Falling in love is just that-falling

[The Guard]

Since this is where these topics are most of the time, I'm posting this here. One day this will be a novel. For now, it's a Chapter by Chapter story. (Rated R for language and teenage angst)

Here is a link to my "novel" at Fanfiction.net. There are two chapters right now. So when you're done with Chapter 1, just click on Chapter 2 at the bottom right. Chapter 3 should be up by ten or so.

If you know where this is going, PLEASE don't tell anyone. And now...without further APU...

THE GAME (http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=777265)

(No, not the poster. You'll see.)

[Chris Sanders MSX]

Further APU ?

Nice book BTW I'm working on one of my own. WAY too graphic
and sophmoric for this place. PM me sometime and i'll send you a Chapter or two.

[The Guard]

It gets better. Much better.

I haven't gotten into the good stuff. :) It's not a book, per se, but the basic idea for one, turned into a series of stories.

[Dark Spider]

I started working on some writings of my own. They aren't romantic though, mostly action stuff, but they do have some relationships in them. I did about 7 unfinished works that I lost interest in finishing eventually. I guess I'll finish them eventually and maybe publish them on the internet...

[Zechs]

I have an account there but it's not up as of now but I'm writiting stories and poems to put up there. With school and work I wasn't really able to fit it all in. As soon as I post I'll let you guys know. :D

[Chris Sanders MSX]

I was going to use it for my book, but I decided Microsft Word worked way better and I'd just send out the Chapters I want people to see...

It's not in story format it's just stuff from life, story's I make up, things that happen, jokes, my views on certain things ..etc.

I also have a co-writer so it comes from 2 sides.

[The Guard]

Send me some of it, Chris.

I updated THE GAME. It's got...5 chapters now? I'm working on a touchy chapter right now. I'd forgotten a lot of this. It's kinda depressing actually. Oh well. It's a story that must be told. :)

[Zechs]

Hey why don't you guys PM me some of your writings and I'll do the same. Writing is sooooooo much fun for me. Now that I have time I'll be to write the way I want to. :D

[The Guard]

I would, but...

My writing is somewhat...what's a word for "extremely dark in nature"?

For now, go to that link. If you click on my little "The Guard" link at the top, it'll show you what else I've written that you can access from there.

[Chris Sanders MSX]

There you guys go. Don't forget to send me what you thought.

[The Guard]

I did. Is that stuff real, or did you just make some of it up?

[DR. BELCH]

The Guard:
My writing is somewhat...what's a word for "extremely dark in nature"?
Macabre? Gothic?
I write fiction myself...but a lot of it is based on actual events. I just compiled a collection of it and sent it off to a publisher last week...and often I find the stories behind the stories seem longer and more interesting than the stories themselves, if you can understand that. Generally there's either a personal trauma or a strange dream hidden at the root of each piece.

[Chris Sanders MSX]

Originally posted by The Guard
I did. Is that stuff real, or did you just make some of it up?

Yeah it's all real. Except the things that were OBVIOUSLY jokes.

[Joe Wagner]

Glad to see that there is a group of writers here. As of right now I'm working on a couple of projects but the main one is called Blindside and is available at Starkillers.com. The site is a new sci-fi idea and the guy I write with is extremely talented.

If you guys could send me some of your stuff I would really like to read it.

-Joe!

[Terminatah]

I'm down with that writin' stuff too. I don't do it very often, but here's a short story I posted at this site one time:

http://forums.toonzone.net/showthread.php?s=&threadid=21867

To share feedback, just reply to the thread.

-Terminatah

[The Guard]

I added chapters 5-8.

You have to click reload to see the new chapters.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=777265&chapter=7

[The Guard]

Added Chapters 9-11.

Same deal. Click refresh, then read.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=777265

[Parallax]

Serious stuff dude.

[The Guard]

Please explain what that means. :)

[Parallax]

Originally posted by The Guard
Please explain what that means. :)

It means its really good. :)

[The Guard]

Oh. Well it's about to get...umm...bad.

[Parallax]

Originally posted by The Guard
Oh. Well it's about to get...umm...bad.

I mean good as in cool. :)

[The Guard]

I added Chapters through 13.

Same deal. Refresh it and read.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=777265

[The Guard]

Chapter 14 is added. It's interesting. Should show you where the story is going.

[Elven Moon]

I have a story up right now at fanfiction.net under Elven Moon, but I'm too shy to share it with you guys, since it pales in comparison to the writings here ;) But if you ever want to, it's available to read, and more stuff will be posted eventually.

[The Guard]

Added through Chapter 18.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=777265

[Terminatah]

I don't know how often this happens in the story, but I just noticed on chapter 13 that some of the names change for no reason. Like you have Matt and Sarah in place of Jeff and Jessica. Might want to fix that.

-Terminatah

[The Guard]

DOH! Earlier draft. It's just in Chapter 13, right?

[Terminatah]

I don't know, probably.

-Terminatah

[Zechs]

This is a poem from another web site that dosen't seem to be getting many hits I changed it a little the first verson just didn't click anymore.

I see the darkness in your eyes
the fate of now the great devide
the one of holy heart and true
the sound of hate that turns you blue
you see me in those coulded eyes
you hear the wind across the great devide
you love the flame but fear the burn
the water stings you must take flight
the stars can see the earth below
you feel the night of comsic flow
you close your eyes to fall in deep
you hear the sands of sleep
yet you love the dark you love the light
you hate black you fear the white
you hear the sea of seathing blue
you turn the old into the new
you know the truth
but live the lie
on the bed of thorns
for you must die
your eyes open to feel the life
but now you leave and take new flight
into the unknown light that you fear
where it takes you is yet unknown
to time to death or another life
the past you fear forever more
nothing known yet nothing lost
you wander forever lost in the sands of time
to find your place set for you by great devine
to death to life to all that is
for the comsic flow willl never end.


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[The Guard]

I "finished" it. 24 chapters.

You'll see what I mean.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=777265