The Truth

[earthshaker]

Chapter 1, one big family



Robin sat in his bed next to his wife. She was peacefully asleep, but would be waking up soon. True, she had a rough night with the kids, but it wasn’t one of those nights that would make her sleep later than usual. The alarm went off. It was six –o – clock. The beautiful Raven awoke.

Good morning, darling.” Said Robin to his wife. “Morning.” She replied with a yawn “I’m going to meditate, you want to come with me?” “No thanks” he answered. “I think
I’ll fix breakfast before B.B. makes tofu.” He added with a roll in his eyes. Raven laughed a little. Ever since she had grown up, gotten married, and had kids, she was a little more able to show her emotions.

As Raven meditated Robin made breakfast for everyone in the tower. His kids, where asleep as where the rest of the Titans kids.

They had all married off, with Starfire married a man named Alan, with four kids named Jesse, Rainfire, David, and Sunfire. Beast Boy had married a woman named Rachel, with two kids named Mary, and Kevin. Cyborg had married a woman Lisa and had one rambunctious fourteen-year-old named Thomas. Of course, Robin had married Raven and had four kids in birth order, named Rebecca, Kenneth, Anthony, and Tabby.

“Morning Robin” said Beast Boy, “What’s cooking?” he added without realizing Robin was cooking breakfast. “Not tofu!” half laughed Robin, Beast Boy looking at the pan. Realizing Robin was cooking, he said in a sarcastic voice “Very funny.” As he said this, Raven walked in. “Oops?” He asked. “Whatever.” Raven replied to his oops.

“Morning Dad, Aunt Estella, Uncle Richard.” Said Mary walking in. The Former titans had Raven put a spell on their children so they wouldn’t find out about their powers (or the powers they themselves would possess if they knew). Because of not wanting their kids to know, they had to use their birth name, except for Raven, because Raven was her birth name she picked Estella.

“Dad?” Mary asked,”Will you tell me a Teen Titans story? I want to hear about the Teen Titans, even though they where here Aunt, Uncle, and Dad.

“Then Beast Boy said, why don’t you call me Beast Man?! And Raven was like, “no way” and Beast Boy was like, “dude” Beast Boy loved telling stories about himself, especially when it evolved saving another team member. “Cool!” said a new voice; it was Rainfire, Starfire’s oldest daughter. She had been listening. Beast Boy was proud of himself.

At 9:00 everyone had eaten breakfast. The kids had gone to their own thing. By 11:00, it was lunchtime. “Mommy I’m hungry.” Whined Tabby. “I now, honey” replied Raven as she was putting some chicken nuggets in the microwave. “Just wait a minute while these nuggets cook.”
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All of the kids devoured the nuggets as if all they had ever eaten were crumbs. “Children, please, slow down, or you shall hurt yourself!” cried Starfire, at loss for better words. “Aunt Courtney” cried Rebecca (Courtney was believed to be her real name) “Rainfire bit me!” “RAINFIRE OF EARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!” yelled Starfire at the top of her lungs “GO TO YOUR ROOM IMEIATLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

“Rain I understand your young, but you hurt Rebecca when you bit her.” Alan told his daughter. “Im not young im 14!” She said to her father. He frowned and pointed towards the door” Fine” She replied hanging her head.

When everyone had eaten lunch, they went outside. The idea was to tire out the kids so they would take a nap. While they were sleeping, the Titans would go into combat

“Ahh” cooed Starfire. She was sitting under a tree with Raven, watching the kids play. Raven herself was watching Rebecca read under another tree. “She’s just like me.” Thought Raven. It was true. Rebecca was gothic, and her mother’s hair and personality. However she had her father’s deep green eyes. Her skin was a mix of her parents, but Raven’s gene was defiantly the dominant one.

Raven walked over to her daughter. “What are you reading, Rebecca?” she asked here daughter. “Edgar Alan Poe’s best poems.” She replied in a monotone just like her mothers. “Ahh, yes.” Raven said, remembering reading them when she was her age. “The Raven, Nevermore. I read them when I was your age. “Yes mother, I know. You are the one who sparked my interest.” Rebecca said, not even looking at up her mother. “ You know what, Rebecca?” began Raven, “You’re just like me.” Rebecca smiled to herself. She had always wanted to be like Raven, the Teen Titan her mother loved to tell stories about. “It’s true Mother’s very much like Raven,” she thought, “but Mother’s more able to show her emotions.” Little did she know that Raven was her mother.

“Stella!” called Robin, “In the den please!” “I’m coming , I’m coming!” Raven replied, slowly getting up from where she sat. “Is it time?” she asked “Are we really going back to the teen years?” she asked, hardly believing she was about to go hand to hand again. “Yes, Raven, we are.” Came her husband’s voice out of the corner. “It’s good to her my real name again.” Raven said, happy to hear it.

“Let’s go change.” Suggested Beast Boy. “Good idea, BB.” Cyborg replied, pressing a button on his neck. “Holographic Deactivation!” he said and he was good – ole’ Cyborg again. Beast Boy did the same. “You know what to do if a kid comes, right?” Robin asked commandingly. Beast Boy and Cyborg nodded. Raven slipped on her old uniform her blue cape and her black leatard she loved her old cloths in them she could be well Raven. Starfire floated up into the air breathing softley stretching her legs and arms she was thankful she could fly again and be in her old cloths as well as Raven. BB transformed into a kitty and prred he thought it was awesome to stretch out again.

And Robin was wearing his old uniform, Starfire flew down to her husband and she landed a kiss on his cheak and he whisperd in her ear," Be careful" Starfire blushed and smiled one of her radiante smiles and whisperd back in his ear," I will" Her husband smiled and she smiled back before she planted a kiss on his tender lips," Ready Titans" Robin said," Born ready" BB said cracking his knuckles. Jumping into the air Starfire



caught him and they flew towards the city and raven floating into the air grabed cyborg and flew to the city with him BB shifted into a hawk and he flew after the other titans. " MOM!" rienfire yelled ," SUNFIRES KICKING ME!" she yelled," AM NOT" Sunfire yelped," WHAT DO YOU CALL THAT" reinfire yelled running outside were her dad BB's wife and cyborgs wife were standing . “MOM, where’s mom" Reinfire said as she ran to the edge of the island," Oh um..." Alan looked nervously at Rachel," They went to look for...." Rachel looked nervously at Lisa ," They went to the city so that they could um.....by you all gifts for being such um.............children" Lisa said smiling nervously." Um......ok whatever i cant wait to see what they get us" Reinfire said running away back into the tower," Now they have to bring them back presents" Rachel said," opps" Lisa said slapping her head.

[earthshaker]

my first post hope u like tell me if u want more?

[Adrastea]

Firsties!!!

This is really great, but I have one suggestion:can you cut down on the kids? You have to think of the audiance as simmple minded, so too many characters too quickly become a pain to remember and stuff, and maybe describe the ones you keep a little better, so that we can imagine them.

Keep it up!!

[earthshaker]

i guess i'll try that

:rolleyes:

[earthshaker]

Chapter 2, a rock by any other name



“Starfire let him have it" Robin yelled. Cinderblock was disterbing the city and none the less recking it," AHHHHHH" Starfire yelled as she blasted strbolts at him. He screeched and knocked starfire out of the air," Azerath metrion zinthous." Raven yelled blasting a form of black energy at him he colaspesed on the ground and growned," nice work Raven" BB said," Anytime" Raven said placing her hood on her head." TITANS." All 5 of them turned aroung intently. Alan ran up to them huffing and puffing he said," Presents" is all he said. ," MOMMY mommy what did you get me?" Reinfire yelled jumping up and down," You will se mommentarly sweet child"

Starfire laughed kissing Alan. Rebeca sat on the couch looking like she didn't car what her mother had gotten her but still she sat tensly just waiting for her mother to come offer her, her present, but she didn’t. After minutes waiting she jumped from the coach and to her mother,” Um were my present” she asked intently. Raven looked up from the book she was reading her blue tender eye’s staring into Rebecca’s. As raven was about to say something Rainfire ran into the room,” Outside come quick “she yelled. Everyone ran out side only to be greeted with a swarm of rocks trying to smash them. BB had that look in his eye, every time he saw a rock he thought of,” TERRA!” BB yelled.

Raven through up her hands,” Azerath metrion zinthous” She yelled a huge black form of energy blocked the rocks from hitting all of them,” Mom?!” Rebecca said. She gasped. Rebecca started backing up in confusion stepping out of the force field a rock slammed her in the stomach knocking her to the ground,” REBBECA” Robin yelled running over to his innocent daughter. The rocks stopped flying through the air and they stood in mid air for a second and then they fell to the ground. Raven ran over to Rebecca,” Is she ok” Raven asked Robin,” She’ll be fine” Robin say’s staring into the now clearing dust. And there appeared a young Terra,” TERRA” BB yelled.

She was glaring at everyone and everyone was glaring at her. She had on the angriest face I have ever seen,” Well, Well, Well” Terra said. BB stared at her and she stared at him,” Terra you haven’t changed a bit” BB said,” SHUT UP” She yelled slapping him across the face,” Being made of stone for 10 years I guess doesn’t really change how you look now dose it!” She yelled,” But Terra how!” BB said,” YOU LEFT ME” She yelled,” BEASTBOY I loved you” Terra said lowering her voice,” I thought that you would free me BUT YOU DIDN’T” She yelled,” And now I’m back and your all going to pay “She said jumping onto a rock her hands turning bright yellow she screamed forcing several rocks to jump in the air and go flying towards BB. He morphed into a cheetah and

scrambled out of the way as they went crashing into the ground. Raven put up another force field blocking Terra from there few,” Come on Raven fight me” They herd Terra scream throughing rocks into the force field,” Raven” Tabby said,” Come on Raven don’t be a chicken FIGHT ME” Terra Yelled. Raven put her hands to her side realsing the fore field. In one instant her cloths changed from a small simple dress to her titan uniform.

Her eye’s turned white and she frowned Terra laughed. Raven flew into the air. “Raven no wait” Robin yelled,” Raven” Rebecca said. Rising from the ground,” Mom’s Raven” Rebecca said Gasping again,” Then that means your Robin” Rebecca said pointing to her father. Rebecca was finally getting it,” Then that means your Beast boy, and your Cyborg and that means you guys lied to us” Rebecca said,” Not now Rebecca” Robin said. “Come on Raven Give me your best shot” Terra said smiling a wicked irritable smile,” AZERATH METRION ZINTHOUS” Raven yelled. Terra stood there floating on a rock while a blast of black energy was flying towards her. Terra yawned and held up her hand a huge boulder floated up blocking the energy from hitting her.

Terra started shoving the rock towards Raven but the force of energy Raven was producing was blocking it from hitting her so it was a face of Terra vs. Raven. Raven struggled to hold Terra’s rock from hitting her but it seemed that Terra was to powerful.” What’s- the matter- Raven to much for you” Terra said annoyingly,” Not even close” Raven said pushing her hands farther into the air. Terra finally dropped the rock and jumped of the rock she was on just as the burst of energy slammed into it, it crumbled to the ground.

Terra ran on the beach below Raven watched her run with a frown un describable. Raven fired some shots at her but she dodged them with no trouble at all. She ran up the tree the to sisters rainfire and sunfire were hiding behind and did a back handspring and jumped onto another rock,” Man this is lame” Terra said folding her arms in disappointment,” I thought you would be more of a challenge” Terra said. Raven was grinding on her teeth and the other titans were looking at Terra with an angry look on there faces all except for BB who had a hurt look on his face,” Come on titans step up you know you want to help her come one all of you FIGHT ME” She yelled,” hold your ground titans” Robin said loud enough for Raven to here him

” Come on Beast boy FIGHT ME!” She yelled again,” Beast boy you know you want to remember what I did all those years ago don’t you remember come on BB I saw that look on your face you hate me show me your hate” Terra said. And that was it BB morphed into a cheetah and he jumped in the air unexpectedly for Terra and he slashed her across the chest. She screamed as she fell from the safety of her rock. She held her stomach little droplets of blood were dripping from her hand. She groaned in pain,” Beast boy” She said angrily getting up from the ground. BB growled he was still a cheetah. The hand she wasn’t clutching her stomach with glowed yellow and the ground started rumbling, he morphed back to his normal self as the ground started rocking,” Terra what are you doing” BB yelled,” Goodbye Beast boy” She said throughing her hand downward.

The ground BB was standing on collapsed under him and he fell through it screaming as he fell,” TITANS ATTACK” Robin yelled taking out his staff. Terra still clutching her stomach back flipped onto a waiting rock and flew away in a cloud of dust. Robin and the other titans lurched to a stop at the hole BB fell through. “Beastboy” Robin yelled down the hole,” DAD” Mary yelled pushing through the titans,” DAD” She said yelling down

the hole “ Dad” She whisperd. “ So when exactly were you going to tell us all that you’re the teen titans” The titans turned around to be greeted with a frowning rebbeca,” Look-“ Raven said trying to comfort her daughter,” No!” Rebbeca said steeping away from her,” You lied to us all of you lied to us” Rebbeca said,” I cant belive-“ Rebbeca screamed as a rock flew from behind her and slashed into the water. She ducked cause she thought it was Terra but there was no site of Terra anywere.

Raven and Robin gasped Rebeccas hands were flaring black, and another rock was floating in the air. Rebbeca opened her eye’s and she gasped to she dropped her hands and the rock fell she stared at her parents for a second and then she ran back into the tower.

[Raven37]

YES! First post.... :eek:- That's me when I was done reading the first paragraph. Personally, I'm not a Robin/Starfire fan, so I think I will like this story!;) Anyways, you did a pretty good ...job. It looks promising. By the way, you're new and I haven't welcomed you yet..... so, WELCOME!:anime: And please post more soon, or I will begin the death threats...:evil: (If you didn't know already, death threats are good. If you get them, it means your story is good and people want you to post more):D


-Raven37

[earthshaker]

if all the kids are a little 2 much to keep track of then i could just foucus on the most important kids, if you want.

:sweat:

[earthshaker]

ok

[earthshaker]

Chapter 3. The Good and the Bad

Terra sat in an abandon jail BB was out cold in one of the jail cells, Terra was relaxing on a chair as BB woke up annoyed and confused. He shook his head,” Were am I?” He asked no one. Terra was balancing her chair on to legs and BB took this moment to exsammen her, she was wearing a belly button shirt it was black with a T in the center a yellow skirt and heels she looked different to him,” Terra” He said,” why are you doing this” BB said. grabing the bars, he screamed as he clutched them sparks flew from his fingers and he slammed back into the wall. Terra laughed evily,” Why are you doing this” BB yelled again, “Because Beastboy I hate you why else” Terra said pacing the floor

“ But why take me” He said,” Because you ruined my life if I had never of met you I wouldn’t be here right now and I would still have a family to go home to and friends who care about me and, and now I don’t have any of that!” Terra said banging her fist into the wall,” Terra how did I ruin your life I mean-“ Bb started to say,” Being made of stone for so long I-I’m doomed to stay like this forever BB I’ll be 16 forever and you will grow up and I wont ever I’ll be here forever “ Terra said a tear flowing down her face she quickly wiped it away She sighed,” After I left my home they went to find me after a couple of years they stopped looking I miss them so much” She said sniffing

” Then go back to them you have no business staying here” BB said,” That’s just it I did go back but no one was there” she stood frozone staring at Beastboy,” There all gone Beastboy they all left me” Terra said ,” No Terra” Beastboy paused for a moment and then went on,” You left them” He said. Terra glared into his eye’s ,” SHUT UP” she yelled her hands glowing yellow the ground underneath Beastboy began to shake Terra’s eye’s ful of hate, She gasped and the slumped against the wall and fell to the ground. Beastboy stared at her in fascination,” ok what just happened” he said, “ Beastboy help-“ Terra said screaming in pain,” Terra waits going on-“ Beastboy gasped as Terra turned to stone right infront of his eye’s,” Terra” he yelled.

Back at the tower

“She hasn’t come out of her room in 5 hours” Raven said ,” Maybe we should go in a check on her” She suggested,” No” Robin said,
” She deserves to be alone “ he added,” No sighn of Beastboy anywere” Cyborg said staring at the empty computer screen with a worried look on his face. “ Please friends do not dispaer or friend will be found and Terra will be stopped” Starfire said trying to cheer

up the room but saying Terra’s name made everyone even madder. Raven slowly stood and walked into the hall,” Rebbeca are you in there, Rebbeca I’m coming in” Raven said sliding open the door.” REBBECA” She screamed. The other titans ran to see what the camotion was,” She’s gone” Raven yelled.

Meanwhile

“Terra!” Beastboy yelled. Morphing into a mouse and jumping through the bars,” At the record I could of done that at anytime” he said, morphing back to his arginal self,” TERRA!”

At the tower

“Were would she go” Raven said paceing the floor staring at the ground and then to the door that led outside,” I don’t-“ Robin started to saywhen the heavy door started to open” Rebbeca?” Raven said floating over to the door ,” Beastboy!” Raven said. The other titans came running over to them,” Terra” Beastboy said,” She turned to stone right infront of my eye’s” he said staring at the stone girl he was holding. “ She’s been gone for who know’s how long, beastboys obbsed with that stupid statue and Rainfire and sunfire wont stop trying to fly” Raven said. Staring at the two girls jumping into the air ans then falling on there faces,” SUNFIRE AND RAINFIRE STOP IMJMEDIATELY besides you two are doing it wrong” Starfire shouted.,” Well then” Rainfire said placing her hands on her hips,” How do you do it?”

Starfire stood from the coach and she stood between the two girls,” now this is quite simple all you do is think of something happy” Starfire explained,” And up you go but it has to be very happy” Starfire said floating into the air” WOW!” Rainfire said,” mom what do you think of” Rainfire said,” Well I think of my wonderful friends,” So if I thought of my boy- I mean my friend Eric would that make me” rainfire questioned,” RAIN” Sunfire yelled pointing to her,” Your” She said,” Flying!” Rainfire finished her sentence. Rainfire was floating just above her mother, Starfire was smiling,” Very good Sunfire it is your turn” Starfire said,” Ok what’s happy um….Raven” she said opening her eye’s she hadn’t moved beastboy laughed,” Ravens anything but happy” he laughed. Raven rolled her eye’s,” Ok um….my bestfriend Rainfire” She said,” Aww Sun that’s so sweet” rain said trying to fly around,” Its not- huh hey its working!” She said floating into the air,” AWESOME” Sunefire said,” Very very good” Starfire said laughing a little bit,” Now to fly around you just point your body the way you want to fly and you go” She said. Silence.” Um whatever” Rainfire said pointing her body to the ceiling,” AHHHHH” Rain yelled flying through the ceiling,” RAINFIRE STOP” Starfire yelled,” I DON’T KNOW HOW!” Rain yelled looking back down to the little dots that were her mother and sister,” Sunfire you stay here I will retrive your sister” Starfire flew up through the hole that Rainfire had made,” Um were am I going to go?” Sunfire folded her arms and she flew through the side of the wall and crashed into the wall of the next room,” AWWW!” She yelled,” RAINFIRE THINK THAT YOU WANT TO LAND ON THE GROUND AND YOU WILL” Starfire said,” I don’t want to land on the ground” She yelled,” You must” Starfire yelled,” Fine” Rain yelled back to her and suddenly Rainfire started to fall down ward towards the city,” Rainfire!” Starfire yelled,” MOM!” Rain yelled. About to hit impact a black figure flew up and caught Rain just as she was about to hit the ground,” Starfire gasped when she saw who it was.

[earthshaker]

chapter 3 i know its short :D

[Crowgirl]

Howdy Y'all!

Glad to see you finally posted this, and I hope you like your avatar. :D

Okay, I like the fact that all of them are married to normal people. There are a ton of characters, but that's not really a problem. We just need time to be introduced to all of them, so please do it gradually.

Also, I'm going to try and hellp you by comparing one of your paragraphs to how it would be punctuated properly.


Raven through up her hands,” Azerath metrion zinthous” She yelled a huge black form of energy blocked the rocks from hitting all of them,” Mom?!” Rebecca said. She gasped. Rebecca started backing up in confusion stepping out of the force field a rock slammed her in the stomach knocking her to the ground,” REBBECA” Robin yelled running over to his innocent daughter. The rocks stopped flying through the air and they stood in mid air for a second and then they fell to the ground. Raven ran over to Rebecca,” Is she ok” Raven asked Robin,” She’ll be fine” Robin say’s staring into the now clearing dust. And there appeared a young Terra,” TERRA” BB yelled.

This is what it should be like:


Raven through up her hands, "Azarath metrion zinthos!!” She yelled as a huge black form of energy blocked the rocks from hitting all of them,
"Mom?!” Rebecca said. She gasped. Rebecca started backing up in confusion stepping out of the force field a rock slammed her in the stomach knocking her to the ground,
"REBECCA!!” Robin yelled running over to his innocent daughter. The rocks stopped flying through the air and they stood in mid air for a second and then they fell to the ground. Raven ran over to Rebecca,
"Is she ok?” Raven asked Robin,
"She’ll be fine.” Robin say’s staring into the now clearing dust. And there appeared a young Terra.
"TERRA!!” BB yelled.


You just need to watch out for spelling and grammar. And don't forget punctuating dialogue correctly, that's actually what I'm being 'taught' about now.

Please don't take me as cruel, I helped you.....:crying:

But this has a great storyline, I love how Rebecca is going to have/has the same powers as Raven. And you paired Raven and Robin up, aww.... That's a nice change. But I'm hoping we'll have an explanation on how everything happened, eventually. I like how you've got more than one problem going on right now. Great idea.

Crowgirl

[earthshaker]

omg http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/demented.php u have to watch this so0o0o0o freaking funny but very long!!!!
:evil: :anime:

[earthshaker]

o and thanxs crowgirl your the best!!!!

lyl:anime: :D

[TerraWHRobin4]

wow! that is really good! i've known you for who knows how long, and i never knew that you had such writing talent! wow! you can draw, AND write! you're amazing! very proud! VERY!

[Sproxie]

*starts dancing around singing "Raven and Robin" over and over*

*cough*

um, :sweat: This is be pretty good, I only have 2 complaints, PLEASE watch out for spelling, grammer, and capitulization, and I think you should introduce the characters, and if you want, describe their physical features. otherwise, this is pretty good.

[Insecure05]

props for taking all that time to write it, what i dont like about it is the whole, star n alan and robin n raven thing, i just cant see that, but well yea good job:p

[T.T.Raven4]

*starts dancing around singing "Raven and Robin" over and over*

*cough*

um, :sweat: This is be pretty good, I only have 2 complaints, PLEASE watch out for spelling, grammer, and capitulization, and I think you should introduce the characters, and if you want, describe their physical features. otherwise, this is pretty good.
All that, especially the Robin Raven thing.

One add on: You are triple posting and double posting out of your skin. There is an edit button for a reason. Plus, no "ok" posts. If you're going to say one word, don't say a thing. Don't take it the wrong way, but you need to edit sometimes, not make a whole new post.

[Raven13]

omg http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/demented.php u have to watch this so0o0o0o freaking funny but very long!!!!
:evil: :anime:
Hey I ahve watched that!!!!!! I love it!! I love the part with the Zeeky Boogy Doog haha. O and the biggining when all there heads pop off. Alright I just wanted to say that........... anyway....... I like it alot. But watch out for spelling, grammer, and capitalization. Trust me you will catch on soon. Well I'm still amzed that Robin married Raven, and the Titans all live together. WOW this is going to be an amazing story!!:D

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[earthshaker]

Chapter 4 Not just a friendly face



“ Blackfire!” Starfire yelled,” Hello baby sister,” Un hand my daughter now!” She yelled her hand glowing green,” Not so fast starfire.” Blackfire said,” Come any closer and I drop her” Blackfire held Rainfire by the shirt colar and let her dangle beside her. Blackfire’s eye’s were smiling at Starfires,” Drop it starfire!” She yelled. Starfire hesitated and then she lowerd her hand,” There’s a good girl” Blackfire said,” Now no hard feeling right.” Blackfire said holding out her hand to shake starfire’s and dropped Raingfire out of her hands,” Oops!” She said laughing. “RAINFIRE” Starfire said. Starfire flew after her daughter,” Mom!” Rain yelled,”GRAB MY HAND!” Starfire yelled,” I-I cant!” Rainfire said trying to reach her hand. Starfire grinded her teeth and BOOM.

“ HOW DO YOU STOP” Rebecca yelled. She was flying across the water towards titans tower she flew through the hole that Rainfire had created earler,” MOM” She yelled flying into the wall.,” Rebecca.” Raven said running over to her daughter. “ Hello titans” Came a voice. All the titans turned to see Blackfire holding Starfire by the neck and in the other hand Rainfire by the neck. She through them on the ground and she folded her arms,” Ok I gave you what you wanted now give me what I want!” Blackfire demande,” What are you talking about!?” Robin asked. Blackfire floated to the ground and waltz over to the stone statue of Terra. Blackfire took out a bottle filled with a purple looking liquid and sprinkled some onto Terra. In a flash of yellow light Terra stood there as well as she had ever been. Blackfire then grabed her nouth and poured the liquid down her throat, Terra was then consumed by a rage of coughing,” What did you do to her” Beastboy yelled as Terra fell to the ground. Blackfire through the bottle on the ground and then began to explain. ,” You see I just so happen to be passing through the planet and I stumbled apon Terra and a little birdy told me Terra sad but a little amusing story and I decided to help her and well I found a this plant called zarnphe a poisonous plant but deadly when transformed into a liquid so I decided to try my luck and it worked Terra can be whole but only for a little while so I have to keep stuffing this down her throat every once in a while to keep her whole so with out me she would be nothing.” Blackfire finshed her speech and mouths dropped open,” Shall we go minion.” Blackfire turned around,” NO!” Starfire flew into the air about to put up a fight. “You dare challenge me?” Blackfire asked flying into the air ready to put on a fight.” Can we just go?!” Terra demanded,” Sure.” Blackfire picked Terra up and flew out of the tower. When they were out of sight of the tower Terra jumped from blackfires hands and onto an awaiting rock,” You know you didn’t have to do that I could of taken care of myself.” Terra said,” As if, if it wasn’t for me then you wouldn’t even be here.” Blackfire pointed out,” What ever!” Terra said. They approached a small island on the other side of the city and they landed on it. Blackfire pressed a hidden button and a hudge boulder covering a cave moved a side and they walked in. “ Blackfire!” A dark voice commanded,” Yes.” Blackfire questioned lowering to her knee’s,” Have you retrived her?” The voice asked her, “ Yes.” Blackfire said pointing to Terra,” Good now we can continue with out plains, isn’t tha right Terra?” The voice asked her,” Yes” Terra got to her knee’s and added,” Master.

[earthshaker]

i know its a short chapter but *shruggs) oh well

:)

[TerraWHRobin4]

YOU DID NOT JUST LEAVE!!!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

[earthshaker]

sry i havn't posted in a while been grounded anywaz here's chapter 5

Chapter 5 The decoy

It was beginning to darken the sky a mix of blue and purple, Rebecca sat on the roof her arms folded around her legs, She sighed,” Why” She thought,” Why me, why couldn’t I have been normal,” She asked herself. She now considerd her self as a freak a flying, Black magic, superhero freak! True she had always wanted to be like her mother but now that she was she wished other wise,” Are you ok” a voice came from behind her.

Rebecca turned her head as Robin sat down next to her,” Im fine” She replied hideing her face in her knee’s,” Look Rebecca I know that this news is new for you and is a lot to take in, but trust me you’ll learn to like it” Robin said trying hard to comfort her,” You don’t get it do you” Rebecca asked looking at her father,” Would you want to know after 15 years that you’re a super freak!” She yelled,” REBECCA” He yelled back,” Just because your different doesn’t mean you’re a freak!“ A loud beebing sound came from below them and Robin paused and stared at Rebecca and she stared back,” We’ll talk later” Robin got up and walked towards the door

” Is some stupid city more important then talking to your own daughter!” Rebecca stood up facing him,” I said we’ll talk later!” Robin said grasping the door handle,” Fine you can talk!” She said,” But I ..” She paused,” I wont be listening”. Robin sighed and walked out the door.“Its Terra” Beastboy pointed to the screen,” And Blackfire” Starfire pointed out,” Titans let go” Robin said.

Blackfire stood with a bolt in her hand pointing it at the bank keepers face,” Put the money in the bag and know one gets hurt,” Stop right there” Robin,” ah” Blackfire said,” The TeenTitans so innocent and yet so gullible” Blackfire said laughing evily,” What are you talking about” Robin asked lowering his bowstaff,” And I thought you guys were smart, but you cant even see a decoy when its right infront of you!” She laughed,” Decoy” Robin thought. He gasped,” The Tower, The kids”

He turned around and ran for the island,” Robin” Starfire flew after him as did the other titans.” Robin what is going on” Starfire demanded,” I’ll tell you later Starfire but we need to get to the island” He yelled jumping into the air and she caught him.

Back at the tower

The titans burst through the doors and they all ran inside,” Is every one ok” Robin yelled,” Were all fine” Rachel said. Lifting her eye’s from the book she was reading. Robin stared at Raven and she glanced back a worried look on her face,” Wears Rebecca?” Robin asked Rachel,”Oh She’s still on the-“ Rachel started to say when she was inturped with a loud scream.” RBECCA” Robin yelled running as fast as he could to the roof. Were he was horrified with what he was seeing. Terra with a rope in her hand and on the other end of the rope was Rebecca. Terra was flying away on the rock with Rebecca slideing on the roof behind her and was about to fly of with Terra. Robin ran for his screaming daughter,” REBECCA” he yelled again running for her. Terra only laughed, ”DAD” Rebecca screamed She went flying of the edge and Robin jumped after her only to miss her and go falling down into the ocean below. The other titans ran to the roof to see Terra flying away with Rebecca. “Robin” Raven yelled going to the edge of the tower. Robin fell into the waves below. Raven flew down to the water and helped Robin out ,”Rebecca” he choked,” She’s gone” Raven replied.

[earthshaker]

short again i know :D

[Raven13]

WOW this is getting good!!!!!!!!!!! It still amazes me that all the Titans are grown up! Very cool!!!!!!!:D The only thing I ahve to say is just try using paragrphs all the rest is WONDEFUL!!!!!

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Crowgirl]

I agree with what Rae13 said I like how a plot is developing. A couple of things though. One, are you using word for your chapters? If you aren't you should. It corrects punctuation and spelling and that junk. Second, the overall rule for dialogue is with every new speaker there is a new paragraph. So it wouldn't be like this:

” Is some stupid city more important then talking to your own daughter!” Rebecca stood up facing him,” I said we’ll talk later!” Robin said grasping the door handle,” Fine you can talk!” She said,” But I ..” She paused,” I wont be listening”. Robin sighed and walked out the door.“Its Terra” Beastboy pointed to the screen,” And Blackfire” Starfire pointed out,” Titans let go” Robin said.

But like this:

"Is some stupid city more important then talking to your own daughter!” Rebecca stood up facing him,

"I said we’ll talk later!” Robin said grasping the door handle, "Fine you can talk!” She said, "But I ..” She paused, "I wont be listening." Robin sighed and walked out the door.

“Its Terra” Beastboy pointed to the screen,

"And Blackfire” Starfire pointed out.

"Titans let go” Robin said.

See how much easier it is to read? Last, see how I've highlighted some quotation marks for dialogue? Those were all the ones I corrected and put them next to what has been said. This also makes it easier to read.

Other than that, awesome job!

CG

[earthshaker]

im stuck i dont know wat to write next WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH:crying:

[earthshaker]

I NEED HELP

:confused: SOME ONE ANYBODY HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
or im me twixychic96
PLEASE HELP

[earthshaker]

ok i know i havn't posted in a while sry i just dont have very good ideas for this story

forgive me:sad:

Chapter 6 A new day

Terra stared over the pale ocean and sighed," Something worng?" blackfire questioned her. Terra stood silent, Blackfire placed her hands on her hips." i just dont want to do this anymore!" Terra finally yelled," Aww well thats to bad." The voice cam from know were and seized Terra by her throat," Well i guess you will jsut have to learn to like it cause you have absoultley nothing else to do but serve me." the voice said laughing as A yellow out line burts from Terra and the voice seemed to be sucking it up as Terra screamed.

Blackfire cracked up and fell to the ground in laughter as she watched. The voice then dropped Terra and glared at the laughing blackfire. She stopped laughing and stood," Um i guess i'll go check on the prisoner!" She flew away.

" Fan out FIND HER i dont care how long it takes just do it!" Robin demanded to the titans,"Um Robin may we continue the search in the morning i feel it is time for the nap of night." Starfire said," NO!" He yelled," FIND HER NOW." Robin screamed at her. Starfires eye's filled with tears and fear," yes Robin right away." She cowerd out of the room while the other titans stared blankly at robin," GO!!!!!!!!!" He ordered. Everone flew out of the room except robin and raven." Were do you think Terra would take her?" Raven asked," I dont know." he replied," I just want her back." he walked out of the room to help the others.

" LET ME OUT OF HERE!!!!!" Rebecca comanded slamming on the wall and screaming her head off while she did it," SHUT UP ALREADY!!!" Blackfire comanded griping the bars," The sooner you shut up the sooner you'll be out of there." Rebecca folded her arms and stuck out her tounge. Blakfire spat back at her and walked off.

" Please we have been searching all night and we have not been sugssesful may we please go home now?" Starfire questioned," Not until we find her!" Robin demanded. Raven flew upto the top of a building and looked out over the ocean and spotted the island. " please m stomach burns for the tasty ness of ood shall we go now-" She was cut off by a yelling raven.

" My parents will be here any minute and then you'll get it all of you!" Rebecca said still standing at the bars of the cell," oh please the titans would never ever find this place. " Nobody move."

[Crowgirl]

Okay, I see a good plot getting deeper, especially with the "nobody move" line at the end. that was cleverly done. I would like to see what happens next.

No offense, but I can't give yo anymore advice if you haven't done what I've thought you should. There's really nothing more to be said.

Ciao,
CG

[earthshaker]

im sry i havn't taken your advice its jsut that i already had it writen and i just pasted it on.

SRY
:crying:

[Raven13]

Cool chapter!!! I liked it alot! The sences with Blackfire and Terra I like alot! The only thing I have to say is jsut watch out for mispelled words and captilization! I would suggest using Microsoft Word! Trust me it helps alot! Good job other wise all the Grammer issues!

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Crowgirl]

im sry i havn't taken your advice its jsut that i already had it writen and i just pasted it on.

SRY
:crying:
It's alright, we just can't help you as much if you don't listen.

[earthshaker]

^_^

new chapter coming up!
-_-'
it might not be as exciting though........................

[earthshaker]

Ok finally there's a new chapter sorry i havn't been osting on it for a while yeah a "while" ok well here's the next chapter injoy oh and in a couple more chapters you guys will find out why its called the truth haha ok i'll stop talking now.

Chapter 7 Dramatic rescue

Robin and then rest of the titans stood in the entrance of the "prison". Blackfire sighed," Figures" She thought. Robin charged at her furiosly. She flew into the air and fired some bolts at him but he dodged every single one and ounced uinto the air grabing her and lowering her to the ground. " Quickly breack down the ceil bars!" Robin commanded. They all paused," Um maybe we could just use these." Raven said grabing the keys to the ceil door," Oh......ok what ever just get her out of there!" he said still on Blackfire. Raven opened the ceil door and Rebbeca jumped into her arms.

"Hey boy wonder." Blackfire said," Could do me a favor and GET OFF ME!" Robin got up and Blackfire brushed herself off," Ok now were where we?" She asked," Oh I'd Say about......HERE!" Starfire yelled as she slammed Blackfire in the stomach, she then went flying into the ceil and Robin slammed it shut," Nice work team." Robin said brushing his hands of. Just then Terra rushed in ," Hey what's going on?" She demanded. Beastboy shifted into a bear he roared and picked terra up. She yelped as Robin opend the ceil again and Beastboy threw her in ontop of Blackfire. Robin once again slammed the door shut and locked it.

" You realy think this will hold us!?" Blackfire yelled at them as they walked out of the room," Hey get back here!" She demanded," HEY!"

Black at the tower

Rebbeca squeezed the braclets around her arm she always did that when she was nervous, sad, or mad and right now she was mad, she stil hadn't forgiven her parents for what they had did and she couldn't see how every one else could. She sat in her room as darkness curled over her,her hands felt like a thousand pounds. She stared at her black dreaser and her black walls and her black cloths. She couldn't help but thinking that she was a freak and her powers made her even more a freak. She stared out the window the night air was brushing through her room and made her skin tingle. Her dark blue eye's sparkled in the drak as she began to cry.

[Starfire5]

wicked...cant wait for more....

Did you use microsoft word?

Mya

[earthshaker]

yea i used microsoftword

[RavenofAzerath~]

TWO WORDS:

FUNKED UP:eek:

BUT ITS GOOD

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