Crystalfire's Adventures on Earth

[TerraWHRobin4]

Crystalfire, as you all probably guessed is Starire's sister. She has blonde hair, and everywhere that is purple on starfire is black on crystalfire, and everywhere silver is silver....heh heh:sweat: she has blue eyes that are like starfire's (light on the outside, dark irises) and the little green jewels on starfire's hands and near her neck are a VERY dark shade of grey. and also, this story is going to be in 1st person. OH! before i forget! just letting you know, this is NOT going to end up in a starfire/robin relationship, so please DON'T yell at me for that when i'm warning you right now. um... thats all for now.

CHAPTER 1

"Hey! You look like the super hero Starfire!" said a little girl that ran up to me. 'That must be her!' I thought as i smiled at the little girl.

"Thats because she's my sister! Could you help me find her?" I asked sweetly. I loved children, but I had to see my little sister.

"They're easy to find!" she smiled right back up at me, "They're in that big tower shaped like a 'T'!"

I thanked her and flew to the tower.

Once I got there I knocked harder than I had meant to and made a dent in the door. I guess I was more excited than I thought.

A tall half man half robot opened the door. He stared at me for just a minute then said, "Yes?"

"Um... I'm Starfire's sister... I'm here to see her..." I said trying to sound like the young adult I was.

"STAR!" he yelled back into the tower. He disappeared from the door, and in his place came my little sister, Starfire.

"SISTER!" Starfire yelled as she wrapped her arms around me. For me to be a year older than her, we were the same height.

"Come! You must meet my friends!" She said as she dragged me inside.

"Star, who is this?" A girl in a dark blue cloak asked as I entered what seemed a living room.

"This is my sister, Crystalfire!" Starfire said overjoyed.

"And... you're sure she isn't just another Blackfire?" said A little green boy.

My blood boiled at her name, "Blackfire is a disgrace to Tamaran, and I will have nothing to do with her."

Starfire looked sad and said, "Sister, even though she is most... evil... we cannot turn our backs on her!"

Starfire was always sweet and kind to everyone. I can't believe that she would still stand up for Blackfire, "Koriand’r! How could you still believe in her?! She has dishonored herself in every possible way! You are the princess, and she tried to put you in jail! Then, she took over Tamaran! FOR FUN!"

I was normally a nice person, but at the drop of a hat, I could become the angriest person.

"I know all of the events of the past sister, but I will not turn my back on her," Starfire said.

I smiled, she was still the same Starfire I knew, "Okay Koriand'r..."

The others in the room were staring at us and Starfire smiled, "Crystalfire, these are my new friends! Cyborg, Raven, Beast Boy, and Robin."

My gaze stopped on Robin. He looked so familiar, 'Where had a seen him before... Other than when he came to Tamaran with Koriand'r... I have to figure that out...' I thought as he looked away from me.

It was definite... I had seen him before...

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so? what do you think?

[Aquagirl15]

it is always intersting when someone adds a sister to Star's family, and this is no excpetion. Crystalfire seems like a cross between Blackfire and Starfire in apperence. but she also seems to have her own different personaltiy, very good! Crystalfire seems to be a great character, upate as soon and as much as you can!!! :D

let me rejoice in being the first poster!!!

[Raven13]

I like this story alot. There are a few storys here that have ot do with Starfire or Tamerain. I love the character Crystalfire, because she seems to be a very interesting person. Also I vilzuized in my head on what she looked like and she does look like a mix between Blackfire and Starfire (HAHA Aqaugirl15 we have the same opinions:anime: ) This story seems to be taking off very well. Continue writting. You never know where this story may take you. The only thing that stuck out was has Crystalfire ever been to earth? Cause if she hasn't then she knows how to talk better than Starfire already. Anyway........uhhh don't mind that commint.......just listen to GREAT JOB:D

.......and continue writting!!;)

I think this is one of thoses storys I will contiune to read and keep up with.:)
Anyway Great Job:) :anime: :D ;) :p

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[TerraWHRobin4]

YA! people like my story! *dances with happiness*:D :D :D :D as for the whole has crystalfire been to earth before, you shall find out! muhahaha!:evil: oh, and if you want a pic of crystalfire, email me at gc_gurl123_45@yahoo.com okay? its just something i whipped together.

[Raven13]

YA! people like my story! *dances with happiness*:D :D :D :D as for the whole has crystalfire been to earth before, you shall find out! muhahaha!:evil: oh, and if you want a pic of crystalfire, email me at gc_gurl123_45@yahoo.com okay? its just something i whipped together.
I might email you but my email is my parents also:sad: But I will ask if I can use it:D

Love your story write more soon!!!!!!!!:)

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[TerraWHRobin4]

as i said, its just something i put together to give you and idea of what she looks like...

[Crowgirl]

Okay, this is what I think.

Alright, let the creepy music play...

Crystalfire is, like other's have said, a most interesting character. Her personality seems like a cross between Raven (She doesn't not trust those who have betrayed her and her people), Starfire, Terra (Something about her strikes me as intruging...), and of course, Blackfire. The thing is though, as intruging as she is, we don't know anything about her or why she is here. I can tell that this is something we're going to need to know...

Also, I believe Aqua said it, it is always interesting to see another girl added to Starfire's family. However, most of the time (when somebody adds a new member to Star's family) the new family member doesn't react much to Blackfire. Yes, PC did it with Sunfire (Is that her name?), but it rarely happens.

Last, Crystalfire knows Robin? This is going to be interesting indeed. I wonder why she recognizes him, because if she does/can, it may not be a good thing. I guess we'll just have to wait and see....

Well, there's my review, so here's to more! *Raises glass of lemonade and sips it* Gah!! *Spits it out over older brother* It's soda!!!

Crowgirl

[TerraWHRobin4]

just a reminder, this is NOT a robin and starfire relationship thing. in my story they're just FRIENDS. nothing more, nothing less.

CHAPTER 2


"You shall stay in my room!" Star yelled as she dragged me up the stairs. She came to a halt at a door and it slid open. She let go of me and I looked around her room as she plopped on the bed.

"It's... purple..." I said.

"Most certainly for it is my favorite of all colors!" Starfire said smiling at me. I sat down on the floor and started another conversation, "Starfire... How much do you know about Robin?"

"Not anything that would benefit your question's intentions," Starfire said smiling down at me.

I blushed and said, "You know what I'm talking about don't you?"

She nodded and giggled, "All that I know of Robin is that he was originally from a placethat he called..." She pondered for a minute, "Gotham?"

She pronounced it like 'Got ham'. I laughed and she yawned.

"It is of the late sister... I am going into sleep," Starfire said as she put her head at the end of the bed.

I smiled at this and said, "I'm gunna go explore for a while."

I never got a response from her because she was already fast asleep. I ventured throught the huge tower, noting the turns so I wouldn't get lost on the way back. I got back to the living room and went to the window. I stood staring at the lake. Watching a few fish jump out now and then.

"So... you came back..." said a voice from behind me. I turned to see Robin.

"Oh! You scared me!" I said as I smiled at him.

He smiled back and said, "Why are you here?"

I blushed and said, "Uh... to... see Starfire."

"That's not the only reason is it?"

I turned to the window and sighed as I said, "No."

"Why then?"

"Personal reasons..."

He was standing beside me now. I glanced over at him, he to was staring at the lake, but I wouldn't have know if he wasn't because of the very mysterious mask he wore.

"Anything you can tell me?" He smiled mischeiviously. (sp)

He knew why I was here... And he was glad about it...

"Robin, theres nothing between you and Starfire is there?"

He shook his head, "I never got you out of my head after that night. You changed my life, NO ONE could replace you."

My eyes watered as I smiled and collapsed inot his arms. He held my tight as I sighed happily, I was finally back in his arms. I had waited so long for this... and now it was actually happening.

"God I missed you Crys*," he said.

"I missed you to!" I said, looking up at him.

He smiled and said, "More than anything I've wanted just to hug you again... and now you're here... finally..."

I closed the gap between him and I as you kissed him lightly, "I've wanted just to be in your arms."

His eyes were still closed like he was still savoring the kiss, "We'll vnever be apart again... I promise..."
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*crys is pronounced like kris, or chris

[Aquagirl15]

oooooooooo! they knew each other they knew each other. i knew it! wait no i didn't scratch that! :sweat: what is this night of which you speak? and why did Crystalfire do to change his life? answer my questions soon please!!! :D

[Vivace]

Looks very interesting the plot is taking off rather well. Please post more.

[Crowgirl]

Last, Crystalfire knows Robin? This is going to be interesting indeed.
I rest my case. Great!

I only wish it was a little longer, and please do not put notes in your writing, but instead put something like this:

"I've missed you so much Crys*.

*Crys is pronounced Chris/Kris.

Crowgirl

[TerraWHRobin4]

:sweat: oops! my bad! :sweat:

[starfire0639]

ugh*nonono this isnt right starfire and robin and now girl and...........i cant resist!even tho im all for the s/r thing this is a really good fic and i hope you write more soon:anime: it really is good rough around the edges but alas so is mine!it really is good and i wish to know what she did to change robins life i wonder...........:sweat: hahahaha ack my mind wanders yet again...um i think thats bout it oh!please do epxlain how they now each other i must know!

[Raven13]

I really like this story soo far. It is very interesting and also I really want to know what happened between Crystalfire and Robin.:anime: Please post more soon!!
Also I am kinda for the Strfire Robin thing, though now Crystalfire seems like a better person for Robin. ~ GO ROBIN AND CRYSTALFIRE ~ WOOOOT:) :D ;)

Anyway great chapter..... write more soon:p

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[TerraWHRobin4]

i feel so special that you all like it!:D

[Crowgirl]

Is this over too? See, I'm ressurecting old fics just for fun.

MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

[Raven13]

haha thansk Crowgirl for bringing these fics back!! Hey I really want this one finished!!!!!!:D

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Aquagirl15]

same here. when you gonna post more? i must find out how Robin knew Crys. i must know more!!!! :crying:

[Crowgirl]

Anytime Raven13, I was bored anyway.....:D

[T.T.Raven4]

Long Chapters, interesting plot, great new character, AWESOME! This is going great!

[TerraWHRobin4]

i'm so sorry its taken me so long to get a new chapter up, as some of you know, i was just about to drop writing and stop writing my fics all together...


but, thanks to some serious persuasion, i am back and heres the next chapter...

CHAPTER 3

The next morning Robin and I were sleeping on the couch. Robin sitting up and I had my head in his lap and was stretched across the sofa.

I was awoken by someone giggling, I opened my eyes to find Beast Boy having fits of silent laughter.

My eyes started glowing and he stopped immeadiately, "Much better," I croaked, my voice not woken up yet. Stupid voice...

"You saoud like a..." Beast Boy said then morphed into a frog.

"Shut up," I said, my hands over my face, I wasn't embarassed or anything, I was trying to wake my eyes up to where they'd stay open.

Beast BoY was still a frog. mocking me, so I decided to practice on him, maybe that'd wake these darned eyes up... So, my eyes glowed light blue then lasers shot out of them, heading straight for Beast Boy.

He morphed back to normal, "AH!" and jumped out of the way. He stared at the black, crusty, crackling spot of carpet, that could have easliy been him had I really been trying to hurt him. But sure enough, my eyes had no problems whatsoever... Darned eyes.. Darned sleep...

Then I looked over to Robin whom was still sleeping, despite all the ruckus and Beast Boy trudging away. I smiled, got up softly, and went into the kitchen.

'Let's see... I'm a vegetarian... and so is Beast Boy, so there must be some tofu around here somewhere...' I thought to myself looking through the cabinets.

"Hello sister..." I heard a sleepy Starfire's voice brim with anger... that was weird, just last night we were cool, what did I do now?

"Um... you okay?" I said catiously.

"Did you and... Robin," she seemed to have a difficult time saying that, "Have fun last night?"

"Starfire stop it..." came Robin's voice from the couch, "Just drop it okay?"

"I refuse to-" she said angrily, but was cut off my the doors opening behind her and Raven stepping out.

Raven looks around for a minute and then says, "Did I interrupt?"

"No," Robin said, "The conversation was over." He stared at Starfire whom was standing there, with a look of disbelief on her face.

"Bu-bu-but," She studdered.

"No Star!" Robin said sternly to her as she hmphed and stalked away to her room.

"Great..." I groaned after she left, "Another family member mad at me..."

Raven glanced at me and I smiled nervously. She looked away and then sat down at the table with her herbal tea.

I found the tofu with no assistance and sat down beside Robin, whom smiled at me, then continued to eat.

Maybe today wouldn't be as bad as I thought!

"Oh yeah," Robin said turning back to me, "We've got training today, and since you and Star have the same powers, you and her will do the same thing, okay?"

'TRAINING?! NO! NOT TRAINING! ANYTHING BUT TRAINGING! Well, it wasn;t the whole trainging fact, I enjoyed training just as much as Robin did... Its just that Star is pissed at me right now...' "Great!" I whined and banged my head on the table.*Oh well... might as well get ready...

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well, what'd ya'll think?
*= hehe... pookey would know what i'm talking about....:sweat: :D :anime: :) :shrug:

[Raven13]

Cool I like it alot! A few spelling errors but it was very good story wise! Sisters always fight and I like it how you made Starfire and Cystalfire be mad at each other (Well kinda mad) Anyway i slike it alot please continue to write more!

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[TerraWHRobin4]

*bows* thank you! thank you!

I've been saying that alot lately... oh well...


ERIN

[Aquagirl15]

Yeah it was good. Even the best of friends can get split in two by a guy, and I can see this happening with Crys and Star. Then again, I can see this going all different directions too. Anyway wherever this goes, I'm sure it'll be great.

[TerraWHRobin4]

*bows again* thank you! *rubs back* man, my back is tired of bowing....:sweat:

[TerraWHRobin4]

well, starting tomorrow i'm grounded agin... so i won't be able to get on... i'm sorry bout this... i'll get on when i can, i have the rest of today and thats it. i'll try to get the next chapter up today for ya'll!

[RavenofAzerath~]

*cough*

isnt Crys younger than Star??? and i thought that that Robin and Star were the same age...

i like the story..not the romance

RoA~
Critic and I Know It