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Come back to Haunt You(teen titans fic)
hey everyone! i said i would try to do a sequel and i told the truth! if you are a newbie or just havn't checked out the second page yet you should know that this is the sequel to Goodbye but you really don't have to read it to understand(it would make me feel better if you did though). it would help if you were familiar with the show though. please feedback is much needed. enjoy!
Chapter1 For the first time in a while all the Titans were in the living room of Titans Tower, enjoying the temporary peace in Jump City. Cyborg had his head phones on and was wildly bobbing his head to the music only he could hear, Raven was reading one of her cryptic novels, and Robin was half watching T.V. and half watching Starfire and Beastboy play a game they had made up. Robin grinned as Starfire, who was floating a few feet of the ground, did half a back-flip so she was on her hands. Then she lifted one of her hands toward the ceiling, twirled around and did a summersault so she was sitting cross-legged in the air. Now she looked at Beastboy with a smile that rarely spread itself across her face. It was a smile that had a challenge hidden in plain sight. Beastboy smirked back before transforming into a monkey and immitating exactly what Starfire had done(only on the ground). When he was done he stoodup and bowed in his monkey form. This caused Starfire to erupt into a fit of laughter. Robin watched as she rosed a few more feet in the air and turned back to the T.V. with a smile. It's good to hear her laugh after that Blackfire thing. he thought as he flipped through the channels. He settled on a special on World War 2. "As millions were marched through the city they were branded with a serial numberso the Nazi's could properly identify the people." the narrator said. Suddenly robin heard a THUMP and an "oof!" He turned and saw Starfire sitting on the floor starring at the big screen T.V with a mixture on amazement and fear. Beastboy was rolling around on the floor, laughing. "You okay, Star?" Robin asked. Starfire jumped like she had been startled as her gaze flicked to her left arm. Then she looked back at Robin. "Y-yes. I am fine." she answered with a slight waver in her voice. It was a waver that only a person who truly knew her and happened to be listening closely. Fortunatly Robin, being her boyfriend, knew her enough. He was about to ask her if she was sure, but Beastboy interrupted him. "I WIN! I WIN!" he was shouting. With a small smirk Starfire said the one word that had been said most at her home. "Rematch!" Robin hesitated and decided to let it go as the alarm went off. "Let's go team! We've got some work to do at the docks!" Robin said. And with that they were out the door, but not before Starfire could readjust the metallic band on her left arm. short. i know but that's just my style. please review. i'll put up chapter 2 as soon as i write it. |
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great chapter keep it up
cant wait to see whats next!
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ah, i see where you are going with this already. interesting choice. but i make reference to it (the metal band) in my fic and its totally different.
hmm...i wonder who's right?
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yeah
when i read that i thought wow that was good then i kicked myself for not thinking of it first then i came up with this which should be really fun if you know then don't tell anybody it should be in the next chapter or not
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i just hate not knowing whats going on....
but it makes me want to noe whats next even more
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Very nice- that's an interesting idea with Starfire and the armband thing. it's already lookin to be a great sequel... and don't keep us in suspense for long, OK? It makes my head hurt.
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AAH! Starburn!! I read it in school, and yet.... I CANT READ THE NEXT CHAPTER ON THIS EITHER??? ergggs.... Write more!!! NOW!!!!!!!
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I hope you all have a happy holiday! oh, i hope you rememebr me! i'm the strange person...who created panda....uh....yeah..... You probaly all forgot me!!![]() I'll Make you remember me! MWAHAHAHAAA! UH....I'M NOT PLOTING ANYTHING EVIL *panics* I Love Gir....LOL Shuting up now...
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okay heres chapter 2. not much action.
chapter2 As Starfire flew toward Jump City she felt the same as she did everytime she was headed to a fight. Anticipation. Excitement. She had a feeling that her friends thought she hated to fight, and that wasn't the case at all. The truth was that Starfire liked to fight. It came naturally and not many things did that for Starfire. It doesn't make you feel stupid. she mused. Even before they... No. don't think about that. she commanded herself. She had work to do. She was approching the docks and could hear Robin's motorcycle and Cyborg's car down below her. She opened her communicator. "Okay guys. Split up and search." Robin said. "What are we looking for?" Raven's monotone said. "I'm not sure." Robin answered. Starfire flew right looking for a place to start her search. Spotting an alley she decided to start there. As she walked along the alley she heard a strange sound. Crying? She followed the sound to the end of the alley where she found a door. She pressed her ear against it. Yes it was comming from in there. She tried the door. Locked. Starfire raised a starbolt in her hand. Carefully she pressed her finger to the center of the knob. She was careful bcause shedidn't want to melt the whole knob. Just the lock inside. Quickly she grabbed the knob and turned it. It swung open and she walked in with a small smile. She looked around. She was sure that the sound had come from in there. Then she spotted something lurking in the shadows. "Who is there?" she said cautiously. She walked to it. It was a man! He was huddled on the floor and was wimpering in pain. "I have found someone!" the Tamaranian said quickly into her communicator. "He seems to be badly injured." "Where are you?"She heard the Boy Wonder ask. "I am in the fifth building on the right of the street we entered on." "We'll be right there." came her reply. Then she turned her attention back to the man. She knelt down beside him as Robin and Beastboy burst through the door. "We wish to help you. Please inform us as to who has done this to you." she said quietly. "It-it was a big skinny guy. Got mad after i couldn't give him information on a girl. Said she hadred hair and green eyes and..." he trailed off as he opened his eyes. By then Raven and Cyborg had gotten there and they had gathered around the man. "You! He was looking for you! You have to get out of here! He wants to kil you!" He gasped, looking at Starfire. "Star, what is he talking about." Robin asked quietly. Starfire was trying to be calm. There are many people who want to do my friends and I harm. There is nothing to prove that it is...him. She reasoned with herself. "Please, did this man call the girl by a name?" she asked, ignoring the looks she was getting from her friends. "Yea. He called her Unatra." Starfire's eyes widened and she resisted the urge to repeat every swear word she had ever learned and thanks to Beastboy she knew quite a lot. "Well that's a relief! That can't possibly be Starfire!" Beastboy excaimed. "No, Beastboy. It is me." she answered quietly. Hearing a creak behind her Starfire sprang into the air only to see a blur heading straight for her. It collided and pushed her back through the wall before Star could throw it off of her. Panting and boiling with anger Starfire turned to face an enemy she thought was gone forever. well there it is. what do you think? |
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woah...
That was just awesome. Need More!!!!!!!! |
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I LIKE I LIKE!!!!!
Im hyper again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OOF!! <----- Thats me falling of my chair. But other than that great chapter. |
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Great, write more!
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holy freakin crap that was good. gimme more
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#13
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What is this the sequel to? Write more or die! (Your choice...)
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Guy 1: Hello? Guy 2: Greetings, this is an anonymous message... from Ernest... Fics: II: The Color Wheel III: Teen Titans: Evaporation
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STARBURN!!!!
YOU BETTER TELL ME WHAT Hapens next in school! *((IF YOU DON'T POST IT HERE FIRST))
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I hope you all have a happy holiday! oh, i hope you rememebr me! i'm the strange person...who created panda....uh....yeah..... You probaly all forgot me!!![]() I'll Make you remember me! MWAHAHAHAAA! UH....I'M NOT PLOTING ANYTHING EVIL *panics* I Love Gir....LOL Shuting up now...
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it is currently on the second page check it out i am in the process of writting chapter3 i promise i will post it as soon as it is finish expect it around next weekend but don't be suprised if it comes out before OR after then Last edited by starburn1116; 10-10-2004 at 01:24 PM. |
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NEXT WEEKEND?!?! *falls out of chair and starts twitching*
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I hope you all have a happy holiday! oh, i hope you rememebr me! i'm the strange person...who created panda....uh....yeah..... You probaly all forgot me!!![]() I'll Make you remember me! MWAHAHAHAAA! UH....I'M NOT PLOTING ANYTHING EVIL *panics* I Love Gir....LOL Shuting up now...
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I scare lots of ppl. don't worry though, i'm not insane... not yet anyways... BUT I WILL BE IF I HAVE TO WAIT LONGER THAN NEXT WEEKEND!!! mwahahahaa.
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who, honestly, clicked on the link in my signature???? I need to know. ((it links to the egg song))
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I hope you all have a happy holiday! oh, i hope you rememebr me! i'm the strange person...who created panda....uh....yeah..... You probaly all forgot me!!![]() I'll Make you remember me! MWAHAHAHAAA! UH....I'M NOT PLOTING ANYTHING EVIL *panics* I Love Gir....LOL Shuting up now...
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you should be more than inching away... you should be running as hard as you can in the other direction
*sigh* I love messing with newbies
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