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12-01-2004, 06:57 AM
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What is Love?:A Teen Titans Fic Ch. 3 up!
Hi!
 *looks around and sees no one's there* uh....well...Hi! Anyways! This is my first ever TT Fic!  It's my only very first fic! So...I would absolutely love feedback from anyone who has stumbled across this! Please reply...please? Well, on to the story! Oh, and sorry for the extremely short Prologue!  Prologue What is love? This one question plagues the minds of teenagers, and there are a few teenagers in particular that seem to be having this trouble. The superheroes and even idols to some, They are the Teen Titans... "Trouble!” Robin exclaimed to the half-awake Titans. He stepped out of the shadows of the hallway and entered into the red light, cast by the alert/alarm. He scanned through the information and then turned his head toward his crime fighting companions, “Cinderblock has shown up near the power plant at the edge of town.” “Dude!” exclaimed Beastboy, “How many times do we have to beat this guy?” “As many times as it takes.” Robin replied simply. After an uncomfortable silence, Raven asked in her usual monotone voice, “Shouldn’t we be leaving now?” “Teen Titans…Go!” Robin shouted his trademark phrase. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- “I always have overestimated them….” A figure in the darkness said, making his voice drag out creepily. “What a pity they have never met up to my expectations…” the figure’s voice paused dramatically, “But here comes another test…perhaps the last…” -------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Teen Titans rushed out of the car, looking for any sign of Cinderblock in the dim light that the just rising sun gave them. Suddenly, a glint of silver crashed into the T-car, crushing it into about the thickness of a quarter and slamming it into the wire fence, which buckled under its weight. “Oh man…not again!” Cyborg whined. When the blur of silver stopped, they could see a hand, belonging to Cinderblock. “Whoa!” Beastboy exclaimed. “Looks like the block’s got an upgrade!” -------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is an exteremly crappy chapter to me...but I don't know...respond and I will. 
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That just about covers it...Last edited by Starrysky; 12-11-2004 at 06:25 PM. 
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#2
12-01-2004, 02:40 PM
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It has potential. needs more detail though. But nevertheless a good start. More please!
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#3
12-01-2004, 04:16 PM
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Detail. More of it. That's all I gotta say, cept, write more.
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#4
12-01-2004, 04:21 PM
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#5
12-01-2004, 05:01 PM
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I third that motion. It's still shaping up to be pretty cool, though.
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#6
12-01-2004, 05:55 PM
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i call fourth-ies!!
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#7
12-01-2004, 08:19 PM
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6th post on the thread!! WOOOO HOOOO!!!!!
I fifth the motion, I wish you could have been a little more descriptive in characters and motions (movement). But the title of your fic is one I would love to know the answer to....
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#8
12-01-2004, 08:22 PM
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I sixth that idea. PRomising start, more detail and this'll be one to watch.
Lord Welshi
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Me: so Luke, you wanna go do something tonight? Luke: Can't, I'm meeting charlotte... Me: OK, so tomorrow we can... Luke: nope, meeting Charlotte. Me: Dude, you are totally whipped! Luke: I prefer to think of it as self flagellance, actually...
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#9
12-01-2004, 08:52 PM
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I have replies! On the first day I posted it! And I got 6 reviews! By the way, thanks for the comments, I'll try to make the chapters more desscriptive... Anyways, I'll try to have the next chapter out by tomarrow...I hope... Thanks again!
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#10
12-02-2004, 04:44 PM
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Dude, I am as happy as you are. I started a chain of agreement. hee hee, but I am not plotting to steal your thunder so I will but out now.
P.S. Write more please!
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#11
12-02-2004, 06:00 PM
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hey pretty good for your first my is ok (the name of mine is Jackie) pretty much wat everyone else was saying a bit more detail
 and also tey making the font at about a 2 or higher it is kind of hard to read. any way i like it keep writing!! ~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~
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#12
12-03-2004, 06:51 AM
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I can't post yet...
I need to do some projects, study for tests, do essays, and whatnot, so I'll try to post soon...but school comes first. Die! *stabbs homework with a pitchfork* Sorry about that...Now what was I doing?... Ahhhhhh! *screams as homework rises and starts to chase her*  (I wrote this at 5:00 in the morning after I had chocolate cake and chocolate syrup, and chocolate icecream....beware of sugar...)
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12-03-2004, 02:09 PM
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ooooooooook. I have learnt that lesson already.
Stay away from that much sugar.
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"You Made a ******* Vampire pomeranian?"- Hannibal King, Blade Trinity. -> ROCK ON! "I'm the type to sit in the dark corner and drink blood." -> Angel Super Robot MonkeyTeam HyperForce Go!Codename: Kids next door --- If you're not in, you're old. SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!! www.dontneedreality.com
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12-03-2004, 03:08 PM
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Can't wait for the next post!!!!!
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12-03-2004, 04:37 PM
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haha yea i hate homework just as much asu guys do and also yea sugar is any evil thing but very tastey lol
please write more after your homework  OR FEEL THE RATH OF MRS. KERGER  (haha long story) ~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~
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12-03-2004, 07:17 PM
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Haaahaaa!
*I stand victorious over a pile of shredded homework* Haahaaha! *maniacal laughter continues* I have taken care of the school problems! But I have another problem... Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh! *a huge story high writer's block comes crashing toward me* Help me....Please! (I have an idea of how I want the story to go, but I need help doing a few details...Help! )
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12-03-2004, 09:04 PM
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Coursework essays (and homework) are pure evil. *takes sword from wall brackets.* Raaaargh! *stabs essays* hahahahahaaaaa....oh, wait...i'm meant to hand those in....awww, crap....
Glad you got the work sorted out. As i said before, add a bit more detail and this story will be good. Hope you get over your writer's block soon! Lord Welshi P.S. here's another lesson, kids! Stay away from alcohol....too much makesh yuo tpye wongr....
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Me: so Luke, you wanna go do something tonight? Luke: Can't, I'm meeting charlotte... Me: OK, so tomorrow we can... Luke: nope, meeting Charlotte. Me: Dude, you are totally whipped! Luke: I prefer to think of it as self flagellance, actually...
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12-03-2004, 09:12 PM
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grrrr....*I take a spare pitchfork and ram it into the writer's block, it cracks, but only enough to let a little ray of insight to shine through* I have an idea for another story!
Ill still keep on battling the writer's block to strangle some more ideas out of my mind... Wish me luck! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!! *keeps on battling...*(Thanks Lord Welshi!)
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12-03-2004, 09:35 PM
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i just now had time to read this and i'm glad i did!!
like everyone else, more detail would be nice. luckily i have never suffered from writer's block and i do not wish to. i hear it's a horrible thing. sugar doesn't make a difference for me. i'm always hyper!!!! LLAMA!! oops that was really random. see what i mean? keep writing or suffer!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#20
12-04-2004, 01:46 PM
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More Detail...
Also, one of the big things I'm into for stories is writing out a general outline for the story and then individual outlines for the chapters before you write each chapter. If you want I can post an example for you. It should realy help with writers block and often prevents it outright. We need more information about the story line though. keep working at it, after all this is your first fic and it will be a good chance to gain experience with your tehnique and style of writing.
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