Predictable Terra

RavenBlackfire3 · #1 10-16-2004, 06:55 PM

Something isn't right, I can feel it again feel it again, This isn't the first time
That you left me waiting, Sad excuses and false hopes high, I saw this coming still I don't know why, I let you in

I knew it all along, You're so predictable, I knew something would go wrong (something's always wrong)So you don't have to call, Or say anything at all, So predictable (so predictable)

So take your empty words, your broken promises, And all the time you stole cause I am done with this, I can give it away give it away, I'm doin everything I should've, And now I'm makin a change, I'm living the day, I'm giving back what you gave me

I don't need anything, I knew it all along, You're so predictable, I knew something would go wrong (something's always wrong)So you don't have to call, Or say anything at all, So predictable (so predictable)

Everywhere I go, Everyone I meet, Every time I try to fall in love, They all want to know why I'm so broken, Why am I so cold? Why I'm so hard inside. Why am I scared? What am I afraid of? I don't even know! This story's never had an end, I've been waiting, I've been searching, I've been hoping, I've been dreaming you would come back. But I know the ending of this story. You're never coming back,Never..never..never..never.....[echo].....

I knew it all along, You're so predictable, I knew something would go wrong (something's always wrong)So you don't have to call, Or say anything at all, So predictable (so predictable)

Everywhere I go for the rest of my life (so predictable)Everyone that I love, Everyone I care about, They're all gonna wanna know what's wrong with me (so predictable)And I know what it is, I'm ending this right now..

Matt A · #2 10-16-2004, 07:03 PM

I wasn't really expecting ayone to put a cover of a track on here, so that's quite a nice surprise. It tells the whole Beast Boy/Terra story really well, putting the kind of emotional spin on things that only music can do. It's also very well written, which is always good.

The pictures back the whole thing up quite nicely, but it would be interesting to see how the song reads without them!

See what else you can do with this idea!

starburn1116 · #3 10-16-2004, 07:07 PM

*claps hands energetically*

that was beautiful!!

raven54 · #4 10-16-2004, 07:10 PM

damn straight!

RavenBlackfire3 · #5 10-16-2004, 07:18 PM

*takes a bow* thank you. just to let you know, good charlotte sings that song

Crowgirl · #6 10-16-2004, 07:46 PM

That was really good, write a fic about Terra!

RavenBlackfire3 · #7 10-16-2004, 08:01 PM

i might do just that.......................

RavenBlackfire3 · #8 10-16-2004, 11:30 PM

Do you ever feel like breaking down? Do you ever feel out of place? Like somehow you just don't belong, And no one understands you

Do you ever wanna run away? Do you lock yourself in your room? With the radio on turned up so loud, that no one hears you screaming.

No you don't know what it's like, when nothing feels alright, you don't know what it's like to be like me.

To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark, to be kicked when you're down, to feel like you've been pushed around. To be on the edge of breaking down, when no one's there to save you. No you don't know what it's like......... welcome to my life.

Do you wanna be somebody else? Are you sick of feeling so left out? Are you desperate to find something more, before your life is over.

Are you stuck inside a world you hate? Are you sick of everyone around? With the big fake smiles and stupid lies, but deep inside you're bleeding.

No you don't know what it's like, when nothing feels alright. You don't know what it's like to be like me.

To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark, to be kicked when you're down, to feel like you've been pushed around. To be on the edge of breaking down, when no one's there to save you. No you don't know what it's like......... welcome to my life.

No one ever lied straight to your face, and no one ever stabbed you in the back. You might think I'm happy, but I'm not gonna be okay.

Everybody always gave you what you wanted, you never had to work it was always there, you don't know what it's like (what it's like)

To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark, to be kicked when you're down, to feel like you've been pushed around. To be on the edge of breaking down, when no one's there to save you. No you don't know what it's like.................To be hurt, to feel lost, to be left out in the dark, to be kicked when you're down, to feel like you've been pushed around. To be on the edge of breaking down, when no one's there to save you. No you don't know what it's like.........welcome to my life...... welcome to my life....... welcome to my life.........

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well, wat didya think of that one? that is my fave song ever and it really explains my life.

rrarbecy · #9 10-17-2004, 07:57 AM

That describes my life too.

RavenBlackfire3 · #10 10-17-2004, 09:17 AM

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Originally Posted by rrarbecy

That describes my life too.

doesnt it suck?

Rae · #11 10-17-2004, 11:36 AM

Me three and Totally

RavenBlackfire3 · #12 10-17-2004, 12:04 PM

ya, i let my dad listen to it, but he didnt get the point, then my mom heard it and she was all, "is that how you feel??????" and i was like, "uh... DUH!!!!!!!" and this was her face

. then she went to her room and i think she was crying..... i didnt really care though...

rrarbecy · #13 10-17-2004, 01:29 PM

My mom wouldn't have given a flying ****. She would tell me to get over it and make some friends.

RavenBlackfire3 · #14 10-17-2004, 03:27 PM

i talked to my mom, and she thought it was her fault, and that was why she was upset, and this is the exact thing i said to her, "mom, guess what? it IS your fault. you really dont like me. you may LOVE me, but you dont like me at all, you dont let me choose who i wanna be, you hate my friends, and my life is goin down hill. you trashin my friends is really not waht i need right now, because we need to have our lifes focused on grandma, because she has less than a year to live!" then i ran up to my room and turned up my music LOUD and screamed. (ya, i got that from the song, but i really did that.) the music was so loud she couldnt hear me scream.

rrarbecy · #15 10-17-2004, 04:02 PM

Jesus Christ. I can't believe you said that to her. My mom doesn't like me either, but I wouldn't tell her that.

Unix · #16 10-18-2004, 04:15 PM

wow. thats all i can really say about all of what i've read in this thread. wow. i'm sorry if i sound like a sap saying this, but once again, wow. i cant really relate personally, but a friend of mine can, so i really hope that, as pointless as this may sound, everything might start to clear for all of you.

Sproxie · #17 10-18-2004, 05:26 PM

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Originally Posted by starburn1116

*claps hands energetically*

that was beautiful!!

YUP!

Sproxie · #18 10-18-2004, 05:29 PM

anyway yea i feel the same way...
but now i completely ignore everyone in my life and pretty much walk around with headphones to help me out with that...

Unix · #19 10-18-2004, 05:43 PM

oh, crap, i 4got... the cover/fic/song/story (dont really know wat catagory this falls into

) is great.RavenBlackfire3, after i re-read u'r last post, i realize, i do realate in a way, i know its not anything like the rest, but just thought...well i dunno wat i thought really, please continue with wat u doin with this thread, its very moving

RavenBlackfire3 · #20 10-18-2004, 06:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Sprox 083

now i completely ignore everyone in my life and pretty much walk around with headphones to help me out with that...

ya, music helps me alot...