a TT fic

[Raeofdarkness]

Chapter One

Raven opened her chest, avoiding the white book at the bottom, and pulled out a knife. I was black bladed, with a red-violet sheath, it was her mother's. She hated the fact that it was, it ruined its handsome appearance and curve. I reminded her of the truth.

The truth was that no one cared, or she thought that no one did. She could not feel anything. She could not love who she wanted to; she could barely laugh.

She slipped off the sheath and held it up to her arm. She winced as she drew the sharp, onyx blade down, slicing her wrist and cutting a small splice in her leotard. She did the same with the other and watched crimson blood drip down her fingertips she sat on her bed and felt the thick liquid dripping into the navy blankets. She sat their, stoic for ten minutes, blood just dripping, dripping. She fought healing herself. Seconds later she passed out.

And the alarm sounded.

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Sorry it's short. It is Christmas Eve and I know any second now that someone (FAMILY *shudders*) will any second now come up and read my morbid work, which will get less morbid in a few chapters.

[Allen CARR]

very dark and nice, i really like! This is like another side of Raven.

[Raven37]

Ooh, yes, very dark. I like. This story has much potential. Please post more soon!!!


-Raven37

P.S.Raeofdarkness, have I welcomed you yet? If not, WELCOME TO WORLD'S FINEST! It's good to have ya here.

[starfire0639]

welcome raeofdarkness your fic looks to have a lot of potential and i cant wait till your next chapter write soon!

[Raven13]

Welcome To The Worlds Finest

[Raven13]

Uhh sorry was not finshed yet my computer was wacked out anyway Welcome (like i said before) but i love ur story so far!!!!!!! Excelent! Very detail and also i love the blood part (SO COOL) we have another dark lover here i see! HAHA but anyway i loved ur story !!!!! This is a story im sure to read till the end! I like it alot!!!!!!! Keep writting!

P.S. I u have time read my story it would mean alot to me (but ur story is sounding sooooo much better!)

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Raeofdarkness]

Chapter 2

The alarm that had sounded earlier was false, but it still sent a wave of curiosity through the

Titans. Ussualy Raven was the first one down to the common room after Robin, but she did not

appear. This was why the Titans were infront of her door. Each one expecting another to knock.

"I'm not touching it!' Beastboy joked.

"Move," Robin said, giving Beastboy a stern look,"I'll knock."

He rapped at the door, waiting for a reply, but only silence came. Cyborg ran a scanner over the

door, his jerky movements gave away his nervousness.

"I must need an upgrade. My scanners say that she is in their, but they do not detect any life."

Robin opened the door to what appeared to be eternal darkness. Starfire shivered. The titans

walked past theatre masks and bookshelfs, and a black maplewood chest, missing the two drops of

conjealing liquid. Starfire saw Raven on the bed and flashed over. She shook the dark, hooded

figure and raised her hand, now ruby red. Tears formed in her eyes.

"Awaken Raven, please. It is I, Starfire!" She cried harder at the lack of reply.

Robin examined the bloody sheath and the pools of crimson rain on the floor. Beastboy seemed to

be catatonic. Robin picked up the lifeless figure and carried it out of the room, still pouring

what seemed to be a waterfall of undiluted life.

"How many loves can a guy loose?" Beastboy wondered outloud from the back of Raven's room.

No one seemed to notice, or care.

The atmosphere of the room, was painful regret.

[Matt A]

All I can say right now is... . But in a good way, of course.

[Crowgirl]

Originally Posted by Welshie's Mate

All I can say right now is... . But in a good way, of course.

Took the expression right off of my face.

I did notice a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but those are easily fixable.

You don't have a title by any chance, do you? One that's not 'A TT Fic'?

Crowgirl

[Raeofdarkness]

It is actually called Suicide. but It doesn't appear on the page.

[Pookey]

this is really awesome.
my face is still in shock
I can all ready tell this story is going to kick butt! love it.

[Raven13]

O my gosh that was an awesome chapter!!!!!! Short but very detail!!! O i can not wait until the next chapter it starting of sooo well please contiune to write!!!! im still very shocked !!!!

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Raeofdarkness]

Oh my Goshness...PEOPLE LIKE THE MORBIDITY! wow. I thought I might get banned for it.

[starfire0639]

no way!i think i know bout pushign the limits with the fic except mine was more lust than well death but hey beggers cant be chosers hahaha i love the fic itas totally dark and welll...i love it!please write more soon

[Raeofdarkness]

Thanx, that makes me feel better.

[Raven37]

Originally Posted by Welshie's Mate

All I can say right now is... . But in a good way, of course.

His words..... exactly. Wow. That was - In a good way.

-Raven37

[Raeofdarkness]

I am getting a lot of ... Is this a good thing?

[Sproxie]

Originally Posted by Welshi's Mate

All I can say right now is... . But in a good way, of course.

Originally Posted by Crowgirl

Took the expression right off of my face.

^ yea, pretty much.

[Starfire5]

O.o this is interesting! very interesting! I cant wait for the next chapter!

[Raven37]

Originally Posted by Raeofdarkness

I am getting a lot of ... Is this a good thing?

Yes. It means your story is amazingly shocking.