The adventures of the Teen Titans, and the Justice kids!

[Allen CARR]

Prologue

From years in the future,and from an alternate Dimension, they came. The justice kids, kid versions of the future Justice League team. Thanks to Larry the Titan, they and some others, are trapped in this time, and dimension, for now anyway. Luckily, The Teen titans of this time, and dimension Are here. To help them find a way home, and hopefully freaking Fast at that!
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Superboy-http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/jlu/bios/kidjl/10.jpg
bio-The so called leader of the Justice kids, he thinks alot of things are cool.
Why not, he may be the strongest kid in the world, and his big ego is a result.
but, hes the nicest kid, and always thier for his friends.


Batboy-http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/jlu/bios/kidjl/19.jpg
bio-He likes to train, and think about his actions. Hes also the smartest of the team, he likes not to get to personal with the others, But he always has time, to proves hes cooler, then his best buddy Superboy.



Wondergirl-http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/jlu/bios/kidjl/11.jpg
bio-Bossy, alittle rude, and powerful, are words that can describe Diana/Wondergirl. Shes, like the mom of the group, and boy is she a bossy mom.


GL-http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/jlu/bios/kidjl/14.jpg
bio-um lets see, alittle to excited sometimes, and not the smartest to boot. He can make anything, he can imagine, with his cool Green Lantern ring. But Gl, is kind, and just so fun to be around, and his actions will make you laugh.


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[Allen CARR]

Episode one-New kids in Town







The scene is downtown Jumpcity, The Teen Titans are engaged in a battle with Cinder Block!http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/teentitans/episodes/divide/04.jpg




Cinderblock, knocks them all back with a swing of his fists. Cyborg gets the brunt of the blow, and goes flying into a parked car. Stafire, flys back alittle, but shakes it off, Beastboy falls knocked out to the street. Raven and Robin both attack him again, Raven throws a car, at the massive creature, and Robin throws birdarangs! The car and Rangs, send him flying into a building, while people run around in panic!


Robin-sighs "I think that did it guys." he says in relief.


The rest of the Titans, all slowly walk up next to Robin, and Raven.


Stafire-"Is he really defeated Robin?" she softly asks


Robin does not answer, and they all begin to walk, towards cinderblocks body. Just then, Cinderblock angrily jumps up, and begins running at the Titans!
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Then, a portal opens in the sky, and out come falling 4 kids. The kids fall right ontop Cinderblock, knocking him to the ground!

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Raven-"What was that?" she coldy asks


Robin-takes out birdarangs "No idea, but stay alert, we could be in for another fight."


The Titans slowy walk over to cinderblock, and the 4 strange kids ontop of him.


Beastboy-shocked look "Wow, look a thier cool outfits." he happily states.



The others glare at him, and begin to investigate the kids. Robin, then see one of them, wearing a Batlike outfit, and a yellow belt.


Robin-shocked look "No......no freaking way." stumbles back


Starfire catched Robin as he falls back.


Starfire-"Robin, are you okay?"


Robin does not answer, then, Cinderblock pops back up, knocking the 4 kids off him to the ground!
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CinderBlock-grunts "Now you make me mad!" grunts again.



The Titans prepare to fight him again, but then, Cinderblock gets trapped in a green bubble. The bubble, lifts Cinderblock up, and from behind him, stand Superboy,Batboy,wondergirl,and Gl who is controlling the bubble.
http://wf.toonzone.net/WF/jlu/bios/kidjl/02.jpg



Superboy-grinning "I see you Titans, are in need of some help." he arrogantly says.



GL then lets Cinderblock, out of his bubble. Superboy and Wondergirl, then fly at him, at good speeds, and knock him into another building wall! The blow knocks him out cold! The remaining crowd applaud them,and The Titans stand thier, in shock, as the New kids in Town steal the show.

[Crowgirl]

Interesting.

This isn't a bad start. I like how Robin reacted to seeing 'Batboy'. Since all of them are kids, this is going to be quite a fun story (And just for the record, Kid Stuff of JLU is one of my favs!)

Watch out for grammar and puncuation (Where you put your commas). They are your friends/allies. They will join you and always be loyal. Also, I hate to be rude, but this is most annoying:

Robin-sighs "I think that did it guys." he says in relief.
It should be either:

Robin sighed. "I think that did it guys." He says in relief.

Or:

Robin- *Sighes* I think that did it guys.

Not both like you did in the first chapter. Anyway, keeep going! This looks cool!

Crowgirl

P.S. Firsties!!! Yay!

P.P.S. Did I mention how I like that you give biographies of the new characters? That's a nice touch.