What exactly is a Destiny?

[Wolffriend87]

All righty, this is my very first FanFic. So do not make fun of it. Comments are greatly appreciated. WARNING! This is a Naruto Teen Titans Crossover so those who don't like Naruto should not read. I will be righting the first chapter as you read this, so it will be out over the weekend. I promise, so stay in touch. And for those wanting to read it, be prepared for a good story...


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[Wolffriend87]

Chapter 1

The air in the Tower that morning, was still... too still for the titans sake. Except ofcourse, for Beast Boy and Cyborg. As always they sat at the game station, every now and then a shout came from either of the boys.

"Dude! You can't do that! That's cheating!"

"No it isn't, your'e just sore that I'm kicking your butt!"

"You are no-"

Beast Boy never got to finish, because the second he started working up a comeback, his racecar flew off the track, literally. And then it hurtled into the ocean, and exploded in a flurry of car parts. An eruption of laughter from Cyborg got Beast Boy in a bad mood, so he arose from his seat and stalked out of the room just as the alarm rang.


I felt bad about just leaving a notice so I made a quick little chapter. Now please tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

"What is a child, but a manifestation of good will, only to be corrupted by the sin of temptation?"-Wolffriend87

[Wolffriend87]

Chapter 1- Part 2

"Titans Go!"
Robin shouted his signature saying, which sent the Titans into a flurry of activity.

"So what do we have this time, robbery, hostages, what?" asked Raven.

"The message wasn't very clear, said there was some weirdo in an area not to far north of the city and the cops want us to check it out. But the did make it sound urgent."

"Then why are we still here, put the pedal to the medal guys!"chimed Beast Boy, and turning into a green cheetah while saying so. Robin hopped on his R-cycle, and Cyborg started up the T-Car. Soon the Titans were all on their way to the call. Robin was in the lead, with the T-Car right behind. While Starfire, Raven, and Beast Boy (in eagle form) in the skies above them both.


Who is this mysterious weirdo? If you watch Naruto you may be able to guess. See ya!

"What is a child, but a manifestation of good will, only to be corrupted by the sin of temptation?"- Wolffriend87

[The Guitar Slayer]

First off, I'd say you have to condense these two chapter parts into one section and one post. Second, it's not a chapter! A few paragraphs does not a chapter make -- My general rule of thumb for such undertakings (unless it's a one-shot short story) is three Microsoft Word pages, at minimum.

Post more substance in each post. Multiple posts with so little content is spammy, not to mention the flow is choppy and not conducive to storytelling.

[Wolffriend87]

Im giving up on this fic for now, im not ready to write a big story like this yet. I dont think i can follow it up. so your not going to see this fic again.:shrug:

[Wolffriend87]

The air in Jump City was surprisingly still, as if it was waitng for something bad to happen. The citizens sensed the change in atitude... mostly because those with pets noticed their dog or cat acting anxious and nervous. More importantly though, the Titans noticed it as well.

"Is it just me, or is the city quiet for once?" chimed a green teenage boy, sitting on the huge sofa in the center of the lounge of Titans Tower.

"Is it just me, or is Beast Boy right for once in his lifetime?" groaned a goth girl in a purple cloak, sitting adjacent to Beast Boy.

"Good one Rae!" Another, larger, teenager that looked more robot than human laughed out loud, risking a glance at Beast Boy every once in a while.

" Yeah, very hilarious Raven, it was so funny in fact that I forgot to laugh."

"What was so hilarious Beast Boy? Anything funny would lighten up the mood of today's daily weather forecast."

A shorter, masked boy stood in the doorway of the lounge, with a serious smile on his face.

"Nothing, Raven just, in her own annoying way, said I was right about something."

For the moment, the room was silent, adding to the eerie stillness of the city.

But soon, the silence was broken with, "Ok... so who is serving breakfast this morning?"

"If Beast Boy is making breakfast again this quiet morning, I am afraid I am not eating whatever is served," the tall red-haired girl known as Starfire had been siting quietly reading an old book she had borrowed from her Raven.

"I'm with Starfire on that one, I don't get how you can force down that tofu stuff Beast Boy."

"Hello!Dude, I turn into animals in case you forgot, which means I dont eat meat! If I ate the animals I turned into... I don't even want to think about it."

"I get what youre sayin' but can't you just eat like vegetables or something/ I mean, that tofa junk tastes horrible and smells like soybeans that passed their expiration date three years ago!"

"Does not!"

"Does to!"

"DOES NOT!"

"DOES TO!"

"ENOUGH WITH THE SCREAMING ALREADY WOULD YA! I'M TRYING TO MEDITATE OVER HERE!"

Rven's outburst left the two titans staring, mouths agape, though the other three had no idea why. Maybe it was just because they didn't consider themselves annoying. Raven often yelled at the two whenever they started arguing about who made breakfast,lunch, or diner. Usually though the argument woould start up again once Raven left the room.

"They really get on my nerves sometimes, but then again, people don't change that easily," Raven murmered to herself.

She got up to go to her room, but suddenly, she felt the unerving feeling of... well, the feeling couldn't quite be described. All She knew was that she did not like this feeling. She turned towards her friends to see that they must have felt it too, beacuse their faces had gone blank.

The titans just sat there for a second or two, not knowing what to think. The feeling seemed to pass over for a second or two... but then the feeling was worse then before and before they could react, the Teen Titans blacked out.