Alone

[Starrysky]

I wrote this when I was really depressed. You are warned. This also probably sounds...wierd, but whatever.





Alone

I am alone. I am lost. My heart is gone and my soul longs to flee from this wretched body. My heart is shattered into splinters that are more numerous then grains of sand. My sanity…it has fled me long ago. I am no longer human. I live, I want to die. I am lost. I am alone. I flee from the pitiful gazes that greet me so often. They haunt me. They …they who made me this way…who made me alone…I am cursed. I always will be. This is me. This is my story…of how things came to be…and how I am alone…Forever.

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Short...but it's only the prologue.

[rrarbecy]

:eek:woah...That was great. You must have been REALLY depressed. This looks like it will be great. That's really sad and depressing. Really heart-felt. Love it.

[Aquagirl15]

when i read the first few sentences i thought 'Terra' right away. i don't know if that's true but it really seems like it. this was really good but i have one gripe. 'Alone' is the name of my poem thread. :mad: well i never post on it anymore so i guess it's ok, you didn't know. ;) you MUST have been depressed! :crying:

[Starrysky]

Yes...when I get depressed, I get overly depressed...i I stay that way for awhile...and it rubs off on people...:( *sigh*:( It sucks.

Sorry...:crying: ...I din't know that that was a title of a post of yours...:crying: ...it was the best title I could think of at the time.

[Aquagirl15]

no prob! ;) i don't post on it anymore like i said. i get overly depressed too. then i get mad and tell my cat or call a friend and tell them how much i hate my life. :shrug: but i really don't. my mom calls me a drama queen. :rolleyes: totaly me. my brother must be a drama king cause he's worse than me! :D

[oneeyemonkeypie]

People who talk to cats are weird. :anime:


Well done, I like it. Descriptive, but not wordy.

Hooray!


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[Aquagirl15]

thanx! i try!!! :D but at least it i can let it out somewhere. if i just let it out it makes me feel better!

[Raven37]

I was really depressed today.:sad: (If you go look on my fic, you might know why...) I made up a little peom in my head... maybe I'll post it on my song thread... :shrug: Anyways, that was really good. I enjoyed it a lot! Please write more!:D


-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/331/c/4/_raven__by_FreeLancerFox.gif

P.S. People who talk to cats are weird. :anime: You know it! Aquagirl is super weird!....jk.;)

[Starrysky]

This had more reviews than I thought it would. :eek: Quite a lot. :eek: Well, I'll continue as soon as possible, but I do have 2 other fics to work on...and one of them is kind of neglected...:sweat:

[decka]

Starrysky!!!! OMG! I LOVE this story!!! Even if it is only just the prologe. I can't wait to hear more from you! This is soooooo good!! I'm happy your not that depressed anymore, cuse you must have been pretty sad. Luv ya and your awsome poem!

[Matt A]

It was short - perhaps too short - and I don't have the foggiest whose PoV that was. But, somehow, I want to know more. That's always a good sign...

[Starrysky]

You're supposed to be confused. :D And when I get into a state of intense depression, I can't tolerate to do somthing for very long. I would rather sit and wallow in depression...which is stupid...but oh well...I figured I could at least give you guys something to do while you wait for my other fics...which I'm working on as fast as I can. ;)


:) ;) :anime: :D See ya!:D :anime: ;) :)

[Sproxie]

:eek:woah...That was great. You must have been REALLY depressed. This looks like it will be great. That's really sad and depressing. Really heart-felt. Love it.I agree.

[Starrysky]

This is a notice to all that I will be on a vacation to California for Christamas, I'm leaving tomarrow night and will not come back until after New Year's. I don't think I'll have any access to internet connections...so yeah...:( :crying: :crying: :crying:

[rrarbecy]

This is a notice to all that I will be on a vacation to California for Christamas, I'm leaving tomarrow night and will not come back until after New Year's. I don't think I'll have any access to internet connections...so yeah...:( :crying: :crying: :crying:
Have fun!

[Raven13]

Dude that was like, FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!:D See you are just like me, when I'm down adn really depressed you cna make up some of the best writings. TO get over that stage I usally just go outside for a walk!:anime: Anyway I love it so far. Qiute short but very detail. I have an idea that it is Terra, or maybe Raven but i'm sure it is Terra!:) Anyway very Good!!!!!!!!:p

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Sweet~Surrender]

Wow!! I really really really looved that!!! It was soo wow!!! Please write more soon !!

[Raeofdarkness]

Wow! Please write more soon!

[Star_Fire_Chick]

ya the first thing i thought also was Terra!great job cant wait 4 more!

[Crowgirl]

People who talk to cats are weird.

You know what Reid? You... you...

As soon as I find a word that will appropriately tell Reid what he is, I'll continue that sentence. But I loved it!! Man, you really were depressed...

Have fun at New Year's!

Crowgirl

[Starrysky]

I'm Back! :D

I was back by the 2nd, but my internet wouldn't work...but now it's fixed! So expect a new ch. for all of my fics either today or tomarrow!

[Starrysky]

I have a new chap. for all to read. It's stil kinda small...but oh well...


Chapter One



Terra slowly stood up from a crouch, and once more looked over the sleeping city that lay before her. A slight breeze ruffled her hair across her face. She raised her up to her face to tuck the unruly strands behind her ear, in an effort to get her hair out of her eyes. As she raised her eyes up to the night sky, she felt a bitter pang of sorrow. Terra’s eyes clouded briefly with unshed tears, but she held on so furiously to whatever scrap of pride she had left within her, and so kept her sorrow within herself. No one was here to see her though, as high up this cliff as she was, and she was beginning to think that it might be good to let go of her sorrow. But as hard as she tried, she couldn’t summon up the tears that had come so easily before.


The little breeze swirled around her. Terra shivered slightly, and reached her arms across to hug herself, keeping some warmth in. She took a few steps down a small trail that led to a small cave where she would take shelter for the night. She paused, and turned her head toward the city again and gazed at it a little longer. She shook her head slightly and continued down the narrow path. The breeze continued to blow.

[Matt A]

Wow! That's all that needs to be said.

One question, though: at what point in the whole Terra saga is this story set?

[Starrysky]

I'm really sorry for not post for such a long time...:crying: But my internet company disconnected me! :mad: But I'm back and here's another little chapterette for you all.

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Ch. 2, section 1

"Terra," came a voice in the darkness," you cannot avoid me for long," the voice paused, "You will come back to me, and I will get my true apprintice. My power cannot be evaded," a low chuckle surfaced, "Try as you might to run from me, instead you shall run into my arms." the chuckle resumed, then faded into the darkness once more.

A few miles away, tucked into her cave, Terra shivered, almost like she knew the plans set for her and those she called her friends.

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I hope you like it, more coming soon! (please review! :crying: )

[Aquagirl15]

That was good but the short chapters are a little dissapointing. Try to get more out at a time! ;)

[Starrysky]

Sorry! :crying: I'll try.

[Matt A]

Welcome back, Starrysky! That update was short, almost too short, bu definitely interesting nonetheless. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.

Ta,
Matt A