Can someone read my stuff and....

[GL2k2]

tell me if I should pursue some form of writing literature or hang up the pencil and make paper airplanes?

I'd greatly appreciate the critique, and please don't pull punches.

http://www.scifinoir.com/gallery/ballnchain.html

http://www.scifinoir.com/gallery/storm.html

http://www.talesfromthehood.net/thump.htm

http://www.talesfromthehood.net/runandhide.htm


Also if you like you can take my poll. I'm not voting of course.