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Old 12-17-2004, 08:17 PM
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Sonra, the Daughter of Slade

Congratulations! You all got me to post my story. After lots of work I finally got it onto this computer. This is just the prologue. Don't expect any more until after Christmas. In case you missed my reason for taking so long to post this story, I left it down there. The real beginning is on pg.2 Hope you enjoy it.

Okay, so this one day I was trying (and failing) to draw a picture of Terra. It turned out weird, so, for some reason I just colored the hair of my picture black. I had already messed up on the eyes so I figured I should just create a new character. I decided to name this character Sonra and make her the daughter of Slade. The basic storyline of my fic is that Sonra, thinking her father is dead, *cough*hint*cough* searches out the titans because of her anger at her father's death. She turns out to be a good character, but she's pretty evil in the beginning so feel free to hate her. Before I post me story I would like to know what all of you think about my idea since there's a lot of stories and it's hard to keep up with them all. If I get any positive feedback I may turn this poll into a thread, but before I post the actual story I'm open to any and all advice and some help from any of the really, really good writers. Please let me know what you think of my idea, but don't expect my story before the end of winter break because I am witnessing some "technical difficulties" at the moment and Christmas is a very busy time of year (aka my computer with my story on it keeps crashing because it's an ancient computer and the only drive that works is the floppy A drive and our new computer only has a disc drive. Also, I put the story on Webdings because I didn't want my brothers to read it and it got stuck like that so now I can't read what it says.)
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Old 12-17-2004, 08:20 PM
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As long as you've got enough skill to pull it off, that would be f**king amazing.

One question, though: would his daughter be his apprentice or his enemy? Those two relationships would produce very different stories...
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Old 12-17-2004, 08:22 PM
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Yes of course, but you really should've done one of those poll thingies on this thread. They're really effective. Anyways, go ahead and post your story!


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Old 12-17-2004, 08:22 PM
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As long as you've got enough skill to pull it off, that would be f**king amazing.
Hopefully you do.
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Old 12-17-2004, 08:23 PM
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Didn't she die? I'm talking about the comic so this may not be the same with the show. But if you can pull it off sure that sounds very interesting.


EDIT: My bad. In the comics Slade had a son who was killed
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Old 12-17-2004, 08:25 PM
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go for it! nothings holding you back. you told me about the idea and i told you that once you became a member you should post it.
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Old 12-17-2004, 08:25 PM
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I would totally read that. As long as she isn't too similair to my character, who was raised to believe that she was Slade's daughter, and then turned against him, I'm cool. Sounds like a delicious idea.
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Old 12-18-2004, 01:13 AM
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Hmm, sounds cool. I'll read it if you have skills as a writter. If you don't have skills, don't let it deter you. Just read all the stuff Reid and I have posted, helping people out, and follow the advice. Then you'll either have the skills, or you'll be trying so dang hard it won't matter. Yeah, it sounds original and cool. Magick - I haven't read your story. I'll need to get on that...
Ok, I'll be busy. See you when you post your first chapter...

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Old 12-18-2004, 02:26 AM
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That would be a very interesting idea, I would definitely read it.
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Old 12-18-2004, 01:08 PM
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Didn't she die? I'm talking about the comic so this may not be the same with the show. But if you can pull it off sure that sounds very interesting.


EDIT: My bad. In the comics Slade had a son who was killed
Slade was forced to kill his two (Is there 3?) Sons.

Anyway, Yes. It would be fricking awesome! Do it! Do it! Do it!
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Old 12-18-2004, 01:43 PM
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As long as you've got enough skill to pull it off, that would be f**king amazing.
I don't understand why this is so prelevant here all of a sudden but the blatant swearing has to stop. Spread the word, tell your friends, this is a kid-friendly site and such language is frowned upon. This is just a reply, the next time you'll receive an official warning from me.

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Old 12-18-2004, 03:35 PM
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Slade was forced to kill his two (Is there 3?) Sons.
Wrong. He was actually forced to kill one son, and that was Jricho. Grant (Ravager) was killed because of the power given to him by the HIVE.
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Old 12-18-2004, 04:18 PM
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I don't understand why this is so prelevant here all of a sudden but the blatant swearing has to stop. Spread the word, tell your friends, this is a kid-friendly site and such language is frowned upon. This is just a reply, the next time you'll receive an official warning from me.

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Old 12-18-2004, 06:11 PM
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Hi Hi.


Thanks for all the positive feedback. I think I will post it. Now I just got to get my computer to work.
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Old 12-18-2004, 06:28 PM
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Wrong. He was actually forced to kill one son, and that was Jricho. Grant (Ravager) was killed because of the power given to him by the HIVE.
I know you're right for some reason. I know Slade murdered Jericho, (His son) and I guess I mixed Ravager (His other son) up with someone else. I just sware I read something saying "Now Deathstroke knew he was responsible for the deaths of both his sons" somewhere. Oh well.

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I think Ephidel is making up a new character to be the daughter of Slade... am I right? Plus, I don't think any of us O'Fallon MO people/friends have read any of the comics. (MO friends- ME!, Aquagirl15, Beastgirl17, and Ephidel500) Where do you get the comics? Anyways, please post your story soon! I am anxious to read it!


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Old 12-19-2004, 08:37 AM
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I just sware I read something saying "Now Deathstroke knew he was responsible for the deaths of both his sons" somewhere. Oh well.

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Cause Deathstroke FEELS that it's his fault for Grant's death, because the HIVE wanted Deathstroke to work for them to kill the Titans, but he refused. That's why they got Grant to work for them (because he already had a grudge with the Titans for wrecking his home) and pump him with all those experimental chemicals which caused his death (they were planning on him dying so that they could get Deathstroke to take his place after making it seem like the Titans killed Grant).
Hope that clears things up .
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Old 12-19-2004, 09:54 AM
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Cause Deathstroke FEELS that it's his fault for Grant's death, because the HIVE wanted Deathstroke to work for them to kill the Titans, but he refused. That's why they got Grant to work for them (because he already had a grudge with the Titans for wrecking his home) and pump him with all those experimental chemicals which caused his death (they were planning on him dying so that they could get Deathstroke to take his place after making it seem like the Titans killed Grant).
Hope that clears things up .
Yup. That was it. Thanks Red X, that clears up
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Slade: Ever have one of those days where you just feel happy to be alive?
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Back on topic. Yeah! I would so read that.
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