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12-12-2004, 08:21 PM
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Alone
I wrote this when I was really depressed. You are warned. This also probably sounds...wierd, but whatever.
Alone I am alone. I am lost. My heart is gone and my soul longs to flee from this wretched body. My heart is shattered into splinters that are more numerous then grains of sand. My sanity…it has fled me long ago. I am no longer human. I live, I want to die. I am lost. I am alone. I flee from the pitiful gazes that greet me so often. They haunt me. They …they who made me this way…who made me alone…I am cursed. I always will be. This is me. This is my story…of how things came to be…and how I am alone…Forever. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Short...but it's only the prologue.
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 That just about covers it...
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12-12-2004, 08:33 PM
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when i read the first few sentences i thought 'Terra' right away. i don't know if that's true but it really seems like it. this was really good but i have one gripe. 'Alone' is the name of my poem thread.
 well i never post on it anymore so i guess it's ok, you didn't know.  you MUST have been depressed! 
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12-12-2004, 08:34 PM
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Yes...when I get depressed, I get overly depressed...i I stay that way for awhile...and it rubs off on people...
 *sigh* It sucks.Sorry... ...I din't know that that was a title of a post of yours... ...it was the best title I could think of at the time.
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#5
12-12-2004, 08:44 PM
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no prob!
i don't post on it anymore like i said. i get overly depressed too. then i get mad and tell my cat or call a friend and tell them how much i hate my life.  but i really don't. my mom calls me a drama queen.  totaly me. my brother must be a drama king cause he's worse than me!
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"I'll repeat what I've said so often before, that what seems the easy way out is usually the most dangerous." ~Kuruma Yuskue: "You're a strange guy, even for a demon. I was all hepped up and angry, ready to take it out on my next opponent but now..." Jin: "I'm a new foe, and it's a new match. Going in mad just takes the fun outta it. And that's no way to live -or die." SBM The chapter has arrived.
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12-12-2004, 09:38 PM
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People who talk to cats are weird.
 Well done, I like it. Descriptive, but not wordy. Hooray! *shameless plug* Go read my fic!
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12-12-2004, 09:40 PM
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thanx! i try!!!
but at least it i can let it out somewhere. if i just let it out it makes me feel better!
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"I'll repeat what I've said so often before, that what seems the easy way out is usually the most dangerous." ~Kuruma Yuskue: "You're a strange guy, even for a demon. I was all hepped up and angry, ready to take it out on my next opponent but now..." Jin: "I'm a new foe, and it's a new match. Going in mad just takes the fun outta it. And that's no way to live -or die." SBM The chapter has arrived.
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#8
12-12-2004, 10:00 PM
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I was really depressed today.
 (If you go look on my fic, you might know why...) I made up a little peom in my head... maybe I'll post it on my song thread... Anyways, that was really good. I enjoyed it a lot! Please write more! -Raven37  P.S. Quote:
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12-12-2004, 10:39 PM
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This had more reviews than I thought it would.
 Quite a lot. Well, I'll continue as soon as possible, but I do have 2 other fics to work on...and one of them is kind of neglected...
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#10
12-12-2004, 11:35 PM
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Starrysky!!!! OMG! I LOVE this story!!! Even if it is only just the prologe. I can't wait to hear more from you! This is soooooo good!! I'm happy your not that depressed anymore, cuse you must have been pretty sad. Luv ya and your awsome poem!
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#11
12-13-2004, 03:46 PM
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It was short - perhaps too short - and I don't have the foggiest whose PoV that was. But, somehow, I want to know more. That's always a good sign...
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#12
12-13-2004, 04:36 PM
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You're supposed to be confused.
And when I get into a state of intense depression, I can't tolerate to do somthing for very long. I would rather sit and wallow in depression...which is stupid...but oh well...I figured I could at least give you guys something to do while you wait for my other fics...which I'm working on as fast as I can.  See ya!
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#13
12-13-2004, 05:48 PM
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12-15-2004, 06:58 PM
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This is a notice to all that I will be on a vacation to California for Christamas, I'm leaving tomarrow night and will not come back until after New Year's. I don't think I'll have any access to internet connections...so yeah...
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12-15-2004, 09:58 PM
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12-22-2004, 05:19 PM
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Dude that was like, FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!
See you are just like me, when I'm down adn really depressed you cna make up some of the best writings. TO get over that stage I usally just go outside for a walk! Anyway I love it so far. Qiute short but very detail. I have an idea that it is Terra, or maybe Raven but i'm sure it is Terra! Anyway very Good!!!!!!!! ~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~
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12-22-2004, 06:12 PM
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Wow!! I really really really looved that!!! It was soo wow!!! Please write more soon !!
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12-22-2004, 07:26 PM
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Wow! Please write more soon!
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#19
12-22-2004, 08:54 PM
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ya the first thing i thought also was Terra!great job cant wait 4 more!
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12-23-2004, 02:43 PM
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As soon as I find a word that will appropriately tell Reid what he is, I'll continue that sentence. But I loved it!! Man, you really were depressed... Have fun at New Year's! Crowgirl
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