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Old 09-26-2004, 01:38 PM
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Raven's Fantasy~~~~A TEEN TITANS FANFIC

Chapter One





Raven looked across the water at Jump City. It was so beautiful how the setting sun reflected on the water. This peace and quiet made her meditating a lot easier. She heard the door creak open and small foot steps come closer to her. She opened one eye and saw Beast Boy sitting there in cat form. He was giving her ‘the face’ and even though she never admitted it, it always got to her. She closed her eye and said, “Beast Boy, you know that doesn’t work on me.”



“Ya, I know… I just wanted to try,” Beast Boy said going back to human form, “Come on Raven! Come down and enjoy fun with us! Can’t you meditate later?”

“Ugh… if it will make u be quiet, then fine, I’ll come down.”

Beast Boy gave a small victory leap and grabbed Raven’s arm and pulled her down to the entertainment room. As they entered they found Cyborg and Robin playing video games and Starfire cheering Robin on.

“You want some of that Cyborg? Huh? Huh? Do ya?” Robin said as he finally beat Cyborg.

“Oh be quiet you little spiky-haired, self absorbed, stodgy…” Cyborg said being cut off by Starfire saying, “Let us not call names while we are celebrating Robin’s victory.”

“Congratulations Robin,” Raven said letting out a small smile.

Robin turned to her and blushed while saying, “Thanks Raven.”

Starfire glared at Raven, which was kind of awkward since Star was such a nice natured person. Raven turned to BB who was still holding onto her arm. BB saw what she was looking at and blushed as he let go.

“Friends! Let us go and do the training that Robin enjoys so much!” Star chimed in.

“I could go for some training. You up to it Cyborg? BB? Raven?” Robin said looking at the corresponding person.

They all nodded and headed off to the training room. But just as soon as they got there Cyborg and Robin were at it again. Later on after training Star was tired so she went off to bed and once again it was a battle between Robin and BB who would get to walk Raven to her room. Raven stepped over to Cyborg whispered something into his ear and disappeared into the ceiling. The boys both stopped arguing immediately and turned to Cyborg who said, “Raven wants me to talk to you two.”

They all went into the living room and sat down.

“Okay,” said Cyborg looking at the two boys in front of him, “Raven told me that it has become increasingly obvious to her that you both like her. Correct?”

Robin and BB nodded.

“Okay, she has also told me that she would like to talk to both of you…”

They both stood up to go to Raven’s room but Cyborg stopped them, “One at a time.”

They started arguing over who would go first but Cyborg once again stopped them.

“We’ll flip a coin ok?” Cyborg said as he tossed a coin into the air.

“Heads!” called BB.

“Tails!” came Robin.

The coin fell onto the ground and rolled around and landed on… tails!!!

“YES!” Robin screamed as he took off towards Raven’s room. He was glad to see Raven and excited as to what would happen, but was also curious since he had never been into Raven's room. He opened the door and stepped inside to see Raven meditating on her bed. She stopped and looked over at him. She smiled and said, “So you got first dibs huh?”

He laughed and said, “I guess you could say that.”

“Okay, let’s cut to the chase. I know that you like me, and Star has officially ‘disowned me’ for it.”

Robin’s jaw dropped, “She what?!”

Raven stood up and walked to her door, “Disowned me? You know, pretending like she doesn’t know me when she really does? Ya, she left a little before you came in.” Raven slowly walked out of the room and Robin followed. They went up to the roof and were relieved that Star wasn’t up there. Raven sat down and Robin sat next to her. It was very dark since it was late, so naturally it was a bit chilly. Raven wrapped her cloak around her as she said, “Robin, I also know that BB likes me, and if I choose one of you over the other, then the other will probably disown me to. But I… if I am forced to choose, then I know who I will choose.”

“And do I get a hint?”

“No. Neither does BB. But the only thing that I’m worried about if how Cyborg and Starfire will react to my choice.”

“Well, Raven,” Robin said as he stood up, “I’ll go on down and let u talk to BB. And, just to let you know, I will never make you choose.”

Raven smiled knowing that no matter what her choice, Robin would accept her. She had just said a tiny lie b/c in truth, she had NO IDEA who she was gunna pick. She sat there waiting for BB to come out and when he did it he had this look on his face like he had succeeded at something that was very important to him. He sat down and smiled at her, “I knew you would pick me.”

“WHAT?!!!!” Raven yelled as she stood up.

“I said-“

“You don’t have to repeat yourself! You self absorbed little…… UGH!” Raven phased through the floor and went to Robin’s room. She knocked on the door and said, “Robin, it’s me, tell Starfire to go down to the living room, I’m gunna announce my decision.”

Robin looked up from his work and immediately headed to Star’s room. He knocked on the door but went in before Star could answer. He walked in just as Star was putting up a little Voodoo doll of Raven, “Star? Why do you have a Raven Voodoo doll?”

“Because she is a Klor-bag Varbler Nelk. And is not to be trusted. Especially not with ones heart.”

“Come on! Star that is the most pathetic piece of crap excuse that I have ever heard! You disowned her b/c I like her, well NEWS FLASH STAR! IT’S NOT GUNNA CHANGE! AND THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO! If you want to know who she does choose come down to the living room. Now,” he said as he slammed the door.



well, thats chapter one. post and tell wat u think. if u dont then ill assume it sucks and im a dork

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Old 09-26-2004, 02:14 PM
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interasting, definatly. I knew Beast Boy had some feelings for Raven and a slight hint that Robin and her had always been a little more than friends, but I never thought someone in worlds finest would come out and embrase it.
i always liked raven, you could kinda tell by my story "As The Bird Flies" and I'm glad I have some fellow likers.
And just for the record, the titans watch over jump city, not gotham, but still good.
By all means, keep writing. peace out.
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Old 09-26-2004, 02:52 PM
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huh, this is an interesting fic. It seems that in this particular one, the titans center around raven.

Funny, I always thought that Raven and Cyborg would end up together in the series. Keep posting, I wanna see where this goes.
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Old 09-26-2004, 03:00 PM
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Interesting and also hard to believe. I can't believe Starfire has such a strong sense of hate towards Raven. Btw, did you know the title reads, "Ranen"? Typo I assume.
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Old 09-26-2004, 03:29 PM
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your breaking up the Robin Starfire thing!!! I know its Raven's "FANTASY" but its so wrong!!
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Old 09-26-2004, 04:25 PM
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just kidding. but dont mind starfire5, keep it up. I love to see a different take on the robin/starfire relationship.
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Old 09-26-2004, 06:02 PM
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your breaking up the Robin Starfire thing!!! I know its Raven's "FANTASY" but its so wrong!!
ya, i no. personally starfire is pretty and all, but i really dont like her. and plz, if u have comments like that say it in a not so snotty way. u sound like a five year old. and i soon as i can im gunna get the next chapter up.
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Old 09-26-2004, 06:04 PM
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Interesting and also hard to believe. I can't believe Starfire has such a strong sense of hate towards Raven. Btw, did you know the title reads, "Ranen"? Typo I assume.
ya, BIG typo! i hope i can change that..... heh heh. well, ttyl
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Old 09-26-2004, 06:05 PM
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Hey, eternal shadow, can you say all the grammer mistakes in my fan fic were a typo. Some people are a little obsessive about all my grammer mistakes. But oh well. Up date soon, I'm dien' here.
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Old 09-26-2004, 06:08 PM
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Make the font bigger. I can't read it.
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Make the font bigger. I can't read it.
i'll try to remember that.
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Old 09-26-2004, 06:17 PM
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Hey, eternal shadow, can you say all the grammer mistakes in my fan fic were a typo. Some people are a little obsessive about all my grammer mistakes. But oh well. Up date soon, I'm dien' here.
i will update as soon as possible. but right now, i gotta go! ttyl!
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Robin and Beast Boy liking Raven. Oh my head. I never thought I would see the day that Raven had to choose between Robin and BEAST BOY. Man.
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Old 09-26-2004, 10:08 PM
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Robin and Beast Boy liking Raven. Oh my head. I never thought I would see the day that Raven had to choose between Robin and BEAST BOY. Man.

well, i guess in response to that im supposed to say, 'well get used to it.' but im different and creative. so im gunna say, "im different and creative. and i felt like doing something different and creative." not trying to sound snobbish, so sorry if that did didnt mean for it to.
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i know this is old but it has to be said

you did it
you broke up the robin/starfire relationship
that's really wrong man
don't you think robin is being a little hurtful ?
of course i can't talk
this is your fic and i can't tell you what to do with it

(it is written very well even if i personally don't like the plot. don't mind me though. i'm obsessed)

i would like to see how this turns out though

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Raven smiled knowing that no matter what her choice, Robin would accept her. She had just said a tiny lie b/c in truth, she had NO IDEA who she was gunna pick. She sat there waiting for BB to come out and when he did it he had this look on his face like he had succeeded at something that was very important to him. He sat down and smiled at her, “I knew you would pick me.”

“WHAT?!!!!” Raven yelled as she stood up.
hm..... you make our heroes seem like total jerks.

But I like how you make it so they like Raven.... catchy
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Old 09-27-2004, 04:33 PM
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hm..... you make our heroes seem like total jerks.
well, sorry about that, but its just that self centered attitude that bb has though it was kinda harsh, but as soon as i get the next chapter up, i think all of ya'll will b very suprised at wat i have planned.
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i know this is old but it has to be said

you did it
you broke up the robin/starfire relationship
that's really wrong man
don't you think robin is being a little hurtful ?
well, in all thruth the reason robin was being 'hurtful' is b/c star was being a complete jerk and he was tired of it. i mean she disowned onw of her best friends just /bc the guy she had a crush on likes her. dont u think that THAT is overreacting. im mean its ok to b mad wen something like that happens, but DISOWN. i mean... ya, its my story and i coulda changed it, and star is normally the nicest person on the team, but i wanted to twist things around, and you all r gunna find that as my sotry progresses. ya, i will occasionally use lines from the show, but i like to twist things and make them REALLY different.
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[QUOTE=RavenBlackfire3]well, in all thruth the reason robin was being 'hurtful' is b/c star was being a complete jerk and he was tired of it. i mean she disowned onw of her best friends just /bc the guy she had a crush on likes her. dont u think that THAT is overreacting. im mean its ok to b mad wen something like that happens, but DISOWN. QUOTE]

well you have a point there
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ya, i just thought that was extreme, and i made robin think the same thing.
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