Sisters in Fire (A Teen Titans Fic) [Archive]

T.T.Raven4

01-04-2005, 08:40 PM

(Wake me up)
Wake me up inside
(I can’t wake up)
Wake me up inside
(Save me)
call my name and save me from the dark
(Wake me up)
bid my blood to run
(I can’t wake up)
before I come undone
(Save me)
save me from the nothing I’ve become

~Evanescence~

Chapter 1

The sun emerged early in the morning, sending its magnificent rays over the horizon of Jump city. Raven’s eyes opened at the sight of the sun. She sat up in her bed and stretched. She stood by the side of her bed, and pulled on her blue cloak. She smelled food downstairs, and she heard her stomach growl. For one of the first times she could remember, she was actually hungry. She pulled on her boots and walked downstairs. When the doors slid open, the Titans were revealed. Cyborg and Beast Boy had their faces right in front of the closed microwave.

“Man, I mean it!” Cyborg yelled. “If your tofu so much as TOUCHES my bacon and eggs, you are dead meat.”

“Well same goes for your food!” Beast Boy shot back. “Grease Ball.”

“What did you call me?” Cyborg yelled.

“You heard me!” I called you a-

By then, Raven had tuned out. She placed a piece of bread in the toaster and poured a glass of boiling water for her herbal tea. The toaster popped. She placed her toast on a small plate, and sat down at the table.

“You guys won’t believe this.” Robin said.

“What has happened?” Starfire asked curiously.

“Some girl named Hawk broke out of a correctional facility downtown. They say she’s on the loose, and could be dangerous.”

The name Hawk triggered something in Ravens mind. Memories of some sort. The name rang in her head. Then, a specific memory rang out.

“I will not allow you to harm her!” A woman yelled. It was her mother Arella.

“Out of my way!” A demon yelled. It was Trigon.

Arella held a small girl with jet silver hair.

“Never!” Arella yelled.

Trigon struck Arella, and she fell to the ground. Trigon then picked up the small girl.

“Hawk…” He muttered. “Into your soul, I place my fury!”

Raven dropped her tea mug, and it shattered on the floor. Everyone looked at her.

“Raven.” Robin said. “Is everything okay?”

“Just fine.” Raven said.

Raven stood up and walked out of the room. Raven walked to her room. When she entered, she immediately shut and locked the door.

“It’s not possible.” Raven said. “It just can’t be.”

“Raven?” A voice said outside her door.

Raven opened her door only slightly. It was Beast Boy.

“What do you want?” Raven spat.

“You just seemed kinda freaked out. I just wanted to make sure you were okay.” Beast Boy said.

“Just…fine.” She muttered.

She shut her door, and Beast Boy walked away. Raven sat on her bed. She closed her eyes, and saw the familiar face. Trigon, her father.

“Raven…” He said in her head. “My daughter, Come to me.”

“NO!” She yelled. “GO AWAY!”

His laughs rang in her head. They faded, and he seemed to disappear. Raven breathed deeply, and felt her pulse. Her heart was beating quickly. Her face was drenched with sweat. She was soon overcome with a feeling of fatigue. She looked at the ceiling as her vision blurred, and she fell into a deep sleep.
~~~~~~~~~~~~

Short, yea, but oh well.

Aquagirl15

01-04-2005, 08:49 PM

wow that was neat. i liked it a lot. well now we know a little more about Hawk. i assume that Hawk is Raven's sister. but my assupmtions are more often worng than they are right. :shrug: so yeah more soon!!

Raven13

01-04-2005, 09:05 PM

I lked this first chapter alot.
Well ther is really not much to say but WONDERFUL!!!!!!!! O and it seems we have more secrects coming!!!!:D

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

TerraWHRobin4

01-04-2005, 09:40 PM

VERY GOOD! VERY GOOD! I LOVE IT!:D

Sproxie

01-04-2005, 11:02 PM

Great job, I can't wait to find out who 'Hawk' is.

But you know what's scary? That was almost identical to what I have/had in mind for my story.

Rae

01-05-2005, 12:44 PM

Great start!!

Can't wait to see where you go with this!

Rae

T.T.Raven4

01-05-2005, 03:23 PM

Great job, I can't wait to find out who 'Hawk' is.

But you know what's scary? That was almost identical to what I have/had in mind for my story.
I'm sorry! I just thought it up last night! Don't Sue!

Wow. So many replies. Thanks so much guys. I've made a pact to make sure all chapters are at least 1,000 words. That was about 500 or so. I'm so glad you guys liked it. I'll get next chapter out maybe tonight, or maybe tommorow.

Sproxie

01-05-2005, 05:10 PM

I'm not mad, I got a new Idea anyway. I just thought It was weird.

T.T.Raven4

01-06-2005, 10:19 AM

Oh simple thing where have you gone?
I'm getting old and I need something to rely on.
So tell me when you're gonna let me in.
I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin.

And if you have a minute why don't we go,
talk about it somewhere only we know?
This could be the end of everything,
so why don't we go
so why don't we go

This could be the end of everything,
so why don't we go,
Somewhere only we know?

~Keane~

(You know, I’m gonna rip off your idea Crowgirl, and try it out. If you guys think it does better say, but if it does worse, please tell me!)

Chapter 2

As Told By Hawk

Memories consumed me. I couldn’t think of anything to do but run. I had run for almost 3 miles now, and I was beginning to tire. I saw a group of large SUV’s about 200 feet behind me, so I decided to turn at the next corner. I turned, and saw a long alley. I had no other options. I leaned against the wall and looked down. There was a rat glaring up at me. I remained silent. I couldn’t make any noise. I could hear the cars approaching. I held my breath.

2 of the 3 cars passed by, but one stopped right by the alley. A man walked out holding a flashlight. He flicked it on, and was waving it back and forth looking for me. He would find me. I only had one choice.

I threw my hood on, and covered my body with my cloak. A sound of wind rushing was heard and I disappeared. My cloak had the power to make me invisible. God forbid how many times this cloak has saved my ass. The man pointed the flashlight right at me. I could see the light through my cloak. For some reason, I could still see the cloak, but he couldn’t.

“Nothing here.” The man yelled to the car.

Another man looked out and agreed.

“Let’s go.” He said.

The other man nodded and got into the car, and they drove off.

I let out a sigh of relief as I pulled off my cloak. I pulled down my hood and looked out into the street. I saw a giant tower shaped like a T. I had been locked in the correctional facility for so long that I can barely remember what it is, or who even lives there. I think it was called Titans Tower.

I pulled my hood back on, and began walking down the street. Then, I heard a yell.

“Hey you! Don’t move!” Someone yelled.

I gasped and ran forward as fast as I could.

“Stop!” He yelled.

“Get away from me!” I said stopping. “I will hurt you if I must.”

The man pulled out a gun. I had been tranquilized so many times that I recognized it as a tranquilizer. My cell negated me powers so I couldn’t use them in the facility, but out here there was no such rule.

“Azarath Metrion Zinthos!” I yelled.

A car lifted into the air and dropped right above him. The man dove to the ground, hardly missing the car. He fired the tranquilizer. It hit me on my arm. I let out a yell of pain. I felt the liquid flow through my body. Everything became hazy and distorted. I tried to stay up. I was able to levitate a wooden box. I fired it at the man, and it knocked him down again. He fired again. This time it hit me in the neck. It hurt so bad. I fell to the ground and saw I was right on the edge of the land and the ocean. I could see the reflection of Titans Tower in the water. If I could just make it…

I slowly stood, and jump kicked the man. He flew backwards and dropped his gun. I levitated it, and it cracked in half. I can’t fly, so I had to levitate a small metallic platform. It lifted and went under me. It levitated me to the land around the Tower. I looked up and levitated over to a window. I looked inside and saw a dark room. There was a figure lying on the bed, but I couldn’t make out who it was. The room was creepy. It had lanterns hanging from the ceilings and there were spell books scattered around. I opened the window slowly, and crept in as quietly as I could. I shut the window and crept over to the bed. It was a girl. She had a red gem on her forehead and violet colored hair.

I reached up onto my forehead and felt it. Right where her red gem was, I had a blue sapphire on mine. Is it possible? My sister had a red gem on her forehead. I looked at her, and then at me in her mirror. We looked identical. It couldn’t be possible. I reached for her forehead and felt the gem. Before I could come to a conclusion her hand shot up and grabbed mine. She jerked awake.

“Who are you and what are you-“

Raven cut herself off.

“Raven?” I said.

“Hawk?” She said.

I smiled and hugged her. I couldn’t believe it. I had found my sister. But she was more than my sister. She was my twin.

As Told By Raven

Is this possible? How did she find me here? Twin instincts I guess. What would the Titans say if they knew I had a twin?

“Hawk, how did you get here?” I asked.

“Well, I broke out of the correctional facility and-“

“Correctional facility?” I said. “Why were you there?

“The people here thought I was crazy because I was preaching about Trigon.” Hawk said. “You know, our father?”

I didn’t even want to think about Trigon. I just hated him so much.

“Look Hawk, you need to-“

I was cut off. Hawk’s eyes drooped.

“T-t-Tranquilizers.” Hawk muttered.

Hawk fell to the floor unconscious and I smiled. I’ll worry about it all in the morning. I grabbed a book and began reading.

Crowgirl

01-06-2005, 11:17 AM

Fiend!!!!!!!

Okay, first, you take my idea and use it (but at least you said it was originally mine).* Then you give us all this information about how Raven has a twin, but then you give us a stupid CLIFFHANGER!!!

WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US SO??!?!?!?!?!?!

Oh well, I'll get over it. Eventually. That was a great chapter, Raven has a twin... Raven has a twin....

Can't wait for more!

Crowgirl

*Just for the record, I'm joking around.

T.T.Raven4

01-06-2005, 11:21 AM

Thanks Crowgirl. I really appreciate the feedback. My main goal is to see If I can get a good enough fic to get at least nominated at the next Hall-of-Famer thingy, but I seriously doubt it.

I will have more tonight because I'm sick, stuck at home, and have nothing better to do. Day 2 missing school, DAY 9 BEING SICK! I HATE IT! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *Screen pops up and says "Please Stand By, Technical Difficulties"*

Raven13

01-06-2005, 11:48 AM

That was an awesome chapter!!!!! I liked the fight with that cop, it was very detail and I thought for sure that Hawk was going to be unconuious:eek: but she did not:anime: . So i see that Hawk is very strong, mentaly and phiscally. Loved the chapter keep writting!!!!!!!!!!:D

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

Crowgirl

01-06-2005, 11:49 AM

I bet that someday, the majority of us will be in the Hall of Fame for something....

T.T.Raven4

01-06-2005, 02:10 PM

There's a feeling I get when I look to the west,
And my spirit is crying for leaving.
In my thoughts I have seen rings of smoke through the trees,
And the voices of those who stand looking.
Ooh, it makes me wonder,
Ooh, it really makes me wonder.

And it's whispered that soon if we all call the tune
Then the piper will lead us to reason.
And a new day will dawn for those who stand long
And the forests will echo with laughter.

If there's a bustle in your hedgerow, don't be alarmed now,
It's just a spring clean for the May queen.
Yes, there are two paths you can go by, but in the long run
There's still time to change the road you're on.
And it makes me wonder.

~Led Zeppelin~

Chapter 3

As Told By Hawk

I woke up at about 7:30 AM according to Ravens clock. We didn’t have clocks in the institution, so it’s a new thing with me. I sat up, but laid right back down after I felt a searing pain fall through my head. It hurt worse than the shots at the institution. I looked to my right and saw 2 blue boots and someone’s legs. I strained and looked up farther. It was Raven. She extended her hand to me and I took it. She pulled me up and I tried to stand. I wobbled, but maintained my balance after a few seconds.

“Look Hawk.” Raven said. “I’m part of a team called the Teen Titans. We’re a group of superheroes who fight evil in this town. I don’t know if you’ll be able to stay. You’ll have to get the teams permission.”

I nodded.

“Let’s go downstairs.” Raven said. “It’s time for breakfast.”

Breakfast out of the penitentiary. They only fed us stuff that was drugged to make us think everything we thought was a lie. I hardly ate and I was able to hold onto my memories of my father. Raven and I walked downstairs together and entered the main room. It was huge! The TV was at least 50 times the size of the one at the institute. They had stoves, a refrigerator, a couch, chairs, it was all amazing! I looked around and saw 4 figures staring at me. I suddenly felt nervous. I was scared. I almost wanted to just pull my cloak over myself and disappear. I parted my hair out of my eyes and looked from one to the other. One was a girl with bright green eyes and long flowing red hair. She wore a purple shirt with high purple boots. Second was a short, green boy. He had short green hair and a black and purple body suit. Third was a large robot. Wait, he wasn’t a robot. He seemed half human too. What do you call those again…? Last was another boy. He had spiky black hair and a mask covering his eyes. He wore a red body suit with a yellow R at the top right corner. He wore tight green pants and black boots.

“This is Hawk.” Raven said.

Thank God she spoke first. I couldn’t get the words out.

“We’re…twins.” Raven said.

All the Titans eyes grew wide with surprise. The girl with green eyes had a look of pure joy on her face.

“OH RAVEN! YOU HAVE A TWIN SISTER!” The girl said.

The girl flew forward and hugged me with an air tight hug. I couldn’t breathe. My emotions took control. The girl was surrounded with blue energy and was throw backwards. That’s when I spoke.

“I’m so sorry!” I said. “I can’t control my emotions.”

“So she’s like you Raven?” The boy with black hair asked.

Raven nodded.

“May I know your names? I asked.

“I am Starfire.” The girl with green eyes said happily.

“Cyborg.” The robot said.

I’m Beast Boy.” The green one said.

“And I’m Robin.” The boy with black hair said.

I felt a little bit better now. I knew who these people were now.

“So what can you do?” Beast Boy asked.

I felt almost insulted. I was asked that so many times by people who came into the institution. I knew he didn’t mean any harm. I answered him.

“I can do everything she can except fly.” I said referring to Raven.

He nodded, and looked at me, like he was expecting more.

“Oh, and I can do this.” I said.

I pulled the cloak over me, and I disappeared. They all looked around to see if they could se where I was going. No luck obviously. They were missing me by a mile. I went up behind Beast Boy and tackled him. He yelled in fright. I pulled off the cloak and laughed. I actually think I might have some friends now. I had never felt better.

“Is it okay if she stays for a while?” Raven asked, mostly for me.

The Titans looked at each other and nodded. I smiled widely. The sofa lifted and crashed back down. It hit with such force that it knocked us all down.

“My bad.” I muttered laughing.

We all stood up.

“But where can I stay?” I asked.

The Titans only knew one place. Raven grabbed my hand.

“Here, I’ll show you.” Raven said.

The Tower was eerily silent for a while, like I brought up a weird topic. Raven led me to a room that was right by Beast Boy’s.

“Here’s where you’ll stay.” Raven said.

Raven opened the door and revealed the room. It was painted brown and yellow and had small lights all over the walls and ceiling.

“I’ll leave you alone for now.” Raven said.

The door shut, and I was alone. I walked around the room and examined it. The bed was neatly made up. There were shelves and everything. Everything was empty though. I had no belongings, so maybe we could get some stuff later. I exited and walked downstairs. Breakfast was ready. I looked down at the two plates. One was filled with eggs and bacon. The other was filled with a white substance, tofu I think. I grabbed an empty plate and scooped a large glob of the tofu onto my plate. The Titans all gave me weird looks.

“What?” I asked.

“You…Like tofu?” Beast Boy asked.

“Yea. I don’t like meat.” I said. “I’m a vegetarian.”

More weird looks. I shrugged and sat down. I sat next to Raven because I was still a little bit shy. I finished my food after a few minutes and sat my plate by the sink. Right as I sat down again, an alarm went off. The Tower was filled with red light and loud noises. The Titans sprung up and ran to the computer.

“It’s Dr. Light.” Robin said. “Titans GO!”

The Titans ran out of the room. Beast Boy stopped in the doorway.

“Are you coming?” He asked me.

“I’m supposed to?” I asked.

“Why not?” He said. “You’ll have fun.”

I shrugged and ran outside with the Titans, ready for my first fight.

Crowgirl

01-06-2005, 03:11 PM

AHH!!! She... likes... tofu...:eek:

Other than that, great chapter. I enjoy watching her accidentally do things, like lift up the couch. But I wonder why she was trusted so quickly. Yes, I know the two girls are twins, but after what had happened with Terra, it seems.... awkward.

Anyways, great chappie, can't wait for more!!

Crowgirl

T.T.Raven4

01-06-2005, 03:15 PM

I think you'd trust your brother (Since I know you have one) enough to let him live with you. Raven trusts her cause it's her sisiter.

The vegetarian and other things will slowly lead to things. I'm working on a relationship with Hawk and You'll just have to wait and see! and I want it to go really really well, so I'm developing it carefully. Next chapter out tonight or tommorow.

Crowgirl

01-06-2005, 03:45 PM

No, I meant how the Titans trusted Hawk right away. Yeah, I know she's Raven's sis/twin, but still.....

Raven13

01-06-2005, 05:13 PM

That was an wonderful chapter. Very detail and it seems Hawk and someone else are ahving a bit of a relationship (I wont say who) I liked it alot. I still have the same question that Crowgirl has .......why do the Titans trust her so much!! O well I guess it jsut ties in with the story and what may happen next!!!

Great Job!!!

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

T.T.Raven4

01-06-2005, 06:08 PM

The girl who is the one who never trusts anyone trusts the girl. Nuff said. If it wasn't for Ravens suspicions with Terra, she would've gotten away with so much more. If Raven trusts her, I would.

Crowgirl

01-06-2005, 07:17 PM

I get your point. But still, the story is called Sisters in Fire. See? Fire. F-I-R-E. Doesn't that symbolize something bad is about to happen between them?

No? Oh...

T.T.Raven4

01-06-2005, 07:24 PM

Something bad will happen. I promise it. :evil:

nevermore

01-07-2005, 01:14 AM

Every fanfic has a bad thing. Some worse than others. But then there is always something that makes the bad things not seem so bad anymore. Fire hmmmmmmm. Ah! Maybe it has something to do with Blackfire. Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. I know it's not, but wanted to say that. Wow it only midnight! That's early!!! I get hyper at night.

Anyway, I can't wait to see more of this fanfic. Keep writing.

Aquagirl15

01-07-2005, 08:14 AM

ooooooo i like this alot! i didn't know where exactly you were gonna go w/ the sister thing but Raven has a twin!!!:eek: hummmmmmm i think i might know who the relationship's gonna be w/. but i won't say anything. :evil:

tofu? man that's really creative. just a little thing Crow's gonna bug you with that for a longggggg time. she did it to me too, i'd know! (just for the record, i took an oath saying that the idea was yours, well not a legal oath but, oh you get it!) :D :sweat:

T.T.Raven4

01-07-2005, 03:20 PM

No Blackfire. Nuff said.

What was the bad thing Nevermore???

Thanks AquaGirl. If you guys wanna post who you think it is, go right on ahead. Thanks guys. I appreciate the feedback.

nevermore

01-07-2005, 05:19 PM

I said that every fanfic had something bad that happens. I didn't say that anything was bad I said that something bad would happen. I laugh at both of you! Crowgirl never bugged me about using the first person thing, so HAH!!! But now that I mentioned it, she probably is going to attack me...See ya!!! *runs away screaming head off*

Oh yeah...PLEASE POST SOME MORE OF YOUR STORY, I WANT TO READ IT SOOOOOOO BAD.

Crowgirl

01-07-2005, 08:40 PM

Crowgirl never bugged me about using the first person thing, so HAH!!! But now that I mentioned it, she probably is going to attack me...See ya!!! *runs away screaming head off*
Actually, I bugged Aquagirl and you at one point. However, I have been biding my time. *Puts on orange and black mask*

Nevermore, I have come for you....

Oh yeah...PLEASE POST SOME MORE OF YOUR STORY, I WANT TO READ IT SOOOOOOO BAD.
Pretty much. So, are you better? Good luck to you.

nevermore

01-07-2005, 08:45 PM

Actually, I bugged Aquagirl and you at one point. However, I have been biding my time. *Puts on orange and black mask*

Nevermore, I have come for you....
I don't remember that. Oh shoot, I gave away my position. Run away!!!!!!!!

I want to see more of this. Post more soon (Since you aren't on NOW) or else I will dress you in a costume that makes you look like me so Crowgirl will attack you and I will be safe.

Crowgirl

01-07-2005, 08:57 PM

Now that :^: is one of the best death threats I have ever heard.

I'm getting closer.... 'Tick tock'

Aquagirl15

01-07-2005, 09:34 PM

lol. hey you're the one one who got yourself into this so don't drag TTR into it. for the record, i'm trying to save you TTR. Nevermore and Crowgirl can get pretty brutal! yes post soon or else!!! or else what you ask? or else i will feed you to lions after i save you from Crow. :evil:

Sproxie

01-07-2005, 09:49 PM

*Gasp* So much Spam!!
Anywho, great Chapter! or... two.
Very interesting, I always wondered what it would be like if Raven had a twin. They seem very different though personality-wise. It's great, but I agree with Crowgirl, Even though she is Raven's twin, I think they trusted her to quicky. A bit akward....

T.T.Raven4

01-07-2005, 10:31 PM

Okay, I had a movie gig tonight, so no chapter *Cowers* I will have it out tommorow, cause I'm not busy, and It's Saturday.

Love the Death Threat Nevermore. Lol.

I'm glad you guys like it. Thanks a bunch!

nevermore

01-08-2005, 12:28 AM

Love the Death Threat Nevermore. Lol.
Anytime. You should be thanking Crowgirl also. She's the one who threatened me first.

You didn't post a chapter!!! Now I will send the wrath of convincing costumes to cover you and fool Crowgirl!!!:evil: Beware!

T.T.Raven4

01-08-2005, 09:05 AM

Okay, I had a movie gig tonight, so no chapter *Cowers* I will have it out tommorow, cause I'm not busy, and It's Saturday.
I just explained that. Sorry! Lol!

T.T.Raven4

01-09-2005, 12:09 PM

Ok guys, Double Post, but here's the deal.

I have been sick all week. I just got better on Friday. Dad was sick too, he didn't. It was his weekend to have me, but I wasn't gonna go because he was sick. Turns out he got better on Saturday, so I went. I'm here until 5 (East Coast Time, plus I'm gonna leave early so I can get things done) and when I get home, I have to do a page of Geography HW which will take about 30 minutes. I am 3/4 of the way through my chapter at moms house, and I'm not gonna re-type the 1,000 some words here, so bear with me, and I'll have more out by at latest 6 (My time) Thanks a bunch for your patience people.

~TTR4~

nevermore

01-09-2005, 02:43 PM

Patience? What is this 'Patience' that you speak so highly of? *TTR4 gets burried in a pile of bugs.* Go Iguana Man!!! Go eat anything that smells like bugs. Mwahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!! Okay, I'm not totally psyco anymore.

We'll try to wait. No seriously, we will. I can wait for his next chapter!!!
:D + :eek: = psyco!!!

T.T.Raven4

01-09-2005, 03:12 PM

I'm tired of being what you want me to be
Feeling so faithless lost under the surface
Don't know what you're expecting of me
Put under the pressure of walking in your shoes
(Caught in the undertow just caught in the undertow)
Every step that I take is another mistake to you
(Caught in the undertow just caught in the undertow)

I've become so numb I can't feel you there
I've become so tired so much more aware
I'm becoming this all I want to do
Is be more like me and be less like you

~Linkin Park~

Chapter 4

As told by Robin

I hope Raven knows what she’s doing about Hawk. I mean, what if her emotions run out of control or Hawk has Trigon inside of her too? What would we do then? I can’t really say no. It’s Ravens sister. I just wish I felt better about this.

We arrived at the crime scene. It was a small bank downtown. Dr. Light was threatening one of the tellers.

“Light’s out Dr. Light!” I yelled.

“Oh please.” He replied. “The party has just begun!”

“Titans GO!” I yelled.

As told by Beast Boy

I lunged forward and transformed into a wolf. Before I could claw at him, he blinded me with a flash of light. When my eyes re-adjusted I met a fist. I fell backwards and transformed normal. Someone caught me. It was Robin.

“Thanks.” I said.

He nodded and pulled out his staff. With a loud yell he attacked Dr. Light. He batted at him, but a yellow shield of light kept blocking him. Dr. Light then fired a ball of light energy that hit Robin in the chest and sent him flying backwards. Starfire fired a dozen of Starbolts at him, but he blocked them easily. I tackled him in the form of a lion and scratched at his chest. I hit, but he recovered and shot me with a beam of light. I hit a wall hard, and stayed down. I was out of this one. Then I saw Hawk rush up to me.

“You okay?” She asked.

“Yea.” I was able to mutter. “I’m fine.”

She smiled, nodded, and rushed off.

As Told By Hawk

After confirming Beast Boy was all right, I decided it was time to fight Dr. Light. Cyborg was fighting him in more of a fist fight than anything. Cyborg fired a blue beam of what looked like a sonic cannon blast out of his transformed arm that hit Dr. Light. He flew backwards and kicked Cyborg. Raven used her spell to launch a bus at Dr. Light, but Dr, Light obliterated it with a beam of light energy.

“It’s all too easy!” Dr. Light yelled.

Dr. Light made what seem like the whole city flash with light. I closed my eyes tightly. When I re-opened them, I could hardly see, but I felt Dr. Light’s fist connect with my chest. He then fired a blast of light energy at me and I flew to the ground. I looked and saw all the Titans were down. Damn this was harder than I thought.

“C’mon girl, can’t get up?” Dr. Light asked.

I jumped up, but he kicked me back down. I couldn’t move. He had used a light beam to wrap around me. I was completely immobile.

“A new Titan eh?” Dr. Light muttered. “You sure don’t seem strong enough.”

The memories struck me. I went into a flashback.

“You’ve never been strong enough!” Someone yelled. “You never will be!” It was my father.

I stood up but he kicked me down again. I coughed as the blood rushed out of my mouth. My body burned. It hurt so bad. I just couldn’t move. I fell unconscious.

“You’re just not strong enough!” Dr Light spat.

I lost it. I felt an emotion stirring in me. The emotion I was so familiar with. The emotion I hated. It consumed me. I knew immediately what it was. It was my father.

“Stop your pity resistance.” He said in my head.

He just seemed to take over. I knew it was bad, but I…I liked it. How could something so bad feel so good? I opened my eyes. Now 4 red eyes were visible. Dr Light looked in shock.

“NO!” Dr Light yelled.

I smiled with an evil grin. It seemed like a dozen black tentacles flew from under my cloak. They all wrapped around Dr. Light and pulled him towards me.

“NO!” He yelled again. “Please no! I give! I give up! Let me go! Not again!”

“Not strong enough?” I said. But it wasn’t me, it was Trigon.

Then I felt someone tackle me. It was Raven. I snapped out of it and looked at her. Sweat was running down my face. I was breathing quickly. MY heartbeats could be heard a mile away.

“It wasn’t me I swear!” I yelled. “It was-

“I know.” Raven said. “It was Trigon.”

Right then I passed out.

Raven13

01-09-2005, 05:42 PM

O I want to know what happens!!! Please post more soon!!!!! O I loved the fight sence, very cool!!!! Also I liked how you brought back something that Raven already had done. Great job TTR4:D

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

Aquagirl15

01-09-2005, 05:54 PM

i was thinking about why Light wasn't afraid of Raven to star off with, but i liked that a lot. it was funny how Dr.Light was all "no not again!". :D

PS: i love Linkin Park!!! nice choice of a song!

T.T.Raven4

01-09-2005, 06:03 PM

I love that song too.

I thought the Dr. Light thing would be funny. NOT AGAIN!

More...tommorow or next day.

T.T.Raven4

01-09-2005, 07:08 PM

There's a pain that sleeps inside,
It sleeps with just one eye,
And awakens the moment that you leave.
Though I try to look away,
The pain it still remains,
Only leaving when you're next to me.

Do you know, that every time you're near,
Everybody else seems far away?
So can you come and make them disappear?
Make them disappear and we can stay.

~Hoobastank~

Chapter 5

As Told By Beast Boy

We’d seen this before. It was just like Raven when she got mad. Robin was right. Hawk has it too. Dr. Light was freaked out. I don’t think he’ll be trying another stunt like that any time soon. Hawk was still unconscious. She hadn’t moved since she passed out. It was around 2:00 AM, and everyone had left but me. I don’t know why, but for some reason I just couldn’t get myself to leave. Around 3:30, I just left. I’d check back later. I left and went to my room. I laid down on my bed and quickly drifted off to sleep.

As told By Hawk

I jerked awake. I glanced over at the clock and it read 3:52 AM. I took a recap of what had happened today. I remembered the fight with Dr. Light, and then I remembered Trigon taking over. I sighed. I can’t believe I let him take over again. I’m so weak!

A chair next to me fell over. My emotions had caused it to move. I sat up in my bed and felt a sharp pain in my back. It hurt, but I got up anyway. I stood next go my bed and stretched. I pulled my hood on and walked out of the room. I needed to talk to someone. Beast Boy was the first to come to mind. I started off towards his room.

As Told By Beast Boy

I woke up. My eyes adjusted and I looked at my closed door, then at my clock. It was about 3:54, and I was starving. I jumped out of bed. I needed food. I inched towards my door and opened it. My eyes adjusted to the light and I walked down the hallway and into the kitchen. I opened the fridge and pulled out a plate with lettuce and tomatoes on it. I pulled out two pieces of bread and put a few pieces of lettuce and tomato on it. I took a big bite and sat down.

As Told By Hawk

“Beast Boy?” I whispered entering his room.

He wasn’t there. Curiosity took over. I walked in. The TV was left on and showed a screen blurred by static. I looked over at his un-made bed. It was a bunk, but he was obviously sleeping on the bottom because it was so messy. I looked around and something caught my eye. It was under his bed. I laid flat on the floor and looked at it. I reached and pulled it out. It was like a box. It was metal and shaped like a heart. It seemed homemade. I opened it and saw a stack of pictures. I pulled out the first one. It was Beast Boy. He was standing next to a girl. She had long, straight, blonde hair. She had a brown Tee-shirt with a T on the front. Her smiled glittered. I pulled the next one out. It was on a roller coaster. It was Beast Boy and the girl again. Beast Boy was throwing up on the side while Terra had her arms in the air and a broad smile on her face. I pulled out the next, but didn’t get a chance to look at it.

“Hawk?” A voice said from the doorway.

I whirled around. It was Beast Boy.

“What are you doing?” Beast Boy asked.

“I uh…I…” I muttered

Beast Boy looked at my feet and his eyes narrowed. The question popped out of my mouth.

“Who is she?” I asked.

A frown crept onto Beast Boy’s face.

“It’s okay.” I said. “You don’t have to-

“No.” He said. “I think it’s time someone knows how I feel.”

Beast Boy sat on his bed and I sat next to him.

“Her name was Terra.” Beast Boy said. “She was my best friend. Maybe more. She had powers to move earth. We found her and brought her back here. She made me promise never to tell anyone her secret; that she couldn’t control her powers. I never did, but Robin guessed. He told her and she left before I could explain. A few days later she came back, but not like before. Something was different. She met one of our Arch nemesis’s; Slade. He taught her to control her powers better. We didn’t know. I brought her out for a while. We went to a carnival thing, and we had so much fun. I promised I’d always be her friend, and then Slade appeared there. He told us what Terra had done. I kind of lost it. I told her she doesn’t have any friends. She went with Slade, she betrayed us. She defeated us and Slade took over. We survived though. We fought her off and she ran to Slade. Slade betrayed her. Terra tried to walk away, but the neural interface suit she wore controlled her and almost made her kill me. She took control though. She attacked Slade. She made a volcano under us erupt. The only way to stop it was for her to stay there with it. Slade fell into the lava and supposedly died, but at a price. Terra was turned to stone, but with hope of someday being brought back. I miss her so much.”

A tear rolled down Beast Boy’s cheek.

“I loved her.” He said.

“Oh Beast Boy.” I said sympathetically.

I hugged him tightly.

“I’m sorry.” I said.

He pulled back.

“It’s okay.” He said trying to smile. “Look, you should go to bed.”

I nodded.

“Good night.” I said walking out of the room.

I closed his door and walked down the hallway. He had just opened up his heart to me. It made me fell good inside that he trusted and cared enough to tell me how he felt. By now it was about 5:00 AM. I walked into the living room and flicked on the TV, with so many thoughts consuming me.
****************************

I know I switched Point of views a lot, but I think that's okay. Hope you guys liked it.

Aquagirl15

01-09-2005, 07:23 PM

yes!!!! i was right... um sorry little moment there. at least i think i was right. not tellin about what, don't wanna spoil it. anyway i really liked that chapter although it was confusing w/ the POV changes. but it's ok, cause the chapter was really emotional, and i think that's a good thing. :shrug: right post soon!

T.T.Raven4

01-09-2005, 07:44 PM

I was trying to from the thing with Terra the best I could, and I gues I did okay. :shrug:

Oh c'mon I think it's way past obvious now Aquagirl.

Glad you liked. I will have more tommorow as long as I'm not piled with HW.

T.T.Raven4

01-10-2005, 07:40 PM

Lights go down it’s dark
The jungle is your head can’t rule your heart
I’m feeling so much stronger than before
Your eyes are wide
And though your soul it can’t be bought
Your mind can wonder

Hello, hello... (Hola)
I'm at a place called Vertigo (dónde estás?)
It’s everything I wish I didn’t know
Except you give me something...
I can feel, feel.

~U2~

Chapter 6

As Told By Cyborg

Can you say the most boring day ever!? No robberies, no heists, nothing! For one of the first times, I wish a villain would attack somewhere so we had at least something to do. The clock neared around 10:27 PM, and everyone seemed ready for bed.

“Guys,” I said. “I’m hitting the sack.”

“Night Cy.” Beast Boy said.

Beast Boy yawned.

“And I’m right after you.” He said. “Good night guys.”

As Told By Hawk

Everyone went to bed. It wasn’t like the day was tiring or anything, it’s just when you lay around all day, I guess you just get tired by nature. I followed after everyone. I was tired. I walked down the long hallway into my room. I had done a little re-decorating. The walls were a shining grey. I had oil lamps hanging from the ceiling. I despised lights, mainly because whenever we had tests or anything like that done to us, there was always that lone light shining in your face, and you grow to hate it. I blew out all the lamps except one, just for the little light. I didn’t like too much light, but I wasn’t the biggest adorer of darkness either. I pulled off my cloak and lay in my bed. I pulled the covers onto my body and closed my eyes. Sleep overcame me, and I fell asleep. The second I seemed to close my eyes, a dream appeared in my head.

I was walking in a desolate place. There was something familiar about this place. I looked around and tried to remember. Wait…I knew where I was. It was Azarath. A sudden fear overcame me. If I was in Azarath, I was with-

All of the sudden a figure rose above everything. He was huge. He had four blazing orange eyes. He had long, streaming white hair and red skin. I recognized him immediately. Trigon. I clenched my fists and they were shrouded in a blue aura.

“Well if it isn’t my daughter.” He spat.

“Well if it isn’t my so called father!” I shot back.

My eyes were blazing a bright blue. I was ready to kick his ass.

“Calm child.” He said. “I mean no harm.”

“And I should believe a filthy liar like you? I yelled.

“I only give you a simple offer.” Trigon said. “An offer you’d be smart to accept. But first, I have a question.”

I crossed my arms waiting.

“Why do you resist me?” He asked.

“Because you’re evil!” I spat in rage. “You treated Raven and I like dirt! I never trusted you, and never will!”

“Are you so sure you will not?” Trigon said.

He was just too calm. What was he doing?

“Yes.” I said. “I will NEVER give in to you!”

“I give you one last chance.” Trigon said. “You will understand that you should have joined me if you don’t. You will suffer for your actions.”

“NO!” I yelled. “GO AWAY! GO AWAY FROM ME! BEGONE!”

Trigon laughed a sinister laugh.

“Well, if you won’t listen, maybe he will!” Trigon said.

I knew who he meant immediately. Beast Boy. Oh what had I done? Trigon read my thoughts; He knew how I felt.

“No!” I yelled. “Please!”

He disappeared in a flash or red smoke, and I woke up.

“A dream.” I said.

“Or was it?” A voice said in front of me.

It looked just like me, but different. It had a red cloak and four shining red eyes. It was my father. I leaped up and tried to tackle it to the ground. It dodged. I rolled up, but met a kick to my stomach. I groaned and fell to my knees. 4 red beams shot out of its eyes and blasted me. It hurt worse than anything I could ever think of. I let out a scream of sheer pain. The beams let up and I fell to the ground. The Titans rushed in.

“Hawk?” I heard Robin say.

They all looked at me and at Trigon. Raven’s eyes widened.

“Father.” Raven spat.

“Raven.” He replied with a smirk.

Raven lunged at Trigon, but he seemed to disappear. A beam of red light fired at Beast Boy. It hit him in the chest, and he fell over. He clutched his chest tightly. He let out a series of groans in pain. All the Titans rushed over to him.

“Beast Boy?” Robin said.

Beats Boy rolled around. He let out one loud scream, and it all ended. There was an eerie silence. Beast Boy’s eyes remained closed, but he stood.

“Beast Boy?” Robin asked again.

Silence.

“You okay man?” Cyborg asked him.

No response.

“Beast Boy?” I muttered trying to stand.

His eyes hot open, but it wasn’t normal. They weren’t the 2 eyes we were all used to seeing. There were four eyes, blazing red.

“No.” I muttered. “Please no.”

Beast Boy smiled. He raised his arms and he was surrounded by a red aura. It exploded and we were all sent flying backwards. I opened my eyes slightly and saw all the Titans unconscious around me. I looked up at Beast Boy.

“You have a choice Hawk.” Beast Boy said, but it was Trigon speaking through him. “You can turn your life from me, but the changeling dies. I will kill him right now. At this very moment.

“Please don’t.” I muttered.

“Give me complete control.” Beast Boy said. “No resistance and he lives.”

I saw his hand extended to me. I stared at it for what seemed like forever. I looked into his eyes. He smirked. My hand trembled, but I grabbed his hand. I felt him enter me. I felt his evil, his power rushing into me. I groaned. I opened my eyes, but I didn’t do it. It was Trigon. I looked up at Beast Boy and saw his eyes were still red.

“WHAT!?” I screamed inside of me. “Why isn’t he released?”

I heard Trigon inside me.

“Now releasing him wasn’t part of the deal now was it?” Trigon asked.

I growled.

“I’ll kill you!” I yelled.

I rushed at him, but was stopped by a shield like object. I couldn’t get to him. He was in complete control, and there wasn’t a thing I could do about it.

Aquagirl15

01-10-2005, 08:15 PM

Crowgirl

01-10-2005, 08:26 PM

ugh, stupid cliffhanger... apart from that i really liked it. it was just like Trigon to do something like that, my only complaint is that he seemed too much like Slade, or was that what you were going for? anyway the plot thickens....'Nuff said.

BUt just wondering, this means Trigon has complete control over BB? Oh no....

Does anybody know what 'Episode 257-294' is? I need to know....

T.T.Raven4

01-10-2005, 08:33 PM

Um...CrowGirl episode 247-294 of what?

AquaGirl, The Slade thing, I guess you do have a point, but I never even thought of that.

Yes Trigon has control of BB.

Sproxie

01-10-2005, 08:44 PM

'Nuff said.

BUt just wondering, this means Trigon has complete control over BB? Oh no....

Does anybody know what 'Episode 257-294' is? I need to know....pretty much...
I havent figured that out either... I wanna know what it means too.

Crowgirl

01-10-2005, 08:45 PM

It's a new episode of Teen Titans coming out on Monday at the end of a marathon. No clue what it is though.....

T.T.Raven4

01-10-2005, 08:47 PM

Um...But why is it in the 200's? There's only been like...30 episodes. New episode on a Monday? So confusing.

Crowgirl

01-11-2005, 03:26 PM

No, it's called 'Episode 257-294' or whatever it is. I can't find it anywhere!!!!:crying:

And also, since there's is a marathon of Static Shock and Teen Titans on Monday, the marathon is ending with a new episode of Teen Titans called 'Episode 257-294' or whatever it is. But Titans East Part 1 airs on Saturday, so....

Huzzah!!

T.T.Raven4

01-11-2005, 08:59 PM

I'm not finding it in the episode guide...

Raven13

01-12-2005, 04:49 PM

Wonderful, I liked it alot!!!!! The Trigon fight with Trigon being in BB that is freaking awesome (well cool but bad:sweat: ) haha:D

Hey I want ot watch that episode thing looks cool!!!!!

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

Crowgirl

01-12-2005, 05:14 PM

Just found it!!

'Episode 254-297' is the new new for 'Don't Touch That Dial', where Control Freak comes back. I always thought he was pathetic.... I bet he puts them in a TV or something.

Anyway, when are you going to post again?

T.T.Raven4

01-12-2005, 05:18 PM

OH! It was re-named! Okay. I get it.

Um...Not tonight. I have hockey practice, but tommorow I will.

Crowgirl

01-12-2005, 05:19 PM

Stupid hockey...... Keeps authors away from stories..... Boo....

Aquagirl15

01-12-2005, 05:49 PM

exactly! ok so there's a Teen Titans marathon on Monday followed by the new episode called 'Don't Touch That Dial'. got it stored in my memory until futher notice, or until Monday.

yeah post more soon! you left a huge cliffhanger and now won't post more! :crying:

T.T.Raven4

01-12-2005, 06:19 PM

I'm also trying to think of ideas. I'm trying to make a really good fic, so I am spending some time coming up with ideas. Give me some time people.

Hockey is really important to me, so I can't miss. It's something I really like, so It comes first.

:evil: LIVE WITH THE WAIT! :evil:

T.T.Raven4

01-13-2005, 07:39 PM

'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

You've gone away, you don't feel me, anymore

The worst is over now and we can breathe again
I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain

'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don't feel like I am strong enough
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away

~Seether & Amy Lee~

Chapter 7
In the Mind of Hawk

I was defeated. I was weak and pathetic. I was so GULLIBLE! I should’ve known Trigon would pull a stunt like that. I’ll kill that bastard. I will destroy him no matter what it takes. He had control of me and Beast Boy. I thought I was bad enough. I had betrayed everyone. I had let everyone down. I could see what was happening, but I couldn’t do anything about it. I felt my father overwhelm me. He was so powerful. Beast Boy was thrashing all the Titans around. They seemed beaten. They had all just woken up from unconsciousness, so they were beaten before it started.

I saw Raven float into the air. If anyone could save us, it was her. Good luck Raven. You’re going to need it.

As Told By Raven

I built up energy for one of my more powerful spells. I think I can expel Trigon from Beast Boy and Hawk, but it may fail. I have to try. I hovered into the air and crossed by hands over my chest. I saw an aura of black energy surround me. I tried relentlessly to work the spell. It would take everything out of me.

I closed my eyes tightly and let out a piercing scream. Black energy crackled around me. It formed a sphere around me. I placed my hands in front of me, and the light pushed outward. Beast Boy and Hawk who were busy with the other Titans suddenly glared in my direction. The black aura approached Beast Boy. As it surrounded him, an aura or red energy surrounded him. He let out a small yell and the aura of red energy cracked slightly. After a few seconds the aura shattered and Beast Boy fell to the ground. The aura soon surrounded Hawk. The same red aura surrounded her, but showed no sings of shattering.

I lost control. The black energy faded and Hawk still stood with the four red eyes blazing. I was able to free Beast Boy, but not Hawk. Hawk fired a beam of blue energy at me and it hit me square in the chest. I flew backwards and hit a wall. I felt someone grab my shoulder. I opened my eyes just wide enough to see Robin.

“You did fine.” He said with a smile.

I nodded slightly and slipped into blackness.

As Told By Beast Boy

Was I out? I asked myself. Was I free from his control? I moved my arm and realized I was free of his control. I had to help. I forced myself to get up, despite the pain. I saw Cyborg firing his sonic cannon, but it was all pointless. He missed all of his shots and Hawk kicked him down. Robin threw a series of exploding disks at her, but she used her powers to fire them right back and explode right on him. Starfire fired a barrage of starbolts and some connected, but Hawk fired back a ball of black energy and hit Starfire, knocking her next to Robin. She was just thrashing us around.

I tackled her.

“Hawk!” I yelled. “You need to snap out of it.”

She fired a beam out of her eyes and I fell backwards. She loomed over me.

“I don’t need to snap out of anything.” She spat. “I wanted to be this way, I wanted to go with Trigon.”

The words were so familiar. It’s what Terra told Robin during their battle. I shook the thought away.

“Liar.” I spat. “I know that’s not you Hawk. You have to fight.”

She smirked.

“Your attempts are in vain.” She said.

And it felt like she was right.

In the Mind of Hawk

He was talking in my place. I wanted to break free but I couldn’t.

“How should he die?” A voice rang.

I quickly turned around and saw Trigon again.

“Please.” I pleaded. “You said you wouldn’t kill him.”

Trigon laughed.

I let out a loud scream. The scream echoed in my head. I felt myself floating in an endless void, my pain and agony shadowing everything else in the world. My scream sounded like it could break the sound barrier. It didn’t break the sound barrier, but it broke another. I saw the red shield around my father shatter. It couldn’t withstand all my emotions. I smirked and lunged at Trigon.

As told By Beast Boy

Hawk held her head and closed her eyes tightly. She knelt on the ground and let out a small cry. I rushed over to her. I lifted up her head.

“Hawk, are you okay?” I asked.

She just groaned. I laid her down.

“You’re going to be fine.” I said. “I promise.”

For the first time in a while, I felt that I really cared about someone. I really cared about her. It was something I had refused since I lost Terra, but it seems like some things can’t be held in.

In the Mind of Hawk

I fought on with Trigon. I tackled him and brought him to the ground. I let loose all of the fury that rested deep in my heart. Trigon threw me off, but I kicked him straight in the face. He recovered and grabbed me. He held me tightly in the air. I smirked.

“See you in hell.” I spat.

I opened a portal behind him and he let out a loud yell. He was sucked into the vortex and he disappeared. The portal closed and I sighed. I felt myself regain control. I took over.

As Told By Hawk (In the real world)

I awoke in Beast Boys room. That’s where the fight took place. I only saw Beast Boy. Eventually Raven and the others approached too.

“You okay?” Robin asked.

I didn’t answer.

“Hawk?” Raven asked.

Nothing.

“Are you okay?” Beast Boy asked.

I nodded and sat up.

“Guys, I need some time alone.” I muttered with my voice breaking.

I stood up and walked out of the room with all the Titans gazes transfixed on me. I walked into my room and sat down on my bed. I was a menace. I brought Trigon back and I brought him upon everyone. Trigon wasn’t gone. He’d be back. I felt tears running down my face. The, I heard my door open. I gazed at the doorway and saw Beast Boy. I hid my face.

“Please,” I said. “Go away.”

“Hawk, I just want to help.” He said.

Before I could protest again he sat next to me. I turned away.

“Why are you upset?” He asked.

“Because I brought my father among you all and could have killed you all.” I shot back.

“But you didn’t.” He said. “You’re fine. We beat him.”

“But what about next time?” I asked.

He was silent.

“He’ll be back.” I said.

“Hawk-“

“Just go.” I said.

He sighed and stood up.

“I’ll see you tomorrow.” He said.

I didn’t reply or anything. I just laid down and closed my eyes.

Crowgirl

01-13-2005, 08:07 PM

That. Was. Brilliant.

I loved how Hawk feels guilty, and how Raven tried to help, but couldn't. However, I thought it was kind of well, awkward how Trigon was defeated in one chapter (Two if you count his entry). I think you should have made it last longer.

CG

P.S. To nevermore, I will stop hunting you. On one condition.....

T.T.Raven4

01-13-2005, 08:09 PM

Trigon is not Gone. (Hey, Rhyems, Lol) I have another plot in this too. It is not over. He WILL be back, really really soon.

Crowgirl

01-13-2005, 08:24 PM

Trigon is not Gone.
Yeah, I knew that. But I just wish it could have been stretches out more, if you know what I mean.

Aquagirl15

01-13-2005, 09:37 PM

i can't think of anything bad to sya but it seems like i have run out of good things to say also. all i can think of now is that this was so awesome! (had a storm last night kept me up and... well you get the rest.) i wish to see Trigon in the future yes, i do... :evil:

Crowgirl

01-13-2005, 09:39 PM

ATTENTION!!!! TTR4, YOU CAN KILL ME FOR POSTING THIS LATER BUT I THINK YOU MAY WANT TO KNOW ABOUT THIS!!!! CHECK IT OUT.....

Sam Register confirmed season five in a recent interview at The Pulse: "He also said there should be many more guest stars in the fifth season including the return of some characters who caused a stir: Speedy and Aqualad. The duo will be joined by three other heroes as a part of Titans East: Bumblebee, Mas and Menos. "We're just starting our work on Season Five now and we're going to see a lot of Teen Titans East - Aqualad, Speedy, Bumblebee, Mas and Menos. Mas and Menos are speedsters who, when they tough, go super fast. The pair speak only in Spanish throughout the entire episode. In the fifth season we also get to see some other DC teenage superheroes and possibly another superhero team from the DC Universe.""

T.T.Raven4

01-14-2005, 03:25 PM

Thank you very mush Crowgirl. If I do decide to continue my other fic, I will know right away what they can do. Better get spanish translatoe so I can talk in Spanish...

nevermore

01-14-2005, 04:09 PM

To nevermore, I will stop hunting you. On one condition.....

I am afraid to ask, but what is the condition.

I will guess though. I bet it is if TTR4 posts more!!!

Yes. He should post more.

Raven13

01-14-2005, 07:04 PM

O I like it alot!!!!! Very cool!!!!!!!!Yea BB is saved!!!!! haha I loved ur chapter though!!!! Well the only things to say is.....
WONDERFUL
keep writting!!!!!

O and also I heard that the 4th season is mainly focused around Raven!!!! Yea!:D Like the episodes are all focused on mainly one character!
Season 1: Robin
Season 2: Terra
Season 3: Cyborg
Season 4: Raven
Season 5: ?
I really dont know what season 5 is bout but I think it will be on Star or maybe Beast Boy!

O anyway I love ur story keep writting!!!!!!!! (Wait i Areready said that)

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

Crowgirl

01-15-2005, 10:51 AM

Okay,

I've heard the fifth season will actually focus a little more on Titans East and some other DC characters, sorry....
Season 4 focuses on Raven? Awesome! From some of the episode titles, I can see that happening.
TTR4, you know how when BB spoke backwards in 'Fractured' and they had their own subtitles? That's what I think they'll do for Mas Y Menos.
About the condition nevermore, well, *Sharpens chopstick and throws it into center of dartboard*
Ever hear of William Tell?

nevermore

01-15-2005, 02:34 PM

About the condition nevermore, well, *Sharpens chopstick and throws it into center of dartboard*
Ever hear of William Tell?

No I haven't. *starts baricading room and getting katars ready* Should I be afraid?

I do think that the 4th season is for Raven. The finale is three parts and is called "The End", but it doesn't say what it is the end of. It could mean the end of Trigon!!! Yes, it is a good theory.

TTR4, You'd best post soon, or else I will have to figure out a way to threaten you better than Crowgirl can. (And that's hard!!! :eek: )

Sproxie

01-15-2005, 02:44 PM

O I like it alot!!!!! Very cool!!!!!!!!Yea BB is saved!!!!! haha I loved ur chapter though!!!! Well the only things to say is.....
WONDERFUL
keep writting!!!!!
What she said ^
and
I heard the fifth season is focused more on Raven....

Crowgirl

01-15-2005, 03:02 PM

You've never heard of William Tell? The story with the man who had to shoot the apple on his son's head so he and his son could get free?

Guess I just gave it away.... :evil: Oops

T.T.Raven4

01-15-2005, 04:13 PM

Okay, I spent the night at a friends, went to a Basketball game, and now have a hockey game tonight. That will end around 7:30 my time, and I'll Be back by 8, so I'll do the chapter then. Thanks for your support guys.

YAY! 4th Season about Raven! OH YEA!

Crowgirl

01-15-2005, 09:01 PM

Hey! You know what I just realized? You took the mind thing I used too!

*Crowgirl rushes toward TTR4, but guards pull her back*

"Take her back to the room with the rubber rats!"

*She struggles, eyes glowing purple*

"No!!! Anywhere but the-"

~~Transmission Interuptted~~

T.T.Raven4

01-15-2005, 09:51 PM

Um...Please Stand By. Technical Difficulties.

I'm gonna run now, cause I'm afraid Crowgirls gonna kill me.

Crowgirl

01-16-2005, 04:35 PM

No, no, I promise I won't kill you. Nevermore still hasn't agreed to my condition though....

nevermore

01-16-2005, 07:30 PM

I haven't agreed because I still don't understand what the condition is. Can you please tell me in a way that I can understand?

Crowgirl

01-16-2005, 07:40 PM

I'm going to tell you the story of William Tell and see if you get the 'condition'.

Well, William Tell and his son became prisoners by a tyrant's army. William Tell was famous for his shooting skills, and he demanded to set free. The army's leader said he'd let Tell and his son free on one condition. He had to use a bow and arrow to shoot an apple on top of his son's head. If he hit it, he'd be free, if he didn't he'd remain prisoner and his son would be killed.

:evil:

nevermore

01-16-2005, 07:44 PM

Uuuum. I see two possibilities, and I fear it is the second one.

1. I have to shoot an apple.

2. (I'm afraid) You hit an apple that is placed on my head with a chopstick.

I am afraid of number 2

Alright, we are posting too much spam, me thinks. TTR4, if you want the spam to stop, then you had better post some more of your story.

T.T.Raven4

01-16-2005, 09:19 PM

I'm not a perfect person
I never meant to do those things to you
And so I have to say before I go
That I just want you to know

I've found a reason for me
To change who I used to be
A reason to start over new
and the reason is you

I've found a reason to show
A side of me you didn't know
A reason for all that I do
And the reason is you

~Hoobastank~

(Just a little Info, this next part is the actual plotline. The other part was merely an introduction. I’ve decided to bring in a custom character. I hope this all works out okay)

Chapter 8

As Told By Beast Boy

I woke up after a night with hardly any sleep. I just had too much on my mind. I sat up and stretched my arms. I rubbed my eyes and forced myself out of bed. I smelled the aroma of bacon and eggs downstairs. It was enough to make me want to puke. I followed the horrid smell into the kitchen to find Cyborg making his “Food”.

Everyone was already down except Hawk. It was like re-living past memories with Raven when she never felt like she fit in and mostly never down fro breakfast. I sighed and pulled out a plate of tofu and broccoli. I wasn’t too hungry but I needed to get something to eat. I sat down at the table alone and started eating. Eventually the team all sat down.

“TV anyone?” Cyborg asked, even though he already knew the answer.

We all nodded as Cy turned on the TV. The image of a news reporter appeared on the TV.

“…carnage. They’ve just trashed everything. Numerous attacks have been reported. They don’t seem to have any motives; they’re just attacking at random. I just can’t describe the…Oh my God! Someone help-

The reporter was cut off and the image went into static. Robin jumped up.

“Let’s go team!” He said.

We all rushed out of the room and dashed for the doorway. Once everyone was nearly there, I stopped. I turned and ran down the hallway. I came to a large steel door that read Hawk on the front.

“Hawk?” I yelled from the outside.

No answer.

“Hawk?” I asked again.

Silence. I pushed open the door and peered inside. She wasn’t there. I gritted my teeth as I ran after the Titans.

As Told By Robin

We arrived in a state of pure carnage. People were running down the streets yelling and screaming. I grabbed one of them.

“What’s going on?” I asked sternly.

“Please leave me alone!” He pleaded.

He thrashed and I let go. He then ran off with another crowd of civilians. I looked around at the destruction. Buildings were burning. The Earth shook with so many screams and running feet.

I heard a yell in the distance. It wasn’t a yell of terror. It was more like a battle yell. I rushed to where I heard the yell with the Titans close behind. After running for about 30 seconds, we seemed to intrude on a battle. There was a boy who looked around the age of 15. He had short, dark brown hair that curled at the sides and back. His eyes were a dark red. Not like Trigon’s, it was just his irises, not the full eye. He wore a suit that greatly resembled Slade’s apprentice uniform, but it seemed to be made of leather and draped in cloth. The cloth was

black with red lining. He wore a thin dark red bodysuit under the armor. He also wore ragged grey pants that were torn in certain places. On his feet he wore black leather boots.

The boy held a bow and arrow in his right hand. He aimed it at a person who was running at him about 20 feet away.

“STOP!” I yelled.

I couldn’t let him shoot a civilian. He shot a glance towards me, but fired regardless.

“NO!” I yelled.

The arrow seemed to be struck by a bolt of lightning and it seemed to sparkle a bright blue. The arrow hit the civilian dead in the chest. The man shook like he had been struck by lightning. He squirmed and fell to the ground. I growled and tackled the boy to the ground. He lifted his foot and kicked me off. I was flat on my back. He aimed his bow at me, ready to fire.

“Who the hell do you think you are?” He asked sternly.

A starbolt struck him on his side and he fell to the ground. He held his side.

The other Titans hovered over him.

“Who are you?” Cyborg asked.

“I don’t have to listen to you.” He spat.

“You better start.” I shot back; finally standing.

He remained silent. Cyborg grabbed him by his shirt and lifted him up.

“Look man, you better start-

The boy swept Cyborg’s legs. He then jumped up and aimed his bow at him.

“Do not touch me.” He stated angrily.

A girl jumped from the top of a building and landed next to him. It was Hawk.

“It’s okay Cameron.” Hawk said. “They’re friends.”

He glared at all of us and relaxed his bow.

As Told By Cameron

I’m actually supposed to trust these people after everything I’d been through? I’ll be in hell first. I have no idea how Hawk knows them and I don’t care.

“Friends?” I asked. “They attacked me for God’s sake!”

“You attacked an innocent civilian!” The one who tackled me yelled.

“Innocent?” I yelled. “How the hell is he innocent?”

I pointed to the civilian on the ground. He was squirming around and hissing; catlike. His eyes were blazing a bright red. Hawk tried to change the subject.

“Cam, these are the Teen Titans.” She said. “Robin, Starfire, Cybrog, Beast Boy, and my sister Raven.”

Hawk pointed them out so I knew who they were. Like knowing their names were gonna change my thoughts. I’m not that simple minded.

“Guys,” Hawk said. “This is Cameron.”

I always go by Cam. I hated my name, the one given to me by my “father”. He wasn’t really my father. He found me. I was abandoned by my father. He left me to die, but I survived. My mother died giving birth to me. My father was no where near fit to handle a child so he did the easiest thing; he left me. I would have been better off being found by anyone other than who it was. He was pure evil. He passed that to me. I was the heir to his evil. I was forced to refer to him as master, but I knew him only as Trigon.

Crowgirl

01-16-2005, 09:34 PM

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

That was fantastic. Cameron/Cam seems to have a huge temper, but at least he has a distinguishing personality, no? Yeah, more cool characters... yay! But you just did one of the things people rarely do anymore. You gave a great description of your new character (looks and all that) right away, so we have a really clear idea of what he looks like. Congratulations.

"Heir to Trigon's evil"? Well, I feel really secure.

T.T.Raven4

01-16-2005, 09:49 PM

I did my best on the description. Thanks for the compliment!! Glad you liked. I'll get more out soon.

Aquagirl15

01-17-2005, 12:17 AM

well i was stupid and read your description of Cam on the description thread and was like who's that? but now i know... he seems very intersting, but who was the 'innocent' civilian? and how does Hawk know Cam? so many questions... answer them quickly or um well SUFFER!!! i need a better death threat... :rolleyes:

T.T.Raven4

01-17-2005, 09:58 AM

You'll find out those answers soon enough Aquagirl....Soon enough........................................LIke tonight maybe??? Yea!

Crowgirl

01-17-2005, 10:11 AM

answer them quickly or um well SUFFER!!! i need a better death threat... :rolleyes:
I tutor people for ten dollars an hour.

Anyways, new chapter tonight? Awesome!!

T.T.Raven4

01-17-2005, 01:51 PM

Somebody listen please
It used to be so hard being me
Living in the shadow
Of someone else's dream
Trying to find a hand to hold but every touch felt cold to me
Living in a nightmare
A never-ending sleep
But now that I am wide awake
My chains are finally free
Don't feel sorry for me

~Ashlee Simpson~

Chapter 9

As Told By Robin

This kid was not the person you would trust immediately. He seemed like he had a short temper and didn’t trust many people.

“So why did you kill it?” I asked pointing to the civilian he shot at.

“I didn’t kill it.” Cameron said. “When the people are like that, the demon in them is like a second life. When it dies, the normal life returns and they’re turned back to normal.”

“Demon inside?” Beast Boy asked.

Trigon is in our midst. He somehow escaped the dimension that Hawk imprisoned him in and came to Earth. He’s found a way to get inside peoples minds and take over.

“How does he get in?” I asked.

“Trigon transforms them.” Cameron said. “Once inside them, he gives the beings sharp claws and sharper teeth. If they penetrate your skin deep enough, in a matter of moments you will become one of them. Trigon can’t get inside of me though.”

“How is that?” I asked.

“Why would he need to get in when he’s already there?” Cameron asked.

The Titans seemed to fade away. We needed to get some questions answered first.

“Hawk, why did you leave?” Beast Boy asked.

I sensed Cam in trouble and I had to help. There was no time to inform you.” She said.

“How do you know him?” I asked.

“He’s my brother.” Hawk said.

As Told By Raven

Everyone seemed slightly shocked.

“Well adopted to make a long story short.” I said stepping up. “Trigon found him abandoned and claimed him. He did what he did with Hawk and I; he placed part of his spirit inside of Cam so he could control him.”

“Why did you not tell us?” Starfire asked.

“We didn’t know he was even alive.” Hawk said.

“Everyone said that he died after his battle with Trigon.” I finished.

“We just kind of held it to ourselves, mainly because we wanted to forget what Trigon put him through.” Hawk said.

Cam felt the urge to show them even without asking. He rolled up the back of his bodysuit and showed a series of large scars on his back. They seemed like they had been there for years.

“He abused me when I disobeyed.” Cameron said. “I-

A scream was heard in the distance. Cam immediately jumped into action and began running towards the scream. I glanced at all the Titans and we all followed.

After about 4 minutes of running we came upon a girl who looked no older than 7. She was running from a group of 3 men. Their eyes were blazing red, obviously showing signs of Trigon’s control. The girl ran behind Cam. Cam held his bow in the air, and it seemed like a flare of fire struck it. Cam pulled out an arrow. The tip was lit with a bright flame.

Cam fired the first arrow that hit the first person in the arm. He remained standing for a few seconds but then seemed to be engulfed in flames. The flames spread to the other two and they all fell to the ground. Cam did the same thing he did before, except a beam of water struck it and Cam fired another arrow. The arrow hit the ground around them and the flames were extinguished, revealing three unconscious bodies. Cam rested his bow.

“They’ll live.” He said emotionlessly.

“You make it sound like it’ no big deal to hurt these people.” Robin said.

Cam turned and cast an angry glare.

“I have killed some of my best friends,” He spat. “I’ve killed some of my family, all because of Trigon. I will NOT let him prevail.”

“But you still- Beat Boy began.

“And I have no problem killing any of you.” He interrupted.

Everyone remained silent.

“Cameron you need to- Hawk said.

“Shut up Hawk.” He said. “You know I hate that name.”

“Cam, you need to calm down.” Hawk said. “We’re only here to help.”

Cameron growled and ignored her statement.

As Told By Cameron

How am I supposed to trust these people when they don’t even understand? They are completely unaware of what will happen if Trigon gets a hold on some of the universes more powerful warriors. Right then the little girl tugged on my pant leg. I glanced down.

“What do you need?” I asked softly. I know I have to be nicer to a little child.

“Why’d you kill them?” She asked.

“I didn’t.” I said, almost offended of being accuses of killing another person who didn’t deserve it. “I just made the evil go away.”

The girl smiled.

“Thank you.” She said.

“No problem.” I said with a smile on my face.

I began to walk away.

“Wait!” She said.

I turned back.

“I don’t have a place to go.” She said sadly. “My mom turned into one of those things.”

I suddenly felt a sudden sympathy.

“You can come with me.” I said.

“But don’t you think we should-

I cut Raven off.

“Deal.” I said.

I turned around and walked away with the girl following.

As Told By Beast Boy

“What’s up with him? I whispered to Hawk.

“He’s always had a short temper.” Hawk whispered back.

Cam turned around.

“You guys better get some sleep.” Cam said. “Head back to wherever you live.”

“Why don’t you stay with us?” Hawk asked.

All the Titans seemed to wince at the thought.

“Fine.” Cam said.

Everyone headed back to the Tower. Upon arrival, everyone quickly dozed off to the sleep in their rooms. Cam stayed awake in the living room in case anything happened. The girl stayed with him. She seemed to have established a small bond with him. After about 2 hours, Cam fell asleep. As his eyes closed, a group of around 100 people surrounded the Tower; their red eyes lighting up the night sky.

Crowgirl

01-17-2005, 06:55 PM

Fantastic, yet scary.

Did I mention how secure I feel?

Oh, by the way Nevermore, number two.

Aquagirl15

01-17-2005, 08:43 PM

Well at least we know that Cam has a sensitive side. I thought it was great. I really liked the way even though Raven and Hawk trust Cam, Robin is still apprehensive, you capture Robin well. And all the other characters, very nice! :D

P.S. Hey Crow, I'll take the lessons, but can I offer an IOU? I need to get my allowance. :sweat:

T.T.Raven4

01-22-2005, 10:53 AM

Just an update. I am working on the next chapter, and I'm working for 2000 words. Give me some time, and I promise it'll be worth the wait.

T.T.Raven4

01-26-2005, 07:46 PM

Fumbling his confidence
and wondering why the world has passed him by
Hoping that he's bent for more than arguments
and failed attempts to fly, fly

We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
Somewhere we live inside
Somewhere we live inside
We were meant to live for so much more
Have we lost ourselves?
Somewhere we live inside

~Switchfoot~

Chapter 10

As Told By Robin

I heard a blast downstairs in the main corridor and it awoke me from my sleep. I jumped quickly out of my dwelling and dashed out my door. I heard a snake like hissing and growling downstairs. I threw open the door to the living room and saw something I’d never expect. The room was flooded with people. All of their eyes were blazing a bright red. Cam was easily visible fighting. His bow released a flurry of arrows that struck multiple opponents. Despite the incredible grace he used to defeat his opponents, he was overwhelmed. He was tackled by multiple enemies, and one of them opened their mouth wide and bit his neck. Cameron groaned loudly.

“NO!” I yelled.

Trickles of blood rushed from Cam’s neck. He seemed to fall unconscious. As my scream echoed through the room, the beasts lifted their heads and their gazes locked on me. They all rushed at me. I pulled out my staff and batted a few away. I understand why Cam couldn’t win. There were so many. One lunged at me with its teeth bearing at me. I braced for the inevitable, but I saw a green flicker of light strike the beast. I looked over quickly to see all the Titans but Hawk. Where the hell was she? Cyborg was lifted by Beast Boy with his cannon ready, while Raven and Star fired multiple blasts of their Starbolts and Dark energy. Cyborg blasted his sonic cannon to follow up. BB dropped Cyborg into the mix and Cy fought on. Beast Boy took the form of a T-rex and thrashed the monsters around. I joined in with a few exploding disks. They exploded and sent many of the demons backwards.

“Anyone know where Hawk is?” Cyborg asked blasting a beast with his cannon.

“We could really use her help!” I yelled as I batted one of the “humans” with my staff.

Beast Boy seemed to run off in the distance. I glared at him and saw him run out the door. Damn him! What does he think he’s doing leaving us here?! I get tackled by one of the beasts, but I am able to kick it behind me. An exploding disk leaves my hand and explodes on one of them. I get tackled to the ground by about 2 of them. I break free, but am pummeled with 3 more. Cyborg’s sonic cannon blasts one of them off, and a few flurries of starbolts knock off the other two. I jump up and fire my bird-a-rang at the ceiling. I hook on and swing backwards to the door. We can’t take them all.

“How did these things get past my security?” Cyborg asked confused.

I didn’t know the answer. I just yelled the one word I rarely ever say.

“Retreat!”

As Told By Beast Boy

I was making a stupid mistake. I knew it was dumb, but I needed to see if Hawk was okay. There was something wrong. The explosions would’ve triggered her awake; no question.

I approached her door and spied the name “Hawk” engraved on the steel frame. I flung it open and saw her. She was sitting upright in her bed, her eyes glowing blue. Her hood was down and her hair was flowing like there was a fast wind blowing through her room.

“Hawk!” I yelled.

She didn’t respond. She just remained in her state of solitude. He ran towards her and gazer wonderingly at her. What was wrong? I shook her, but when I did something weird happened. My hands disappeared. I pulled them back and they re-appeared. I looked at her one more time and knew that this may be my only chance. I embraced her like in a hug, but I didn’t feel a thing. I felt a falling sensation. I opened my eyes just in time to see the hard ground in front of my face. I hit the ground basically as hard as possible. I opened my eyes and the world was spinning around me. I finally stood up and focused. I recognized where I was.

I was in Hawk’s mind. I only knew this cause I was stuck in Raven’s a little while ago. I looked forward and saw what looked like Hawk, and then about 9 other Hawks, just in different colored cloaks. I remembered Raven had different personalities, and they were just like her, but different colored. Those must be Hawk’s. Hawk glared at me.

“What are you doing here?” She spat.

“You- you were acting weird.” I said. “You were on top of your bed and you wouldn’t move or anything.”

“It’s because I’m trying to focus!” Hawk yelled.

She seemed angry.

“You are intruding in personal matters.” She said. “Get out.”

“Hawk what’s up with you?” I asked.

“GET OUT!” She yelled.

I was surrounded by a blue aura and flung backwards and into the ground.

“Why are you doing this?” I asked.

Hawk looked down at the ground. She then looked up at me and blaster a beam of her dark energy at me. It struck me, but I didn’t feel any pain. “

This will put you into a trance-like sleep. You will awaken back home.” She said.

I tried to protest, but my eyes got heavy. My eyelids slowly closed and I collapsed on the ground. The second I fell asleep, a dream began.

“Why am I here?” I heard Hawk ask sternly.

“You should be glad you are here.” I heard a voice say. It was Trigon.

“Why am I here?” Hawk asked now beginning to get angry.

“I have a few questions for you child.” He said.

As if by instinct, Hawk yelled out.

“I will not join you!” She yelled.

“Why not?” Trigon asked. “If you joined me, you would never have to worry about me controlling or taking over; you’d already be with me. We could rule. The world, no the universe would be at your fingertips.”

Hawk seemed to consider, but she shook her head of the thought. Then she winced and clutched her head.

“Feel that?” Trigon asked. “That’s me taking over. You never have to feel that again if you join me. You will never feel the pains of the world.

“Hawk no!” I tried to yell out, but my voice was gone.

Hawk held her head even tighter.

“Do you like the feeling?” Trigon asked.

Hawk let go as the sensation exited. She sighed, and a thought she never felt before entered. Maybe he was right. She would never have to worry about anything ever again. Then I entered. It was like I was watching it all over again.

“What are you doing here?” She spat.

“You- you were acting weird.” I said. “You were on top of your bed and you wouldn’t move or anything.”

“It’s because I’m trying to focus!” Hawk yelled.

She seemed angry.

“You are intruding in personal matters.” She said. “Get out.”

“Hawk what’s up with you?” I asked.

“GET OUT!” She yelled.

I watched it again and saw myself go into the trance. But then it continued. Hawk stood in front of her different emotions.

“Destroy them, and you will be mine.” Trigon said.

Hawk glared up at the first one that was in a green cloak. She aimed her hands at it and fired a ray of blue energy at it. It exploded in a plume of dust. Then the next one which was in a pink cloak. She fired and it exploded. Then the next. She brought down all of them until there were 3 left. An orange one, a red one which was obviously Trigon, and a yellow one. Hawk blasted the orange one and it exploded in a plume of smoke. She glared at the final one.

“HAWK DON’T!” I yelled.

Nothing happened. She glanced over at me. She saw me there.

“I’m sorry Beat Boy, but he’s right.” Hawk said.

She blasted the yellow one and all that remained was Trigon and her.

“No…” I muttered.

The Red emotion rushed at her and seemed to merge with her. Hawk groaned, and slowly began to change. Her hair grew a few inches longer. The formerly bright jet silver hair turned a blood colored red. Her normally silver, bright eyes had turned into 4. They were a blazing color of red. Her cloak became a dark red color. I just stared at her. He had her, and there wasn’t a thing anyone could about it.

Crowgirl

01-26-2005, 07:51 PM

Dude! Where have you been!?!?!

Oh well, brilliant chapter. No critisms.

CG/Crowgirl/?????

T.T.Raven4

01-26-2005, 07:59 PM

Busy out of my wits. I have been doing SOOOO much stuff these past two weeks, that I'm going nuts. I've had some writers block, and I hope I overcame it well. I can't assure when my next chapter will hit computers near you. I'll try my best to produce another good one. If I get some more feedback. I got so much at the start, and now it's like...:crying:

Aquagirl15

01-26-2005, 08:05 PM

Wow, that was so awesome. I'm still shocked. Nothing bad here. :D

Ephidel500

01-26-2005, 08:46 PM

I told you I'd read your story and I did so HA! I told nevermore I'd read his, but I never finished it... Please don't hurt me!!!! By the way, nevermore, I defended you. You should be nicer to me now. If you don't already know what I'm talking about, I'll send you a PM.:D I'm so proud of myself.:anime:

Sorry, I got sidetracked. Won't happen again. Well, it probably will but anyway...what was I going to say? Oh, THIS IS TRULY AN AWESOME STORY AND IF YOU DO NOT CONTINUE IT SOON (which, if you have HW, I understand) HORRIBLE TORTURE AWAITS IN BY THE EVIL COLOR OF EVER-HARRASSING PINK!!! (notice this is important because it is one evil that I nor Beastgirl17 can withstand. Hisssss... Evil pink.) Muwahaha, Muwahaha, FEAR ME!!!!!:evil: (with the exception of nevermore, who, sadly does not fear more or Aquagirl15)

Goodbye.:D

Matt A

01-27-2005, 10:11 AM

You are officially a very good writer. Your two Jake stories (the names of which I currently can't remember) worked on some pretty cool ideas, and were well-written to boot. I'd like to see more of the second one as and when you restart it: the whole "global Titans" thing sounds like a promising idea.

As for this story...well, anyone who goes into this amount of depth with the ultimate disfunctional family (Raven, Trigon, etc) gets my automatic respect. Now that Hawk has been properly taken over by Trigon, my interest in this fic will be pretty much permenant. Well done!:D

By the way, am I right in sensing a play on zombie movies with the whole "Trigon possessing hundreds of innocent civillians" thing?

T.T.Raven4

01-27-2005, 04:22 PM

Welshies Mate,

About the Trigon possesing everyone and everything, I'm not going to get that big into it.

Second, if you don't like sad endings, meaning it's not going to turn out all nice, stop reading. It will not be a happy ending.

Thirdly, If I do continue my other story, it will probably be re-done completely, because I'm not satisfied to the .10% of how that turned out, so it would be in a different fic.

Fourth, there will probably not (Meaning VERY slim chance) be a sequel. Since all my stories have been kinda suspenseful and sad in some parts, I've decided to try something new. I'm probably going to do a comedy story after this one. If you wanna know what it's about, PM me, but I don't wanna spoil it for those who don't want to know.

Thanks for the feedback guys. It's nice to see two fresh faces giving feedback. Thanks a ton and I'll get on the next chapter!

Matt A

01-27-2005, 07:07 PM

Second, if you don't like sad endings, meaning it's not going to turn out all nice, stop reading. It will not be a happy ending.
Hurrah! I love sad endings! Just check Dwyr Budr for an example...:evil:

T.T.Raven4

01-28-2005, 03:27 PM

I am reading it. I will finish it some time soon. It's a great story and I'm glad you like sad endings.

Matt A

01-28-2005, 06:34 PM

I am reading it. I will finish it some time soon. It's a great story and I'm glad you like sad endings.
Another reader of Dwyr Budr! Hurrah!:D

Crowgirl

01-28-2005, 08:44 PM

Um... where is everybody getting the avatars with their names on them? :sweat:

Aquagirl15

01-28-2005, 10:15 PM

Kregor8, he made avatars for everyone in the RPG with their character and name on it. But I bet he'll make one for you if you ask him. ;)

Oh and while we're on the subject of DB, I'm on chapter 11 or so and it is just so awesome! :D

Crowgirl

01-29-2005, 09:35 AM

Oh, I was just curious. That's all. I like my avatar. :anime:

Matt A

01-29-2005, 06:25 PM

Kregor8, he made avatars for everyone in the RPG with their character and name on it.
'Cept for me, but then again my character in the RPG is a custom one so he can't really do it.:crying:

Oh and while we're on the subject of DB, I'm on chapter 11 or so and it is just so awesome! :D
:D :D :D :D :D

Aquagirl15

01-30-2005, 02:01 PM

Uh yeah forgot to mention that. :sweat: And your welcome. Hey so this isn't talk other than to make WM feel good, when are we gonna get a new chapter from ya TTR? You left a big cliffhanger here!

T.T.Raven4

01-30-2005, 02:33 PM

I put on a bulletproof vest before posting this, cause I think you guys might shoot me.

I will be absent from the forums for the next few weeks (Maximum which won't happen, 5 weeks) Sorry if this keeps you in suspense and all, but I don't have a choice. So yea, that's all.

PS: I can get on Friday and Saturdays.

Aquagirl15

01-30-2005, 02:34 PM

Whoa... well we'll miss you and suspence is... sometimes ok. We can keep wondering for a long time. :D

Crowgirl

01-30-2005, 04:37 PM

*Puts down spare chopsticks* I don't blame you at all (I'm guessing you're doing something important or you got in trouble, and I'm hoping it's that first one). We shall miss you (and your story) a lot. :crying:

Ciao,
CG

Matt A

01-30-2005, 05:55 PM

I second that.

Mystery fan

02-05-2005, 01:56 PM

WOW! Talk about a heavy story! Raven is going to have to fight her sister now! How harsh is that! But it makes for a good story! Good job!

T.T.Raven4

02-18-2005, 04:12 PM

Finally back. Being grounded sucks, and thanks to straight A's! I'm back in the game!

I am exausted at the moment trying to catch up with all the great fics out there, so give me a little while for my next chapter.

Whoever chose to nominate me, waste of nomination, but thank you very much. I can't wait for IIII, because I think the fic I make after this won't die out. Thanks again mystery person.

Lastly, I have to ask a question which I always ask about 3/4ths through:
I want to know if I should continue. I have no problem doing it, but I do have a lot of stuff to do, and don't want to waste my time. Basic votes here are,

1. Continue.

2. Quit this, and go to next fic. (See "Would Anyobdy Read?")

3. Quit in all. My writing sucks, and all that, just let bad enough alone.

PLEASE help me out here. I have no problem continuing, but if you're sucking up, just say it! Thanks for the help guys.

Matt A

02-18-2005, 06:20 PM

Option one. Most definitely option one.:D

Aquagirl15

02-18-2005, 06:33 PM

Who could argue with that logic? 3 is just so out of the question. :eek: How can you say that about yourself?

Crowgirl

02-18-2005, 09:00 PM

Now that you're back and all, CONTINUE WRITING!!!!!!!!!! you are your worst critic, if you want to write, then write, if you don't, well.... you'll make a lot of us one of the following:

:crying: /:mad: /:evil: /:crying: :evil: /:crying: :mad: /:evil: :mad: /:evil: :crying: :mad:

Most likely the last one. And WHAT TYPE OF QUESTION IS THAT!?!?!?!?! :mad: Your stories rock. Period.

Peace (though it'll be hard with all the sad and mad and devil smilies),
CG

T.T.Raven4

02-18-2005, 10:24 PM

All right then. 1 it is, and thanks a lot guys.

nevermore

02-18-2005, 10:30 PM

How could you even think of stopping? I think my writing sucks, but I am still writing. All you need to do is keep writing and you will live longer than I intend. :evil:

T.T.Raven4

02-19-2005, 09:46 AM

Update, at dads for the weekend, but I'm 3/4ths through the chapter at moms, so I'll get that done Sunday.

Just a little sneak peek, not real parts, but a thing involved....*Drumroll*....Beast Boy's possible death!?!?!? OOOOOOOOO! Be ready for a good chapter!

T.T.Raven4

02-21-2005, 03:40 PM

(Ok guys, there's a couple lines I can't turn white, so they're still black. sorry. Anyway, here's the begining of the end. There won't be more than 3 more chapters.)

Lights go out and I can't be saved
Tides that I tried to swim against
Have brought me down upon my knees
Oh I beg, I beg and plead
Singing

Come out of things unsaid
Shoot an apple off my head
And a trouble that can't be named
A tiger's waiting to be tamed

Singing
You are
You are

Confusion that never stops
The closing walls and ticking clocks
Gonna come back and take you home
I could not stop, that you now know
Singing come out upon my seas
Curse missed opportunities
Am I a part of the cure
Or am I part of the disease

~Coldplay~

Chapter 11

In the Mind of Hawk

I have done horrible things...and I have absolutely no regrets...

If only they could understand. I have endured so much pain, 3 times as much as any of them. I can’t take it anymore. Trigon can teach me better than any of them. He is my father; my master by blood. I will obey his every command. I will have no regrets…

As Told By Beast Boy

I woke up immediately. The screams echoed through Hawk’s room. Wait…Hawk’s room? I’m back home! I looked around and was very familiar with my surroundings. I look to where Hawk was, and she’s still there, but seemingly asleep. Was it all a dream? It all felt so real though, and how’d I get in Hawks room then? Hawk stirred. I stood up quickly and fixed my gaze on her. Her eyes opened and she was completely normal.

“HAWK!” I yelled.

She screamed and rolled off of her bed. I peered over her with a “my bad” stare. She stood up and blew her hair out of her eyes.

“What’s up with you?” Hawk asked.

“I had a dream.” I said. “You went into your mind and destroyed all your emotions except the influence of your father. He took over.”

I couldn’t think of anything to do but thrust her into a tight hug. Hawk didn’t resist.

“It was just a dream.” She said.

I couldn’t see, but a smug grin formed on her face.

“Just a dream indeed.” She said.

I pulled back. Something was different.

“Hawk you sure you’re okay?” I asked.

“Better than okay.” Hawk said with that tone again.

I would’ve protested further but there was a bang outside the door, and we both rushed to it.

As Told By Starfire

Why do the people we wish to help proceed to harm us?” I asked more in general than anything else.

“They’re possessed Star.” Robin said.

Cyborg fired his sonic cannon at one of the “possessed” as Robin likes to call them. We continued to fall back to avoid the “possessed” from getting us. After I fired a few of my starbolts, an arrow rushed through the air. It struck Robin in the shoulder. He let out a yell of pain.

“Robin!” I yelled rushing over to help.

“I’m fine.” He said pulling it out slowly.

Another arrow came through, but I obliterated it with my starbolts. Out of a plume of dust, our friend approached. It was Cameron, yet not Cameron. His eyes were a bright red, and there were more than the normal amount. There were 4. I hurled a starbolt at him, but he dodged and returned fire with an arrow. Cyborg met the arrow with a sonic blast and fired another that Cam also dodged. Robin lunged forward, staff in hand. He struck Cam in the knee, but Cam swept his legs. Robin fell and Cam met with another kick. I fired a beam from my eyes to stop the mayhem. Cam kicked it, and like magic it returned to me. It does not wish to hit Cam? The beam struck me and I flew backwards. I hit the wall with great force. When my eyes re-opened an arrow hit me in my Mungporph, or as earthlings say, their arm. It hurt greatly. Blood dripped out of my arm. I believe he hit a blood vessel. Blood rushed out even quicker. I grasped it in pain. I saw Cameron strike Robin with an arrow. A light scream echoed out of my mouth, and I fell into the blackness.

As Told By Raven

We were falling like flies. Robin and Starfire were down, Hawk and Beast Boy were no where to be found. Wait…There they are!

Hawk and Beast Boy rushed in. Beast Boy morphed into a horse, and struck Cam with his hooves. Cameron flipped backwards and fired an arrow at Beast Boy. Beast Boy morphed into his normal self and dodged. Beast Boy kicked Cameron backwards. He had him on the ropes. Then, I heard Hawk let out a yell.

“Beast Boy!” She yelled for no real apparent reason.

Beast Boy jerked around and fixed his gaze on her.

“What?” Beast Boy asked.

“Don’t move.” She said with a smug grin on her face.

I turned quickly to look at Cameron. He had an arrow aimed at Beast Boy. On the tip it was glowing with a green light. Oh God…Not that. That’s a strong enough arrow to kill him.

“Beast Boy look out!” I managed to yell.

He didn’t turn quick enough. Cameron smirked and fired the arrow. Beast Boy’s eyes widened and the arrow struck him dead in the center of his back. Once it struck him, it lit up with a bright green light.

“No!” I screamed.

Beast Boy let out a yell of utter torment. His whole body lit up with a green glow. He fell to the ground and kept groaning. I rushed to him quickly and yanked the arrow out. He groaned louder as I did this. He was in pain, beyond my healing.

“Save it.” Cameron spat. “He’s finished.”

I gritted my teeth. I wasn’t going to let someone’s coffin rest on my conscience. (Thank you for having good lyrics Eminem) A closet shot open. I shot a glance at who was there. It was the young girl. She was in tears and she rushed over and hugged Cam.

“Please stop!” She begged. “No more fighting!”

Cameron remembered a brief moment before everything. He was talking to the girl around an hour before he fell asleep.

“You won’t leave me will you?” She asked.

“No.” He replied.

“Promise?” She asked to assure herself.

“I promise.” Cam muttered.

She reached over and hugged him tightly. An unusual smile crept across Cam’s face.

Cam immediately seemed to snap. His eyes returned to normal. His body eased up, and he grabbed his head.

“What the hell…” He muttered. He looked up, and saw what was happening, but what stood out was a bright green glow. Cam’s eyes shot open as he rushed to Beast Boy’s aid.

“Did I do this?” He asked quickly.

“Yes.” Raven said. “Can you help him?”

“No.” He said. “We can only hope.”

Hawk stepped over all of us.

“So sad.” She said, obviously sarcastic.

“I aimed to tackle her, but she kicked me before I could do anything. I fell to the ground and felt a tip of blood in my mouth. Cameron fired back with an arrow, but Hawk used her powers to stop it and fire it right back. Cam dodged it, but not her fist. He flew backwards into a wall. Hawk loomed over me. She placed her foot roughly on my chest. I coughed when she did that due to loss of so much air.

“Pathetic.” She spat. “You know what happens to you now right?”

I remained silent.

“I banish you into my mind so father can take care of you.” She said.

I tried to break free. If that happened, I’d be killed!

She opened a portal in front of me.

“Goodbye sis.” She muttered.

I was sucked in quickly, but not fast enough to see Beast Boy push her in, and fall right in with her.

Matt A

02-21-2005, 06:52 PM

A bit confusing in parts, but what an ending!:eek: :eek: :eek: :D :D :D :D :D

I hate to hear that this story's coming to a close, but hey, everything's gotta end sometime, right?:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:

T.T.Raven4

02-21-2005, 07:13 PM

May I know how so I may correct future problems, and thank you, I'm glad you like :D .

Matt A

02-21-2005, 07:17 PM

May you know what?:confused:

T.T.Raven4

02-21-2005, 07:19 PM

what made it confusing...

Matt A

02-21-2005, 07:26 PM

Right. Silly me.:p

It's kinda hard to get a handle on anything specific, but it's basically that there were points where I wasn't entirely sure who was doing what and when. That's as detailed as I can get, I'm afraid.:sweat: :sweat: :sweat:

T.T.Raven4

02-21-2005, 08:07 PM

Thanks Welshie. For pointing out stuff and for feedback.

Aquagirl15

02-21-2005, 09:19 PM

That was a great ending, but it's sad that this story is ending so soon. But as Welshie said all things have to end. I wonder what's gonna happen from here.

T.T.Raven4

02-22-2005, 03:34 PM

Thank You. New chapter out by let's say Thursday.

T.T.Raven4

03-02-2005, 08:32 AM

Chapter 12
As Told By Beast Boy

It all happened so fast. We flashed through what seemed like a never ending vortex. We spun endlessly until we all hit solid ground. I opened my eyes and saw Raven and Hawk nearby. I got up as fast as I could, which wasn’t very fast due to immense pain. Hawk sprung up 3 times as fast.

“Bastards!” She yelled. “What did you do?”

“Beast you at your own game.” I shot back.

Hawk growled and charged at me. I flipped backwards and took the form of a lion. I lunged at her and was able to get off a small scratch, tearing her cloak. She kicked me back and I fell. She placed her foot where the arrow hit me. I yelled out. It hurt worse than anything imaginable.

“Hurt?” She said with fake sympathy.

A blast of blackness hit her, and she fell away from me. It was Raven.

“Not today.” She said.

She lifted a large boulder and thrust it at Hawk. Hawk used her own force of energy to hold it back. They pushed themselves to the limit. After a few seconds, the boulder exploded, sending the sisters backwards. Hawk sprang up immediately. Raven was not near powerful.

“What, is this all you have?” Hawk asked with a grin.

“Not even close.” Raven said, regardless of the fact that she was lying.

Hawk fired a blast of dark energy. It missed by less than an inch, and Raven rolled to her side. Raven opened her eyes and saw Hawk’s boot crush her lower chest. Raven yelled out.

“It’s over.” Hawk spat. “Father is displeased with you, and wishes your destruction.”

Hawk placed her hand and prepared to blast Raven. I tried to move, but couldn’t. Right as it was almost let loose, a gold beam struck Hawk. She groaned and fell backwards. I used every bit of remaining energy to turn and see who it was. I saw a gold figure, and immediately passed out.

As Told By Hawk

Who the hell is this? I asked father in my mind.

“You forgot on of your emotions you imbecile!” Trigon said telepathically.

“No…I couldn’t have.” I said.

I jumped up and lunged at the figure. Before I could reach her, I was blinded with a flash of Gold. I met a fist and fell.

“Who are you?” I asked.

“Hawk, don’t you get it?” The figure said. “You can’t destroy yourself. Love is something you can’t ever destroy.”

I growled and tried to hit her. She blocked it and pulled my wrist back to meet her knee. I groaned.

“You can still fight.” Love said. “You had to destroy every emotion, and I’m still here.”

“No!” I yelled. “I am on the right side! We will rule!”

“Well it seems like I’m ruling you.” Love shot back.

My eyes blazed red. I landed a hard punch on her cheek. When she was down on the ground, I hit her again, and again, and again. She couldn’t stop me. I was blinded by anger. She placed her hands up, and when I punched her, everything disappeared around me. Seconds later I opened my eyes to see I was in a different place. I saw a statue in front of me, and immediately knew where we were; Terra’s tomb. This was where she “died.” Before I could consider any other thoughts, Love landed a hard kick to my midsection. I fell to the ground. I looked to my side and saw that Beast Boy and Raven were still out around 30 feet away. I sprung up and kicked Love’s knee. She bent down, and I sent my elbow to her back.

“No one will stop us!” I yelled.

My emotions went wild. The floor underneath us cracked. It got bigger, and bigger. Soon more cracks were visible. In them were huge flows of lava.

“Even if it means killing him?” Love asked pointing at Beast Boy.

“I…” I couldn’t say anything.

Was she right? She was me. She knows how I…feel. I couldn’t shake the thought. I blinked, and for a moment the red glint left my eyes. The cracks got bigger.

Fight! Trigon yelled in my head.

“No.” I said quietly. “NO!”

My head jerked back. I saw red smoke lift from me. I knew it was him, but yet he was still there.

“You can’t beat me.” Trigon spat in my head.

“Unless I beat me.” I muttered.

“What?” He asked.

Love looked up at me. Lava poured lightly into the labyrinth.

“You have fought the evil.” She said. “But you know it’s still there. It might never go away. You need to think.”

“It’s best for everyone.” I said smiling, yet with tears rolling down my cheeks.

“I looked into the lava. It began bursting. A large part of the floor fell leaving a large hole.

“Hawk.” Beast Boy managed out.

He stood up.

“Don’t do it.” He pleaded.

“Beast Boy, I have to.” I said.

As told by Beast Boy

“Hawk you can’t.” I said. “There has to be another way.”

“This way he’ll be gone forever.” I said. “Raven and Cameron still have him inside, but without 1/3 of his power, he’ll never be able to control us again.”

I ran towards her. Before I got to her, she put up a wall of energy.

“Hawk don’t do it!” I yelled.

One lone tear rolled from her cheek. A hole about as big as her upper body opened. Before I could react, her lips met mine. For one moment, I forgot about everything that was happening, everything that had ever happened. I wished it would never end. Then she pulled back. I looked into her eyes as the shield closed again. I remained silent.

“I love you Beast Boy.” She muttered.

She turned towards the pit. The one tear rolled off of her cheek down into the pit below. Hawk let her balance go, and she followed the tear, into the dead labyrinth below.

(Ladies and gentleman, I will say this again at the end, but thank you for reading. I really appreciate the support you gave me here. The epilogue will be coming out next, and it shall be followed soon by my new fic, Weapon of Mass Destruction. I hope you will support me there too. Once again, thank you very much. I cannot say how much you guys meant to me during the making of this fic. Thank you for your support.)