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KPTitan
04-07-2007, 08:08 PM
Teen Titans: Virtual Realm (Crossover)
Hey, dudes and dude-ets! This is the first time I’ve written a fanfic before, so I’m kind of excited and nervous at the same time. Feel free to comment!

Now, for the setting. This Teen Titans story crosses over with Antefims’ and MoonScoop’s tv show Code Lyoko. It takes place a week after the TT Trouble in Tokyo movie, and almost right at the beginning of Code Lyoko Season 4 (which hasn’t aired yet on CN, just so you know). If you are unfamiliar with Code Lyoko, feel free to ask me any questions concerning it.

As far as writing the chapters, my goal is 1 chapter every two weeks, since I get a lot of homework, so please be patient with me. At the end of every chapter, I will include a blooper for that chapter.

This is rated T for Teen, because there might be a some censored cuss words.

Hope you enjoy!

Chapter 1: Where the heck are we?

“Dude, is anybody there?” asked a weary Beast Boy, pointing a flashlight down a dark alley. He was starting to get tired. “Man, hope Cyborg gets that bad-guy-radar-thingy working again, because I’m tired of doing night patrol.” Then a voice speaks through Beast Boy’s communicator. “You mean the alarm system.” said Raven in a sarcastic tone. “Whatever….” replied BB. Another voice came alive in the communicator, but belonged to the cheery, but tired, Starfire. “I agree with Beast Boy,” she said. “I too am starting to feel the tired and sick.” Then their leader, Robin, replied to the complaints. “Don’t worry. Cyborg will get the radar system working again. Besides, looking for crime the old-fashioned way is pretty nice for a change, and I don’t feel tired.” Then Robin yawns. “Right….” said Raven, seeing the irony of being tired in Robin’s last statement.

“Dude, what is this place?” Beast Boy was standing outside an abandoned warehouse. “What is it Beast Boy?” Starfire was flying over Beast Boy and now landed next to him. “This place is most mysterious. I have never seen it before,” she said. “I don’t think any body has, Star,” said Beast Boy, obviously in awe at the enormous building. A camera near the entrance of the warehouse suddenly came to life and focused on Beast Boy and Starfire. “Did that camera just move?” As if to answer his question, an ominous green glow began to come out of the windows. “What the f#$%! This is like a horror movie!” cried Beast Boy. “I agree! Let us go and meet back up with our friends,” said a frightened Starfire. “No way!” objected Beast Boy. “I’m a big fan of horror movies anyway, so let’s go in and check it out. Besides, there could be a criminal in there.” He opened the entrance door and walked in. “Wait! We shouldn’t….” but before she could finish, Beast Boy pulled Starfire in the building with him. “Come on, I need a witness in case I get mauled to death!”

Beast Boy and Starfire walked into a room that had a supercomputer with three screens in the center, along with a holographic display of a sphere with what looked like four regions surrounding it. Starfire gasped. “What is this place, and what does this hologram represent, perhaps another alien world that I’m unfamiliar with?” They walked closer to the 3-screen computer. “I wonder….” Beast Boy pressed a button on the key-board. The screen then showed a 2D dimension of a bizarre landscape. “Oh, dude! It can’t be!” he cried. “What Beast Boy. What is it?” Starfire asked. “It’s….” he pauses. “It’s the new and ultimate edition of Mega-Monkeys 4!!” Starfire glared at him for his random and dumb behavior. At the corner of her eye, Starfire noticed a door on the opposite wall. “Beast Boy, look! Another door!” she exclaimed. They quickly walk up to it and examine it with curiosity. “Stand aside, and let the pro handle this, Star.” said Beast Boy, puffed up with pride. He turned into a gorilla and tried to open the door, but didn’t succeed. Then he turned into a t-rex, a chimpanzee, and another bunch of animals that he thought would be strong enough to open the door. His hands on the door, he tried pushing it in his regular form. “Perhaps this would open it Beast Boy.” Starfire reached for a red button on the side of the door and pushed it, while Beast Boy was still pushing on the door. The door slid open, and Beast Boy fell to the floor in the next room with a THUD! Starfire giggled at his clumsiness. Beast Boy got up, his face red from the face-plant he made on the floor. “Dude, it wasn’t funny!” They gazed around the room, which was similar to the one they were in before, but instead of a supercomputer there was three cylinder-shaped containers with sliding doors on them. Coming out from each container were thick cables that ran through the walls, possibly connecting to the supercomputer in the previous room.

“Beast Boy, come in.” said Robin into his communicator. “Beast Boy! Starfire! Please come in!” Robin’s voice went a little higher with worry as he tried to contact his teen comrades. Then his communicator came alive with a crackling sound. “Uuh, hi! What’s up?” said Beast Boy with a hint of ‘I got busted’ in his voice. “We are fine, Robin,” reassured Starfire. “We were just…..looking for someone we thought as suspicious, and we found out he was not bad at all.” Raven wasn’t fooled by them trying to cover up what they were actually doing. “Want me to come over there and help?” asked Raven with amusement. “No, we’re okay.” replied Beast Boy. Raven decided to go to them anyway. “I’ll be back Robin. I’ll go check things out over there, just in case.” she said to Robin over their communicators, then flew off to where the signal of BB and Starfire was coming from, according to the tracking systems that was built into each Titan’s communicator. “Be careful.” said Robin.

Suddenly the doors on the mysterious containers opened up, scaring Beast Boy into dropping his communicator, screaming like a girl, and jumping into Starfire’s arms. “Dude, what the hell happened!” Starfire had dropped her communicator to catch the frightened green Titan. “Perhaps this place is what you call, the haunted?” she inquired. “Dunno Star, but I’m gonna look inside one of those and find out.” “I will join you,” said Starfire, already walking into one of the containers. Beast Boy walked into one of them as well, and they began examining them thoroughly. That’s when the doors closed, leaving the Titans trapped in the containers. “Help!!!” they screamed, before a loud sound like a charging laser overtook them. Then there was silence, and the containers opened up, with nobody in them. The only evidence lift behind from the two Titans was their communicators on the floor.

“Well, this is where they should be, according to my communicator.” Raven had just arrived at the warehouse where Beast Boy and Starfire were. She was oblivious of the entrance camera that was focused on her, just like it did with BB and Starfire earlier. “Hmm….wonder what they’re doing in there,” Raven noticed the green glow coming through the windows, assuming it was from Starfire using her glowing hands as a flashlight. She saw the open entrance door and walked in, seeing the supercomputer with the three screens and hologram beside it. Raven walked up to the computer. “Very interesting….Starfire, Beast Boy, are you in here?” Her question was answered when she was gazing at the computer screen with awe. “Dude, where the heck are we?” Beast Boy’s voice came through the computer speaker system.

“Dude, where the heck are we?” asked a bewildered Beast Boy. Him and Starfire found themselves in a bizarre desert landscape, in a virtual world-like form. The sky above them was a brilliant yellow-orange color, and around them were several rocky landscapes. They were also standing on solid ground, not sand like you would find in a normal desert. The huge rocks and ground were a orange-red color. There were large, strange wires running in and out of the ground, now beginning to pulsate with red like a beacon and sparks. Starfire looked around in awe. “This place is beautiful, yet strange at the same time. It’s almost like one of your games, Beast Boy.” BB on the other hand didn’t think it was so beautiful. He knew about Starfire’s strange taste in “beautiful landscape,” and he found it to be very strange. Beast Boy then looked down on himself, in disgust. What he saw was himself in 3D form. “Dude!! I look so freakin’ fat!” then he looks over at Starfire, who was also in 3D. “And so do you Star! But it looks better on you….” Starfire smacked him on the face. Beast Boy rubbed his face, now realizing this was the second time his face got hurt in a matter of minutes. “Ouch! Calm down, I was just kidding!”

Raven was sitting on the seat in front of the computer, laughing at the quarrel that was going on between Starfire and Beast Boy. She was surprised at herself, for the fact that she never laughed at Beast Boy for anything. She covered her mouth, embarrassed that Beast Boy and Starfire might have heard her. “Dude, did I just hear Raven laugh?” said Beast Boy’s voice. “I believe you did, because I did too,” Starfire replied. Then she called out to her friend. “Raven, is that you? If it is, an you tell us how to get out of this place?” Raven smiled, realizing she got caught red-handed for laughing. “Yes, it’s me. And no, I have no idea how to get you out of there, wherever that is,” she replied with a hint of confusion in her voice. She couldn’t feel their presence anywhere in the warehouse, so where were they? Then she sees two triangle-like symbols on the computer screen, moving in a 2D layout. Then, appearing on the screen, were two small pictures of Starfire and Beast Boy, but in 3D form. Could it be, Raven asked herself, that they are in a virtual world or dimension? Her heart began to beat at an incredibly fast rate, coming to the realization that since she didn’t know where this virtual world was, she couldn’t bring them back. “You guys, listen to me….” Raven was just about to tell them the horrible news when a beeping sound came from the computer. She saw a red triangle appear on the screen, making it’s way towards the green triangles that represented the two unsuspecting Titans.

“Beast Boy, look!” shouted Starfire. “There is another person here. Perhaps he can help us!” Starfire was pointing at a thin, teenage boy that was now standing 10-15 feet away from them. “Umm, there’s someone else with you….” said Raven’s voice, coming from no particular location. “Uuh, yeah, we can see that Raven.” Beast Boy answered back. The boy looked like he could be around the Titan’s age, maybe a year younger. But, for only a teenager, he seemed menacing and sinister to Starfire and BB. He had pale-white skin with short, black, messy hair. The irises and pupils of his eyes were black with hatred. What caught the most attention of the uneasy and unsuspecting titans was his outfit. It was a black hazmat suit with a high-tech and warrior look to it, with blood-red geometric lines running through it. On his chest was a peculiar eye-like symbol that was as white as his face. The same symbol was on his forehead, but smaller. Carrying over his shoulder was a large sword that was 8 inches wide and 4 ½ feet long, which was a foot shorter than himself. He stared at his new enemies, looking them over, analyzing them and deciding what to do with them. He was wondering how they came here in the first place. His sword gleamed brightly in the artificial sunlight as he lifted it into the air while giving a mechanical roar, preparing to attack. At this, the two titans prepared to defend themselves, with Starfire’s fists lighting up with star bolts and Beast Boy taking a fighting stance, ready to transform into any animal possible. “Dude, is it just me, or did he forget to take his medicine this morning?” the green titan said jokingly. The enraged boy glared at Beast Boy. The boy’s sword began to glow with white energy. BB saw this as a warning sign that he shouldn’t have made that joke. “Dude, I’m sorry, I’m sorry, please don’t kill me!” Beast Boy braced himself for what was about to come. Then, with a simple wave of the sword, the white energy blast shot from it and hit Starfire. The assault was too fast for her to fly up and dodge it. Starfire was knocked to the ground, screaming while being propelled several feet behind her. Then she slowly began to disintegrate into tiny blue squares until she was gone. With his eyes wide with horror, BB looked from the spot where Starfire was standing, then to the boy, who now had an evil grin on his face. Beast Boy welled up in anger, shouting, “Dude, what did you do that for! I was the one who made that smart#$% remark!” The boy threw another energy blast from his sword, this time hitting Beast Boy. BB’s fate was the same as Starfire’s, unable to defend himself since the attack was too fast. The teenage boy, now left by himself, raised his hands while holding the sword in one and gave out a victory cry.

While the very short-lived, but unfair battle took place, a diagram showed up on the computer screen showing a vs. mode, with the two titans on one side and the teenage boy on the other. Raven had seen what the boy looked like on the diagram and watched helplessly as the two triangles representing BB and Starfire disappeared from the screen, with the red one representing the boy still remained. She was shocked. “No! I couldn’t save them!” cried Raven, banging her hands on the keyboard. This caused the computer to shut off, making her even more furious with herself. Now how am I supposed to find them with this thing off! I don’t know how it turned on in the first place! She started to cry when she heard a sound coming from somewhere inside the warehouse. Raven couldn’t pinpoint the source until she got up and walked to the door that Starfire and BB walked through to get into the other room. She pushed the red button beside the door and it slid open. What she saw when the door opened both made her happy and shocked at the same time. Beast Boy and Starfire were lying on the floor, each in front of a container. She quickly speculated that the containers were some kind of portals, or scanners, that transported her friends to that bizarre world. Raven ran up to her friends, knelt down, and tried to wake them up by shaking them. “Beast Boy! Starfire! Please wake up!” she yelled. Then both bodies started to moan, then woke up. “Dude, was that the most freakiest Mega-Monkeys 4 game I’ve ever played or what!” Both Starfire and BB stood up holding their heads with one hand, trying to get their bearings back together. “Beast Boy, I am unconvinced that it was a video game. It felt so real. And that boy….” “Seemed like a video game to me.” argued BB. “No, Starfire’s right. It was real.” said Raven. Beast Boy looked at her like she smacked him with one of her spell books. “Actually, you were in a virtual world that was probably designed in that computer. I’ve heard of virtual worlds from the mages back in Azarath, but I didn’t know they were actually real….” “I’ve been told stories of scientists building virtual worlds on Tamaran too, but I have never been in one. Now I know what they look like.” replied Starfire. Beast Boy started pulling at his hair. “Since when did you guys get so technical!” Then Robin, after what seemed like forever, started to speak through Raven’s communicator. “Raven, are you all right? I thought I just heard you cry a few moments ago.” Raven took her communicator out of a hidden pocket in her dark blue robe. “Don’t worry Robin. I’m fine, and so are Beast Boy and Starfire.” “Good.” replied Robin with a sigh of relief. “You guys, we can go back to the Tower now. Cyborg got the radar working again. Robin, out.” Beast Boy yawned. “Well, it’s about time Cyborg got it working again! Now I can catch up on my beauty sleep.” Raven and Starfire just starred at him, like he was a ghost. “What?” he said. Starfire started giggling again, and Raven said, “Like you need beauty sleep.” BB just glared at her. He turned around, “Well, last one to the Tower is a rotten egg!” Beast Boy ran through the door, and out of the warehouse he went. “Ooookay….” said Raven. She picked up BB’s communicator that he absentmindedly left on the floor, and Starfire picked up hers as well. “I believe we should go to bed right away, and I shall feed Silky. He could be eating up the sofa again,” the gleeful alien said. Both girls flew out of the entrance, but Raven stopped to look at the supercomputer for a few moments. She wondered if the boy that she saw on the screen and who engaged in an unfair battle with Starfire and Beast Boy could be a threat to them, since he might come through the scanners as did the two titans. Pondering over this, she followed her fellow Titans back to the Tower, with BB flying as an eagle, her and Starfire flying through the air, and Robin below them on his signature motorcycle. Maybe she should bring this issue up to them the next morning.

Blooper #1
Starfire and Beast Boy began searching the scanners thoroughly when the doors suddenly closed.

“AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! S#$%!!!” cried Beast Boy.

“What Beast Boy?” Starfire asks then looks over, gasps, and sees BB’s hand sticking out of the door, throbbing and red.

“Oh, sorry about that. The mechanics in this thing isn’t working right.” said one of the stage crew members.

The door opens up and BB falls to the floor.

amelia_tomashi
04-08-2007, 04:39 PM
A lovely first chapter!
1.)BB was a little out of character, but, was certainly funny!

2.)Starfire was pretty much herself.

3.)Are the Titans in France?

4.)Were are the Lyoko worriors?

All in all, a side from a few grammar issues, pretty nice! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Amelia,

Atoragon
04-08-2007, 04:45 PM
well, i have to agree completely with amelia. a little more background information could have been given and some editting could do this some good, but overall, i'd say this is a pretty good start for a first fanfic.:D

KPTitan
04-08-2007, 05:01 PM
A lovely first chapter!
1.)BB was a little out of character, but, was certainly funny!

2.)Starfire was pretty much herself.

3.)Are the Titans in France?

4.)Were are the Lyoko worriors?

All in all, a side from a few grammar issues, pretty nice! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Amelia,

Glad you liked it. Completely forgot to mention that the Titans are in Jump City. Of course, the clues that they are in Jump City is that at the end, they were going back to their Tower.

KPTitan
04-08-2007, 05:08 PM
Looking back on the 1st chapter, I kinda made it a little crampy. I will improve on that, the spelling, and a bunch of other things. In Jump City is a seperate supercomputer that links to what shall be revealed in CL Season 4 is a Lyoko Replika. Franz Hopper made several of these Replikas, each controlled by a seperate supercomputer. Just a little info from CL season 4 that will apply to this story. Next chapter will come sometime today.....:D If not today, then tommorow for sure.

KPTitan
04-09-2007, 03:19 PM
Yay! New chapter!

Chapter 2: He’s back…..

“Ahhh…morning already?” Cyborg got off his “bed,” which was actually a charging station. He walked over to the door in his room, walked out into the hallway, and headed down to the bathroom before anybody else could get to it, even though he was the only one awake at the time. Cyborg brushed his teeth, takes a shower (even though he’s robotic), and all the other stuff he does in the bathroom. When he was finished, he went to the main room of the Tower and began to cook breakfast. “Today it’s gonna be my world-famous pancakes, eggs, and bacon, and of course tofu pancakes, eggs, and bacon for BB. Booyah!”

The smell of Cyborg’s breakfast wafted through the hallways of the Tower, arousing all the other Titans. The first to come out was Robin with his head in the air, sniffing the pancakes . “Mmm…pancakes…” said the boy wonder with delight.

Next to come out of their bedrooms were Beast Boy and Raven, following quickly behind Robin. “Yo, Raven. Are you gonna tell Robin and Cyborg what happened last night?”

Raven looked back at Beast Boy and whispered so Robin couldn‘t hear. “I thought about it, and yes, I’m going to tell them during breakfast,” she said matter-of-factly.

Starfire came out of her room and followed the rest of the team. “I had the dream last night of the incident that took place, and….” she smelled the breakfast and stopped talking about what she was saying previously. “Umm! Our friend Cyborg is making his world-famous breakfast for us to enjoy!” Starfire, overjoyed at coming to this conclusion, flew ahead of her friends, leaving Robin, BB, and Raven in the dust.

Robin turned to his friends behind him. “So, what DID happen last night?” Robin said while eyeing BB and Raven suspiciously.

Before Raven could answer, Beast Boy chimed in, “Raven said she was gonna tell you during breakfast.”

Still eyeing them, Robin replied with a simple “Okay,” then started walking again. The other two titans followed him.

Meanwhile, in Kadic Academy in France…..

Jeremy Belpois was writing down biology notes while his teacher, Mrs. Hertz, was giving a lecture on photosynthesis. When he was done he just sat there in his desk, listening and thinking about what happened last night at the same time. Why did William survive the destruction of Lyoko? Who was that boy and girl that appeared on one of the Lyoko Replikas, especially when they were too far away to be there in the first place? These and other questions were going through his mind when he was interrupted by someone poking him in the arm. It was Aelita, the pink-haired girl who was his “girlfriend” and former Lyoko resident, sitting next to him.

“Jeremy, are you alright? You seemed like you were in another world or something,” she asked with concern.

“Yeah, just thinking about last night is all,” he answered back. He had told her and his other friends, Ulrich, Odd, and Yumi that he would tell them about last night’s events during breakfast.

Finally, to the relief of the students in the room, the bell rang to dismiss them for breakfast.

“Remember class, there is a biology test tomorrow, so study!” While stressing on the last word, she was looking at Odd and Ulrich in the back of the room.

The students got up from their desks and began streaming out of the classroom, heading for the cafeteria.

At breakfast time….

“I don’t believe it! Making us go to our first class of the day really early in the morning before breakfast!” complained Ulrich while taking his seat next to Odd in the cafeteria, with breakfast of pancakes, eggs, and bacon on a tray.

“I agree,” said Yumi, who was sitting next to Aelita on the other side of the table. “This Early Bird program that they got running now is ridiculous,” Yumi continued to say.

“Me three,” said Odd, raising his hand. “It really screwed up my beauty sleep.”

The others looked at him, then started to laugh. “Like you need beauty sleep, Odd. I’m pretty sure Kiwi likes you just the way you are,” commented Ulrich.

“Hey, leave Kiwi out of this. You have no idea what you’re talking about.” said Odd defending himself.

“Morning guys!” said Jeremy as he sat down at the table to eat with his friends.

“Yeah, good morning,” said Ulrich sarcastically.

Jeremy ignored his sarcasm. “Come on, guys. The Early Bird program can’t be that bad, even though they gave it a weird name in the first place….”

“Easy for you to say Einstein. You’re used to getting up early,” Odd commented.

Aelita just merely smiled at the argument that was going on between her friends. “You know,” she began. “This program has a good side to it. Such as, when all your classes are over, you have the rest of the long afternoon to hang out.”

“You know, Aelita has a point,” said the Japanese girl sitting next to Aelita in agreement.

“Okay you guys, I’m going to start telling you about what happened on Lyoko last night.,” Jeremy began. “While talking to Franz Hopper via instant message on the Internet about how to defeat XANA, two mysterious people ended up in one of the Lyoko Replikas.”

Yumi asked, “Do you have any idea who they are and where they came from?”

Jeremy continued, “I was just about to get that information by hacking in when William attacked them. Apparently he survived the destruction of the original Lyoko while being possessed by XANA, and still is, but at a greater degree.”

The others stared at him, wide-eyed, not being able to comprehend that one of their former teammates was still alive, and still possessed by XANA.

“However, I did manage to find out where they came from and how they got on Lyoko, with the help of Franz of course.”

Aelita chimed in, “So what did you find Jeremy?”

“I traced them to a supercomputer in a place called Jump City, California in the United States of America. Franz said that he thought they could help us, so he brought them to a Lyoko Replika last night. Unfortunately, William destroyed them before Franz could ask them for their help. But Franz DID manage to find their phone number on the Internet, and he emailed it to me. I was going to call them later this afternoon.”

“Cool, I wonder if they’re superheroes. That would explain why Franz Hopper said they might be able to help us,” Odd replied, having no idea how right he was.

“You never know, Odd. We’re not superheroes, and we fight XANA. But if they are, it would be really cool to meet actual superheroes,” said Ulrich.

Several thousand miles to the west in Titan’s Tower…..

Robin and Cyborg stared at Raven in disbelief.

“Girl, I can’t believe you guys would lie to Robin like that!” Saying this, Cyborg then looked at Starfire and Beast Boy, who were looking down at their breakfast. Ironically, the two eggs and bacon on each of BB’s and Starfire’s plates made a frowning face, with the eggs being the eyes and bacon being the mouth.

“Dudes, we’re sorry, I swear!” apologized a guilty Beast Boy.

“Well, that’s behind us now.” said Robin, easily forgiving his friends.

Raven just got done telling Cyborg and Robin about the virtual world that BB and Starfire went into, and the boy who attacked them.

Robin pondered over this information. “Well, if you think this boy is such a threat, I suggest we shut the place down.”

“But Robin,” said Starfire. “He’s only a boy, perhaps we can help him,” she tried to persuade her best friend, a.k.a her boyfriend, that this was a good idea. It was one of those qualities that Robin loved about her: her kindness and concern for others.

“Star, you heard the man, and you know what the boy did to you and BB in that virtual world. We have to…..”

Suddenly the alarm system went off, red flashing lights and sirens everywhere in the Tower.

“Ohh Yeah! New alarm system works like a charm!” yelled Cyborg, admiring his handy-work. A map of Jump City appeared on the big screen in the main room. On a spot on the map representing Main Street was an orange circle with a black “S” in the middle of it, something the Titans thought they wouldn’t see in a long time.

“Slade…..” growled Robin.

“Here we go again….” commented Beast Boy. He and the others new what was going to happen next, since it involved Slade.

“Titans, go!” yelled Robin with such ferocity that it made everybody jump out of their shoes. Soon the Titans exited the Tower in a matter of minutes, without hesitation.

Meanwhile, in France…..

“Uh, oh. Looks like XANA’s on the offensive again,” said Jeremy with worry.

The alarm for a XANA attack went off on Jeremy’s laptop, loudly, while in a “please be quite” library in the school.

Jim Moralis, their gym teacher who just happened to be in the library at the time, walked over and folded down the screen of Jeremy’s laptop. “Jeremy Belpois! How many times do I have to tell you and your friends to be quite in the library?!?” he bellowed. He continued on, “As a matter of fact, I used to be a librarian several years ago….”

Jeremy smiled, then asked, “You used to be a librarian, Jim?”

Jim answered back with his famous “I’d rather not talk about it” statement and walked off, forgetting about the laptop incident. After the coast was clear, Jeremy flipped the screen back up to see the details of the attack that was taking place.

Odd gave Jim a friendly wave as he and Ulrich walked up to Jeremy to see what was going on.

“I see XANA’s attacking again, as always,” said Ulrich. “I’ll call Yumi and Aelita and tell them to meet us at the factory.” Ulrich was just about to pick up his cell phone when Jeremy held up his hand in objection, still looking at the laptop screen.

“You don’t have to. The location of the attack is too far away for us to deal with, even de-activating a tower in one of the Replikas wouldn’t do any good.”

Odd and Ulrich looked at him in confusion. “Where’s the attack Jeremy?” Odd asked, already having an idea what the answer might be.

Jeremy replied, “It’s in Jump City…..”

On Main Street of Jump City…..

The Titans parked the T-Car next to a 7-story bank three blocks away where the enemy was standing. The five teammates got out of the T-Car, shocked to see their enemy again after so long ago.

“Dude, what the heck is wrong with Slade?” asked the bewildered Beast Boy.

In front of the Titans was Slade, their old nemesis. But something was different about him.

Starfire saw what Beast Boy was talking about. “Look! That mysterious symbol that was on that boy is now in Slade’s eye!”

Sure enough, the eye of XANA (but they didn’t know that’s what it’s called at the time) had replaced Slade’s pupil in his left eye that was visible behind his mask. The symbol pulsated, like a fast heart beat, as he stared at the Titans menacingly He then looked over at Starfire and BB, recognizing them.

“Dudes, you think Slade is still in there, even though he never has been in the first place?” said BB, referring to Slade as being psychotic.

“Man, this is gonna get ugly,” said Cyborg while charging up his sonic cannon.

The Titans took their usual fighting stances as well.

Robin gave out the command, “Titans, go!” The titans charged at Slade while throwing their attacks at him, Robin with his disks, Starfire’s star bolts, and Cyborg’s sonic cannon. Raven used her levitating powers to pick up a few nearby parked cars and threw them at Slade with all her might. Beast Boy morphed into an elephant, charged at Slade, attempting to pick him up and throw him with his elephant trunk. But before the titan’s attacks could touch Slade, he jumped higher and farther than usual to the top of a five-story office building that was three blocks away.

“Umm…this could be a problem.” Raven speculated.

“What did he have for breakfast this morning, jumping jelly beans?” said Beast Boy.

“We’ve beaten Slade before, and we can do it again,” Robin reassured his teammates.

They began running down the street to catch up with Slade, with Raven picking up a hot dog stand with her powers and Beast Boy turning into a hawk. Beast Boy flew up towards the top of the office building where Slade was, while all of a sudden he began shooting purple lightning from his hands at BB. But Beast Boy dodged every attack that Slade could throw at him. He was finally flying above Slade. Slade started to shoot more lightning at BB when Raven caught his attention. She was hovering above Slade, preparing to attack.

“Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos!” she yelled her signature battle cry to make the attack more powerful, and threw the hot dog stand she was carrying at Slade. But Slade jumped straight up to dodge the hot dog stand that was engulfed in a black aurora. He then shot a strong lightning bolt at Raven. “AAAHHH!” Raven cried in agonizing pain before she fell back to earth, landing in a garbage dumpster. She was unconscious from the shock.

When Slade was back on top of the office building, Beast Boy, still hovering over him, changed from a hawk to a hippo, his intentions to crush Slade. Slade began hopping from building to building back to the top of the7-story bank. Before Beast Boy could change back he fell through the entire office building he was over earlier until he hit rock bottom. He quickly walked out of the building entrance, then fainted where he stood.

While Slade was hopping buildings to get away from BB, Starfire was flying after him while carrying Cyborg and Robin. When Slade reached the top of the bank Starfire let go of Robin and Cyborg while she continued to shoot star bolts at their enemy. Robin luckily landed on the building next to Slade, but Cyborg was barely hanging on the edge of the building.

“Hey, need some help over here!” cried Cyborg. Starfire flew down to help Cyborg back up. Now all three titans were on top of the bank with Slade.

Robin was now fighting with Slade, karate style. Unfortunately every kick and punch Robin was throwing at his nemesis went straight through him, like a knife through butter. “What the….” Robin was extremely shocked at this, since he thought Slade wasn’t capable of having that kind of power. Before Robin could regain his composure Slade took him by his right arm and threw him hard enough that Robin could have sworn that his arm was being ripped out of his sockets, or at least if felt like it. Robin was sent flying, crashing into Starfire who was shooting a starbeam at Slade.

Now it was Cyborg vs. Slade. “Man, I don’t know how you got those freaky powers, but I definitely won’t let you get away with hurting my friends!”

Cyborg shot the most powerful sonic cannon he could muster at Slade. Caught off guard, Slade was being propelled by the sonic cannon towards a radio anteanna. When his electronically-enhanced body made contact with the antenna, sparks began to fly in every direction possible. The injured Starfire and Robin that were lying down covered their heads as some of the sparks were flying towards them, and Cyborg a few feet away from them did the same. The three titans watched as Slade gave out a blood-curdling scream as a huge lighting bolt from the antenna shot Slade towards the edge of the building, then he fell 7 stories down to the earth. There was a loud CRASH as he made contact with a vehicle below.

“BOOYAH!!” shouted Cyborg. The cybernetic titan along with the alien and boy wonder made their way to the edge where Slade fell. Then they looked down to see that Slade had indeed landed on a vehicle. But not just any vehicle, it was the T-Car.

Cyborg was the first to react, with tears in his eyes. “NOOOO!!!! Not my baby, not my beautiful baby!”

Slade’s landing on the T-Car made it look like it belonged in a junkyard. Starfire and Robin, who were next to the emotionally injured titan began to pat him on the back and tried to calm him down.

“It’s okay Cyborg.” Starfire was the first one to speak. “Very soon you shall make your baby go ‘vroom’ again.”

“Starfire’s right Cyborg. I’ll even help you fix it again so it’s brand new.” said Robin.

Down below Raven and BB regained their consciousness and walked over to the demolished T-Car. Raven was picking garbage out of her hair and Beast Boy was picking bits of cement and glass out of his hair.

“I definitely need to take a shower when this is over.” said Raven.

“Oh, man!” BB was observing the damage of the T-Car. “And right before I get a chance to drive it for once!”

Raven glared at him for being stupid. “You’re not the only one who’s suffering.”

She pointed up at Cyborg, Starfire, and Robin who were now making their descent back down to meet with the rest of their team.

Cyborg was still on the verge of tears. “I can’t believe that happened to my baby! And I just waxed it too!”

Then a rustling sound came from where Slade had landed on the T-Car. Slade slowly sat up, glaring at the Titans. The eye of XANA was still visible in his eye. The Titans once again prepared for battle, with Cyborg quickly regaining his composure. Then the eye of XANA disappeared, showing Slade’s normal eye again, then fainted. The most strangest thing happened that the Titans would not soon forget. An ominous black cloud came out of Slade and made its way towards the sky, never to be seen again.

While seeing this Starfire gave a loud “eep!” and hid behind Robin.

After a long silence Beast Boy was the first to speak, “Duuuude…that was weird…”

“I agree.” replied Raven.

“What was that thing, and what was it doing in Slade?” asked Cyborg in bewilderment.

“I don’t know, but I have a feeling we’re going to find out, and that it was behind those strange powers Slade had.” Robin answered back.


Blooper #2

While Mrs. Hertz was giving a lecture on photosynthesis, someone let out a HUGE farting sound. Apparently, Sissi (Elizabeth) Delmas sat on a whoopi cushion that was planted on her seat by non other that Odd Delarobia.

"Odd! You ****head! Don't ever do that to me again!" Sissi yelled.

The whole class, including Mrs. Hertz and the stage crew started laughing, really hard. Then Beast Boy walked in the classroom, walked up to Odd, and shook hands with him.

"Nice doing business with you dude!" said Beast Boy.

"You too!" said Odd

"Oh, great. Don't tell me that talking vegetable was in on this!" Sissi yelled again.

"Hey! Just because I'm a vegetarian and that I'm green doesn't make me a vegetable!" BB yelled back.

Then in a matter of seconds, Odd and Beast Boy found themselves being chased down the school hallways by one angry Sissi.

amelia_tomashi
04-09-2007, 04:20 PM
*claps*
Much better! The spacing really helped keep it less cluttered. For this, I clap!
I can't wait to see what happens when the two crews finally meet up!

*can't wait!*

Slade controlled by Xana? Duuuuude...

KPTitan
04-09-2007, 05:38 PM
Thanks amelia. And your dream of the two crews meeting will be realized in the next chapter when Jeremy gives the Titans a phone call. The story shall continue!!

amelia_tomashi
04-09-2007, 07:57 PM
Yay!
I. Still. Love. William.

Atoragon
04-11-2007, 10:01 PM
A lot of improvement over the last chapter. Very nice work.:D

KPTitan
04-12-2007, 07:12 PM
Thanks dude. I didn't think the XANA-possessed Slade/Titans battle would turn out pretty good, but I guess it did.....almost done with the 3rd chapter, should come out either this weekend or the very beginning of next week.

In the immortal words of Cyborg: BOOOOOOYAAAAHHH!!!!

KPTitan
04-15-2007, 05:14 PM
Here.........I bring you the 3rd chapter! Booyah!:D

Chapter 3: The phone call from Another World

In the Kadic Academy library…..

“Wow, that was quick,” said Ulrich.

The XANA attack that occurred in Jump City ended as quickly as it began.

The XANA alert in Jeremy’s laptop had indicated that the attack was over, in a matter of 10 minutes.

“Yeah, I wonder what happened,” Odd began to think. “Maybe he surrendered or something.”

“Very funny, Odd. XANA doesn’t give up THAT easily. Why do you think we’ve been fighting him for nearly two years?”

“I rest my case. Just looking at the possibilities,” Odd replied.

Ulrich’s cell phone began to ring. “Yeah?….oh, hi Yumi….meet you in your dorm room?…..something’s on tv that we should see?……okay, meet you up there.” Ulrich hung up.

“What did Yumi want?” asked a curious Jeremy.

Ulrich answered, “Her and Aelita are in her dorm room watching something important on tv. She said that we should go up and see.”

“But you heard Jim, Ulrich. Girls are supposed to stay on their dorm room level, and the same goes for us. So how are we supposed to sneak up there while being unnoticed?” asked Odd.

“Don’t worry Odd. There’s nobody patrolling the halls at this time. We can easily sneak up there and back, if we can hurry.”

“I knew that….” Odd replied back.

“Suuuuuuuurrre…..” Ulrich said with a smirk on his face.

“Okay guys, I guess we better go.” Jeremy started leading the way out of the library when their English teacher caught them trying to sneak out.

“Just where do you think you’re going?” the teacher asked suspiciously.

“So much for being easy…..” whispered Ulrich.

“Umm……we were going to……” Odd began.

“To go get some supplies we left back in the classroom, sir.” Jeremy said finishing Odd’s sentence.

“Okay, but be right back, and no fooling around.” said the teacher.

“Thank you sir. We’ll be back before you can say….” before Ulrich could finish, Odd and Jeremy pulled him down the hallway with them, on their way to Yumi’s dorm room.

In Yumi’s dorm room…..

“Here in Jump City we bring you live on television as we begin to interview the Teen Titans.” announced the interviewer. As he said this the camera swung over to the Teen Titans, who looked like they’ve been in World War II.

Jeremy eyed the tv screen. He immediately recognized Beast Boy and Starfire from when they were on Lyoko, but this time they weren’t in 3D form.

Aelita noticed how carefully Jeremy was eyeing the tv. “What is it Jeremy?” the pink-haired girl asked.

“Those two….” Jeremy pointed at the girl alien and the green shape-shifter.

“Those were the same people that were up against William on Lyoko last night.”

Odd looked to where Jeremy was pointing. “Are you sure those are ‘people’ Einstein, because they look to weird to be humans. Maybe their from another planet.”

“Odd, you dork. Don’t be such a racist,” replied Yumi jokingly.

“Yeah Odd, they’re not the only people in this world that look too weird to be human,” Ulrich said, applying to Odd. Odd picked up a pillow from Yumi’s bed and threw it at him, but missed as Ulrich dodged the flying pillow.

The five friends continued to watch the tv. “Yeah, anyway, there was this weird thing inside of Slade that gave him the power to sorta overtake us. Looked like some kinda black ghost to me….” said the robotic Titan named Cyborg.

At the mention of Slade’s name the camera swung over to show a man with a black and orange mask who was being apprehended by very strong guards from the city prison, who were now shoving him into a gray van. Slade was putting up a fight, though. “Damn you Robin!! I’ll get you for this!” he yelled at the Titans, while struggling against the grip of the prison guards.

Beast Boy slowly began to give Slade the “finger,” and Slade saw it.

“Why you son of…..” he began before he was locked up and was taken away to prison.

A purple-haired girl standing next to Beast Boy slapped him behind his head.

“Beast Boy, you’re on national television!” she scolded him for doing the “finger” in front of the tv camera.

The Kadic students watching this began to laugh.

“Man, does that guy have a temper or what!” Odd commented about Slade.

“Definitely a lot worse than Jim’s,” said Yumi.

Aelita popped in the conversation after quietly listening to the interview. “I guess you’re right after all Odd. They are superheroes.”

“Lucky guess….” said Ulrich with the intention of making Odd mad again.

Another pillow was thrown, this time hitting it’s mark on Ulrich’s face.

“Serves you right, you’re just jealous because I have psychic abilities both here AND on Lyoko.” Odd said mockingly.

“Odd, don’t be ridiculous, you only have them on Lyoko. Having them in real life is impossible,” Jeremy said looking at it in a scientific perspective.

“I’m not so sure Jeremy. What if one of those superheroes has psychic powers? It’s probably possible for them,” Aelita corrected Jeremy on his reasoning.

Jeremy began to think. “You’re right, I give up,” he gave Aelita a little kiss on her cheek, making her blush. Him and Aelita always had little arguments involving science, but for the fun of it.

“Sounds like you could use some comic book education from Odd,” said Yumi. At this Odd made a face.

Ulrich replied, “Hey, speaking of superheroes, weren’t you gonna give them a call Jeremy?”

“You’re right, thanks for reminding me. This incident with XANA attacking got me distracted. This is highly unusual for XANA attacking someone besides us, with the intention of killing them in the process. Unless…..” Jeremy started to say.

“Unless what Jeremy?” asked Odd.

“Mmm…..better check it out after I give the Titans a call,” said Jeremy shaking his head. “Unless my suspicions are correct, those two Titans probably interfered with one of XANA’s plans, so now he sees them just as much a threat as us.”

“That’s scary to think about,” replied Yumi, getting up to turn off her tv.

Meanwhile in the recovery room of Titan’s Tower…..

“AAAAHHHH!!!! Dude, that hurt!” screamed Beast Boy.

Cyborg was putting hydrogen peroxide on a wound on BB’s left arm. “Just calm down, and let me put this bandage on you BB.” Cyborg began rapping a piece of cloth around the wound.

To heal herself from the shock waves that came from Slade, Raven was meditating, floating above a hospital bed. “Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos……Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos…..” she continued to chant.

On another cot next to Raven was Starfire sitting on it while Robin was rapping cloth on a wound on her right arm, and then put a band-aid on her left cheek. “There you go Starfire, good as new.”

When Robin was finished, Starfire gave him one of her famous, strong bear hugs. “Oh, thank you so much Robin!”

Robin winced at the pain that was still in him while his girlfriend was hugging him. “Uhh…..thanks…..Starfire…..” he managed to say while in pain. Realizing she was hurting him, Starfire let go of Robin, blushing with embarrassment.

Suddenly Raven spoke up, saying “The phone is ringing….”

But there was no ringing sound until after 30 seconds. The ringing of the phone came through a speaker in the recovery room, just as it did in all the other rooms so as to warn any Titan that they were getting a call.

Beast Boy was amazed at Raven’s psychic ability, even though they’ve been together for so many years. “Dude, how’d you do that?”

Raven just simply rolled her eyes at BB’s stupidity.

“I’ll get it!” chimed in Cyborg, then exited the room and ran down the hallway toward the Main Room.

“I wonder who it could be?” said Raven

“Probably another stupid reporter….” Beast Boy replied.

“If it is, then maybe we should follow Cyborg, don’t you think?” Robin said to BB and Raven before he ran out of the room after his cybernetic companion. Starfire followed Robin, her gleefulness back as she silently giggled to herself.

Raven and Beast Boy followed their leader. “Man, I wonder if I got busted for giving Slade the “finger” on national television…..” While saying this Beast Boy had a vision in his head of the reporter coming up on the tv screen, yelling at him.

“I wouldn’t doubt that one bit.” Raven replied.

In the Main Room of Titan’s Tower…..

Cyborg ran into the Main Room as quickly as possible so that he wouldn’t miss the call. He looked at the caller ID on the high-tech telephone, and the number was listed as LONG DISTANCE.

“Huh, I wonder who it could be,” Cyborg wondered as he put it on speaker-phone, so that his teammates could listen to the call if it was some psycho calling to threaten them.

As Cyborg put it on speaker the tv screen lit up, making him jump, since that rarely happened. Who appeared on the tv was a blonde-haired boy with glasses. The boy looked like he could be a year younger that Cyborg. Where the boy was at appeared to be his bedroom (dorm room at Kadic Academy), with a bed and the other usual things you would find in a teenage boy’s bedroom. “Definitely looks a lot cleaner than BB’s room” thought Cyborg to himself as he observed the boy’s surroundings that appeared on the screen.

The blonde boy began to speak. “Umm, is this the Teen Titans?” the boy asked while pushing up his glasses nervously.

“Yeah, this is the Titan’s Tower. Cyborg speaking, how may I help you?” Cyborg answered back.

As the conversation began Robin, Starfire, Beast Boy, and Raven entered the room. They glanced up at the tv screen, wondering who Cyborg was talking to.

“Cyborg, who is it?” asked the boy wonder.

“Yeah Cy, he looks a little too young to be a reporter,” Beast Boy said before getting hit on the head by Raven for the second time that day.

Starfire flew up to the screen, willing to welcome the boy. “Hello, future friend! What brings you to call us on this glorious day, even though we got beaten earlier…..”

“Uhh, thanks.” the boy replied to Starfire’s greeting. “Anyway, I’m Jeremy Belpois calling from Kadic Academy in France. I needed to tell you something concerning the two of you from last night.”

Starfire, Beast Boy, and Raven suddenly had guilty looks on their faces, knowing what Jeremy was referring to.

Beast Boy was the first to respond. “Does this mean we’re gonna get in trouble from the CIA or something like that for going in that virtual world?” he asked, scratching his head nervously.

Jeremy laughed. “No, don’t worry, that’s not going to happen, since we’re the only ones that know about it.”

Beast Boy sighed with relief.

“Wait a minute,” Robin began. “The authorities don’t know about it? Why not tell them?” he asked with concern, referring to the potential threat it posed for everybody.

Jeremy spoke, “Well, the reason why is because if the authorities found out, they would shut down the supercomputer.”

“Isn’t that what they’re supposed to do?” said Raven, raising an eyebrow.

“Well, you see…..there is a person by the name of Franz Hopper, the guy who created Lyoko. He’s still on there, and if the supercomputer is shut down he could disappear forever.” replied Jeremy.

“I see. So this Lyoko is the place that Beast Boy and I went to?” asked Starfire.

Jeremy answered back. “Yes, it is. I’d explain more, but I’m afraid that’ll take me a while….so I’ll just get down to the basics.” Jeremy began.

The Titans sat down on the sofa, preparing for a long explanation.

“Okay. Franz Hopper thought you guys could help us defeat XANA, so he…”

Jeremy was interrupted by Cyborg. “Wait, who’s this XANA you’re talkin’ about?”

“He’s a super-virus that controls Lyoko and the supercomputers that are currently running Lyoko. He was also created by Hopper for military purposes, but rebelled against him and is now trying to take over the world,” answered Jeremy.

The Titans starred at him with their eyes nearly popping out of their sockets with shock, because of this coming from a boy that was a year younger than them.

Jeremy continued, “Anyways, Franz was the one who brought two of you guys….umm, didn’t get your names, sorry.”

Robin stood up, pointing to each teammate and introducing them, starting with himself. “I’m Robin, leader of the Teen Titans,” he began going down the row of his friends sitting on the sofa. “This is Cyborg, Raven, Starfire, and Beast Boy.” When his name was mentioned Beast Boy waved at Jeremy on the screen with a big grin on his face. Robin sat back down next to Cyborg.

“Nice to meet you all. Anyways, Franz Hopper thought that superheroes might help us at this particular time, since XANA is planning something. That’s when he brought Starfire and Beast Boy to Lyoko and was supposed to contact them once they arrived. But unfortunately before that happened William attacked you guys. Sorry that you got involved with that.”

“That’s okay dude. We’d be happy to help you guys defeat this super-cyber-virus thing,” Beast Boy replied.

Raven popped in. “So this William is the boy that attacked Starfire and Beast Boy? Why?”

Jeremy began answering the Titan’s question. “Well, William was a former Lyoko warrior who got possessed by XANA while on Lyoko with the others. While in this stage he defeated them without effort and destroyed Lyoko. After that he's still possessed, buy at a greater degree. The other Lyoko warriors are my friends Aelita, Odd, Yumi, and Ulrich. You’ll meet them soon.”

Robin replied, “So you guys are coming over here?”

“I’m confused. I thought BB and Starfire went on Lyoko, but now you’re saying it was destroyed before that.” said Cyborg.

Jeremy continued, “To answer Robin’s question, yes, we’re coming over there because I want to investigate the XANA attack over there and the supercomputer there too. To answer your question, Cyborg, is that Franz Hopper created several Lyoko Replikas, each controlled by a separate supercomputer. The one your friends encountered was one of the many Lyoko Replikas that Franz created. I’ll explain more when we get over there.”

“Oh, I can’t wait.” said Raven with little emotion.

“Yes, I can’t wait to meet you and your friends in person!” said Starfire with enthusiasm.

“Okay guys, I’ll have to go now to my last class of the day. Tomorrow I’ll contact you again and tell you how we’re going to get over there, because we might need your help with that too. Bye!”

The conversation was over, and there was a death silence in the room until Beast Boy broke it. “Man, that cyber mumbo-jumbo just turned my brain to mush!”

“Dude, I thought your brain was mush already,” said Cyborg. Beast Boy threw a pillow that was on the sofa at the robotic Titan making fun of him. Cyborg dodged it, caught the pillow, and threw it back at BB hard enough to send the green Titan flying across the room.

“Okay guys…..” Robin began, playing along. “Better stop horsing around before I call you parents.”

“Hey!” Beast Boy shot back.

“Perhaps we should go out for the pizza. My stomach is talking to me,” commented Starfire.

“She’s right. I’m starting to get a little hungry myself.” replied Raven.

“Last one to the pizza place is a rotten anchovy!” shouted BB, already running for the door.

Cyborg started running after him. “Oh no you don’t!”

Robin, Raven, and Starfire followed their fellow Titans to go to their favorite pizza place. As they left the Main Room, their tv came on again, but this time the eye of XANA appeared, glowing an eerie red and pulsated like a beacon.

Meanwhile in France…..

“So, how did it go?” Aelita asked Jeremy. The five friends were walking to their last classes of the day.

“It went very well, actually.” replied Jeremy. “I told them that we would meet them tomorrow in person.”

Odd was dumbfounded. “I’m extremely excited about meeting real superheroes Jeremy, but how are we gonna get there in the first place?”

“Yeah Jeremy, it’s not like we have free airplane tickets or something like that.” commented Ulrich.

Yumi also objected. “Not only that, but how are we going to be gone that long without are parents and teachers noticing our absence?”

Jeremy replied with a smile on his face. “Don’t worry guys, I got it all figured out.”

“Whatever you say Jeremy, whatever you say.” said Ulrich.

They split off, each going to a different class, with Odd, Aelita, and Jeremy going to an art class and Yumi and Ulrich going to a culinary arts class.


Blooper #3
Slade was struggling against the prison guards that were trying to shove him in the van to take him away.

“Wait! Robin! I have to tell you something!” he said.

“I don’t want to hear it Slade. You nearly killed my teammates!”

“You don’t understand…..” Slade began. “I………..am your father.”

At this Robin went wide-eyed. The boy wonder fell on his knees and raised his fists in the air, screaming. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!”

Slade laughed evilly at Robin’s reaction before he was locked in the van.

Meanwhile in Kadic Academy the Lyoko warriors were watching these events unfold on national television.

“Man, that’s gotta be embarrassing, finding out your father is a psychopath on national television.” said Odd.

“Yeah, but I don’t even think that was in the script.” replied Ulrich.

Robin disappeared from the tv screen and walked into Yumi’s dorm room, tears filling his eyes. He grabbed Ulrich by the shirt and yelled, “WHY!! Why didn’t anybody tell me he was my father!”

Yumi got up and starting to pull the boy wonder by the cape, dragging him out into the hallway. There was a loud SLAP! Yumi walked back in, with all her friends staring at her in disbelief.

“What did you do that for?” asked Aelita.

“I had to slap him back into his senses, what else?” replied Yumi.

Atoragon
04-15-2007, 10:57 PM
So we really get into the thick of the story and the two groups finally meet. I'm a little skeptical of what I think Jeremy's plans might be, but I'll let this unfold.

amelia_tomashi
04-16-2007, 07:35 PM
Woh, nice! A few grammar issues, but, nothing I really care about.
Can't wait for them to meet in person...so, *still confused* there is a super computer in Jump City?

That blooper was the best so far!

Empress Amelia
Earths Sphere Unified Nations

amelia_tomashi
04-16-2007, 07:40 PM
OKay,
I totally just re-read that...forget the question! lol.
*scratches back of head*

KPTitan
04-24-2007, 10:37 AM
Don't worry, I'm still writing this story. Unfortunately the next chapters won't come until June of this year.:sad: The reason for this delay is that the new season of Code Lyoko will premier on June 4, 2007 (:D yay for new season!:D ), and in order for me to finish the story I have to watch the first few episodes to gather more info to base on my story (since this story takes place during CL season 4).

Once again, I am EXTREMELY sorry for the inconvinience. I will post new chapters as soon as I watch the first 4 or 5 new episodes of the new and 4th season of Code Lyoko. Watching these episodes will extremely help me improve on the story line, especially on how the Lyoko gang will get to Jump City and meet the Teen Titans.

Hope you guys understand :sweat: , I promise you that this story shall go on!:D

r/s4ever
04-25-2007, 09:05 PM
the story was a little foggy here and there...

KPTitan
04-28-2007, 01:24 PM
Completely understand you there. Personally the best chapter I've done so far was #2. That's the main reason why I'm gonna wait until CL season 4, so I can get a better idea of what's gonna happen in the next chapters.

KPTitan
05-11-2007, 11:58 PM
I will be writting new chapters on this in June next month, since the new season of Code Lyoko is gonna come out next Friday, May 18. When that happens I'll be able to get more info for my story!:D

May the Lyoko-Titan force be with you!!....lol

paranoidguy103
06-15-2007, 09:36 PM
Great story so far. The chapters are good and I like the direction your going in. Never did follow Code Lyoko, so it's a little confusing. You might want to consider putting a headline or something when you switch from the Teen Titans to Code Lyoko, as that was sometimes confusing to read. Can't wait for the next chapter:cool: .
Peace,
Paranoidguy103

KPTitan
06-16-2007, 12:35 AM
Great story so far. The chapters are good and I like the direction your going in. Never did follow Code Lyoko, so it's a little confusing. You might want to consider putting a headline or something when you switch from the Teen Titans to Code Lyoko, as that was sometimes confusing to read. Can't wait for the next chapter:cool: .
Peace,
Paranoidguy103

Lol. Glad you liked the story. But I have some news....If you read my current signature, I will be writting a new, updated version of the story. The reason for this is because after seeing the first couple episodes of the new season of Code Lyoko (now airing every Tuesday with a new episode), I went through my story and realized I screwed up on the storyline BIGTIME! It hardly follows with the CL season 4 plot 'n stuff like that.

Once again, glad you liked the story, and you're gonna like it even better when it's redone. I'm working on the first new/updated chapter as we speak.:D

amelia_tomashi
06-20-2007, 09:37 PM
Well get on with it KPT! I'ma waitin'!

lol

KPTitan
06-21-2007, 01:02 PM
Well get on with it KPT! I'ma waitin'!

lol

lmao. Calm down you highness.;) I'm halfway done writtin' it down on paper. It takes time to write a story that's worth reading.

*looks down at the bottom of the page* Whoa! There's Code Lyoko ringtone advertisements in my thread! SWEET!!:D