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Turning(Teen Titans fic.)
A/N:OK guys, this is my first fic so be nice. Its a Rorak, Raven and Malchior fic. It might start off slow and weird, but I promise it will get better. Thanks to all the peeps who helped me get this story started. and, no, the intro is not mine, but I want to say that it is J. K. Rowling's work and I don't own it.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Blood becomes life, becomes fire, becomes air, becomes water, becomes wind, becomes earth, becomes lightning, becomes light, becomes darkness, becomes death, and death, in turn, becomes life once again. So is the endless cycle, the spiral in which no living being can escape, though many have tried. Blood is first, the liquid of the body that sustains the second, life. That which is circulates, also, through the mind, absorbing memories, thoughts, and feelings that are relinquished to the earth through a cut in the flesh. Merely by blood, by thoughts, by being, all things can be accomplished. Blood is life, blood keeps life, but blood can also take life. The living blood of a dead god is poisonous to dragons, phoenix, and unicorns alike. In turn, the blood of a dragon is coursing with magic, magic that can be made fatal to any creature. The blood of a phoenix, though, if mixed in the right potion, can also kill any who drink it. However, the blood of a unicorn is so pure, that it can sustain immortality in a being for a period of time, though with a high price, Life is the second, and life is everything, in life all elements connect and are connected, they are--- "Hey RRRRaaavvveennn!!!!" It’s no use. Every time you settle down with a good book, he always comes a ruins it. Raven walked over to her door and opened it slightly so that only half of her face was showing, only to be bombarded with Beastboy and Cyborg. "What do you want!?!” Asked a very irritated Raven. "We got this really cool new movie!!!" Said Beastboy while jumping up and down. "What is it?" Asked Raven with a spark of curiosity. "Urrr..well..yeah see...were not exactly sure what's on it, but its gota be good!!!" Answered Beastboy with a bit of nervousness in his voice. "Yeah, it better be, we paid 30 dollars for it!!" Said an annoyed Cyborg "Hmmm...I think I’ll have to say.. "The excitement was building up now. "Ummm.... NO!!!" Yelled Raven and with that she slammed her door in their faces. She had started to get on her bed where her book was when... "OOOOHHH PPPLLEEEAASSEE!!! No one else will watch it with us." Called Beastboy from behind the door. "I wonder why." Raven called back. Just as she heard footsteps leavening a large pain entered her head. "What’s going on!!" Asked Raven to herself while holding her head. As just as she finished asking darkness covered her vision and she slipped into nothingness. >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A/N: Ok there ya go, the first chapter. I thought I Should leave it in a cliffhanger since everyone else does. So I hope u like it. I will start the next chapter soon depending on what u all think. Thanks for listening. CaligoRea "This is the beast pie, in the history of pies." BB "Well maybe you should call me...BEASTMAN!!! Beastboy were having a moment….don’t ruin it.... Beastdude?!? Rae and BB "I shall go cultivate the fungus!!!" Starfire "Your just jealous 'cause I sound like a rock star." BB Last edited by CaligoRae; 11-17-2004 at 08:09 PM. |
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Hey, COOLESS! I'm the first one to post! Yay! Anyway.....Wow. This looks pretty good so far
(although it's kinda exactly like spellbound) Hopefully it will turn out different. P.S. In you quotes, it's "I shall go cultivate the fungus." Just so ya know.
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*sits gaping* woah... did you make up those first few paragraphs. Those were amazing.
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Never seen spellbound, and I hate myself for missingit. This fic is interesting. Great BB and Cy play out, that's exactly how they act. Same with Raven
Keep Writing!
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Isn't Teen Titans copywrited? If this turns out to be too much like spellbound, I'll report you to the cops.
(I hate it when people make it to much like other episodes,)
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Wow thanx yall. And T.T raven I got my avatar from u, I hope u don't mind tell me and i'll change it. Sry about the starfire thing i'll change it. And no i didn't make the first few lines, that would have been cool. Don't worry it will really change in later chaps well see ya
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Oh yeah and if ya'll don't mind me asking then were do u get raven avatars? I've looked everywhere and there is just dumb stuff.
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Raven 54 and Raven 37 can help you there. They know where to find sweet stuff.
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Hey, CR. Nice job, as I said before.
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Don't think I've seen you around...Nice to meet you TTG.
Meanwhile, WRITE MORE!
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See, I told you people would like it CR! You're doing awesome, just watch out 'cause its sounding almost exactly like Spellbound. so uh yeah, just keep writing and don't take too long to post please!
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OK ya'll, Like i said its not gona be anywhere close to spellbound. It will mega change later, but u r going to have to find out on ur own. Soo to get to the point.....STOP WARNING ME ABOUT IT!!!!
It WILL Change. OK, gooooood. Now don't mean to be mean, but it just gets annoying. Thanx
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Hey T.T.Raven4! I've been here for a while just to let ya know. I've got a fic too, but it's on the second page. That's because ppl won't post on my thread like they will on CR's, my beloved wonderful friend WHO GETS MORE POSTS IN 30 MINUTES THAN I HAD IN 2 WEEKS!!!!!!
ok i'm fine now.
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Why, thank you for the recognition T.T.Raven, and yes, I can be of much help on the avatar thing if you want. If you have Instant Messaging, that would be a good way for me to tell you about it. If not I can private message you.
Anyway, It's good to hear you have ideas to make it different from spellbound. It's good so far, and keep posting! ![]() P.S. I like this dude:
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Turning
A/N: Hey guys, I’m back!!!(Horror music plays in the background,) OK well here is the 2nd chapter and I don’t own any of the ‘fire becomes whatever’ stuff ok: ) Just like I said in last chapter. I’m go to try and make this one little longer, of chores my Thanksgiving break thing is coming up so I’ll be able to update sooner and write more, well anyways thanks for all of ya’lls great reviews. Well here we go.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Raven woke up about 3 hours later. “Wow, what happe…"she looked around and saw her room on a mess. Books and clothes and other things were thrown around the room like a tornado had come threw. She looked at her roomed and remembered. “But how could I have do this unless….NO!!! It can’t be, I won’t let it be. Ok, ok I have to calm down and think things threw, if this did happen then one of the other would have heard me…THE OTHERS!!! Oh no they have to be ok!!!!” Raven ran to her door and opened it. She looked down the hall and saw that they were in about the same condition as her room. “They have to be ok, they have to be ok!!!” She repeated this to herself again and again until she stopped in front of the main room door. She slowly took a timid had and placed it on the doorknob. She pushed the door open to reveal the sight she was most afraid of. She looked around the room only to see Robin’s, Starfire, Cyborg’s and Beastboy’s broken bodies. “This can’t be, THIS CAN’T BE!!!” She said as she fell on her knees crying. “Oh, but it is child. And it was you who did this to them, it was you who listened to them as they screamed in pain, it was you who killed them. You are truly my child.” Said a dark, booming voice. She knew that voice all to well. “ Come my child, join me and we shall rule all that we desire.” Said the voice. She glanced once more around the room before bowing her head in defeat and in a soft, low voice answering” As you wish…father.” >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> “NOOOOOO!!!!!” shouted Raven as the upper half of her body shot up off the ground. She looked at her clock and it said it was 3:45 A.M. The words of her father still rang in her head, the images of her only friends bodies, twisted and mangled in abnormal ways and the thought that she had done it all. Just as she finished thinking there came a pounding on the door. “ RAVEN, RAVEN, OPEN UP!!!!!” Came Robin’s voice from behind the door. After there was no answer Robin said, “alright, Cyborg, break it down…1…2…” Just as Robin was about to say three the door, slightly opened to reveal half of Raven’s face. “WHAT DO YOU WANT!?!” Shouted Raven. “Everyone jumped back at the tone of her voice. “Ummm…we heard you scream and we thought you might be hurt or something.” Robin answered regaining his composure “I am NOT a child; I don’t NEED to be checked on!!!” Raven said, said trying to clam down. “Ok, ok, we were just check’ in on ya, we heard you scream and we were afraid, no need to bit our head off.” Cyborg said, putting his hands up in defense. “ Yes friend Raven, we care about you dearly, we would not want anything bad to happen to you. Please tell us, why did you scream?” asked Starfire, smiling sweetly. “Are you ok and can we go back to bed now?” asked a very tired Beastboy. “Yes, I am fine; I just need to meditate for a while.” Answered Raven. “Ok, well call us if you need anything.” Said Robin. “Don’t worry I won’t.” was ravens reply before she shut her door. She listened to all the footsteps go down the hall before jumping back on her bed. She sat there for a few minutes before standing up and going to a tapestry on the wall. She moved it back to reveal a wooden door with a star engraved on it. She touched the star and the door started to open. Once the door was finished opening, it revealed a lot of mystic treasures, mostly positions and scrolls and a few odd objects here and there, but the majority was taken up by books and a chest, but not just any books and chest though, they were the books that Malchior had magically morphed into her room and as for the chest, it was chest that with held the book Malchior was trapped within. She moved over to the chest and hesitated before opening it up. When she opened it she grabbed Malchior’s book and headed out of the secret room, when she got out she sat down on her bed. After taking many deep breaths, she closes her eyes and opened the book quickly. After she had opened the book, she opened her eyes only to see what looked like the inside of a normal looking book, but she knew better. When she was done, she put the book back in the chest, but before closing the lid she looked once more at the harmless looking book. She wondered if he could see her now, she wondered if he was thinking of her, how she wished she could just let him out again to be with her and hold her once more. Sure her friends did give her attention and love and stuff, but it wasn’t the same. Luckily she knew better this time; the only thing he would do if she let him out would be kill her and destroy everything. She closed the lid and thought once more, ‘maybe one day I could let you out again Malchior, maybe one day.’ >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> A/N: OK guys there it is. Sry I didn’t add any cool sounding stuff, u know what I’m talking about. Anyhow, did u guys like it. I was kind of amazed that I had written so much, but I guess that’s what happens when u lose track of time. Any ways I don’t think it was that good. If u guys don’t like it, then I’ll stop, but suggestions are welcome. Thanks for listening. CR P.S. Oh yeah and sry for the less ness(hehehe) of spacing. This is the beast pie, in the history of pies." BB "Well maybe you should call me...BEASTMAN!!! Beastboy were having a moment….don’t ruin it.... Beastdude?!? Rae and BB "I shall go cultivate the fungus!!!" Starfire "Your just jealous 'cause I sound like a rock star." BB "I'm not creepy, I'm just...different." Raven |
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Scared ya didn't I. I knew the first part would get some jaws to drop b/c mine dropped when i wrote it. Sorry about all the editing and sps. I just want to make it PERFECT for ya'll. Now was like still to much like Spellbound?!? Nope didn't think so. well see ya
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Good job, but it was a little bland. I don't know, and please, please work on your grammar. Ask Mrs. Priest about it if you need help with proofreading or ask me or Jazzy.
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Oh be quite TTG. I'll work on my grammer as soon as U work on ur writeing.
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What are u doing on now anyway?
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Very nice indeed, love it. I like how she misses Melchior/Rorek. This is gonna be good. What is this bland, TTGo? This stuff is edible, NOT bland at all.
Have you ever heard of a place called Ashland? Sorry, just wondering.
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