POLL:Daughter of Slade?

[Ephidel500]

Congratulations! You all got me to post my story. After lots of work I finally got it onto this computer. This is just the prologue. Don't expect any more until after Christmas. In case you missed my reason for taking so long to post this story, I left it down there.:v: The real beginning is on pg.2 Hope you enjoy it.:D

Okay, so this one day I was trying (and failing) to draw a picture of Terra. It turned out weird, so, for some reason I just colored the hair of my picture black. I had already messed up on the eyes so I figured I should just create a new character. I decided to name this character Sonra and make her the daughter of Slade. The basic storyline of my fic is that Sonra, thinking her father is dead, *cough*hint*cough* searches out the titans because of her anger at her father's death. She turns out to be a good character, but she's pretty evil in the beginning so feel free to hate her.:anime: Before I post me story I would like to know what all of you think about my idea since there's a lot of stories and it's hard to keep up with them all. If I get any positive feedback I may turn this poll into a thread, but before I post the actual story I'm open to any and all advice and some help from any of the really, really good writers. Please let me know what you think of my idea, but don't expect my story before the end of winter break because I am witnessing some "technical difficulties" at the moment and Christmas is a very busy time of year (aka my computer with my story on it keeps crashing because it's an ancient computer and the only drive that works is the floppy A drive and our new computer only has a disc drive. Also, I put the story on Webdings because I didn't want my brothers to read it and it got stuck like that so now I can't read what it says.):mad:

[Matt A]

As long as you've got enough skill to pull it off, that would be f**king amazing.

One question, though: would his daughter be his apprentice or his enemy? Those two relationships would produce very different stories...

[Raven37]

Yes of course, but you really should've done one of those poll thingies on this thread. They're really effective.;) Anyways, go ahead and post your story!:D


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[Red X Unmasked]

As long as you've got enough skill to pull it off, that would be f**king amazing.

Hopefully you do.

[Vivace]

Didn't she die? I'm talking about the comic so this may not be the same with the show. But if you can pull it off sure that sounds very interesting.


EDIT: My bad. In the comics Slade had a son who was killed

[Aquagirl15]

go for it! nothings holding you back. you told me about the idea and i told you that once you became a member you should post it. :D

[Magick]

I would totally read that. As long as she isn't too similair to my character, who was raised to believe that she was Slade's daughter, and then turned against him, I'm cool. Sounds like a delicious idea.

[Kregor8]

Hmm, sounds cool. I'll read it if you have skills as a writter. If you don't have skills, don't let it deter you. Just read all the stuff Reid and I have posted, helping people out, and follow the advice. Then you'll either have the skills, or you'll be trying so dang hard it won't matter. Yeah, it sounds original and cool. Magick - I haven't read your story. I'll need to get on that...
Ok, I'll be busy. See you when you post your first chapter...

7<regor

[Sproxie]

That would be a very interesting idea, I would definitely read it. :)

[T.T.Raven4]

Didn't she die? I'm talking about the comic so this may not be the same with the show. But if you can pull it off sure that sounds very interesting.


EDIT: My bad. In the comics Slade had a son who was killed
Slade was forced to kill his two (Is there 3?) Sons.

Anyway, Yes. It would be fricking awesome! Do it! Do it! Do it!

[The_NewCatwoman]

As long as you've got enough skill to pull it off, that would be f**king amazing.
I don't understand why this is so prelevant here all of a sudden but the blatant swearing has to stop. Spread the word, tell your friends, this is a kid-friendly site and such language is frowned upon. This is just a reply, the next time you'll receive an official warning from me.

tNC

[Red X Unmasked]

Slade was forced to kill his two (Is there 3?) Sons.

Wrong. He was actually forced to kill one son, and that was Jricho. Grant (Ravager) was killed because of the power given to him by the HIVE.

[Matt A]

I don't understand why this is so prelevant here all of a sudden but the blatant swearing has to stop. Spread the word, tell your friends, this is a kid-friendly site and such language is frowned upon. This is just a reply, the next time you'll receive an official warning from me.

tNCSorry.

[Ephidel500]

http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/4233/ruanime.gif Hi Hi.


Thanks for all the positive feedback. I think I will post it. Now I just got to get my computer to work.:sad:

[T.T.Raven4]

Wrong. He was actually forced to kill one son, and that was Jricho. Grant (Ravager) was killed because of the power given to him by the HIVE.
I know you're right for some reason. I know Slade murdered Jericho, (His son) and I guess I mixed Ravager (His other son) up with someone else. I just sware I read something saying "Now Deathstroke knew he was responsible for the deaths of both his sons" somewhere. Oh well.

~TTR4~

[Raven37]

I think Ephidel is making up a new character to be the daughter of Slade... am I right? Plus, I don't think any of us O'Fallon MO people/friends have read any of the comics. (MO friends- ME!, Aquagirl15, Beastgirl17, and Ephidel500) Where do you get the comics?:confused: Anyways, please post your story soon! I am anxious to read it!:anime:


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[Red X Unmasked]

I just sware I read something saying "Now Deathstroke knew he was responsible for the deaths of both his sons" somewhere. Oh well.

~TTR4~
Cause Deathstroke FEELS that it's his fault for Grant's death, because the HIVE wanted Deathstroke to work for them to kill the Titans, but he refused. That's why they got Grant to work for them (because he already had a grudge with the Titans for wrecking his home) and pump him with all those experimental chemicals which caused his death (they were planning on him dying so that they could get Deathstroke to take his place after making it seem like the Titans killed Grant).
Hope that clears things up :).

[T.T.Raven4]

Cause Deathstroke FEELS that it's his fault for Grant's death, because the HIVE wanted Deathstroke to work for them to kill the Titans, but he refused. That's why they got Grant to work for them (because he already had a grudge with the Titans for wrecking his home) and pump him with all those experimental chemicals which caused his death (they were planning on him dying so that they could get Deathstroke to take his place after making it seem like the Titans killed Grant).
Hope that clears things up :).
Yup. That was it. Thanks Red X, that clears up
so much.

[Red X Unmasked]

Welcome.

[Crowgirl]

Back on topic. Yeah! I would so read that.

[Ephidel500]

I'm almost ready to post it. I'm in the middle of decoding what I've got, so once I get my new computer working I'll add some more and hopefully send it to a really good writers who can edit it.


Thanks for the good feedback.:anime:
I feel so loved.:D
FEAR the color PINK!!!:evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:

[Raven37]

FEAR the color PINK!!!:evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil:
Gee, that was random. Anyways, I can't wait for you to post it! Please post it soon!:anime:

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[Red X Unmasked]

Out of curiousity, will Slade's daughter become the Ravager like from the comics, or no?

[Allen CARR]

If hes gonna do Daughter of Slade story, Slade daughter should be like a test tube baby.

[Aquagirl15]

uh Allen, Ephidel is a girl. who is this Ravager of which you speek? i feel so lost as i have never read the comics!!!! :sweat: i think i had better if i want to get anything about them, and don't try to explain, i still won't get it. :D

[Ephidel500]

Well, I guess it could be kinda confusing. Have you ever played Fire Emblem? On that game Ephidel is a guy. So maybe it confused him. It's okay I forgive you.

My nickname used to be Lianna, which made it easy to tell, but like all simple things, it was soon replaced by a more difficult name. I am now called tKada.

Oh, about my story, I'm almost(seriously folks) done deciphering my story. I will have to retype it on this computer then. But first I must fix the computer, for the remnants of our worm virus are seriously beginning to get on my nerves.
DIE!!!

[Red X Unmasked]

who is this Ravager of which you speek?
Here is the bio of ALL the Ravagers, so you can understand better. This might be a while.
(Info taken from Titans Tower)

Ravager I
Grant Wilson is the son of Slade Wilson (See Deathstroke, the Terminator) and Adeline Kane Wilson. The couple met while in service in the United States Army (Adeline had been Slade's instructor in guerilla warfare). Sparks ignited immediately between the two, and they quickly fell in love and wed. Shortly thereafter,
Adeline gave birth to a son, Grant. Slade continued on active duty, and volunteered for a medical experiment in resisting truth serums. The experiment had an unforeseen side effect: it gave Slade enhanced strength and heightened reflexes. Shortly after this, Adeline gave birth to a second son, Joseph.
Grant followed in his father's footsteps and attended military school.
When Grant became a young man, he moved to New York City's East Village, where he fell in with the H.I.V.E. It was Grant's apartment that Starfire crashed into as she escaped her Gordinian captors. His apartment suffered even more damage as the New Teen Titans entered the scene. Grant demanded compensation for damages, but was told he would not be compensated. A bitter and angry man to begin with, Grant's rage toward the Titans festered. Things became worse when to his ex-girlfriend Carol's apartment and tried to get her back. When things began to get rough, Wonder Girl and Starfire intervened and chased Grant away.
The H.I.V.E. offered to amplify Grant's natural abilities artificially and sent him after the Titans, a job Deathstroke, the Terminator initially refused. Grant received powers and a costume reminiscent of his father's and named himself the Ravager. Whereas his father's abilities were amplified so that 90% of his brain capacity was being used, the H.I.V.E. Offered to increase Grant's mental faculties to 100%. This made the powers unstable, a fact the H.I.V.E. knew well in advance.
The Ravager attacked the Titans, who he perceived were responsible for his problems. His attempts to kill them were interrupted by Deathstroke, who was trying to save his son. It was, however, too late. Although the empath Raven was able to soothe his suffering, Grant Wilson died in his father's arms, as his powers proved too taxing for his body.
The H.I.V.E. planned Grant's death in order to make Deathstroke take the contract upon himself, which he did following Grant's death.

Ravager II
Bill Walsh and Slade Wilson trained together at Camp Washington. The two men were rivals. Bill was jealous of Slade's abilities, and thought that Slade was rubbing his nose in his failures. He also believed he had a chance to have a relationship with Adeline Kane until Slade showed up. Eventually, Bill Walsh washed out of the program, blaming Slade for his failures.
Walsh eventually became the terrorist known as the Jackal. The president from Quarac sent the Jackal to find Slade, and find out who hired him to kill the Colonel. To gain leverage, the Jackal kidnapped a young Joseph Wilson (who was now 5 years old, or so).
This forced Slade to admit to his wife that he was secretly the mercenary known as Deathstroke, the Terminator. Adeline and Slade (outfitted as Deathstroke) together confronted the Jackal. Slade refused to give the Jackal the information he requested, because it would violate his professional code of ethics. Slade gambled he could react fast enough to save his son; He saved Joseph's life, but not before one of Jackal's men had begun to slit his throat. Joseph was now mute.
Years later, Bill Walsh took advantage of Grant Wilson's hate for the Teen Titans. He was the H.I.V.E. agent that recruited Grant to take part in the experiment that cost him his life.
Walsh later took up the identity of the Ravager to lure Deathstroke into conflict with him. Deathstroke tracked him down and the two battled, as Ravager revealed his identity to Deathstroke. Walsh intended to detonate a bomb which would kill the both of them. Slade bested Ravager in battle and plunged a sword into his chest, killing him. Slade was also able to defuse the bomb.

Ravager III
When Slade Wilson's mother died, his father married a woman named Frannie. Shortly afterward, Frannie gave birth to a son named Wade. Shortly after that, Frannie divorced Slade's father. As the two half-brothers grew, Wade always left inferior to Slade, even though Slade looked out for him.
Wade met Adeline Kane and was immediately taken with her. Adeline had a brief relationship with Wade DeFarge.
Although the two parted ways, Wade remained bitter over the breakup When Slade met Addie, he had no idea of her past relationship with Wade, nor did Addie know Slade was Wade's half-brother. Still, Slade's marriage to Addie only intensified Wade's bitter feelings towards him.
Wade went over the edge and kidnapped Slade's sons, Joseph and Grant when they were toddlers. Wade was obviously demented, and tried to tell the boys that their father was an evil man. Slade, Addie, Wintergreen and Frannie came to the rescue. As Wade tried to kill Slade, Frannie shot her own son Wade and he plummeted off a cliff. At that time, he was presumed dead. In truth, Wade survived. The cold cauterized his wound.
Wade went underground after that, and joined a mercenary army. He later hired the Jackal to kidnap Joseph Wilson so Slade would be forced to reveal to Addie that he was secretly Deathstroke, The Terminator. The plan was successful, although he did not plan for Joseph's throat to be cut.
Wade stayed underground and planned to exact revenge on Slade and ‘reclaim' Addie for himself.
Years later, a new man assuming the identity of the Ravager was hunting down Slade's friends and loved ones, killing his informant Maurice, his tech supplier, Squirrel, and his former lover, Lili (it should be noted, however, that Lili is presumed dead; her Jeep fell off a cliff, but a body was not found). Ravager even killed his own mother, Frannie.
The new Ravager was revealed to be Slade's half-brother, Wade DeFarge. DeFarge was insanely jealous of Slade - and tried to torture him by killing anyone Slade cared about. Meanwhile, Adeline Kane, now insane, donned a Vigilante costume, and came into conflict with Slade and the Ravager. During the fracas with Ravager, Addie was shot between the eyes and presumed dead. The Ravager was captured and taken away by authorities. Later, in the morgue, Adeline awoke. Apparently, she had gained Slade's immortality as well through a blood transfusion.
Wade was later offered $100,000 to kill Rose Wilson by an anonymous source; Wade would do it for free, he declared, just to get revenge on his half-brother, Slade. Wade found Rose in Chicago living in a foster home with Margaret and Mark Madison. He brutally killed the Madisons and set his sights on Rose. Rose eluded Wade, just as the Teen Titans arrived, also claiming an anonymous source tipped them off to the fact Rose was in trouble. Just as the Titans got the drop on Ravager, an arrow containing halothane gas exploded and knocked the team out. When they awoke, Rose and the Ravager were missing.
Rose later awoke in Deathstroke's lair, as Slade apologized for abondoning her. With Wintergreen and his family gone, he reached out to Rose as the only family he had left. He claimed that the two of them can erase the painful memories of the Ravagers, and replace them with better ones. Slade offered Wade DeFarge - now tied up and helpless - as Rose's first kill and she accepts. Rose grasped Slade's sword and exacted a final revenge on the man who killed her mother.

Ravager IV
Rose is Slade Wilson's estranged daughter from a tryst with former Oriental Clan Princess, Lillian "Sweet Lili" Worth. Slade did not learn Rose was his daughter until she was 14 years old. Their relationship has always been a turbulent one.
When Rose was kidnapped by the third Ravager - Wade DeFarge - her mother was seemingly killed and she learned Slade was her father. Rose was later placed in protective custody with the Titans and became a member of the team. She later left the Titans and embarked on her own - only to return later to become Lian Harper's nanny.
Sometime later, Rose found a home with foster parents, Margaret and Mark Madison in Chicago. Her happiness was shattered when the third Ravager - Wade DeFarge - arrived and slayed the Madisons - and set his sights on Rose.

Deathstroke conveniently arrived to save his estranged daughter. Awakening later in his lair, Slade offers Rose a chance to erase their bad memories and replace them with better ones. To become his new apprentice as well as re-forge their father-daughter bond. Rose's first act as his new student is to slay the former Ravager, so she could become the new one.
Rose is unaware that Slade hired Wade DeFarge in the first place, in an attempt to push Rose towards him. She is also unaware that Slade has pumped her full of the same serum that made him Deathstroke - and the serum has induced Rose into a state of psychosis. Formerly estranged from her father, Rose nonetheless has become his eager new student - and adopted the identity of The Ravager. Slade has put his daughter on a destructive and violent new path - and Rose delusionally believes this is the only way she can have a family.
Rose's psychosis has run deeper as time passes. When she failed her father by hesitating to kill her brother, Jericho, Slade doubted her readiness. To show her loyalty, Rose gouged out her left eye to prove she is just like her father.

[Aquagirl15]

well even though you didn't have to explain i'll still read this loooooooooong explanitation. :D i LOVE ur new avatar Ephidel! it's so cool!!! ok back to topic. you need to post ur story soon we are getting restless!!! :mad:

[Ephidel500]

Thanks, Aquagirl! I found it just to bug Beastgirl, I sent her a PM with that said movie star pose!!!
Yay! I finally got the computer working!!! Rejoice, for now I can post my award-winning story!(JK) Here's the prologue. Don't expect more until after Christmas, due to annoying relatives and my extreme laziness. I also have to finish the 1st Chapter and send it to multiple friends for editing and feedback. Enjoy!!!
P.S. I'm open to any and all death threats, and constructive critiscism is always a plus.(as long as you aren't to hard on me, Raven37, you know I don't posess the superior writng ability of either you or Aquagirl15.)

Prologue: Mystery Girl

The red siren light flickered overhead. The titans waited for the usual line.

"Trouble," Robin said.

There it was. The titans ran to the huge screen dominating half of the main living quarters. It showed a picture of a thin black-haired girl in a metallic suit. She was laughing maniacally at something just out of the screen. Then she turned her head so that she directly faced the security camera. "Well, well, looks like I’m being watched. Why don’t you tell the teen titans to come down here and face me? I’d accept their challenge any day. How ‘bout it, titans? You up for the fight, or are you still crying over your precious Terra?" the mysterious girl jeered evilly. The screen went blank. Robin worked to restrain Beast Boy.

"Let’s go."

[Ephidel500]

And here's chapter one. Feedback/Death threats/criticism is always apprecaited. I really don't think I'm all that good at writing fight scenes. Basically, I think I suck. But hey, you be the judge.:anime: Yay Shesshoumaru!!!:cool:


Chapter 1:

The titans hurried down to the government chemical testing area. As far as the titan’s knew, the mysterious girl was heading toward the synotheum control center. Synotheum was the most dangerous and unstable substance in the universe. It was also the most powerful. If this girl got to the power core, she’d have enough power to destroy the world.

The titans rushed into the power room. The mysterious girl greeted them. "Well, well, if it isn’t the famous Teen Titans. Glad you decided to join me after all."

"Who are you and what are you planning?" Robin demanded.

"To steal synotheum, of course. As for your other question, you may call me the Ghost of Honor, for I will haunt your steps until you have payed for what you have done."

She broke the barrier that protected the synotheum with a glowing dagger and grabbed the stick off the pedestal. She stuck the synotheum into a pouch hanging from her side and flipped gracefully over the titans and onto the roof. She landed face-to-face with none other than Robin the boy wonder.

"Out of my way," She snarled.

"And let you get away with the most unstable substance known to man? I don’t think so."Robin replied.

"Then I guess you thought wrong."She said. Her fist glowed light purple as it collided painfully with the side of Robin’s face. Robin was sent flying straight into a brick wall. Starfire came up and sent a stream of pale green starbolts at the metallic girl. * She dodged them by jumping up the fence, but as she reached the top to escape she was hit with a blast from Cyborg’s sonic cannon and fell with a thud to the ground. Raven surrounded a couple of waste containers and directed them toward the fallen foe. The large containers seemed to bury the girl and the titans moved in and waited for any movement. After several minutes of waiting Robin began moving the rubble away. He was met only by the pure dirt floor.

How did she do this? Robin thought.

He piled into the T-car with the rest of the titans and headed home for a good night rest. He would try to figure out this strange girl’s motive in the morning. For now, he just wanted to go home and work out any possible leads so he could send out the others to investigate while he looked for more clues. He needed to know as much as he could about this girl. He needed to know her past, her plan, her location, and her power capability. Why had she sought them, out? What did she mean by "you must pay for what you have done"? What had they done? All these questions he hoped to answer.

I better get to work, he thought, as he shut himself inside his room and began to piece things together, bit by bit.

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Starfire was upset about today’s events. This new "purple girl" was disrupting the lives of her friends. Robin had already shut himself up in his room and refused to come out for anyone. Starfire knew he had noticed the obvious similarities between the girl’s costume and the ones of Slade’s apprentices. She was worried for her dear friend. She did not want him to go to insane trying to track down this new foe. He was already working to hard as it was, and any extra stress might cause him a psychiatric meltdown.

"Slorvlac Buagavek,"She murmured sleepily as she climbed into bed. She was asleep in minutes, and left the purple girl, Robin, and the whole of Jump City behind.

[Red X Unmasked]

Pretty good. Keep it up.

[Matt A]

You already know what I think, but I'll just say it again: this rocks!

I'll offer two small pieces of advice, though: one, have the chapters in white rather than in purple, it makes them easier to read; two, see if you can put these chapters in a seperate thread, as it'll mean that more people will be willing to read them.

[Aquagirl15]

1. AWESOME!!! 2. new thread would be handy. 3. yeah the purple is kinda confusing but it works well cause the mysterious girl's powers are purple. 4. and most important: KEEP IT UP!!!!!! :D (or pink will be amung your x-mas presents. lots and lots of pink:evil:)

[Crowgirl]

You already know what I think, but I'll just say it again: this rocks!

I'll offer two small pieces of advice, though: one, have the chapters in white rather than in purple, it makes them easier to read; two, see if you can put these chapters in a seperate thread, as it'll mean that more people will be willing to read them.
Welshie's Mate is right on all three accounts. This does rock, and if you could choose a different color for posting, that'd be nice.

Also, posting in another thread would be nice. It took me a while to actually look here for a chapter. Also, by posting on another thread, you're able to have a title for the story, which helps people post and get intruiged.

Other than that, can't wait for more.

Crowgirl

P.S. By the way, not to be picky, but I think it's 'synovium' not 'snyotheum.

P.P.S. GO PURPLE!!!

[Red X Unmasked]

Actually, it's xynothium with an x.

[Aquagirl15]

hey who knows? i can't spell so don't ask me but they never spelt it in the episode so yeah... post soon even though the holdays are making you lazy! :D

[Raven37]

You also already know what I think because you PM-ed it to me, but like Welshie's Mate, I'll say it again: this rocks!!! I pretty much have the same advice as other people: 1. Purple print= no no 2. New thread would be nice 3. xynothium 4. POST MORE OR SUFFER!!!:evil: Overall, keep up the good work!:D


-Raven37

[Ephidel500]

I tried to change the name from Poll to Thread. It didn't work. All start a new thread right now.