What is Love?:A Teen Titans Fic

[Starrysky]

Hi! :D *looks around and sees no one's there* uh....well...Hi! Anyways! This is my first ever TT Fic! :anime: It's my only very first fic! :anime: So...I would absolutely love feedback from anyone who has stumbled across this! Please reply...please?:crying: Well, on to the story! Oh, and sorry for the extremely short Prologue! :(



Prologue




What is love? This one question plagues the minds of teenagers, and there are a few teenagers in particular that seem to be having this trouble. The superheroes and even idols to some, They are the Teen Titans...




"Trouble!” Robin exclaimed to the half-awake Titans. He stepped out of the shadows of the hallway and entered into the red light, cast by the alert/alarm. He scanned through the information and then turned his head toward his crime fighting companions, “Cinderblock has shown up near the power plant at the edge of town.”





“Dude!” exclaimed Beastboy, “How many times do we have to beat this guy?”





“As many times as it takes.” Robin replied simply.





After an uncomfortable silence, Raven asked in her usual monotone voice, “Shouldn’t we be leaving now?”





“Teen Titans…Go!” Robin shouted his trademark phrase.







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“I always have overestimated them….” A figure in the darkness said, making his voice drag out creepily. “What a pity they have never met up to my expectations…” the figure’s voice paused dramatically, “But here comes another test…perhaps the last…”







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The Teen Titans rushed out of the car, looking for any sign of Cinderblock in the dim light that the just rising sun gave them. Suddenly, a glint of silver crashed into the T-car, crushing it into about the thickness of a quarter and slamming it into the wire fence, which buckled under its weight.





“Oh man…not again!” Cyborg whined.



When the blur of silver stopped, they could see a hand, belonging to Cinderblock.




“Whoa!” Beastboy exclaimed. “Looks like the block’s got an upgrade!”





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This is an exteremly crappy chapter to me...but I don't know...respond and I will. :sweat:

[moro loci]

It has potential. needs more detail though. But nevertheless a good start. More please! :anime:

[T.T.Raven4]

Detail. More of it. That's all I gotta say, cept, write more.

[Sproxie]

It has potential. needs more detail though. But nevertheless a good start. More please! :anime:I agree

[Matt A]

I third that motion. It's still shaping up to be pretty cool, though.

[raven54]

i call fourth-ies!!

[Crowgirl]

6th post on the thread!! WOOOO HOOOO!!!!!

I fifth the motion, I wish you could have been a little more descriptive in characters and motions (movement). But the title of your fic is one I would love to know the answer to....

[Lord Welshi]

I sixth that idea. PRomising start, more detail and this'll be one to watch.

Lord Welshi

[Starrysky]

:D I have replies! :D On the first day I posted it! :D And I got 6 reviews!:D :D :D :D By the way, thanks for the comments, I'll try to make the chapters more desscriptive...:sweat: Anyways, I'll try to have the next chapter out by tomarrow...I hope...:anime: Thanks again!:D

[moro loci]

Dude, I am as happy as you are. I started a chain of agreement. hee hee, but I am not plotting to steal your thunder so I will but out now. :sweat:


P.S. Write more please! :anime:

[Raven13]

hey pretty good for your first my is ok (the name of mine is Jackie) pretty much wat everyone else was saying a bit more detail ;) and also tey making the font at about a 2 or higher it is kind of hard to read. any way i like it keep writing!!:D

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Starrysky]

I can't post yet...:crying: I need to do some projects, study for tests, do essays, and whatnot, so I'll try to post soon...but school comes first.:crying:

Die! *stabbs homework with a pitchfork* :sweat: Sorry about that...Now what was I doing?...:evil: Ahhhhhh! *screams as homework rises and starts to chase her* :eek:
(I wrote this at 5:00 in the morning after I had chocolate cake and chocolate syrup, and chocolate icecream....beware of sugar...)
:D

[moro loci]

ooooooooook. I have learnt that lesson already.

Stay away from that much sugar. :sweat:

[Crowgirl]

Die! *stabbs homework with a pitchfork* :sweat:

I like the way you think Starrysky, I like the way your mind works....

Can't wait for the next post!!!!!

[Raven13]

haha yea i hate homework just as much asu guys do and also yea sugar is any evil thing but very tastey lol
please write more after your homework :mad:

:evil: OR FEEL THE RATH OF MRS. KERGER:evil:
:rolleyes: (haha long story):rolleyes:

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Starrysky]

Haaahaaa! :evil: *I stand victorious over a pile of shredded homework* Haahaaha! :evil: *maniacal laughter continues*

I have taken care of the school problems! :D But I have another problem...:(

:eek: Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh! *a huge story high writer's block comes crashing toward me*:eek:

Help me....Please!:crying:

(I have an idea of how I want the story to go, but I need help doing a few details...Help!:crying: )

[Lord Welshi]

Coursework essays (and homework) are pure evil. *takes sword from wall brackets.* Raaaargh! *stabs essays* hahahahahaaaaa....oh, wait...i'm meant to hand those in....awww, crap....

Glad you got the work sorted out. As i said before, add a bit more detail and this story will be good. Hope you get over your writer's block soon!

Lord Welshi

P.S. here's another lesson, kids! Stay away from alcohol....too much makesh yuo tpye wongr....

[Starrysky]

grrrr....*I take a spare pitchfork and ram it into the writer's block, it cracks, but only enough to let a little ray of insight to shine through* I have an idea for another story! :D Ill still keep on battling the writer's block to strangle some more ideas out of my mind...:evil: Wish me luck! :sweat: Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!:evil: *keeps on battling...*

(Thanks Lord Welshi!)

[Aquagirl15]

i just now had time to read this and i'm glad i did!!:anime: like everyone else, more detail would be nice.;) luckily i have never suffered from writer's block and i do not wish to. i hear it's a horrible thing.:( sugar doesn't make a difference for me. i'm always hyper!!!! LLAMA!! oops that was really random. see what i mean? keep writing or suffer!!!!!!!!!!!! :evil:

[ShadowOfAGhost]

More Detail...

Also, one of the big things I'm into for stories is writing out a general outline for the story and then individual outlines for the chapters before you write each chapter. If you want I can post an example for you. It should realy help with writers block and often prevents it outright.

We need more information about the story line though.

keep working at it, after all this is your first fic and it will be a good chance to gain experience with your tehnique and style of writing.

[starburn1116]

beware of sugar:D
*stares at the empty containers of various sugar filled things*

oops.


anyway
loves the chapter
details are your friend
so is sugar
i would make a list of things that are your friend but last time i made a list bad things happened
continue soon!

[rrarbecy]

This is shaping up to be a good story. I agree with the detail thing. This is also a great subject. I'm sure we all have encountered the "love" question. Everyone has troubles. Am I right...*looks around and sees everyone holding someone's hand* alrighty. maybe I'm alone in that.

[Raven13]

uhhh yea i think i said this before but i will say it agian. Well u do need to brush up on ur writing but everythig else i like. O and i have extra pitchforks laying around (because i live on a farm) just stop by and we can destroy our homework together!!!!!:)

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Starrysky]

I have an idea for a Christmas themed story!:D And I have a few ideas for this story!:D WIsh me luck! :D


Thanks for all of the comments! *Huggles* :anime:

(And the battle rages on between Starrysky and the Writers Block, stay tuned for more updates!)

[moro loci]

Good Luck. God's speed! *salutes to computer screen* :sweat:

[Starrysky]

*sigh* :( I'm am deppressed...*sigh* I have have a great idea but it just doesn't go on the paper right...:sad:


gahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!*takes a spear and ramms it into the blank piece of paper* It's all your fault! gggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

On the other hand, I have the first chapter of my new Christmas story! :D Yay! :D

*looks down at the shredded piece of paper* I'm still angry at you! :mad:

I love to hear some suggestions about anything for either of my stories if you have them! :anime: Please? :crying:

[Pookey]

suggestions...hmmm...CRAP, writers block must be contagious b/c i had a really cool idea. then i went to type it, and it left me. oh well, good luck with your battle, i have mt own to fight *starts destroying writers block with own two hands, "I don't have a pitchfork."*

[Crowgirl]

You guys should try to make one of those climax graphs. Ya know, the ones where you put the line going up, and when the story reaches the climax it's the top, then it goes down again.

Yes, um, when is the next chapter coming? Just wondering.

Oh, you guys with writer's block are kind of lucky. Writer's block can be better than having too many ideas. When you know and think a lot in my school, you are dubbed a nerd. Guess who's a nerd? NERDS HAVE POWER!!

But if you need my battle assistance, my eyes are glowing purple for you.

[Matt A]

Huh, you guys are lucky - I'm having a case of writer's block that's been going for two years! It probably explains why I'm in my third year of some two-year A-Level courses...

As for Crowgirl, if you have too much knowledge or too many ideas - which is impossible, but hey-ho - then just keep it/them to yourself.

[Crowgirl]

Sorry Welshie's Mate, didn't mean to offend you.:sweat:

[Starrysky]

People reviewed…and they like my story!:D So far anyway…. :sweat: Well, since you all are so eager to read more of my story, here’s the next chapter! (I tried to put in a bit more detail…) Thanks for the tips too! I appreciate it! Sorry for it being a little late…:sweat:




Cinderblock started to turn towards Beastboy, who had spoken last. The metal that encased his body flowed with him: it seemed to quench the light that the morning sun tried to shed on it, creating an effect of a shadow around him.



A sudden boom of noise filled the area, courtesy of a few of Robin’s exploding projectiles. With surprising speed, Cinderblock retaliated, slamming his fist into Robin. A muted crack was heard as the fist connected with his unprotected chest. Robin back flipped and crashed into a glass window of a guardhouse nearby, scattering the pieces over his cloak and putting a few scratches on his face and forearms. He landed in a crouch, his one of his arms protecting his eyes and the other resting on the ground. The sun kept on rising, wrapping Robin in shadows and glinting off of the glass.



As Robin was recovering from his fall, Starfire had flown toward Cinderblock. She put her hands together and a large starbolt appeared in her hand. She looked up, her eyes glowing a violent shade of green. She thrust her hands in front of her and let the starbolt fly loose. As it connected with the metal skin, the starbolt grew dark, and then it disappeared.



“Wha-“ she started in confusion, but was cut off as Cinderblock wrenched a nearby tree out of the ground and started to use it as a club.



“Azarath Metrion Zynthos!” shouted Raven as she flung her hand forwards, just barely stopping the tree trunk from colliding with Starfire’s back.



“Keep him busy!” shouted Beastboy.



He turned into an eagle and flew up as high as he would dare above its head; he then changed into a bull, aiming his horns down at Cinderblock while he fell. When his horns connected with Cinderblocks head, a sight clanking sound was heard.



A grin was plastered on the Block’s face, because Beastboy had bounced off of Cinderblock, his horns had failed to pierce its armor. Cinderblock turned his attention back to Raven, who was trying to pull the tree out of his grasp. He wrenched the tree away from her power and swung it down. Raven made an x with her hands, dark energy formed in them, and she slashed them upwards. It slashed off some of the tree, which fell just behind her.



The grin was still on its face. It had an even deadlier weapon now. What was now left of the tree was akin to a spear. He brought the trunk up, aiming it at Raven. A hollow clunk was heard. Cinderblock turned toward Starfire, who had just thrown a boulder at him, in attempt to draw its attention away. The sad thing was, it worked. Cinderblock threw his hand forward and let go of the trunk. It sailed toward her, aiming straight for her heart.


She closed her eyes.









Short chapter and kinda sketchy, but it’ll do… :sweat: Please give me your preferences on pairings! I’m already going to have Star/Robin, but I want to have your opinions on the others. And should I have Terra in this fic?

[Crowgirl]

AHHHHHHHH!!!


What happens next? I need a little more, or a lot. Please post soon!

[rrarbecy]

:eek: Woah! Straight at her heart!!??? AWESOME!!!!!!!!

[Star_Fire_Chick]

:eek: you have to write more!i must know what comes next

[Rae]

Okay, you can't just leave it like that!!! (well actually you can bcoz it's your fic but that is not the point)

You shouldn't really ask people what to put in your story as it's your story and you should make it unique, however i really don't mind what you do so you can ask for opinions if you want.......just in case your interested i believe in Rae/cy and don't realy mind if you bring Terra back or not

*looks over what has just written and thinks that maybe it's a bit long* oh well

[Crowgirl]

i believe in Rae/cy
Fiend!!!!!!!!! You... you.... GIRL you....

[Rae]

Fiend!!!!!!!!! You... you.... GIRL you....

Well i can if i want! You have your opinions and i have mine! Besides i don't mind anyone else pairing up with one of them like your Crow/Cy thing, i just have my preferences!

Back on topic - please update!

[Matt A]

Cool chapter: the action stuff was some of the best written that I've seen for a while, and the cliffhanger...well, that was epic.

As for relationships, do whatever you want. Bringing Terra back would even out the numbers, but that's the only advice that I'm going to offer.

[Raven13]

oooo i like it alot keep written just like Welshie's Mate said the fight sence was exceptionaly GREAT!!!!!:D :) :anime: ;) :p :rolleyes:

~ ~ Raven13 ~ ~

[Sproxie]

Fiend!!!!!!!!! You... you.... GIRL you.... ????
i somewhat believe in the Rae/Cy relationship. but not as much now because of certain stories i've read somewhere else. *shudders*

I agree with Welshi's Mate on everything, but please post more before i go insane!

[Starfire5]

well i always believed the Robin/Star, BeastBoy/Raven and well Cyborg has been watching Queer eye for the Straight guy a little to often if you know what i mean.:sweat:

P.S. Some Cyborg fans might take offense to this so... dont hurt me!:o

[rrarbecy]

well i always believed the Robin/Star, BeastBoy/Raven and well Cyborg has been watching Queer eye for the Straight guy a little to often if you know what i mean.:sweat:

P.S. Some Cyborg fans might take offense to this so... dont hurt me!:o
:eek:harshie. I believe in BB/Raven, but Cyborg...no. Why did you even think of that?

[Starrysky]

I am dissapionted that some of the people here are putting down other people's opinions. Do not do that here or I will disscontinue the fic. You can share your opinions, just don't get mean about it. Also, you can comment about a character's faults, but don't make it mean. I'll tell you people and give you a warning when you cross the line.

[decka]

Ok so everybody has stopped will you please write more!!!! I'm addictied to this story

[starfire0639]

i like robin-star and raven-bb or raven-cy the raven-bb thing might be wierd tho cus doesnt bbs antics kinda tick raven off i mean i deffintly wouldnt want to date someone who ticked me off and cyborg is pretty cool so im more into the raven cy fling -and um what do you mean please speak english becy:sad:

[rrarbecy]

hehehehe sugar:anime: i like robin star and raven and bb or raven with cy the raven bb thing might be wierd tho cus doesnt bbs antics kinda tick raven off i mean i deffintly wouldnt want to date someone who ticked me off an pretty cool so im more onto the raven cy thingy:D dont hurt me
Would you PLEASE start speaking English ;)

[Starrysky]

I think I might acually do this stry first, because I just have a great idea, and I'm more in the mood for it... I'm not sure...

As I said before, for both of my fics, the Star/Rob thing is probably a diffinate. I still am not sure about the whole BB/Rae/Cyborg thing though...I personally don't have a preferance. :confused:

If you fans are desperate for more of both the stories, I might be motivated to get my chapters out a little faster, even though school is still the bane of my existance...:sweat:

[rrarbecy]

I think I might acually do this stry first, because I just have a great idea, and I'm more in the mood for it... I'm not sure...

As I said before, for both of my fics, the Star/Rob thing is probably a diffinate. I still am not sure about the whole BB/Rae/Cyborg thing though...I personally don't have a preferance. :confused:

If you fans are desperate for more of both the stories, I might be motivated to get my chapters out a little faster, even though school is still the bane of my existance...:sweat:
Desparate? DESPARATE!? YOU CAN'T LEAVE US ON A CLIFFHANGER!!

[Starfire5]

I am dissapionted that some of the people here are putting down other people's opinions. Do not do that here or I will disscontinue the fic. You can share your opinions, just don't get mean about it. Also, you can comment about a character's faults, but don't make it mean. I'll tell you people and give you a warning when you cross the line.
:eek:im sorry:( i didnt mean for it to be takin wrong...it was suppose to be takin as a joke....oh well i try.....

[Starrysky]

It's all right! :anime: Just don't do that again. I'm in the mood for righting a chapter for this!:D So be prepared! :anime: See ya! :D

[Crowgirl]

Cyborg has been watching Queer eye for the Straight guy a little to often if you know what i mean.
I do, but I don't want to.

Hey! Look what I figured out I can do!!!

:anime:

Ha ha!!!

[Starrysky]

You wanted me to post? Well here I am! :D No much to say except that I am very sorry for posting so late...:crying: sorry!

Ch.3



Robin looked up as the gigantic spear hurtled toward Starfire; it looked like it was in slow motion. He could see everything, as much as he would like to close his eyes; it was like he couldn’t move. Like the heavens were conspiring against him, making him drown in anguish, made by something that would hurt him the most. His eyes were fixed on her, drinking in every detail, the rough spear whistling through the air, Starfire closing her eyes, her floating in the air, not even trying to move.



His limbs felt heavier then lead, his face was strained; anguish already showing through his face. His mind raced, thinking, of anything, to save her. One thought raced through his head, a single word, a word that held so much meaning to him, especially then. Starfire.



His paralyzed limbs received an unknown strength. His muscles strained, making his legs move. As he leaped out of the guardhouse, he took out his grapple hook and shot it towards a ledge just above Starfire’s head. He soared off of the ground, his eyes narrowed and his hand reached out toward her reaching for hers.



His fingertips brushed her hand, and she opened her eyes in surprise. She grabbed his hand, hoping that he would save her, like he did so many times before. She was pulled up, with Robin above her. But he was too late; the spear imbedded itself in her chest, driving her towards toward the wall. Her hand was still clasped with Robins. Robin sailed with her. She could see his pained face, made unclear by the pain that fogged her senses. She crashed into the wall, and the spear drove itself farther into her flesh. She was pinned to the wall now, and the pain clamored her mind. She couldn’t think. The only thing that she could see was Robin as she drifted into the welcoming arms of unconsciousness.

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:crying: I know very sad...:crying: I hope you brought tissues...


Yes, I have ended another chap. with a cliff. :evil: Now you're going to have to wait to see what happens...:evil:

Tell me critizisim! Tell me praise! Tell me anything! post! :D

[Matt A]

Short, but very sweet!

Okay, so perhaps sweet wasn't quite the right word, but you know what I mean.

That was the single best description of Robin's feelings for Star since Vanishing Act, and that's saying something. I'm also liking the "sucker punch" at the end: it probably wouldn't have occured to me to do that.

Post the next chapter now, or may the dreaded Spanish Inquisition hunt you down and torture you mercilessly (okay, so maybe that's not very funny, but it just shows my depth of impatience).

[decka]

:eek: ...OMG, you a so......OMG!! I can't stand cliffhangers you must tell me what happens!!!

[Starrysky]

Thanks! A appriciate that some people are still reading this fic even after I didn't post for a while...:sweat: I had piles of homework to do...:sweat:

I will not reveal if she's alive or not until the next chapter...so you'll have to wait...:evil:

I am in a good mood! I have defeated the writer's block! :D At least temporarily...:eek:

:) ;) :anime: :D See ya!:D :anime: ;) :)

[rrarbecy]

You ROCK! OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I agree with Mate; that was a very good description of feelings.

[starfire0639]

as all the others have said....OM freakn G!!!a hate this cliffhangers i mean some are totally rad but this one:mad: this is just cruel dont kill straifre dont let her die in this fic and please dont let robins love drift into the ver ebess of eternity!or in other words.....DONT KILL OFF STARFIRE!!!

[Starrysky]

*sniff* :crying: Don't get mad...:crying:

rrroooooooaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrr!:mad: :evil: I can write what I like and you don't have to read it if you don't want to! :crying: *sniff* (I do like Starfire, so I do understand. ;) *sniff* :crying: just don't get angry at me!)

On a slightly happier note, I finished ch. four! I have typed it up, but more people have to review in order for me to release it...:evil:

:) ;) :anime: :D See ya!:D :anime: ;) :)

[decka]

I will so cry if you kill Star!!!! :crying: please don't!

[starfire0639]

i had not meant to make you cry starry!im sowwy:sweat: but star is like my altime fav duh thats why its my surname but sniffles but........:crying: look at that face you cant kill starfire and live with it for this face!

[Sproxie]

ARE YOU INSANE?!? you can't kill starfire!
you- you- you- Thats barbaric!
but interesting... :evil:
i wanna see the next chapter!!!! :crying:

[Starrysky]

A lot of people that started to post in this aren't anymore...:crying: ...I'm not releasing the next ch. until I get at least...2 more posts.:( :crying:

:( :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:

[decka]

Hey!! don't feel bad! I'm sorry if I havn't been posting lately. I hate it when people don't post I my fic too so I know how you feel. Please post your chapter soon! (Especially now that you got me way more exicted and all) We love u and your fic!!!!!!!

[Starrysky]

:anime: Thanks decka! You're actually posting quite a bit on this thread...:anime: I'll post as soon as I can.:D

[decka]

yay!!!! can't wait!

[Matt A]

I second that notion.

[Rae]

Hey i love the new chapter, i would have posted sooner but i spent the weekend in a building in the middle of no where with no internet connection!

Like i said, i would have replied sooner but couldn't! Sorry!

[Starrysky]

This is a notice to all that I will be going on vacation to California for Christmas. I will leave tomarrow and won't come back till after New Year's. I don't think I'll have access to any internet connection...so yeah...:(

[starfire0639]

as i said......DONT WORRY AND DONT FORGET TO HAVE FUN!!!hurry back im sure im not the only one thats gonna miss you!:D

[Pookey]

:eek: WOW! This...is...wicked awesome!!! I can't wait for you to post. Unbelievable! You are are great writer!

[rrarbecy]

STUPID, NON-EXISTANT CALIFORNIA INTERNET!! AAAAAAHH!

[starfire0639]

DJ CALM YOURSELF SHELL BE BACK B4 YOU KNOW IT! JEESHE BOYS AND THERE FICS:anime:

[Starrysky]

Hello! :anime: I'm still in CA, I'm working on chapters while I'm here so I'll try to post as soon as I get home. :D

I have somehow found an internet conection so that I can say hi and give you the update. I'm about halfway through writing the next chap. and I have thought up of a great ending for the story. :anime:

:) ;) :anime: :D See ya!:D :anime: ;) :)

[Star_Fire_Chick]

please do not kill Starfire, please just do not kill her!and i cant wait till the new chapter!

[Crowgirl]

please do not kill Starfire, please just do not kill her!and i cant wait till the new chapter!
You know what? That actually made sense to me, and I actually agree.

[rrarbecy]

Why shouldn't she kill Starfire? I'm doing it. You don't seem to have a problem with ME doing it.

[starfire0639]

u r!where!?!i didnt knwo that i shall start ripping the killing of star to threads as soon as i read the fic where ur doin it!:evil:

[rrarbecy]

u r!where!?!i didnt knwo that i shall start ripping the killing of star to threads as soon as i read the fic where ur doin it!:evil:
YOu haven't read All For Nothing? I'm not talking to you until you do. hmmph.;)

[starfire0639]

YOu haven't read All For Nothing? I'm not talking to you until you do. hmmph.;)oop!yes i had forgotten i havwe so many fav fics on the site that i forgot bout your do noty be mad at the ask for she is saddned by your ignorance towards her!:crying: *pout*

[rrarbecy]

oop!yes i had forgotten i havwe so many fav fics on the site that i forgot bout your do noty be mad at the ask for she is saddned by your ignorance towards her!:crying: *pout*
*brustles indignantly* I'm not ignorant toward anyone.

[Lord Welshi]

Well, it's been a while since i posted on this fic, so here goes.

Yay.

Continue, please, Starfire deserves to have an ending: either a happy one or an unpleasant one. Come on, she's had a bloody great chunk of wood in her chest for almost 2 weeks! It must be a bit uncomfortable by now!

Lord Welshi

[Star_Fire_Chick]

Well, it's been a while since i posted on this fic, so here goes.

Yay.

Continue, please, Starfire deserves to have an ending: either a happy one or an unpleasant one. Come on, she's had a bloody great chunk of wood in her chest for almost 2 weeks! It must be a bit uncomfortable by now!

Lord Welshi i must agree with Lord welshi she needs an ending or maybe something else

-Maeghen

[starfire0639]

hmmmmm-if it has come to this point then i must do the only thing i can do......:crying: i will cry till you post and ill chain myself to the computer !

[Starrysky]

I'm Back! :D

Actually, I was back by the 2nd, but my internet refused to work! :eek: It's working now, so expect a new ch. for every fic I have either today or tomarrow. :D

[Matt A]

Cool!

[Starrysky]

Here is a chapterette...since I wan't able to type up the rest...:sweat: It's very short but...well...

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Chater Four
Part One




Robin let go of Starfire’s hand and the grappling hook, and as he fell his eyes still lingered on her face. He watched from the corner of his eyes as her arm fell limply to her side. When he was on the ground, he wrenched he gaze from her face to Cinderblock. Cinderblock was still in the position of throwing, leaning forward with his arm extended. Its grin was still etched on its face, and when he noticed Robin looking at him, it widened.



Whatever self-restraint Robin had left him. He snapped. His sight was focused on his tormentor, and his whole face was contorted into a scowl. His form quivered with rage, and it soaked into every fiber of his being. Another thought entered into his head, almost like a promise.

Cinderblock will die.




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I'll post the rest tomarrow when I type it up...:sweat:

Commemts? Questions? Helpful Advice? Then press that little blue button on the left-hand corner. Post!

[decka]

wow. I want to see him die to. Go Robin! Why did Star have to die? Why!:crying:

[Matt A]

Mmm, Robin going psycho...

This should be good!

[Starrysky]

I'm so so sorry! :crying: O my gosh, my internet company disconnected me from the internet for two freaken months!:mad: AHhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! :eek: The only time I've been connected to toonzone is through friends computers and I haven't had time to update! Once again so sorry! :crying: Anyways, here's te next part! :anime:

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Ch. 5



He sprinted toward Cinderblock, but Cinderblock had anticipated his move long before. As Robin leapt into the air, Cinderblock dodged his blow and ran to where Starfire hung pinned against the wall. It grabbed the tree trunk, and pulled it out of the wall. Her body fell and hit the floor, her head turned to the side. Blood flowed in droves from the hole through her, forming a deep red pool under and around her.

Robin’s eyes widened, then returned to an angry glare. He once more charged Cinderblock, his sanity slipping even more with each anger-driven step he took.



A few yards away from the battle, Raven faced Cyborg, trying to get her point across.

“We have to get over there to Starfire. She’s losing too much blood. If we don’t stop it, she might die.” She paused and said a little more softly, “IF she isn’t dead already.”

Cyborg nodded, bending down to help Beastboy up.

“Hurry,” she said.

They carefully ran over to Starfire, trying to not draw attention toward them. Raven immediately went on her knees and cradled Starfire’s head in her lap while Cyborg and Beastboy watched the battle to make sure that it wouldn’t come their way. Raven tore a big clump off her cloak off and set it beside her. She then laid her hands just above the wound and focused her power. Her hands glowed with a white light and the bleeding abruptly stopped. That done, she carefully lifted Starfire into the air and wrapped her cloak tightly around the wound in case of it reopening.

Cyborg, turning around said in a low voice, “He’s losing it.”

All of them at once turned back to the battle scene unfolding, their eyes wide as they struggled with their leader’s change again. A soft, “Dude.” Was the only word that Beastboy seemed able to form.



Just a little distance from their stare, the battle was being fought. Cinderblock easily evaded Robin’s blows, his stupid grin still rested unmoving upon its face. This infuriated Robin. He was breathing hard, but not from weariness, but from pure anger. Every shuddering breath racked though his body. His eyes were staring at that mocking smile that never left its face. That smile that mocked his pain. Robin’s face was still contorted into the unnatural, scowl of rage. That rage that pumped through the blood in his veins and clouded his mind. Rage. He was focused on the one thing he had left to live for, the one task that must be done. His thoughts were trained on one thought and his heart was empty. That one thought in his mind. Cinderblock will die.



“Shouldn’t we stop him?” Beastboy asked.

“We might not be able to, not without knocking him out first,” Cyborg pointed out, “Besides, if Cinderblock gets away because of us, not only would he not be…happy… but he’d also track it down for days without sleep and wear himself down that way.”

“Well, shouldn’t we at least help him?” Beastboy questioned, indignant, “I mean, we all fought together before without even giving him a scratch, but now Robin has to take Cinderblock down…alone!?”

“We’d only get in the way,” Raven said bluntly, “It’s his fight now. I know what went between him and Starfire, he has to do this.” As Raven finished, she had a far-off, almost longing look in her eyes that vanished so quickly that they weren’t sure that it had even been there.

“Alright, I’ll just stand here,” Beastboy said, crossing his arms, “But I won’t like it.”

“I know how you feel man, I know how you feel.” Cyborg said quietly, his voice full of sorrow that he felt from the impending crisis that they could all sense.



Just past where they could see, Slade watched the show.

“This has been much more successful than I had thought. The foundations are crumbling before my very eyes,” He smiled thinly beneath his mask,” And I cannot wait to see the rest fall.” He paused, “My reign is coming. I will rule."




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Hope you like it! :anime: More coming as soon as it can. And please give me some feedback! :crying:

[Anime]

this is good

10/10

write more

[rrarbecy]

*heavenly light shines down* It's so beautiful...:anime: To be quite honest, I had forgotten that you had pierced Starfire through the chest with a javeline. Then I went and drilled a hole through her heart in one story and broke her upper body in another one. I feel like such a copycat...

[Anime]

ur not

[Starrysky]

It's okay! :anime: It wasn't intentional, and it gets hard to think of so many ways to kill people...:evil:

Anyways, I'm working on the new ch. so expect it either late today or early tomarrow.

See ya!

[Starrysky]

Herre you go! :D


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Ch. 6


Robin threw punches and kicks left and right, unable to think logically because of the rage that clouded his mind. Cinderblock dodged every punch he threw. He couldn’t even get a blow in let alone consider how much damage his puny hands could inflict against the armor. With every missed blow the all ready furious Robin grew closer to an explosion. Closer and closer he came to crossing the line. His rage grew, consuming him, burning every other emotion out of his mind except confusion.

All of the sudden, he stopped. He just stood there, his form quivering, rage building. . His head was down, and his arms were slack. His hands clenched into fists, and his head shot up to the sky. A roar burst from his lungs. That one thought, that one thing left to him…it will be done. Cinderblock will die. Whatever it takes. With that ringing in his mind, he slowly started to advance towards his enemy.



Cinderblock was tiring of this battle, he would win. This puny human couldn’t even get a shot in. How could he lose? It was time to get this over with. His master is waiting.

As Robin came closer, Cinderblock hefted the trunk he had been holding and quickly threw it towards Robin. But before it could reach him, he jumped into the air, landing on top of the tree. He immediately jumped forwards off of it. As his feet touched the ground, his arm swung behind him and grabbed threw end of the trunk. He swung his arm and let the tree go. It whistled through the air and it plunged into Cinderblocks chest, making it stumble backwards. Just as it was falling, a flash of light blinded them and a roll of thunder followed. When the light faded, Cinderblock was gone. The rain clouds that had been gathering for some time during the battle had then blotted out the sun.

Robin howled and punched the ground, creating a sizable hole in it. He panted and fell to his knees, the soft drizzle started, falling to him.


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I'll get more out as soon as I can, and please review! :D

[rrarbecy]

Wow. I've heard of superhuman strength in moments of stress, but that was a little extreme. An entire tree...

You really captured the emotion in that chapter. Brilliant.

[Matt A]

Well, it seems that Starrysky has returned to us, and what a way to do it! Those were two genius chapters, and I now can no longer wait to see where the story goes from here. Well done!:anime: :anime: :anime: :anime: :anime:

Ta,
Matt A

[Starrysky]

Thanks for all of the support! :anime: This is a little short, but I'm hoping that I'll post another ch. latter on today. Anyways, here you go! :D

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Ch. 7



After watching his agony, his friends sadly turned toward Starfire who was currently resting in Cyborg’s arms.

“What should we do? Is she…okay?” Beastboy asked, his concern plain to hear.

“Beastboy, take Starfire to the tower...we’ll find out there. Be very careful with her.” Raven said, her usually monotone voice a little shaky, “Cyborg, come with me. I will heal Robin’s wounds and try to …reason…with him. I’ll need you to help me…subdue him if he…doesn’t cooperate.”

At her words, Cyborg careful set Starfire into Beastboy’s gorilla arms; then turned to follow Raven, who was walking slowly towards Robin.


Robin’s hands were before him on the ground, his face only a few inches from it. He was still quivering, and his tears were slowly dripping off of his face.
“I couldn’t stop him,” came the hoarse whisper, “I wasn’t strong enough…for her.” A sob erupted from him, “And now she’s dead. Because of me.” The sobbing continued.

Raven cautiously got down on her knees next to him, and she could see him tense.

“Robin…”she started, but trailed off at his lack of response. She gently laid her hand on his left shoulder, and quietly said again,

“Robin,”

At her touch, he recoiled and raised his tear streaked face up to meet her gaze. A few drops of rain fell off of his hair at the abrupt movement.

“Leave me alone!” he shouted as he looked up.

Raven’s hand went quickly back to her side, and she lapsed again into an awkward silence.

After awhile, she started again, “Robin…Starfire…she might be…okay.”

His head immediately came up, and with it, a just visible glimmer of hope was seen in his eyes.

“Where is she?” he demanded.

“She being to the tower now,” Raven paused, “Will you come?”

He stood up slowly, signifying his answer.

“Let’s go.” He said.

‘She’d better be alive.’ Raven thought to herself sadly.

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Good? Hope you like! :D I'll have more up again later on today if all goes well.

Please review!

[Starrysky]

Not all went so well, so her is a tiny little section of ch. 8. Sorry! :crying:

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Ch. 8

The three of them walked to the tower, because thier only other mode of transportation was currently smashed agianst the fence. As the towere came into view, Raven had and uneasy feeling. SHe looked around nervously, hoping that it was just her imagination. When the uneasiness washed over her again, she stopped walking, but Robin's impatient glare got her moving agian. After that, the sensation stopped.
'What was that about?' Raven thought to herself. Her train of thought was cut off as the door to the tower opened, effectivly bringing her back to earth.
"What room is she in?" Robin demanded again.
"If Beastboy was smart, he would have put her in med room." Cyborg replied.
They headed up to the room and walked through the door. On a hospital bed in the middle of the room lay Starfire. Beastboy stood just a few feet away.
I don't know how to use any of this, so I figured I'd wait for you to get here so I wouldn't break anything." Beastboy explained.
"Alright," Cyborg began in a soft tone of voice, "Let's see how she is."



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I don't think I'll be able to post anything more until Monday, but I will if I can. Please review! :anime:

[rrarbecy]

That was good, but I think they took too long in getting Starfire to the tower. I'd think that they'd be out of there immediately.

[Crowgirl]

I agree with DJ. BUt you called his chapters short....

[Matt A]

Those last few chapters may have been short, yes, but they were also very well written. I'm impressed either way.:anime: :anime: :anime:

Ta,
Matt A

[starfire0639]

-pout-Ya Im still perturbed...(ya I know what that word means!...I think)about the whole severly injured Starfire thing but seing as your the writer I can't stop you in your attempts at an awsome story.But its up to me to tell you your attempts succeded!This story is totally awsome and Im so sorry I havnt posted I really am please forgive me!-on her knees-Please write more soon.Cliffies make my brain hurt a bit.....all the thoughts bout what could be or could have been.SO write away the next chapter!:p



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