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Old 11-13-2009, 03:14 PM
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Episode Comments: The Blue Team off to a good start! Can they keep it up?

Blue Team
Slukis - Palm Explosion :: Hidden Weapon - Palm Merge --- BHM - Sniper Rifle :: Hidden Weapon - Poison Secretion
Air - Gatling Gun :: Hidden Weapon - Homing Gatling --- KAZAK - Ninja Tools :: Hidden Weapon - Ninja Blade
Katana - Agility :: Hidden Weapon - Mach Kick --- Brian - Psychic Power :: Hidden Weapon - Psychic Blast
Kobaul - Powerful Gun :: Hidden Weapon - Kill Shot --- Mega - Earth Modification :: Hidden Weapon – Burial
Fifa - Plasma Gun :: Hidden Weapon - Plasma Cannon --- Shop Head - Manipulation :: Hidden Weapon - Body Switch
Crimson - Ice :: Hidden Weapon: Ice Beam --- Karichi - Wings :: Hidden Weapon - Feather Blast
Heroic Yoshimitsu - Telekinesis :: Hidden Weapon - Teleport --- Rodri - Guitar :: Hidden Weapon - Encore
Finalbowser - Fire/Hammers :: Hidden Weapon - Chain --- Person - Invisibility :: Hidden Weapon - Blinding Light
Soda - Missile Parts :: Hidden Weapon - Missile Launcher
Hockeydude - Vines :: Hidden Weapon - Vine Shield
Agasonex - Portals :: Hidden Weapon - Reversal --- NeoSamus - Spikes :: Hidden Weapon - Giant Spike

Red Team
Xtream - Gum :: Hidden Weapon - Mind Erase --- Ginger - Copy Power :: Hidden Weapon - Mind Read
Tippem
GPL - Fly :: Hidden Weapon - Human Drill
Daft - Create Bullet :: Hidden Weapon - M60 Machine Gun
Tenko - Super Strength :: Hidden Weapon - Beast
Rogue - Spear :: Hidden Weapon - Spear Barrage --- Ultima - Mines
Stealth Shadow - Metal Pole :: Hidden Weapon - Stealth Robot --- Clo Poud - Capsules :: Hidden Weapon - Capsule Dragon
Final Flash - Energy Blast :: Hidden Weapon - Flash Explosion --- MI4 - Magic :: Hidden Weapon - Fusion Ogre --- Emennius - Magic :: Hidden Weapon - Fusion Ogre
Iykkari - Swords :: Final Judgment - Vortex Rush
Ritti - Electric Spikes :: Final Judgment - Electric Pillar
Tartite - Gas :: Final Judgment - Gas Prison
Fedetra - Draining Arm :: Final Judgment - Reaper's Touch
Skevipaar - Arrows :: Final Judgment - Heaven's Ray


Episode 49 Preview (Chapters 97 and 98)

BHM: Man Xtream, where do you get all this gum from?

Xtream: I love gum. I always carry a few packs around with me.

Slukis: It must be nice to always have minty fresh breath.

Ginger: But I keep telling him, all that gum is not good for you!

Xtream: Now, dear, if all my gum chewing results in us winning, wouldn't that be fine for you?

Ginger: Well...I do like winning...but your health is important too!
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Old 11-20-2009, 04:47 PM
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Episode 49: A Fatal Mistake! The Battle Transforms

Chapter 97:Doubt

While BHM fought to break through Xtream’s gum dome, Ginger and Slukis engaged each other underground. While they were merged with the earth, they realized that they could send their charges underneath the ground at each other. This led to several small explosions occurring below the surface.

Once BHM had broken through the dome, Ginger resurfaced. She fell to her knees, breathing heavily. “I can’t stop fighting now. He’ll have to re-surface too eventually. That’s when I’ll get him.” She then wondered how her partner, Xtream was doing. She was shocked to see BHM just a few feet away from him. When Xtream saw BHM charging at him, he quickly blew another bubble from his mouth. This bubble he blew was holding BHM back for now.

“I’m so close.” BHM thought as he gathered up all his strength to push himself forward. The poison continued to run off of his body and onto the gum, weakening it. However, Xtream continued to blow into the bubble, building back up its strength.

The two were in a stalemate, and Ginger didn’t know what to do. While she kept an eye out for Slukis, she thought, “Xtream’s in trouble. I have to go help him out. If BHM gets through that gum and touches him, it’s over.” She then ran towards her partner and his opponent. “I can’t use a charge from this distance. Xtream would get caught in the blast.”

BHM, still struggling to push forward, caught Ginger running towards them corner of his eye. “She’s coming here? What happened to Slukis, don’t tell me he…” BHM was unable to finish his thought, as Xtream suddenly used a burst of energy to blow hard into the bubble and cause it to burst, sending BHM flying back.

“Awesome job!” Ginger exclaimed, and Xtream turned in her direction, surprised.

“What are you doing here? Get back to Slukis!” Xtream yelled. Right after he spoke that, a large explosion occurred underneath her. She had gotten close enough to her partner so that Xtream was also caught in the blast. The two were blown away from each other and hit the ground hard.

Slukis emerged from the ground close to Xtream and almost fell over from how exhausted he was. He held his right arm and walked over to Xtream’s body. His partner, BHM, was still lying on the earth. After using so much of his energy, he could hardly move his body. He barely tilted his head up enough to see Slukis walking towards their opponent. “Alright, we got them.” He then stopped as he realized that something was missing.

Xtream was also too drained of energy to move his body. He could feel the presence of his opponent above him, but could do nothing to stop him.

Ginger tried to recover from where she was, but the blast had done serious damage to her. “Xtream…” She thought.

She then focused her thoughts on him and heard Xtream thinking. “Why? Why? Why did you doubt me…Ginger? I had him just where I wanted. I told you…to make sure not to take your eyes of Slukis.”

Ginger spoke to herself, “I know, but I thought you were in trouble. He looked like he was going to get through your gum. I was only doing what I thought was best for the team.”

Xtream continued to think, “When we split up, I knew that Slukis would go after you and BHM would go after me, because his poison would have no effect on you. Once we split up, I first needed to take BHM’s long-range weapon out of play, so he would approach me. When he did that, I would use my gum to hold him off.”

“I get that.” Ginger spoke aloud, even though no one could hear her. “But you knew what would happen if his poison touched you. I had to try and save you!”

“When he charged into the gum, it was exactly what I wanted.” Xtream continued to think. “I had no intention of beating him the old-fashioned way. No, I used the gum…to search his body.”

“To search his body?” Ginger repeated in confusion. “For what?” Her eyes then opened wide as she realized what he meant.

Slukis searched for Xtream’s Red Orb on his body. He saw a red glimmer and pulled out a Red Orb from his opponent’s clothing.

However, to his surprise, stuck to Xtream’s Red Orb with gum was a Blue Orb. The Blue Orb of his partner, BHM.

*Chapter End*



Chapter 98:All Alone

“His Orb!” Ginger exclaimed. BHM had also realized that his Blue Orb was now gone. Slukis looked down in shock as he held the two Orbs; a Red Orb from his opponent, Xtream, and a Blue Orb from his partner, BHM.

“That’s right, I took his Orb.” Xtream spoke to Slukis. Ginger could also hear him transmitting the same thoughts. “While he tried to break through the gum, I used it to search his body for the Orb. Once I found it, I forced him back using my remaining strength.”

He then became too weak to speak, but Ginger could still hear his thoughts. “While you kept off Slukis, I was going to rest, and then help you out. But you…didn’t trust in me. Even after you said you would, you still doubted my abilities.”

“I’m sorry!” Ginger exclaimed, tears in her eyes. “I didn’t know! You should’ve told me!”

“Now…it’s all up to you. You’re going to be all alone against Slukis.” Xtream thought.

“No! No!” She pounded her fists on the earth and buried her face into the ground. “I can’t do this by myself. I need you to help me!”

Xtream continued, “I hope you’ve learned by now…how to fight on your own. I’ve done all I can to help. The rest is up to you. Farewell, dear.” Slukis then watched as Xtream’s body disappeared back to the Safe Zone.

He then heard a voice calling out, “Slukis! Slukis!” Slukis recognized the voice to be his partner, BHM.

He hurried over to him and asked, “BHM, are you alright?”

“No.” BHM replied, “I’ve used up all my poison. I’m done, man.”

“Damn…” Slukis swore, “You fought well though.”

“Thanks, too bad the bastard used his gum to take my Orb. I really thought I had him.” BHM responded.

“Don’t worry about it. I’ll be sure to beat Ginger and win this for our team.” Slukis assured him.

Alright man.” BHM barely managed to speak. He then slowly lifted his arm up and extended his hand. Slukis gripped his hand, and BHM finished, “Take care.” He then disappeared, and Slukis’s fist closed up.

He gripped his fist tightly, fighting back his tears. “No Slukis, you have to be strong. All I have to do now is beat that girl and I’ve won.” He then turned around to see Ginger back on her feet as well. He started to walk towards her.

Ginger was still lost in thought, “All this time…I’ve depended on Xtream’s strategies. Now he’s gone, and it’s all my fault. I’m sorry Xtream. I’m so sorry.”

She then focused her thoughts on Slukis, and heard him thinking, “This is it. All I have to do is beat her and I can finally get my revenge on that castle guardian. I’m going to win this for my team. Nothing is going to stop me!”

Ginger then wiped the tears away from her eyes. “He’s determined to beat me.” She could feel her fighting spirit building up inside her, “But I won’t let him. Xtream’s right. I have to learn to do this on my own. I can still win this.” She then turned around to face Slukis, and started to walk towards him.

The two sides met in the center of the battlefield and looked each other straight in the eyes. Both of them had fought a war, and their bodies had been pushed to the limit. Still, neither one was going to back down now. They didn’t know, but they were the only remaining competitors in the competition besides Tippem. Everything came down to this fight.

“I…” Slukis started.

“I…” Ginger followed.

Both of them finished simultaneously, “Won’t lose!”

*Chapter End*
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Episode Comments: Down to the final two!

Blue Team
Slukis - Palm Explosion :: Hidden Weapon - Palm Merge --- BHM - Sniper Rifle :: Hidden Weapon - Poison Secretion
Air - Gatling Gun :: Hidden Weapon - Homing Gatling --- KAZAK - Ninja Tools :: Hidden Weapon - Ninja Blade
Katana - Agility :: Hidden Weapon - Mach Kick --- Brian - Psychic Power :: Hidden Weapon - Psychic Blast
Kobaul - Powerful Gun :: Hidden Weapon - Kill Shot --- Mega - Earth Modification :: Hidden Weapon – Burial
Fifa - Plasma Gun :: Hidden Weapon - Plasma Cannon --- Shop Head - Manipulation :: Hidden Weapon - Body Switch
Crimson - Ice :: Hidden Weapon: Ice Beam --- Karichi - Wings :: Hidden Weapon - Feather Blast
Heroic Yoshimitsu - Telekinesis :: Hidden Weapon - Teleport --- Rodri - Guitar :: Hidden Weapon - Encore
Finalbowser - Fire/Hammers :: Hidden Weapon - Chain --- Person - Invisibility :: Hidden Weapon - Blinding Light
Soda - Missile Parts :: Hidden Weapon - Missile Launcher
Hockeydude - Vines :: Hidden Weapon - Vine Shield
Agasonex - Portals :: Hidden Weapon - Reversal --- NeoSamus - Spikes :: Hidden Weapon - Giant Spike

Red Team
Xtream - Gum :: Hidden Weapon - Mind Erase --- Ginger - Copy Power :: Hidden Weapon - Mind Read
Tippem
GPL - Fly :: Hidden Weapon - Human Drill
Daft - Create Bullet :: Hidden Weapon - M60 Machine Gun
Tenko - Super Strength :: Hidden Weapon - Beast
Rogue - Spear :: Hidden Weapon - Spear Barrage --- Ultima - Mines
Stealth Shadow - Metal Pole :: Hidden Weapon - Stealth Robot --- Clo Poud - Capsules :: Hidden Weapon - Capsule Dragon
Final Flash - Energy Blast :: Hidden Weapon - Flash Explosion --- MI4 - Magic :: Hidden Weapon - Fusion Ogre --- Emennius - Magic :: Hidden Weapon - Fusion Ogre
Iykkari - Swords :: Final Judgment - Vortex Rush
Ritti - Electric Spikes :: Final Judgment - Electric Pillar
Tartite - Gas :: Final Judgment - Gas Prison
Fedetra - Draining Arm :: Final Judgment - Reaper's Touch
Skevipaar - Arrows :: Final Judgment - Heaven's Ray


Episode 50 Preview (Chapters 99 and 100)

Shadow: So it's down to the final two participants.

Moltar: I'm putting 20 on Slukis!

Dama: Then I will put 20 on Ginger.

Moltar: Then I'll raise-

Ginger: What are you guys doing?

Slukis: Do they think this is some kind of horse race?
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