans the only ones who know I turned into stone?” "Like I said, I don't know. That's your problem. We better get going. I'm surprised the police haven't caught up with us yet." Jinx tried turning on the police car and suddenly groaned. "And it looks like we're stuck in mud." "I can get us away by rock again." Terra suggested. "Good idea. Where are we going?" "Wherever we want, until we get bored," Terra answered her, and Jinx smiled. *** Ok, tell me what you thought.
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in one word
Great! In two words Totally awsome You're doing a great job writing from the point of view of Jinx and Terra, its a fresh perspective Rae
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I know I've probably said this before, but you depict the two girls very well. I love how Terra's lost her memory and Jinx is helping her. It's nice to see Jinx isn't all bad.
THIS IS AWESOME!!! Crowgirl
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Thanks again! Now, here's chapter 3.
Chapter Three: Almost Crossing Paths The rural part of Jump City was pretty quiet besides the fact that it was late at night. When you are in the urban part of the city it was the exact opposite without a doubt. Terra and Jinx flew on top of the rock talking and even laughing. They even brought up Titans subject. "Were you upset when you found out about Cyborg double-crossing you guys?" "Cyborg? What about Bumblebee? Aren't you going to ask about her?" Jinx cut in. "I don't know. When you talked about Cyborg being a spy it was kind of like you sounded more upset than when you were talking about Bumblebee." "I was shocked." But there was a lot more. Shocked yes, and depressed and heart broken. She would have liked him to stay and be one of them after they had gotten to know each other so well. She always had to remember that it was Stone she liked and gotten to know, not Cyborg. 'Why am I always getting that mixed up?' she wondered. "Oh. Just shocked," Terra said blankly. Luckily for Jinx she changed the subject. "What else can you tell me about Beast Boy?" "Ugh. Why do you always want to know about Beast Boy? He said I bunch of nice things about you, that's all I know. I mean, what do you want to do, just go up to the Titans front door and ask to see him?" "That sounds like a good idea." Jinx gave her an annoyed look. "Actually, no. After hearing you tell me about what the policeman said, I don't think he or any of the other Titans would want to see you again. Betrayed, hurt, lost. Yeah, that's probably how he feels...or felt because of you. And I for one should be talking." "I guess you're right. I wouldn't want to see me either." "I wonder how you teamed up with Slade. I saw him as a solo kind of person." "What does he look like?" Terra asked while swinging her legs on the rock. "It was a long time ago, but I remember that he had a mask on...black on the left and orange on the right. He has a pretty cool outfit. It's black...or at least it was when I last saw him. I think he had all these gadgets, and I kept on getting the feeling that he's a super genius or something. That's what Gizmo and Mammoth think too. Well, actually not Gizmo. He doesn’t think anyone’s smarter than himself. You know,” Jinx said with a cough, “Gizmo and Mammoth are the best friends I've ever had." Jinx's last words echoed in Terra's head. The words became familiar, like she said something similar to that once, but it wasn’t clear. Nothing was clear anymore. Police sirens echoed in the background and the girls soon forgot their previous conversation. "You think they're coming for us?" Terra asked. "They could be, or not." We abandoned the car miles back. We should get out of here just in case. If things get worse, they might call the Titans." "Jinx?" "Huh?" "Why did you choose to be a villain?" "I dunno...why did you?" ******* It was the middle of the night by the time the girls decided they wanted to sleep, and they discovered how hard it was to sleep in the middle of no where. "I guess these are one of those times my powers are useless," Terra said while looking at her hands. "Me too. Let's make our own beds out of those leaves over there. I think that will help. And let's start a fire." "Are we going to tell scary stories?" "See? You're starting to remember the kinds of things you did before you 'died'." "Yeah, well, being trapped and seeing nothing but dark is kind of like a scary story." "Ok, I'll tell one," Jinx offered. "Even if you were in the dark for so long, this will scare you." "Alright, try me." Terra picked up a rock with her powers and rubbed it against a rock to start the fire. "Well, one foggy night, two girls and two boys were walking in a forest. No flashlights, no compass, no nothing." "Typical." "The boys went to get wood to start a fire, so they wouldn't trip over their own feet and the girls waited in the middle of the woods without them." "That's a stupid thing to do," Terra injected. "I know, and shut-up, I'm making this up as I go along," Jinx said with a smirk. "The girls were soon getting impatient. The first girl suggested that they go look for the boys. The second girl wanted to stay where she was, until the boys came back. 'Fine, whatever you say,' the first girl told the other while she walked away." "The second girl stood there and waited, and waited, and waited. She listened intently for any strange sounds but she couldn't hear the sound of snarling, venom, dripping bear." "Hey Jinx, I know for a fact that bears don't drip venom." "Anyway," Jinx said while rolling her eyes, "The bear sneaked up behind her and slashed her in the back. The girl fell forward, and the bear ate her up in one bite. The girl and the bear were never to be seen again." "Wow…" Terra said, "Wow, my life is scarier than that. That was pretty lame." "Yeah, it was wasn't it? Well I'm tired so I can only think of lame things, so get your leaves and let's go to sleep." "Heh. Look at that. It's getting bright out now." Terra pointed to the sky while talking to her companion, but Jinx was already asleep. Terra went back to her thoughts about the Titans. She began to wonder what it was like to have friends like that and what her life was like. She would have liked to see the Titans and see what they were like. Jinx and she were a few miles away until they were out of Jump City. They were far from where the Titans were, wherever they were. ******* Jump City's young heroes Robin, Raven, Starfire, Cyborg, and Beast Boy were engaged in their rare slumber. They hardly ever got to sleep, and when they did they usually did until noon. That is, if they had no villains to stop. The sun was rising, and today was not a sleep-till-noon day. It was training day. The boys and girls vie to get the fastest record in the obstacle course, and at the same time they were, 'striving to get better at taking down villains' as their leader, Robin said. Everyone was practicing at their special skills. Robin at his kung-fu, Raven at her telekinesis, Starfire at shooting straight starbolts and eye beams at targets, Cyborg practicing to hit any villain at his/her soft spot with his sonic cannon and fixing one of the Titans favorite kind of transportation, the T-Car. Beast Boy was practicing turning into his animal forms, and figuring out ways he could use his powers at the right place at the right time. They were pretty much content, but Starfire shooting starbolts at the rocks outside so dust and small pieces of rock fell into Beast Boy's face was beginning to bother him. He wished she didn't use the rocks for target practice. It always reminded him of a certain someone and even said he'd never forget her, but he was sure she forgot him being encased in that rock for so long. The last time the changeling went to visit Terra was two months ago. He couldn't bear to go anymore and it looked like the Titans would never find a way to reverse the effect. The others told him to go on with his life, and he constantly reminded himself of Raven's saying, 'People come, people go.' There was no reason to be upset about Terra. Although his friends told him to go on with his life, they encouraged Beast Boy to never forget her. She played a big role in his and the other's life, and he knew that even if they went on with their lives, they would never forget Terra too. So when five communicators went off at the same time and Robin said there was trouble downtown about some stolen police car, Beast Boy decided to dismiss his thoughts. "Aw, why can't the police take care of those little problems themselves?" he asked his friends as they set off for downtown, "We take care of the big things, and they take care of the little things. Dude, this isn't even worthy to be considered one of the little things!" "Beast Boy's actually right," Raven said to Robin as he got on the R-Cycle, "Are you sure that's the whole problem?" "Well, they said the police car was stolen by two girls, and they found the car stuck in the mud in the middle of nowhere..." "What did they look like?" Starfire asked while flying above Robin. "You know what? They didn't tell. Let me contact them." Robin stopped the R-Cycle and called the police through his communicator. "Yes...uh huh." The others heard him say through the speaker. "Alright...oh." Robin looked up from his communicator stunned. "Robin, what is the matter?" Starfire asked. "The first girl's Jinx," Robin told her along with the others. "I could tell by the description.” His friends looked at him with relief and all thought the same thing.'Oh,just Jinx? That’s ok.' They all turned away from Robin but soon turned to look back at him when he said, “And the other one, the way he described her, I think she's Terra." *** Tell me what you thought! PS: For those of you who want to read ahead. (Chapters 4,5, and 6) Go to: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2157371/1/ |
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Great!!! That's what I have to say.
I have absolutely no problems with your story, except well... this one: Quote:
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Is it the pairing Cy/Jinx? If it is, don't worry...there isn't as much of them as I thought there would be.
If it's the pairing BB/T...then that's a problem.
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BB/T is fine, I believe in that one.
There are somethings though that may not have been or are meant to be....
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This is a really great story! That chapter was awesome, and I like how you are making Terra and Jinx good friends. As for the relationships, Well, my favorite relationships are in my profile....
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I barely remember writing this chapter and it was only a few weeks ago! I didn't really enjoy writing this chapter as much as others. It was one of those chapters that I didn't have trouble writing though. Thanks for posting also everyone! Now, to chapter four.
Chapter Four: Problems 'Come on Terra! Let's go on that roller coaster! You'll really like it.' I went on the roller coaster with him, the wind blowing through my hair. I turned to look at him, but I couldn't really see him. His face, his smile. He was screaming and laughing at the same time while holding my hand. We were the only ones there, I noticed, and I liked it that way. Suddenly, the roller coaster went farther and farther to no where, but getting closer to the ground. The ground opened up and I fell in. He looked at me in shame and turned his back, and then he was gone, completely gone. I landed, and everything became dark. Everything that happened before was forgotten, and I would never remember it. Terra woke up with a start and sat up while the leaves she used as bedding flew off. The sun pierced eyes and she rubbed them. She was beginning to forget her dream already, but it did seem strange and familiar. She turned to look at Jinx, who was still snoring away and crawled over to her. "Jinx!" she whispered. She nudged her. "Jinx!" "Huh? What?" "Jinx, I think it's late." "Late? Try a little early," Jinx remarked, and turned away from Terra. "No, it's like in the middle of the day." Jinx sat up and looked around. A very loud lawnmower that could be heard far away in the distance sounded. A few birds chirped and the sun was shining brightly. It all seemed so peaceful, and Jinx said, "I guess the police gave up on us." "Yeah, I guess so too." Terra said while smiling. Jinx turned to frown at her. "That means they would have probably sent the Titans to look for us. We have to get out of here." Terra's smile faded away when she looked Jinx in the eye. This was the second time they had to get out of somewhere, and she was already tired of it. So she said, "Jinx, I'm sick of running, and we're not going to do it anymore." "What do you mean? We robbed a car! We can't let ourselves get caught because of that!" "If you don't want to get caught, then why do you steal the car?" "Hey, you helped too. And stealing a car is no biggie. You're the one who's wanted for trying to take over the city, I'm surprised you don't want to run," Jinx said while folding her arms. "I don't even remember that," Terra told her, "but we can't keep running forever. Why do you do these things? You never answered why you want to be a villain either. It's no use if the whole point of the game is trying to escape from the cops!" "If you want to stay here, it's fine by me. Don't say I didn't warn you. I've committed plenty of crimes and I've never been caught by people as low as the cops. I'm not going to start now." Jinx stated walking away while Terra stood there watching. She watched someone who was possibly her only friend walking away. She wasn't surprised if the Titans and she got into a feud before. She would blame herself for the loss of friends. That was pretty bad for someone who just became free from a rock less than two days before. According to Jinx, Terra was a hypocrite, and Terra hated herself for that. She wished she could remember what happened in her past, so she could fix it; so she could meet the Titans again and fix her problems, so she could say, "I'm sorry" to the whole city. Jinx was still in Terra's eyesight while she was thinking this, and if she wanted to find everyone and fix everything, she would need help-from a friend. So she called for help. "Jinx, wait." Jinx stopped without turning around. As much as Jinx wanted to go on, be tough and forget about it she stopped. "Jinx, we have to fix the problems we caused. A stolen car may be a small thing, but don't you think it's hard thinking about it? I know you have to have a conscience in there," Terra said with a small laugh. Jinx turned to her friend and smiled. "I do have a conscience. Why do you think I actually stayed and talked to you? With all the trouble we caused together, I wish I never met you," Jinx said while also laughing. "Friends?" "Sure. Now, how do we fix our 'problems'?" "Well, first, we'll go back to the city." Jinx was about to say something, but stopped herself. "We might have to go to the police, and tell them about the crime we committed, because I and I don't think you want this on your conscience forever." "Actually, I've dealt with things like this all the time, Terra." "But not now," Terra reminded her. "A whole city probably hates me, and I don't want to leave it that way. We might have to find the Titans and ask what happened with me." Jinx reluctantly nodded, and began to think she would never see the H.I.V.E. again. "We don't want to run forever, and for some reason I think that's not a very fun thing to do after a while." Jinx walked back to Terra and said, "Ok, let's go back to Jump City." "Are you sure if we get put in jail you'll be ok with it?" Jinx shrugged. "At least you'll get thrown in jail with me. I never liked the idea of getting thrown in jail with Gizmo or Mammoth." A warm breeze passed and a mixture of dust flew by. The two girls stared at it and a long black haired, girl raised up from the ground. She wore a blue trench coat with big black boots. Her hands were slender and her brown eyes locked on Jinx. Two boys who were familiar to Jinx jumped out of the trees right after the girl’s appearance. "Hey Jinx," the girl started. "You know, Brother Blood's looking for you, and he isn't happy." Terra looked at Jinx for an explanation but got no help. The girl started again while she and the two familiar boys got closer to Terra and Jinx. "And neither are me, Gizmo, or Mammoth." ******* The Titans caught up with the police where they found the abandoned stolen police car. "There are no foot prints or no evidence to where they went. It seems these girls just disappeared," The police man told them. "That's ok, we'll take it from here officer," Robin said, "And I don't think they just disappeared." Meanwhile, Beast Boy was wondering, 'Did Robin hear right? Did he really think they were describing Terra? He must of heard wrong. Maybe he's still getting over Terra too.' He looked over to the other Titans, whose faces were calm, while they were listening to the police. 'Bu I’m positive Robin got over Terra a while ago. It's gotta be true.' "Officer," he said, cutting off the officer's speech while talking to the others. "Can you describe the two girls again? Actually, just the second one." His friends gave him a knowing look. They knew why he needed the description. "Blond hair-a little dirty, looks like she was wandering around for a while. She wore the blue type uniform, with the "S" on it. That's what Officer Trias told me. Are you sure you don't want to hear about the other girl?" "No thanks," Beast Boy mumbled. Thoughts once again rushed through his head. 'Why would Terra do those kinds of things again? I thought if she was alive she would turn over a new leaf.' Robin went and put a hand on his shoulder when Cyborg spoke up. "We better start searching. Raven, think you could use your soul self to find either?" "I haven't seen both of them in a long time, so this might not work, but I'll try. I'll do Terra first. They're probably in the same place." Raven sat cross legged in the air and closed her eyes. She finally chanted, "Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos." She could see lava, a cave, caution signs, leaves, and finally, three kids, a girl and two boys walking toward Terra and Jinx. Raven stopped, and opened her eyes. "Terra's in trouble. Jinx, Gizmo, and Mammoth are there...and some other girl. I don't know who she is, but I think she's a connection to the H.I.V.E." "Thanks Raven," Beast Boy said while smiling at her, "Then we'll just have to go and save her." Raven nodded with a slight smile. She finally saw how much he cared. ******* So the Titans set off, to go help there long lost...well not really long lost friend. Little did they know was that Jinx was not with Gizmo, Mammoth and the girl to harm Terra. While being carried in Starfire's arms, Cyborg was fidgety. He was not ready to see Jinx again, but Jinx being a villain and all, probably didn't care how he felt. She probably wanted revenge. "Friend, why must you fidget so much?" Starfire said with a giggle. "Do the little birds in the air enlighten you as well?" "No Star, it's nothing." But nothing could always turn into something. And Cyborg knew that, because it already did. *** I don't even know what that last line means! I always put things like that and try to decide what will happen! Chapter 5 has Brother Blood and my own character. She's just a brainwashed kid. I don't know if she will be an important character though. Jinx doesn't like her very much. 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These just get better and better!
I liked the fact that members of the HIVE had been searching for Jynx and i liked the way Cy was nervous about seeing her agian. Keep up the good work! Rae
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