Ephidel500
12-25-2004, 07:47 PM
Okay, for those of you who know, I already aired these two chapters on my poll. For those of you that don't know, I am writing my own fic about, (surprise!), the daughter of Slade. I welcome any and all feedback for my story, just don't be to hard on me, Raven37, 'cause you know I'm a first time writer. Okay, here's the prologue & first chapter of me fic. Enjoy!!!
Prologue: Mystery Girl
The red siren light flickered overhead. The titans waited for the usual line.
"Trouble," Robin said.
There it was. The titans ran to the huge screen dominating half of the main living quarters. It showed a picture of a thin black-haired girl in a metallic suit. She was laughing maniacally at something just out of the screen. Then she turned her head so that she directly faced the security camera. "Well, well, looks like I’m being watched. Why don’t you tell the teen titans to come down here and face me? I’d accept their challenge any day. How ‘bout it, titans? You up for the fight, or are you still crying over your precious Terra?" the mysterious girl jeered evilly. The screen went blank. Robin worked to restrain Beast Boy.
"Let’s go."
Chapter 1:
The titans hurried down to the government chemical testing area. As far as the titan’s knew, the mysterious girl was heading toward the synotheum control center. Synotheum was the most dangerous and unstable substance in the universe. It was also the most powerful. If this girl got to the power core, she’d have enough power to destroy the world.
The titans rushed into the power room. The mysterious girl greeted them. "Well, well, if it isn’t the famous Teen Titans. Glad you decided to join me after all."
"Who are you and what are you planning?" Robin demanded.
"To steal synotheum, of course. As for your other question, you may call me the Ghost of Honor, for I will haunt your steps until you have payed for what you have done."
She broke the barrier that protected the synotheum with a glowing dagger and grabbed the stick off the pedestal. She stuck the synotheum into a pouch hanging from her side and flipped gracefully over the titans and onto the roof. She landed face-to-face with none other than Robin the boy wonder.
"Out of my way," She snarled.
"And let you get away with the most unstable substance known to man? I don’t think so."Robin replied.
"Then I guess you thought wrong."She said. Her fist glowed light purple as it collided painfully with the side of Robin’s face. Robin was sent flying straight into a brick wall. Starfire came up and sent a stream of pale green starbolts at the metallic girl. * She dodged them by jumping up the fence, but as she reached the top to escape she was hit with a blast from Cyborg’s sonic cannon and fell with a thud to the ground. Raven surrounded a couple of waste containers and directed them toward the fallen foe. The large containers seemed to bury the girl and the titans moved in and waited for any movement. After several minutes of waiting Robin began moving the rubble away. He was met only by the pure dirt floor.
How did she do this? Robin thought.
He piled into the T-car with the rest of the titans and headed home for a good night rest. He would try to figure out this strange girl’s motive in the morning. For now, he just wanted to go home and work out any possible leads so he could send out the others to investigate while he looked for more clues. He needed to know as much as he could about this girl. He needed to know her past, her plan, her location, and her power capability. Why had she sought them, out? What did she mean by "you must pay for what you have done"? What had they done? All these questions he hoped to answer.
I better get to work, he thought, as he shut himself inside his room and began to piece things together, bit by bit.
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Starfire was upset about today’s events. This new "purple girl" was disrupting the lives of her friends. Robin had already shut himself up in his room and refused to come out for anyone. Starfire knew he had noticed the obvious similarities between the girl’s costume and the ones of Slade’s apprentices. She was worried for her dear friend. She did not want him to go to insane trying to track down this new foe. He was already working to hard as it was, and any extra stress might cause him a psychiatric meltdown.
"Slorvlac Buagavek,"She murmured sleepily as she climbed into bed. She was asleep in minutes, and left the purple girl, Robin, and the whole of Jump City behind.
Hope you liked it.:anime:
Prologue: Mystery Girl
The red siren light flickered overhead. The titans waited for the usual line.
"Trouble," Robin said.
There it was. The titans ran to the huge screen dominating half of the main living quarters. It showed a picture of a thin black-haired girl in a metallic suit. She was laughing maniacally at something just out of the screen. Then she turned her head so that she directly faced the security camera. "Well, well, looks like I’m being watched. Why don’t you tell the teen titans to come down here and face me? I’d accept their challenge any day. How ‘bout it, titans? You up for the fight, or are you still crying over your precious Terra?" the mysterious girl jeered evilly. The screen went blank. Robin worked to restrain Beast Boy.
"Let’s go."
Chapter 1:
The titans hurried down to the government chemical testing area. As far as the titan’s knew, the mysterious girl was heading toward the synotheum control center. Synotheum was the most dangerous and unstable substance in the universe. It was also the most powerful. If this girl got to the power core, she’d have enough power to destroy the world.
The titans rushed into the power room. The mysterious girl greeted them. "Well, well, if it isn’t the famous Teen Titans. Glad you decided to join me after all."
"Who are you and what are you planning?" Robin demanded.
"To steal synotheum, of course. As for your other question, you may call me the Ghost of Honor, for I will haunt your steps until you have payed for what you have done."
She broke the barrier that protected the synotheum with a glowing dagger and grabbed the stick off the pedestal. She stuck the synotheum into a pouch hanging from her side and flipped gracefully over the titans and onto the roof. She landed face-to-face with none other than Robin the boy wonder.
"Out of my way," She snarled.
"And let you get away with the most unstable substance known to man? I don’t think so."Robin replied.
"Then I guess you thought wrong."She said. Her fist glowed light purple as it collided painfully with the side of Robin’s face. Robin was sent flying straight into a brick wall. Starfire came up and sent a stream of pale green starbolts at the metallic girl. * She dodged them by jumping up the fence, but as she reached the top to escape she was hit with a blast from Cyborg’s sonic cannon and fell with a thud to the ground. Raven surrounded a couple of waste containers and directed them toward the fallen foe. The large containers seemed to bury the girl and the titans moved in and waited for any movement. After several minutes of waiting Robin began moving the rubble away. He was met only by the pure dirt floor.
How did she do this? Robin thought.
He piled into the T-car with the rest of the titans and headed home for a good night rest. He would try to figure out this strange girl’s motive in the morning. For now, he just wanted to go home and work out any possible leads so he could send out the others to investigate while he looked for more clues. He needed to know as much as he could about this girl. He needed to know her past, her plan, her location, and her power capability. Why had she sought them, out? What did she mean by "you must pay for what you have done"? What had they done? All these questions he hoped to answer.
I better get to work, he thought, as he shut himself inside his room and began to piece things together, bit by bit.
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Starfire was upset about today’s events. This new "purple girl" was disrupting the lives of her friends. Robin had already shut himself up in his room and refused to come out for anyone. Starfire knew he had noticed the obvious similarities between the girl’s costume and the ones of Slade’s apprentices. She was worried for her dear friend. She did not want him to go to insane trying to track down this new foe. He was already working to hard as it was, and any extra stress might cause him a psychiatric meltdown.
"Slorvlac Buagavek,"She murmured sleepily as she climbed into bed. She was asleep in minutes, and left the purple girl, Robin, and the whole of Jump City behind.
Hope you liked it.:anime: