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Allen CARR
01-08-2005, 06:24 PM
[also slight stuff, from Red-X unmasks story "Long night in Jump."]


Chapter 1-Sucide Squad


Robin sat in his room, clicking away at his personal computer. He had been trying to figure, out the idenitity of crook/one time hero Red-X.
http://screenshots.titansgo.net/screenshots/305/002.jpg

Robin, looked at all the possible choices, and came up flat for days. He informed the other Titans of his actions, because he new keeping secrets would lead down, an old road.

"Who are you X?" Robin wondered to himself.

Last time The Titans, faced X, he helped them beat chang. Since then, Robin has wondered, "does one good deed, make him a hero?" Robin pndered that question for weeks, each time comeing back to the same conclusion. Red-X was, no is a thief, and has to be caught. just then, the Alarm went off, and Robin new, thier was trouble in Jumpcity. Cyborg opens Robin room door.


"Come on man, we got trouble in Jump." said Cyborg.

"I know, so lets go then." replied Robin.

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The Titans headed, towards Jumpcity public bank. Thier was a break in, the thiefs had disarmed the guards, and blew hole into the side of the building. The Titans ran through the hole, and entered the bank. The inside, was destroyed, buy something powerful, and big. They walked into the volt, and didn't see anything, nothing at all.

"Well dude, where the crooks and stuff?" asked Beastboy.

"Quiet, something is here, we just have to look." said Robin.

Beastboy rolled his eyes, and the Titans split up to search the massive volt. Robin and Starfire, went together.


"Are you okay Robin, you look like a grstthlug." said Star with a smile.

"Im fine, just alitle tired, keep looking okay." replied Robin.

But Robin wasn't okay, ith ad been a week, since Slade old mask made Robin see him all over. It had been a week,......since he was "Haunted".
Just then, a noise came from the center of the volt, all the Titans ran to it. The lights in the volt went out,.

"Whats this about?" asked Cyborg.

"Keep alert guys." said Robin.


Just then, a single spolight went up, and standing under it was Red-X!!
http://screenshots.titansgo.net/screenshots/302/087.jpg

"Hello kids, mommys home." said X.

"Red-X......" replied Robin in shock.

"Yea, why so surprised, ive been doing work in Jumpctiy, since our last encounter. Who do you think, stole then engine thing, at Wayne enterprises." said X.


"But your suit has no power.." replied Robin with a grin.

"Oh, i made some lsigh modfications, its not as powerful as my old one, but it will do." replied X with a laugh.

"It still 5 versus one, so why must we bother wooping you." said Robin

"Well pretty boy, i have my own team now, the thier kind." replied X..

Just then, 4 more spot lights went up, and standing under them, are

http://www.titansgo.net/images/bios/avatars/jinx.jpg
[b]Jinx "Hello Cyborg, did you miss me."

http://www.titansgo.net/images/bios/avatars/cinderblock.jpg
CinderBlock "Smash!"

http://www.comixtreme.com/forums/images/avatars/Daredevil.gif
Daredevil "I fear nothing, so try your best Raven."

http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/downloads/avatar/Titans/Episodic/sis03.jpg
Blackfire
"Hello star, we have alot to tlak about......"


http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/downloads/avatar/Titans/Episodic/x01.jpg
"You see Robin." said X. "We are not evil, it just, some guys don't like to play the hero." Says X with a laugh. "You can call us, the SUCIDE SQUAD!"




TO BE CONTINUED................................................................................................

Red X Unmasked
01-08-2005, 09:59 PM
Nicely done, Allen.

T.T.Raven4
01-09-2005, 10:46 AM
Very nice, but I have a gripe.

I looked at the first four pages of this board, and have found 10 topics made by you, all not continued much. Honestly, you gotta pick a fic and stick with it. I like all your fics, but you have to continue at least one nstead of making 10 of them that are just dying. That's all.