toonzone forums

Go Back   toonzone forums > Cartoons, Dammit! > World's Finest Writer's Corner > Teen Titans Fan Fiction

Teen Titans Fan Fiction Post all your Teen Titans fan fiction here!

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 09-19-2004, 12:56 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
wolf meets the teen titans old story and now featuring the beginning of a new story!

this is my fan fic of the teen titans, they meet my very own super hero, Wolf. But i am not giving anything away, you'll have to read it for yourself.
i have also written the next storys first chapter now, so get it while its still hot!

If you would like to see my fan fic. Please go to www.dontneedreality.com, any feedback wold be appreciated!

Last edited by moro loci; 09-24-2004 at 03:09 PM.
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 09-19-2004, 04:40 PM
Kylewayne's Avatar
Kylewayne Kylewayne is offline
<---Bitter & Sweet Mod
 
Join Date: May 2001
Location: Gotham city, Canada
Posts: 1,893
Quote:
Originally Posted by moro loci
this is my fan fic of the teen titans, they meet my very own super hero, Wolf. But i am not giving anything away, you'll have to read it for yourself.

If you would like to see my fan fic. Please go to www.dontneedreality.com, any feedback wold be appreciated!
Hey hun, would you do me a favor and post your fanfic story in this thread so we can read it? If you want to advertise your fanfic pleas add your url in your sugnature. It's just a rule we go by =)
__________________
A lady with a cool CATtitude

~KW~
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 09-20-2004, 01:48 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
Sorry I didn't realize, here it is. You'll have to excuse me i'm a little new to this and don't know what to do.


Prologue
Wolf was a girl of average build; she wore a cropped white top, which allowed her stomach to pop in to view, black trousers, black trainers with silver caps and soles and a long black coat that would flap in the breeze. This made her more intimidating. She had long blonde hair that would flutter in the slightest of breezes. She had a long strand of hair that would cover half of her face. This made it seem like she only had one eye. But appearances can be deceiving; the eye that you could see was brown, a deep brown that was the window to her soul. The other eye was an electric blue, it wasn't as deep as the other eye it was cold and showed no emotion. This eye was a window never the less, but not in to Wolf's soul, but the souls of others. When she made eye contact with another person she could see in to the depths of their soul, she could see what was, is and will be of that person.

Wolf had received her powers from her parents her farther, silvermane, was a werewolf. He was the most feared and adored werewolf in the world. He was the stern leader of the Lycanthrope clan. Her mother Aramatha was a vampire. Her parents were the immortals responsible for bridging the gap between the werewolves and the vampires. The two tribes were enemies for centuries, but with the union of the two and the birth of Wolf and her brother Max the two tribes were brought together. Wolf had received her powers from her parents. From her mother she had the power of flight and the ability to navigate the shadows. From her father she received the power of super human strength and the ability to turn in to a wolf. From both of her parents she received immortality, this meant that no matter how much she was beaten she would survive, and it didn't take that long for her to heal either.

Though Wolf was the descendant of a werewolf she wasn't able to change into a full werewolf, as she was half vampire. The vampiric essence in her blood prevented her from changing fully. So she changed in to a normal wolf. It was the most beautiful wolf that you could have ever seen, it was white with grey markings, there was a grey marking g across her face that would make her look like she was wearing a mask. Then on Wolfs back there was a big grey diamond shape, it spanned from her head to her tail, and the corners would link across her middle. There was one other marking on this wolf, to make her utterly unmistakable, this was a huge black slash across her hind right leg. It was nothing special, no particular shape. It was a scar from a previous encounter with her brother.



Chapter 1

Wolf was a simple girl, she never stayed in a place for too long. She tracked her brother Lycan from place to place, making sure that he never harmed anyone, if he did she would be waiting. Tonight proved itself to be eventful.

It seemed to be a normal night, the full moon was high in the sky and Wolf was tracking Lycan. What she didn't expect were the super heroes that would turn up. Lycan started some trouble on the west side of a town. She never bothered learning the names of towns as she had been to so many. She was quick to react. She flew in to the middle of the fight, pulled out her two samurai swords and looked for where Lycan was hiding. She went down an alley way, which is never a good idea, and she realized that she had stepped into his trap. He slipped down beside her and punched her in the ribs. The sheer force of the blow was bone shattering, and it threw her into a wall. Then as she tried to get up, the wall around her cracked and collapsed burying her in the rubble. She was down and in great pain.

Then just outside the alleyway she heard a boy, calling. "TEEN TITANS GO!" She heard the boy shouting. This roused her out of her pain-filled stupor, no, she thought, I can't let anyone else fight him, they wouldn't stand a chance! I must go help them! With that she hauled herself out of the rubble, picked up her swords and flew out to help. What she saw when she got out of that alley way was devastating. There were four scattered bodies and one boy in a mask, which just covered his eyes, and a ripped red, black, green and yellow uniform. He was cowering in pain infront of Lycan. "You won't win, I'll die before you beat me!" exclaimed the boy as he staggered to his feet.

Lycan lifted his taloned hand and started to bring it down on the boy. This spurred Wolf in to action, she lunged forward and pushed the boy out of the way, taking the hit from Lycan. Remembering that the swords were still in her hands, she took them and thrust them in to his shoulders. There was a noise like bacon into a hot pan of oil and there was a howl of pain as she pulled them out. "Silver blades!" Wolf smirked. With that Lycan bounded off. She went to follow but collapsed realizing the damage that the beast had done. There were five long, deep cuts from the top of her chest to the base of her stomach. She had lost a lot of blood. The boy whom she had saved came in to focus, along with four others. Wolf could make them out to be two girls and two boys standing along side the young masked boy. Then everything went dark.

They picked her up, careful not to do any more damage and took her to Titans Tower. This was the base of the Teen Titans, a safe place for Wolf to rest and heal.



Chapter 2

When Wolf came to, she had no idea where she was, she was in a bed and she was in no pain at all. Have I healed already? She thought to herself, how long have I been out for? She heard footsteps, and then the door opened to show a boy, he was small and green. Then some thing clicked in Wolf's head and she transformed in to her wolf form. "That's easy to do." Remarked the little green boy and with a snap of his fingers he was a big green wolf. Wolf growled at the strange animal and ran out of the door that he had just entered.

She bolted out of the door and ran down a short corridor. On reaching the end she stopped, her heart was beating in her ears from panic. Then, when she got her bearings she stared at what was infront of her. It seemed to be a command centre, but there were no grownups barking orders, there were just four teenagers watching TV. Two girls and two boys.

One of the girls was tall, she had deep red hair, green eyes and was wearing a purple cropped top with a silver metal collar, which had a black jewel in the centre. She had a purple skirt with a silver belt, purple boots that went three quarters of the way up her legs and finished a few centimeters below her skirt. She also had amour on her arms, they were silver, and they started at the elbows and finished at the knuckles. They too had black jewels in them.

The other girl was an average height, slim and wore a blue cloak with a hood, and what looked like a black swimsuit with sleeves, across her middle she wore a belt made out of little circles, with little red circles within the circles. Next to this girl there was a black boy, he was much bigger than the others. His face was half man half robot, and the eye on the robot side of his face was red. It shone and glinted in the light. His body was all robot.

But there was one person there that she recognized. It was a smaller boy around four feet high and was wearing a mask that covered only his eyes. He was wearing the same uniform as he was the last time Wolf saw him, only this time it wasn't ripped. There was something else, there was a logo on the left side of his chest. It was a black circle, and within this circle there was the letter "R" in yellow. His hair was long, black and was styled, so it was spiky.

Then Wolf heard footsteps behind her, it was that little green boy again. "Looks like our patient's feeling better" he remarked grinning. The four watching TV turned to stare at her. Immediately Wolf backed away until her hind quarters hit the wall. The hair on the back of her neck stood on end and her teeth were bared. The five watchers knew that she was scared, and the little green boy backed away. At the same time the masked boy stepped forward and sat next to Wolf on the floor, he then signaled the others to go and tend to other things. "You don't have to be scared of us" he said, "We're on the same side." Feeling reassured, Wolf turned back into her human form. "Who are you?" Wolf asked, there was something about these people, they didn't seem to be the normal type of person. Something in her head screamed out to her, this ain't normal. "I'm Robin, I am the leader of the Teen Titans," said the masked boy, swelling with pride, "The tall girl that is overly happy is Starfire, the girl in the cloak is Raven. The tall robot boy is Cyborg and the little green dude who turns in to animals is Beast Boy. Who are you?" "My name is Wolf," She smiled, for once she had friends, she hadn't had the time in any other place, but now she had friends and a place to stay. "How long was I out for?" She asked Robin. "You've been out for around two or three days, we've been taking it in turns to look after you." He said "DAM GIRL! You heal fast!" Screeched Cyborg. This little outburst made Wolf laugh.Then she felt something strange. It wasn't her wounds as she had healed. It was some thing else.

She closed her eyes and sat still. There in her mind she saw him, the unmistakable shadow of her brother. He was in an alleyway awaiting an innocent civilian in the shadows. Wolf knew what would happen, she had to go. "Where are my things Robin? I need to get somewhere quick, before it's too late!" Wolf could hear the screaming of a child in her head, she had to move, she had to save the poor child. "Why what's the problem? Can we help?" Robin was looking all intense now and ready for battle. Starfire gave Wolf her coat, she put it on and checked that she had all her weapons. (Her retractable bow staff attached to the inside of her coat, her two samurai swords in the lining and the knife she always had in her trainer for emergencies) "The only way you can help me is to stay out of the way, the last thing I need is my friends getting in to a fight with a werewolf. I'll be back soon." Wolf was sure that she had made her point clear, but who's to keep the Teen Titans out of a good fight?



Chapter 3

It was a clear, cold night, the stars were shining, Wolf walked down an empty street, and it was quiet, a little too quiet. Little did Wolf know that she was being watched, not by Lycan, but someone else. Wolf looked down every alleyway that she could, swords at the ready. There was nothing, not even a cat scuttling around the neighborhood. Something was very wrong here.

That's when it happened, she turned to go back to the tower and put her swords away, when she saw him standing there with a girl clasped in his hands. IT WAS STARFIRE! Wolf acted on impulse, she drew her swords and stood her ground. "Put her down and back away Lycan, it's me you want." Wolf stood there wanting to strike the beast down, but she couldn't, not whilst he had Starfire in his claws. "Come now baby sister, what is all this hostility? I don't see you treating mum and dad like this." Growled the werewolf, a smile appearing across his snout. "That's because you killed them!" Wolf started to cry at the thought of her parents' death. She couldn't bare it.

That was when he struck. Wolf realized that her swords were pointing down and that she had completely dropped her guard. Lycan had dropped Starfire, she lay dazed on the ground. Wolf lunged at the huge ball of fur that was flying at her, she picked up her blade and slashed it at the werewolf's face. At the same time Lycan brought his claws down on her thigh, there was a scream of pain from Wolf as she hit the ground clutching her leg, and dropped her swords. Wolf drew the knife from her trainer and threw it so that it landed square between Lycan's shoulder blades. That should keep him busy she thought as she dragged herself towards Starfire.

She shook her awake. "You have to go and get the others, fly as fast as you can, I'll keep him here. GO!" She shouted, all rational thinking had left Wolf, she was really angry now. As Star flew off Lycan got up. "Let's rumble!" Lycan roared, throwing himself towards Wolf. Wolf changed into her wolf form. She dodged Lycan's first attack, but was caught off guard on the second. Lycan's arm swung across and hit her in the chest, throwing her ten feet, across to the other side of the street. She stood up feeling like her ribs had been shattered, it was time for her to make her move.

She tore towards her brother, he had turned his back on her from the force of his swing. She growled, so that he would turn to face her, then she launched herself at him. Wolf was on target, she locked her jaws around Lycan's throat, she kept a tight grip as Lycan was bucking like a manic bronco. A few minutes passed Wolf had been tossed and thrown around but still had a tight grip around her brothers' neck, and then he collapsed.

Wolf had not fared well in this fight. Her body was bruised and battered, she was sure that she had broken a few ribs, she had also lost blood from the deep slash in her leg. I guess I'll have to get rid of the body, she thought to herself. Wolf limped towards the huge body and picked up Lycans arm, that's when it happened, Lycan swept Wolfs legs away from beneath her and Wolf hit the ground like a stone. "Ow!" Wolf yelled "That's only the beginning, you're gonna pay for doin that!" Snorted Lycan. Wolf could see he was really mad at her without her magic eye. Lycan jumped on wolf. His snout was only a couple of centimeters away from her face, and his weight was unbearable. Wolf was on the floor and she could feel her arms creaking under the weight of him.



Chapter 4

Lycan had Wolf pinned to the floor. She couldn't move her arms and she could feel Lycans breath on her face. "God! Did something crawl into your mouth and die?" Wolf smirked. That got Lycan really mad. Wolf looked desperately for a way out, and she spotted one. Her swords were only five feet away from her open hand. All she needed was to get this slobbery maniac off her. "Aghhh!" Wolf yelped, Lycan had dug his claws into her shoulders. She was now totally pinned to the ground and she couldn't move at all. Lycan's mouth opened, thirty yellow teeth greeted her, the smell was horrible there were bits of dead animals stuck between them. He brought his head down at an alarming speed…………………

Wolf watched the glinting teeth coming down at her face with such force. Wolf moved her head. She opened her eyes to see that Lycans snout had got stuck into the ground beside her head. "TEEN TITANS GO!" Robin roared. Wolf then whispered in to Lycans ear "The cavalries here, big brother, I hope you can handle all six of us!" After that Cyborg came and slammed himself into Lycan, throwing the werewolf across to the other side of the street and into a wall, which collapsed on him. Robin and Starfire helped Wolf to her feet. "What took you?" Wolf groaned "Not that you're complaining!" Grunted Beast Boy sarcastically. "I've never complained in my life! Besides I had it all under……" "That's enough you two, we have other problems!" Robin barked. At that very moment Lycan erupted out of the rubble in a fury. There was fire in his eyes, a burning hatred that Wolf could feel burning into her. She picked up her swords and started to charge. The Teen Titans followed suit yelling battle cries for what seemed an eternity.

She stood fast and waited for her brother to make his move, good things come to those who wait, apparently. It came, Lycan charged at her. Wolf had to rely on her wits, she flew to one side and swung her sword, catching Lycan in the back. He howled in pain. He turned and charged again. Wolf stuck to the same strategy and caught him across the back with her sword, with her other hand she seized the knife that was in the werewolf's back and jammed it into her coat.

Lycan charged a third time. Wolf didn't attempt to move and Lycan slammed into her chest, winding her. He then dragged her and threw Wolf into a wall with back cracking force. Wolf paused for a minute, making Lycan think that he has won. She sneaked her hand into her coat and grabbed her knife. Lycan stepped back and start at the small cringing girl stood infront of her. That was her moment. She threw the knife into Lycans chest. He yelped loudly and looked at the hilt of the knife sticking out of his chest and pulled it out. "I'll give you this one, but I'll get you next time dear, sweet sister……… And then……….. you will have no friends to help you." Snarled Lycan. He then pivoted on his hind quarters and ran into the shadows.

Wolf sank down the wall and lay on the ground. "Wolf," whispered Robin, as he sat down next to him, "Are you ok?" "I think I'm gonna pass out but other than that I'm fine." She smiled and with that the world went dark.



Chapter 5

"How are you feeling friend?" asked Star as Wolf came back to the land of the living. All the Teen Titans were sat at her bedside smiling. "Like I was hit by lightning after the truck came. What about you guys?" Wolf smiled looking at all of her friends. "We're good, but that was a serious fight," said Robin sliding out of the shadows with a glad smile on his face. Then he got all serious again "Do you think that the monsters dead?" "Not by a long shot. I didn't strike him right." Wolf sat up and got her coat. As she put it on she cringed, her ribs hadn't healed yet. "I've gotta go track him, there's no way he can stay out of trouble. So I've got my work cut out for me." Wolf joked. "But what if he kills you?" asked Beast Boy "No one can kill her yet BB, she's an immortal!" yelled Cyborg as he clipped Beast Boy round the ear. "That's true, no one can take a beating like me!" Wolf laughed. "Well at least stay in touch." Robin added "How? I haven't got a mobile or anything!" asked Wolf "Stay in touch with this." And he handed Wolf a Teen Titans communicator. "Wow, really? This is mine?" Wolf was struck with so much happiness she thought that she would explode "No ones ever given me anything like this before. I had better go before I start crying." And so Wolf walked cringing towards the door.

She was alone again. On her way to stopping her brother for good. And when that day came no more innocents would suffer and she would be free to do what she wanted like any other child.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 09-20-2004, 05:41 PM
Crowgirl's Avatar
Crowgirl Crowgirl is offline
A bouquet of forget-me-nots...
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Um... Why do you care?
Posts: 1,442
Send a message via AIM to Crowgirl
Woah.

I am really impressed. That was really good for a first time writing a story here like me. You've already got your own character, who is super cool. Oh yeah. I think I detected some emotion between Wolf and someone else there. For I quote 'It was not her healed wounds, It was something else.' or something like that.

KEEP WRITING OR ELSE(or is that the end? (better not be!))
__________________
Guy 1: Hello?
Guy 2: Greetings, this is an anonymous message... from Ernest...

Fics:
III: Teen Titans: Evaporation Is over! Go look at the end!!
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 09-21-2004, 02:18 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
thanks alot. i didn't think thatanyone would like it. i'll try and write another soon. It might be another teen titans one but im not sure. It might be a little darker this time. (Blushes and thinks"wow, i have a fan!")
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 09-21-2004, 02:58 PM
rrarbecy's Avatar
rrarbecy rrarbecy is offline
I'm Back!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: WFWC
Posts: 1,461
Send a message via AIM to rrarbecy
You've got two fans, that was great. Write a sequel for me, okay. And read my fic: All for Nothing.
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:00 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
Hey thanks. I'll do my best and read yours as soon as possible.
__________________
"You Made a ******* Vampire pomeranian?"- Hannibal King, Blade Trinity. -> ROCK ON!

"I'm the type to sit in the dark corner and drink blood." -> Angel

Super Robot MonkeyTeam HyperForce Go!Codename: Kids next door --- If you're not in, you're old.

SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!
www.dontneedreality.com
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:03 PM
oneeyemonkeypie's Avatar
oneeyemonkeypie oneeyemonkeypie is offline
D_S needs a hobby...
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Playing GTA San Andreas
Posts: 373
i think it was good, you have quite a little fan base.

dont make the same mistake i did-do not break up the starfire/robin bond. It seems I struck a nerve with some of the more...rabid fans. XD
__________________
Christmas is awesome!
Read this. Trust me, it's teh shiznite!
http://www.forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=121380
Yatsunori Mitsuda is a freaking musical genius!
Check him out here
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:12 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
i'm sorry if this has offended any readers, i didn't mean to do that. nothing will ever happen between wolf and robin. you have my word and my word is my bond.
__________________
"You Made a ******* Vampire pomeranian?"- Hannibal King, Blade Trinity. -> ROCK ON!

"I'm the type to sit in the dark corner and drink blood." -> Angel

Super Robot MonkeyTeam HyperForce Go!Codename: Kids next door --- If you're not in, you're old.

SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!
www.dontneedreality.com
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:14 PM
rrarbecy's Avatar
rrarbecy rrarbecy is offline
I'm Back!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: WFWC
Posts: 1,461
Send a message via AIM to rrarbecy
AHA!!!!!!!!!! He admits it was a mistake! AHA!!!!!!!!
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:16 PM
rrarbecy's Avatar
rrarbecy rrarbecy is offline
I'm Back!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: WFWC
Posts: 1,461
Send a message via AIM to rrarbecy
Quote:
Originally Posted by oneeyemonkeypie
dont make the same mistake i did-do not break up the starfire/robin bond. It seems I struck a nerve with some of the more...rabid fans. XD
AHA!!!!!!!!! He admits it was a mistake! AHA!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sorry about this, I forgot to quote my last post.
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:20 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
so he made a mistake. I say thanks for the advise oneeyemonkeypie!
__________________
"You Made a ******* Vampire pomeranian?"- Hannibal King, Blade Trinity. -> ROCK ON!

"I'm the type to sit in the dark corner and drink blood." -> Angel

Super Robot MonkeyTeam HyperForce Go!Codename: Kids next door --- If you're not in, you're old.

SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!
www.dontneedreality.com
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:23 PM
rrarbecy's Avatar
rrarbecy rrarbecy is offline
I'm Back!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: WFWC
Posts: 1,461
Send a message via AIM to rrarbecy
sorry. got carried away. (ashamed face)
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 09-21-2004, 03:39 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
you see we can all just get along in this world. Its sooo beautiful dude. i read ur fanfic and i think that it was really good, so far.
__________________
"You Made a ******* Vampire pomeranian?"- Hannibal King, Blade Trinity. -> ROCK ON!

"I'm the type to sit in the dark corner and drink blood." -> Angel

Super Robot MonkeyTeam HyperForce Go!Codename: Kids next door --- If you're not in, you're old.

SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!
www.dontneedreality.com
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 09-21-2004, 04:13 PM
oneeyemonkeypie's Avatar
oneeyemonkeypie oneeyemonkeypie is offline
D_S needs a hobby...
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Playing GTA San Andreas
Posts: 373
well, thank you.

no, i DON'T think that making knives and starfire involved was a mistake, i think posting it here was, as there is a certain level of animosity about that facet. I'm positive that had i replaced the word knives with robin in my story, i would have hundreds more views. people are still nice about it, but it seems to upset them.

*sighs*...oh well. I like it anyways. Sometimes you just gotta go against the flow. (and thanks for the kudos moro loci. do you actually like it, or are you saying that)

seems like any other character pairing is ok to mess with except that one.
hmm...
__________________
Christmas is awesome!
Read this. Trust me, it's teh shiznite!
http://www.forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=121380
Yatsunori Mitsuda is a freaking musical genius!
Check him out here
Reply With Quote
  #16  
Old 09-21-2004, 07:46 PM
starburn1116 starburn1116 is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: in my own little world
Posts: 155
yes! you are exactly right!
the robin\starfire pairing is mandatory(unless of course you don't do a robin\starfire pairing)
all other relationships can be twisted within an inch of their life but that one is sacred
if you mess with the robin\starfire pairing the R S Shippers of this site will hunt down you fic and fill it with words of anger, disapointment, and shamless begging
that is pretty much what oneeyemonkeypie's fic is like

oh. i'm rambling aren't i?
well i wanted to get my point across

(ps i'm only kidding you know we love your fic oneeyemonkeypie)
Reply With Quote
  #17  
Old 09-21-2004, 08:48 PM
oneeyemonkeypie's Avatar
oneeyemonkeypie oneeyemonkeypie is offline
D_S needs a hobby...
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Playing GTA San Andreas
Posts: 373
ya. the funny thing is-the people that give it the most attention and feedback, dont agree with me.

Weeeee! XD

but i digress-moro loci, i know you ain't done yet, right?
__________________
Christmas is awesome!
Read this. Trust me, it's teh shiznite!
http://www.forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=121380
Yatsunori Mitsuda is a freaking musical genius!
Check him out here
Reply With Quote
  #18  
Old 09-22-2004, 07:12 PM
starburn1116 starburn1116 is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: in my own little world
Posts: 155
Quote:
Originally Posted by oneeyemonkeypie
I'm positive that had i replaced the word knives with robin in my story, i would have hundreds more views.
actually I think that you would get more veiws if you changed the title(but tell all the current veiwers though)
i didn't even read it for a while because i didn't know there was an actual story on it.

i just realized that I never commented on the wonderful story on this thread

IT IS GREAT!!!!!
post the sequel soon
Reply With Quote
  #19  
Old 09-23-2004, 02:27 PM
moro loci's Avatar
moro loci moro loci is offline
SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!!!
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: England
Posts: 152
well to be honest when i first wrote this story i thought that no one would like it. But i have wieghed up my options, and i think that i will start a new one. Well i have started to write it, but it will take a few days. So i hope that you can be patient. It is starting to look promising if i say so myself.


P.S. Thankx for the wicked advise dudes i'll not tamper with relationships and i will learn to control my characters flirtatious tandancies!
__________________
"You Made a ******* Vampire pomeranian?"- Hannibal King, Blade Trinity. -> ROCK ON!

"I'm the type to sit in the dark corner and drink blood." -> Angel

Super Robot MonkeyTeam HyperForce Go!Codename: Kids next door --- If you're not in, you're old.

SHEPHERDS PIE!!!!!!!
www.dontneedreality.com

Last edited by moro loci; 09-23-2004 at 02:53 PM.
Reply With Quote
  #20  
Old 09-23-2004, 02:56 PM
oneeyemonkeypie's Avatar
oneeyemonkeypie oneeyemonkeypie is offline
D_S needs a hobby...
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Playing GTA San Andreas
Posts: 373
well, I say screw em.

if wolf want's robin, that's her perogative. I'll support your fic no matter what. we gotta stick together!
__________________
Christmas is awesome!
Read this. Trust me, it's teh shiznite!
http://www.forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?t=121380
Yatsunori Mitsuda is a freaking musical genius!
Check him out here
Reply With Quote
Reply


Bookmarks

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 05:58 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
This is an unofficial site. All characters and related indicia are © and TM of their respective owners.
Original content © 2009 Toon Zone LLC.