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In To the Future
ok this is my first story ever because i just signed up if it's anything goes wrong i'm sorry here goes nothin
Chapter 1 The day started out as any other day,BeastBoy and Cyborg playing video games, Star and Raven meditating together, and Robin making breakfast while staring at Starfire(he does this every day now). Just as Cyborg beat BeastBoy and Star and Raven stoped meditating and when Robin stroped staring at Starfire because he was burning the waffles ......... the alarm went off. "Looks like someone new," yelled cyborg "he calles himself Robo from the future?""ok then titans go!"yelled robin"and there it is the 200th time how do you feel?"exclamed BeastBoy"uhhh BeastBoy can we do this later robo is trying to steal something from the museum" said robin "uhhhh yeah sure, i mean who calles themself Robo from the future! PLEASE!!!!!"BeastBoy answered and changing the subject"yeah and who calls themself BeastBoy?"asked raven"yeah- hey!!!!" beastBoy said while changing into a tiger and about to attack her when robin yelled " guys stop lets go!NOW!!!!! and they left. _________________________________________________________________ ok thats it, please don't hate me the next chapter is much better
Last edited by Star/Robin4ever; 10-07-2004 at 08:35 AM. |
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It looks promising. Welcome to the corner. Good luck on the rest.
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start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. makes it easier to read
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great keep writing!
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ok thanks for the tips, here is the second chapter
when the teens got to the museum, Robo was trying to steal an ancient egyptain tablet "Stop robo please do not steal anything or you will pay"Star yelled the man paused "ok i wont steal any thing IF i can have a little chat with Robin" confused Robin started to walk over then he felt a hand on his shoulder and he turned around and saw Starfire with a worried epression "Don't worry Star i'm ok"Star looked down and let go and Robin went over to Robo "What do you want?" asked robin " I have been over hearing that you want to see what the future, yes?" asked Robo "Yeah" said robin confused more than ever "well i have come to show you if you want to see the future meet me outside of titans tower got to go bye." said robo as he dissapeard in to a portal "dude what was that about " asked BeastBoy "nothing lets go home."said robin ________________________________ ok thats it if you don't like it the next chapter is in the Future Last edited by Star/Robin4ever; 10-07-2004 at 07:10 PM. |
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sound interesting.... keep writing!
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that was pretty good
please continue soon *what will the future hold?* |
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all right people here's the third chapter it's the best one so far
there are also some new charcters that me and my friends made up. Enjoy! (in the future) "Star i'm home!"yelled (future) Robin. "I'm in the kitchen making dinner!" said Starfire.Robin walked in to the kitchen at Titans Tower "How's our little girl doing?" he asked patting star's stomach. star giggled "She's doing just fine." "Ok, well i'm going to see the other titans." said robin walking out of the room and he started down the hall and when he got to cyborg and Lightfire's room he knocked on the door "Come in!" "no thanks i just came to tell you that dinner's ready " said robin ________________________________________________________ all right that's one half of chapter 3 give you more later
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This is good!
But who is Lightfire? Is she Star's sister? So many questions......... Please update!
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This looks promising.
I can't wait to see what happens next. |
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i like it. If robin and star are having a kid I can only assume they're like 20 or 25, right? at that point I think Robin would become Nightwing. and do they really still live in the tower after all these years?
interesting...
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Listen up missy! Panda should want a chid, and have short hair, Oh, and look human instead of how she normaly looks. ok??
GOOD!!
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I meant child. ERRRG! Oh, and what I said before about robin and the child thing, please do that!!!! It would be SOOOOOOOOOOOOO funny!!!!
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story sounds good so far, keep writing!
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WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
now Last edited by Panda22; 10-09-2004 at 01:42 PM. |
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all right people here is chapter 3 continued. oh yeah robin is nightwing i'm just used to writing or typing Robin, and no lightfire is not stars sister she is her cousn who is half robot like cyborg, and panda is, well.... used to be like bb and then she turned human.( created by Panda22)and nighttiger is like Raven only a boy, and yes they still live in titans tower because well ..... lets just say they couldn't say find a house to fit enough people that's all i can say so here goes nothin
robin continued to walk down the hall when he got to Panda and Beast Boy's room he knocked "come in " someone whispered frome inside and robin walked in "shhhh Beast Boy is asleep."panda whispered robin looked at the still figure on the bed " oh well any way how was your honeymoon?" he asked "it was great spending time with BeastBoy is great."Panda whisperd "here are the photos " wow looks like you guys had fun tell me more at dinner ok."whispered robin as he walked out of the room when he got to raven and night tiger's room no one was there then his comunicator rang it was Star "dinner is served"star said and she siged off "Mmmmmm smells good star" robin said walking into the kitchen it looked great roasted turkey,corn on the cob,and cranberry sauce, it was like thanksgiving all over again when every one sat down star fell over moaning " Robin she is having the baby!"yelled Raven "ooooooohhhhhhhh man how can women do that."Beast Boy said falling over ___________________________________________________________________ ok people thats it g2g tell u morer later Last edited by Star/Robin4ever; 10-10-2004 at 10:37 AM. |
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You know, after I read this, I just sat here gaping for 10 minutes. *just sits staring at the screen* Look at me! I'm still doing it! That was just too awesome to put ino words. Well, this chapter wasn't awesome, but chapters building up to something big always, well, do this to me. *sits in shocked silence*. Must....Have...MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE
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Um.... Star has the baby right then?
I don't exactly want to be there.Other than that, it looks very promising. MORE!
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I don't think she's giving birth right there. She's just going into labor. So many perverted minds (myself included). sheesh.
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hi people all of you are my new friends sorry im happy and i would like 4 all of you 2 be my friends if u want well anyway here is chapter 4
(in the past ) robin snuck out of his room "robin what are you doing in the hall?"star asked coming out of her room, "ahhh"yelled robin jumping up "please don't ever do that again and im going to the um...um...the, uh bathroom, bathroom yeah thats it the bathroom"Star stared at him "ok see you in the morning"she said walking in to her room "uh yeah see you."robin said walking away when he got outside robo was waiting "what took you so long?"he asked "lets just go ok " robin said getting ready for anything "ok then jump in"robo said opening a portal. Robin jumped in and robo followed him meanwhile in the future "robin is this suposed to happen?"Star asked in a quiet voice just then future robin was sucked in to a portal and he swiched places with past robin "umm ye-OH MY GOD!!!! ![]() " past robin yelled "uh sir would you like to cut the cord?"the doctor asked "uh sure hehehe." robin said closing his eyes cutting it.__________________________________________________________ all right if you thought it was funny tell me ok |
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