Idea: Would Anyone Read It?

[T.T.Raven4]

I have a new idea for a fic. It's not that i'm stuck on my other or anything, but I can't conclude it well. So, I'm starting fresh with a much more thought out idea. If anyones interested, check out a sneak peek (Also, well kinda a shortened prolouge)
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"Tri...gon." The girl muttered.

A woman walking by her cell heard her. She punched in the acces code, and entered her cell.

"Hawk?" The woman said. "Are you all right?"

"Tri...gon." Hawk muttered again. "Tri...gon."

"I'm going to get you help." She said.

The woman rushed out, and came back with 2 men dressed in white uniforms.

"Tri...gon." Hawk mutttered.

A man walked forward slowly, and pulled down her hood. He gazed at her face. It was pale as the moonlight. Her bright indigo eyes were shrouded by a red shade. Her jet-silver hair shone in the moonlight.

"Tri...gon." Hawk muttered once more.

"Another man walked up next to her holding a syringe filled with a clear liquid.

"Hawk, this will help you sleep." He said.

"Tri...gon." She said.

The man inched the needle towards her neck.

Hawks head drooped down, and her face was facing the floor.

"Hawk, sit up." The man said.

"He is coming." She muttered.

"What?" The man asked.

Hawks head shot up revealing four blazing red eyes. A chill of wind swept through the cell.

"HE IS COMING!" She screamed.

Hawk lunged forward, and ran out of the cell.
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Any good? Would anyone be interested? Obviously, it's a TT Fic.

[Aquagirl15]

i would totaly read this! i'm already wondering who Hawk is and why she is where she is and where that place is. and why she knows who Trigon is and if she knows Raven. so many questions so quickly! please contiune this! :crying: i beg of tho!!!

[T.T.Raven4]

Okay, the only downside (I think) is I won't be doing my fic for a while (Alone in the Night) I'd do this one. If I get one more yes, I'll do it.

[Crowgirl]

Yeah! I would so read this. Trigon is soooo evil and cool, he makes a great villian.

But you do realize that now that you posted a teaser, you're going to have to finish it whether you like it or not, right?

Crowgirl

P.S. Has anybody noticed all the bird names in our fics? Raven, Crow, Hawk, Robin....

[Raven13]

This is really good. In fact I am just like Aqaugirl15, I want to know alot more. ALOT MORE!!!!!!!:D :anime: :) I love the supense and the grammer spelling and plot is very good. Continue writting!!!!!!!!!!!!! Supense......EVIL:evil: :evil: :evil:

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Lady Lightfire]

It's very good, I like it! I wonder where it takes place, if it is on Earth, Azarath, or somewhere else? I also wonder who this girl is. Not just her name, but her backround. I definetly think you should write this, and I would read it!

[T.T.Raven4]

That took...20 minutes to get those replies. Thanks so much guys.

BTW Crowgirl, don't forget Sparrow in AquaGirls fic!

You will find out why she is named Hawk and all other stuff soon enough...Like maybe tonight or tommorow. Lol.

Thanks again!

[Raven13]

P.S. Has anybody noticed all the bird names in our fics? Raven, Crow, Hawk, Robin....
Yes I know I have noticed that alot. Birds and flowers are quite popular names.
That is weird though (but not bad):anime:

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Aquagirl15]

yeah you did forgot Sparrow, Crow! :D i feel so unloved. :crying: jk! wow! you got a lot of feedback really fast. don't worry about the not posting on your other fic, since you're waiting for Titans East to air, this will occupie you and us during the wait. you just got 3 three more yeses(?), time to start more!!! :p


(what about Jessica? that is such a common name and it just has to be mine! i never know which Jessica people are talking to!!! :sweat:)

[ShadowOfAGhost]

Should you write this? HELL YES!!!