View Full Version : Slipped Pieces. A Teen Titan fic. Hope you like!
Pookey
12-12-2004, 05:48 PM
Okay, this is my first fic. on this site. This may seem a little confusing at first, but it's all good. Please R&R. OC is greatly appreciated. I love to know what you guys think, b/c I hope to post another fic. here.:D
Ch. 1 "Slipped Pieces"
Pink mans Starfire is singing, and green means the music is in the background.
Starfire is standing on top of a pile of boulders. The other Titans are skattered across a rocky mine. They all were searching despritly for there fallen leader. Star had been up all night searching for him after the battle.
"Star, we can't find him anywhere. Are you sure he fell here?" Beast Boy softly asked the crying girl. "Yes, I am positive. *sniff* Please, I need to be alone right now." Star replied as she flew to the Tower... into Robin's room.
As she was holding a picture of Robin.
He was leaning against an oak tree in normal attire; he was wearing black baggy pants and a red short sleeve shirt, he was also wearing a pair of black sunglasses to cover his eyes from everyone's view.
She thought he was so handsome out of his uniform, and his it. Heck, she even caught him in the hall in a towel one day, but she did not smile at the thoughts of her past. Robin was gone, gone forever. Starfire started to sing when she sat on his bed and looked at his picture.She was singingAvril Lavigne's "Slipped Away".
Na na/ Na na na na na/ I miss you/ I miss you so bad/
Star took 2 of her fingers and slid them down Robin's picture. She started to cry again.
I don't forget you/ Oh it's so sad/
A tear ran down her face and landed on his face.
I hope you can hear me/ I remember it clearly/
(flashback) They were fighting Slade. Yes, he was back, this time he wouldn't leave until the Titans were gone for good, or a least one of them anyway. He was out for one Titans in paticular, and surprisingly enough it wasn't Robin. He was out for Starfire. He knew if he killed her that the Titans would be vunerable. He had kinnaped her and she layed chained to the rocky floor. They were in a mine shaft. She tried her starbolts and eye beams, but they were useless. She was stuck unless Slade let her go, which was highly unlikely, or someone saved her.
"Well, well, well? What do we have here? I do believe we have ourselves a treasure." Slade menicingly, but yet camly stated.
"What do you want with me?" As Star yelled this to Slade the rest of the Teen Titans, except one, bursted into Slade's lair.
"Let. Her. Go. Slade." Cyborg groweled under his breath.
"Ah, The Teen Titans, what a suprise, where is Robin? I thought he would come by himself to save the girl himself. I guess not, he will miss quite a show." Slade pulled out a knife and put it to Starfire's neck. "If you come any closer, I'll slit her throut, and make sure she dies!" Slade lowered the knife to the tied Tameranien. As he was about to cut the terified gril's throut Robin came from behind and attacked Slade.
"What the.." Slade yelled as the knife was thrown in the air, and landed in front of the Boy Wonder.
"I wouldn't want to miss this for the world." Robin quickly started cutting Starfire's ankles and then moved to her right arm. The others were being attacked by Slade's minions in the background, so they were no help. Slade kicked Robin in the side of the head, knocking him unconsious for a second or two.
"I'm not through with her yet!" Slade slyly stated as he picked up the knife, his back was turned from the Tamerainnien.
"Yes you are!" Starfire shouted as she shot him with her eye lasers. Slade hit the wall, Robin stood up drowsily, but quickly ran to Star.
"Are you ok?" He asked as he continued cutting the chain on her right arm.
"Yes Robin, I am undamaged... LOOK OUT!" She shoved him out of the way of the incoming disk. It exploded in front of the girl causing a giant hole in the floor. She was burned and cutt from the explosion, but she was ok.
"STARFIRE!!" Robin yelled as the disk exploded. He ran to her side as the dust settled.
"ROBIN!! NOOOO!!" Star screamed as Slade hit him in the stomach sending him flying into a rock jutting out of the ground. He was on his knees and looking up at Slade. Slade grabed Robin's cape and threw him at Starfire. She was so enraged that a blast of energy shot Slade so hard it threw him into the hole, but Slade shot a grapling hook onto Robin's leg, pulling the Boy Wonder down with him.
The day you slipped away/
Robin grabbed on of Starfire's lose chains and whispered into her ear. "I can't hold on much longer, so before I fall I want to tell you something very important."
Was the day I found it won't be the same/
Robin's grip on the chains were loseining, and the chain was slowly breaking. Star grabed Robin's arm and was trying to pull him up. She couldn't get a good enough grip because her left arm was still chained to the floor. "Robin, you must not give up!" She was straining to keep Robin and Slade up.
Oh /na na/ na na na na na/
"Star, whatever happends I love you, I always have and always will." He was about to kiss her on the check but then the chain broke.
I didn't get around to kiss you/ Goodbye on the hand/
"NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO, RRRROOOOBBBBIIIINNNN!!!!!!!" (end of flashback)
I wish that I could see you again
Starfire droped his picture onto her lap, and stood up. She stared blankly at a wall. It finally hit her, and it hit her HARD.
I know that I can't/
She started to talk to herself quitly. "Robin..Robin!! Please!! ROBIN, NOOO!!" She fell to the floor crying uncontrolably.
I hope you can hear me/ I remember it clearly/ The day you slipped away/ Was the day I found it won't be the same/ Oh
"STARFIRE, COME HERE NOW WE FOUND ROBIN!!!" Raven yelled in her communicator. Star heard Raven and flew to the mine shaft as fast as she could.
I've had my wake up/ won't you wake up/ I keep on asking why/
"Where is he!?!?!" Star yelled as she flew into the room where the others were. Cyborg was beside Robin with a serious look apon his face. Beast Boy was beside Cyborg fighting back tears. Raven was on the other side of Robin chanting, while trying to concentrate. Star flew to Robin. "What's wrong?" The terrified girl asked as she looked at the broken boy. "Ssttar, He..he's not responding." Beast Boy spoke first.
I can't take it/ It wasn't fake it/ It happened you passed by/
"Star...he might be dead." Cyborg stated first.
Now your gone/ Now your gone/ There you go/ There you go/ Somewhere I can't bring you back/
Star couldn't take it any more. She started to stand up, but colasped bck onto the floor.
Now your gone/ Now your gone/ There you go/ There you go/ Somewhere your not coming back/
Raven ran to Starfire and tried to wake her up, but couldn't. "Oh God! Why did you tell her that!? We don't know if he's dead yet!" Raven yelled. "Raven! Calm down berore you lose it." Beast Boy comforted the goth.
The day you slipped away/ Was the day I found it won't be the same/ Oh /
Later that day Star woke up in the infermery room. On the bed beside her she say Robin, laying unconconious. "He is in a coma Star. He won't wake up for a while. We are surprised he even lived through a fall like that." She turned to see that Cyborg was the the one who spoke.
na na/
Star slowly got up, not paying attention to the pain that shot through her.
na na na na na/
She leaned over to Robin and placed a small peck on his cheeck. "Please wake up soon Robin." I miss you
oneeyemonkeypie
12-12-2004, 05:59 PM
yay, firstsies!
Well done.
Pandering to the sappy rob/star demographic, huh? :rolleyes:
Regardless of subject matter, it was very attention grabbing!
rrarbecy
12-12-2004, 08:27 PM
This HAS to be the best description of feelings between Robin and Starfire since Vanishing Act. I like the music that you intertwine into your story. There's not really anything to critique, besides if you're against the Robin/Starfire relationship coughcoughreidcough. Very well done.
Raven37
12-12-2004, 08:49 PM
Wow. That was soooo good. I'm so glad you posted it!:anime: There's not really anything to critique, besides if you're against the Robin/Starfire relationship coughcoughreidcough. Very well done. yea.;)
-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/331/c/4/_raven__by_FreeLancerFox.gif
Starrysky
12-12-2004, 09:02 PM
Niceness. :cool: Keep it up. :D Everyone else stole what I wanted to say...so, well, um, yeah...good job and keep posting! :anime:
Pookey
12-12-2004, 10:39 PM
:eek: You guys really like it? Thank you so much!
Just so you know, this takes place after season 2. I'm going to try and put some of the episodes in my Ch.s
'Haunted' is my fav. episode, so that will be one of my main drives till that Ch.
But before I start incorperating the episodes, which will start after the holidays, I'm going to add a Christmas Ch.
Thanks again, and I'll try and post ASAP!
Matt A
12-13-2004, 03:42 PM
Pandering to the sappy rob/star demographic, huh? :rolleyes: Well, I shamelessly admit that one of those demographs (?) is me. Who'd have thought it, huh?
Anyway, this is great stuff. Please continue!
Sproxie
12-13-2004, 05:17 PM
I loved everything! The robin/starfire relationship was awesome, very good description. I could imagine everything. the flashback was also described very well, i actually understood it. (unlike other flashbacks...) and I think you described the way starfire felt greatly. in other words, AWESOME story, can't wait for another chapter!
if you're against the Robin/Starfire relationship coughcoughreidcough.
heh... :sweat: i'm only against it a little.... *cough* :rolleyes:
Rikku does rock raven37.
starburn1116
12-14-2004, 04:58 PM
Pandering to the sappy rob/star demographic, huh?
if i asked you what demographic was would you tell me to get a dictionary?
this story is da bomb!!!
you should write more
you will write more!!!!
please?
Crowgirl
12-14-2004, 06:25 PM
Ninesies!! Yay!!
I loved the description about Star and Robin's feelings, it was awesome. I loved it so.
Also, since Avril Lavinge rocks, I loved how you used her song, touche, touche...
Rikku is the guy from Kingdom Hearts, am I right? If not, then it has to be Final Fantasy, right?
Pookey
12-16-2004, 07:13 PM
Here's Ch. 2. No Fluff. :( but I need to post this. srry for any grammer/spelling mistakes I don't have WORD yet.
Ch.2 "Stichings"
It was early in the morning, and Robin was softly slepping in a small bed. It wasn't his usual dark and lonly room, it was the infremery room. It had been a few days after his fall, and Raven noticed a gash on Robin's neck. she healed most of his cuts and bruises, but the gash was too deep to heal completly. Robin was not alone in the infremery room. Starfire was sleeping in the chair beside him. Her head was on top of Robin's slow moving chest, and she was holding onto one of his ungloved hands. Robin was no longer in his tatered uniform. A few days after his fall, Cyborg insisted Robin change into some pajamas. The stubborn leader finally gave in. He was now dressed in some long, black, baggy pants. He had a red 'R' on the left pocket with a yellow ring around it. His shirt was short sleeved, and of course...red. The only piece of clothing from his uniform was the mask apon his pale face.
"Hey Star?" Beast Boy whispered while slowly nuging the sleeping girl's sholder.
"Mmm..." Her eyes fluttered open to reveal her green friend smiling.
"Star, Robin has to have stiches." Beast Boy calmly whispered.
Star's eyes got very wide . "What are these stiches? Are they dangerous?" She shot her head up.
"Stiches are kinda like sewing, and no Star, they're not dangerous "
Star was still a little confused and worried, but she belived her friend.
"Star, don't worry, Robin will be okay, he needs the stiches, so his body can heal faster." Cyborg was trying to reassure the shocked alien, and it helped.
"But why must he have these stiches? Is he not getting better?" She asked still confused.
"He needs the stiches because I can not completly heal his larger wound on his neck. Robin will be fine, he will have to sit out of a few fights, but he will get better." Raven wheeled a tray of tools to beside Starfire. She winced at the sight of the tools.
"C'mon Star, you can sit out here with me. I tend to get a little quessy at the sight of needles, and that sort of junk." Star slowly stood up, all the while staring at the tools that soon would be going onto Robin's neck.
"Raven...will it hurt?"
"No, he's asleep, but even if he was awake, it still wouldn't hurt." Star nodded and walked out of the infremery room with Beast Boy.
Cy finished stiching up Robin's neck, while Raven put away the cleaned the tools that were used.
"Do you think he'll find out?" Cyborg asked after he finished with Robin.
"About the plan? No, even if he got close, you can use blackmail to lure him away." Raven said in her monotone voice we all know so well.
"I guess, but you know he can get pretty sly."
"I know, remember last year." She had a slight grin on her face when she looked at Cyborg.
"Don't remind me. I still need to get him back for that." He had a look on his face that could kill.
"You know it was funny." Raven was smiling evily. She looked at the sleeping Robin and back at Cyborg.
"Shut it..." He opened a drawer and puled out a small black wallet. "As soon as he wakes up we'll go."
"I'm so excited." Raven was back in her monotone voice. She was checking Robin's pulse on the moniters. She looked back at Robin and noticed him blink. "Cyborg, He's up."
"How long have I been sleeping?" Robin spoke after slowly sitting up. He was rubing his temples trying to wake up.
"All night, and don't touch the left side of your neck. You needed stiches, and so...well...I"m warning you." Cyborg hide his wallet in his right arm.
"What..stiches?" Robin gently felt around his neck and found his stiches the hard way. He winced when he felt them.
"I told you." Cyborg snickered as he walked over to his best friend.
"Where is everybody?" Robin gently placed his bare feet on the cold tiles.
"Hold on" Cyborg pressed a button on his arm showing Starfire and Beast Boy laughing. "Hey you two, We're done. You can come on in." As quickly as he said that the door to the infermery room showed the both, the floating red headed teen and a green laughing teen.
"Robin! You're better." Starfire soared over to the now standing Robin.
"Well mostly better." He weakly smiled. Robin was still a bit drowsy.
"You know you'll have to sit out for at least a few days." Raven smirked in the background.
"This is going to be a long week." Robin rubbing his temples again. Everyone was nodding. Just then the infremery room lit up in red and black as the alarm rang through the Tower. Everyone quickly looked at Robin and just stared for a few long seconds.
"Don't...say...anything..." Robin hissed as he slowly made his way to the door. Cyborg grinned from ear to ear while Beast Boy held back his laughter, Starfire and Raven just flew to the living room without a word.
Ohh! suspense? I hope I made you think about what could come next?:sweat:
Thank You all for reviewing. I'll have the Christmas fic. up before Christmas Day. It will be my Christmas present to you all.:D merry Christmas, (if you don't celebrate Christmas, I wish you a Merry place holiday here. )
I heart you all.!!!:anime:
P.S. berore I forget, b/c I will, PM me your thoughts/remarks on this...Would you guys care if I put BB and Raven together? It will be in LATER Ch.s much later, but still. PM me your thoughts. I just want to be sure you guys would be ok w/ that decision. I know how it feels to have my fav. couple broken up.:crying: *curses at people who put Robin and Raven together.* srry, if your a big them 2 fan. srry. I have issues.
srry I'm rambling, just PM me your opinion. k?
Sproxie
12-16-2004, 08:24 PM
*curses at people who put Robin and Raven together.*
Does that have anything to do with my signature? *glares at Pookey evily* (:p)
Cool chapter! I loved it, though the ending confused me a little.
Pookey
12-16-2004, 08:34 PM
*curses at people who put Robin and Raven together.* srry, if your a big them 2 fan. srry. I have issues.
I said SORRY if I offened you. I have issues with my mouth/fingers. Don't get mad at me, my fingers just took over the keyboard. so...sorry:(
Sproxie
12-16-2004, 08:38 PM
I was KIDDING. :rolleyes:
i think i'll quit using sarcasm....
Pookey
12-16-2004, 09:10 PM
no sarcasm good, just warn me. I was in a 'mood' i guess, but I'm ok now!!! I am th edefinition of sarcasm at my house, so I like it. Just, it's hard to tell sarcasm online for obvious reasons...
The ending confused you? TELL ME!!! What?! I must fix, some how...or was it from the conversations, b/c if it was, that will be explained later. :evil:
rrarbecy
12-16-2004, 09:21 PM
Robin/Starfire GOOD. Beast Boy/Raven GOOD. Raven/Robin BAD. (that's for you Sproxie.)
Sproxie
12-16-2004, 09:35 PM
Somebody help me. anybody...? :sad: FINE! *walks of mumbling*
(is Sproxie related to Lordeykins?) :D sorry, couldn't resist.
The ending confused you? TELL ME!!! What?! I must fix, some how...or was it from the conversations, b/c if it was, that will be explained later. :evil:
yea, thats what confused me.
Crowgirl
12-16-2004, 09:47 PM
Robin/Starfire GOOD. Beast Boy/Raven GOOD. Raven/Robin BAD. (that's for you Sproxie.)
YES!!! I can only think of one other fic where Robin and Raven were ALMOST put together. But as long as nobody likes a 'show' relationship with Cy, I'm good.
Can't wait for more! I liked the stiches part, but you did spell stiches wrong, and it doesn't really make a good first impression, seeing as it was the chapter title...
rrarbecy
12-16-2004, 10:24 PM
Somebody help me. anybody...? :sad: FINE! *walks of mumbling*
(is Sproxie related to Lordeykins?) :D sorry, couldn't resist.
I did NOT deserve that. If you didn't like that, you could have just told me.
decka
12-16-2004, 11:18 PM
wowzers! This is really good! I love the story line. I can't wait to see wait happens!! please post more soon!:D
Sproxie
12-17-2004, 04:13 PM
I did NOT deserve that. If you didn't like that, you could have just told me.Alright, Alright, i'm SORRY, I won't bring that up again. No, i don't mind the name Sproxie....
(by the way Pookey, please post soon, i really wanna see what happens!)
Pookey
12-17-2004, 04:55 PM
The conversations will be straightened out in ch. 3 or 4. I'll clear it up.
srry about the spelling, i don't have word, and my proofreading only goes so far.:sweat:
i'll post soon. promise, maybe Sat. night. i'm leaving for CT. Sat. morning, and i'll have a good long while to write other ch.s on the plane ride. :D your lucky i don't get car sick...j/k
please answer this quickly. do you want me to post a REALLY short ch. now? or wait till tommorow with more added? if now one replies. I'm posting it, so I won't have to worry about it.
Matt A
12-17-2004, 07:17 PM
Long chapters are always better.
Anyway, exactly what are the Titans planning? And what's Robin ever done that could be classed as blackmail? Either way, you've still got my attention.
Pookey
12-17-2004, 07:54 PM
All those questions will be answered soon.:evil:
I'm here!!!!! *looks at an silent ceowd* Fine I won't post *All yell, "NOOO"*
Well since I'm so nice here is Ch. 3. I'm in CT, and blah, blah...the floppy that I saved the origanal Ch. was busted, so I had to rewrite it. *hol on, bangs head on computer keeboard; ggvfbbhjgfvbdhmnj, I'm better* here is my new, improved, Ch.
Ch. 3 “A Car full of Surprises”
Robin slowly made his way down the long, dark, dreary halls of Titans Tower. While everyone rushed to the living room to see who was in for a butt whooping, he walked there. Robin had no real choice in the matter to walk everywhere, or not do any thing with quick movements. You could see through his fixed mask that he was miserable.
As he walked into the living room he paused and gazed at his teammates. Cyborg and Beast Boy were at the far end of the couch whispering. Cy had an evil grin painted across his face, while Beast Boy was suppressing his laughter. Raven was at the computer discussing the “robbery” that had faded away from the screen. Starfire noticed Robin walk in, but didn’t say anything.
“Would you like to share something Cyborg?” Robin smirked at the hybrid robot.
“Ahh…um, nope I’m good.” He was desperately trying to lie, and falling badly. Robin had a suspicion to what he was up to, but dropped the subject when he noticed Starfire avoiding his gaze.
“Hey Star? Are you all right? You seem…worried.” Robin made his way over to the Tamerainien princess.
“Nothing is wrong friend Robin.” She quickly answered him while putting on a fake smile. Robin knew she was lying for two reasons; 1- She answered him too quickly, and 2- She was a bad liar.
“You know you can tell me anything Star.” He placed a gentle hand on her shoulder.
“It’s just…” Star was interrupted by Cyborg yelling from the garage door. “C’MON STAR! WE GOTTA LEAVE!! AND ROBIN…DON’T EVEN THINK ABOUT TAGGING ALONG”
“I WON’T, PROMISE!” Robin yelled back while rolling his eyes. ‘Cy knows me too well’
“I must leave Robin, will you be okay here?” Star was now floating ready to leave.
“Sure Star, kick some butt for me will ya?” He smiled at the red head. She smiled back and placed a small peck on his cheek.
Star flew to the door and yelled back at the dazed and blushing Boy Wonder, “I will, and be careful.”
Star left with the others in the T-car and drove off into the city, leaving Robin in the same place with a goofy grin plastered on his face that seemed permanent.
The sky turning into a bluish black, and the wind was slowly picking up. It was turning into a cold winter for Jump City. The Titans, well four of them, were supposedly on their way to a robbery, but what the injured leader of the team didn’t know is that it was all a set up. Cyborg was in front driving to the mall, Raven sat beside him in the passengers seat reading. Beast Boy and Starfire were in the back. Beast Boy was grinning ear to ear as they left the Tower, while Star sat in the seat beside him looking out of the window at the sky.
“What did you say to Robin when you left?” Beast Boy asked after they arrived in the city.
“I did not tell him anything about the plan if that is what you mean.” She seemed depressed as the usual peppy girl continued to stare out onto the slowly changing sky.
“What’s wrong Star? You seem more depressed that Raven.” Cyborg was trying to comfort her, while also getting an evil glare from Raven.
“Yeah, is everything okay?” Beast Boy also got a glare. Star just sighed, but that was the only thing the others heard from her until they reached the mall.
“You guys know the plan. We all get each other’s presents after you get Robin’s his. You remember what happened last year.” Beast Boy nugged Cyborg in the arm.
“Don’t remind me. I swear, that guy can be so freakin’ sly when he wants to be.” Cyborg just shook his head. Raven fought back a smile while Starfire giggled at the memory.
It was 2 weeks before Christmas, and the Titans were out shopping for each other. When they all got home they went into their own rooms to hide their parcels. When Starfire arrived in the living room, she found Cyborg and Robin shacking hands and grinning evilly at each other.
“Was is the matter friends?” She flew over to her teammates.
“Oh nothing, except I am going to make sure our little friend Robin here doesn’t find a single present of his.” Cyborg stated cocky.
“We’ll see about that Cy. I will find those presents, and when I do…you will have to give me the password into your little…” Robin was quickly shut up by Cyborg’s hand over his mouth.
“DUDE! You can’t say anything until you find them.” Cyborg sternly glared at him. All Robin did was grin the most evil grin imaginable.
“You mean find,” Robin left the room for a second and came back with a bag full of wrapped gifts, “these?” Cyborg and Beast Boy’s jaws dropped all the way to the floor. Raven’s eyes grew wide with shock, and then she just smirked.
“Is there a reason you boys are arguing?” Star asked confused by the whole scene.
Raven broke the silence first, “Cyborg bet Robin that he couldn’t find his gifts before Christmas, and if he did that Robin could have the password to Cyborg’s diary.”
“That’s right, and I found them under what, 2 minutes tops. You know what that means Cy. Spill, what is it?”
Cyborg whispered real soft so know heard him, “mybabyT”
“What was that? I couldn’t hear you Cy?” Robin had another smirk on his face.
“mybabyT”
“A little louder would ya?”
“MYBABYT” Cyborg yelled which caused stifles of laughter throughout the room.
“Thanks I’ll be back soon.” Robin left the living room to read Cy’s journal while the others just turned and held back their laughter with all that they could, except Star. She went over to the humiliated robot and comforted until Robin came back with a grin of satisfaction.
“Thanks buddy, but I won’t say anything. I’ve gotten you good enough for one year.”
"Let's just get him his things and everyone else huh?" Cyborg was blushing. As the others just walked into the mall to shop for their friends.
Pookey
12-20-2004, 10:44 AM
If no one will review, I'm not going to post. I need some feed back people! Some one please review!!! If one person reviews then Ch. 4 will come, and I'm done with Ch.5. Do you guys not want your present??? PLEASE REVIEW!!
Matt A
12-20-2004, 06:06 PM
Hey, don't get so angry. That chapter was genius! Totally not what I expected it to be! After the depressing start, you do what so few of us ever do and show us the Titans just mucking around and generally being kids. Keep it up!
decka
12-20-2004, 06:47 PM
I loved it!! The last part was so funny! Good job! Now post please!!!!:D
Sproxie
12-20-2004, 09:49 PM
Loved it! It was hilarius. :anime:
I definitely agree with everything Welshi's Mate said.
Pookey
12-21-2004, 10:33 AM
sorry if i spazed...:sweat: THANK YOU SO... MUCH!!! Here's Ch.4
Okay, I have another Chapter for you guys. I don’t really like this Ch., but it had to be done. No fluff yet. *Tear. but some will, becoming soon. Yeah!!
This font I will use in the Christmas Ch. If it’s hard to read then tell me, so I’ll just put it for the title. I really like this font. Is so Christmas-e…is that a word?
Anyway, one more Ch. Then you get your present. Woot! Woot!
There’ll be some action in the next Ch.
Ch. 4 “Mall Decisions”
The Teen Titans were standing in front of the crowded mall. The sky was turning into a deep, dark blue. The wind was wiping the Titans with some force. Beast Boy was changed into a polar bear to keep warm, but his female friends weren’t so lucky.
“All right, now that we our back from our little trip into the past. Can we please just get this over with, I’m freezing.” Raven huffed out while pulling on her cape to try and keep warm from the wind.
“Yes. I agree. May we go inside?” Starfire had not brought a jacket with her, and she was not in any warm clothing. Her arms were hugging each other tightly desperately trying to warm herself.
“Fine, but when we are in I need to let you know what he wants.” Cyborg replied as he led the shivering team into the giant mall.
At the Tower, Robin sat on the long living room couch with his feet on the coffee table. Robin had decided to wear normal clothes during his “recovery” because he knew, without any one telling him, that he was in no condition to fight at the moment, and it didn’t help that the Tower was slowly becoming colder.
He was wearing long black jeans, a long hooded sweatshirt that was red and had a pocket at the bottom, and black and white sneakers. His hands were either in his pocket, or changing the channel on the remote.
“I should of asked Cy for the security password so I could turn the heat up…Is the nothing on?” He sighed and turned off the television. He had been flipping through channels for sometime now, and was getting bored with the same commercials that were playing over and over again.
‘”What can I do? I can’t train ‘cause Cy would kill me if he found out, and I can’t even if I wanted to…” Robin stood up cautiously and started to his room.
As he came up to Starfire’s door he started smiling and getting another goofy smile on his face. ‘I wonder what her room looks like? I bet it’s pink and purple with pictures on the walls.’ Robin abruptly stopped at her door.
“I now I shouldn’t, but there’s nothing to do…” The Boy Wonder stared at her door, debating whether to go in or not. “‘Should I do it?”
‘Yes of course. You know you want to…’
‘No, it would be a major violation of her privacy’
‘Yes’
‘No’
‘YES’
‘NO’
“I am so going to regret this” Robin made his decision, and…
“Is there something you want to talk about Star? You seem distracted?” Beast Boy noticed the usual cheerful girl was staring off into space, again.
“No, I’m fine, it’s just…I feel overwhelmed.” She looked at her green friend.
“It’s okay, I think we all do.” He brought his friend over to the others.
“Okay, are you guys ready to go?” Cyborg looked at his friends who all had bags and bags of purchases.
“Yep, I think were all set.” Beast Boy smiled wide.
“Yes, can we leave now?” Raven was sitting on a bench near were Beast Boy was standing and reading a new book she had bought. She also had a black coat on her lap.
“I am all done, are guys also finished?” Starfire smiled for the first time in a while. Everyone nodded and picked up their gifts.
“Hey Star, what did you get Robin?” Beast Boy smirked at the now blushing teen.
“I can not say. It is a surprise.” Star was still blushing.
“Oh c’mon Star, spill. I’ll say what I got him.” Cyborg started joining in the conversation.
“No, you will all find out at Christmas, just like Robin will.” Star was determined not tell anyone. Raven was starting to get interested, so she tried using her mind to find out what Robin got from the alien.
‘You will not find out that easily Raven. I made sure that your mind wouldn’t find out by meditating with you.’
‘Your good Star, your good.’ Raven knew she wasn’t going to find out so she left Star’s mind. Cyborg had given up for the time being and was on his way out the door with Raven close behind. Beast Boy was pleading with Starfire to tell him, while she just smiled and headed out the door.
When the reached the mall doors to leave they noticed something that wasn’t there before. Snow was falling everywhere. Starfire’s eyes grew big with delight. She had never seen snow before even though it was her second Christmas.
“What is this cold substance that falls from the sky dear friends?” She was floating now and her purple jacket she bought was slowly becoming white from the newly fallen snow. The others just smiled with a hint of hope that this would bring Robin and Starfire together. What they didn’t know was that Robin all ready confessed to Starfire about his feelings. Cyborg whispered something to the others, and then walked up to his amazed friend.
“Robin will be able to tell you more about this snow. When we get home ask him. Okay?” He snapped Starfire out of her trance and was bringing her to the T-car.
“Thank you friend. I will.” She climbed in the car and buckled up after putting her packages in the trunk. The rest of the team just smiled and climbed into the car waiting to go home.
decka
12-21-2004, 11:30 AM
I loved it! Did Robin go into her room? What did Star get for him? So many questions! Please post more soon!!
Pookey
12-21-2004, 11:50 AM
WOW, thank you Decka! Here's Ch.5. Ch.6 won't be posted until Christmas Day! or...I will make another Ch. before your present? IDK yet, depends on what mood in and if I can stay on the internet.
Okay, before you read, I suck at fight scenes! There I said it…so without further ado here is Ch.5!!!!
Ch. 5 “Battle of Snowy Stuff”
The ride home was not as quiet as the ride to the mall. Beast Boy was asking Starfire about her gifts, but she wasn’t giving him any hints. Cyborg was talking with Raven about what could be updated in the T-car, since she was helping him out more often.
“Do you think I should add it after or before the snow gets any worse Rea?” Cyborg was the only one who called Raven, Rea. She didn’t mind it since he was like her older brother. She told him as long as the others didn’t start calling her that she would be okay.
“You may want to add it now. The rate that the snow is falling now, it’s only going to get worse. Your ‘baby T’ will need it.” She smirked as he cringed at that nickname.
“Funny Rea, funny” He looked back to see Starfire smiling and Beast Boy begging at the girl.
“Please tell me, please!! I’ll do the face. You know you won’t stand a chance if I do the face.” Beast Boy turned into a sweet baby kitten. He started purring, and jumped into Starfire’s lap. Starfire started giggling, and picked up the kitten and placed him in the seat next to her.
“I’m not telling you, or any one else.” She waved a finger at the kitten. Beast Boy changed back into his human form, and was pouting in his seat trying to think of a way to get Starfire to tell him what she bought.
“You know Star is almost as stubborn as Robin is, Beast Boy.” Cyborg broke Beast Boy’s thinking trance.
“Yeah I know, but I still won’t give up.” He looked over at the now daydreaming Starfire. She was looking out the window thinking about Robin. She could feel Beast Boy nudging her arm to wake her, but she wasn’t going to. All she wanted to do right then was to see Robin. She was awakened by a sudden stop of the T-car.
“What’s wrong? Are we home?” She looked around to see that they had stopped in front of a pile of broken boulders.
“Oh man! What’s this?” Beast Boy walked out of the car, only to be shot by a wave of pink energy. He landed about five feet away from the T-car.
“Beast Boy!” Raven quickly ran out of the car to her fallen green friend.
“I’m okay, but what happened?”
“Move it you snot headed creeps.” Gizmo jumped over the two kneeling Titans.
“Cyborg and Starfire jumped out of the car to face their foes…
Robin slowly opened Star’s door to be surprised at what he saw. Her room was simple; her round bed was in the center of her room, she had a desk along the edge of her wall by her closet, she also had a night stand beside her bed that contained a mumbo alarm clock, picture frames, and a pink lamp facing her bed. Under the lamp was an old book that Raven let Star borrow. The book had a funny shaped bookmark sticking out of the top. He looked at the bookmark with interest, but something caught his eyes. It was an object on her desk.
Her diary…
The Titans quickly prepared for battle; Cyborg charged up his sonic cannon, Starfire was floating with her jade eyes glowing an eerie lime green and two starbolts formed on her hands, Raven was chanting and had a giant boulder above her head surrounded in a black aura, Beast Boy had changed into a green rhino ready to charge.
Gizmo’s pack extended out into four spider type legs, Mammoth lifted up a two rocks with his arms, and Jinx stood in front of Mammoth with hands in a fighting stance.
“Where’s your precious leader? Did Slade do him in?” Gizmo taunted the Titans, especially Starfire.
Star’s starbolts grew bigger. “I wouldn’t say that if I were you.” Cyborg warned Gizmo because he noticed this affected Star the most.
“No! Let him say what he wants! I want to prove him wrong myself.” She hissed through her grinding teeth glaring at Gizmo with pure hatred. Gizmo shuddered at that glare.
Cyborg just smirked at the now terrified Gizmo, “It’s your funeral, TITANS GO!”
The team ran to the H.I.V.E students. Raven threw the boulder she had been holding directly to Jinx, but she blasted it with her magic.
“Give it up you witch, you aren’t defeating me that easily.” She tried shooting her with pink hexes, but was knocked unconscious by the charging rhino that was Beast Boy.
“Personally, I wasn’t planning on it, but he was.” Raven sarcastically stated while lifting the waking girl in a black bubble.
“HEY! LET ME GO!!” Jinx was trying to break the trap she was in, but it was too strong for her.
“I’ll let you go…in jail.” Raven was slightly amused by the futile attempts of the pink sorceress. Jinx was kicking, punching, and shooting at the bubble, but it was useless. After about five minutes of this Jinx was showing signs of wearing out. Raven took this opportunity to let her go, and throw another boulder to her. This time the boulder hit its target. Jinx was knocked out for good this time.
Meanwhile, Cyborg was battling it out with Mammoth. The giant tossed his rocks to the hybrid robot. Cy was able to blast one, but the other knocked him to the ground. Cy stood up to see the giant charging right at him.
“Oh no you don’t” Cy shoot his cannon right at Mammoth. He was hit directly in the face. “Booya!” Cy ran to the toppled over teen. He picked him up and threw Mammoth into the pile of rocks. Mammoth stood up to see a green and blue blur charging at him. Beast Boy was carrying Cyborg by his arms in the shape of a pterodactyl. Cyborg fell onto the now alert Mammoth. Mammoth tried to attack, but was too slow. Cy landed on the giant with a loud, “BOOYA!!”
While all this was taking place, Gizmo was trying to dodge the starbolts that were coming at him in numerous amounts. Starfire stopped shooting at Gizmo for a sec. to see him shoot a missile at her. The explosive hit Star dead on knocking her to the ground. She landed on her shoulder with a scream of pain.
“Ha! My funeral indeed.” Gizmo was laughing at what he thought was a down Titan. Gizmo stopped laughing when he noticed Star stand up even more outraged. While she held her left shoulder, shot him with her eye beams. Gizmo fell to ground unconscious after letting out a quiet, “oh no…” before he was hit.
“Oh Yeah! We rule!” Beast Boy jumped around in a circle.
“Lets just take these idiots to jail, so we can get that idiot home.” Raven pointed to Beast Boy. Starfire flew over to the rest of the team holding her shoulder.
“What’s wrong Star?” Cyborg noticed her face that was stricken with pain.
“Oh nothing, my shoulder is just…” She winced with pain as she lifted her left arm.
“Hey Raven, can you fix Star’s arm?” Cyborg called over the goth. She nodded and shut her eyes, then a bluish aura can from her hands as she massaged Star’s shoulder.
“I couldn’t fully heal it. I reduced it from a fracture to a sprain, but you’ll have to be careful.” Raven monotonely stated as she finished.
“Thank you friend Raven.” Star hugged Raven with her right arm. Raven just smiled under her hood, and pulled away.
“No big deal.” She lied, Raven actually liked Starfire’s hugs. It made her feel like she had a friend. After the police took the H.I.V.E. away to jail, the Titans were on their way home.
Robin looked at Starfire’s diary with much interest. “Robin, don’t even think about it. You would be killed if she found out you looked in there, but I could…NO I won’t do it.” He turned around and looked at the book that was under her lamp. “But I guess I could look in there.” He sat on her soft, pink bed, he picked up the book, and opened it to the page the bookmark was. His eyes were wide when he saw what the bookmark was…it was himself.
The bookmark was a miniature Robin. The details were exact, his uniform, his belt, his hair, his face, even his mask. He gently picked up his miniature self like it was made of delicate glass. He examined it to a point.
“Did she make this?” Robin turned the bookmark over to find some writing on the back, it was in Starfire’s handwriting…
So I will always be near you even in the night. My Robin.
A smiled came upon his face, as he read the short but sweet poem. He heard the Titans come in to the Tower, so he put the bookmark and book back where he found it and walked out of the room with the biggest smile on his face.
Star_Fire_Chick
12-21-2004, 12:48 PM
i am the first to reply on this chapter!I just started it today and i love it!R & S!forever,did she make the bookmark ehr self?????????ahhh!i cant wait you must write more i love this fic!great job also!
rrarbecy
12-21-2004, 01:40 PM
That last part was nice. It's meant to be. MEANT TO BE, I TELL YOU!!!!!!! ROBIN/STARFIRE FOREVER!!!!! I SPITE YOU REID AND DRAE!!!!
starfire0639
12-21-2004, 02:11 PM
That last part was nice. It's meant to be. MEANT TO BE, I TELL YOU!!!!!!! ROBIN/STARFIRE FOREVER!!!!!hehehe i love this story pooky please do write more and its kinda funny that only robin and astarfire know of thier relationship while the rest of the titans are like sorta trying to hook them up and i love the poem oh and i love the begining where robin says i love you!ya got me hooked!so please write more soon:D ur awosme pooky!<3<3<3
Sproxie
12-21-2004, 06:02 PM
That last part was nice. It's meant to be. MEANT TO BE, I TELL YOU!!!!!!! ROBIN/STARFIRE FOREVER!!!!! I SPITE YOU REID AND DRAE!!!!you just need to be a little more open-minded...
VERY nice chapters! I loved them! the fighting scene wasnt bad, and cute idea about the Robin-bookmark.
Crowgirl
12-21-2004, 06:28 PM
Since when do all the Titans have diaries? Not that's not cool or anything, but...
This is really good, but I have a question. Well, two actually.
Are all of the Titans going to get hurt?
Is this a Christmas themed story?
Just please answer those, and I'll be good.
Matt A
12-21-2004, 07:24 PM
Both those last two chapters were pretty cool. Star's reaction to snow and the bookmark thing were both some of the more affecting things that I've read on this forum, so well done for that! For some reason, the fight in the snow reminded me of all those "wushu" (sp?) films (you know, like Hero and House Of Flying Daggers), that kind of combo of violence and art is a very beautiful thing when done well...okay, so maybe you didn't quite do that, but it's certaintly something to try.
I guessing that stuff is going to be getting pretty sinister from here on in...
rrarbecy
12-21-2004, 08:49 PM
you just need to be a little more open-minded...
VERY nice chapters! I loved them! the fighting scene wasnt bad, and cute idea about the Robin-bookmark.
OPEN-MINDED MY PINK, FUZZY BUNNY SLIPPERS! SPITE YOU TOO SPROX!! SPITE ALL OF YOU!!!!
starfire0639
12-21-2004, 09:06 PM
you have pink bunny slippers!omg me to!i think im in love<3<3<3lol just kidding but alos i dont care what ya guys say this chapter rocked:D
rrarbecy
12-21-2004, 09:30 PM
you have pink bunny slippers!omg me to!i think im in love<3<3<3lol just kidding but alos i dont care what ya guys say this chapter rocked:D
I'm too macho for bunny slippers. *bangs hand on edge of desk* MOOOOMMMMMMMYYYYYY!
starfire0639
12-21-2004, 09:40 PM
I'm too macho for bunny slippers. *bangs hand on edge of desk* MOOOOMMMMMMMYYYYYY!ooooh thats so adorable the cutie becy is calling his mommy thats so cute*did you hurt yourselph*talks in baby voice that is annoying as heck
Pookey
12-22-2004, 09:30 AM
Thank you all sooo. much for you replies. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. j/k
To answer your questions Crowgirl 1- They may all get hurt, depends on how long the fic. is, and so far on the other site I'm posting it on, it's going to be long. 2- No, this isn't Christmas themed. I'm putting in a Christmas Ch. for the holidays. I may even include other holidays too. After Christmas, or New Years Eve, I'm adding in the season 3 episodes.
Hope that answers your questions. :anime: Again, Thank you all soo... much! I'm working on Ch.6 now, and you may get it early!?!?!:evil: Depends on if I'm evil or not later! CHOCOLATE RULES!!!
Pookey
12-22-2004, 03:15 PM
Okay! Here’s another Ch. Aren’t I so nice…Well I can guarantee you’ll all hate me after this Ch. *Mwuhahaha cough cough*!!! Sorry about that.
Why you ask? Read and find out…Christmas is in 3 Days!! Woot, Woot!
Ch. 6 “Time to Decorate”
Robin walked into the living room to meet up with his team to find Starfire in a sling.
“OH my God! What happened!”? He rushed over to Starfire who was sitting on the couch. Starfire looked up to see the worried look on Robin’s face.
“It is all right Robin. I am mostly undamaged. Raven said I will be all better in about two days. In time for Christmas Eve.” Starfire tried to calm down Robin, but it wasn’t working.
“No it’s not all right, you’re hurt. I should’ve been there.” Robin sat down next to Star and placed a gentle arm on her good shoulder.
“ Calm down Mr. Paranoid. Star said she will be fine, and she’s right. You on the other hand,” Cyborg noticed one of Robin’s stitches came lose. “Need to be checked.” Cyborg walked over to Robin and took a closer look at his neck. Robin let out a frustrated sigh, and shut his eyes as Cyborg fixed his neck at the couch.
After Cyborg finished up with Robin, the Boy Wonder noticed that Starfire had left. “Where did Star go?”
“I think she went to her room?” Beast Boy answered as he leap over the couch picking up a box of Christmas ornaments. “I got work to do.” Beast Boy reached into the box taking out reefs, and lights.
“I best leave now before I get involved.” Robin stood up and went to check on Starfire.
“Hey Cy! Come help me!” Beast Boy threw the lights over to the robot who caught them with ease.
“I love the holidays.” Cyborg now had a huge grin on his face as he stood up from the couch to put up the lights. Robin just rolled his eyes from under his mask, and left the living room.
As Robin walked down the dark hallways of Titans Tower he passed Raven.
“Hey Raven. I wouldn’t go into the living room if I were you. Beast Boy and Cyborg are putting up Christmas decorations.”
“I know, I promised them I would help this year as long as Beast Boy didn’t put up any mistle toe near my room.” Raven just monotonly stated, but he sensed something else in her voice.
“Wow, bold move.” He lifted his eyebrows.
“I guess.” She sounded uninterested in the conversation, so she continued on her way to the living room leaving a confused Robin behind.
“Whatever.” He continued his walk to Starfire’s room.
As he walked down the lightly decorated halls he started to think to himself. ‘I should’ve been there today. I could’ve prevented her from getting hurt. I just hope she’s okay, I know she said Raven told her she would, but I can’t help think I could’ve stopped it. I just need to believe Starfire. Starfire, just that name gives me the chills. Her beautiful smile, personality, the way her hair flows freely in the wind, and the way she can always put a smile on our faces, my face. The way she flies and walks. The way she can pull the team together when we fight…’ Robin came to her door. He placed a gentle hand on her name that was engraved into the door.
“How do you do it Star? How do you make me feel all these different emotions and yet nothing at all at the same time, how?” He smiled as he knocked on her door.
“Who is there?” Star answered.
“It’s me Robin. Can I come in?” He heard her shift many papers.
“Hold on one moment please.” She was putting away her gifts. As she finished she opened the door to see a smiling Robin. “Why hello Robin. I was hoping you would come.” She had one of her genuine smiles on.
“You did? What for?” Robin was still smiling as he looked into her deep, jade eyes.
“Cyborg said that you would be able to tell me what this white, cold substance falls from the sky is.” She grabbed Robin’s hand gently and brought him into her room and to the window.
“Cy said that?” Robin just shook his head at the feeble attempt to bring them closer. The others didn’t know is that Robin knew when they were trying to bring them together, so he would always play along with it. Starfire nodded her head and looked out onto the now frozen bay. “It’s called snow Star. Did you not have any on your planet?” Robin was still staring at the beautiful teen beside him.
“No we did not. On Tameran, if the weather got this low our crops would not be able to produce.” She turned to look into Robin’s mask. “I have to tell you something else.” She walked over to her bed and sat down. She was now looking at the floor.
“Anything Star. I’m here for you. You can tell me anything.” Robin followed Star and sat next to her, rather close. Star opened her mouth to say something, but nothing came out. Robin took his hand and cupped her small, tan chin. “Is there something wrong?” He scooted closer to the now smiling teen.
“Not anymore.” She looked back into his mask, wishing someday she would be able to see his eyes. The eyes he hides from the world each and every day. They were now very close to each other, their foreheads almost touching, and each other’s breath cascading onto the other’s necks. “Robin…” Star whispered and drew closer the boy she loved.
“Yes Star…” Robin answered equally as quiet, and drawing closer to the girl he loved. Star leaned in with Robin as he put his arms around her back. She lifted her arms and guided them up onto his chest. She and smiled a calm loving smile as he pulled her closer, as she did this he tensed up without her even knowing it.
“I didn’t get to answer you when you fell,” She moved her arms around the top of his chest. Robin sighed, and his tightness quickly left him as she massaged his chest muscles. “I love you.” Her voice became even softer as she said those three words that meant the world to him.
“I love you too Starfire.” They leaned in closer, noses touching. Starfire made her way onto Robin’s lap, as he guided his hands to her small waist. They both shut their eyes as they leaned in, lips almost touching…
“Hey! Where should I hang the mistle toe?” Beast Boy asked Raven who just finished putting up the rest of the lights.
“I don’t know, ask Cy.” She sat down inspecting the now fully decorated Titans Tower.
“I can’t find him.” Beast Boy looked at the sitting goth, who was now reading a book.
“Oh, I forgot to tell you. He went to get a tree. Sorry.” She stated dryly all the while not looking up from her book.
“Thanks.” Beast Boy answered just as dryly. He sat down on the couch next to Raven. “So what did ya get me?” He looked at the girl with puppy dog eyes. Raven just rolled her eyes and kept on reading. “You’re no fun.” He pouted next to her, again she just rolled her eyes.
“I’m baaack!” Cyborg came in the room caring a giant Christmas tree.
“Thank God! I thought you’d never come.” Beast Boy watched as he placed the tree in a corner, so everyone could see it. “Nice tree.” He jumped over the coffee table next to Cyborg to inspect the tree.
“I know it is. That’s why I got it.” Cyborg stood next to the tree like it was a trophy.
“It’s just a tree, can we just decorate it now.” Raven put down her book to look at the tree with no interest.
“No! We can’t decorate it with out the two love birds.” Beast Boy stared at Raven like she was mad or something. “By the way, where is Star and Robin?” The green changeling looked around confused.
“I saw Robin head for Star’s room when we began decorating.” Cyborg placed the tree in the Christmas tree holder. (A/N: I don’t know what it’s called)
“Oohh! Should we interrupt?” Beast Boy was beginning to have a sly look creep upon his face.
“No! They need some together time, so leave them alone.” Raven sternly told the two boys. Cy and B.B. looked at each other with disappointing faces.
“Fine.” They both said together.
“But I still don’t know where to put the mistle toe.” Beast Boy pulled out the plant from his pocket.
“I do.” Cyborg grabbed the plant and ran to the doorway that led to the rooms of each Titan. “Here, so when Mr. And Mrs. Lovey Dovey walk in they’ll have to smooch.” Cyborg smirked.
“You two are such idiots.” Raven sat back down on a recliner near the frosted window and continued to read her book. The two boys just ignored her comment and sat down on the couch to play video games.
Matt A
12-22-2004, 05:33 PM
I don't see why we'd be angry with you. That was genius!
Okay, so I say that a lot, but I mean it every time!
Romance and comedy...all in one go!
Star_Fire_Chick
12-22-2004, 08:36 PM
I don't see why we'd be angry with you. That was genius!
Okay, so I say that a lot, but I mean it every time!
Romance and comedy...all in one go!yes i loved it i cant wait but what about the bookmark???!?!?!?!
rrarbecy
12-22-2004, 09:21 PM
Something tells me that us R/S Shippers are in for a treat.
Sproxie
12-22-2004, 10:49 PM
OPEN-MINDED MY PINK, FUZZY BUNNY SLIPPERS! SPITE YOU TOO SPROX!! SPITE ALL OF YOU!!!!:rolleyes:
I don't see why we'd be angry with you. That was genius!
Okay, so I say that a lot, but I mean it every time!
Romance and comedy...all in one go!^ I agree, it was great.
Pookey
12-23-2004, 04:10 PM
To answer this ?...yes i loved it i cant wait but what about the bookmark???!?!?!?! the bookmark will be discussed later, i haven't forgot about it!:D
i'd thought you'd ber mad b/c you don't know IF they kissed or not, maybe maybe not. I'll let you know in Ch.7
Ch.6 will be out on Christmas Eve, it will be mostly fluff, wait it is fluff. :D
Thank you all soo... much I love ya!
Something tells me that us R/S Shippers are in for a treat.
OH YEAH! and maybe BB/R shippers too.
Crowgirl
12-23-2004, 06:43 PM
i'd thought you'd ber mad b/c you don't know IF they kissed or not, maybe maybe not. I'll let you know in Ch.7
Yeah... about that... *Eyes glow purple*
Oh well. THIS WAS AWESOME!!! I loved the mistle toe theme. Funny! You did have a couple of grammar mistakes, and the notes you added were a little confusing (Just put a star near it and put the comment at the bottom). The romance did seem a little rushed, but who cares? It's a Robin and Star romance. What else are we expecting?
More ASAP!
Oh yeah. *Sighes* Please.
starfire0639
12-23-2004, 08:18 PM
hmm im sorry but i really dont agree the romance wasnt rushed if i know anything bout anything like that it isnt called rushing its called deep love on speed:anime: sorry i had nothing else to say i love the star and robin thing you have going and how they both really do seem to be in love with each other none of that teen mushy stuff that only lasts a couple hours i donno maybe i look to intently into stuff like that but hey oh well....thumbs up and write more i think your fic is awosme and merry chrsitmas!-:>:im bad at grammer to well...lets be truthful here im horrible at grammer so thumbs up for not being as awful as me
Star_Fire_Chick
12-23-2004, 10:06 PM
Ch.6 will be out on Christmas Eve, it will be mostly fluff, wait it is fluff. :D
you mean chapter 7 becasue u posted chapter 6
Pookey
12-24-2004, 11:51 AM
Thanks for catching that Star_Fire_Chick! :anime:
Calm down Crowgirl, I don't want to die! Thanks for the CC, I'll proof read more.:anime: Is it really rushed? I'm taking the previous ep. like they were along the lines as "flirting".
Merry Christmas! (or Merry/Happy ________) I love ya! :anime:
Ch. 7 “T’was the Night Before Christmas”
It was Christmas Eve, and the Titans were all gathered in a room they usually never go into. It was the formal living room. This room had a fireplace, a couples couch in front of the bricked hearth. It also had a few chairs here and there, a small, round coffee table was beside the small sofa, and the room was painted a deep auburn color to capture a relaxing feeling. There was a grandfather clock that was beside the doorway, and a small Christmas tree in the corner for the holidays. On the mantle of the fireplace hung five stockings for each Titan with their names written in gold glitter.
Each of the Titans were in their night outfits, Beast Boy was wearing shadowy, emerald windbreaker pants with a short, forest green shirt on. Cyborg, surprisingly, was wearing a light blue shirt on, but no pants. Raven had a deep indigo nightgown that reached the floor. It had long silky sleeves, and it puffed out at the ends. There was a slit on the bottom of the gown that came to her knees. Starfire was in a nightgown just like Ravens, but it was pink. Robin was wearing black windbreaker pants like Beast Boys, but his had an ‘R’ on the left pocket. His shirt was simple; red, short sleeves and it showed his chest muscles when he stood. All the Titans were happy and comfortable on this snowy Christmas Eve.
Cyborg and Beast Boy were sitting in front of the fire roasting marshmallows. They had just come in from playing outside in the snow. Each of them felt like a little kids again, no worries, no one to protect, just a quiet Christmas night with their friends.
Raven sat beside the fire in a wooden rocking chair knitting. She didn’t feel like meditating today, all she wanted to do was sit in the warmth of the fire with her friends. She was knitting each Titan a bird they resembled. Robin had a falcon, to represent agility. Starfire had a dove, to represent kindness. Cyborg had an eagle, to represent strength, and Beast Boy had a Starling, to represent his personality. She was going to give each of the Titans their bird on Christmas Day as one of their gifts.
Robin and Starfire were sitting on the couch together under a blanket. Star had her head on top of Robin’s slow moving chest. His arms were protectively wrapped around her waist, and each of them had the others hand locked together. Star was fast asleep on top of Robin, while he just looked into her sleeping face. Occasionally he would nod off to sleep, but would be awakened by the crackle of the fire, for he was a light sleeper.
“Hey, you want to put her in her room?” Cyborg whispered. Cyborg noticed that Star was fast asleep. Robin looked up to see Cy and Beast Boy covered in marshmallow goo. Robin chuckled, but shook his head softly, being wary about his neck. Cy nodded his head, and turned back to the fire, his marshmallow was on fire. Beast Boy looked at Raven, and noticed she had fallen asleep too. The green changeling stood up, after wiping all the goo from his face and hands, and walked over to the sleeping Raven.
“I’ll go put her in her room.” The others just nodded, and watched as he gently put away her knitting tools, and lifted her up bridal style. Making sure her head was resting on his shoulder, he then turned and walked out of the room.
“It’s good to see him doing something nice for her.” Robin spook up after making sure he was out of listening range.
“Yeah, she needs someone right now, and he needs her after the Terra incident.” Cyborg wiped goo from his mouth.
“Maybe. Do you think they’ll ever get together?” Robin looked down at the sleeping red head.
“Someday they will. Hopefully after you two though.” Cy had smile across his face. Robin just laughed. “What’s so funny?”
“Nothing, it’s just why does everyone think that?” Robin looked at Cy.
“It’s so obvious man. The way you look at her, and she looks at you. The way you are always protecting her in battles. The list goes on man.” Cy stood up and stretched.
“Is it THAT obvious?” Robin took one of his hands out from the covers and stretched it, placing it on Star’s waist outside the blanket. Cyborg just shook his head with a smile.
“It’s THAT obvious. What are you going to do for her for Christmas?” Cy sat on a chair by Robin.
“Can’t say, she is laying right here.” Robin chuckled. Cy just rolled his eyes. They continued talking about random things until the clock on the wall struck 11.
“I’m going to bed. Are you going to stay down here, or bring her up stairs?” Cy stood up and headed for the door.
“I’ll stay down here with her. I don’t want to wake her up. Wake me up when it’s morning okay, if I’m not up all ready?” Robin laid his head down on a pillow and pulled the blanket over Starfire’s shoulders.
“No problem Robin. I’ll get you up if your not.” Cyborg just smiled happily for his best friend as he watched Robin cuddle closer to the girl he loved. After Cyborg left, Robin looked down at Starfire and started stroking her glossy red hair, as he did this she sighed and snuggled closer to Robin. “Merry Christmas Star, Merry Christmas.” He was about to put his head down when he heard a faint whisper come from Star.
“Merry Christmas to you Robin” and she was silent again. Robin sighed, and kissed her on the forehead and fell to sleep, dreaming about Starfire and the kissed they shared.
Meanwhile, as Beast Boy carried Raven to her room he smiled a smile he hadn’t had on his face in a long time. Sure he always seemed happy, but deep down he felt empty. He missed Terra, but at that moment he was whole again. He felt Raven’s head start to fall off his shoulder, but he quickly caught it and placed it closer to his head. He then smelt something, something he had never smelled before. It reminded him of lavender. It was her hair. He then was quickly lost thought.
‘She’s so beautiful tonight; the way looks on this Christmas. But wait! Am I starting to have feelings for her? No, I can’t I still love Terra, or do I? She did betray us, me, she betrayed me. And I still love her for that? But why now? Why am I thinking about this now? I know the answer to those questions, don’t I? I just won’t admit them to myself.’ Beast Boy reached Raven’s room, and he gently opened her door to be met darkness.
He walked into her room and looked around at the statues, and shelves of books. He had a shiver go up his spine, but it quickly went away as he looked back at Raven. ‘It’s you, you are the answer to my questions.’ He pulled back her covers and gracefully put her on the bed. He then brought the covers to the bottom of her neck. He leaned over and pushed a strand of hair out of her face.
“Good night Raven.” He then turned to leave, but looked back as she turned on her side and mumbled something under her breath that he barley heard.
“Beast Boy” She said his name. A smile came onto her face, a small one, but a smile nonetheless.
He walked back over to her and placed a gentle peck on her cheek. He then left her room, and headed to his room with hopes that one day he will tell her, and understand his feelings towards the goth teen he knows as Raven.
decka
12-24-2004, 01:56 PM
OMG!!! That was the sweetest chapter ever!!!! I LOVED it soo much! Robin was soo cute with Star, and then with BB and Raven. My god your a genius!
Star_Fire_Chick
12-24-2004, 03:03 PM
OMG!!! That was the sweetest chapter ever!!!! I LOVED it soo much! Robin was soo cute with Star, and then with BB and Raven. My god your a genius!yep tha is the same i most know what happens i can not wait that is so cute!I loved it!write more soon!
Matt A
12-24-2004, 07:27 PM
On the count of three...awwwwwwwwwww.
That was so cute! I feel all warm and fuzzy now!
One problem, though: Raven and...knitting?! What's that all about?
decka
12-24-2004, 08:38 PM
She knitted in the TV show you know.
Crowgirl
12-24-2004, 09:06 PM
On the count of three...awwwwwwwwwww.
That was so cute! I feel all warm and fuzzy now!
Awwwwwwwwwww...
That really was sweet. You're a great writer when it comes to very emotional scenes. I feel like my fuzzy neon yellow slippers.
Can't wait for more!
starfire0639
12-25-2004, 05:07 AM
ah!that is like so totally adorable!aaaaawwww the robin and star thing and *gasp*a raven and bb thing!wow havnt seen that in a while!:anime: its so cute i cant get over it tehe and im more in the adorabke fluffly snoopy slipper condition myself:D dont know if that makes sense but oh well its............CHRISTMAS!yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
Pookey
12-25-2004, 09:28 AM
Merry Christmas, I will be giving out your presents into 3 parts. Each part wil have 2 Titans opening their gifts. This Ch. Introduces the setting, and a special gift. Love ya! MERRY CHRISTMAS!
I feel warm and fuzzy now, Thank you, you guys! Action will be coming up in Ch.9 Thses parts containe fluff and fluff and some other stuff.
Ch. 8 “Merry Christmas!!” Pt.1
“Robin, Robin, Robin, Wake up man. Roooobiiinnnn, I thought he was a light sleeper?”
It was Christmas morning in Jump City. There was freshly fallen snow on the sidewalks, the snowbirds chirped with delight at the peaceful morning while the sun slowly began to peak over the horizon. Little children were all ready awake and opening their stockings that Santa brought them, and everyone was slowly waking up, except some of the teammates of the Teen Titans. Specifically; Robin, Starfire, and Raven.
Cyborg was trying to wake up Robin, but it wasn’t working out like he planned it, and Beast Boy was waking up Raven.
“Okay, what does it take to get you up man?” Cyborg was shaking his head at the sleeping couple. Robin’s hair was in a clumpy mess, and was slightly snoring. Starfire was lying beside Robin with a smile painted across her face, to show she was content. Robin’s arm was still wrapped around Starfire’s waist, and they still were holding each other’s hands. “I bet Beast Boy is having an easier time than me.”
~Outside Raven’s room~
Beast Boy was knocking on her door trying to get her up.
“If you don’t open this door I’m coming in!” Beast Boy had been knocking on her door for five minuets, and he was getting impatient. He wanted to go down an open presents.
“ALL RIGHT I’M COMING!!” Raven yelled from behind the door. She sat up in her bed wondering how she got there. ‘I don’t remember walking up here?’
“Finally!” Beast Boy started walking towards the living room, but turned around to see Raven walk out of her room, still in her nightgown. “Oh hey, Raven.” She just gave him a look. “What? It’s Christmas! Merry Christmas Raven, oh and if your wondering how you got to your room, you can thank me.” He smiled brightly and ran down the hallway to the living room.
Raven’s annoyed looked left her as he ran down the hall. ‘So he brought me here? But why would he do that, for me?’ Raven blushed, and she walked down the hall to meet her friends. Surprisingly she wasn’t mad at him for going in her room.
~Back in the Formal Living Room~
Cy was still trying to wake Robin.
“C’mon man, I’m starving, wake up all ready.” Cy nugged Robin’s shoulder, only to make his shoulder hit the back of the couch with a soft thud, Cyborg was now hitting his head against the fireplace repeatedly.
After taking his frustration out on the mantle, he gave up. “Forget it, you can wake up on your own man.” Cy started to leave when he heard a quiet yawn come from Starfire. “Thank God!” He looked at the now sitting up Starfire.
Her hair was sticking up slightly in the back, and her nightgown was wrinkled. She rubbed her eyes to get the rest of the sleep away from it, and she yawned one more time, stretching as she did this.
“Cyborg is that you?” She tried to stand but was caught by Robin’s arm around her waist. She blushed as she sat back down.
“Yeah, have a good nights sleep?” The robot walked back over to waking alien. She nodded, and looked over to the sleeping Robin and started giggling. “I can’t wake him up, could you? I’m starving.”
“I will wake him up. You go and have…” Star was staring at Robin’s sleeping face.
“Breakfast, I’ll see you two later.” Cyborg raced up the stars to eat leaving a giggling Starfire to wake up Robin.
“What am I going to do with you?” She leaned over and placed a small, simple kiss on Robin’s cheek. He moaned and let his head fall onto the sofa. She unwrapped his grip on her waist and turned, so she was facing him.
“Well, at least I know he’s alive.” She giggled, and kissed him again, a little closer to his mouth. He moaned again, he fluttered his eyes open, but Starfire didn’t notice. She was busy unhooking her hands from his.
As she was doing this, he got an idea and quickly shut his eyes again. Star finished and kissed him again, even closer to his mouth this time. He sighed as she placed another kiss, this time on his lips. But before she could break it, Robin pulled her closer deepening the kiss. She sighed as he kissed back, and they stayed like that for few seconds. “So, will I have to kiss you every time to wake you up?” She whispered lustfully.
“Maybe?” He whispered lower, and brought her back into a passionate kiss, but it was cut short by the stifled laughter that came from the door. Both of the teens shot up, blushing, and looked to see who was there. It was none other than Cyborg.
He was shaking his head with his arms crossed over his shoulders, and was smiling devilishly. “No way am I waking you up again.” Robin shot the hybrid robot a glare, but he wasn’t affected by it, so the Boy Wonder threw a pillow at him. Cyborg just laughed and caught the pillow with ease. “C’mon, lets eat before you two start making out again.” This time Starfire threw a pillow at Cyborg and he was hit. “Ouch!” Star just laughed and flew out the door before Cy could throw it back. “Looks like your girlfriend can throw better than you.”
Robin just threw another pillow at Cyborg. “Shut up!” Glaring all the while.
After everyone finished breakfast they all sat down in the living room near the tree. Cy and B.B. sat closest to the tree with their stockings. Raven sat in the recliner with her stocking beside her, while Star and Robin sat together on the couch with their stockings.
“Okay you guys, are we ready to open presents now?” The inpatient Beast Boy moaned.
“Yes, you can open you stuff now, just quit whining” Raven stated, trying to keep her cool.
“Yeah!” Beast Boy and Cyborg shouted in unison. Robin and Raven just rolled their eyes, while Starfire giggled. In about 5 minutes, Beast Boy and Cy were done opening their stockings.
In each stocking was a gift the city gave the Titans. Everyone got 150 dollars from the city, a miniature action figure of themselves, and a special gift;
Cyborg received a gift certificate to an auto parts store. “Dude!”
Starfire received some perfume and jewelry from a small store in the mall. “Glorious!”
Raven received a book, and a package of some herbal tea she usually buys at her favorite café. “How nice.”
Beast Boy got free rental cards at his favorite movie store. “Awesome!”
And Robin got a new belt for his uniform. It was still yellow, but it had an ‘R’ engraved in the center. “Sweet.”
After all the Titans finished opening their gifts from the city, they started passing out the presents from each other.
“Okay who wants to go first?” Beast Boy asked after handing out all the presents.
“How about Raven? She went last, last year?” Cyborg spoke up, before anyone said anything.
“What a marvelous idea!” Starfire exclaimed.
“Why not.” Robin agreed.
Raven just rolled her eyes, “Fine, but hold on one moment.” As soon as she said that she disappeared and reappeared, but this time with small bags in her arms. “After I open a gift, I will give you one of my gifts to you.”
She set down her bags, and picked up a green wrapped present. It was medium in size and had a red bow attached to it. She read the tag on the bow and saw that it was from Beast Boy. She unwrapped it carefully and picked up an indigo mug that also had a card inside. She laid the mug on her lap and read the card to see it was a gift card to her favorite café.
“Thank you Beast Boy, and here is your small gift from me.” Raven grinned while giving Beast Boy his gift with her powers. Beast Boy was shacking it to try and figure what was inside, Raven just rolled her eyes.
She then took a present that was rather large in size, and was wrapped in dark green and red wrapping paper. It was from Robin; she carefully opened it to see it was a series of books she was saving up for. “Robin, Thank you, I’ve been wanting these since…”
“Since you finished the first series. I did some snooping around.” Robin smiled.
“As long as it wasn’t in my room.” She eyed him carefully.
“It wasn’t. I swear.” Robin lifted his hands up in defense. Raven turned back to her books, while tossing Robin his gift with her powers also.
Next, Raven reached for a tiny blue wrapped box. She saw it was from Cyborg, and opened it to find a jewelry box. As she opened it, she saw that there were a pair of keys.
“Cyborg, you didn’t.” She picked up the keys.
“Yep, I built each of you a vehicle. You have a black, sports car in the garage.” Cyborg smiled widely, as the Titans started at him.
“Thank you.” She was astonished that Cyborg made her a car. “I’ll take good care of it.” She finally looked up at her robot friend.
“You better, I want to see her in a few months to make sure you haven’t screwed it up.” Cyborg smirked as he caught Raven’s small gift she threw at him.
The last gift Raven picked up was a small-boxed shaped gift, wrapped in purple wrapping paper. It read…
‘To my best Friend Raven From Starfire’
As She read it silently to herself she thought, ‘She really thinks of me as such good friend, but what have I done for her?’ The goth thought to herself as she looked at the smiling alien.
“Thank you Star.” Raven mouthed, Star just nodded her head, while the boys sat in confusion. Raven continued to open the present, when all the wrapping was taken off she found herself looking into the most beautiful necklace she had ever seen.
The necklace was simple; it had a small yellow diamond that hung onto the silver chain. The diamond was cut into the shape of a sun, and it had a strange symbol in the center.
“Star…it’s gorgeous…where did you get this? I thought you could only find these on Azerath?” Raven was in total shock, while everyone else just stared at it in awe.
“Star, That’s magnificent!” Cyborg managed to say after picking up his mouth from the floor. The other two boys just nodded in agreement, not talking their eyes off the necklace.
“It is no ordinary necklace Raven. The necklace is made of a special metal that was designed for you to show emotion. The diamond that hangs on this chain tells you which emotion you are allowed to express. When you possess all of these unique rocks, they form into one stone that turns white showing you that you possess all emotions. This rock I chose for you allows you to express happiness, that is why it is yellow.” Starfire explained, mostly to the staring boys than to Raven, who already knew what the diamond was for.
When she finished Raven slowly put on the necklace, as she did this, a yellow ring formed around Raven then quickly went into the diamond.
“Starfire, thank you so much. I will always wear this.” Raven slowly let a smile creep onto her face. “Thank you.” Starfire just smiled back, while holding up another small box.
“Raven, I wanted to wait later to give you these later, but I can see you are overjoyed by this one stone, so here you go,” Raven took the small unwrapped box, and opened it to find 2 more colored diamonds. A dark blue diamond in the shape of a tear, also with a strange symbol in the center, this diamond represented sadness. There was also a red diamond, to represent anger. This stone was in the shape of a flame. Just like the other two, it had a symbol in the center. “Two more emotion stones, to hang on your chain.”
Raven clipped each diamond on the necklace, and as she did the diamonds color created a ring around Raven, then went into the diamond.
“Star, you don’t know how long I‘ve been wanting these. Ever since I was little. Thank you, I will never take this off.” Raven was almost in tears when she remembered to give Star her bird. “Merry Christmas Starfire, and Merry Christmas to you guys too.” Raven stood up and walked over to hand Star her gift.
Pookey
12-25-2004, 12:28 PM
I really don’t like this Ch.:sad: , why? idk, but I don’t like it. But maybe you guys will? Here’s Pt.2:)
“Merry Christmas Pt.2”
“Thank you friend Raven, but you did not have to give me…” Starfire stood up and started protesting, but was interrupted by Raven.
“Star, please, for me.” Raven insisted. Star nodded and sat down with the gift.
“Oakaay, are we done with all the mushiness now? If we are, I would like to continue.” Beast Boy fell backwards into the small pile of wrapping paper that was on the floor from Raven. Everyone just rolled their eyes at the changeling.
“Who’s turn next? How about Cyborg?” Robin broke the silence, after he cuddled next to Star.
“All right, just because Bird Boy is busy, and the grass stain is impatient.” Cyborg smirked. Robin just glared at the hybrid robot from under his mask.
“Ha ha I get it….HEY!” Beast Boy shouted.
Cyborg first received the movie ‘Wicked Scary 2’ from Beast Boy, then a new set of tools for his garage from Robin, and a game and upgrade for the gamestation from Starfire, but the gift he enjoyed the most was from Raven, who got him an upgrade for his T-car.
“Dude! How’d you know?!” He shouted after he realized what he got.
“I have my ways.” Raven winked at Robin, who just chuckled. Both of them were having a hard time figuring out what to get their friend, after they put their heads together, and went snooping through his things. They figured out what to get him.
“Who’s next?” Beast Boy asked after Cyborg gave up asking Raven how she got him the upgrade.
“What if Cyborg picked?” Starfire requested. She was hoping it wouldn’t be her or Robin because she was comfortable. Star had found her way onto Robin’s lap, and he had wrapped his arms around her waist protectively. ‘Please don’t pick us, please don’t pick us!’ She was repeating in her head.
“Good idea Star, hmmm, I choose,” Cyborg was grinning evilly while looking at the remaining Titans to choose from. ‘Not B.B., I want him to wait as long as possible, that means Star or Robin…which one? I know!’ “Robin!” Cy exclaimed after thinking for about 2 minuets.
Robin just let out an agitated sigh, he was comfy and didn’t want to get up. “Fine” Star let out the same sigh, and got up off of Robin’s lap. The others just held back their laughter.
When he reached for his gifts he realized Cy or Star hadn't opened thier gift from Raven, but before he said anything Raven answered it for him, “When everyone else is done with their larger gifts, you can open my small gift.”
“More gifts, I like…” Beast Boy jumped up, he wasn’t paying attention earlier.
Robin started with his gift, he got a new weapon’s book from Raven, and Cyborg gave him his keys to a new R-cycle, and Beast Boy gave him hair gel, pair of shoes and cologne. Star had told him the other night that she would give him his gift later in the day. “Thanks guys, and Beast Boy…thanks, I think?” Robin looked at the cologne.
“No prob. dude, Star where’s your gift?” Beast Boy looked under the tree rapidly. Star just smiled, while Robin just looked at Beast Boy confused.
“Why are you panicking?” Robin cooked his head to the side, but put it back, forgetting his stitches.
“Star didn’t tell any of us, and I want to know what she got you.” Beast Boy was still under the tree.
“Oh really? Is that so?” Robin looked over to the now innocent looking Starfire. “Well, I could pry it out her?” Robin was slowly inching towards Star.
“Could you? I’m dying to figure out what she got you; she said it was really special. Can someone help me?” Beast Boy was now stuck in the Christmas tree. Robin reached Star, not paying attention to Raven and Cyborg who were trying to get Beast Boy out of the tree.
“Am I going to force it out of you?” Robin was now inches to Star, who was sitting on the couch without a care.
“I’m not telling, you will just have to wait.” She smiled an innocent smile to the Boy Wonder. She knew if she smiled like this he would give up.
“Ah you had to do that smile didn’t you?” He sat down defeated, Star just giggled.
“Yes, Now who is next to open presents?” She tried changing the subject before he could even start it.
“Um…Beast Boy, you can open your gifts now” ‘I want to give yours last Star.’ He pulled Starfire close to him.
“Finally!”
starfire0639
12-25-2004, 12:40 PM
that was wonderful and that necklace was sweet so now raven can show her emotions without actually showing them?i think thats what it is but otherwise it is really cute merry christmas to you also freiend have a safe and fun holdiay!!!!
Matt A
12-25-2004, 04:52 PM
Ahh, I feel all warm and fuzzy now...
Roll on part three!
Star_Fire_Chick
12-25-2004, 05:37 PM
Ahh, I feel all warm and fuzzy now...
Roll on part three!once again that is the same way i feel great job i loved it i cant till starfire's presents
Pookey
12-25-2004, 06:23 PM
Love ya guys, hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Hope you like!!!
“Merry Christmas Pt.3”
“Finally” Beast Boy jumped up after getting pulled out of the tree, and he raced to his gifts. “Which one?” Beast Boy looked at his gifts.
“Just pick one.” Raven was getting impatient.
“All right!” Beast Boy began his hunt. He got, from Robin, a new game for the gamestation, a joke book and recipe book, from Raven, a moped from Cyborg, and a jacket that was green and black from Starfire. The jacket was a letterman’s jacket that had his name stitched onto the back, and on the front had a ‘T’ on the left side pocket.
“Whoa, cool! Star where did you get this? This is awesome! Thank you so much!” Beast Boy was trying it on.
“I have my ways.” She smiled brightly as she watched her green friend enjoy his jacket.
‘Now its your turn Star.” She let out a quiet yelp as Robin picked her up and brought her to the tree. “I’ll give you your present from me later.” He whispered in her ear, so no one else heard him. She smiled as he put her down by the tree.
“Okay Star, after you’re done we’re going outside for some pictures.” Cyborg brought out his camera from his arm.
“Glorious, I can not wait.” She looked at her gifts and unwrapped each gift slowly and carefully, to save the paper for her scrapbook. She got a red sports car from Cyborg, make-up from Beast Boy, and a mirror from Raven that can be used for meditation.
“Thank you friends, I love all your gifts.” She jumped with delight.
“All right you guys, you can open your small gifts.” Raven stood up as everyone opened their gift to find their bird.
“Raven, these are beautiful.” Star held her dove like it was glass.
“Rae, these are awesome!” Cyborg lifted his up to the frost bitten window.
“Cool, I got a Starling. I haven’t seen one of these in ages.” Beast Boy held his up proud.
“This is so cool Raven, Thank you.” Robin got up holding his. Each of the Titans gave Raven a hug and went outside, except Robin and Starfire.
“When we come back in I’ll give you your gift. Meet me in my room okay?” Robin went up to Star after everyone left.
“All right, and I will give you your gift.” She smiled and kissed him on the cheek, and flew out the door after her friends.
After everyone came in, Cyborg went to his baby T to add the upgrade, Beast Boy went to his room to play one of his new games, and Raven went to her room to meditate, she still had to control her other emotions. Robin scurried to his room while Star went to hers to get his gift.
“I hope he likes this.” She walked to Robin’s room, nervous. As she was making her way down the hall she began to think about Robin, ‘He is so nice to me, I know everyone is nice to be, but he is extra nice. He deserves a better gift than what I could give him.’ Star reached Robin’s door and was hesitant to knock, she lifted her hand to knock, but Robin opened it before she could.
“Come on in Star.” Robin smiled wide, which caused all of Starfire’s worries to melt away.
“Thank you Robin.” She floated into his room, to find it dark, no lights were on, and the curtains were closed tight. The only light came from the open door, but it was quickly shut.
“Robin where are you?” Star was starting to get scared, she yelped and lit up a starbolt when she felt a gloved hand grab hers.
“It’s just me Star. It’s okay, I have the lights out for a reason.” Robin calmed down Star, but she still had her starbolt lit.
“What for Robin? I am…” She was cut short by Robin’s sweet lips, she was instantly calm, and her starbolt went out as quickly as it came. He broke the kiss and grabbed her hand and led her to his bed. He sat her down.
“Sit tight, I’ll be right back.” Before Star could respond he came back and presented her with a small box. She opened it to be almost blinded by what was inside. Shut it, and reopened it more slowly this time. She picked up the necklace to be surprised at what it really was.
“Robin…it’s beautiful!” She said between gasps. It was a diamond that glowed a bright white. Robin turned on his lamp near his bed so she could see it in the light. She found out that it was a silver, heart shaped lock-it that had her name engraved on the top. In the inside it had a picture of her and Robin in front of the fireplace, cuddling together. Robin asked Cyborg to take it the night before and fit it inside the lock-it just for her.
“I’m guessing you like it?” Robin smiled at her astonished face.
“I love it.” She hugged him tightly.
“Star…can’t…breath…” Robin relaxed after she let him go, she was now blushing.
“I apologize Robin…” Again, she was stopped short by him kissing her.
“Oh, here you are, my gift to you.” She broke the kiss to give him his gift. He opened the purpled wrapped box to find inside a collection of his old uniforms and weapons, but they were different.
It was a frame of some of his old belongings. There was one of his old capes, but it had his name written in gold glitter across the black cloak. In the frame also contained some old bird-a-rangs, and one of his old masks. On the bottom of the frame was a plaque that had a message from Starfire.
To Robin
I will always love you no matter what.
Love Starfire!
“Star, I love it. How did you…” Now it was his turn to be interrupted by a kiss.
“I am not telling you how of where, I am just glad you like it.” She smiled brightly.
“Thank you Star, I will cherish this gift the most.” He set the frame down and pulled her closer.
“And I will cherish your gift most of all as well.” She started hooking her necklace around her neck, but Robin finished it for her. When he brought his arms down from hooking her necklace, he saw her eyes sparkle in the dim light. He leaned in and pulled her closer, Star sighed as he kissed her gently, but she deepened the kiss before he could pull away.
They stated like that for a good long time, until they heard Beast Boy yell down the hall. “Who Wants Dinner?”
They broke away and looked at each other not wanting to leave, but knowing if they didn’t go now, they wouldn’t get any food later.
“Ladies first” Robin stood up placing a hand out for Star to grap. She took his hand in hers and floated up beside him. They walked out to dinner with smiles on their faces, hoping that they would get to continue where they left off later.
Star_Fire_Chick
12-25-2004, 08:02 PM
aww i loved that chpater that was so sweet!great job!i loved it!yep still feeling warm and fuzzy inside
Sproxie
12-25-2004, 09:20 PM
aww i loved that chpater that was so sweet!great job!i loved it!yep still feeling warm and fuzzy insideI agree Star_fire_Chick. Sure, I don't exactly agree with the Star/Rob relationship, But you made it great to read about anyway.
Matt A
12-26-2004, 10:42 AM
Fuzzy fuzzy fuzzy fuzzy fuzzy!
That's a compliment, by the way.:sweat:
Crowgirl
12-26-2004, 12:22 PM
:^: I agree. That was really sweet, you have a knack for writing romance.
FANTASTICO!!!!
starfire0639
12-26-2004, 01:28 PM
hehehehehehehehehehe a makeout scene!:anime: hehehehehe just what i needed to see tehe ah you are so good at the romantic stuff you gotta give me some tips some time!
decka
12-26-2004, 01:49 PM
Yay! Another amazing cute chapter!! I loved it soo much!
Star_Fire_Chick
12-28-2004, 11:16 PM
cant wait till a new chapter!
starfire0639
12-29-2004, 05:12 AM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooh common please write more soon!:sweat: if thats not to much to ask......
Pookey
12-30-2004, 04:41 PM
I am sooo... srry that i haven't posted. I just got back from a 2 day drive, and I am grounded from the computer until New Years, so I have to sneek on. hehe Again, I am so srry, and I'm getting Writers Block. please bear with me! I'll add the fight scene in a later ch. for those who know what I'm talking about! love ya!
Ch. 9 "Chocolate Kisses"
It was 5 days till New Years Eve, and all the Titans were anxious about the New Year. Starfire and Robin spent most of their free time together. Whether it was in one of their rooms or the training room. Robin would lift waights while Star watched, or practiced on the obstacle course. Raven was expressing emotion more often, and learned how to play gamestation with Cyborg and Beast Boy. She was pretty good too.
Today was the day Robin was going to get his stiches out, and when Cy and B.B. would show the others a surprise.
"Hey Robin! It's time!" Cy yelled down the hallway looking for the Boy Wonder. Robin came out of Starfire's room with a giant grin on his face, and his hair a bit messed up, well...more than usual. "Um...I'm not going to ask, lets just get you fixed up."
"Finally" Robin snapped out of his trance and headed straight for the infermery room. Cy just shook his head, and watched as Star fly out of her room to the living room.
"All right man. You're done." Cy put down his tools, and watched as Robin slowly roll his neck to get feeling back in it. Robin's neck was sore, but he shook it off.
"Yeah, thanks Cy! Now I can get back to work." Robin threw two punches into the air.
"Oh joy, our work acholic leader is back." Cy smirk as he cleaned off his tools.
"Ha, ha very funny." Robin glared at Cy. "So, I heard about a surprise you were building? What is it?" Robin walked over to help Cyborg put away his tools.
"Can't tell, not until later." Cy was trying to avoid this subject, just in case Robin got wise all ready.
"Why not? Is it another car?" Robin finished putting away the tools, and was sitting on the counter, Cy was leaning against one of the hospital beds.
"Nope, I'll show you later." Robin dropped the subject, figuring he could wait. He and Cyborg were now just talking about random topics when they heard a Beast Boy yell from the living room.
"What the..." Robin stared at Cyborg with a confused look.
"he he...Raven must have beaten BB again." Cy stood up and headed for the door.
"At what?" Robin hopped down and followed Cy to the living room.
"Man, where have you been these past days?" Cy's jawed dropped.
"What?" Robin still was confused.
"Raven is now playing gamestation, and kicks BB butt. She can't beat me though, but she is pretty good" Cy walked into the living room to be surprised by what he saw. Raven was cheering Starfire on, who was playing against Beast Boy.
"Ah man, not again!" Beast Boy fell over onto the couch. Starfire jumped up clapping, she had beaten him for the thrid time in a row.
"Oh glorious!" Star jumped over and hugged Raven, and what made Cyborg and Robin's jaws drop was Raven hugged back. "Raven, let us celebrate our victories over some sugared food rations?"
"Sure Star, you can choose. I'll be right there." Raven watched as her best friend flew to the kitchen, Raven walked over to the pouting Beast Boy, and told him something that no one else heard, after Raven went into the kichen with Starfire. Robin and Cyborg stared at each other, and then slowly went into the kitchen.
"Uh..Hey girls." Robin was the first to speak, even though he was still shocked at what happend before. Raven and Star both shreiked and turned around quickly. A light bulb broke from Raven.
"Oopps." Raven blushed after she relized who was there. "Don't do that, you scared the freakin' crap out of us."
"Sorry, I didn't mean to." Robin smiled nervously.
"Would you like to join Raven and I in consuming sugar rations?" Star smiled brightly.
"Would I?" Cyborg's human eye light up with delight as he ran into the kitchen to stuff his face.
"No, I'm okay." Robin walked into the living room and sat on the couch beside Beast Boy, who was now setting up a new game for him to play.
"Hey Beast Boy, what's up?" Robin looked over to his green friend.
"Nothing, if you don't count losing to both Starfire and Raven all morning." Beast Boy picked up his controller.
"Wow, didn't know they were that good." Robin looked in the kitchen to see Star and Raven giggleing at Cyborg. He stuffing his face with chocolate.
"Me neither," Beast Boy paused his game and looked at the staring Robin "Dude, you ok?"
""Huh? Oh yeah, I guess. It just seems to real." Robin took his eyes away from his friends and looked at Beast Boy.
"Real? What do you mean?" Beast Boy put his controller on the couch and coked his head to the side.
"Nothing. Hey, do you know Cy is building?" Robin quickly changed the subject.
"Yep, and I'm not suposse to tell." Beast Boy grinned.
"Does any one else know?" Robin was intrested know, not that he wasn't before.
"Nope, just me and Cy." Beast Boy picked up his controller again and started playing, Robin rolled his eyes as he saw the changling lose again. "Aw man!"
"Let me give you a tip, press 'X' after you shoot." Robin smirked and walked to the kitchen. A few seconds later he heard Beast Boy yell in triumphant.
"Cyborg, Cyborg? I think he ate to much chocolate?" Raven smirked at her passed out friend. Cyborg had eaten so much sugar that he got a sugar high and passed out.
"Oh dear, will Cyborg recover?!" Star asked Raven worriedly.
"Yeah, he'll be fine soon." Raven shook her head.
"What happened?" Robin noticed Cyborg laying on the floor with a grin on his face.
"Cy had a feeding frenzy on the chocolate." Raven was now making some herbal tea.
"Uh huh...Anyway." Robin stepped over Cy and was walking toward Starfire, she was wiping the conters off from Cy's mess. Raven rolled her eyes and took her tea, and another glass into the living room.
"Hey." Robin scared Starfire, again, and she jumped around grabbing the counter.
"Oh Robin, you frigtened me." After she relized it was only him, she hugged him gently, she didn't know he got his stiches off yet. Robin hugged back, enjoying her body against his, the sweet scent of her hair filling his nose. She broke the hug to Robin's dissapointment, but he didn't show it. She noticed his stiches were out and she squeled with delight. "Robin, you are all better!" She placed a small kiss on his cheek. Robin's face instintly turned pink.
"Thanks for noticing Star." Robin managed to get out, even after confessing to Star, he always got nervous in front of her in public, or in front of his friends. Stafire just giggled, and smiled a warm smile that instinly got Robin's attention.
"Oh...what happened?" Cyborg sat up and noticed Star giggling at Robin who was still at bit pink. Cy just smirked, but kept quiet.
"Hello Cyborg. Are you feeling better?" Starfire noticed Cyborg get up first, Robin turned and looked down at his best friend, Robin was shaking his head in dissapointment with his arms crossed.
"What?" Cy managed to stand up, with help from Star, Robin was surpressing his laughter. Cyborg's face was covered in brown goo.
"I like your new look Cy." Robin patted his shoulder and headed for the hallway, with Star right behind him.
"What is he talking about?" Cy whispered to himself and headed for the garage.
After Raven took both teas into the living room, she sat down beside Beast Boy.
"You what some tea? Don't worry, I added sugar in yours." Raven placed the cups down on the coffee table.
"Thanks Rae." He smiled, and turned back to his game. "Yahoo!! Aww yeah, who's the man?" Beast Boy jumped up in excitment. Raven just smiled and rolled her eyes. Beast Boy noticed this, so he sat back down smiling at Raven.
"What?" Raven asked as she took her tea and sipped it.
"It's really nice to see you happy, now that Star gave you that necklace." Beast Boy took a sip of his tea. "Wow, this is pretty good!"
"Thanks, you really think so?" Raven blushed slightly, and took another sip. A black bubble surronded a lamp behind Beast Boy, but it went away after Raven stopped blushing.
"Yeah, I like to see you finally smile, and laugh. You and Star are so much closer now. Maybe now I can get you to laugh at my jokes" Beast Boy took another sip while lifting one of his eyebrows.
"I wouldn't count on it, just yet." Raven smiled.
"That reminds me! I have something for you!" Beast Boy set down his tea, and ran to his room, leaving a confused Raven sitting on the couch. As soon as he left he returned with a small velvet box. He sat in front of her, and opened it up to reveal another charm for her neckalce. It was dark red in color, and it was a side of a heart, that looked like it was cut into three parts. Beast Boy didn't know what emotion it was for, but he knew she would be able to show another one.
"Beast Boy..." Raven gently grabbed the box. "Why?" Raven was speechless. It was 'desire'. The symbol in the middle of each charm told what the emotion was. The only Titans that could translate the symbols were Raven and Starfire. Raven of course knew what they meant because they were from Azerath, but Starfire was a different story.
"Well, because you were so happy that you could show three emotions, so I found another one for you, and boy was it hard to find." Beast Boy grined.
"Yes they are, and you found one of the rarest." Raven gently hooked the diamond onto her necklace, and a ring of dark red surronded her, and then went into the heart.
"So, what is this one?" Beast Boy was very curious about each emotion she got, hoping she would get a certain one soon.
"This specific charm is desire, but it won't work fullly until I get two specific charms." Raven held the broken heart in her hand. Beast Boy's eyes lit up in amazment.
"What are they!" He wanted to find the other two, but hoping she wouldn't get wise to him. Raven took in a deep breath.
"Before I tell you, let me inform you that these are the hardest emotions to find. This one is much easier to find than the other two." Beast Boy nodded "Love is the second hardest." Beast Boy smiled brighlty, he didn't tell her that he found another emotion that was dark red. "And the last one is the hardest, I wouldn't be surprised if you guys never found it..." She paused, she was hesitant to say the next emotion. She looked up at Beast Boy, he took her hand in his.
"We will all try though, what is it?" Raven smiled as he comforted her, deep down she liked Beast Boy, but she didn't know how much.
"Lust." She whispered.
"I couldn't hear you Rae?" Beast Boy scooted closer to hear her. Again she whispered, a little louder.
"Lust." She looked up to be nose to nose with Beast Boy. He smiled warmly, and she did too. They both leaned closer, Beast Boy wrapping his free arm around Raven's back. She pulled her hand out of his and guided both of her hands up to his neck, Beast Boy pulled Raven closer, and she placed her hands on his shoulders. The green changling pushed a lock of her hair behind her ear, he looked into her indigo eyes. She smiled softly as he did this, and she moved her hands to his chest muscles.
'She is so beautiful'
'But what about Terra, hmm? Are you just going to foorget about her?'
'No, I will never forget, but...' Beast Boy was arguing in his head when he heard a soft voice in his head.
'Do not worry Beast Boy, She is right for you. I will always love you, but I am not coming back. I want you to be with Raven, she needs someone right now, she is going to need someone in the near future. All I ask is you never forget me.' It was Terra.
'I won't Terra, but are...' Beast Boy was interupted.
'Yes, now I want you to be happy again.' And with that Terra left his mind.
'I will never forget you Terra, and thank you'
He leaned in closer and placing a small kiss onto Raven's lips. Raven was shocked, but at the same time happy, she thought she should pull away, but something inside her told her to stay. She deepened the kiss. Raven stopped masaging Beast Boy's chest mucles and wrapped her arms around his neck, Beast Boy wrapped his arms around her waist, and they stayed just like that.
Robin went into the training room, not knowing Starfire follwed him. He ent srtaight for the punching bag. Star smiled as she leaned against a wall watching Robin. He was already at it. Star just stared at him the whole time he was working out, he never noticed her. After about an hour of training Robin headed for the locker rooms. (A/N: I don't know if they actually have them, but in my fic. there will be.) Star watched him go into the locker rooms, and as soon as he did she flew over to the towel rack. She placed a small pink envelope on top of a red towel taht had an 'R' on it, as soon as she did this she flew out of the room.
Robin finished showering and went to grab the red towel when he noticed the letter. He took the towel and wrapped it around him and picked up the letter. He examined it closely, when he brought it up closer to his face he smelled a familiar sent. It was from Starfire. He walked to his room and changed into his uniform, after he opened the letter and read it carefully. He smiled warmly as he read the note, he placed the letter on top of his desk besdie his bed and left his room, he was heading for the roof.
starfire0639
12-30-2004, 05:19 PM
freak'n crap!omg that was aowsm epooky and you used my fave word to ill hold otu for the fight scene i can wait but omg freakn god you put raven saying and then omg! lust is the most awosme chamr in the entire world thank you for putting it in there! and the love part and the kissisng and omg!it was perfect!+lusty lust lust lust:anime: im laughing loud enough that its echoing thru the house that was totaly awosme girl keep up the good work!man lust is stuck in my head now thanks alot:sweat:
Matt A
12-30-2004, 05:31 PM
Okay, the Rae/BB thing was unexpected, but most definitely cool.
I wonder what surprise Cy is planning...
Lord Welshi
12-30-2004, 07:11 PM
This is good. I like the romance in this, u are very skilled at writing from a romantic perspective. I got the warm fuzzies! Yay!:anime:
Lord Welshi
Star_Fire_Chick
12-30-2004, 07:46 PM
This is good. I like the romance in this, u are very skilled at writing from a romantic perspective. I got the warm fuzzies! Yay!:anime:
Lord Welshitaht covers it what everyone said covered it gaahhh i cant wait till teh new chapter
Aquagirl15
12-30-2004, 10:45 PM
funny, romantic, and well written. all things good stories have! :D i can't think of a book that i've read that hasn't had a hint of romance. and no, not all the books i read are romance actually i don't think i've ever read a book classified by a librain as 'romance'. methinks it will be hard to wait for the next chapter! hurry before i get restless. :evil:
Pookey
01-01-2005, 11:09 PM
I'm cutting this ch. short, b/c the next one is the fight one...blah...love ya all! Thank you so much for your replies!:anime:
Ch. 10 "Surprise Pt.1"
"What did he mean by 'new look'" Cy asked out loud as he left the garage with some tools, and headed for the roof. When he got there he saw his reflection on the door. (A/N: it's metal)
"Ah gross," Cy wiped his lips, but some went in mouth, "Oh chocolate!" Cy ate the goo, and then went to work on the surprise. After a while, Beast Boy came on the roof with a grin on his face. "Hey what's up?" Cy poked his green friend.
"Nothing, say is this thing done?" Beast Boy snapped out of his trance. Cy and Beast Boy stared talking, and Beast Boy started helping Cyborg.
As Robin was leaving his room to go onto the roof, he recalled the letter Starfire gave him.
Robin, I would like to talk to you after lunch. Please come to my room after, I would tell you this in person, but not right at the moment. Love, Starfire
Robin was baffled at why she wouldn't come to him earlier, and he started feeling kinda weird.
"Haha! Finished it! I told you I'd finish it with out the manual, now pay up!" Cyborg boasted to Beast Boy.
"Aww man!" Beast Boy grabbed his wallet and gave Cy twenty bucks. Cyborg just finished putting together a hot tub the Titans recieved as another Christmas present, but the others didn't know it. Just then Robin walked up on to the roof, to find Beast Boy looking into the hot tub while Cyborg was filling it up.
"Hey man! Check it out." Cy noticed Robin walk up, Robin walked over beside Beast Boy.
"So this is the big surprise? WOW!" Robin was looking inside it with Beast Boy. Cy finished filling the jacuzzi up, and was putting the hose away.
"Yeah, the city gave it to us, so I decided to put it together for a surprise." Cy finished and was heading over to Robin, when all of a sudden Robin was pushed into the hot tub by Beast Boy. Robin let out a yell as he hit the water. Beast Boy was rolling on the roof laughing, and Cyborg was in tears. Robin stood up in the jacuzzi and was glaring at Beast Boy, who was still laughing on the floor.
"Oh man...you should've...seen your face, Robin!" Beast Boy managed to say in between laughs.
"BEAST BOY!!! I'm going to kill you!" Robin hissed, as he got out and was heading straight for the, still laughing teen. Right before he got to the changling Cyborg picked up Robin.
"Put me down Cy." Robin struggled under the robot's strong grip.
"No way, I need someone to beat at video games, so I'm not gonna let you kill him." Cyborg just chuckled and carried the dripping wet leader into the living room, where Raven and Starfire were meditaing together.
"Raven, Star! The surprise is ready." Cy called the girls, still holding on to Robin. Robin was occasionaly trying to get out of his grip.
"Um, Cyborg? Why are you carring Robin over your shoulder, and why is he covered in water?" Starfire flew over to the boys.
"Long story..." Cyborg was interupted by Robin.
"Because Beast Boy pushed me into the freakin' hot tub, and I was about to kill him. Let...me...go!" Robin wasn't giving up easily.
"Will you promise to not kill Beast Boy?" Cy asked as he shifted Robin to get a better grip on him. The Boy Wonder was quiet. "No? Then I'm keeping you up here a little longer." Robin growled and muttered some choice words under his breath.
"What is this hot tub you speak of?" Star asked as she watched Robin struggle under Cyborg's grip. She started giggling, when Robin was flipped over by Cyborg, Robin was now belly up on the mechanical teen's shoulder.
"I'll explain it to you Starfire, Cy deal with anger managment boy there." Raven giggled and brought Star down the hallway leaving Cyborg and Robin alone.
"Maybe I gave you too much med.s?" Cy laughed as he carried the pissed off Robin to the couch.
"Maybe, but I still want to...ooofff!" Robin was dropped onto the couch. "What? You would too if Beast Boy pushed you into freezing water, when you just...ow!" Cy smaked Robin in the back of the head.
"Yep, I gave you way too many med.s" Cy shook his head at the now somewhat calmed leader. "Did you work out after I left?" Cy asked, sitting next to Robin.
"Yeah, why?" Robin picked up a towel Cy handed him, after he dried off, Robin grabbed a controller for the gamestation.
"I forgot to tell you not to do any thing strenous, or the med.s would, well, do that." Cy smirked and started the gamestation.
"Thaaanks, I still want to hurt him." Cy rolled his eyes, and began going at it with Robin.
After Raven explained all about the hot tub to Star, they went and asked Cyborg if they could take a dip. They found him in the living room with Robin there too.
"Pleeeease Cyborg." Star and Raven asked for the third time.
"Not yet." Cy was trying to avoid them, but was failing.
"But Robin got to go in." Starfire smiled at Cy. Robin was standing there as well, and when she said that, he started to twitch, which made Raven and Starfire giggle.
"Fine! Go ahead, and take Bird Boy too. I'm getting sick of losing to him." Cy frowned, as Robin glared.
"No way am I going back in that hot tub." Robin put his foot down. Star whispered something to Raven, she nodded and teleported Cy and herself out of the living room, leaving Star and Robin alone.
"Why not Robin? It will be most enjoyable." Star smiled inocently.
"I already went in." Robin was despretly avoiding her gaze, knowing full well if he looked at her he was at her mercy.
"But Roooobiiiiin..." Star whined as she walked in front of him and catching his gaze. He looked at her, she was holding her hands in front of her, her head was coked to the side, and she was smiling so sweetly. Robin instintly gave in.
"Ok Starfire, I'll go in, but only because your so cute when you do that." Star hugged Robin quickly, thanking him, and flew off to change into her suit.
Cyborg showed Raven and Star the hot tub while Robin changed. Raven was in an all black one piece suit that showed her back. Starfire had on a two piece bathing suit, that was purple. Cy wasn't going in, for obvious reasons, and Beast Boy was nowhere to be found. Robin came down with red swim trunks, that had an 'R' on the left pant leg.
"What took ya?" Cy asked first.
" I got sidetracked." Robin lied, but Cyborg and the others bought it. 'I'm so glad I lived with Batman.' "Is that water cold still?" Robin quickly changed the subject.
"No, it is quite hot Robin." Star was already in the hot tub, as was Raven. Robin got in, and Cyborg left to find Beast Boy.
After about an hour and a half, Raven got out to meditate and read, but Star insisted Robin stay, it wasn't hard.
"You know I'll be able to resite that face sooner or later." Robin sat back down into the hot water.
"I understand that." Star smiled brightly, knowing full well he wouldn't any time soon. Both Robin and Starfire stayted in the hot tub talking until Cyborg called them for lunch.
"We'll be down in a sec. Cy!" Robin yelled down.
"Hey dude, do you know where BB is? I can't find him!" Cy yelled down, but Robin didn't answer. Cyborg started to get suspisious, and was about to call back down to him, but both Star and Robin came down from the roof.
"Did ya hear me? I can't find BB." Cy asked again.
"Nope haven't seen him." Robin started down the hall casualy.
"I am sorry Cyborg, but I do not know where he is." Star smiled and flew to her room to change.
After lunch was cleared, Cyborg was searching franticly for Beast Boy. He didn't show up for lunch, and his locator was disconnected. Raven was in the living room reading. Robin and Starfire were in Star's room. Star was sitting on her bed with a pillow in her arms, and Robin was sitting besdie her.
"Star is something wrong?" Robin gently asked, as he wrapped his arms around her waist.
"I have been having this strange dream Robin." Star placed her head on Robin's strong shoulder.
"Would you like to tell me about it?" He comforted Star, while stroking her hair. Star shook her head.
"Not yet, but promise me you will never leave us. Promise me you will not leave me." Star looked into Robin's mask, her eyes were pleading him.
"I promise Starfire, I will never leave." Robin sealed his promise with a kiss on her lips. He knew that was a promise he might not be able to keep forever. He knew that one day he would have to leave this earth, one day, but he didn't want to get technical. Then, just as they broke their heart warming kiss, the alarm went off.
Star_Fire_Chick
01-01-2005, 11:28 PM
awwwwwwww that was most adorable i feel fuzzy and warm inside
Aquagirl15
01-02-2005, 03:10 AM
i really liked the chapter, it was warm and fuzzy, but let's face it i'd rather like dark but this warm fuzzy is good. and it was soooo funny! keep up the good work!!
Matt A
01-02-2005, 05:49 AM
Yeah, the hot tub was a pretty cool idea, as was the "too many meds" thing.
I'm guessing that BB hasn't run off for the fun of it...
starfire0639
01-02-2005, 11:45 AM
the to many meds was really funny but my mind is npow on two things that are kinda just sticking there and cant forget them...........
1.where the heck is beats boy?!when i read the story i found nothing in it that would make him poed or something so i dont think he ran away but alas you are the writer and you decide what happens............bleh:p
2.i need to know what that dream was about!.i have the idea that its bout robin and him leaving or soemthing but i donno...........please write soon!
anyways as i was gonna say this chapter was all warm and fuzzy as the others said and i hope ya give us another chapter soon!peace:D
Pookey
01-02-2005, 01:34 PM
i will bring Beast Boy back, hehe, and the dream will be told...sooner or later. next ch. is a fight scene, blah, BB will come back.
Star_Fire_Chick
01-02-2005, 08:57 PM
oooo i can not wait!u must write more and soon!
Pookey
01-04-2005, 06:50 AM
Thank you guys soooo... much, I love all your reviews. Okay, BB is found, but he will be interogated about his disappering in the next ch. I SUCK AT ACTION!!! but here's another ch.
Ch. 11 'Surprise Pt.2'
Then, just as they broke their heart warming kiss, the alarm went off. Robin smiled, reassuring Starfire that he wouldn't go anywhere. Star smiled and stood up with Robin, and they both ran into the living room. cyborg and Raven were already there.
"Where's Beast Boy?" Raven asked as Robin walked in. Starfire shook her head, and then everyone looked at Robin.
"Did you check the cleaning closet?" He replied with no hint of emotion. Cyborg looked at Robin like he was crazy, but went over to the closet as Robin himself, walked over to the computer.
"BB!" Cyborg yelled as he opened the door, Beast Boy fell out of the closet. "Why were you in there?" Cyborg picked up his green friend. Robin looked over at Beast Boy and gave him a smirk, that only Starfire saw.
"Umm...No reason." Beast Boy lied. 'Unless of course you count hiding from Robin as doing nothing.' "Is the medicine you gave Robin worn off yet?" Beast Boy asked as Cyborg led him over to the group.
"Yeah why?" Cyborg was confused, at Beast Boy asking that.
"Uh, No reason." Raven looked at Beast Boy, trying to read his facal expression.
"Guys, Cinderblock has been spotted in the park. Titans Go!" Robin yelled and the others went into the garage. Starfire flew to the park with Beast Boy, Cyborg and Raven drove the T-car, and Robin took his new R-cycle. Starfire and Beast Boy reached the park first, and was searching for Cinderblock. It wasn't a hard task.
"Beast Boy watch out!" Starfire screamed as Cinderblock threw a tree straight at the changling. Beast Boy changed into a gorilla and caught the tree, and hurled it back. It hit Cinderblock, but the tree just shattered.
"Oh man!" Beast Boy whined. "I thought that would do something."
"I see Cinderblock has grown much stronger." Starfire readied her starbolts, and flew to the sky, straight toward Cinderblock. She yelled, as she threw many starbolts at the blocked criminal. Cinderblock screeched as every bolt hit him. When the smoke cleared, Cinderblock didn't have a scratch on him. Robin and Cyborg arived at the scene.
"He is much stronger." Star flew to her comrades.
"Let's see how strong." Cyborg charged up his sonic cannon, and shot it direclty in Cinderblocks chest. He stumbled backwards, but regained his balance.
"Azerath Metrion Zinthos!" Raven yelled as two boulders came up from the ground.
"Raven, hit Cinderblock on his left side!" Robin yelled as he charged with his bo-staff. Raven threw both boulders at Cinderblock hitting his left arm, and chest, just like Robin said. Cinderblock then was hit by Robin's bo-staff on the right side of his face. Cinderblock yelled, as he fell backwards. Starfire threw two starbolts at him, making him fall to the ground with a loud crash, but he wasn't down for the count. He quickly got up, and charged at the Titans, yelling. He went to hit Cyborg, who was about to blast him with his sonic cannon, but Cinderblock smashed his car instead.
"DUDE! I just waxed that!" Cyborg yelled, and shot his cannon in Cinderblock's chest. Raven chanted, and threw some trees at the criminal, but he blocked them. Cinderblock then hit Raven, sending her flying into a tree.
"Raven!" Beast Boy ran to help her, but Cinderblock grabbed him. Beast Boy's face turned red, as he changed into a T-Rex in Cinderblock's hand. He dropped the dinosour, and got a tail whip after. Beast Boy quickly changed back, and ran to Raven. She was slowly getting up. "Raven, are you okay?" Beast Boy asked, as he helped her get up.
"Yeah, I'm okay." Raven smiled evily. "But I don't think he is." Raven looked at Cinderblock, who was getting a serious betting by Robin. Robin was kicking, and punching him after Cinderblock tried to hurt Star.
Starfire just shot him with two more bolts, when he tried to hit her. Robin saw this and got mad, real mad. Robin ran to Cinderblock and started betting him. Cyborg took this time to charged up another blast. When Robin jumped away from Cinderblock, who was now about to go down, Cyborg and Starfire tagged teamed. After Starfire shot him with her eye-laysers, Cyborg finished him off with a blast to his face. Cinderblock fell to the ground, knocked out.
"Good work team, now we have to find out who sent him." Robin walked over to the fallen Cinderblock. He noticed an ear piece in his right ear. "I think I found something, Cyborg trace the signal to that ear piece." Robin kneeled down beside Cinderblock's head. Cyborg went to trace the signal, but the ear piece suddenly vanished into thin air.
"What the..where'd it go?" Beast Boy exclaimed. The police arrived, with a loading truck, and took Cinderblock away, but the Titans searched around the park. "While we're here, we might as well eat." Beast Boy perked up.
"Fine by me, but I still want to look around. You guys go ahead and eat, I'll be right there." Robin put his hand to his chin, and examined the scene in front of him. Some trees and boulders were missing, and a large dents where Cinderblock had fallen, and Cyborg's broken T-car.
"C'mon, he's in his zone." Cyborg shood the others away, but Starfire stayed. Robin walked over to where Cinderblock was previously laying down, and looked for clues. Starfire stayed behind him. "Nothing, why would he come here? Unless...Slade." Robin clenched his fists.
"Robin..." Star spoke after watching him clench his fists in anger. "Slade died, Cyborg said he took him to jail."
"When!?" Robin whipped around.
"The night you fell, and almost died." Star wipped a tear that was forming, she didn't like remembering that night.
"Hmmm, maybe, but.." Robin started thinking out loud, but was interuppted by Star's hand on his shoulder.
"Come, you can think about this later. You must eat something." Star smiled brightly, hoping Robin would come.
"All right, but as soon as we get home I have work to do." Robin walked over to the pizza place the others were sitting.
After fighting over what pizza they were going to get, they decided on getting a half pepperonie, and half veggie pizza, Raven's idea.
"Mmmm, this veggie isn't that bad." Raven tried some of Beast Boy's after much begging.
"Ha! I told you it was good." Beast Boy praised himself, Raven just rolled her eyes, and continued to eat.
"Eww, that's so wrong." Cyborg chringed as Raven ate her veggie pizza. Robin and Starfire just laughed as they watched Cyborg twitch when Raven and Beast Boy eat thier non-meat pizza. After dinner was scarfed down the Titans went home. Starfire left with Robin on his motorcycle. Beast Boy carried Cyborg home, and Raven flew.
When they finally reached the Tower, Cyborg challenged Beast Boy at the gamestaion. Raven watched beside Beast Boy, but Robin and Starfire didn't come straihgt home.
Aquagirl15
01-04-2005, 08:19 AM
it's really funny how BB was hiding from Robin that whole time and how Robin knew where he was.:anime: i think the others are going to or have already found out that BB likes Rae. it'll be so funny to see how he reacts when they tell him that they've known all along! you are very talented in writing comedies, keep up the good work! i can always read this story when i'm in the mood for a laugh and ya never know when that'll be! :D so write more soon!!! PLEASE!!! :crying:
Star_Fire_Chick
01-04-2005, 04:38 PM
it's really funny how BB was hiding from Robin that whole time and how Robin knew where he was.:anime: i think the others are going to or have already found out that BB likes Rae. it'll be so funny to see how he reacts when they tell him that they've known all along! you are very talented in writing comedies, keep up the good work! i can always read this story when i'm in the mood for a laugh and ya never know when that'll be! :D so write more soon!!! PLEASE!!! :crying: and u say u arent good at fighting scence i loved it (like i always tell u!)please u must write more
Matt A
01-04-2005, 06:33 PM
Yep, that was a good fight scene. It's pretty much dogma round here that blow-by-blow accounts are the best way to do things, and bearing that in mind you did very well indeed. Plus you dropped multiple hints at the character relationships whilst you were at it, which is an important ouch that most people (myself included) seem to forget.
It'd be interesting to see why Beast Boy was hiding in the cleaning closet...
Pookey
01-05-2005, 06:42 AM
I decided to wait until next Ch. to talk about BB. I have a plan for him, and remember the bookmark?? Next Ch. too. But, that's all the hints I'm giving you. hehe The fight scene was GOOD!?!? WOW:eek: , I'm amazed! Thanks, Love ya!! If I'm nice, you may get another Ch. today, but only if I feel like being nice.:evil:
Ch.12 'A Rid and Victory'
When they finally reached the Tower, Cyborg challenged Beast Boy at the gamestaion. Raven watched beside Beast Boy, but Robin and Starfire didn't come straihgt home."Woho! Victory dance! Go Cyborg! Go Cyborg!" Cyborg danced through the living room. Beast Boy was pouting, and Raven was giggling.
"All right, try and beat me, then." Raven annoced, after about five min. of Cyborg's 'victory' dance.
"Your on Rae! Prepare to die." Cyborg jumped over the couch and set up the gamestation. After 4 rounds of fighting, they were tied. Raven sat smirking, while Cyborg was concentrating. Then when, the last shot was firered...the game was over...and you wouldn't believe who won...
"Robin, are you sure this is safe?" Star asked as she cluched onto Robin tighter. This was her first time on his R-cycle, and she was a bit nervous.
"Yeah Star, it's safe." He felt her hold on tighter, he then smirked as he drove faster down the road, causing her to yelp, and hold onto him even closer. Her head was bruiried in his back, and her arms were wrapped around his waist. Robin loved how she held on to him for safety. Robin decided to slow down a bit, knowing she was scared out of her witts.
"Robin, where are you heading towards?" Star peeked her head over Robin's shoulder, he felt her head leave his back, her breath brushing against his neck, sending shivers all over him. Star felt him shiver, and she giggled. Star then nuzzled her head in closer to the crock of his neck, and breathing softly. Robin about died, his breathing was becoming unsteady, as he pulled into a parking space. Star didn't relize they had stopped. Star's arms were still wrapped around Robin's waist and he turned slightly, catching her lips in a kiss.
"You are evil." Robin whispered, after he broke the kiss. Star giggled, and shook her head.
"I am not the one who drove faster, causing me to become frightened. I would call it 'payback'. As Cyborg said." Star grinned, Robin chukled and got off the motorcycle and held a hand out for Star. Starfire took his hand, and floated off the vechical, surprised at what she saw.
"Robin, this is beautiful." She breathed in the fresh air. Robin had taken her to a river side park. It was near the edge of town, but Robin wanted to show her it. "Thank you." She hugged Robin, he smiled and took her hand, and led her down a pathway.
They had spent quite a lot of time in the park, and Robin decided it was time to head home.
"Star. Starfire?" She was in a trance, looking out onto the river. "Star? We need to head home." She seemed stuck in her trance, until Robin kissed her cheek. Star jumped, and looked over at Robin. "We need to start heading back, c'mon."
"Do we have to?" Star pouted her bottom lip out, Robin smirked and picked her up bridal style, making her squel. He lead her to the motorcycle, and placed her on the seat.
"Yep, we have to." Robin nooded his head, and handed her, her helmet. She put it on, as Robin got on the bike. "Are you ready?" Robin asked after putting his helmet on.
"I think so." She was still nervous about riding on it. Robin started up the bike, and Starfire let out a shriek, and grapped on to Robin tightly. Robin smiled.
"It's okay Star. I promise, you're safe." Robin took his hand and squeezed hers. Star nodded, and put her head on his back. Robin then drove off, knowing Star was okay.
As Robin pulled in to the garage, he felt Star nuzzle her face in to his back.
'She must have fallen asleep' Robin smiled as he parked his motorcycle, and took off his helmet. He slowly turned around, and noticed Star was fast asleep on him. He gently took off her helmet.
'She's so cute when she's like this.' Robin looked at Starfire. She had her arms wrapped around him comfortably, and her head rested on his chest. She had a small smile placed on her lips. Robin wanted to stay just like this, but he needed to get to work.
'Work ruins the best moments.' Robin gently picked up Starfire, making sure her head rested on his shoulder, and her arms wrapped around his neck, as he carried her up the stairs.
When he opened the door, and walked into the living room, he saw Cyborg and Beast Boy's jaws on the floor, and Raven laughing at the scene.
"Hey Robin." Raven noticed the Boy Wonder walk in. She smiled at him, as she watched him carry Starfire. Robin nodded his head at Raven, and continued on his way to her room. He was walking down the hall when he heard her mumble something in her sleep.
"Never knew she did that?" He whispered, as he listened to what she was saying. He only got bits and pieces of what Star said, but he heard her say something that stuck in his brain.
"So, I think I'm suppose to run around the room, yelling, 'Go me, Go me'." Raven sarcastilclly said to Cyborg. Raven beat Cyborg, and demolished his high score. The robot himself still had his jaw on the floor, and drool was starting to leak out onto the floor. Raven used her powers and shut his mouth, and whispered in his ear, "I win." After, she left the living room. Beast Boy started giggling, then it turned into a fit of laughter as Cyborg's human eye started to twitch. Beast Boy eventually left the living room in search of Raven, leaving Cyborg to stare at the high score list.
Aquagirl15
01-05-2005, 08:34 AM
this was really funny and sweet. i like how you showed Star's fright by having her hold on to Robin. it was cute, and it was really funny how Raven beat Cyborg and his high score!
"So, I think I'm suppose to run around the room, yelling, 'Go me, Go me'." Raven sarcastilclly said to Cyborg.
now that line was just sooooo funny! but i wonder, why is BB always following Raven around? maybe it just seems like that to me, but yeah. post more soon please. and i don't generly say please.
starfire0639
01-05-2005, 03:17 PM
and remember the bookmark?? Next Ch. too. But, that's all the hints I'm giving you. evil! why must you make me wait!gah!:mad: sigh calm down......................:sweat: ok im done and shall i say very good last two chappies sorry i havnt read them in a while but comp restriction................hehehe and now i am off hope you write more soioin and the star robin thing is just oodles of fun reading:anime:
Star_Fire_Chick
01-05-2005, 04:22 PM
You must write more,i cant wait till we know about the bookmark!:D
decka
01-05-2005, 06:05 PM
That chapter was too cute!!!!I luv it:anime:
Matt A
01-05-2005, 07:36 PM
Exactly!
Pookey
01-07-2005, 05:52 AM
This ch. may take sometime, b/c it's a toughy...whew, I'm already tired, and I'm no where near half way. *pant pant* yeah, if you see the writers block around, can someone make it die a slow, painful death for me. I would grreatly appreciate it. lol I've been keeping it at bay with this baseball bat, pitchfork, and gun, but I'm losing ground...HELP!!!!!!!
that was brought to you by the foundation for killing of Writers Block(their not doing a good job)
starfire0639
01-07-2005, 02:58 PM
This ch. may take sometime, b/c it's a toughy...whew, I'm already tired, and I'm no where near half way. *pant pant* yeah, if you see the writers block around, can someone make it die a slow, painful death for me. I would grreatly appreciate it. lol I've been keeping it at bay with this baseball bat, pitchfork, and gun, but I'm losing ground...HELP!!!!!!!
that was brought to you by the foundation for killing of Writers Block(their not doing a good job)that scared me a little........................hahahahaha as for the pitch fork makle sure its nice and sharp and the bullets for the gun are fresh as not to leave gun powder residue all over the place:D i shall help if yas likes me to not the killing thing thats a one man job but ill help ya with the chappie if ya want duh of course i would ill do anything to not have to write my next chapter.........oop i said that out loud didnt i?oop.............oh well gotta go!*runs away fast*
Pookey
01-08-2005, 12:48 PM
Okay, this is a hard ch, to write, but i'm going to give you some of it. It seems Writer's block is surrendering! Yeah! Don't expect the next part for a few days...
Ch 13 'Let's Talk'
"That did not just happen." Cyborg said after staring at the computer screen for two hours.
"What didn't happen?" Robin said, making Cyborg whip around.
"Raven...she demolished my high score." Cyborg hufted out in annoyence. Robin laughed, and opened a cabinet for a cup. "What's up with you?" Cyborg asked, as he walked into the kitchen.
"Just trying to figure out why Cinderblock attacked." Robin was filling his cup with water. Cyborg rolled his eyes, and got out some food from the fridge.
"Find anything?" Cyborg was making a sandwich.
"No, nothing. It's like he just attacked to get our attention, or just to break something." Robin was getting frusterated.
"Utoh, Looks like you need a break. Why don't you go on to bed. You can think this over in the morning." Cy insisted, he could tell when Robin wasn't going to get anywhere.
"I think I'm going to." Robin finished his water, and put it in the sink.
"Wow, you're taking a break..on your own. You're growing up so fast." Cyborg sarcasticlly got excited. Robin rolled his eyes, and left for his room, not until he told Cyborg he was eating tofo.
Robin walked down the hall, and was thinking about what Star had said, when he heard a scream and a crash come from Starfire's room. Robin raced to her room, and opened her door, to find her on the floor.
"Starfire, are you okay?" Robin ran to her side.
"Robin" Star looked up from the side of her bed, she had tears running down her face.
"I'm here, did you have a nighmare?" Robin held her gently in his loving arms. She wrapped her arms around his neck, and cried on his shoulder.
"Robin...it felt...it felt so real." She said after a few minutes of sobbing. Robin pulled her closer, and was stroking her hair, and whispering in her ear that everything would be okay. Her crying turned into light hiccups.
"Do you want to talk about it?" Robin asked after she had stopped crying. He felt her nodd her head yes. Robin gently picked her up and they sat on the bed. She was wearing a light pink, silky nightgown, that had spagetti strapes, so Robin brought her comfeter over her shoulders, and sat down beside her. Star took in a deep breath, as Robin held her hand.
Beast Boy found Raven standing against the wall while holding on to her necklace, and looking at each charm with intense focus. He stood where he was, and watched her look deeply at each charm. After a few minutes, Beast Boy walked over to the goth.
"Hey, what's wrong?" Beast Boy asked iin a concerned tone, she looked up and met his gaze.
"Nothing, it's just...All my life I wanted to show emotions, but now that I can, I still feel trapped." Raven looked down.
"You know, what if you slowly let out emotions with-out the charms? What if you let this decide, instead of this." Beast Boy pionted to her heart, and then to her head.
"Beast Boy, when did you get so smart?" Raven smiled, and hugged him. "But, still..." She was interuppted by Beast Boy.
"You're starting to let your head think for you." Beast Boy play scoleded her. Raven giggled.
"Thank you Beast Boy, but still, how did you know something was up?" Beast Boy just smiled at her question.
"You could say, I had sometime to think today." Beast Boy put his hand behind his head.
"Right, about that, why were you hinding all day, and in the cleaning closet of all places?" Raven smirked.
"Well, would you look at the time! I gotta run, bye!" Beast Boy turned to leave, but Raven brought him back.
"Spill." She had him in a black bubble.
"Spill what?" He smiled nervously. Raven brought him in to the living room, and found Cyborg sitting on a stool in the kitchen eating.
"I think he's hiding something." Raven pointed to a floating Beast Boy.
"You don't say? Well then, I guess we'll have to force it out of him, won't we?" Cyborg put his food down, now intrested, Cyborg walked over to Beast Boy and whispered in his ear, causing the green teen to shriek.
"Okay I'll tell you, but don't give him that stuff again. I swear, he turns evil on me." The others laughed, and Beast Boy was dropped on the couch. "Why is the couch wet?"
Cyborg stiffled a laughter as he remembered what happened earlier. "After you pushed Robin into the hot tub, I carried him down stairs, and put him on the couch." Raven giggled when she remembered her leader being forced to stay down stairs, until she and Starfire went in to the hot tub. Beast Boy scooted over to another part of the couch, and sighed.
"Fine, I was in the cleaning closet for two reasons. One was to hide from Robin, and two..." Beast Boy paused.
"Well??" Cyborg pressed on, while Raven raised an eyebrow.
"The second one isn't important, so can I go now?" Beast Boy stood up, but Cyborg pushed him down.
"Nope, Why were you in the cleaning closet? And why were you hiding from Robin?...Never mind, I know the second question." Raven asked.
"Hehe, um it's a funny story. I was in the cleaning closet, because...because...I, uhhhh" Beast Boy started stuttering.
"Beast Boy, pleeeease tell." Raven whispered in his ear, a shiver went down his back and he froze. Cyborg didn't hear what she said to the changling, but he saw the reaction.
"What did you do to him?" Cyborg asked as he poked his green friend. Raven giggled, and stopped Cyborg.
"He'll sone tell us..." Raven smirked, and shut her eyes, Cyborg stood back as she chanted and went into his mind. In about 5 minutes Raven's eyes were wide.
"So? What was he doing?" Cyborg asked impatiently.
"Nothing, he did nothing." Raven stated, but he face said something else.
"Star, don't worry, You can tell me anything." Robin calmly said. Star nodded and began to tell her dream to Robin.
The sky was black, and there were no stars out. All the Titans were gathered around a open man-hole.
"All right team, Raven and Beast Boy, you guys search the sky, Cyborg, you check the ground...Star, I have some special instructions for you. TITANS GO!" Roobin barked his orders, and the others left, leaving Starfire and Robin alone.
"You wanted to tell me someting important Robin?" Star asked hesintenly. It was Red-X, and he sent Robin a message that he was after twwo things.
1- Some synothium, and money
2- Starfire
Robin was furious when he heard Red-X was after Starfire, his Starfire, and Robin was going to see to it that Red-X was going to be stopped...by Robin himself. Robin knew where Red-X was hiding, so he sent the others on a wild goose chase, leaving Red-X to himself.
"Star, I want you to go home, and make sure you lock your door, okay?" Robin turned to face her.
"But Robin...We have to find Red-X?" Star asked confused. Robin pulled her close and kissed her lips quickly.
"Trust me Star." Robin erged her to go now. star took in a deep breath, and built up enpugh corage to speak.
"No Robin, I...I can't just go home." Star said, and she saw a black figure fly across the road. Robin knew she wasn't going to leave, and he saw her expression suddenly change, he turned around to be met with nothing there.
"What is it Star?" He looked around, and was sunnenly pushed into the man-hole.
"ROBIN!" Star flew in after him, and found him all ready fighting.
Aquagirl15
01-08-2005, 01:11 PM
evil cliffhanger. i wanna know why BB was in the closet!!!! and what else happened in Star's dream! so many questions that i will have to wait to be answered! i really like it so please write and post more as soon as you can! :crying:
Star_Fire_Chick
01-08-2005, 01:26 PM
evil cliffhanger. i wanna know why BB was in the closet!!!! and what else happened in Star's dream! so many questions that i will have to wait to be answered! i really like it so please write and post more as soon as you can! :crying:that answer everythign i wanted to say,You must write more!
Starrysky
01-08-2005, 02:42 PM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :anime: I like this...Keep it up! or else.:evil:
Matt A
01-08-2005, 06:18 PM
Hmm, Raven gets sultry...interesting. But what did she see? What happened in Star's nightmare? And was it just a nightmare?
Questions, questions...all will be answered before long, no doubt. I shall see to it myself...:evil:
decka
01-09-2005, 01:12 AM
um post more NOW. If i don't know what happens soon I might have to kill u. :evil:
starfire0639
01-09-2005, 01:44 AM
such violence form you people how dare you harm the writer shes done no hurt thingies to you!(heehe i know im a sweetie)as for the chapter i love it and i must know what bb was doing im trying to think but all i can get is one idea that i wont tell for then i will have a magor blushing embarrsemt attack which is not good at all so alright write more soon!
Sproxie
01-09-2005, 12:50 PM
well, I feel like an idiot for not keeping up with this story, i had like 7 chapters to read :sweat: . But they were all great. *starts mumbling something about relationships* If you read all the chapters together, its cool to see how Raven changes emotionally and socially.
Raven kicking butt in video games? Now thats scary....
Pookey
01-10-2005, 05:17 PM
I love you guys, Im srry this is late...i got a little lazy over the weekend.... :sweat: BUT better later than never, I really like this ch. I hope you guys do to! WOW, death threats...I better not get lazy again.
Ch. 14 'Dreamy Books'
"What is it Star?" He looked around, and was sunnenly pushed into the man-hole.
"ROBIN!" Star flew in after him, and found him all ready fighting.
Robin had scooted closer to Starfire, and noticed that she was growing tired. She went to continue, but Robin stopped her.
"Star? Do you want to finish in the morning?" Robin asked quietly. Star looked up to meet Robin's face, because she was looking down at the floor.
"I would, but what if I have that dream again? I get so scared when I see what happends at the end." Star held back her oncoming tears. Robin smiled gently, reassuring her, that everything would be all right.
"What if I stayed with you until you fell asleep?" Robin blushed slightly. Star smiled a genuine smile.
"You would do that for me?" Star asked as she pulled the comfeter closer to her. Robin nodded, and stood up.
"Of course I would..." Robin scooped Star up in his arms, causing her to shreik in surprise, "But only if I get a good-night kiss." Robin still had her in his arms, but he then flipped her over his shoulder.
"Ahh! Robin!" Star yelled when he flipped her over, now she was being carried to the other side of her bed.
"Yes Star?" Robin took his free arm and pulled her covers down while Star was trying to get out of his other arm.
"Robin, What are youuuueeehhh!" Robin popped her off his shoulder and she landed on her bed with a soft thump.
"Just bringing you to bed." Robin smirked and pinned her shoulders down on the soft bed. Star had her red hair in her face, so Robin couldn't see the evil smirk she had on. "Now will you be good and fall asleep, or will I have to..." Robin couldn't finish because Star flipped him over, and now Robin was laying on the bed, and Starfire was on top of him.
"Or what? I was unable to hear the last thing you said Robin." Star leaned in close to his face, their noses touching and Robin was begging to breath heavy. "What is it Robin? Do I cause you to become nervous?" Star asked in a sultry way. She rubb her nose agianst his (A/N: Eskimo kiss way) and a pieces of her hair fell onto his face. Robin's breathing quickened, but he wasn't down yet.
"Starfire?" He asked lowly, she stopped and looked into his mask. Robin took his hands, with out Star noticing, and brought it to her waist without touching her..
"Yes?" Star hadn't noticed his hands had moved. Robin smiled.
"I was just wondering..." Robin flipped her over by her waist, and held her down by her arms. "How do I alsways seem to wind up on top?" He smriked, and made sure her legs were also secure, by his own. He laughed, as he claimed victory.
"All right, you win...for now." Star's voice became low, but a yawn quickly came after her challenge. Robin chuckled, and got off of her bed. Star sat up and moved over to her pillows.
"Robin?" Star asked as she reached for her covers. Robin turned around to face her, and smiled brightly.
"Yeah Star?" He walked over to the tired alien. She let out another yawn. She tried to sit up, but she fell onto her pillows. Robin chuckled to himself, as he watched her struggle to stay wake. He sat next to her and tucked her in, after he kissed her gently on her lips, and again on her forehead.
"Nevermind....." Star drifted off to sleep, and Robin smiled warmly. He went to stand up and leave, but noticed Star was holding his hand. He managed to stand up, and looked out the window, the sky was a deep blue and stars lit up the sky, but what really stood out was the shinning moon. Robin sat back down carefully, and looked out of Starfire's window, staring at the yellow full moon while holding on to Star's hand. He stayed like, light shinning in the window, and was starting to grow sleepy himself.
"Time to go Robin. C'mon on." Robin started talking to himself. He, again, stood up to leave, and looked back at the sleeping girl. "She looks so peaceful." Robin pushed back a lock of her hair from her face, and gently unhooked their hands. When he did he could her a small disappointed sigh escape from her. Robin let out a quiet chuckle, and leaned in and kissed her cheek. Star smiled, and mummbled his name. "I'm always here." He whispered, causing her to giggle in her sleep. "Good-Night Starfire." And with that he walked out of her room.
Raven was on her way to her room, when she heard a yell come from Starfire's room. She ran to the room, but smiled when she heard Robin's voice also in the room.
"Must be nice." Raven said to herself, as she walked past her friends room, and headed to her own.
"What must be nice?" A voice asked the goth unexpectidly. Raven whipped around, onlt to be met with a certain green teen.
"Oh! Beast Boy, it's only you." She sighed in relief. Raven stood in the midle of the hallway facing Beast Boy.
"What must be nice?" Beast Boy asked again, walking towards Raven. She blushed slightly.
"Nothing, just talking to myself." She lied, hoping Beast Boy would believe it. Beast Boy reached his cloaked friend, and placed a hand on her shoulder.
"You can tell me." He reassured her. Raven smiled a warm smile, and blushed when touched her.
"It's really nothing..." Beast Boy gave up asking her, knowing she would tell when she was ready.
"Okay." He smiled warmly at her, but it changed into a frown, "Hey Rae? Umm...remember when you went into my mind and saw...well, could you not tell anybody? I would become a laughing stock if Cyborg and Robin found out." The changling aksed quietly.
"I promise, I won't tell anybody." Raven reassured him.
"Thanks." He said, making Raven smile too. They heard another yell come from Star's room, followed by Robin's voice again. "What is going on in there?" Beast Boy asked, and was about to go down the hall to find out, but Raven stopped him.
"It's just Robin and Starfire having a little fun. I think she was having a nightmare, and Robin went to check on her, but by the looks of things, she's in a better mood." Raven started back to her room, but Beast Boy stopped her.
"Raven wait! I wanted to give you something to you later, but I can't wait...follow me." Beast Boy grabbed her hand, causing her to blush, and lead her to his room. When they reached Beast Boy's room, they were still holding hands. He lead her into his messy room, and to his bed. "Okay, I know it's around here some where..." Beast Boy started to search his entire room, while Raven watched him, giggling everytime he threw up some of his clothes.
"This is taking forever. Where did I put it." Beast Boy sighed in frustration, throwing a shirt in the air. it was heading towards Raven, and she stopped it with her powers, but accidently fell onto his bottom bunk. Raven blushed when Beast Boy ran over to her.
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean it." Beast Boy apologized, making Raven smile.
"It's okay, what are you..." But before she could finish, Beast Boy found the small box he was looking for.
"Here, it's another charm, I hope you like it. I was going to give it to you for your birthday, but I couldn't wait." Beast Boy offered Raven the small navy blue box. Raven'e eyes lit up, and she gently took the box in her hands.
"Me and Cyborg found it in an old warehouse outside of town." Beast Boy smiled wide. Raven smiled softly, and opened up the velvet box, and was surprised to see a beautiful....
Starrysky
01-10-2005, 05:26 PM
No! How dare you end it like that! :eek:
Just kidding! :anime: Anyways, you must post soon...:evil:
Matt A
01-10-2005, 06:24 PM
Bad cliffhanger! Bad!
Why end shuch an amazing chapter halfay through a sentence! That's just...cruel!:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: ...
starfire0639
01-10-2005, 06:42 PM
oh common guys its clearly out there right in front of you just take one guess at whats in the box..........maybe a goat perhaps or even a gold hunk of cheese open your mind to wonders of imagination*forms a rainbow with hands*ummmmmmmmmthat was wierd sorry i had a brain fart as for you pooky*runs up all mean and stuff*youd better!...........please take this groveling*drops to knees*to please write more soon i must know whats in that box!*sobbing*pleaaaaaaaase!
Pookey
01-10-2005, 09:06 PM
MUAHAHAHAcoughcoughAHAHgag okay i really need to work on that:sweat: ...I'm glad you guys liked it, I could be even more evil and wait until Ash posts part 2 of her fic....you'll just have to wait and find out....*lightning strikes in background, bolt hits me...'cough cough, Stupid Special affects guys' walks off burnt*
Star_Fire_Chick
01-10-2005, 09:09 PM
Bad cliffhanger! Bad!
Why end shuch an amazing chapter halfay through a sentence! That's just...cruel!:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: ...EVIL YOU ARE EVIL!
decka
01-10-2005, 09:22 PM
OMG! I LOVE that chapter! OMG u r like the best writer EVER! I can't even stand it! There is nothing possibly wrong with chapter and if someone finds something they are out of the mind to even think that! Phew..now that i have that out of my system, Thank you for giving us such a enjoyable chapter.:D
Pookey
01-14-2005, 06:17 AM
srry guys, no post yet, but I'll try and post this weekend
so...much...homework...I was sick this week, so to put it in a good way...MAKE-UP WORK SUCKS!!
Aquagirl15
01-14-2005, 11:18 AM
ugh it is evil when authors end the chapter in the middle of a good part, but i'm gonna cut you some slack as i do it too.:sweat: *glances over shoulder at people popping their knuckles* uh yeah so post more soon, very soon or i might have to send these people after you. :evil:
Pookey
01-15-2005, 12:43 PM
okay, I've been in a depressed kinda mood for a while, but i finally broke out of it and wrote some fluff. This ch. is going to be VERY short, but i'll be able to write a longer one after this one. I PROMISE!!! This ch, will help me tie in a plot thingy for something coming up.
Ch 15 'Sweet Dreams'
Robin walked down the hallways of the darkened Tower, it was 2:45 A.M. and everyone was asleep, except him. He truged out of his bed and decided to head for the roof, but went to each of the Titan's doors.
First he came to Cyborgs. He heard the faint noise of rap music coming from the robots door, Robin put his ear to the door to listen, but he couldn't figure out the words, so Robin just leaned against the door, and thought about the good times with his best friend. Cyborg was more than a best friend to Robin, he was an older brother to the Boy Wonder. Robin could always talk to Cy when he was stuck, or in the need to talk. Robin smiled as he headed down the hall to the next door.
As he came to Beast Boy's room, he started to chuckle to himself. Beast Boy was a little brother to Robin. Beast Boy would always tell lame jokes and try to make Raven smile. Robin would easily get annoyed at the changling, but it always passed.
"What are we going to do with you BB?" Robin smiled as he left Titan's room, and headed to Raven's room next.
Robin read the name on the steel door, RAVEN. The first Teen Titan. Robin and Raven had a close relationship, they always had, but when the other Titans came into the picture Raven became more and more hidden. Robin worried about her, and cared for her deeply, like an older sister. Raven always deep down cared for her teammates, worried when Robin became over obssessed in work, like he was her younger brother. Robin walked by her room and headed to his favorite room of all, Starfire's room.
"Starfire..." Robin whispered, as he traced her name with his gloved hand. Starfire was the fifth Teen Titan, Robin remembered the day she arrived on Earth. he sighed, and to check up on her. He quietly opened her door, to be welcomed into a moon-lit room. Robin watched Starfire sleep peacefully in her quiet slumber. Her covers would rise and fall with her chest, and locks of her red flowing hair lay gracefully on her smiling face.
'She looks so beautiful, she deseves so much' Robin thought as he tip-toed toward her bedside. he heard her start mumbling in her sleep again, and he listened with curiosity. He heard her talk about Tameran, musturd, and her friends, but what really caught his intrest was what she repeated in her sleep from when he brought her to bed the first time.
"Robin...I love...you..." He smiled as she maoned those last words out, he started growing tired, and eventually fell asleep. His head was lighly placed on her bed, and one of his hands was touching her cheek.
Crowgirl
01-15-2005, 01:29 PM
You are so cruel.
You're just gonna leave us hanging like that!?!?!? You... you... gah!!! I can't think of a stupid name now. Thanks a lot.
That was great, but way, way, way, way, WAY too short. Fiend!! The moment when Robin reviews his friendship with Raven was great.
Sorry about your being depressed. If it makes you happy, I'll give yu a reason why I was depressed until yesterday afternoon. Boys.
CG
Matt A
01-15-2005, 06:19 PM
That was cool. Some nice introspection from Robin, and it's always nice to look at thereality of the Titans' relationships with each other. However, when are we going to resume the cliffhanger from chapter fourteen? We needto know what Raven got given!
Sorry about your being depressed. If it makes you happy, I'll give yu a reason why I was depressed until yesterday afternoon. Boys.
I think I can guess what that's about. But I won't, just in case I'm either wrong or horifically tactless.:sweat:
Crowgirl
01-15-2005, 07:02 PM
I think I can guess what that's about. But I won't, just in case I'm either wrong or horifically tactless.:sweat:
If you must know, some guy asked me out, and I said yes. He told every single feakin' person he knew that I was his girlfriend (that's a lot of people), and we had never even gone out. Finally, he leaves a message on my answering machine saying: "Crowgirl*, I know you're there, so don't bother lying" while I was at the eye doctor/optomitrist (Sp). What kind of idiot does that?!?!?!?
Oh well, done now.
CG
*You guys seriously think I'm gonna tell you my name? You have to guess first....
Matt A
01-15-2005, 07:09 PM
Hey, it was a date! Don't knock it!
Anyway, most guys don't tend to ask a girl out if they don't expect a serious relationship to follow her saying yes. So, he was just being a bit presumptious (sp?) but there's no point getting angry at him for it. As for the answer machine thing, maybe he thought you were actually at home, and that you were just ignoring him for whatever reason.
That's my relationship advice dispensed. Feel free to ignore every word of it...
Crowgirl
01-15-2005, 07:13 PM
Hey, it was a date! Don't knock it!
There. Was. No. Date.
Anyway, most guys don't tend to ask a girl out if they don't expect a serious relationship to follow her saying yes. So, he was just being a bit presumptious (sp?) but there's no point getting angry at him for it. As for the answer machine thing, maybe he thought you were actually at home, and that you were just ignoring him for whatever reason.
Yeah, you just lost me. I have no clue what the word 'presumptious' actually means.:sweat:
Matt A
01-15-2005, 07:16 PM
There. Was. No. Date.Ah.:sweat:
Yeah, you just lost me. I have no clue what the word 'presumptious' actually means.:sweat:Presumptious means to act without full knowlege of the current situation. Or something like that, anyway.
Crowgirl
01-15-2005, 08:45 PM
Yeah, that's why it annoyed me.
Well, anyway....
WHEN THERE'S TROUBLE YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO.........
CALL CYBORG!!!!!!!
Man, that was hilarious....
Starfire5
01-15-2005, 08:49 PM
WAit....what im lost...inside joke? maybe....am i talking to myself? yes yes you are...well little voice ill i have to say to you is KAMAKAZI WATERMELON! ...what?...oh nevermind...
Crowgirl
01-15-2005, 08:53 PM
Umm... no.
That just came from Titans East, the new episode which just ended about, twenty-two minutes ago. That was hilarious, man.
BUT THERE WAS NO JINX!!!!!!!!!!! WHERE WAS SHE DUDE?!?!??!?!??!!?!?!?!?!
Starfire5
01-15-2005, 09:03 PM
Man that reminds me of how much Canada sucks..we didnt even finish watching the third season of Teen Titans:crying:
Pookey
01-15-2005, 10:06 PM
WHO CAN SHOOT ROCKETS FROM HIS SHOES? THAT'S CYBORG!
i died laughing when i heard that! I love that ep.
I'll post another ch. tomorrow....maybe??? im not sure, Decka and Star_Fire_Chick got a hint to what everyone will find out about what BB does, but Im not telling anymore peolpe.......:evil:
decka
01-16-2005, 12:48 AM
Post NOW!!! You made me so confused and i am still totally lost. Even after the like hour of tourcher you put us threw. grr u:mad: . You better post and tell me what i need to know otherwise I might die, your I'll be forced to kill you. either way it wont be pretty if the secaret information is not posted soon. And no more maybes!!!!! toodles:D
starfire0639
01-17-2005, 11:32 AM
dates?boys?oh i see this is what you guys speak bout while im not here.....shame and you say i spam common oh and marvelous chapter pooky!it was truly awsome as for me horrid weekend filled with geeky guy that says im hot and is stalking me told all my freinds he was a moron and that was bout it oh i have lots of freinds...................what am i talking about?ah well just posting to say awsome and crow why must you conciel your name!!??hmm.....im ash the writer by the way:D not like that has anything to do with it:pwait...................pooky how could you!decka and star but not me!that makes ash sad:crying: y u not tell me!:crying:
Pookey
01-18-2005, 06:28 AM
Im sorry, but here's another short Ch. i just can't seem to write anything long at this moment, but the next one will have to be long b/c there's alot of lose ends that will be tied. This is BB/Rae concentrated. Not to worry, there is some R/S fluff too, i couldn't help myself. http://67.18.37.17/1543/23/emo/biggrin.gif Love ya!!! and Ash, I told you, now you know...:evil:YES THERE ARE 3 PPL THAT KNOW WHAT'S COMING UP AND IF THEY SAY ANYTHING I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN:evil: ....Im better:anime: And MAYBE i'll post that secret info. next...MAYBE!!
Ch. 16 'Happy now?'
"Me and Cyborg found it in an old warehouse outside of town." Beast Boy smiled wide. Raven smiled softly, and opened up the velvet box, and was surprised to see a beautiful....
"Beast Boy! Its...its...beautiful" Raven managed to say after about 5 minutes of staring at the glisining charm. Beast Boy inched closer to the wide-eyed goth and gently took out the charm. Raven watched in astonishment, as Beast Boy carefully hooked the charm onto Raven's necklace. After Beast Boy stepped back, and a ray of purple light shot throught the darkened halls, and into the charm.
"I looked up the meaning of purple, and it said it meant royalty. I'm not sure how this would effect you, but it's a charm, and I know you need all of them." Beast Boy smiled warely. Raven looked into Beast Boy's eyes, and a tear slide down her face.
"Raven..." Beast Boy walked back over to Raven, and put his hand on her shoulder.
"Beast Boy...Thank you...and, purple also signifies my powers. That means, I am more powerful than ever. I can now be able to locate charms, and fight much better." Another tear slid down the girl's face. Beast Boy embraced in a hug, the two stayed like that for a while, and ended up talking through out the night on Beast Boy's bed. They lost track of time, and stayed up throughout the night thinking they were the only ones a wake, when they heard footsteps in the hallway. They quickly hushed and listened as the steps reached Beast Boy's door. They heard nothing for a few minutes, then a male's voice whispered in the hall.
"What are we going to do with you BB?" And then the steps went down the hall again. Beast Boy's eyes widened in shock when he heard his name, but Raven smiled, surpressing her laughter.
"Do you know who that was?" Beast Boy noticed Raven snicker.
"Yeah, it was just Robin. He was thinking." Raven said, as she stood up from her cross legged position.
"He thinks alot. Hey, where you headed?" Beast Boy asked as she reached the doorway.
"To the kitchen, wanna come?" Raven smiled, Beast Bot looked into her eyes and saw she wanted him with her. He nodded, and followed the goth to the kitchen. When they went to turn down the hall, they noticed Robin silently walk into Starfire's room. Raven sighed and continued on to the living room with a smiling Beast Boy behind.
Raven finished her herbel tea, and Beast Boy finished off some water in silence. It was a comforting silence, that they didn't want to break. The changling hopped down from the stool he was sitting in.
"I think I'm going to train, do you wanna come?" He asked with more of a 'come, please, it will be cool' tone of voice. Raven smiled and glided off her seat.
'She's so beautiful when she flys like that' Beast Boy got a silly grin on his face as she brushed her arm against his. They both blushed and left for the training room with another quieting silence.
Starfire slept peacefully not knowing Robin's head laying was beside her, until a jolt caused her to shoot up from her sleep.
"Why must I continue to obtain that horrid dream?" She asked herself in a quiet whisper, then she felt a hand beside her, and heard a quiet sigh. Star's body froze, and she turned her head slightly to see Robin's head sleeping on her bed. The rest of his body was propped up on the side of her bed, with his legs cruled up on the floor, his arms were carefully layed on her bed, and he slept soundly in his weird position. Star let out a releaving sigh, and watched Robin sleep soundly. Starfire forgot all about her dream, as she turned all the way around and carefully got off her bed. She kneeled beside Robin, and placed a soft kiss onto his cheek, a smile formed on his lips, and he let out a small moan of pleasure as he continued to sleep. Star giggled at his respose, and carefully picked him up and layed him on her bed. His head was set on her pink pillow, and she brushed his hair form his face. Robin didn't notice when Star returned to her bed, and layed her head onto his slowly moving chest. She pulled the covers up slightly, and cuddled closer to the Boy Wonder and fell fast asleep in his arms.
Beast Boy continully hit the punching bag as beads of sweat dripped from his face. He had changed into a pair of sweat-pants, and had left his shirt off. Raven sat near him reading a book and watching him, mostly watching him because he had taken his shirt off, as he finished up, he noticed Raven nodding off to sleep from under her book.
"You tired?" Beast Boy asked, as she fluttered her eyes from sleep. She nodded, and yawned, as she tried stand up to leave, but she couldn't find the strength to do it. Beast Boy chuckled, and walked over to Raven. He picked her up and carried her to her dark room. As he walked inside, and layed her on the bed she sat up slowly.
"Beast Boy...Thank you." He looked into her indigo eyes, and sat next to her.
"Your welcome, I'm sure we all will be able to find them..." Beast Boy was interupted by Raven's finger to his lips.
"No...For always being there, even when I was cruel to you...thank you." She smiled softly, and yawned once more. Beast Boy's eyes lit up, and he scooted closer to the Azerainien(sp). His arms wrapped around her waist, and she slid her arms up his bare chest. Their breath brushing against eachothers, and their noses touching. Both of their lips yerning for the others, as they leaned in closer. Closer than ever, they each shut their eyes, and...
Aquagirl15
01-18-2005, 08:17 AM
Ah man come on! Not another big cliffhanger! Haven't you torchured us enough?:crying: Well that probably tells you that I liked the chapter and if you do not write more soon I will be forced to take drastic measures!!! :mad: Very drastic indeed! :evil:
decka
01-18-2005, 04:51 PM
Oh that as such a cute chapter! The ending fit in so perfectaly! You love cliffhangers don't you? Oh please post soon!!!!!!:D :D
Star_Fire_Chick
01-18-2005, 05:19 PM
Ah man come on! Not another big cliffhanger! Haven't you torchured us enough?:crying: Well that probably tells you that I liked the chapter and if you do not write more soon I will be forced to take drastic measures!!! :mad: Very drastic indeed! :evil:Ya why such a huge cliffhanger!come on you must write more
Matt A
01-18-2005, 06:36 PM
Awww! That was so cute!:D !
A quick word of advice, though: don't read cute romantic stuff whilst listening to The Chemical Brothers. It kinda ruins the mood...:mad:
Pookey
01-22-2005, 11:24 AM
Guess what....I have another Ch. for you guys!!! And there is no cliffhanger at the end:( b/c I promised Star_Fire_Chick I wouldn't have one, just for her. And it was a hard promise to keep.
Ch. 17 'Dream On'
The sun peeked through the open curtains, and onto the slepping couple. Neither of them noticed, or seemed to care that morning was arriving, and so they slept on in the comfort of each others arms. Starfire's head moved up and down in beat with Robin's breathing, and somehow last night, their hands became interlocked with the others. The sun creeped its way onto Robin's pale face, causing him to stir in irritation. Star smiled from the quick movements of Robin's breathing, but continued to sleep. Robin's eyes flickered open, and he noticed that he was not on the floor. He moved his head to see where he was, and was going to sit up but he felt something on his chest that forbid him to. It was Starfire. Robin started to blush, but it soon faded away, when he stroked her glossy red hair with his right hand. Robin sighed with delight, and continued to stroke her hair, when he also noticed that their other hands were connected. Smiling madly, Robin fell back asleep, but not before he whispered "I love you Starfire."
"BB! Get your lazy butt up!" Cyborg was yelling down the halls, it was Beast Boy's turn to do the dishes and Cyborg couldn't get to his stash of meat if Beast Boy didn't do them. "Beast Boy, Get up, so you can do the dishes....NOW!" Cyborg continued to yell. Raven came out of her room and glared at the robot.
" What...do...you...want..." She asked while glaring at Cyborg, he took a step back and smiled.
"hehe...BB, have ya seen him?" Raven looked at him blankly.
"Yes Cyborg I have seen him," She answered matter-of-factly. Cyborg smiled, and waited an ansewer to where his green buddy was. "While I was sleeping, I saw Beast Boy walk down the hall to find you. I bet he's in the kitchen right now." Raven smirked, and emphesized sleeping. Cyborg frowned at Raven's smart remark, and walked off to the changling's room. Raven smiled and walked back into her room, to find a green sleeping kitten in the middle of her bed. She climbed back into bed, and cuddled next to the soft purring feline. Raven smiled warmly, and shut her eyes, with Beast Boy purring up a storm. The green kitten continued to sleep, while Raven stroked his fur remembering the events of last night.
As their breath brushing against each others, and their noses touching. Both of their lips yerning for the others, as they leaned in closer. Closer than ever, they each shut their eyes, and...They embraced in a heart warming kiss.
"Why me? Why would he choose me, even after Terra, he kissed ME." Raven whispered to no-one inpaticular, but she didn't know Beast Boy was listening to her.
"Raven..." Beast Boy asked as he strenched, and sat up in front of the blushing girl, now in human form.
"I'm sorry, did I wake you?" Raven blushed madely, but she didn't know why.
"No, I heard Cyborg yell down the hall for me...What does he want?" Raven giggled, and told him, after they just sat and talked about random things. After about 30 min. of chatting, Beast Boy drove the conversation a different direction, "I need to tell you something..." Beast Boy yawned and placed a hand on Raven's shoulder, "remember when you went into my mind..." Raven rememered that day...
"Hehe, um it's a funny story. I was in the cleaning closet, because...because...I, uhhhh" Beast boy started stutered.
"Beast Boy, please tell." Raven whispered in his ear, a shiver went down his back and he froze. Cyborg didn't hear what she said to teh changling, but he saw the reaction.
"What did you do to him?" Cyborg asked as he poked his green friend. Raven giggled, and stopped Cyborg.
"He'll sone tell us..." Raven smirked, and shut her eyes, Cyborg stood back as she chanted and went into his mind. In about 5 minutes Raven's eyes were wide.
"Yes...why?" Raven looked confused. Beast Boy smiled, and told her what he was really doing in the closet.
"I thought you were doing something else, not writing in a privet journal, I'm sorry Beast Boy. I didn't read anything...I swear." Raven reasuringly told the green teen.
"Thanks Rae...oopps, I meant..." Raven stopped him before he could finish.
"It's okay, I actually like that nick-name." She grinned. He blushed slightly, and stood up off of the bed.
"C'mon, lets go get some food, I'm starving." Raven laughed at Beast Boy, and they headed towards the kitchen, chatting away again.
Now that the sun shinned brightly into the room, Star woke up slowly to greet the day. She let out a gentle yawn and glanced up at Robin. He was still sleeping, and had a small smile on his face. Star sighed happily and cuddled closer to the crook of his neck. She layed there still, listening to his rhythmic breathing, she took her free arm and wrapped it over his strong, broad chest. After about 15 min. of watching Robin peacefully sleep, the Boy Wonder began to stir from his slumber.
"Did you sleep efficently?" Star asked the waking teen.
"Better that I have ever slept before." He smiled and pulled her closer.
"I am overjoyed to hear that, but may I ask...why were you in sleeping on my floor in the first place?" She nugged closer, while avoiding his gaze.
"I don't know Star...I got up last night and was heading for the roof, but passed your room. Something told me to check up on you, I am sorry if I woke you up." He stroked her orange cheek.
"You did not wake me Robin. I had that dream again, that is when I noticed you on the ground." She frowned at the memory of the dream. Robin hugged her close, and they sat in the comforting silence. Star sat up and brought her knees to her chin after a while, and Robin flowed suit, but hugged her from behind.
"What's wrong Starfire?" Robin asked with concern.
"That dream, it reallly scared me, but when I saw you," She smiled softly, "my fear vanished as soon as it came." Star looked into his opaque mask, he leaned down and kissed her cheek.
"Do you want to talk about it?" Robin sat in front of Star now, she nodded yes, and began to tell her dream from the begining to him.
The sky was an eerie black, and there were no stars out. All the Titans were gathered around a open man-hole.
"All right team, Raven, Beast Boy,and Cyborg you guys guard the synothium...Star, I have some special instructions for you. TITANS GO!" Robin barked his orders, and the others left, leaving Starfire and Robin alone.
"You wanted to tell me someting important Robin?" Star asked hesintenly. It was Red-X, and he sent Robin a message that he was after two things, and two things only.
1- Some synothium
2- Starfire
Robin was furious when he heard Red-X was after Starfire, his Starfire, and Robin was going to see to it that Red-X was going to be stopped, and Robin knew where Red-X was hiding, so he sent the others to guard the synothium, leaving Red-X to himself.
"Star, I want you to go home, and make sure you lock your door, okay?" Robin turned to face her.
"But Robin...We have to find the Red-X?" Star asked confused. Robin pulled her close and kissed her lips quickly.
"Trust me Star." Robin erged her to go now. Star took in a deep breath, and built up enough corage to speak.
"No Robin, I...I can not just go home." Star said, and she saw a black figure fly across the road. Robin knew she wasn't going to leave, and he saw her expression suddenly change, he turned around to be met with nothing there.
"What is it Star?" He looked around, and was sunnenly pushed into the man-hole.
"ROBIN!" Star jumped in after him, and found him already in battle position.
"Star go, you need to leave." Robin whispered to Star. Red X was no where to be found.
"No, I can not leave you alone to fight." Star looked around the sewer and saw a shadow coming towards them. Star was about to warn Robin, but suddenly she froze, she couldn't fly, use her powers, or call for help. The only thing she could do was watch in terror as the battle began.
Red X kicked Robin, and sent him flying. Robin quickly got up and saw him. "I see my shopping list is complete." Red X smoothly stated.
"How'd you get the synothium!" Robin yelled.
"You think your pitiful team could stop me? Please, I know each of their weeknesses, so I defeated them in a matter of minuetes." Red X was acting as if the conversation could take place on a Sunday morning after church, which made Robin enraged.
"You'll never have her, she would never love you." Robin hissed, so only Red X could hear. Red X chuckled and threw another punch, Robin side-stepped it, and the battle began.
They were evenly matched, blow for blow, kick for kick, and all Starfire could do was watch in stunned fear. Each of the boys fought harder and harder, making thier attacks more powerful. The fear Starfire had turned into horror, when Red X yelled out her name, causing an open shot to Robin. Robin flew to the other side and hit the wall, he fell into unconsiousness.
"I always knew you had some sort of weekness, and now she's mine." Red X walked over to the now waking Robin. Robin was on his knees, and coughing up some blood.
"You will never have her." Robin whispered as he stood up, Red X shoved him against the wall, holding him there off of his feet. Robin struggled to get out if his grip, but was too weak from the fight.
"I'm guessing I won't be able to get her until your dead hmm?" Red X paused and watched Robin glare at him, before Robin could answer though he went on, "Well, if that's the case then," Red X took out a simple gun and put it to Robin's head, "Good Bye old foe, have a nice after life, I'm sure to have a good life here." Red X put his finger on the trigger.
"Starfire," Robin yelled, as Red X got closer. It seemed like this was happening in slow motion, as Starfire began to shake.
"I" His finger was on the trigger.
"Love" Pressure was on the trigger.
"You!" Red X pulled the trigger, and Robin fell to the ground.
"That is when I wake up, I can't bear to see what comes next Robin..." Star began to cry on Robin's chest, and he hugged her close.
"It's okay Starfire, I'm right here. Everything's going to be alright." Robin comforted Star, as her crying turned into light hiccups. Star looked up at Robin, he smiled warmly and kissed her softly. It wasn't a long kiss, just a short, loving kiss.
"Thank you Robin, thank you." He nodded his head, and they stayed in eachother's arms until both of their stomachs growled from hunger.
Matt A
01-22-2005, 11:36 AM
Romantic, funny and creepy, all in one single serving! Well done!:D!
Star_Fire_Chick
01-22-2005, 02:23 PM
aww i loved it great job
Aquagirl15
01-22-2005, 03:38 PM
So sweet. But I wanna know what happened to Robin in Star's dream. I can understand her not wanting to sleep through the rest but I'm wondering... :shrug: You like leaving cliffhangers don't you? :crying: Thanks to Star_Fire_Chick for making her not have a cliffhanger! :D
starfire0639
01-23-2005, 02:10 PM
wow pooky your chapter rocked no flaw of any sort write more soon!
decka
01-23-2005, 02:32 PM
That is soooooo cute!!! I luved that chapter oh so very much! Just so much fluff!:D
Crowgirl
01-23-2005, 04:28 PM
There's really nothing else to say. Nothing at all.....
CG
P.S. Decka, you haven't heard of Bravo! On With The Show, have ya?
Pookey
01-25-2005, 06:55 AM
Thank you guys, I really appreciate the feedback, but i have some bad news. I'm 'grounded' from the computer for a while, and you may have to wait for the next ch. It's getting really diffucult to write right now b/c of school and cheer and lods of other crap right now. I hope to get you guys a ch out soon. Again, since im 'grounded' i have to sneek on in the mornings and when my paernts leave, im really sorry. You all can blame my sister for all of it.
Aquagirl15So sweet. But I wanna know what happened to Robin in Star's dream. I can understand her not wanting to sleep through the rest but I'm wondering... :shrug: You like leaving cliffhangers don't you? :crying: Thanks to Star_Fire_Chick for making her not have a cliffhanger! :D
At the end of the dream Robin got shot and he died.
I LOVE giving cliffhangers, so be prepared for another one coming up. MUWAHAHAHA!!!!:evil:
Matt A
01-25-2005, 06:27 PM
In that case, we'll see you when we next see you. Try not to suffer too much cold turkey!
Oh, and cliffhangers are cool, but only to write...:evil:
Crowgirl
01-25-2005, 07:10 PM
At the end of the dream Robin got shot and he died.
Noo!!!!!!!!!! :p
Oh well, I hope your grounding goes okay, or as well as it can go. My best wishes.
TheOnlyWayOut
01-28-2005, 10:56 PM
Hello Pookey! Tis meh. I am here to demand your ungrounding. :evil: Be ungrounded at once!
Pookey
02-03-2005, 12:04 PM
Im slowing working on the ungrounding thing. Im at school so srry!:sad:
new ch is in construction right now! Tommorow ill be free!! YEAH!!
rrarbecy
02-03-2005, 01:38 PM
WARNING! I'M ABOUT TO ADMIT SOMETHING!!
I have not been reading this. :eek: Yes I know. But now that I see Robin and Starfire are actually TOGETHER (YAY) I have to read it. Get back to you in...20 minutes.
rrarbecy
02-03-2005, 05:22 PM
Okay. I need to say something. THIS IS MY DREAM STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beast Boy and Raven together, Robin and Starfire together...OH IT'S JUST SO AWESOME!!!!! The idea of the charm necklace was genius. Pure genius.
I have something else to say. YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF CLIFFHANGERS! Oh so many...it hurts my head.
Finally, the dream. Oh, what a dream. The kind of dream that makes your skin crawl.
Okay, one more. "How do I always seem to end up on top?" The chapter in which Robin said that was great. The playful banter, smart remarks. Just perfect.
Robin and Starfire and Beast Boy and Raven are, to me, perfect couples. Rock on Pookey. Rock on.
DJ:cool:
E-A-G-L-E-S EAGLES!!!!!!
Pookey
02-05-2005, 03:57 PM
Thank you guys so much for waiting I love you all...don't take that the wrong way...I really missed you guys!!
This is a dream fic? sweeeeet! I love all this feed back from you guys!
I am the Queen of Cliffy's...BOW TO ME!!!! jk, no cliffy in this ch, i couldn't really fit one in it, but this ch is the funniest one to me!!!! I laughed so hard when i rechecked it....Im just dumb like that though:anime:
ROCK ON!! okay, i don't think you want to hear me so here's the ch. love ya guys!!
Ch. 18 "More Fun and Tears"
Everyone was now sitting in the living room eating their own breakfast. Raven was drinking herbal tea and was eating some toast after much begging from the changeling. Cyborg was devouring some real eggs and bacon, while BB was stuffing his face with tofu. Robin and Starfire were both finishing up some cereal and were about to head out the door, until the computer alerted that they had an incoming message.
"Aww man and I was going to play my new video game." Beast Boy wined as the others went to the screen.
"Calm down, you can play as soon as we find out what the message is." Cyborg rolled his eyes.
"Oh yeah, I knew that." Beast Boy smiled as the others rolled their eyes. Robin got to the screen first and started typing on the keyboard. Starfire was right beside him watching his quick typing skills. Raven picked up a book on the coffee table and began to read while Cyborg and Beast Boy went at it about some stupid conversation.
"So what’s the message?" Raven asked after about five minutes of listening to the racket in the back that was begging to grow.
"I don’t know, but it’s for Cy?" Robin turned facing the miniature battle between the boys.
"Me? Who’s it from?" Cyborg asked while continuing his fight.
"It says it’s from the Titans East, but that’s all." Robin walked over and broke up the fight with the help from a ticked off Raven.
"Okay, let us see what they want from the best." Robin and Raven rolled their eyes, "Okay, I know it was cheesy, but not as bad as what greenie over there says most of the time." Cyborg turned around and pressed play on the message before Beast Boy could retaliate a comment back.
Cyborg,
Just wanted to say hi, and see if you could help me repair some parts in the new Tower. Speedy can’t repair anything for his life and Aqualad refuses to go near it because he got electrocuted the last time, and I don’t even want to begin on Mas and Menos. Could you please come check it out?
–Bumblebee-
"Looks like I’m off on another road trip." Cyborg smiled wide.
"I guess so, but how long are you gonna stay? What if…" Robin was interrupted by Beast Boy yelling.
"You can’t go! Who’s gonna play me at video games! They all cheat somehow!!" Cyborg smiled wide and leaned down to BB’s level
"Oh well, While you’re here playing Gamestatoin, I’ll be playing Gamestatoin 2." Cyborg said cunningly, Beast Boy fainted onto the floor while Robin just shook his head.
"Do you ever think of anything besides viseo games?" Robin asked while walking to put his robotic friend.
"Yesh..." Cyborg looked around.
"Like?" Raven joined the conversation.
"um....My car, fighting, food, thrashing Beast Boy, and...my car." Cyborg started listing other things.
"You said your car twice, you must really love your baby alot." Raven said causing Robin and Beast Boy to burst in a fit of giggles and Star to smile trying not to laugh. Cyborg just blushed and walked out the door.
"I'm gonna leave now before I'm even more humiliated." And with that Cyborg headed for the garage and was off to the Titans East.
"Oh Raven, that was good." Beast Boy stood up from laughing on the floor.
"I have to agree with him, that was good." Robin settled down from his fit.
"I hope we did not hurt his feelings." Star tried to reason with the boys, but nothing, they giggled some more.
"C'mon Star lets leave the boys at home and go somewhere together?" Raven whispered to Starfire, Star smiled with delight.
"Really? That would be tremendous!" Star stated with glee, both Raven and Starfire left the boys who were on their way to the gamestaion.
"I have an idea!" Beast Boy yelled after being beaten by Robin for the past hour.
"Uh, does it consist of water ballons, the girls, and a whole bunch of usless trap that won't work?" Robin questioned with a smirk.
"NO....well it did, but let's check up on Cy secretly. I know for a fact that he talks to himself on trips." Beast Boy smiled evilly, Robin did as well and began to work on the computer.
"Let's see what our good friend is doing...you just have to be quiet for a few minutes while I work on this...all right?" Robin stared down Beast Boy.
"Okay, okay, it will definitly be worth it!" Beast Boy laughed miniacally. Robin rolled his eyes and began typing on the computer, after about three minutes Robin smiled wide and pressed a blue button on the keyboard.
"Let the spying begin." Robin and Beast Boy stood in front of the screen watching and listening to their 'best' friend, Cyborg.
Meanwhile, Raven and Starfire went to the mall and had bought a few outfits and had lunch in the food court, on their way home they noticed that thier communticators rang and then suddnenly shut off.
"Uh, I think we may need to get these fixed?" Raven picked hers up and examined them.
"I do not think so," Starfire smilled and began to giggle, "I believe Robin is doing the spying on the computer."
"How do you know that?" Raven raised an eyebrow.
"If memory serves me right Robin did this once before on Beast Boy." Starfire began to giggle on the flashback.
"What happened? Did he do that to anyone else?" Raven asked fearing Robin did it to her too.
"He did not do this to anyone else, I made him promise he would not." Starfire reasured Raven.
"Why would Robin spy on Beast Boy? He's Beast Boy." Raven asked confused.
"I believe it was just recent he did it. After Beast Boy pushed Robin into the jacuzzi he began to spy on him, I caught him in the control room, and made him promise not to do it again." Star started to giggle again.
"As long as he doesn't do it to me I won't kill him." Raven smiled at Starfire. "Let's see who the Boy Wonder is checking up on?"
"Oh let us, I will make sure Robin finds out that I know all about his slip up when we are done." Starfire and Raven laughed all the way home.
"Beast Boy this is gold. We could so blackmail him for this!" Robin laughed evilly at his idea.
"Check this out, turn the volume up!" Beast Boy turned the volume up, and pressed record. Now the hybrid robot was being recorded for Robin and Beast Boy's entertainment.
"When there's trouble you know what to dooooooo...CALL CYBORG!" Cyborg began to sing his 'theme song' he made up from the last trip to the Titans East, which made both boys to fall over onto the floor in tears.
"He can shoot a rocket from his shooooeeee...'CAUSE HE'S CYBORG!" Robin and Beast Boy were clutching their sides in pain as they continued to howl in laughter.
"do do da da yeah something like that...OH YEAH!
yeah yeah doo big fluffy cat...THAT'S RIGHT!" Cyborg continued to sing, and you would think that Robin and Beast Boy would go into a coma toghether, that was how hard they were laughing. Raven and Stafire watched with amusment at the 'dying' boys.
"You think we should help them, I do not think they are breathing." Starfire giggled at Robin, who was rolling on the floor. His cape was wrapped around him, and his belt had come undone and was laying a few feet away from the boy.
"I don't know, they were spying on Cyborg, I think they kinda deserved it." Raven watched and started laughing at Beast Boy. He was on his hands and knees pounding the floor in tears laughing, then he fell over clutching his sides again luaghing.
"Do you think we should record this for future reference?" Star implied. Raven showed Starfire the video camera she was holding the whole time.
"Way ahead of you Starfire, way ahead of you." Raven smrked, they both snickered and continued to watch the boys roll on the floor.
Aquagirl15
02-05-2005, 04:13 PM
That was funny. I have also read over my chapters and think, wow this is funny. But anyway I'm glad that you're back Pookey. It's been kinda lonely without this fic, I mean it always seems to makeme laugh or feel really good. :D
Crowgirl
02-05-2005, 06:59 PM
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!
What? It was funny.
That was really good, I enjoyed it a lot. I like how you're going to tie in Titans East, since it turns out we're not going to be seeing much of them this season. Oh well. Can't wait for more!
Ciao,
CG
Matt A
02-05-2005, 07:53 PM
Yep. Comic gold at it's finest.
decka
02-06-2005, 04:43 PM
HAhaha!!!! That was a great chapter! I LUVED it!!!:D
Pookey
02-10-2005, 05:40 AM
Im glad you like it...This is a short ch, but i like the length to it! love ya guys!:anime:
Ch. 19 'I'm in trouble'
The Titans sat at the dinner table in the Tower. Robin was sitting next to Starfire and had his arm looped around her waist.
"What did you girls do all day?" Robin asked, both of the girls were unusually quiet and occasionally would snicker when they looked up at each other.
"We did the 'hanging out' all day, what may I ask did you boys do." Starfire held back her fit of giggles when she responded, Raven was under her hood trying to quit snickering.
"We played some video games, and Robin trained." Beast Boy stared at the girls trying to figure out what was the matter. Both Robin and Beast Boy swore that they would lie to the girls about spying on Cyborg, but Robin didn't want to stoop down to that level. He hated lying to Starfire, so he made sure Beast Boy would talk when it came to that.
"I see...by chance...did you talk to Cyborg at all?" Raven muttered in between her laughing, by then the girls couldn't take it any more and they fell to the ground laughing. The boys stared at them scared and worried.
"What is going on?!" Robin cracked after watching his girlfriend fall into hestarics with out a purpose he knew of. Raven sat up, still laughing and pulled out a tabe from inside her cloak.
"Must....watch...." She fell back down laughing with Starfire. Beast Boy took the tape and looked at it with curiosity.
"Sweet...Robin we need to check this out." As soon as Beast Boy said that, the girls howled with laughter. Robin and Beast Boy watched the girls slowly stand up, but having difficulty doing so. They managed to stand and Raven took back their tape.
"Oh you'll 'check it out' all right." Raven wipped her eyes from tears as Starfire flew to the copmuter with the tape Raven threw to her. Star put the tape into the VCR that they had from awhile back.
"So that's how you use that thing. I never could figure that out." Beast Boy said in a serious tone, which sent everyone into of fit of laughter.
"You never knew how to use the VCR?" Robin asked the confused teen.
"No....I always used the DVD player." Beast Boy looked around, Robin rolled his eyes and went up to Starfire who was turning the TV on at the moment.
"So...what's this video about?" He asked whispering in her ear. Shivers went up her back, and she turned to face him, she had on an evil smirk.
"You shall see Robin." Starfire had a gleam in her eyes, that caused Robin to shiver as she talked. Star grabed Robin's hand and led him to the couch, Raven did the same with Beast Boy. The boys sat down on the couch while the girls sat on the floor in front of their boy. Raven held up the remote about to press play, the girls looked at each other with evil smiles, they turned back to the TV and Raven pressed play.
The screen was black at first, but you could hear the laughter of boys and the singing of another one. Robin and Beast Boy echanged worried glances, and looked at the smirking girls.
"Ut oh"
Cyborg knocked on the door to the Tower. He heard nothing so he tried again, but this time the door opened to reveal a greased up Bummblebee.
"Hey Sparky, about time you showed up." Bummblebee smiled wide and led cyborg into the main room.
"What's up Bee? You said you needed help on something?" Cyborg looked over at the girl, she was smilng wide, covered in grease, but still kept her radaint charm.
"Yeah, I'll show you it tomorrow, you could use a rest after the drive here. C'mon I'll show you to your room." Bummblebee flew in the air and downthe hall, Cyborg smirked and followed her. Not yet knowing that very soon he would get o know that girl and see her in a different piont of view.
Aquagirl15
02-10-2005, 08:26 AM
Ah man you give us a short chapter with a cliffhanger!! WHY? Why do you like watching us suffer? Jk... awesome chap. I want to know what happens to Cyborg, what was that all about? Hmmm we will just have to wait until you decide to provide us with a new chapter. Hurry! Please...:crying: :D
rrarbecy
02-10-2005, 01:54 PM
That last sentence doesn't mean what I think it means, does it?
Matt A
02-10-2005, 06:52 PM
It probably isn't something rude and filthy.;) :p :evil: :sweat:
Yes, I have to agree with Aquagirl: why leave us with such evil cliffhangers?! Especially when the end chapters as good as that one!!!!!:mad: :anime:
Aquagirl15
02-10-2005, 06:55 PM
That last sentence doesn't mean what I think it means, does it?
Can you think of something other than things like that?
Matt A
02-10-2005, 07:17 PM
My point exactly.:p
Star_Fire_Chick
02-12-2005, 03:24 PM
-waits- Fizzy i am still waiting hope you write more very soon!
Pookey
02-13-2005, 02:10 PM
Blizzy, I'm srry I'm making you wait...I SHALL WORK HARDER ON IT!!*salutes
No, the last sentence ISN'T perverted...I didn't relize it sounded like that until you guys pointed it out.Im srry, what I mean is that Cyborg is goint to end up falling in love with Bumblebee, but right now their just friends.
you guys know me, I love giving out cliffys. You should have learned that. I'll TRY and not put TOO big of a cliffy in the next ch. I'll try...:evil:
Aquagirl15
02-13-2005, 02:16 PM
Well that's DJ for you. Wait NO!! CLIFFHANGERS?!?!?! IT BURNS!!! :eek: Jk... I'm just gonna stop being weird now. Which is actually impossible but uh anyway. As normal as I can be. New chapter soon or else... :evil:
rrarbecy
02-13-2005, 03:46 PM
Well, at least I'm recognized for something.
Fizzy and Blizzy? Ha, that's priceless.
Star_Fire_Chick
02-14-2005, 09:01 PM
Fizzy and Blizzy and Mizzy and Dizzy that is our business!:D lol you must write more and i loved something like that great job!
Pookey
02-14-2005, 09:12 PM
Aquagirl15Well that's DJ for you. Wait NO!! CLIFFHANGERS?!?!?! IT BURNS!!! :eek: Jk... I'm just gonna stop being weird now. Which is actually impossible but uh anyway. As normal as I can be. New chapter soon or else... :evil:
Don't stop being weird...being weird is fun! And being normal is overrated anyways...:D
GUESS WHAT I GOT!!!! A NEW CH....brought to you by out sponsers, the.......who's my sponser again?? *talks to sponser ppl...Oh well, here's a new chapter for you guys from me!!
Ch. 20 'Compromise from Love's Point of View'
The girls of Titan's Tower were rolling on the floor laughing, the boys were sitting on the couch with scared looks like they were about to die.
"Oh Raven, that was most amusing was it not?" Starfire breath out after laughing up a storm. She stood up and fixed her outfit that had wrinkled up from all the laughter.
"It was the funniest thing I have ever seen, and I usually hate comedy." Raven panted, she was now leaning against the couch trying to catch her breath, all the while Robin and Beast Boy were nevrvously awaiting the girls to notice them. Starfire sat down next to Robin and smiled wide.
"Did you not enjoy our video Robin? It was most enjoyable." Starfire plainly stated, causing Robin to gulp. He didn't respond, but started to sweat knowing that they were in for something.
"Yes Beast Boy, I'm sure you liked it. You love comedy." Raven looked up at Beast Boy, who was turning pale.
"Raven? What was your favortie part out of the tape?" Star asked, Robin was about to stand up and try to leave quickly, but Star put her hand on his shoulder and pushed him gently back down on the couch. "Not so fast. We have something in mind for you, now please continue Raven." Star smirked and leaned back on the couch with an arm around Robin so he would not leave.
"My favortie part? Hmm..." Raven pondered the thought while she stood up and sat next to Beast Boy on the couch, making sure he wouldn't leave either, "I would say was when..." Raven was interupted when the screen turned on showing Cyborg. His face was smeared with grease.
"Hey guys what's up?" Cyborg asked cheerful, he looked at Robin and Beast Boy with curiosity.
"Hello Cyborg. How was your trip to the Titans East dear friend?" Starfire spoke up first, Robin and Beast Boy's faces eased a bit, but they were pretty nervous still.
"It was okay, I'm letting you guys know that I'll be staying in Steel City for awhile. I'm not sure how long, but I'll let you know as soon as I find out. The Tower got pretty banged up, and it may take awhile to fix it." Cyborg informed the team, still looking at the boys.
"Well, I hope everything turns out okay." Raven noticed Cyborg was staring at the boys, and she smirked towards Star. "Hey Star, should we tell him?" Raven whispered, Star looked to the nervous boys who were shaking their heads 'no' like mad men.
"No, I think we have 'embaressed' them enough for one day, but we will inform him soon about our findings." Star whispered back looking into Robin's mask. Robin relaxed a bit, and sank into the couch some. Raven nodded her head in agrement, and looked back at Cyborg, who was tilting his head to the side in confusion.
"Did I miss something, or have y'all done something to the guys I missed." Cyborg asked, hoping for some answers why his friends were acting nervous.
"Nothing is wrong Cyborg, the boys are just...shocked because we beat the high score in one of their viseo games." Raven lied, Cyborg's eyes bugged out of his head.
"How did you....but that's....I was...HOW!?" Cyborg about fainted. The girls giggled.
"Yeah, we had most fun 'kicking the butt'" Star informed with a smile. Just then the alarm rang through out the Tower, but it was from the Titan East.
"Got to go guys, I'll call back soon." Cyborg shut the screen off leaving the gilrs to deal with the boys.
"What's up Sparky?" Bumblebee flew into the living room of the newly rebuilt Tower. The Tower was still a bit messed up, but Bummblebee begged Cyborg to stay for awhile, and Cyborg couldn't resist. He was going to stay until the Tower was completly fixed and after a good vacation.
"It looks to be some sort of robbery in the city, but I can't find out who it is." Cyborg was typing on the computer when Mas and Menos ran into the room.
¡Señor Cyborg!" Both of the Spanish boys yelled surprised, Cyborg smiled at the small boys.
"I'm guessing that no-one knew I was coming here." Cy smked towards Bummblebee.
"Nope, I thought I told everyone, but do you think a bunch of guys listen during dinner?" Bummblebee answered with a hint of annoyence towards the team. Cyborg laughed and went back to the computer. Then Aqualad and Speedy ran in.
"Dude, Cyborg, what are you doing here? I didn't know you were coming." Speedy walked over giving Cyborg a high five, Bummblebee just smacked her head in frustration.
"You see what I deal with?" She rolled her eyes, and finished with the computer while everyone was welcoming Cyborg.
"It's good to see you again Cyborg. I just wished we knew you were coming sooner, then we would have had a party." Aqualad greeted Cyborg, while sending a smirk towards their leader. Bummblebee repeadily hit her head on the keyboard.
"Why don't we stop whoever's messin' with your city?" Cyborg mainly informed than asked. The boys nodded their heads in approval and ran to the garage, while Bummblebee looked up and smirked.
"Thanks, I'm gonna need your help with this bunch for awhile." She thanked Cyborg while flying towards the exit.
"That's another reason why I came." He replied, and ran to the door behind the leader off to fight some wacked out crimminal.
"Raven, what are we to do with these two?" Starfire asked while smirking, she already knew the answer of course. Both of the girls planned what they were going to do to the boys, and when.
"I'm not sure Starfire. What if we..." Raven winked at Star and 'acted' like she told her through her mind.
"Oh, that is most genious Raven. Shall we procced now or wait until later to carry out our plan?" Star smiled wide as she looked at the look on Robin's face. He was morrtified, and Beast Boy had long since fainted.
"I think we should do it later, just to keep these two guessing." Raven whispered, and stood up making the fainted Beast Boy fall over on the couch.
"Yes we should, would you like to go to your room to discuss this in more depth?" Star stood up, Robin went stiff. "Relax Robin, You not in too much trouble." Starfire whispered in his ear, and kissed his lips softly, then following Raven her room leaving an uncounsious Beast Boy, and a still petrified Robin alone to ponder what will become of them in the near future.
Star_Fire_Chick
02-15-2005, 05:08 PM
teehee that is cute!
Matt A
02-15-2005, 06:48 PM
Comedic genius yet again! Dude!:D :D :D :D :D
Aquagirl15
02-15-2005, 08:52 PM
That was really funny. You were born with comical talent. (meaning you're good at be comical. :sweat: )
Pookey
02-21-2005, 09:45 AM
Hey guys, I have a new ch for you! Aren't you happy? I sure am b/c I have a special surprise for you at the end of it...Im srry its so short, I have writers block up to my neck and...yeah...can someone kill it for me? I think i have the next ch almost done but its still short so ill keep working on it, but im giving this to you now...love ya guys!
To ansewer your question Welshie's Mate, Im not really sure when this story is going to end...Im having so much fun writing it that i never really thought about that...I guess when ever I get bored of this story and begin writing my next one, I already have an idea for it...plus I have no clue how to end this?
Ch. 21 'Battles Not Meant To Fight'
Cyborg and the rest of the Titans East ran off to a robbery in the cold city.
"This is nothing compared to Jump City. Where's the pizza place?" Cyborg asked as he stepped out of his T-car.
"¡El lugar de la pizza está en la frente la bahía, enfrente de la torre mohosa grande, y el derecho localizado debajo de un se gasta la choza!" Mas excitidly yelled to Cyborg, the robot just nodded his head like he understood, but look at Aqualad to translate.
"He said...could you repeat that? I didn't get it all." Aqualad looked at the small boy, Mas smaked his head while Menos luaghed at his brother.
"¿Por qué hermano hace hablamos aún a estas cabezas de alfiler? ¿Por qué? Ellos no nos pueden entender, nosotros los podríamos llamar nada nosotros queremos y ellos no tendrían un indicio al lo que dijimos." Mas looked towards his brother for answers, and an evil smile came across his face. Menos laughed again, and shook his head.
"Porque ellos son nuestros amigos, además, yo ya llamo ellos denominan a su cara." Menos anwsered his brother, while the two brothers were talking the rest of the team stared at them with confused faces, not catching a word except Aqualad, he knew a little bit of spanish, but not very much. Everyone looked to Aqualad for some answers but he had squat.
"Their talking to fast, I can't understand them." Aqualad shrugged.
"Let's just get this robbery taken care of and then we can show Cyborg where the pizza place is. I'm getting a headache." Speedy spoke up and headed towards the robbery hoping to get away from the rackit the two spanish boys were making. Bummblebee shot Aqualad a look, hoping he wouldn't say anything to Speedy, but it didn't work.
"What? To much thinking for the pretty boy?" Aqualad said, Bummblebee moaned and watched as Speedy and Aqualad fought. Cyborg had long since walked into the robbery scene and was now walking out with the suspect.
Robin sat in the same position on the couch for an hour, Beast Boy was starting to drool onto the couch. Robin slowly turned his head towards the hallway door and saw nothing.
"Beast Boy...Beast Boy....Beeeeaaassst Boy..." Robin whispered, but the green teen was out cold. Robin slowly stood up and began walking to his room, he tip-toed out of the living room and down the hall. Looking back every five seconds, he slowly made it to Starfire's door.
"Just be very quiet Robin, you can do this, Starfire would never kill you...but Raven could" Robin whispered to himself, Robin had never been so scared in his life, he knew both of the girls could do something to them, and not knowing what it was, was even worse. Robin began walking faster, when all of a sudden he saw a shadow start walking towards him, then two shadows.
"Oh God, Oh God, Oh God" Robin began repeading, then he heard Starfire's voice.
"That was most enjoyable Raven, we should..." Star was interupted by Raven.
"Shish....I sense someone is near." Raven smirked, but Robin only heard her voice, he began to panic. Quickly and quietly so no-one saw, he went into Starfire's room hoping to hide, but he didn't figure that the girls were heading to that same room, to plan their first attack.
Again, srry its soooo short, but I hoped you liked it...i sure did
rrarbecy
02-21-2005, 12:11 PM
I can't help but wonder just what the girls have in store for the guys. Can't wait for more.
Aquagirl15
02-21-2005, 12:17 PM
Hmm I wonder what Raven and Star will do to Robin when they find him. Do you know Spanish or did you use a translator? I also wonder what Mas Y Menos were talking about.
Pookey
02-21-2005, 12:49 PM
I cant speak spanish, i can't even speak the language im learing in school...I used freetranslation.com go there and you can read what their saying
Matt A
02-21-2005, 06:39 PM
Yep, that was cool. I haven't seen either of the "Titans East" episodes (surprise, surprise...;) ), but I still got an excellent sense of what those guys were about. Plus it's nice to see Robin being terrified for once.:evil:
Sadly, I don't have any ideas for how to end this either.:crying: :sweat: :shrug:
TerraWHRobin4
02-24-2005, 12:17 PM
ya pookey! that was great! i can't wait for the next chapter!
RavenofAzerath~
02-24-2005, 03:14 PM
Ok, first, i have seen evry teen titans episode and i ahve to say this *breathes in deeply*i do not like the Raven/Beast Boy thing u got going here:sad: , i will, however, make a different solution:
1) the teen titans bring back terra
2)Beast Boy is split between the 2
3) Raven accepts that she and him cant be together
4)Terra goes with the titans east cause their 1 member short
5)Raven can control her powers better by accepting Terra and Beast Boys relationship
If you totally hate this idea, just tell me, but i've read most of the original Teen Titans comics and all of Ravens love interists alays end up amiss.
Matt A
02-24-2005, 06:20 PM
Why not post them? I'd read them.Same here!:D :D :D
i will, however, make a different solution:
1) the teen titans bring back terra
2)Beast Boy is split between the 2
3) Raven accepts that she and him cant be together
4)Terra goes with the titans east cause their 1 member short
5)Raven can control her powers better by accepting Terra and Beast Boys relationship
That's not too bad an idea. If you could write it well enough, it could just about work. Besides, an Reven/Terra re-match would be just so cool.:anime: :anime: :anime:
all of Ravens love interists alays end up amiss.
Go check Dwyr Budr for a classic example. But, then again, maybe Michael Spicer was a little wrong in the head anyways.:shrug:
Sorry for the shameless plug.:sweat:
Ta,
Matt
RavenofAzerath~
02-24-2005, 06:25 PM
Well, itz kinda an introduction to another story character and i mad it so there are periods of time where she is gone and the other titans can just be five again:sweat: And i found this funky stupid way that you would expect to see in a cartoon to bring terra back, once pookey says itz ok to post a different chapter, i'll go ahead if you want to hear it!1:o :evil: :D :anime:
My word as of this moment: Archipellago!!:D :D :evil: :anime: :) ;) :p :sweat: :shrug: :o :D
Pookey
02-25-2005, 05:02 PM
umm..ok? ANYWAY..heres another short ch..i hate it b/c i have writers block bad and idk where to go w/ the fic right now...BUT i do have a slight idea for a few chs in the future, so until im out of this god awful writers block bare with me for awhile! love yas!
Ch. 21 'Why Me?'
After Robin slipped into Starfire's room, he leaned against the door and looked around the room. It was still the same from last time he was in there except he noticed a starange envelope sitting on top of her pillow.
"Now what could that be? NO, Robin, you're in enough trouble already, so why don't we.." Robin stopped talking to himself when he heard the faint conversation outside the door he was leaning against.
"If we work out the details more, then I think we can get them to..." Robin didn't hear the last bit of information because he ran and was now hiding in Starfire's closet. The door opened and Raven and Starfire stepped into the room.
"What are we to do about them Raven? They have gotten themselves into quiet a mess." Starfire said with a worried tone, Robin sunk deeper into her closet hoping Raven didn't sense him in the room.
"I'm not sure Star, but you do know we have to something to them." Raven sounded just as worried as Starfire, but it was still held back, Robin could tell. The girls continued to talk not knowing Robin was listening to their entire conversation. Robin ended up finding out that they were secretly going to them to a dance club on Friday, it was mainly Starfire's idea, but Raven was surprisingly wanting to go.
"Are you sure Robin and Beast Boy will go?" Robin heard Starfire's vioce getting closer to the closet, he started sweating.
"Yeah, they'll go...I know Robin will when you show him that new outfit you got." Raven's voice was further back, and Robin knew he was screwed then. The door to the closet slowly opened as Robin pushed himself futher and futher back into the closet. Then the door opened letting in much needed light as Starfire reached into the closet, right in front of Robin's hiden face...
Cyborg walked out from the robbery scene with the culprit and started smirking.
"Hey Speddy, why don't you take this guy to jail and meet us back at the pizza place." Cyborg broke up the 'argument' between him and Aqualad. After Speedy agreed and left with the guy, Cyborg turned towards Bummblebee, she mouthed 'Thank you' and went inside the bank to make sure everything was okay. Cyborg nodded his head and watched Bummblebee walk inside the bank, not knowing the others were staring at him.
"Uh Cyborg...Senor Cyborg..." Mas poked the hybrid robot with a near by stick. Menos, who was sitting on Mas' shoulders, was muttering something to his brother. After a few minutes of watching Cyborg get poked by the stick, Aqualad stopped the short boy and led them away from Cyborg and started whispering something in their ears, causing huge smiles to appear on their faces.
Beast Boy woke up in a puddle of drool by Robin shoving his shoulders to wake him up.
"Dude..what time is it?...and why am I wet?...ewwww" Beast Boy shivered as he sat up and wiped the drool from his shirt and face off.
"Beast Boy, I think we need take the girls out to make up..." Robin said with confindence knowing Beast Boy wanted to take Raven out to that new restarunt in the city.
"SURE..I mean, that sounds good, when should take them out?" Beast Boy shot up off of the couch, but then sat qiuckly back down knowing Robin was starring at him.
"Why not tommorow night..I'm kinda busy tonight because.." Robin paused and saw Starfire smirk behind Beast Boy..."I'm a little busy tonight."
"That sounds cool, what cha doing anyway?" Beast Boy raised an eyebrow and saw Robin was starting to get quieter.
"I'm just gonna be working tonght thats all." Robin got up and began walking down the hall, leaving Beast Boy confused. Beast Boy eventually got up and made his way to the kitchen. When he went to open the fridge Raven stopped him.
"Beast Boy, I think we need to chat." And with that, Raven teloported Beast Boy and herself to her room to 'talk'
Vivace
02-25-2005, 05:20 PM
i hate it b/c i have writers block bad and idk where to go w/ the fic right now...BUT i do have a slight idea for a few chs in the future, so until im out of this god awful writers block bare with me for awhile! love yas!
This is my cure for writer's block: when I don't know what to do next i plan for the future like "Okay Ark is kept at prison and I don't know how he'll get out so I'll think on once he's out what will he do?" that kinda stuff. Don't worry my readers i know what I'm doing.
Another approach is to walk away from it and wait for inspiration. or better yet, discuss the plot with a friend. I always have my best freinds know all about my stories so they can give me input. Ex. TTG! told me he thought my last chapter just lacked in overall stuff done. I took this into account but believe me when I say that I'm not going to go with it. I thing I am going with is his idea of how Robin will escape his jail. You don't have to take any input, heck you can just ignore this post if you want it just might give you some ideas to roll with.
Just some ideas for your good fic. Excellent Chapter by the way!
RavenofAzerath~
02-25-2005, 05:24 PM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!they betternot be talking abut what i think their going to be talking about or i'm going to be thinking my brains out!!!:confused: :sweat: :confused: :confused: :confused:
Archipellago!!!
Pookey
03-24-2005, 10:02 PM
Hey guys! Aren’t you glad I’m back! –looks around at silence- thaaaaanks…I love you guys too
I got this idea when I was checking out one of the new episodes that’s coming out soon, but you won’t see much of a connection b/c…my idea and the episode have nothing in common really….Why? b/c I got the idea out of thin air, the episode just sparked it….I’m so weird…Anyway, I bet your tired of me talking so here’s the next Ch. OH and You just gonna love the ending to it…I know you will..oh and THANK YOU ERIN FOR THE NAME! -hugs-
Ch 22 'Ice'
The Titans walked out of the restaurant smiling and laughing, except Beast Boy had a scowl on his face.
“Beast Boy, that was hilarious. I’m surprised they didn’t kick you out.” Robin said after he stopped laughing. Beast Boy just glared and continued walking.
“Beast Boy, you have to admit it was funny.” Raven smirked causing Beast Boy to stop in his tracks. He slowly turned around and glared.
“I said sorry okay, now can we never speak of this again? Please!” Everyone stifled their laughter at the green teen. He still had food stuck in his hair from his little ‘accident’
“Um Beast Boy…” Starfire managed to squeak out without laughing.
“…What…” He hissed, Beast Boy got a glare from Robin but he didn’t take much notice. Starfire giggled and pointed to his hair. He slowly reached up and felt his sticky red sauced hair.
“Oh so gross, I’m leaving now before anyone else sees me.” Beast Boy shivered and changed into a Crow and flew to the Tower, but his usual green animal form was mixed with some red in it, causing the others to fall over laughing.
“I’m gonna make sure he doesn’t do any more harm in the Tower, so I’ll see you guys there.” Raven smirked and flew after the red and green Beast Boy. Robin and Star watched as their friends flew off.
“How did you like the restaurant Star?” Robin spoke first and turned to Starfire, who was looking at the night sky filled with stars. She turned and faced her date and smiled warmly.
“It was magnificent. I think the best part was when Beast Boy tripped and fell into the bowl of the spaghetti sauce.” Starfire giggled.
“Yes, that was funny. I don’t think Beast Boy will want any spaghetti for awhile.” Both Starfire and Robin laughed and made their way to Robin’s motorcycle.
“Do you want to ride Star? You look pretty tired.” Robin offered her a helmet.
“I would be delighted to ride with you Robin. I enjoy your motor bike…even if it does seem dangerous.” Starfire smiled and took the helmet from Robin, who was chuckling to himself. They both put on their helmets and got onto the red bike.
“Remember to hold on tight Star.” Robin smiled and felt Star wrap her arms around his waist as he started the vehicle. Robin drove out of the parking lot and towards home with Starfire holding on to him. Truthfully, Starfire wasn’t scared of the motorcycle anymore…except when Robin went extremely fast, but she always loved holding on to his strong body for protection either way, and Robin didn’t mind at all.
“Before we head home, do you want to stop for ice cream Star?” Robin shouted over the wind.
“That would be glorious Robin!” Star shouted back, and she felt Robin turn the bike down another road quickly, making her shriek and hold tighter.
They finally stopped at Dairy Queen (DQ Rocks) and ordered some desert. Robin got a chocolate dipped cone and Starfire got a Chocolate Moo-latte. (Yum)
“You know now you’re gonna be up all night Star.” Robin smirked. Starfire just smiled wide and continued sipping her chocolate treat. Robin shook his head and took a bite out of the chocolate that covered his ice cream.
They finished their late night snack and walked towards the pier that was located next to the DQ, holding hands they walked to the edge and sat down looking out at the seating sun.
“Isn’t this beautiful? This is my favorite time of the day, all the colors, and sounds.” Starfire breathed in and shut her eyes as she listened to the seagulls that flew by.
“It sure is Star, it sure is.” Robin smiled and looked over at Starfire. ‘What a night, first me getting caught in Star’s room, Oh God was that embarrassing, and then getting lectured by Star, but the ending was fun’ Robin chuckled and shut his eyes.
“Robin, what is so humorous?” Star looked over with her curious green eyes that lit up, and Robin melted into them instantly.
“Just recalling the day’s events and wondering what we’re gonna do while Cyborg gone.” Robin said as he stood up, but not before picking up Starfire bridal style. Starfire let out a small shriek and held onto Robin’s shoulders.
“I think we need to head home before Raven and BB get worried.” Robin stated as he set Star down on his motorcycle.
“Yes, we should, but it is so beautiful out here. I do not wish to leave this place.” Starfire gave Robin her puppy dog eyes, but he shook his head while smiling.
“I won’t fall for that tonight, we need to head home anyway,” Robin kissed Starfire’s nose and looked into her eyes, “I have a movie you might want to see.” Starfire giggled and clapped her hands.
“Oh Robin, why did you not tell me,” Starfire hugged Robin and kissed his cheek, “In that case, we must hurry home, but not too fast.” Starfire winked. Robin blushed slightly and sat on the bike and waited for Star to place her helmet on.
“You ready Star?” Robin asked as he started the bike. Instantly Star wrapped her arms around his waist.
“I am ready Robin.” Robin smirked and raced home, with Starfire holding tighter to him the entire way there.
“Where are they!? They’ve been gone for almost an hour, what could have kept them!?” Beast Boy yelled as he paced the living room, waiting for Robin and Starfire to arrive home.
“They may have stopped somewhere, why do you even care?” Raven said from behind her book. Raven was sitting on the couch, stretched out and reading a new horror book she bought at the mall with Starfire.
“I want to watch this movie.” Beast Boy held up a video case that read, ‘The Princess Bride’
“You want to watch that?” Raven raised her eyebrow at the changeling.
“No…I want to watch Robin and Star watch this.” Beast Boy snickered, and Raven rolled her eyes. The door opened and revealed a laughing Robin and Starfire.
“What took you guys so long?” Beast Boy raced over to the couple.
“Robin took me to ice cream and then we went to the pier.” Starfire smiled and floated off the ground. Robin nodded.
“Why do you even care Beast Boy?” Robin smirked and looked over at Raven who just shook her head.
“Uh…No reason…” Beast Boy rubbed the back of his head. Robin just rolled his eyes from under his mask. Raven snickered from the couch and Starfire tilted her head to the side.
“Nothing Star, why don’t we see that movie I was telling you about?” Robin suggested, and Starfire smiled wide making Robin smile too.
“That would be most wonderful, I shall fetch some refreshments.” Starfire raced to the kitchen while Robin went to the television. As Starfire bowl from the cabinet the screen on the T.V. showed that they had a new video mail from an unknown person.
“I wonder who would send us on of these?” Robin asked to himself out loud.
“Probably a big fan of mine.” Beast Boy stood proud and the others just groaned.
“It says it’s for Kor'iander.” Robin turned confused to see Starfire putting popcorn in the microwave, Robin taught her to use the microwave a while ago and she was pretty good at it.
“You may play it, I do not mind.” Starfire smiled and picked up the empty blow and leaned against the counter, Robin nodded still confused and played the tape.
Kor'iander
I have orders from the Kingdom of Azavatar to come and retrieve you within the next month…If you resist or attempt to escape I will destroy your planet you in habit now and in slave the entire race…I will be waiting for you.
Riles
As the message ended Starfire dropped the bowl and it shattered into many pieces, the others looked towards Starfire…her face was horrified and she was frozen to the floor.
Crowgirl
03-24-2005, 10:08 PM
That, Pookey, was a very good return, with a great chapter and all the toppings. The whole chapter was sweet. Poor Starfire though....:crying:
Welcome back!
Ciao,
CG
P.S. Since when does BB have fans? :p
TerraWHRobin4
03-24-2005, 10:09 PM
bad?! BAD?! THAT WAS NOT BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:
Matt A
03-25-2005, 06:30 PM
I haven't seen the movie, but I'm guessing that it has a particularly key significance to future events.;)
Anyway, that was an even more brilliant chapter than usual. There was yet more of the comedy and cuteness that we've come to expect from our dear friend Pookey, and then it was all rounded off with that ending. I'm blooody impressed, to put it somewhat mildly.
Well done!:anime: :anime: :anime: :anime: :anime:
Ta,
Matt A
Pookey
03-28-2005, 09:18 PM
that is an awesome movie...oh guess what i have...a new ch!!
I’m very proud of this ch. And I hope you like it…It will set the basis for the next few ch.s and show you what to expect in the future…I know its short, but –shrugs- that’s all I could add to it with out it sounding weird. ATTENTION FIGHT SCENE NEXT CH! And I don’t know Starfire’s real past so…yeah…this is all from my head…
Ch. 23 ‘Patience’
Starfire’s hands began to shake uncontrollably and she brought her right arm to her top, left armband and began whispering to herself in her native tongue.
“Starfire…who sent this? Do you know this person?” Robin asked in a low whisper and Starfire fell to the floor in tears. Robin and the others raced over to her and tried to comfort her, but they had no-clue how.
“Starfire…” Raven stated. Raven herself was almost in tears because she had an idea as to what was going on. Robin wrapped his arms around Starfire’s shoulders and pulled her close, she cried on his shoulder and everyone one else laid a hand on her to let her know that they were there for her. After she had cried for a good while, her tears became light hiccups and she hugged Robin tight.
“I do not want to go back there…It was a nightmare before and it will be again. I do not know if I could survive it all again.” Starfire spoke for the first time since they had gotten the message.
“Starfire, what do you mean by survive…did he hurt you?” Robin got tense as he tried to figure out revenge for any-one who would hurt his Starfire.
“Hurt her is only the beginning…I sense there is more behind the story...Starfire, Isn’t that right?” Raven kneeled beside the Tamerannien. She nodded and wiped a tear from her eye and gently grabbed her top armband again.
“My story is not one of the happiest and I was more than hoping that they would never find me again,” Starfire slowly pulled down her armband, “I was also wishing that no-one would have to know of my past until the time came, and now I see that it is time to let you all know of my past.” Starfire said those words with much courage that everyone was in shock, but their amazement lasted until they let their eyes rested on the spot on her arm that was once covered by the metal piece.
“Starfire…who…who did that to you.” Beast Boy gasped and fell to his knees as he laid his green eyes on three deep scars that were in the shape of strange symbols.
“Starfire…” Robin breathed her name and raised his gloved hand to her scars. Starfire flinched but nodded her head for him to continue. He traced the scars and noticed that they were deeper than any scar he had seen of felt before. They were jagged and he could tell that they were not properly cared for when they were made. He could not make out the symbols but Raven did instantly and she took a step back.
“Where I am from, my people do not have the powers my sister and I have today. They only have the gift of flight and strength, but when I was young…” Starfire shut her eyes and breathed in deep; she didn’t want to relive her past but knew she would have to sooner or later.
Then the alarm rang out throughout the entire Tower, someone had picked the wrong day to mess with the Titans. Robin stood up slowly and helped Starfire up and nodded his head to the other Titans. In his strong voice he yelled out his leadership call, but he didn’t feel strong right then. He wanted to comfort his Star and make sure she would be okay, but at that moment in time he had to protect the city he watched over. The others ran out the door and Robin held Starfire’s hand and squeezed it gently.
“Don’t worry Star, everything will turn out okay…I promise.” Robin whispered in Star’s ear and they walked out of the Tower waiting to end their troubles, but it was only the beginning, and Starfire knew it.
Faethie
03-29-2005, 09:22 AM
dude! (hey, firsties, sorta)
This was awesome, aww poor star...hurry up and write more!You can't leave us hanging!!
starfire0639
03-29-2005, 09:29 AM
Poor Star.....just thinking of that scar kinda makes you want to grab your arm and make sure its alright.Brava Pooky.Not the longest ch but as long as it rocks then I'm not complaining...but wait didn't I just complain ...but not being serious..but I did and..and....I'm so confused!
Matt A
03-29-2005, 05:32 PM
I copy both of the above posts: hardly original, I know, but they both say about what I wanted to say.
Ta,
Matt A
Pookey
04-06-2005, 06:05 PM
Hey guys! I have another ch for you! –waves ch in your faces- hehe, but should I post it??...ya ill post it, I’m not THAT evil…sometimes….ok this is a fight scene and my god was it tiring…I really worked hard on this one! CC is greatly appreciated so I can keep tweaking my action…
Ch. 24 ‘Anger Management…’
The Titans made their way to the middle of Jump City, Raven flew beside Beast Boy who was in the form of a crow, and Robin and Starfire drove on the R-cycle. Robin insisted that she drive with him and she didn’t argue because one of the reasons was she couldn’t muster the happiness of flight that she was born with, and Robin had a feeling that she was in no state to fly.
“Starfire…will you be ok? I don’t want you to hurt yourself…I mean….” Robin stuttered to finish his sentence.
“I shall be fine Robin. I believe I can fight whom ever we are up against.” Starfire whispered as she closed her eyes and tried to forget about the message that was sent to her. As the arrived at the crime scene they were shocked to be face to face with the H.I.V.E. again.
“Dudes! I thought we sent these clowns to jail just a few months ago?!” Beast Boy exclaimed as he changed back into human form on the ground. Raven nodded but didn’t say anything but just glared at Jinx. Jinx was standing with her hands on her hips waiting for the goth.
“You may have sent us to jail, but do you think Brother Blood would actually keep us there?” Jinx smirked to Raven. The goth just stood silently.
“I see that Raven has some jewelry on her neck, may I take that off for you?” Gizmo winked at Raven and Beast Boy growled under his breath, knowing what he meant.
“And what have we here? Bird Boy is all better, how was your recovery anyway?” Mammoth sneered and Robin whipped out his bo-staff and Starfire instantly powered up two hugs starbolts.
“Fine Mammoth…it was just fine…” Robin gritted his teeth. Robin wasn’t too keen that the enemy was taunting him for an injury that was from last year and neither was Starfire.
“TITANS GO!” Robin yelled and they charged at the enemy. Jinx stood waiting for an attack from Raven, but she was no-where in sight, Beast Boy charged at Gizmo in gorilla form and Robin and Starfire ran towards Mammoth with their weapons ready.
“So Witch…To scared to face me in person?” Jinx taunted and carefully looked around for Raven but didn’t see that she was right behind her flowing her every move. An idea sparked in Raven’s mind and she melted into the ground.
“Are you so sure that you can defeat me Jinx?” Raven monotonly spoke but Jinx couldn’t find where the voice was coming from.
“If you show your face then we could fight and see who’s the better fighter now couldn’t we?” Jinx began to walk forward unknowing that her enemy lay right beneath her.
“True, but I have something else in mind.” As Raven spoke, Jinx became unable to walk. She looked down and found her feet stuck in a black sticky substance.
“What the…” Jinx tried to move but the substance hardened and she was stuck, Jinx shot pink energy waves at her feet but it bounced back and knocked Jinx to the ground.
“It’s called tar Jinx.” Raven appeared in front of the immobile villain. Jinx shot more waves towards Raven but Raven stopped them with a wave of her hand.
“Sorry Jinx but I am needed somewhere else.” Raven left the girl on the ground with sirens of police getting louder and louder.
As Raven left the girl behind she stopped and saw Beast Boy fly backwards.
“Azerath Metrion Zinthos!” Raven yelled and caught the green teen before he hit the wall.
“Thanks Rae!” Beast Boy yelled and Raven nodded then turned herself to the one that caused Beast Boy to fly backwards in the first place…it was Gizmo.
“Well, look who finally decided to show up for the party. Wanna dance cutie?” Raven glared at the comment Gizmo made to her.
“I don’t dance…” Raven darkly commented, “And if I ever decided to, it certainly wouldn’t be with someone like you, Azerath Metrion Zinthos!” Raven levitated a mail box and hurled it towards the boy. Gizmo blasted the mail box with a missile and pressed a button, causing four giant like spider legs to emerge from his back pack.
Beast Boy heard the comment Gizmo shot to Raven and became enraged, ‘No one talks to Raven like that and doesn’t hear from me’ Beast Boy’s uniform began to rip and he fell to the ground. Raven saw this and quickly tried to warn Gizmo that he wasn’t going to win but Beast Boy beat her to it. He was the Beast and he wasn’t going to be as nice as Raven was to Gizmo.
“What the hairball?!” Gizmo looked up at the giant Beast that loomed over him and froze in fear. The Beast charged and punched Gizmo sending the boy into a wall and instantly fell unconscious.
“Beast Boy!” Raven yelled and flew to the green giant. He turned and was face to face with the girl.
“Calm down Beast Boy, remember what I taught you. Azerath Metrion Zinthos, Azerath Metrion Zinthos…” Raven repeated and Beast Boy’s breath slowed down and he began to shrink. With a flash of white and green light Beast Boy fell to the ground.
“Ugh…what…happened?” Beast Boy moaned.
Raven helped Beast Boy stand up and carried him to a wall to lean on.
“Your Beast was unleashed and you did quiet a number on Gizmo.” Raven explained quickly and kneeled next to him.
“Gizmo…” Beast Boy hissed, but Raven calmed him down once more.
“It’s all right Beast Boy…Gizmo is unconscious thanks to you. You rest while I help out Robin and Starfire.” Raven smiled faintly and gave Beast Boy a peck on the cheek before she flew off to help her comrades.
“Starfire watch out!” Robin warned Starfire of an oncoming boulder but before it hit her she destroyed it with her starbolts. Starfire shot her eye lasers at Mammoth and it hit their target head on sending the oversized giant into a wall.
“Ugh…That’s it little missy, you are going down.” Mammoth quickly recovered and began to pick up speed as he ran towards Starfire.
Robin tried to stop him by throwing some freeze disks at him but they had no effect on the charging teen. Starfire tried to fly out of the way but once she lifted off of the ground she was smashed into the ground. A loud crash followed the impact and Mammoth slowly stood up.
“Haha! That should teach you to mess with…argh!” Mammoth underestimated the strength of Starfire and she kicked him sending him flying into the air. Starfire slowly stood up and Robin rushed over to Starfire, but then a flash of pink sent Starfire down for the count.
Jinx shot Starfire in the neck and was quite pleased with her work.
“STARFIRE!” Robin yelled and kneeled next to his fallen girl.
“Oh what’s the matter? Did the birdie get hurt when I beat his girlfriend?” Jinx taunted Robin, and Robin stood up….fuming.
Robin took out his bo-staff and ran at Jinx. He went to hit her but she side stepped him and he missed.
“You seem to be a little slow there Bird Boy…” Jinx kept taunting in a calm voice, which angered Robin even more. He jumped and flipped over Jinx and quickly turned swinging the bo-staff making contact with her side. A crack was heard and Jinx fell to the ground. She grabbed her side and felt extreme pain.
“Why you little…” Jinx shot two more pink waves at Robin but Raven stopped them.
“Would you like to go to jail now, or are you still up for a fight?” Raven spoke calmly and walked up to the down criminal. Jinx stood up gradually and Robin was about to charge but Raven stopped him, “Hold on Robin…I have one more trick up my sleeve.”
“Yeah….and what’s…that witch?” Jinx hobbled on her legs, but wasn’t giving up.
“This…” Raven said softly, but she grew. Tentacles formed under her cloak and her eyes turned red as two more appeared. “Now do you want to fight?” Raven hissed and inched towards Jinx, who turned pale and fainted from fear. Raven smirked, ‘I thought so.’ Raven thought as she shrank back down to normal and found Robin kneeling beside the fallen Star.
“Come on, we have to get her home.” Robin whispered and picked her up. Beast Boy walked over to Raven.
“What happened?” He said in awe.
“I’ll explain later, let’s help them home.” Raven pulled her cloak over her head and led the criminals to the arriving police with her powers.
As Robin carried Starfire in to the Tower and laid her onto the couch, he began muttering to himself, “This is all my fault. I should have seen that coming…” Robin kneeled beside the unconscious girl.
“No Robin, you wouldn’t have been able to do anything even if you saw into the future. All we can do now is…..” Raven was interrupted by a sudden crash.
“What was that?” Beast Boy jumped but bravely made his was to the doors that the crash came from. As he went to open the doors he was sent flying back
“Azerath Metrion Zinthos!” Raven yelled and caught Beast Boy before he fell to the floor.
“Thanks again Raven.” Beast Boy smiled.
“Your Welcome Beast Boy.” Raven smiled back, but then looked up to where they use to have two doors and saw a shadowy figure.
“Where is she?” A voice unknown to the Titans spoke. It was a voice that would any girl would fall for. It was crisp, clear, and deep. It was the voice of Riles.
Matt A
04-06-2005, 06:37 PM
Uh oh...
Well, things'll be getting interesting around here at the very least.;)
Ta,
Matt A
Faethie
04-08-2005, 12:59 PM
Uh oh...
Well, things'll be getting interesting around here at the very least.;)
I've gotta copy you Matt. Things will get very interesting, I believe...
By the way, Beastboy unleashing 'the beast within' was awesome. coolness. finally, Gizmo gets wat he deserves. I hate that snot-nosed brat. I want to destroy that pain in the butt.....
Rrrrrrrrrrr.....
NO! You added a twist! Oh no! please! don't be what I think it is! *crosses fingers* please don't!!!
Pookey
04-10-2005, 09:32 PM
hehe well im back from FL, i had a cheer compitition and guess what...We Got 1st!!! YA!!!!!! anyway...heres my fav ch...well not my FAV ch but i do like it b/c its got....well just read and find out and you'll see why i like it...:evil: :D :anime:
Ch 25 ‘Will a Sacrifice be the right thing?’
“Well, where is she?” The shadow spoke once again. Everyone froze. Beast Boy looked at Raven and saw her with a soft look on her face like she was falling for that voice.
“What do you want you freak!?” Beast Boy yelled at the shadow, angered that Raven was falling for his trance.
“I am here for my property you earthling.” The voice stated with spite. Just as those words were spoken the shadow moved forward and a man stood before the Titans. The man was wearing a black business type suit, black tie and shoes, he was about 6 foot tall and his black glistening hair fell to the middle of his back. His face was elegant, a face that no girl could turn down. His face soft and seemed loving, it was long and sophisticated, like he was the perfect man.
“My name is Riles young earthlings, and I am here to…” Riles was interrupted by the hiss from Robin.
“Take away Starfire, you won’t have her. Not without a fight.” Robin stood up and glared at the man.
“Starfire? I do not know anyone by that name but I am here to retrieve a Kor’iander.” The man smirked.
“Well you won’t have her, she belongs here with us.” Robin hissed.
“I am dreadfully sorry, but you have no say in this. She has to come with me.” Riles seemed sincere but the others knew he was lying.
“By what orders?” Beast Boy spoke up while standing beside Raven, who was smiling at Riles making Beast Boy even more angry.
“That is confidential. May I know where Kor’iander is located? I am in quiet a hurry.” Riles walked over to Raven and tilted her chin up, knowing full well she was in under his spell. Raven lifted her arm up and pointed to the couch. Riles smiled and took her hand. “Thank you very much my dear lady.” Riles kissed Raven’s hand lightly and Beast Boy fumed with rage, growling at the man. Riles sneered at the teen and made his way to the couch Raven pointed at.
“Oh my, what happened to her? Oh dear, I must say this is an inconvince.” Riles stood disappointed as he saw Starfire lying unmoving on the couch.
“Yes, it seem that this is an inconvince…that you are here.” Robin glared and stepped in front of Riles before he could get any closer to Starfire.
Riles huffed out in annoyance, “Boy you are getting on my last never, move so I can take her with me.” Riles reached out to push Robin out of the way but Robin hit his hand away.
“You are already on my last nerve, now I would advise you to leave.” Robin stood up to the man.
“I will leave once my property is back in my custody.” Riles waved his hand and Robin was sent flying to the wall, and once Riles waved his hand though Raven fell to her knees. Beast Boy knelt down beside Raven while Riles walked towards Starfire.
“NO!” Robin yelled as he launched himself to the man. Riles stood and stuck his hand in front of the charging Robin, as soon as he did this Robin froze in mid air, only his head able to move.
“And why is that my dear boy? Does this girl mean something to you?” Riles questioned with content as he walked over and around the frozen Robin.
“Yes, she means the world to me and I…..” Robin struggled against the bond that froze him.
“Would do what dear boy?” Riles was instantly interested and a plan formed in his mind.
“Would do anything for her…I would die for her…” Robin whispered but everyone heard anyway.
“Really, is that so? Well if you would do anything for her then…hmmm, why not take her place? I mean, she was worthless and I am sure you could do just as good, of course after we, you know…tweak you up a bit.” Riles chuckled to himself. Robin glared but his faces soften as he looked towards Starfire. He looked at her armband that covered her scars once more.
“Take me…I’ll go for her…” Robin’s head fell. Riles began to laugh maniacally.
“Are you sure boy?” Riles dropped Robin to the floor, Robin landed on his hands and knees.
“……Yes…..” Robin looked up, his face soft and he stood up slowly, “I would do anything for her…” Robin looked at the man’s eyes, sincere and truthfully.
“All right dear boy, you may take her place.” Riles smirked and Beast Boy and Raven gasped.
“Just let me say good-bye to her…” Robin looked to Starfire, then back at Riles.
“Fine, you have five minutes but then come straight outside.” Riles strutted to the entrance he came from, “We leave now, you will not be needing anything.” Riles then left into the shadows, leaving Robin to say his good-byes.
“Robin…are you sure?” Raven walked over.
“Yes…It’s the only way to make sure Starfire doesn’t have to relive her past.” Robin bowed his head and walked over to Starfire kneeling beside her.
“But….but…” Beast Boy stuttered to say something but couldn’t say anything. Robin knelt down and gave a kiss on Starfire’s lips and then to her cheek.
“I am sorry Starfire, but I must go now…I don’t think I will ever be back, but if you can hear this…I love you Starfire please know this.” Robin held back his tears and stood up facing Raven and Beast Boy.
“When Starfire wakes up…don’t tell her what happened, make something up I don’t care what, tell her that I love her and always will. Tell Cyborg that he is in charge when he returns but until then Raven you are in charge. I will miss you guys and I’m sorry but please understand why I had to do this.” With that Robin walked out of the room and into the shadows.
After Robin disappeared, they heard a yell from their leader and Raven and Beast Boy ran towards the yell. When they reached outside they saw Robin being forced into a space craft a huge man. Robin was chained and his belt lay on the ground.
“Robin!” Raven yelled, Robin turned only to be shoved into the spacecraft harder. “Beast Boy…we have to do something.” Raven gasped as they watched in horror as their former strong leader being shoved and chained to the wall of the spacecraft.
“Yes, but what?” Beast Boy muttered and he flinched as they watched helplessly as the spacecraft hovered, but then they saw Riles walk up to Robin then laugh manically as he grabbed Robin’s chin and tilted it up to face him, then they heard the true voice from the man.
“Fool! You will soon learn why your friend left!” The voice that was formally soft and pure was low and rough. Riles shoved Robin’s face away and he sneered, “Boy…Welcome to hell.”
starfire0639
04-11-2005, 09:31 AM
“Fool! You will soon learn why your friend left!” The voice that was formally soft and pure was low and rough. Riles shoved Robin’s face away and he sneered, “Boy…Welcome to hell.” ...Eek!I love it but you total butt munch you left a cliffy type thingy and now we gotta wait for the next chapter!.......evil!And I feel sorry for Robin....-pout-Cute boys should never be hit and/or shoved........Hey its in the bible or something!
ash
Faethie
04-11-2005, 12:57 PM
....-pout-Cute boys should never be hit and/or shoved........Hey its in the bible or something!In the bible? *laughs* not quite Ash, not quite.
Anyhow, Pookey, great chapter! Yep, that's Robin for you. The Hero. When will he learn...
later,
The Faith
Awake again
starfire0639
04-11-2005, 01:44 PM
Hmph well my Cosmo magazine is like my bible!-holds it close to herart-And it strictly says don't hit cute boys!Hmph.......And he has to be the hero.It just who he is.And plus he rescued he one he loves.Thats strictly from the heart.Not wanting to be a hero but being it anyways.
rrarbecy
04-12-2005, 07:41 PM
Not that, it's just the entire chapter. It was frickin' awesome
Anime
04-12-2005, 09:24 PM
hehe I'm guessing you guys didnt see that coming heh??NO Way did i see that!!!:eek: :sweat: ;)
decka
04-13-2005, 09:29 AM
Pookey my love u are doing great! I love your story so much. u rock!!
PressureCooker
04-13-2005, 10:16 AM
hehe I'm guessing you guys didnt see that coming heh??Actually I did... but I'm sick and twisted in that sort of way:evil: . As for this story up until now; it's good. Quite good. Very, very good. In fact I'm pretty disappointed with myself for not having read it sooner.
Now that you twisted the story, we all wonder: What will happen next?:eek:
Pookey
04-29-2005, 06:59 AM
Hi! Ok I got some time and was able to put this up, im trying to get my chs longer but…nothing is coming to mind, but don’t fret…soon you will all have a long ch!! YAA, until then enjoy this small piece!!!
Ch. 26 ‘Wake up to Tears’
Raven sat in her room contiplating taking the jewlry off or not.
'You know you will have to sooner or later' Knowledge spoke as Raven held the charms in her hand.
'Yes I know that, but I can't help think that maybe one of these could help us in the future'
'Yes, one will help you, but only one will, but you know you must take it off.'
Raven nodded and lifted her arms to her neck, unclasping the necklace many lights formed around Raven and then dissapered.
"Looks like I'm back where I started." Raven said disapointed. As Raven placed the necklace full of charms in a box she took one of the charms off, and secured it on her belt. The color of the charm shinned bright and went back into Raven. She sighed and began walking to the living room.
Starfire slept on the couch in the Titans living room until the next morning. As Raven walked in and saw Starfire stir from her slumber she began to proceed with making her morning tea. Starfire sat up slowly and began to scan her surroundings, she noticed Raven standing there with a cup of steaming tea in both hands.
“Here, drink this. It will make you feel better after what happened last night.”
“Thank you Raven,” Starfire spoke softly from just waking up as she took the tea and sipped it slowly. She smiled as she drank for it was a taste that she had never had but it was quite enjoyable.
“Raven…may I ask but where is everyone?” Starfire asked after she had finished her tea. Raven was surprised at how quickly she had drank it, but she didn’t bother bringing that up.
“Um…Beast Boy I believe is still sleeping, and Robin…well….he’s no longer here with us right now.” Raven’s voice dropped as she remembered what had happened last night.
“What do you mean by not here? Robin couldn’t have left?” Starfire asked worriedly, she clutched the couch in fear of the worst.
“I’m sorry Star, but…last night…Riles showed up and...” Starfire gasped and shook her head in disbelief.
“No…no Robin didn’t….no….” Starfire began to cry as she realized what had happened.
“I’m sorry Star, but Robin…he took your place…He loved you so much that he didn’t want to see you suffer anymore so he took your place.” Raven said monotonly, but you could tell she was on the verge of crying.
But Raven…He promised…” Starfire whispered as tears glistened down her perfectly toned cheeks. Raven laid a hand on the crying girls shoulder and took a deep breath.
“Star…You have to know why he did this for you, he told me not to let you know the truth but you need to know. He sacrificed himself to keep you out of harms way. He couldn’t bear seeing that man or whatever he is come near you. Starfire…Robin loves you very deeply and he would die for you…We will get Robin back Starfire…Robin will come home.” As Raven finished Starfire looked up with a new hope in her eyes.
Raven smiled softly and Starfire wrapped her arms around her cloaked friend. As Raven hugged back, both of them didn’t notice Raven’s usually dark blue cloak turn a small shade lighter.
Faethie
04-29-2005, 07:49 AM
I'm thinking about the whole Raven thing. Pookey, I really have to congradulate you, cause I think I like Rae best in this fic!! Wow, this chapter was like, wow...O_o.....WoW!!!!!
Faith
Matt A
04-29-2005, 06:41 PM
A scene that does emotional without getting cute: a rare treat indeed, even from Pookey, the champion of emotional scenes!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Ta,
Matt A
starfire0639
04-29-2005, 06:56 PM
A scene that does emotional without getting cute: a rare treat indeed, even from Pookey, the champion of emotional scenes!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Ta,
Matt A...You go girl!...-cough-And Pooky you hear that!?Your the champion of emotional scenes!!!!!Woot woot!...Well give me some tips on how to do that cus I'm not sure if I am right:crying: But of the subject of me...like there is ever anything else to talk about:D That chapter...altho short...-I'm gonna get smacked for that-But it did rock!I like how you do the whole Raven thang......Thang....-giggles-
Ash-meister...I'm me again!
ShadowOfAGhost
05-02-2005, 06:49 PM
Allright, I don't have much time, but i will say this...
I am reading this story, currently just finished chapter 11
You are doing very well with this.
It is hard to find a good romance story like this, and even harder to find one so well written... but to find one of this quality (though the fight sceens and grammer and spelling need some work) is next to imposible. You do great with portraying what you want to say through a perfect balance of dialogue and description.
in short, EXCELENT WORK!!!
Anime
05-03-2005, 10:45 PM
Pookey delivers another wallop!
I seriously think you should mess with the relationships. Like, if the show says Robin/Star, then spice it up with someone else, have Star go after BB (anyone remember Forces of Nature?)
You write emotion very well.
Pookey!!!!!:p
Pookey
05-03-2005, 10:57 PM
Pookey delivers another wallop!
I seriously think you should mess with the relationships. Like, if the show says Robin/Star, then spice it up with someone else, have Star go after BB (anyone remember Forces of Nature?)
You write emotion very well.
Pookey!!!!!:p
thanks Anime...but one thing...Star and BB??? ummmmmm dont see it, -looks again- nope nothing still....now mess w/ relationships Sure i can do that BUT in another fic..i knwo where this ones going and none of you do ne ne:p but sure thing i can do emotion tugs...ill keep that in mide for my next fc....but not b/w the team..i start twitching madly...
PressureCooker
05-03-2005, 10:58 PM
Pookey delivers another wallop!
I seriously think you should mess with the relationships. Like, if the show says Robin/Star, then spice it up with someone else, have Star go after BB (anyone remember Forces of Nature?)
You write emotion very well.
Pookey!!!!!:p:eek: Gaah? Wha? How the...?:eek:
*fidget* Ummm... *fidget* Seriously... Haven't you ever heard of the 11th commandment? "Thou shall have no other pairing for Starfire except Robin" ? Congress passes these things for a reason and we all have to follow them.
May God have mercy on you soul!:evil:
PressureCooker
05-04-2005, 03:46 PM
By the way, Anime...
Please note that we are only voicing our opinions. What ever you do in your fic is cool. Besides, thats why it's called a "fiction" ... because it will never happen!:evil:
But seriously, new ideas are cool to me. Even if the do make me twitch.
*twitch-twitch*:anime:
ShadowOfAGhost
05-06-2005, 03:10 PM
I'm up to date now, so you may want to do some more writing. http://www.forums.toonzone.net/images/smilies/evil3.gif You know that I will pester you to no end if you don't hurry. http://www.forums.toonzone.net/images/smilies/evil3.gif
one of the main things that I am seeing you do a lot in your writing is that you are bing very redundant and over elaborating. for example:
“Thank you Raven,” Starfire spoke softly from just waking up as she took the tea and sipped it slowly. She smiled as she drank for it was a taste that she had never had but it was quite enjoyable.
“Raven…may I ask but where is everyone?” Starfire asked after she had finished her tea. Raven was surprised at how quickly she had drank it, but she didn’t bother bringing that up.
“Um…Beast Boy I believe is still sleeping, and Robin…well….he’s no longer here with us right now.” Raven’s voice dropped as she remembered what had happened last night.
“What do you mean by not here? Robin couldn’t have left?” Starfire asked worriedly, she clutched the couch in fear of the worst.
“I’m sorry Star, but…last night…Riles showed up and...” Starfire gasped and shook her head in disbelief.
“No…no Robin didn’t….no….” Starfire began to cry as she realized what had happened.
“I’m sorry Star, but Robin…he took your place…He loved you so much that he didn’t want to see you suffer anymore so he took your place.” Raven said monotonly, but you could tell she was on the verge of crying.
But Raven…He promised…” Starfire whispered as tears glistened down her perfectly toned cheeks. Raven laid a hand on the crying girls shoulder and took a deep breath.
“Star…You have to know why he did this for you, he told me not to let you know the truth but you need to know. He sacrificed himself to keep you out of harms way. He couldn’t bear seeing that man or whatever he is come near you. Starfire…Robin loves you very deeply and he would die for you…We will get Robin back Starfire…Robin will come home.” As Raven finished Starfire looked up with a new hope in her eyes.
Raven smiled softly and Starfire wrapped her arms around her cloaked friend. As Raven hugged back, both of them didn’t notice Raven’s usually dark blue cloak turn a small shade lighter. The things I highlighted in red are things that you may want to look at. some of them are redundancies, and others are run on sentences. you also need to make sure that when you write something, you choose the best wording for it possible. Try reading it outloud and then see how it sounds. One particular example was the last thing that I highlighted, "Both of them didn't notice". Instead you could have tried something like "neither of them noticed". Many times after quotations, you put long descriptions of the corresponding action. It tends to sound a little strained. Like when you said "As Raven finished Starfire looked up with a new hope in her eyes.". That is stretched out a bit too far. You may want to divide that into two sentences, like saying "as Raven finished, Starfire looked up. There was a new sense of hope in her eyes."
things like that. One of the best things to do is to read what you write outloud. It is the best way for you to get an idea of what sounds the best and what could use more work. Overall though, you are doing well. :cool:
Rest in peace Alex and Ransom.
Pookey
05-12-2005, 04:22 PM
Hehe I have a ch!! YA!! As I said before I love u guys soo much and thanks for helping me and waiting soo long for this! And…..AHHH!!! ASH I STILL CANT BELIEVE IT!!!! AHHH!!! Ok im good now…AHH!!...ya im done, -coughs- ya so anyway….heres the next ch guys!! And I made sure that the end was just right for it, but don’t fret I am working on the new ch as you all are reading this one, haha I am so smart!! that and i feel bad thats its so short so thats another reason im working on the new one so quickly...:sweat:
Ch 28 ‘Don’t Scream’
“Ahh!” Robin lifted his head up to see who had screamed. It sounded like a cry of pain.
“Ah! No, Please Stop!!” The voice yelled even louder. Robin tried to break his bonds to help the voice but he had no strength. He had only been there a few weeks and was already thinking up an escape plan. They had tortured him and beaten him senseless and Robin, the formally strong and heroic leader of the Teen Titans, was just a puppet in this mad mans game.
Robin heard footsteps coming closer to his cell, as they grew louder Robin tried to break free even harder.
“Well, well, well…What do we have here? Trying to escape? Ha pathetic, you are almost as bad as little Starry was….hmm now that I think of it you are in need of some ‘special treatment’ soon. Oh don’t worry it won’t hurt…much.” Riles laughed as he watched Robin grit his teeth.
“What did you do to her?” Robin hissed as he pulled on his chains. Riles scoffed at the teen and began to walk away. “Tell Me!” Robin yelled as he lurched forward only to be yanked backwards.
“Tell you...hmm I have a better idea.” Riles smirked. He waved his hand and a long metal rod flew into his hand. “Instead of telling you…why don’t I show you?” Riles smiled wide and Robin gulped but his face showed no fear.
‘How did she survive all of this?’ Robin thought as the rod was brought closer to him. Before it touched him electricity sparked on the tip and a jolt shot through Robin’s body. He bit his tongue and he lurched backwards but the rod was pushed into his skin. Robin tried not to scream in pain.
“Oh, does that hurt? I am dreadfully sorry. Here let me turn that down for you.” Riles pressed a button on the rod’s base and the sparks grew. Robin balled his fists and shut his eyes as the current of electricity went throughout his body, but not a sound emitted from his lips.
“Not screaming? I do love it when my victims scream. It gives me some sort of tingling feeling inside. It is quiet enjoyable if I do say so myself.” Riles waved his hand around in a dramatic state as he watched Robin jolt backwards to escape the torture, but Riles pushed the rod deeper into Robin’s skin and turned the power up once more. Robin gritted his teeth in pain, doing everything in his power not to yell, but then the pain stopped. Robin collapsed onto the floor in relief, breathing hard.
“I am dreadfully sorry my dear boy but it seems that I must leave for the moment, but don’t worry. I’ll be back for more fun soon.” Robin looked up and saw Riles turn and leave with two monster guards.
All he heard the guards say to the retreating villain was that some sort of ship was heading towards the planet…and something about a returning prisoner was aboard that ship.
ShadowOfAGhost
05-12-2005, 04:53 PM
YAY! Awsome new chapter! you did a lot better with that one than you did with past chapters. good job!
Matt A
05-12-2005, 06:29 PM
Oh my god, Riles is a psychopath!:eek: :eek: :eek:
But the Titans are coming to kick his arse, so all is (mostly) well anyway.:anime:
Matt A,
The Sultan Of Shock
RavenofAzerath~
05-14-2005, 06:29 PM
nice, Robin getting tortured.....scary how i like this chapter. He diddnt scream, easy way not to is to bite your tounge. If that dosent work, ya know how sometimes you sing so high you dont hear anything, do that. anyway, i want to know about the other ship!!
RoA~
Now Crazy
Pookey
05-22-2005, 08:36 PM
Ok short But needed…I didn’t want to tell what happens in space in this ch…it would have been weird…That and I want to have another Robin ch next soooo enjoy this tiny piece from moi and…..FOAMY hahahaha!!!!
Ch 29 ‘Off We Go!’
“Cyborg, Get over here now! We’ve got a situation and if you don’t come I’ll come over there and make you! Got it?!” Raven shut her communicator before he could respond and stormed to her room just as Beast Boy was walking into the living room.
“Hey….Raven?” She ignored the teen and continued on her way. “Uhh…Did I miss something?” Beast Boy asked Starfire who was looking out the window.
“Raven has been trying to contact Cyborg for the last half hour but he is not responding.” Starfire turned to see the green teen walking over to her.
“How ‘bout I go get him? I think that will take a load off Raven and your shoulders.” Beast Boy smiled at his friend and Starfire hugged him tight.
“Oh thank you Beast Boy!”
“Ehh…no problem….Star….air…” Starfire let the boy go and he started to the door to leave.
“I’ll be back a-sap ok…Tell Raven not to worry her pretty little head off. See Ya.” Beast Boy changed into a falcon and flew off to the Titans East Tower. Starfire was confused at what Beast Boy wanted to tell Raven for him, but she made her way to the Goth’s room anyway.
“He said what?” Raven said monotonly
“He said for you not to worry your pretty little head off and that he was on his way to fetch Cyborg.” Starfire repeated. Raven blushed slightly and nodded her head.
“Well…did he say when he was coming back?”
“No he did not…” Just then both girls heard a door slam and quickly ran to the living room
“Who’s there?!” Raven yelled as she and Starfire powered up excepting an intruder.
“Whoa whoa! Easy there, it’s just us!” Cyborg called back and Raven powered up even more.
“Cyborg! Beast Boy!” Starfire dropped to the ground and ran over to the boys.
“Heh heh, your not mad at me Raven…are ya?” Cyborg walked cautiously over to the angered girl.
“I would take that as a yes and back away Sparky.” Bumblebee spoke out of no where.
“Bumblebee!” Starfire shouted with glee.
“Yep, just wanted to help you all out. I heard what happened and I was trying to rush Sparky over here but the T-ship kinda…had an accident. But don’t worry, we fixed it all up and we can head out anytime you need to.” Bumblebee calmed Raven down as she explained.
“Well…before we can go…Starfire wanted to tell you all something…Star…” Beast Boy let Starfire have the floor.
“Thank you Beast Boy…Friends, I am more than glad to have you all come along and help but when we see Riles…please let me handle him...I…I do not want any more of my friends hurt because of his cruelty.” Starfire sniffed but held back her oncoming tears.
“It’s ok Star….We will help you as much as we can…”
“Ya, greenies right…for once…”
“Shut Up Tin Man!” Beast Boy and Cyborg started to yell at each other and Raven and Bumblebee shook their heads as Starfire smiled.
“Let’s leave now before they start thrashing the Tower.”
“Good idea Bee.” Raven picked up both boys with her powers and brought them to the T-ship. Starfire took on more look around the empty Tower before walking to garage with everyone else.
“Don’t worry Robin…We are coming…”
PressureCooker
05-22-2005, 08:56 PM
Ok short But needed…I didn’t want to tell what happens in space in this ch…it would have been weird…That and I want to have another Robin ch next soooo enjoy this tiny piece from moi and…..FOAMY hahahaha!!!!Yes... short but needed is right. Kinda like A girl I know... but anyways. I'm glad to get another chapter from you. But truth be told, I'm really on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens next. Uh oh... feeling faint *falls off edge of the chair*;)
Your fan,
The Cooker
Matt A
05-23-2005, 07:07 PM
My thoughts exactly!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Matt A,
The Grand Vizier Of Shock
PressureCooker
05-23-2005, 10:28 PM
My thoughts exactly!:anime: :anime: :anime: Wait... you know a girl who is short but needed too? Wait, how do you know her? Hmmm... *crosses arms and taps foot nervously* Well, I'll have to have a little talk with her. And you, Grand Vizier... stay away from my girl! Heh, just messing around. Sorry, nothing to see here!:D Yup, just some spam!;)
Matt A
05-24-2005, 06:15 PM
Umm...I was referring to this:
I'm glad to get another chapter from you. But truth be told, I'm really on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens next. Uh oh... feeling faint *falls off edge of the chair*;)
But I know that you already knew that, so I'll just shut up now. Umm...:sweat: :sweat: :sweat: :sweat: :sweat:
-Matt A-
Anime
05-27-2005, 02:17 PM
I agree, Poookey. Major Suspense.;)
starfire0639
05-29-2005, 11:00 PM
“Don’t worry Robin…We are coming…” ...Why'd you end it like that!?......UGh now I gotta go sulk cus you left me on that final suspensful note.......Damn you Pooky!....Oh well.Post your next chapter soon and this time....I'll reply on time:sweat:
RavenofAzerath~
05-30-2005, 01:13 PM
nice......erg................ok, now i can feel how hard it is to concentrate when the tv is on and its something you like.
ha ha....guess what i'm watching..
When there's trouble you know what to do!!
Call Cyborg!
He can shoot a rocket from his shoe!!
Cause he's Cyborg!
Na na na na something like that.. Oh Yeah! Na na na na big fluffy cat, thats right!!
RoA~
Barely Sane
Pookey
06-04-2005, 09:17 PM
haha yaaaa reviews hehe -rubs hands together- well....that means.......CH TIME! hehehe well here u guys go hehe
Ch 30 ‘A price will be paid’
“SAY IT!”
“NO! Argh!” Robin fell to his knees as Riles stormed towards him, grabbing his chin forcing the beaten boy to stand and look at him.
Robin had his arms bound behind him and his shirt was hanging below his waist. Robin’s belt went missing long ago, and his usually jet black hair that spiked up hung in the teen’s face filled with dirt. His face cut and bruised from the daily beatings and his back and chest showed whippings that he had received since he had arrived, but what stood out was a burn mark on his side that steadily grew from the electric shocks Riles forced on him every night.
“I told you to say it, now say it!” Riles raised the whip above his head ready to strike Robin if he refused the command given to him.
“And I told you…” Robin glared at the man, strong despite all the torture he was going through, his mask still on but with a rip on the side, “I will never call you master you cold hearted son of a…argh!” Robin yelled as the whip made contact with his skin once more.
“You are stubborn you know that boy.” Riles shoved Robin to the ground and threw the whip to a guard.
“Ya…” Robin spit out dirt from his mouth and continued to glare at Riles, “So I’ve been told.”
“Well…I guess it will be a challenge to break that spirit of yours then…heh it was a challenge for Starfire as well but you might be easier.” Riles smirked knowing he had hit a soft spot on Robin. Robin raised himself off the ground and made his way to Riles but two large guards held him back.
“Aww did I make our little Robbie mad??” Steam emitted from Robin’s ears as he tried to get away from the guards, but the two guards held the boy tight.
“Starfire’s sprit was…” Riles shot Robin with a blast of grey energy from his hands causing Robin to be knocked out.
“SILENCE! Take the prisoner to his cell. I’ll deal with him later.” Riles shooed the guards away, and as they passed Riles with Robin, Riles smirked evilly watching blood drip from Robin’s beaten back.
“That spirit of yours will be broken dear boy...and I will make sure that it is, even if I have to kill your precious Starfire to do it.” Riles laughed wickedly as he turned and left the dirt filled torture chamber and made his way to a small room just down the hall.
As he opened the door to the room a bright green light shinned and a scream rang out.
“Oh I love that sound, it just brings a shiver to me.” Riles breathed out as he walked over to the prisoner screaming for mercy, but then as soon as it came it stopped.
“I’m sorry sir but…” A small man with large glasses walked out from behind machine and to the silent body on the table and lifted the wrist of the body, then shook his head, “…he didn’t make it.”
“Damn it! Why can’t they live through it!? Those puny tameraineins did! Why can’t earthlings live through this!?” Riles slammed his fist leaving a dent on the table where the body lay.
“I am sorry sir. Shall we try once more on another specimen?” The small man carried the body to a chute.
“Yes…we will start later on him though. I wish to have an audience though.” Riles smiled as an idea formed in his mind. “Mattox, make sure you power this machine up to the lowest power on here.”
“The lowest, but sir that will cause the specimen to…” Riles interrupted him with a wave of his hand.
“Yes, I know…it will cause extreme pain and a slow death…yes I know what will happen...Mattox, set the device on the lowest setting and prepare for a special arrival in due time.” Riles waved his hand and Mattox nodded his head.
“Yes sir, right away sir.” Mattox walked to the controls and did as he was told, “When shall I be excepting my new specimen?” Mattox said with a monotone voice that seem liked he was under some sort of mind control, Riles laughed.
“Soon…you shall be seeing them soon.”
Crowgirl
06-04-2005, 10:50 PM
Wait... Robin's gonna die? :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad: :sad:
ShadowOfAGhost
06-05-2005, 06:05 PM
well, Riles is a sick and twisted SOB, that's for sure. Good work pooky!
I hope robin doesn't die, or starfire, either of them. now if there were some kind oif switcheroo where riles somehow ended up on the table........:evil:
Matt A
06-05-2005, 06:35 PM
It is a rare thing indeed when someone creates a villain who is genuinely reprehensible, but with Riles I thinkthat has been managed with considerable ease. I don't usually say things like this, but I hope that vicious critter gets pummled into a tiny, tiny little bundle. There, that's my aggression let out for the evening, and I wish to see this story continued urgently. Well done, Pookey!:anime: :anime: :anime: :anime: :anime:
-Matt A-
PressureCooker
06-05-2005, 10:15 PM
Common now guys, you need to look past meerly hating Riles to see the actual dynamics he has in this story. It takes quite a bit of skill to replace a villan like Slade with an even worse one, like Riles. Quite a good job you've done here Pookerino. I'm really looking forward to the next one.
And now that thats all been said... Damn I hate Riles!:mad:
Your fan,
The Cooker
starfire0639
06-06-2005, 11:32 AM
Yay I snuck on comp one last time and I just had to reply to my dear freinds jyss's fic! I read and must reply....Riles is an evil bastard...But I'm geussing everyone knew that.:sweat: Its like he's inflicting pain for fun.Which is plain scary.As for Robin I have a feeling Pookster ain't killing him.I mean he's like her biggest crush.DO not kill the one you love!!.....-cough-And my awkward banter is at a close.Good day people:p
Ash-meister,fellow renegade master
Matt A
06-06-2005, 06:34 PM
It takes quite a bit of skill to replace a villan like Slade with an even worse one, like Riles.
That was my point.;)
-Matt A-
Angel'swings
06-07-2005, 04:43 PM
HOLY FISHPASTE..PATRICK..that isn't really from spngebob but.....anyway...WOW robin can't die...It is just wrong! That would be very bad...but just in case...*picks up phone* yeah i would like a dozen white roses, and..that's it....*dials another number*...........................yea can i have a large peperoni pizza with a large soda on the side..thanks...*see people starring*.................WHAT????????????? it is for the Funeral....not really, i was hungry
-Megan
Faethie
06-10-2005, 01:02 PM
WTF?!!!!!!
*jumps up and onto the edge of the cliff*
OK Riles, you've really pissed me off!!!! How could you do that to Robin!!!! DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*pulls out machine gun*
BRRRRRRRRRRRRREERRMMMEEEEBRRRRRR!!!!
DIE You SOB!!!!!
Pookey!! You had me hanging off a cliff...and now I get off just to read that Robin's gonna die?!! OR is dead!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
This is not fun stuff girl!!! EEEEEKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*starts to fall off a cliff* oh no I'm not doin that again! *summons up a vortex* hehehe I think I'll wait in here *jumps into the vortex* oh no...why did I have to create a vortex which I cant control?!?!!! Pookey!!!! Get me out of here and write the next chapter!!!!
Faith
And by the way, if anyone is happy about this situation... *picks up machine gun* you don't want to know what'll happen to you!!!:evil:
Angel'swings
06-10-2005, 03:12 PM
ok, that was interesting, oh and by the way, you will not have to worry about my little sis doing what she did again, I locked her in her room for an hour, and made her promise to NEVER go near the computer while i am on! The last time she did it(before this time) She put a virus on my computer and Destroyed my music files! And i love my music! but forget that. Please post soon!
-Megan
Faethie
06-10-2005, 04:07 PM
oooo thats pretty harsh.
Im referin to you and your sis, by the way;)
Anime
06-12-2005, 03:49 PM
Ch 30 ‘A price will be paid’That was a great chapter title!“SAY IT!”Sounds like someone familiar.;) “Damn it! Why can’t they live through it!? Those puny tameraineins did! Why can’t earthlings live through this!?”haha! That was funny, especially the tamaranian mispelling! You are hilarious!
Pookey
06-15-2005, 08:21 PM
haha thank u thank u! hehe oh the mispelling..heh heh i had no clue so i just wung it hehe yaa i know how to spell it now!! haha ok who knows the spelling of Starfire's real name?? i really need it...b/c well....i cant tell u why but i do need it.....:anime:
Liz-Slade
06-15-2005, 09:12 PM
Hi I love this story it is fun, I like how you have created your own villain, This is good stuff
and about how to spell starfires real name it's Koriand'r hope this helps.
TTFN
Liz:anime:
Pookey
06-16-2005, 12:22 AM
yaaa thank u Liz-Slade!!! woohoo hehe -hugs Liz-Slade- thanks! now to start on my new ch!!!
Anime
06-16-2005, 01:45 PM
Yeah, let's see it!:D *waits anxiously*
Mystery fan
06-26-2005, 07:28 PM
I've been catching up on this story. All I can say is....
This is THE most wickedly awesome, sweetest story I have read so far!!
I love it!!!!!! This is incredible!!! WOW!!!!!
I rather enjoyed the reference to The Princess Bride, and I am starting to see some similarities between the movie and this story. 'The Machine' :evil: and 'The lowest setting' phrase:evil: . I just can't wait!!!!!!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Write more soon!! PLease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Anime
06-27-2005, 09:35 PM
donde esta pookey?:sweat: :p :gir:
Pookey
07-01-2005, 03:19 PM
-slowly comes out of hiding and looks around- whew coast is clear -sees Ash- AHHH!!!! Ash: POOKY!!! AHHH DONT HURT ME! I HAVE THE CH SEE! -holds up ch in air- here here!! ahhh!
-cough- ya anyway yes i finally have the ch srry it took so long i got lazy...and writers block suxs...so here ya go..Oh and if BB seems OOC srry im making him seem smartish ok so ne ne
Ch ‘Friends’
“Raven are you sure you want to do this?”
“No, but I have to. Starfire was a prisoner here for who knows how long, so this is what we must do.” Raven took out a tiny purple gem from inside her cloak.
“Raven, that’s, that’s the gem of…”
“Power, yes Beast Boy, I’m going to give it to Starfire so she will have the greater power, so when she faces Riles,” A lamp from behind her lifted up but then gently settled down, “She can finally defeat him and be rid of her past.”
“But will it be able to work, since…well, she isn’t exactly you and she doesn’t have your powers.”
“No she doesn’t, but these gems you gave me aren’t for my power, they are for my emotions, and you may not know this but Starfire and I are more similar than we seem.”
“How so?”
“Both Starfire and I use our emotions to control our power…and we both have a past that no-one knows about except a few details, and...well…we both carry secrets that no-ones knows about but us.”
Beast Boy nodded his head in agreement, “Raven…It seems that we all our same in ways.”
“How so Beast Boy?” Raven asked as she placed the gem on her sleeping bag and the purple light left Raven one last time.
“We all have out difficult pasts and we all carry secrets, the power thing, well hehe I won’t bore you with that but we all seem to be the same, and you know what,” Beast Boy took Raven’s hand in his and she quickly looked up at him stunned but soon smiled, “That’s what makes us a family.”
“Beast Boy, when did you become so wise?” Beast Boy laughed.
“Raven, Just because I act dumb doesn’t mean I really am.” Beast Boy kissed Raven’s hand stood up and left her tent while Raven began to get a tiny pink tint in her cheeks.
******
Starfire sat outside the small camp they made and watched the stars. She was thinking about Robin and how she would be able to free him and still make sure that the others were safe.
“Hey Star.” Starfire whipped around and was surprised to see Beast Boy crawling out of her and Raven’s tent.
“Beast Boy? What may I ask were you doing in Raven and I’s tent?” Beast Boy blushed slightly.
“Oh uh just telling Raven g’night that’s all.” Beast Boy stood up and walked to Starfire after hearing a small crash come from inside and an even quieter ‘oopps’ follow it. Beast Boy chuckled to himself as he sat next to his friend.
“So, How you holding up?” Starfire looked to Beast Boy confused at his words. Beast Boy smiled, “It means How are you?” Starfire nodded at the comprehension of his words, and let out a sigh looking back up at the stars. There was a pause before she answered the changelings question, but he understood why and let her take her time.
“Beast Boy….” Starfire’s voice was soft, you could tell her sorrow from her words and all the pain she went threw and held inside.
“Ya Star…” Beast Boy looked to the tamaranian, she sighed once more.
“After we are completed with our mission will you still consider me your friend?” Beast Boy looked at her funny.
“Starfire, of course I will, why would you ever think that? Dude, your like my older sister, you laugh at my lame jokes, you stick up for me when Cyborg picks at me, Starfire why would you ever think that you wouldn’t be my friend. You and the other Titans are my family.” Starfire looked to Beast Boy and smiled softly.
“I am silly to ever think of a thought am I not, I believe that the mission is just clouding up my thoughts, I am sorry for ever doubting you Beast Boy.” Beast Boy chuckled once more to himself.
“Your not silly Star, you’re a great person…or alien or…ya…and you have a past far worse than mine heh heh ya and you have the courage to face your past after all you went through to save Robin…Starfire you are far from silly, I think that’s my title.” Starfire giggled and looked towards the green teen.
“Thank you Beast Boy,” Starfire smiled softly then looked in the Boys eyes, a smile was on his face but his eyes said much more, “Beast Boy…something troubles you?” The boy looked down and breathed in.
“I just remembered something that happened to me long ago…It’s not important, no biggie.”
“No…I told you of my troubles and you helped me, please let me be of help to you…” Beast Boy took a deep breath in and nodded his head.
“Well…you see all of us, the Titans, have a past…You and yours, Raven and her father, Cyborg and well I’ll let him tell you his, and Robin we all have a past, including me…Starfire I wasn’t always green…I use to be normal...like Robin, no powers. I had a family, some friends, and a good life.” Beast Boy paused and looked to Starfire, her eyes shinned with care and compassion, “But one day….”
Ha ha I left a cliffy ne ne! –dances around taunting ppl- and I know whats going to happen and u don’t hehe –sees ash and freezes- uhhhhh bye now –runs to write next ch before I die-
Matt A
07-01-2005, 07:06 PM
New chapter! Yay!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Quality Rae/BB/Star interaction! Yay!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Genuinely enlightening conversations! Yay!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Evil cliffhanger! Gah!:eek: :eek: :eek:
I think you get my drift...;)
-Matt A-
Faethie
07-02-2005, 10:07 AM
New chapter! Yay!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Quality Rae/BB/Star interaction! Yay!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Genuinely enlightening conversations! Yay!:anime: :anime: :anime:
Evil cliffhanger! Gah!:eek: :eek: :eek:
I think you get my drift...;)
Yes! I totally agree! Awesome job!!!!!!!:D :D
Ha ha I left a cliffy ne ne! –dances around taunting ppl- and I know whats going to happen and u don’t hehe –sees ash and freezes- uhhhhh bye now –runs to write next ch before I die-Ha ha I left a cliffy ne ne! –dances around taunting ppl- and I know whats going to happen and u don’t hehe –sees ash and freezes- uhhhhh bye now –runs to write next ch before I die-
ahhhh!
Great job-except for the cliffy!!!!!!!!!:mad:
*looks down* ohhhhhh why do you have to do this to me.....Cxan someone please get me down, I mean, up! Help!:sweat:
--Faith
PressureCooker
07-02-2005, 01:57 PM
*sigh* Pookey and her dreaded cliffhangers... *sigh*
Heh, jut messing with ya. Trust me, if anybody knows about cliffys... it's me. It was nice to read another chapter from you. I'm not going to pester you and ask when the next chapter is... (heh, still working out the details on mine:sweat: )but I am looking forward to it! You've really drawn me into this fic... really. So I'm just glad to be able to read it. Rock on Pookey! \m/ > L < \m/
Your fan,
The Cooker
RavenofAzerath~
07-05-2005, 12:06 PM
geee, i was missed....
as i've said before, i've lost all enthusiasm, so all i can say is write more so i can attempt to get it back...
RoA~
Lost All Enthusiasm
rrarbecy
07-12-2005, 04:48 PM
Hey, Pookster. Good to see you have written some new chapters.
TORTURE FOR ROBIN!!!! CHEMISTRY BETWEEN RAVEN AND BEAST BOY!!! This is why I love this story. Wonderful work.
Pookey
07-18-2005, 01:28 AM
here ya go guys a ch happy now ok back to RP after to read...this ch was...eh thats it i cant seem to like this ch i think its crap but maybe ull think differantly i say its crap -shrugs- oh wells here ya go
Ch 3? ‘A Green Background’
“Well…you see all of us, the Titans, have a past…You and yours, Raven and her father, Cyborg and well I’ll let him tell you his, and Robin…we all have a past, including me…Starfire I wasn’t always green…I use to be normal...like Robin, no powers. I had a family, some friends, and a good life.” Beast Boy paused and looked to Starfire, her eyes shinned with care and compassion, “But one day….”
Beast Boy sat beside Starfire looking at the stars, he was about to spill his past to his sister like friend, but why was it so hard?
“Well…One morning, me, my mother, and my dad were in Africa…..”
*******
“Garfield!” A soft voice rang out.
“Coming mommy!” A small blonde boy walked to the woman. She picked him up gently and carried him to a field.
“Are you ready to go?” She asked as she walked up to a young man sitting in the field.
“Huh? OH ya I’m ready.” The man got up and walked over to the boy and woman. “And are you ready?” The man poked the little boy’s nose.
“Yes I am daddy!” The little boy smiled wide and reached out his hands to his father. The man took the little boy then ruffled his hair.
“C’mon kiddo, lets go inside.” The man took the woman’s hand and led the way to the large building out past the field.
The building was well hidden from the public, since it was in the middle of Africa and it was in a deep forest…that and no body knew of it since it was just recently built. The couple and boy waked in and headed down a hallway.
“Daddy…where are we going to?” The little boy asked tugging on his shirt collar.
“Down the hall, its ok don’t be scared Gar.” The little blonde boy nodded and the man set him down gently.
“Daddy…what will you be doing?” Garfield searched around as he walked the long hallway and running up to the woman.
“Mommy…” He tugged at her pants leg and started biting his nails.
“Yes honey?” Looking down and smiling.
“Is daddy going to bring out that scary machine again?”
“I don’t think so sweetie, don’t worry everything will be ok I promise.”
“Ok mommy.”
“Dear…it’s time….”
“Yes darling, but are you sure he can…”
“Ya, he can handle it….Garfield! Come on over here trooper.”
“Daddy…that machine scares me. I don’t want to go near it.” Garfield poked his head out from behind a desk.
“It’s ok son…It won’t hurt you, now c’mon.” Garfield walked out from behind the desk and slowly made his way to his parents. “Now sit up here on this table right here.” Garfield sat down biting his nails. “Ok hold still, you won’t…...”
“DEAR!!!” Then a loud explosion was heard. Garfield covered his head and screamed loudly, his parents shouted and then barrels began to shake and started to fall. Garfield curled in a ball on the desk and shut his eyes yelling, his parents never made a sound after that. The barrels that feel and burst as spilled out large dangerous amount of chemicals everywhere, Garfield was now covered in the liquids and then everything went silent.
“M-Mommy….D-Daddy?” Garfield whispered, but he was never answered.
“Mommy, Daddy?” Garfield began to grow even more worried, and peeked out from his ball. As he opened his eyes he saw the most horrific sight a child could ever witness. The table he was sitting on had collapsed and was now on the ground, and in front of him were his parents…
“My...my parents were…” Beast Boy began to cry for the first time in front of someone in a very long time. Starfire hugged Beast Boy and he cried on her shoulder. He couldn’t continue it pained him too much but he knew he had to.
RP YAY!! haha
-pouts-But you won't kick my ass. I'm to cute.-smile-And gods its a mairacle! You got up and without a single grunt or curse under your breath! And I must touch...I was told not to..And you know full well that I don't handle objection well......-cough-I'm right here. And ha! I got me a point!And I must know!...-looks up at the bow and grins bringing her hand a tad closer but...-*glares at Pookey-What the hell was that for!?
i know u dont thats why i have to keep u in line so dont touch anythign -glares-
......This ain't no girl fight dude. Just me and Pookey rp-ing......-nudges jyss-You remember what were rp-ing right? The dude and the m-pre...ya that...-Jyss nods-Ok ya-looks at the readers-We ain't kicking each others ass!...Just threatening to in an uncivilxed manner.
of course i remember why would i forget its u that would Naturo -crosses arms- that and she cant kick my ass (laughign)
starfire0639
07-18-2005, 07:51 AM
Ah short chapter.But goos still.So no worries k?:) And I so have something to say to this....
RP YAY!! haha
i know u dont thats why i have to keep u in line so dont touch anythign -glares-
....But I'v never actually broken anything...just used objects for very wierd reasons....Hehe. And anyway I don't you keeping me in line bishi!-pokes you in the nose and turns away-
of course i remember why would i forget its u that would Naturo -crosses arms- that and she cant kick my ass (laughign) ......I can't yell if its true....Damnit...And I so can kick your ass baka! Just not now cus...-points-Cus that. Your own damn fault.....-turns around and sticks tounge out,walks away-
PressureCooker
07-18-2005, 10:11 AM
this ch was...eh thats it i cant seem to like this ch i think its crap but maybe ull think differantly i say its crap
Good grief! Pookey is suffering from PC-itis. A rare and sometimes fatal condition that makes a writer think the produced chapter is subpar... but far from it. The only known treatment is to continue writing and listening to the praises of your readers.
So please Pookey, listen to us when we say your stuff rocks. For where would we be with out it? Lost... Most assuredly lost.
Rock on! \m/ >L< \m/
Matt A
07-18-2005, 06:47 PM
My thoughts exactly...except for the fact that I would have called the disease "WM-itis".;)
So, yeah, that was a good chapter, even when considering it's been so long since the last one...;)
-Matt A-
RavenofAzerath~
07-19-2005, 09:58 AM
My thoughts exactly...except for the fact that I would have called the disease "WM-itis".;)
So, yeah, that was a good chapter, even when considering it's been so long since the last one...;)
exactlly........and!
....Tell me what? What did Pookey say?....TELL ME THINGS! Or I touch the bow....-walks over and brings her finger an inch away from it-Tell....or I do something to that damn bow it'll never forget.http://www.forums.toonzone.net/images/smilies/evil3.gif And trust me..when it comes to being evil I don't think first bout my actions-Evil smile-
touch my bow and i'll edit the....*whispers* you-know-what
RoA~
:evil:
Pookey
07-31-2005, 01:37 PM
Hi yas srry bout the delay and stuff, I had writes block…and ive been reading fics a lot…-looks over at ash then looks back at audience- SO anyway, ur lucky my dad was an ass and shut off my internet b/c school starts up TOMORROW!!!! –faints- so I decided since no fics –tear- ill write a ch for yas…so..here ya go!
Ch ‘…uh dudes I forgot which number im on and im way too lazy to go back and check so…ya no Ch number I guess –sweatdrop- how pathetic, my own fic and I forget which ch how sad…oh well as long as I have someone reading this piece of crap then its all good I guess…On With The Fic!’
Oh and one more thing…If it seems that this is a BB and Star fic ur off ur flippen wagon and need to be fwaped, they r just friends kk? kk ON WITH THE SHOW….cough BB and Rae!! Woot!
“My...my parents were…” Beast Boy began to cry for the first time in front of someone in a very long time. Starfire hugged Beast Boy and he cried on her shoulder. He couldn’t continue it pained him too much but he knew he had to…sooner of later he would...
“It is all right Beast Boy…” Starfire rubbed the changelings back as he sobbed on her shoulder, she tried to sooth him with word of encouragement and such but he paid no heed, he didn’t need the words he had heard throughout his life. He had heard it enough, but this time...his heart listened to those words, maybe not his ears or mind but his heart did…and it felt warmth…real warmth in a friend.
“…Thank you Star…Thank you.” Beast Boy wiped his tears from his face and sat up, giving Starfire a reassuring smile that he would be ok.
*****
“The test subject…he seems….”
“He’s just unconscious…leave him be for a few hours then we can try once more.”
“But…but sir…he is just a boy…”
“Are you defining my orders?......Are you standing up to me?”
“No…No sir, I would nerv….GAH!”
“Do you know what happens to people that stand up to me?”
“No…sir…I-I do not…I am sorry sir please do not harm me!”
“Oh…I’M not going got harm you….”
“You’re…..you’re not?...Oh Thank You Sir!”
“Heh…I said I wasn’t going to harm you…I never said that you would be free.”
“……….” The poor man’s eyes shot wide open in fear
“Guards…take him to room 210 please….”
“NO PLEASE! NOT THAT! PLEASE!” A door slammed shut and nothing else was heard except the small chuckle from the man who was now standing over a small beaten boy.
“You….Robin, from Earth…will have a very interesting week ahead of you…very interesting…”
Robin lay there…still and unmoving, as the man above him began to laugh uncontrollably.
*****
A bird chirped softly as the morning sun began to rise in with the morning, a fire was started and three friends sat and ate a peaceful meal awaiting a companion to awaken.
“Odd...Raven is usually the first one up…weird, she still sleeping?”
Starfire giggled, “Yes, it seems our friends Raven has done the ‘sleeping in’ but I do suppose she needs her sleep.”
“Heh, then you better warn B to stay away from Raven…” The three friends looked over to Raven’s tent.
“Damn bird….Go to hell why don’t you? What time is it?…damn…how I hate mornings…” She rolled over pulling the sleeping bag she was using as covers over her head trying to block out the bird and rising sun. Then as soon as the bird came, it left. “Finally...” She drifted off back to sleep and her thoughts floated to a certain green boy. All of a sudden she felt heated breath upon her neck. “What the…” She turned and was met with teeth, large teeth that were pointed, the animal snorted hot air onto her face and she stared….the animal opened its mouth and looked as if it were to attack but instead began to lick the girls face as to say ‘good morning!!’
“Guh…Beast...argh…Beast Boy stop! AH!” Beast Boy stopped licking the pale girl and she glared.
“Hehe...Sorry ‘bout that Raven...I couldn’t resist…” His hand was behind his neck and he smiled nervously.
“Were you that bird as well?” She wiped her face off that was covered in slobber.
“Yep that was me...OW! What was that for?” Beast Boy rubbed his sore head as Raven stood up and left her tent.
“For waking me up…and for your stupidity…”
“But I didn’t do anything….yet…at least…I don’t think I did…Did I?”
“Yet...is the keyword.” Raven crawled out of her tent and squinted her eyes as she yawned.
“Good morning Raven, did you sleep well? We are very sorry that Beast Boy has stirred you from your slumber.”
“It’s ok Star…I needed to get up anyway…” Raven sat beside her friends and pulled her cloak around herself.
“Ya want some breakfast Rae?” Cyborg handed her a plate as Bee smiled beside him.
“No thank you, ill just make myself some herbal tea.”
“Suit yourself.” The friends began to chat amongst themselves when the wind began to pick up.
“Huh, that’s weird.”
“Yes, it is oddly peculiar, the windy season of this planet does not come for many moons. We must hurry into a safe haven till this wind dies down.”
“All right you heard the lady, get in the T-ship we can veg-out in the lower part, there’s food and more room to crash in there.
“Sounds good Cyborg! Got any tofu? Ow…not again” Everyone began to climb in the ship except Starfire.
“Starfire…you comin’?”
“I will shortly friends. I must check up on a certain…object before I enter, please, I shall return do not worry.”
“All right Star hurry back this wind is becoming strong.”
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