THE GAME...begins?

[The Guard]

I've been approached about making my screenplay, THE GAME, into an independant film. I'm also planning to enter it into several screenwriting contests. What I need now is lots of criticism. I need people to read THE GAME and tell me what works, what doesn't, what characters could be fleshed out more...what plot points aren't clear. In short...beat it with a stick. It's long, but it's a fairly quick read (average time of about an hour and a half so far). If people are willing to read and respond, I'd appreciate it. The link is below, in my signature. THE GAME is rated R for sexual situations and lots of cussing.

[Chris Sanders MSX]

I've reda it and I told ya this would be THE PERFECT Indie Movie your sure to get tons of awards and exposure. Who approached you about it ?

[The Guard]

Tis a secret.

:)

[Chris Sanders MSX]

Heh..I'm sitting here reading it again, I'm not big on reading screen plays but this is really freak'n good. Man oh man I'd love to do some production work on this. My mind is racing..back to the story.

[ZorBrak]

I'm planning to get into screen writing myself, I had one of my ideas in the later planning stages and I had picked the main location for filming which was this enourmous feild behind my house. The next time I got back there it'd been fenced off oO ahh that's life :p

[MisfitMan]

Hey Guard, I'd get that mutha copyrighted SOON...Like, the next possible work day. HOPEFULLY, you'll find a job for me OTHER than editor...:)