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decka
12-07-2004, 06:19 PM
Ok so this is my first fan fic. It is kinda short but whatever. I can't spell for my life so if like every other word is spelled wrong I very sorry!:( Well this kinda sucks so please tell me if you like it and if I should keep writing.



Chapter 1


Star fire woke up to see snow falling out of her window. She smiled and got out of bed. She soon found it very freezing and rapped herself up in a warm blanket. She flew down towards the kitchen, on her way there she saw an asortment of green reefs and pretty red bows hanging up against the walls. Once she got to the kitchen she saw that the other titans were already there. She sat down beside Robin at the table and watched Beast Boy and Cyborg put up decorations.

"Why does Beast Boy and Cyborg hang those green plants up around our home?" She asked Robin curiously

"It's Christmas Star." He answered her. She looked confused. Robin noticed that his alian friend had no clue what he was talking about. "It's a holiday."

"It's only the best holiday ever!"Cyborg intrueded their conversation.

"Ya! It's where this old, jolly, fat guy called Santa Claws, comes on a sled with flying raindeer and go every kids house, going down their fire places delivering toys and stuff made by little elfs in the North Pole. But if your bad you get a lump of coal." Beast Boy explained.

"I wonder how many lumps of coal you have?" Raven said lifting her head from her book.

"Why do you have to be so grumpy? Lighten up, it's the holidays you know, and if you don't you'll be the only one getting coal here!" Beast Boy didn't want Raven's attitude bring everyone else down especialy at Christmas.

"I hate th holidays. It's a waste of time, and every year I get a..."sniff"..cold. Besides there is no such thing as Santa Claws."

"WHAT?!?! You dare not belive in Santa!? Santa is so real and you too belive in him! You just don't want to say cuse you want to be little miss darkness!" Raven just ignored him.

"Um, sorry to intrupt but I still don't understand. How can a larg man fit down such a small place and how can he visit every childs house in just one night? How can raindeer fly and what are elfs?" Star took a deep breath "I just do not unserstand how all of this can be."

"That's the magic of Christmas! You don't have to get it, just belive!" Star still was confused but decided she got enoughf of it celebrate the holiday with her friends. Then she notcied a small strang plant that Beast Boy was hanging above the doorway.

"What is that?" She asked him.

"This?" He looked up and smiled "This is a mistletoe. When two people stand under it they have to kiss. I think Robin could explain it a little better to you." Robin looked up and gave Beast Boy a look

"Why could Robin explain it better? Robin?" She looked to him for the answers. Star fire was completly culess to the situation Beast Boy had just put the boy wonder in

"Um...well......" Just then the alarm when off, Thank God Robin thought to himself as all the titans rushed to see what was the trouble.


Well thats the first Chapter! Tell me what you guys think!

Starrysky
12-07-2004, 06:32 PM
Yay! Another Christmas story!:D I'm writing one too. It's pretty good, exept when you spell Starfire the first time you spelt it like Star fire. It flows pretty well, if a little fast. Other than that, it's wonderful! I'm a critic, sorry if I might be a little harsh.

Yay1 First post! :D *dances*

Sproxie
12-07-2004, 06:41 PM
Hey, This is a good start! i actually really like this! Please finish this soon! but about the spelling..... I can't spell for my life so if like every other word is spelled wrong I very sorry!:( yea....:sweat: You should send it to someone for help with your grammer if you want. and this story does NOT suck, please post more soon!

decka
12-07-2004, 06:50 PM
Oh my gosh!! I'm sooo happy you guse think that!!! I hope to post more of the story soon!

Crowgirl
12-07-2004, 06:53 PM
THis is great! Everybody do the Mexican Hat Dance in celebration!

Duh nuh, duh nuh, duh nuh nuh nuh duh nuh! Hazzah!

Sorry.:sweat: But this is great, just use spell check.

Welcome to high society Decka! (Funny, I have a friend named Becka....) Ah well.

decka
12-07-2004, 06:55 PM
By the way I read What is love? It is really good! and you weren't harsh at all!! Thanks I know I need to work on my spelling Im Dyslexic so thats really hard for me to do. Anyway it's not an excusse but that's kinda the reson why I have trouble but I do try! Do you know how hard it is to be in high school and not know how to spell maybe without takeing the time to think about it? Anyways I like to get off topic alot. So I'll try and check my spelling next chapter!

Crowgirl
12-07-2004, 06:59 PM
Yeah, you better post more.

raven54
12-07-2004, 07:39 PM
THis is great! Everybody do the Mexican Hat Dance in celebration!

Duh nuh, duh nuh, duh nuh nuh nuh duh nuh! Hazzah!

Sorry.:sweat: But this is great, just use spell check.

Welcome to high society Decka! (Funny, I have a friend named Becka....) Ah well.
Mexican hat dance? O_o That's it, I'm fairly sure most people here (including me) are at least halfway nuts.

OOOO!!! more christmas spirit! Wilkommen to the forum, Decka. This is a good first attempt! A bit more description and you'll have a nice fanficcy on your hands... which, of course, tends to bring rabid fans... Don't worry, though, they only bite when posts are few and far between.

If spelling isn't one of your strong points, don't hesitate to PM what you write to somebody. They'll give it the once-over. I'd be happy to, if you choose that route.

decka
12-07-2004, 07:52 PM
what do you mean PM

Aquagirl15
12-07-2004, 07:55 PM
word and spell check keep people knowing what's going on in my fics. i have horrible spelling too. :sweat: nuther X-mas story YAY!!! keep going this seems intersting. and funny, especially Star's cluelessness. :D MORE!!!

PMing is like e-Mailing cept it's through the site. PM stands for private message. look under PMs in User CP and click send messags. sinch when you get the hang of it. ;)

decka
12-07-2004, 08:00 PM
cool! So who whats me to pm them my story????

Star_Fire_Chick
12-07-2004, 08:47 PM
greatr job so far keep on work with the spelling dont worry i cant spell ether:sweat:

decka
12-07-2004, 10:12 PM
Hey!!! sorry I'm taking so long to post I just finished ch.2 and I need raven54 to help me with my spelling.

decka
12-07-2004, 11:10 PM
raven54 where are you with my chapter????????

raven54
12-07-2004, 11:17 PM
:sweat: sorry dude, just got on. Though if ya leave a bit more time is between chappies, ya get more responses. Not a lot of time, mind, just say... post everyday you can at like 5-ish. When there's loads of ppl on. no one'll get bored, trust me.

decka
12-08-2004, 10:45 AM
Chaper 2



"It's a bank robbery." Robin anounced as they all gathered aroung the screen. "It shouldn't be to bad. Titans, Go!" He yelled his catch phrase.

"You'd think he would have thought of something new by now," Beast Boy whispered softly to Cyborg.
The Teen Titans arived at the bank with just as the robbers were leaving.

"Where do you think you're going?" The robbers froze "Titans GO!" Robin shouted. The criminals tried to run out the back door but were stopped by a blast of starbolts. Starfire stood before them ready to fight. One of them pulled out a gun and started shooting at Starfire. She dodged all the bullets before the gun was whipped out of the man's hands by a bird-a-rang. The robber turned around to see Robin's fist coming towards his face. He was knocked out cold. The men looked around for a way out but all exits were blocked. The scared men started to panic. Raven then picked them up with her powers and turned them upside down. There they waited until police came to pick them up.

"Well that was quick! And with just enough time to buy a Christmas tree!" Beast Boy said happily as he walked into a coveniently-placed tree shop.

"What's a Christmas tree?" Star asked. Robin pulled her aside to explain.

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At the Titans Tower all the Christmas decorations were done on the inside. Beast Boy had gotten tangled up in a mess of lights that were supposed to be for the outside, but it didn't look too hopeful. It didn't really matter; Cyborg had already made a huge mechanical Santa Claus. Beast Boy had made a runway for Santa's sled on the roof. The Tower was completely ready for Christmas inside and out. Raven sat in a big chair with a box of tissues.

"I hate the cold." Raven said, then sneezed into a tissue and threw it in the garbage.

"It does seem cooler to me." Robin observed his surroundings and then went back to him work.

"The heater's at the same place it was before." Cyborg checked just to make sure it hadn't dropped. It did seem a lot colder than before. Beast Boy had managed to untangle himself from the lights. He sat up and looked at the clock.

"Well it seems that we have enough time left tonight to do a little shopping!" Beast Boy walked to the door. The Titans got up slowly and followed him to the door.

"Raven, do you not wish to accompany us on our journey to the mall of shopping?" Starfire asked with concern.

"Not really." Raven then saw the sadness that came over her friend. "It's just I *sniff* feel sick." Raven hugged the blanket around her.

"Are you sure?" asked Robin. He didn't want her to go if she wasn't feeling well, but he also didn't want her to feel like she wasn't wanted.

"No, no, I'll be just fine," Raven replied. She really wasn't in the mood to go shopping; actually, she wasn't really ever in the mood to shop. Anyways she really didn't feel well and thought it better to get some rest instead.

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At the mall the Titans split up. It was Beast Boy's idea; he didn't want anyone to know what anyone else was getting from him. Star was somewhat worried about this plan. She really didn't know her way around the mall. Once she and her friends had gone their own ways she thought of what she would buy her friends. She pondered this about it for awhile. She would head over to the video game shop to get Beast boy and Cyborg's presents. She always saw them playing thoses kind of games; however, as many times as her friends tried, she just couldn't get th hang of playing them. Star then passed by the book store. She went in, Raven is always reading thoses sad books, she began to look for a book for her friend. She all of a sudden felt cold shiver go down her back. It scared her. She wrapped her coat around her tightly. She bought a book called Poetry for the Tormented Soul and left the store. It seemed colder than before. Allright, I have Beast Boy, Cyborg, and Raven down. Now what would Robin want? She really didn't know. She wanted to get him nice. He had always been there for her He deserves something wonderful, she thought to herself.

Cyborg and Robin had found each other and decided to search together. "So, who do you have left to get presents for?" Cyborg asked.

"Just Star." Robin was obviously deep in thought. " I really don't know what to buy for her. I want to be really special." Cyborg gave Robin a look.

"Something special, eh?"

"It's her first Christmas and I want her to remember it." Cyborg grinned at his friend. He knew that Robin really cared for the girl, so he knew this must really be important for him. Cyborg checked his watch.

"It's almost 9:00, we better go home." He annouced.

"Right." Robin pulled out his communicator, "Beast Boy, Star, it's late. We're going to go home now." Robin put his communicator back in his pocket as he and Cyborg went to meet with their other friends.


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sorry that the fighting seen was so short. I hope you guys like this chapter. And many thanxs to raven54!!!

Star_Fire_Chick
12-08-2004, 02:45 PM
More More More!

starfire0639
12-08-2004, 02:49 PM
i love it please do write more:anime: and once again with the robin starfire thing thats always fun:D

Aquagirl15
12-08-2004, 04:35 PM
oh! this is good.:D i love how you did the Robin/Star thing a different way than other people. in this fic it's kina growing and in others it's already established.(no offence :sweat: ) the idea of Robin andStar needing to get each other something specal was good too. ;) lovin it keep going!!!

Sproxie
12-08-2004, 06:02 PM
I like this story alot! please post another chapter soon!
(well, what else is there to say?) :sweat:

Starrysky
12-08-2004, 06:21 PM
Niceness. :anime: You've got a good grasp of the Star/Rob relationship building. Just a bit more action and a pinch more descripsions and you'll be set! :D Keep on posting! :D

decka
12-08-2004, 07:03 PM
I'm working on the Chapter now. I really hope that you everyone is enjoying reading my story as much as I love to write it!!!

decka
12-08-2004, 07:04 PM
I know I need to write more detail, I'm just not very good at it. I'll try and add some more in this new one though.

Starrysky
12-08-2004, 08:37 PM
Godspeed and Good Luck to you!:D And yes, I love reading this fic! :anime:

decka
12-08-2004, 11:01 PM
Ok, I tried really hard to make this one have more detail but I don't know if I did enough. So just tell me what you think and be honest.

Chapter 3



It has begun to snow when the Titans had finally arived at their T-shaped home. It was a long drive from the mall back to the tower and it was a peaceful one. The whole trip there Cyborg was complaind about the tree being on the roof of his car. He had suggested the Beast Boy walk home with it, but Robin informed him that Beast Boy would freeze if he had to take the long journey home carrying the huge tree they had just bought. Cyborg still thought his idea was better but didn't protest for much longer after that.

After walking through the metal doors all the titans separated.Beast Boy had rushed to his room, giggling with exitement with all his presents he had gotten at the mall. Robin and Cyborg went off to do their own business while Starfire checked on Raven. Star hated that her friend was sick during such a glorius holiday. She knew Raven didn't like to be disturbed when in her room; she was always so dark and mysterious around them. She knew Raven felt alone a lot of the time but she really wasn't. If she could only open up to her friends about her feelings Raven might not feel so rejected. Star walked up to Raven's doorway and knocked. There was no answer so she knocked again. This time she heard a muffled "Come in...". Raven throat had become sore and her nose was very stuffy, so when she talked Starfire could barely hear what she was saying. Star opened the door and looked around friend's room. It, too, was quite depressing. The room was painted dark and she had creepy artifacts hanging around. The scary setting made a chill go down Star's back as she hovered over to her friend. Star could barly see beneath the mountain of tissues forming on the bed. She brushed them aside and sat next to a half-asleep Raven.

"Raven, I came here to ask you if you might need anything?" Raven didn't answer at first. Star put her hand on her friends sholder which made Raven looked at her concerned friend.

"Herbal tea...and some more blankets. It's so *sniff* cold in her." Star nodded and got up. When she came back Raven was already asleep so Star just placed the tea on the bed side table, and laid the covers over her poor sick friend.

"Please feel better," Starfire whispered as she quietly let the door close so as not to disturb Raven's sleeping. I do hope she is well before the Christmas had ended, Star thought while floating through the halls. She went towards her room. She was freezing and desperately needed a jacket. She put on some warm clothing and headed downstairs. In the living room she found her other friends. They too were bundled in winter wear.

"How's Raven doing?" Robin asked in consern.

"She is sleeping but I fear this cold of hers has gotten worse."

"I hope she's not too sick to miss Christmas."

"Ya, I would so hate it if Raven's mean comments and rude attitude weren't going to invade Christmas."Beast Boy said sarcastically.

"Come on on BB, why you got to hate on Raven so much?" Cyborg asked. He hated that the two of them could never seem to get along.

"She started it," Beast Boy almost whispered.

Star sighed. She knew that Beast Boy and Raven were different but did they have to be so mean to each other? Especially when one was not even there to defend herself? Star sighed again. That time she thought that she could see her breath for a moment, but then turned her attention to the T.V. that was on.

Tempratures have droped to 12 degrees and, from the looks of it, within a day or so we will be below 0. This is definitely going to be the coldest winter Jump City has ever seen, or felt...

"Wow, is it really that cold?" Robin asked.

"It feels like it." Cyborg rubbed his hands together to keep warm.

Starfire just looked out the window. There was snow everywhere, and the sky was all gray. Everthing seemed to be getting worse. She didn't want to rember her first Christmas as cold and gray. Was this not supposed to be a holiday of joy and togetherness? Nothing seemed to be going her way at all. Then as she looked out the window she saw something that caught her eye. It looked almost like a man flying in the sky. She then heard a faint sound of laughter. She blinked and he was gone. She decided it was her imagination playing tricks on her. All of a sudden she felt a hand on her sholder.

"Are you ok?" Robin asked, worried about how his friend felt.He knew this wasn't the kind of Christmas that she had hopped for. Starfire turned to him with a fake smile.

"Everything is just glorious!" she said, trying to sound happy. Robin just stared at her, he knew her better than that; besides, she was a horrible liar.

"Starfire, don't lie to me. I'm your friend, you can tell me anything." He gave her a smile. She looked at him and then moved her eyes to the floor.

"It is just, I feel that things are becoming worse and worse, and I am doing nothing to stop it." Robin looked in her beautiful eyes. They were beginning to fill with tears.

"Star, that's not true at all..." Robin started to say but was interrupted by Cyborg about what was on T.V.

"You gotta check this out," the robot called for them to join him. Robin took another look at Star, she smiled at him and flew to his side. They walked together to go see what Cyborg was yelling about. Everyone had gathered near the television as Cyborg turned the sound up.

"You think that could be a little louder?" Beast Boy said jokingly

"Shhh.." Cyborg said angerly not taking his eye's ok the T.V.

This just in! The mall had just been covered with snow that came from a recent snow storm, locking all people inside until a rescue team could come and set them free...It only took an hour to get to the doors of the mall open after the shoppers had been locked in. However with in this short time, every single person was frozen when rescuers got inside.

"So what so big about that? I mean everybody's freezing in this weather." Beast Boy didn't understand why he had to be listening to this when he should be getting ready for Christmas.

"It's not done yet, just listen," Cyborg said, getting impatient.

...every shopper has been frozen soild with a thick layer of ice, and by the looks on their faces someone or something has caused this to them....The inside of the mall looks exactly like the outside. It was covered with snow and ice, like the storm had gotten inside. However there was no reported damage to the building that would have let the storm come through.... All the people seem to still be alive, but doctors don't want to work on them with the risk of killing the frozen patient by mistake. Scientists are on their way now to help come up with plan to de-frost the shoppers without doing any damage to them.... Many people have been saying that this event that has just happened is conected with the strange weather Jump City has been having....We now turn to the Teen Titans to help solve this mystery, capture the criminal that has caused such chaos, and cure us from the cold before it is too late....

At that Cyborg turned the televion off. Everyone in the room (even Raven who had gotten out of bed to see what all the commotion was about) was stunned and horrified. In the report they had shown the poor victim's faces one too many times. Every person had been frozen with a scary petrified look like they were dying some horrible death. None of the titans talked for a moment before Beast Boy interrupted the silence.

"Wow, it must really suck to be them." The titans glared at him for making such an inaproprate comment. Robin then got up and stomped out of the room with an an amazed but angry look on his face. Starfire followed him slowly after he had left.

"Was it something I said?"

"Shut up Beast Boy." Raven couldn't bear his stupid remarks any more so she teleported herself back to her room. Cyborg watched her go through the floor, then he got up like his friends before him, and without a word he gave Beast Boy an angry, disappointed, almost sad look before he turned his back on him and walked out of the room. Beast Boy sat in the room alone in silence, besides Cyborg's metal feet echoing throughout the hallways. When it died out Beast Boy sat up.

"Just great," he said and walked towards his room kicking himself for ever even saying anything at all. Everything was always his fault, he was always messing up some how. Beast Boy thought angrily. He looked at the decorations he had put up on the hallways not to long ago. They weren't merry like they were before, lighting up the halls with joy and filling everyone's heart with Christmas spirit. No, now they were dark, gray, and cold like everything else in this stupid place. He stopped at his door, his eyes filling with tears of hate, anger, regret, and sorrow. He stepped into his room, slamming the door behind him so hard that the reef hanging on the wall fell down. It sat there in the cold silence until it was broken by a horrible laughter comming from a figure standing in the distance.

That's right, Titans. Feel my icy hatred. Before you know it your whole city will.

And with that the figuare vanished, and it began to snow.

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Alrighty! All done here for awhile. So what ya think??

starfire0639
12-09-2004, 12:31 PM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay im first to post hahaah booyah all of yall but hey let us now be serious*stands up strght and straitens her coller*cough*good job!!!!!!!
i love the fic do write more soon and thats all for now tehe:D

Lord Welshi
12-09-2004, 12:58 PM
Much better. Descriptions are bteer, the characters are acting more true to themselves, and this mystery villain see,s (dare i say it?) cool. *da dum dum!*

Nice work.

Lord Welshi

Starrysky
12-09-2004, 04:47 PM
Much better! :D You have exellent diescriptions, and you portray the characters very well. There were only 2 words near the beginning that were misspelled: complained and here. Other than that, keep on writing! :anime:

Star_Fire_Chick
12-09-2004, 05:06 PM
ya!much better!

Sproxie
12-09-2004, 07:01 PM
I agree with everyone else, it is MUCH better with alot more discription! please post soon!

decka
12-09-2004, 09:31 PM
Ok so it really might take awhile to get in the chapter. I am really depressed right now about alot of things in my life that is interfering with my writing. I'm really sorry about this. I have been really, really selfish so I just wanted to tell all of you who have read my story and for all who gave my such great encourgement, thank you sooo much. You guys really do make a difference when you do that kind of stuff. I got to go, I love you guys so much!

decka
12-09-2004, 09:43 PM
I'm really, really sorry!!!:crying: Thank you sooo much for putting up with me

starfire0639
12-10-2004, 03:35 PM
but decka where are you going*sniffles*are you leaving for a mlong time i hope not cus having you aorund is good fun!i do hope that you arnt leaving forver and i hope that all of your problems get cleared out of the way and you get better soon!!!!!!miss you already decka!!!!
-ash:D

decka
12-10-2004, 05:11 PM
no I'm not leaving just need some time. Love that you care bout though:)

starfire0639
12-10-2004, 05:24 PM
no prob its not that hard to care for a friend:D

decka
12-10-2004, 06:27 PM
or robin *wink wink*! lol! Sorry starfire0639 but it was just so tempting to say! You know I love you!!

starfire0639
12-10-2004, 09:03 PM
:anime: you turd hahahahhaha yes it is not of a lot of hardness to care for my robin tehe hahahahahaha great now you got him in my head ok ill be imagining him for the next hour or so hehehehehhehe-daydreaming-thanks alot dekka!!!:anime:oh um in case you guys dont know not like you wouldnt cha!robin(in rp)rey is my bf woohoo!hahahaha and dekka is teasing me:sweat: hahahaha ok ill stop now*cough*and luv you to dekka!!!!!:D

Aquagirl15
12-10-2004, 09:11 PM
ok i'm not gonna ask.:rolleyes: anyway i hope you feel better soon and we will miss you while you're gone. did that conversation have something to do w/ the fact that star0639 likes Robin a lot?

starfire0639
12-10-2004, 09:19 PM
hahahahahaahahahaha yes that was of what the conversation was about thanks alot dekka!!!:anime: and robin is rey my bf ok ok everyone knows when i say robin thats rey ok evryone got that ok good!:D

decka
12-10-2004, 09:28 PM
hehehe! Well that was fun! Anyways i am better now HORAY! So i ,with the help of my trusty team, will hopefully get the chapter thing out soon. And starfire0639 I just want to say that you are the asomest person ever since ever!!! Talk to me soon!
-luv deming

Crowgirl
12-10-2004, 10:22 PM
Yay! You're better!! Celebrate!!

Your descriptions were WAY better, I loved all the detail in it. Who's the ice guy? He reminds me of that Green Christmas Guy from 'The Year Without a Santa Claus'. YOu know, the guy that sings 'I'm mr. White Christmas, I'm Mister Snow. I'm Mister Freeze Miser, I'm Mister -1....'

decka
12-10-2004, 10:37 PM
Hey! everybody deming needs to study! The knowlage for mid-term are what I'm lacking, so writing the chapter is what I've been slacking. So deal for now don't have a cow. Just think of poor me, a failing grade is what I see. Putting it off till I'm at home, now I'm going to end this poem.

Sorry but I have been saying that I need to study for a long time and well I feel that prograstination isn't the best path to take now. So with the tests on wensday I really screwed. So sorry that I can't really work on the ch. and sorry about the poem. I just felt like being creative with my excusess! Please don't lose interest in my stroy like i do when people don't post for a really long time and then half to re read but it just isn't as good as the first time you read it....i'm just rambling so I'll stop talking now.sorry agian!!!!

and ya kinda like him as you will soon see. But different

starfire0639
12-11-2004, 05:02 AM
gosh darnit i just posted but my frekn comp didnt take it oh well guess it wasnt worthy for the posting forum oh well dekka stop embarressing me inf ront of my i dont know if they really are and welcome if yu want to friends!:sweat: hahaha and yes i ahve fixed the whole confusion thing um look foward to a cityofdarkages coming to a forum near you:D hell be joining doon yay!ok um thats bout it ok byez!oh yeah i go there

Starrysky
12-11-2004, 10:07 AM
Take your time! :anime: I know the feeling of being pressured because I have finals all next week...:crying: Oh well...I try to have fun while I can...:) :anime: :D

starfire0639
12-11-2004, 09:23 PM
DECKA GUESS WHAT!:p

decka
12-12-2004, 06:03 PM
What?????

starfire0639
12-12-2004, 07:48 PM
hehehehee i finished the chapter thingy!email me and ill give it to you!:D

TerraWHRobin4
12-12-2004, 09:16 PM
wow, you're doing a great job!!!!!!! i cant wait for more!:D

decka
12-12-2004, 09:20 PM
Thank you! Thank you! It really is nothing. Anctully it is alot of hard work to please all guys!! But you know it is really worth it in the end just to know that you guys like it! *sinff* you guys are the greatest! hehe I'll try and post more soon but I am unfourtunate to be haveing writers block at the moment:( . Oh well

Starrysky
12-12-2004, 09:25 PM
*takes up heroic stance* I will help you defeat the writer's block! *takes a 39 and 1/2 foot long sword and jams it into the fearsome creature* :D

Starrysky
12-12-2004, 10:04 PM
50th reviewer's post thingie! yay! :D (I just had to do that...hehe.):anime:

decka
12-12-2004, 10:09 PM
lol! And congrade's to u!!! Thank you for killing the oh so fursterating wrtiters block! You are my hero!! lol

TerraWHRobin4
12-12-2004, 10:25 PM
you can kill writers block?????:confused: :confused: :confused: :confused: :confused: *confused* oh well....

Starrysky
12-12-2004, 10:27 PM
Yes, you can stabb it and also do other sorts fo fun stuff to it. :D :evil: :D It's very fun when it has been annoying you for awhile...:evil:

decka
12-13-2004, 12:02 AM
OMG it is like 12:00 and I am sooooo bord! I can not get to sleep. ug! I just had to let u all know. Hey! all the people who are reading my fic I am supper sorry that I still haven't posted yet. The next chapter will be here soon! VERY soon! In the mean time you can tell me just how much you love reading this fic! lol anyways um hope you have liked it so far! I promise I will get more of the story here as soon as I can!

TerraWHRobin4
12-13-2004, 10:23 AM
In the mean time you can tell me just how much you love reading this fic! lol
SOMEBODY is self centered! j/k decka!

decka
12-13-2004, 12:39 PM
hehe maybe just a little but hey arn't we all?

starfire0639
12-13-2004, 06:48 PM
Im Not!booger!well Ya I Am Just A Lil But Hey I Should Be!that Way Everyone Knows How Wondeful I Am Before They Get To Know Me:d

decka
12-13-2004, 07:38 PM
Sure thats defintally how it works, hehehe, I'm just kidding!

starfire0639
12-13-2004, 07:50 PM
decka!!!!grrr hahahaha ok um do you need some more help b4 you post the thingy cus i can so totally help im kinda trying to procrastinate writng my fic:D so any help washing the grass painting the walls i can so do that as long as i dont have to write my fic:crying:

decka
12-13-2004, 07:55 PM
Sure love u to help! You know I need my room cleaned and I have homework to be done too, I'm only trying to help you.:D

starfire0639
12-13-2004, 08:13 PM
well i already hel;ped you with half of it what did you do with the stuff i sent to you women:sweat: !!!hahahaha ok um thats bout it:D

decka
12-13-2004, 08:16 PM
I have it I need to make it longer though. You see I havn't posted in like forever and I don't want to give them a short chapter, unless they want me to. It would take less time if I just posted the one thing.

starfire0639
12-13-2004, 08:39 PM
okokok um can i see it before you post it peas!!!!!!!!!!!!!:anime:

decka
12-13-2004, 09:20 PM
Sure you can see it. And agian SORRY THAT I HAVEN"T POSTED!!!!!!! I still don't know if I should just give you guys on little chapter. Or make you wait for something bigger? You tell me what you want

decka
12-13-2004, 10:03 PM
Hey I need some help! I have this little chapter and I need to have it spell checked and stuff so I need a volenter who wants to help me

starfire0639
12-14-2004, 02:57 PM
ME DARN YOU I WORKED MY FINGERS TO NUBS WRITNG THAT DANG REPORT THINGY YOUD BETTER POST IT*cough*but otherwise that being said id love to help!:D

decka
12-14-2004, 03:44 PM
I am using it! Calm yourself chid. I meant about the Spell-check and stuff and I have raven54 doing that for me anyways. She is being really nice by doing that and so were u when you helped me on chapter! I love all the people who are helping me and I am very, VERY thankful

starfire0639
12-14-2004, 04:38 PM
i know im just so very wonderful aint i:D j/k

decka
12-14-2004, 05:54 PM
Hello everyone!!! I have put off this chapter to study for mid-terms, so sorry it took like forever to get it done. I know it is very short but as I said I was studying. So before I start I just want to thank all the people who helped me with this fic. I still wouldn't of had even this much done if it wern't for you guys! Ok now here chapter everyone has waited so long to see!

Chapter 4



Robin stormed into the room, knocking over various objects that had the misfortune to be in his way. He was angry, especially of how stupid he was to not have thought of this. So many people were injured, and they might not even get out of that ice casing alive, because of him. There was a psycho monster on the loose and everyone was looking up to him, everyone expecting that he would fix this mess…and save them. What the hell am I supposed to do? He shouted in his head, slamming his fist into the desk, leaving a sizable dent in it. His train of thought was lost as he heard a small, timid knock upon his door. He knew who it was, but he wasn’t in the mood to talk…not now. Starfire cautiously opened his door, peeking her head though the small opening that she had made. When she saw that he didn’t move, she opened it all of the way and slowly walked over to Robin, her concerned look plain to see on her face. Robin didn’t raise his head, nor did he acknowledge that she was even there. He stubbornly fixed his eyes in the middle of his desk, where the dent was, and hoped that she would just walk away. Starfire lifted off of the ground and flew across the gap in order to avoid the debris that was scattered over the floor.



"Robin, I know that you are upset, but please do not worry we will find the...thing that has cause damage." Robin turned to look at Starfire staring at him with increased intensity.

" Starfire, there's a madman on the loose, and we have to stop him! No more people can get hurt....we need to find a way, Star..." He had become strangly angrier as the word came out of his mouth. He clenched his fists with frustration. He noticed his fists were shaking; it had become so cold in his room all of a sudden.

"Robin it is not getting angry that can fix this."

"Star theres a freakin' ice guy terrorizing my city and you're worried about me being angry?"

"But......" thrown back by Robin's yelling, "but we...I just want to help you." Starfire looked down trying not to cry.

"How?" Robin said coldly. He didn't know what they were going to do about this and it was pissing him off.

"Well I saw this, this man in the sky and.."


"You mean you have seen this guy in action?" He said grabbing her arm. "Why didn't you tell me before?" Star move his hand off her and began to back away.

"I'm...sorry."She whispered. Now with tears rolling down her face she flew out the room slamming the door behind her. Robin stood there in his cold, dark, room alone.

"What the hell is wrong with me?" Robin thought out loud as he looked at at where Star had stood. Then he moved his eyes to the mess he had made in his room. Why did he get so mad a Starfire? She had only wanted to help. She only wanted to help...Robin thought this over, and over again. He sat back down in his chair and sighed. He brushed his hand over the dent he had made in the desk and thought about how he was going to apologize to Star. He got up and looked out the window. He could barely see the harbor though the fog that had placed itself over Jump City. He thought about Star again. He decided that he better apologize for all the heartache he had caused her. He slowly walked towards the door avioding the items he had scattered through out the floor. He looked back one more time out the window's winter seen before departing. As he closed the door behind him he smiled, Well at least the fog is clearing up.

Ok done. Well what did you guys think???

Starrysky
12-14-2004, 06:03 PM
Yay! :D More niceness. :cool:

One thing: cause damage

to

caused this damage

or

caused all of this

Crowgirl
12-14-2004, 06:06 PM
Not bad...

I like how Robin got angry, and then looked at himself. It was a nice touch.

I only wish it had been longer...

decka
12-14-2004, 06:13 PM
I know but the next one will be longer I promise! I just didn't have time to write a whole long chapter. I am REALLY sorry about the shortness of chapter 4!!

raven54
12-14-2004, 06:16 PM
whoa, chill. you didn't have much time to do it in... nicely done. You post pretty often so you can probably get aways with slacking on chapter size:anime:

starfire0639
12-14-2004, 06:51 PM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay and did i metion yay! YOU GO DECKA!its ya bday go decka it ya bday heck ya!oh and i so love the parts that i know i helped you weith there was a bit of heart in evry sentence hahahahahahaaha and i will so help you with the next one to if you want you know i will so defiintly say yes:D

decka
12-14-2004, 06:53 PM
hehehe of course!! How could I say no to you?

starfire0639
12-14-2004, 07:00 PM
by saying no:sweat: hahahahahahahah j/k yay go decka that was a superb chapter i dont care if its short or not it was awosme!

decka
12-14-2004, 07:32 PM
lol thanxs! I just hope everyone feels the same way

starfire0639
12-14-2004, 08:17 PM
UM LIKE TOTALY DOIY OF COURSE THEY WILL!of course theres a bit of critiscm here and there but thats only to help out right?:anime: and plus what more do you have to do to make an even cooler story than this?not much:D

decka
12-14-2004, 09:59 PM
Thank u!:anime: Soo...not alot of people have been posting but maybe it is still to early to get worried, well if u have read this than please do post about it. I want to know how I'm doing,do u like the story so far ,what I need to improve on, anything will do. I am here to learn as well as write u know. Well talk to you all soon hopefully

oneeyemonkeypie
12-15-2004, 08:25 AM
You two are gonna get way yelled at if a mod ever sees this. They don't like conversations, oa you've already got a page worth. I'm just trying to keep you from getting in trouble, that's all.

My $.02; use PMs. Then you'll be fine.

decka
12-15-2004, 01:51 PM
Oh sorry didn't know:sweat: I'll stop now

starfire0639
12-15-2004, 04:06 PM
me sowwy monkey:sweat: ill stop to:D

decka
12-16-2004, 04:10 PM
Hey everbody I bet that chapter didn't keep u occupied for too long eh? Well i'm working on the next one and I'll make sure it is longer

starfire0639
12-16-2004, 06:31 PM
yaya cant wait!:anime:

decka
12-18-2004, 12:31 AM
OMG!!!!!! My stupid computer turned off while I was writing the chapter!!!!!!! And my comp. dosn't save your work when stuff like this happens I am going to have to rewrite the chapter all over again!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to cry right now. I just can't belive it!!!!! So this means that the chapter will be dealed just a bit unless I can type it up real fast tomarrow....I don't know right I am to angry to think.:mad: :mad: :mad:

Pookey
12-18-2004, 08:10 PM
I'm sorry decka:( ...if it makes you feel any better, I just lost Ch.3 in my fic, too.

Hope you can rewrite it even better than before, it always seems when you rewrite stuff it turns out better than before. ;) good luck!

decka
12-18-2004, 11:22 PM
I'll try...I'm really sorry you lost your ch. too. I sucks dosen't it?

Pookey
12-19-2004, 01:10 PM
yeah it does suck, I had to bang my head on the keyboard a few times before I rememberd the 1st half of my fic. But I rewrote it and its now up. Hope you have better luck.

decka
12-19-2004, 01:36 PM
Don't count on it. I am going to deticate at least part of the day to re-writeing this fic. I'm really not in the mood to write though so I'm really hopeing this wont take to long. Maybe you'll get the chapter today...I hope( most likely no so..SORRY!!)

starfire0639
12-19-2004, 11:29 PM
hey im back!decka im so sorry bout your chapter but knwoing your work itll be awsomer the next time round so dont worry lil one as for the chapter 3 thingy its kinbda funny cus im writng it right now so i hope reading the post doesnt jinx me by having my chapter disapear in a horrible computer crash!:sweat:

Star_Fire_Chick
12-21-2004, 04:15 PM
sry about you chapter,but so far i love it i cant wait till you write more!

decka
12-21-2004, 05:05 PM
Ok I have this ch. with just Robin/Star in it. I don't know if I should just post it or write anonther seen with other titans. :sad: I just don't know...

starfire0639
12-21-2004, 08:26 PM
decka!-rolls eyes-doiy star and robin rock and if you had a whole chappie sorounded by them that would be fascinatingly wowish:D that would be if you could keep the whole story up without making it dull which in this case where i know what in it i dont think youll have a problem:anime:

decka
12-21-2004, 09:12 PM
Ok here we go! This is only Robin and Star so sorry. Also is short. I keep forgetting to save it before I stut down my computer. Oh well hope you like it.

Chapter 5

Robin walked the halls of the tower in search for Starfire. He had taken advanteg of that time to think of how he was going to apoliize to her. He really didn't have an excuse for what he did to her. He didn't even know why he had yelled at her. She didn't desever it, that was all he knew, and he was going to make sure she did too. But why he lost control still taunted his mind, but he shook it off. Robin thought of where his aline friend would be. He decided tht she would most likley be in her room and started to head in that direction. He let his feet guide though the house untill he found himself faceing Star's door. He raised his hand to knock and then paused, he sighed slowly and knocked tree times on her door. He waited but nothing happened. He pressed his ear agaist the door. It was freazing and quickly pulled his head away. He leaned in again makeing sure that he didn't touch the door this time. He listened to see if maybe he woud hear her in there. Robin heard a faint noise, it sounded like she was crying. He looked down at his meatle plated shoes. He knocked again, this time louder so that he new she would hear him. He waited for alittle longer but still no answer. Is she ignoring me? Robin thought getting frustrated. He knew that she was in there and he was pretty sure that she could hear him. Robin knocked again even louder, the noise echoed through the hallways.

"Star?" He said from outside."Starfire open up it's me." Robin didn't wait this time. He decided that if she wouldn't let him in he was going to have to let himslef in. He raised his foot and did a kung-fu kick at her door. The door opened and a shocked Starfire quickly ducked out of the way as a Robin flew inot her room. He crashed on her soft carpeted floor as Star quickly flew to assist him.

"You are not damaged?" Star bent down on her knee's to look him in the face. Robin put his hand on his head. After the room stopped spinning and he relized what had happened he answered her.

"Ya...I think so." He sat up staright his hand resting on the carpet that had broken his fall.

"Robin..." Robin looked at her, a consered look fell upon her face.

"What is it Star?"

"Robin...well I wish to know. Why did you try and kick my door open?" Robin looked shocked for a moment. He looked at the door and back again. He looked somewhat trobeled as he thought of how he was going to answer that.

"Well Star, I really don't know. I gusse when you didn't answer...I kind of got frustated, and well..." Robin didn't know how to explain it to his friend, he bearly even knew why he had done it.

"You decided to relase yor frustration on my door." She answered for him. He smiled and laughed at himself somewhat embaressed. Star didn't smile or even look at him. She just walked over to her bed and sat there quitly. Robin got up from the floor and fallowed Starfire to the edge of her bed. He put a hand on her sholder. It was cold but Robin didn't take his hand off her. She looked up at him. He stared into her face. Her eye's were red, and her cheeks were glazed with tears. Robin felt a wave of sorrow fall over him. Had he made her cry this whole time?

"Star I'm so sorry." He looked at her face for some sign of forgivness, but Star turned away from his stare and focered her eye's on her knee's. She ignored his pleas for forgivness, and refusd to speak to him or even look at him. Robin didn't know what to say to her to make her feel better. He had never felt so helpless to a siuation before. He reviewed through is mind all the thigs he could say to her, but nothing seemed to work. He sighed.

"Star please. Wont you even look at me?" Star didn't move, she seemed not to even hear him. "Star you know I never ever meant to hurt you?" Star turned to him, she glared and said in a calm voice

"Then why did you?" Robin started to answer but stopped. She sighed and turned to back to her knee's. Robin put is arms behind his head.

"You know what?" He asked Star but she didn't look up. "For someone who usally have all the, I really don't know how to answer that." He laughed at himself and turned to his friend. She tried not to laugh too but it forced itself out of her. She felt her laugh turn in to a short sob. Star felt like crying once more. Her eye's burt from the single salty tear that rolled down her face. She suddenly felt a Robin's had pull her face away from her knee's, and stop as her eye's met his. Robin looked at his dear friend's saddened face. He smiled and gentally whipped the tear away from her cheek. Star looked at him, her beautiful eyes gazed at Robin's.

"Oh Robin..." Star said about to cry. Before Robin could answer Star wrapped her arms around him and began to sob solftly on his sholder. Robin was suprised but then smiled and inbrassed her warmly letting her cry out her feelings on him. Her skin against his was no longer cold but warm and forgiving. Robin and Starfire sat there for only a few minutes but it seemed like an enterity to them both. Star's tears had slowed down and she looked up at Robin. She began to speak but Robin gave her a look like he already knew what she was going to say. She just smiled insted. They got up in at the same time, and walked slowly to the door leading out of Starfires room. Robin was half way out the door when he turned back to Star.

"Your alright now?" Robin said to the redhead. She nodded. "About before, Star I didn't mean to..." She smile at the boy wonder.

"I forgive you." She said. Robin smiled back at her.

"Good night Robin." Star gave him one last smile as she shut the door behind her. Robin stared at the door still smiling.

"Nigh Star." He whispered, then walked towrds his room.



Now that we're done with that, I would just like to say that this really wasn't supose to come off like they are in love with each other. It is supose to be more like to friends that really care for each other expressing their emotions just a little more openly. I don't mean that they don't have feelings for each other, just that they haven't really expressed it much and I'm not going to start like they already had a relationshi started. Ok just had to make sure you all knew that!:D Later!

starfire0639
12-21-2004, 09:36 PM
lol!i got ya kinda like mine excpet in it star doesnt really understand her feelings yet and robin just has his boyish dreams hahahha i got what your goin for!i like it decka gottsa have more soon tho:anime:

Star_Fire_Chick
12-21-2004, 10:40 PM
i loved it but there were some spelling errors (dont feel bad i cant spell well at all)but otherwise great job!:D :sweat:

starfire0639
12-22-2004, 01:33 AM
gosh darnit i posted and it didnt go thru!oh well go decka!woot woot write more and i wish there would be a slap across the face or soemthing but oh well its your fic you do what you want*sniffles*:crying:

Pookey
12-22-2004, 10:14 AM
aww decka that was sweet. I really liked it! I can't wait for them to showe their feelings, it will be sooo adorable! ok enough with the mushyness for me! aw heck! I loved it! please update soon!

P.S. about the saving thing. Just put a sticky note on your computer screen, reminding you to save. It works!

decka
12-22-2004, 09:43 PM
lol I'll remember that next time:anime: . As for starfire0369, I am sure that you will find space for a slap in your fic. Slapema!;)

Star_Fire_Chick
12-23-2004, 10:36 AM
I cant wait for the next chapter!

Crowgirl
12-23-2004, 07:04 PM
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Diddo!! A very emotional scene indeed...

July 16, it comes...

decka
12-23-2004, 07:07 PM
July 16 what comes??

Adrastea
12-23-2004, 07:08 PM
July 16, it comes...

Ooh! Ooh!! I know what you're talking about!! But I won't tell, just in case you're keeping it as a suprise or something. Do YOU know what she's talking about? Hm?

decka
12-23-2004, 07:10 PM
No!! please tell me!!

Crowgirl
12-23-2004, 07:26 PM
GAH!! I jammed my finger in my basketball game today, it kills...

You have to guess Decka, here's a hint.

What is awaited all over the world, yet when it comes the world only wants what comes next?

decka
12-23-2004, 07:32 PM
A new chapter!? I don't know?? I suck at riddles, even the easy one. It's sad I know. Sorry bout your finger though.

Crowgirl
12-23-2004, 07:45 PM
Not exactly....But I bet Unix already knew/knows.

decka
12-23-2004, 07:56 PM
Not exactly....But I bet Unix already knew/knows.
Unix?? Whatever, but still why wont u tell me? Is it a new story or something??

starfire0639
12-23-2004, 08:04 PM
evil riddle hmm well whoever figures it out ill pay ya big bucks if ya tell me:D

Adrastea
12-23-2004, 08:04 PM
yes, a new story, but of gargantuan importance to the survival of mankind.

Sproxie
12-23-2004, 10:04 PM
Ooh! Ooh!! I know what you're talking about!! But I won't tell, just in case you're keeping it as a suprise or something. Do YOU know what she's talking about? Hm?You know, i'm really good at bribing people...
I'll tell you the names of the episodes in season 5 if you tell me. :evil:
Please? :crying:

decka
12-24-2004, 02:43 PM
OMG OMG OMG!!!! Everybody LOOK!!!!! Ok so I am on this TT drawing bord cuse I draw and junk. Anyways so I see this REALLY cute thing and you all NEED to see it!!!!! Ok here it is, hope u all enjoy it!:D :D :D

http://www.sergioquijada.cl/teentitans/ecard.htm

it's done by J. Torres, so horay for u J. Torres whoever you may be!!

Ok about my story, I am goning to do my next chapter after X-mas, so sorry for the wait! Love you all!!-Deming:anime:

starfire0639
12-25-2004, 06:01 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!!! Everybody LOOK!!!!! Ok so I am on this TT drawing bord cuse I draw and junk. Anyways so I see this REALLY cute thing and you all NEED to see it!!!!! Ok here it is, hope u all enjoy it!:D :D :D

http://www.sergioquijada.cl/teentitans/ecard.htm

it's done by J. Torres, so horay for u J. Torres whoever you may be!!

Ok about my story, I am goning to do my next chapter after X-mas, so sorry for the wait! Love you all!!-Deming:anime:aaaaaah you turd i was gonna tell evryone! and hes the drawing guy for the comic hes like so totally rad!ok well as decka said go check it out its so cool and funny and winter spectacular-ish:anime:

decka
12-25-2004, 06:27 PM
Hey everybody!!!! Ok so I'll start on the chapter after x-mas. It's alsomt over so that that will be soon. In the mean time you can gaze at a picture I did for all of you!! It isn't exactly realated to my story, but I was thinking of Christmas Angels and wouldn't it be cool to draw one. So I did. It's Star as a Christmas angel!! Horay! So hope you like it!!:D

http://oekaki.titansgo.net/main/pictures/517.png

starfire0639
12-26-2004, 01:43 PM
thats adorable decka and i cant wait till the next chapter ya gotta help me with mine!:anime:

decka
12-26-2004, 01:49 PM
Sure!! PM me it later!:anime: oh and thanks for likeing much pic!

starfire0639
12-26-2004, 02:42 PM
well um decka thats the thing um....i have nothing to pm you:sweat:

Crowgirl
12-26-2004, 03:48 PM
Three things.


*Cough* SPAM *Cough*
When's the next chapter coming out? I'd love to know...:evil:
Here's another hint to my riddle: She likes to create this 'art' in cafes
Have fun!

Crowgirl

Adrastea
12-26-2004, 05:48 PM
Aw Crowgirl, you're being so mean. Just because they aren't as obsessed with it as we are, doesn't mean we have the right to torture them with their own non-obsessedness. Hang on a tic, yeah we do.

You know, i'm really good at bribing people...
I'll tell you the names of the episodes in season 5 if you tell me. :evil:
Please? :crying:
There's a season 5? but the last thre episodes in season 4 are called Teen Titans The End Part 1,2,3. Or something like that. I don't believe you. Nice try though, so no, bribery won't work.

Here's another hint, when you finally figure it out you're gonna go "DUH!!!" and hit yourself on the fore head.

Anyway, it's after Christmas, and I see no new chapter!:D Nah, take your time, we'll wait.

Crowgirl
12-26-2004, 06:10 PM
Aw Crowgirl, you're being so mean.
Sniffle, I was just having a little fun..... BUT I'M STILL NOT GOING TO TELL YOU!!!!:evil: I'll give you another hint though, and just for fun, I put it in verse:

Thy creator of these
Made three good movies
Directed by two different directors
But there will be more
They're now making number four
Like the others, it's bound to score

Corny, I know. But hey! I'm bored.

There's a season 5? but the last three episodes in season 4 are called Teen Titans The End Part 1,2,3.
Are you sure? I don't think there is a season five, although somebody on this thread made a petition to make more of Teen Titans. BUT THEY SHOWED A PREVIEW FOR THE NEW EPISODES TODAY!!!! YIPPEE!!!!

Crowgirl

decka
12-26-2004, 06:25 PM
I know!! did u see Raven as a bunny??? I almost died it was to cute!!!:anime: :anime: :anime:

Star_Fire_Chick
12-26-2004, 06:48 PM
omg i saw it.that was so cute!i was so ready to die that was amazing!

starfire0639
12-26-2004, 09:47 PM
im not sure ya it was totally cute !but if its gonna be the end then i want the future episodes to like sum up the titan venture not have like nonsense stuff liek that that doesnt really build up to the plot...........whoa i got like totally buttish just then

Crowgirl
12-27-2004, 09:21 AM
So... you have absolutly no idea there is a season five. Am I right?

And while I'm here, when's the new chapter coming?

Crowgirl

starfire0639
12-27-2004, 11:54 AM
i donno all i do know is i went to a site and it said yes aasked around said yes then went to other sites and they said yes so in my mind no matter how dense it may be i have a yes according to the fifth episode!and yes deckas when is the next chapter commn out:anime:

decka
12-27-2004, 12:20 PM
I preety sure theres a season 5. They already have the names for the epidoes on some websites so ya I think there is going to be.

As for my chapter, well I'm writing it today cuse on christmas eve and christmas I was kinda spending it with family so I didn't do it then. It will hopefully be out soon though.:anime:

Crowgirl
12-27-2004, 05:38 PM
Can you give me the names of the sites? I'd appreciate it.

Crowgirl

decka
12-27-2004, 08:43 PM
I can't remeber what they are, maybe I just saw season 4's name instead I really don't know. I thought that they were seanson 5 but now that I think about it...oh well. I'm sorry I can't remeber:(

Crowgirl
12-28-2004, 04:14 PM
Okay, I am not sure this is true, but seeing the preview a couple of times I predict these things:


Mas y Menos are really short (about up to Aqualad's knees)
I think there's another robot like Cyborg in season four.
The next episode premiring is Bunny Raven, yet I believe Cy may start/partly turn into a dog.
Cy is a key factor in season four.
So is Mumbo.
That's all I got, anyone else wanna contribute?

Crowgirl

P.S. When's the next chapter coming?

P.P.S. SO this doesn't count as spam, I'm gonna say this is sooooo sweet!

starfire0639
12-28-2004, 11:20 PM
Okay, I am not sure this is true, but seeing the preview a couple of times I predict these things:

Mas y Menos are really short (about up to Aqualad's knees)
I think there's another robot like Cyborg in season four.
The next episode premiring is Bunny Raven, yet I believe Cy may start/partly turn into a dog.
Cy is a key factor in season four.
So is Mumbo.
That's all I got, anyone else wanna contribute?

Crowgirl

P.S. When's the next chapter coming?

P.P.S. SO this doesn't count as spam, I'm gonna say this is sooooo sweet!yesh i have seen the spanish dudes and they are short they speak only spanish with no sub titles i dont know bout the robot i do know that in the comercial b blood looked like he was half while fighting cyborg i saw the comercial and i saw cyborg as a bear and he spoke in english and was wearing a tutu iv seen mumbo and that brother blood guy in the comercial so those are two of the baddies

decka
12-30-2004, 01:42 PM
Sorry I haven't posted a chapter in a while I have been trapped in a box;)

Star_Fire_Chick
12-30-2004, 02:01 PM
very funny decka trapped in a box

decka
12-31-2004, 12:09 PM
Okidoik! So I have the chapter almost done just got to edit it. oh and GUSSE WHAT!?!?!?!?!!?! I have been nominated to represent Florida in the Natioanal Student Learders Councile in Washington D.C.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! am SOOOOOO exited I get to meet leaders of our country and other contries, AND I get collage credit's and recamendations!!!!!:D :D :D

starfire0639
12-31-2004, 01:49 PM
yay!go decka im so proud of you and i know your going to have tons of fun!make me proud girl!and once again im realy proud of you!:anime: -your bud ash

decka
12-31-2004, 08:45 PM
Ok everybody I have a little chapter ready to go. All I need is raven54 to PM me back the spell checked one and I'll post it. It is kinda cruddy but it will do.

decka
01-03-2005, 12:05 AM
Ug. I have offically lost my writing talent. I swear. Ayways here is the long awaited chapter


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Chapter 6

Beast Boy lay on his bed and was deep in sleep when his stomach woke him up. He ignored his empty stomach until he couldn't stand the sound of it growling any longer. He sat up on his bed and soon wished he hadn't. A freezing breeze was blowing across him. Beast Boy wrapped his blanket around himself. He looked at the clock, it read 4:30. The changling sighed and slowly rose. He truged out of his room down the long halways into the kitchen. He was suprised whe his saw Raven sitting on couch drinking some herbal tea.
"Raven?" Beast Boy asked sleepily, not knowing if he was dreaming or not. Raven turned around and sneezed.

"Hmm?" She said with some effort.

"Why are you up at this time of night?"

"Same as you, I couldn't sleep." Beast Boy nodded and went to the refrigerator. He opened it, but then quickly closed it. The light had taken him by suprise; this time he opened the door very slowly so as not to be blinded. He searched for his tofu. When he didn't find any he became angry.

"Where the hell is my tofu?" He yelled, slamming the fridge door. Raven looked at him, shocked at his sudden outburst.

"Calm down Beast Boy, it's not that big of a deal." Beast Boy turned and glared at her.

"Yes it is Raven! How would you know?"

"You don't have to get so angry."

"And you don't have to tell me what to do!"

"Could you not yell? I came here to feel better, but your really making it hard for me to do that." Raven was also getting angry. She was beginning to also get very cold. In an attempt to keep warm she tried tugging her cloak closer around herself but it wasn't working.

"What is your problem? Why do you always have to be so selfish?" Beast Boy's hands were in fists now and he was breathing heavily.

"I am not being selfish!" Raven felt her voice rising. She was also standing now.

"Yes you are Raven! You are always being so selfish! Your only ever thinking about you!" At that, Raven cracked. The dimmed lights shattered above the two teens' heads. Beast Boy had jumped out of the way, and Raven had made a forcefield with her powers, blocking the falling glass. Random objects were flying thrugh the air.

"Raven, stop it!"Beast Boy half-pleaded as he dodged a lamp that crashed into wall behind him. He yelled at her again to stop it, and was answered by the half circle couch. The couch hit him and he was flung backwards. He tried to get up but the couch had landed on his leg and he couldn't move it. All the commotion had woken up the other titans, and they all had come sprinting into the room. They were all stunned at the scene that was before them. Raven was on her knees, while Beast Boy managed to get the couch off him but still couldn't get up. Cyborg and Starfire had rushed over to the injured Beast Boy. Robin walked over to Raven. He stood before her and asked in a confused voice

"What happened?" Raven didn't answer

"Raven, please tell me what happened." Raven looked at him, tears running down her face. She quietly whispered something that Robin couldn't hear. He leaned closer to her so he could understand what she was saying.

"I..." Raven started,"I don't know."

"Raven, you have to tell me what happened. I can't help you if you don't tell me whats wrong."

"Beast Boy...he was yelling and..and he said I was being selfish. I just lost it. I'm sorry... didn't mean to lose control." She looked over at Cyborg and Star who were helping Beast Boy up. "I'm so sorry." Raven began to cry again. Robin comforted her as best he could but he wasn't very good at it. Starfire flew over to them and started talking to Raven. The words seemed to comfort Raven. She stopped crying, and Starfire led her out of the room. Robin looked over to where Cyborg and Beast Boy had been but they weren't there. He figured that Cyborg had taken Beast Boy to the infirmary. He scanned over the mess of a living room. He moved his eyes over to the Christmas tree. Many of the ornaments were scattered around the room and all the lights were broken. He sighed and started heading to his room. Robin knew that this ice man had something to do with why everyone was acting so weird. How else could he explain why everyone was losing control of their emotions... but how could that be? This villain can control ice, not people's feelings. Robin's train of thought was interrupted when he bumped into his bedroom door. He opened the heavy metal doors and stepped into the room. He walked over and sat on the egde of his bed. He relized that he was extremely tired and lay his head down on the soft covers. He turned his head to get comfortable and found himself looking at the calendar. He stared sleepily at it, then looked in amazment at the date. He got up and walked over to his desk. He found a red pen, and crossed out December 24. Robin put the pen back and let himself collapse in fatigue on his bed. He quickly feel asleep hoping that Christmas Day wouldn't turn out to be a disaster.

Pookey
01-03-2005, 01:25 PM
ohhh that was good, no great, no(place big adj, here)
congrats. decka! im so proud of you! yippie!
i heard that the ep. 'The End 1-?' are just titles, they don't mean that its the end. i heard there was going to be a season 5 too. all i heard.

decka
01-03-2005, 01:57 PM
You gusse I have some REALLY bad news. You see my grandmother is staying with us for the holidays. Well she fell and is at the hospital. They sowed up where she was bleeding, and are now checking for internal bleeding in her head. I really hope she dosen't die. My god I feel like crying, I got to go, sorry.

decka
01-03-2005, 02:25 PM
horay she came back! And so soon!:D !!!!She has stapels in her head, but other than that she is fine and dandy! Horay!!!

Crowgirl
01-03-2005, 03:43 PM
I have been nominated to represent Florida in the Natioanal Student Learders Councile in Washington D.C.!!!!
Oh. My. God.

ME TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Except, I'm doing it in Waltham, it's too expensive for us. I want to do CSI!!!

I loved the chapter and the thing with Raven. That was nicely done. WHo says you lost your talent?

Can't wait for more!!

Pookey
01-03-2005, 05:40 PM
yeah, im glad your grandmother is ok decka!!! :anime:

you never lost your talent...you still got it, b/c that ch. was awesome

decka
01-03-2005, 07:26 PM
lol thanks! Oh and to crowgirl, I am doing the one for the arts. It would have been soo cool if I would have met you:crying: . But don't they have meetings in DC for all the people who do it or something like that?

Starrysky
01-08-2005, 12:59 PM
Hi Decka! :D You have definatly not lost your talent. You are a very good writer. It was a little sketchy near the beginning, and it went a little fast. Besides that I don't have anything to nitpick about. :D Good luck with your writing!

TerraWHRobin4
01-09-2005, 09:27 AM
nope, you sure haven't decka! keep posting!!!!!!!

(pm me or im me when you get the chance i have something to tell you!)

starfire0639
01-09-2005, 03:05 PM
http://www.geocities.com/poppinscop13/nwing1.jpgrock on demming your fic is totally awsome!:anime: hehehe hotty-not you him

decka
01-09-2005, 03:08 PM
Hahaha!

Pookey
01-21-2005, 06:50 AM
hehehe, you guys are awesome!! Decka, I can't wait for more!! so I will wait right here for an update, eating cookies, starburn1116 gave me!! yummmm!!!