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T.T.Raven4
11-29-2004, 07:10 PM
This is the sequel people! This first chapter, must I say is, God horrible in my opinion, but it'll get things started.

*****
Raven sat on the couch, cross legged reading her book. It had been almost 4 years since Jake had left, and the Tower wasn’t the same without him. I mean, they were the same way before, but it was still hard to adapt after you had adapted to him being here. The Titans never spoke of Jake much. He seemed to have just…faded away. Cyborg and BB dashed into the living room.



“Boy! You think you can beat me again!?” Cyborg yelled.



Think? I KNOW I can beat you again!” BB replied.



They began playing the Game station furiously. Raven peeked up from her book, annoyed at all the voice they were making.



“Hey Guy’s, Can you turn up the volume. I can’t hear it one bit.” Raven said annoyed.



“Sure!” BB said. “No problem.”



Beast Boy turned up the volume. Raven shook her head.



“Beast Boy, I wonder…if you have the slightest bit of a brain.” Raven said.



Raven turned back to her book. About the same time, Robin walked in seeming a little bit frustrated.



“I still do not see how you drive your so called cars.” Starfire said confused.



“That’s okay.” Robin said. “Just stick to flying.”



Cyborg finished up the game, beating BB as usual.



“I saw you use cheat codes! BB yelled angrily.



“Man, just because I kicked your butt, doesn’t mean I cheated. I’m just so much better.” Cyborg shot back.



Then, the Titan’s heard someone outside. The Titan’s flung towards the door, and got ready to fight. Robin flung open the door.



“Who are you and what do you”-



The Titan’s all stood still, their gazes transfixed on the person standing in the doorway. It was Jake. Jake looked at all of them, in the position to fight.



“Um…am I not welcome here anymore?” Jake asked.



Jake shrugged. None of them moved.

“Did you guys miss me?” Jake asked. Hi Raven!



Jake kissed her on the cheek. Raven didn’t expect it, and a chunk of cement from the ceiling landed on Jake’s head.



“Ok…won’t…do that…again.” He said.



Robin snapped out of it.



“Why’d you come back?” He asked.



“I told you I’d be back, and I just missed the place.” Jake said. I missed you guys.



Jake settled in. He walked to where his room used to be, and opened the door.



“Hey!” He said excitedly. “It’s still here!”



“We knew you’d be back someday, so we decided to keep it.” BB said.



“Thanks guys.” He said.



Jake unpacked his things, and his room looked just like before. After he finished, the alarm went off.



“Titans, Trouble!” Robin yelled.



Robin ran past Jake.



“Am I still welcome to come with?” Jake asked.



“Anytime.” Robin said.



Jake smiled, pulled out his board, and ran with Robin.

rrarbecy
11-29-2004, 07:12 PM
First Post. Yippeee!

awwwwww. nice. having said that...

CEMENT ON THE HEAD!!??? HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAH.

T.T.Raven4
11-29-2004, 07:15 PM
AquaGirl15 told me that when Jake first kissed her, it seemed kinda fake casue Raven's emotions didn't do anything, so to do something to make up for it, CEMENT ON HEAD!

nevermore
11-29-2004, 07:16 PM
Cool. Maybe he came back to fast. I don't know, but I did like how you made all the Titans think that Jake was someone else.

T.T.Raven4
11-29-2004, 07:20 PM
Cool. Maybe he came back to fast. I don't know, but I did like how you made all the Titans think that Jake was someone else.
Thanks. Glad you liked that.

About his return, too fast? I had another idea, where they were fighting (Some villian, I never really thought it through) and were getting thir butts kicked, and Jake would come in to help them. I chose to make him come back immediatley.

Before anyone asks, I made Jake 13, (Maybe I didn't post it) in my first fic, so it's been three years, almost four, so I'm gonna make him 16. That may not have needed answering, but I just wanted to mention it.

Sproxie
11-29-2004, 07:22 PM
This is pretty good, a nice start!

This first chapter, must I say is, God horrible in my opinion
NOT horrible. :rolleyes:
But uh, Cement on the head seemed a bit much. :sweat:

T.T.Raven4
11-29-2004, 07:26 PM
Bad idea? What do you mean by "A Bit Much"

Sproxie
11-29-2004, 07:32 PM
no, not a bad idea :sweat:

oneeyemonkeypie
11-29-2004, 07:33 PM
no, that wasn't the problem. This, like many other chapters I've seen, moved at sonic speed. 4 years undone in 5 minutes. I think you had the outline in your head and wanted to get it all out before you forgot it, so you rushed. No biggie, but this chapter deserved to be several thousand words, not hundreds.

Like I tell everyone else-write more!

Don't be long winded, but things should move at a believable pace.

Still, a good start.:cool:

T.T.Raven4
11-29-2004, 07:42 PM
Sweet...Oneeyemoneypie posted im my fic...*Bows*

I never get a point until someone tells me my wrongs, so I'm gonna say thanks. In my next chapter, I'm thinking about unraveling the 4 years, and explaining what happened while he was gone. Also, I'm still thinking about how to bring in the main villian, and who it should be. Thanks for the feedback guys!

Aquagirl15
11-29-2004, 08:40 PM
very good start i must say! it was not bad!!!:D but Terra did the same sort of thing and Raven didn't trust her right away. oh well that will make it smoother so your story will make more sence.:shrug:

Crowgirl
11-29-2004, 08:48 PM
Me like! It did feel rushed, but that's okay for the first chapter. Just make sure it's not consistant. I laughed at the cement thing, that was kinda funny.

Do I get a bow?:sad:

T.T.Raven4
11-30-2004, 08:22 PM
Cause he posted in my fic ONCE and you posted often. I was just surprised, so I bowed at his presents. But if it makes u feel better *Bows to Crowgirl*

Next chapter up...Maybe tommorow, but maybe not.

Aquagirl15
11-30-2004, 09:11 PM
maybe tomorrow would be our preference. maybe not could resort in anger and pain on ur part. :mad: :evil: we shall do with you what we want if u cease to post soon. which will invovle pain i promise u...

moro loci
12-01-2004, 02:47 PM
Dude! Nice! Returns are always good.

T.T.Raven4
12-01-2004, 06:41 PM
HERE YOU GUYS GO!

The Titan’s got to the scene immediately. As they approached, a building exploded in a flare of purple light. All around, flames could be seen. The flames were a dark shade of purple, and were engulfing everything in sight. The fire had started inside a small building.



“Titan’s, Go!” Robin yelled.



The Titan’s sprung into action. Raven approached a fire hydrant, and muttered her usual words.



“Azarath Metrion ZINTHOS!” She yelled.



The head of the fire hydrant flew off, and water flowed out of the hydrant, putting out some of the flames. Because they were close to the ocean, Jake used his powers to lift up a small tidal wave. It crashed onto the surface, and flooded the flames. Starfire and Beast Boy ran inside and looked for any people trapped inside. They entered, and looked around. BB spotted a woman on the ground, unconscious due to the smoke. BB morphed into a Pterodactyl, and carried the woman out. Meanwhile, Starfire continued her search.



“Hello?” She yelled. “Is anyone here?”



A large part of the roof collapsed, and nearly missed her. She yelped, and flew quickly towards a door. She came to it, and placed her hand on the knob.



“Starfire! No!” Beast Boy yelled running back in.



But it was too late. Starfire had swung open the door, and is seemed as if a bomb exploded inside. Fire flared out of the room, engulfing Starfire.



“NO!” Beat Boy yelled.



He began to run in, but a hand landed on his shoulder. It was Cyborg. He rushed in, and pulled her out. He was unharmed thanks to his metallic suit, but was burned slightly on his human side. Beast Boy grabbed the last two civilians he saw, and the Titan’s rushed out. As they approached the exit, the ceiling collapsed, and blocked the doorway. Cyborg transformed his arm into his sonic cannon, and blasted through.



“We gotta get outta here!” He yelled.



The Titan’s rushed out, and took the civilians away from the fire. Cyborg put Starfire down lightly. She was burned badly, but she seemed like she’d be okay.



“What happened?” Robin asked rushing up.



“She got hit by flames.” Cyborg said. “She’ll be fine.”



Raven and Jake finished putting out the fire after a few minutes, and all the Titan’s stepped back.



“Good job team.” Robin said.



“Do you have any idea who set it?” Jake asked.



“No idea.” Robin replied.



“And why were the flames purple?” BB asked.



A thought popped into Jake’s head, but he shook it off.



Just then, a light began forming inside the building. It kept growing until the whole building was filled with purple light. The, it exploded, bringing the remains of the building to the ground. Then, a figure seemed to come forward from outside the building. There was so much smoke, that it was hard to make out what it was. Jake walked closer, and squinted his eyes to get a better look. Then, his eyes widened, and he stepped backwards. He slowly walked back, until he tripped on a rock, and was sent backwards. He landed, but kept inching back.



“No.” Jake muttered. “There’s no way. Just no possible way.”



The figure stepped forward. Its features were made visible. It looked like a black skeleton, but he was surrounded in purple flames. The flames seemed to form a body, but the bones were still visible. Jake’s gaze remained transfixed on the figure. Then, it spoke.



“Hello Teen Titan’s.” It said.



Its voice was robotic, metallic like. Just his voice was enough to send chills down your spine. Jake grabbed his head, and closed his eyes tightly.



“IT’S NOT POSSIBLE!” Jake yelled. I DESTROYEDYOU!” “YOU CAN’T BE REAL!”



“Oh I’m real Jacob. Realer than you can ever imagine.”

Aquagirl15
12-01-2004, 06:50 PM
ok...realer is not a word. just so u know. that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo evil! that was like the worst cliffhanger in the history of cliffhangers! :evil: :evil: :evil: EVIL!!!!! POST MORE OR SUFFER!!!!!!!!

T.T.Raven4
12-01-2004, 06:55 PM
*Looks up on internet, and in dictionary*

It says it is... Oh well. Whatever.

Thanks for the compliments on my evilness! (I hope that's a word) Lol!

CaligoRae
12-02-2004, 04:21 PM
Can you say...COOLNESS!!! that was a totally awsome chap. I loved it. Now write more or i'll take this stick and poke you with it over and over until u go mad. Then i'l take over the world!!! Mwaaaaaaa.

Sproxie
12-02-2004, 04:23 PM
cool chap! :) and as for the "realer" word, you should put in something like,

“Oh I’m real Jacob. More than you can ever imagine.”

Anywho, post soon!

T.T.Raven4
12-02-2004, 04:32 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys. More up tonight, I promise.

T.T.Raven4
12-02-2004, 07:53 PM
Jake looked all around him. It seemed that the light given off from the purple flames engulfed everything in sight. Everything seemed to be radiating a dark purple. Jake seemed to be going into shock. He began breathing deeply, and his face was pale and lined with sweat.



“Rurik.” Jake muttered.



“I’m glad you haven’t forgotten my name Jacob.” Rurik said.



Rurik inched closed until he was right in Jake’s face. Jake placed his hand slowly into his waist, and placed his hand on what looked like the hilt of a sword. He drew it immediately, and slashed right where Rurik stood, but Rurik was must faster. Rurki seemed to disappear, but he re-appeared behind him, and kicked him in the back. Jake dropped his weapon, which was now visible as a dagger. He had a second one in his other pocket. Jake had a purple burn mark on his back. Jake was yelling in pain.



“Titan’s GO!” Robin yelled.



Starfire picked up Cyborg and flew into the air. While airborne, Cybrog fired a few blasts from his sonic cannon. 1 of the 3 hitting Rurik. Rurik stumbled backwards. Starfire let go of Cyborg, and he flew at him, ready to punch, but Rurik blasted flames at cyborg, sending him to the ground. Cyborg jumped up quickly, and rushed at Rurik. He threw several punches, but Rurik dodged them all, grabbed Cyborg’s arm and threw him into a large pile of boxes. Starfire followed up, and launched a barrage of Starbolts at Rurik. Rurik got hit a few times, but managed to keep his balance. Rurik fired a blast of fire at Starfire, but she dodged it, and landed a punch on Rurik. Rurik flew backwards, but Starfire’s hand was burnt. She fired a beam from her eyes, but Rurik launched flames right back at her. The flames engulfed the starbolt beam, and flashed past it, and hit Starfire, knocking her right by Cyborg. Robin snuck behind Rurik, and launched a

Bird-a-rang at Rurik. It wrapped around him, but burned into a pile of ashes. Robin threw an exploding disk at Rurik, and it exploded. Through the smoke, 7 balls of fire came through. Robin extended his staff, and blocked 3 of the fireballs. When he looked at his staff, it had melted down to half it’s size. Robin looked up, and a fireball blasted him, sending him to the ground. Raven knew she had to end it now. She flew into the air, and used her powers to lift 3 of the boxes. She swung her hands forward, and the boxes fired at Rurik. Rurik fired two fireballs at the boxes, and they both exploded, but one crashed into him sending him stumbling backwards. Raven took advantage. She flew forward, and kicked Rurik hard in the head. Rurik kept his balance. Raven yelled loudly, and a beam of black light fired at Rurik, sending him into the air, towards Jake. Jake got in a position where he was lying on his back, with his feet in the air. When Rurik flew backwards at him, Jake kicked backwards sending him flying into the ocean. Rurik plopped into the water, and steam rose from the water. Rurik appeared out of the water, but he was nothing but a black skeleton. He had no fire surrounding him. Rurik yelled an ear piercing yell, and disappeared in a couldof smoke.



“Did we beat him?” Raven asked.


“Not even close.” Jake said.

*****

I guess it was short. I did give a pretty big fight scene though. Hope it was okay. Once again, I'm at a tough spot. I have a great plot, where at the end I could kill off Jake, but I could make it so he doesn't die too. God I hate it. Oh well, Give me some feedback!!!!!!!

Aquagirl15
12-02-2004, 08:08 PM
well you do have a rare gift w/ fight scenes i'll tell you that. that was very good. i loved it. the fight scenes were so good that i felt like i was actually there!! :D if you do kill Jake please don't make it too brutal. :ack: or bloody. all i can say right now except POST OR SUFFER!!!!!!

T.T.Raven4
12-02-2004, 08:24 PM
I know how he'd die, and it requires nothing of the sort. I'll post more tmrw.

CaligoRae
12-02-2004, 10:58 PM
Very good chap. I enjoyed it. I can't wait to here more. I HAVE TO HEAR MORE!!! MORE.....OR SUFFER!!!!:evil: :evil:

rrarbecy
12-03-2004, 07:43 AM
Amazing. You do have a real gift with fight scenes. Rurik. Wasn't that the name of the worlock in...that episode with Malchior?

Aquagirl15
12-03-2004, 08:28 AM
i think ur right rrarbecy... SEE TTRae i told u on ur first fic ur fight scenes were good. now i have people to agree w/ me!!! :D
-Aquagirl15 http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/335/9/b/S_P_L_A_T_by_bren.gif (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12762212/)

CaligoRae
12-03-2004, 08:51 AM
No that was rorek. Hehe. I should know. My fic is about that. Anywho, good job....Again...wait, did i already say that???? Oh well:rolleyes:

rrarbecy
12-03-2004, 01:34 PM
No that was rorek. Hehe. I should know. My fic is about that. Anywho, good job....Again...wait, did i already say that???? Oh well:rolleyes:
The spelling thing was a joke, right? It's still pronounced the same. It was never spelled in...the episode, wasn't it? I forget what it was called. SPELLBOUND! THAT'S IT! I REMEMBER!!

CaligoRae
12-03-2004, 01:37 PM
Yeah, it was a total JK. Sry if it seemed rude or anything.:sweat: Anyways i still enjoy your story and you better write more........OR ELSE!!!!!:evil:

Aquagirl15
12-03-2004, 06:35 PM
very or else!!!!!!!!!!! i'm getting impationt.(sp?)

T.T.Raven4
12-04-2004, 10:11 AM
RRarbecy, I JUST now noticed that it sounded a lot like Rorek. I'm so stupid.

But thanks for poiting that out, I have a great I dea for a plot twist now. :evil:

Ok heres the schedule: Today,. friend coming over, No time to do it. I'll get the next one up tommorow.

rrarbecy
12-04-2004, 10:13 AM
RRarbecy, I JUST now noticed that it sounded a lot like Rorek. I'm so stupid.

But thanks for poiting that out, I have a great I dea for a plot twist now. :evil:

Ok heres the schedule: Today,. friend coming over, No time to do it. I'll get the next one up tommorow.
I gave you an idea...I'M A GENIUS!!!!! Go me.

T.T.Raven4
12-04-2004, 10:18 AM
Actually you did, so yea. Thanks!

T.T.Raven4
12-04-2004, 12:44 PM
Screw what I said before, MORE UP NOW!!!!
*************

All the Titan’s slowly made their way back to the Tower. By the time they arrived, and attempted to heal their burns, it was 10:56 PM. Robin had burns on his chest. Starfire on her whole left side. Cyborg’s robotic side was charred. Raven had a slight burn on her right leg, Beat Boy’s hair was still smoking, and Jake had burns on his back.



“DUDE! LOOK AT MY HAIR!” BB yelled.



“Look guys, we need to get some rest.” Robin said. “We had a big fight today, and I think the battle’s far from over.”



All the Titan’s nodded and went to their rooms. At about 11:15 PM, someone knocked on Jake’s door. Jake opened the door, and saw Raven standing in the doorway.



“Hey.” Jake said. “What do you need?”



“I just wanted a little explanation.” She said.



“About Rurik?” Jake asked.



Raven nodded.



“Sit down.” Jake said. “It’s kind of a long story.”



Raven sat down on Jake’s bed, and he sat next to her.



“When I left, I didn’t stay in jump city.” Jake said. “I wandered around from city to city. When I took a journey to some city which I still don’t know the name of, well, let’s just say I came at a bad time. I came right in the middle of a fight. The police were trying to bring down Rurik. Back then, I didn’t know who he was, so I tried to help. Rurik was WAY stronger than me, but I still fought. After fighting for about 15 minutes, he knocked me out, and I woke up in a hospital. I was in critical condition, and they thought I might die, but I survived. After I had healed, I left the hospital, and lodged in a hotel for a while. Then, I met an old woman. She took me into a small building that looked like a pawn shop. The lady showed me around, and told me about Rurik. According to her, Rurik was a normal human, but that changed. He was wandering the streets, and he was attacked by a group of people. She said that they set a dumpster on fire, and threw him into it. It said his body was burned down to nothing but a charred skeleton. Somehow, he was brought back to life. He had harnessed the powers of fire, and seeks his revenge on the world. The woman also told me how to defeat him. She gave me two daggers, and if both were stabbed into him at the same time, he would fade away. I left the place, and found Rurik again. We fought for a while, and I was able to get one dagger into his chest, but before I could get the other one in, he escaped, and the dagger fell back to me. That’s why I thought that maybe he would just die later because I stabbed him with one, but he didn’t. He came back, and now he’s here.”



Raven didn’t say anything.



It’s all my fault.” Jake said. “He’s going to come back, and kill us all.”



“Not if we can help it.” Raven said. “We can stop him.”



“But Raven you don’t understand he’ll-



“I’ll fight with you no matter what.” Raven said. “We’ll beat him.”



Jake smiled, and hugged her tightly.



“Thanks Raven” Jake said.



Raven went back to her room and fell asleep. After thinking for a while, Jake fell asleep too.



At 3:14 AM a purple smoke rose through the vents in Raven’s room. It hovered to her bedside, and stopped. It seemed to look around, and it looked straight down at her chest. (Not Raven’s chest, that little treasure chest she keeps by her bed) It surrounded the chest. It somehow wedged open the chest, and went inside of it. It saw a lone white book. It surrounded the book, and pulled it out. It then flew quickly down the stairs, out the door, and into the night.



The smoke flew deep into the city, and deep underground. It then formed into Rurik.



“Fnally, it’s time I brought my brother back to life.”

nevermore
12-04-2004, 01:04 PM
One gripe. Rurik and Rorek can not be brothers. Rorek is over 1,000 years old, and I know for a fact that there were now dumpsters then. Rurik was human, and the probability of him being the brother of a dragon, is impossible!!!

If that is not what you meant, then forget what I have just said. I just think that it didn't make sense. Please post soon so that my head will be all better.

Wait...no! Larry go away. lol:D

T.T.Raven4
12-04-2004, 01:06 PM
NOT my idea. Thanks though! Lol!

Aquagirl15
12-04-2004, 01:29 PM
that was really cool. but you know your dude could be 1,000 years old but Jake doesn't know. so they could be brothers. and Rorek could be human and just have a spell that made him a dragon. :shrug: just a thought... any way more or suffer!!!!!! yeah that about sums it up.:D

rrarbecy
12-04-2004, 01:42 PM
I gave you that idea? Cool. THanks for clarifying the "chest thing."

T.T.Raven4
12-04-2004, 02:12 PM
I kinda had to do the chest thing, or I can see you guys saying WTF!

Come to think of it, my idea DOES realate a nice amount to Nevermores idea, and I wasn't going to do it until AquaGirl gave me a few ideas! THANK YOU rrarbecy and Aquagirl for the ideas!

PS: Is Malchior the Dragon? Or Rorek? I'm confused.

Aquagirl15
12-04-2004, 02:37 PM
Malchior is the dragon. he was pretending to be the wizard to tirck Raven. get your facts straight before you write about Malchior! and this means Malchior has to be Rurik's brother not Rorek. Rorek's a good guy!

T.T.Raven4
12-04-2004, 02:46 PM
I'm stuck now...I need to think of how to do it, cuz I wanted Rorek to be his brother, but he's the mage. Damn. I'm stuck...

T.T.Raven4
12-06-2004, 08:26 PM
This is one of my longer chapters, even though it's still short. I decided to avoid the Malchior and Rorek thing, cause it was hard to work with, so here you go!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Jake jerked awake from a horrible nightmare. He looked at his hands. He had sweat dripping down his face. He played the dream back in his head.
~ ~ ~



Jake was running down the streets of Jump City. The skies were dark, making it almost impossible to see anything. Jake tripped over a small rock, and fell flat on his face. When he opened his eyes, he was at the feet of someone. He looked up, and stared into the eyes of Rurik. Jake screamed, and jumped up quickly.



“Go away!” Jake yelled.



Rurik didn’t reply. All Jake could hear was the sound of Rurik’s breath. Jake slowly backed up, but tripped again. Jake looked at Rurik, and saw his extend his hand forward. Jake closed his eyes, expecting to die. He re-opened his eyes, and saw Rurik’s hand was still extended in front of his face. Jake refused to take it.



“I am here only to help you Jacob.” He said.



Jake couldn’t get himself to believe him. There’s no way he could trust a person who hated him so much.



“Please…just go away.” Jake muttered.



Rurik’s hand stayed extended. Jake didn’t want to, but something made his hand grasp Rurik’s.



“Wise choice.” Rurik said.



“What do you want from me?” Jake asked.



“Your destiny is with me Jacob.” Rurik said. “Stay with me, and I shall never steer you wrong.”



Rurik’s hands shone a bright purple, and so did Jake’s. Jake felt a strange sensation, and then, Rurik began to disappear. Rurik was going inside of him. Jake fell to his knees, and groaned. He felt Rurik coming into him. Then, he heard Rurik inside of him.



“Now…You’re part of me.”

~ ~ ~



That’s when Jake woke up.



Jake knew it was just a dream, but it seemed so real. Every part of it. Jake knew he should keep the dream to himself. If the others found out about it, who knows what would happen. Jake sat up slowly, and slipped out of bed. He changed into his normal clothes, and walked to the living room. Beast Boy and Cyborg were fighting over which tasted better, BB’s Tofu eggs, or Cyborg’s eggs. Jake had to agree with Cyborg, but he wasn’t in the mood to get involved. Robin was flipping through channels, as Starfire pondered over how the remote makes the TV work.



“But it is wireless! How does it interact with the television?” Starfire said.



Raven was outside meditating on the balcony. Jake didn’t really want to eat. Not because of the dream, he just wasn’t hungry. Jake was going to go outside and talked to Raven, but he didn’t want to disturb her. Just as Jake mustered the courage to go talk to her, the alarm went off. Robin rushed in. He only muttered one word.



“Rurik.” He said.



Jake’s eyes narrowed. He ran to his room, grabbed his daggers, and rushed with the Titan’s into Jump City.

~ ~ ~



As the Titan’s approached the west side of the city, Rurik came into plain view.



Jake growled, and ran forward.



“Titans GO!” Robin yelled.



Jake was way ahead of them. He pulled out his daggers, and began swinging furiously at Rurik. Rurik dodged every shot, and kicked him in the chest, and blasted him backwards with purple flames. Jake fell backwards, but jumped back up quickly. He lunged back at Rurik, and slashed him on the chest. Rurik howled in pain, and kicked Jake down. He placed his foot on Jake’s chest. The other Titan’s rushed in, but their path was blocked with a wall of black energy.



“I want…to fight him…on my own.” Jake said.



Jake stabbed his dagger into Rurik’s foot, and Rurik stepped back. Jake pulled the dagger out, and kicked Rurik forward.



“Jake! Cyborg yelled. Let us in! We can help you!”



“No!” Jake yelled. “I will fight him on my own!”



Rurik fired a fireball at Jake, and Jake fell backwards, landing on his head. Jake groaned, and opened his eyes. Rurik stood before him. Jake pulled out his daggers, but Rurik kicked them both out of his reach.



“Jacob, don’t resist me.” Rurik said.



Jake remembered his dream, and pulled away.



Rurik smirked.



“There is no reason to fear me.” Rurik said. “I am here for you.”



Rurik extended his hand, but Jake hit it away.



“LIAR!” Jake yelled.



Jake felt a weird sensation inside of him.



“Why won’t you listen to me?” Rurik asked.



“Go away.” Jake said.



Jake felt a sensation inside of him. He had a sudden urge to grab onto Rurik’s hand. Jake resisted, but he grabbed Rurik’s hand. Rurik smirked.



“You see Jake.” Rurik said. “Last night I went into the tower and took this.”



He pulled out the white book.



“For you see, when I said I was going to bring my brother back to life, I really meant bring my brother back to his destiny, and I meant you!” Rurik said.



“NO!” Jake yelled. “I DON’T BELIEVE YOU!”



Jake pulled his hand away, and Rurik began laughing.



“Rurik flashed into a human form for a few seconds, and Jake recognized his brother.



“But…you died. You disappeared, and no one ever found you.” Jake said in amazement.



“Because I was burned alive!” Rurik yelled. “Join me Jake. Join my cause. Together we will be one!”



Rurik once again extended his hand, and Jake looked into his eyes. He felt like he was in a trance. Jake grabbed his hand, and heard Rurik laughing. Jake saw their hands glow, and Rurik disappeared. Jake looked around his body and saw purple flames. He and Rurik were one.



Jake stood up, and opened his eyes, revealing his glowing purple eyes. He heard a voice in his head.



“Destroy the Teen Titans.”

Crowgirl
12-06-2004, 08:48 PM
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-(Takes a deep Breath) OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!


Okay, done now. That was good. But I'm a little confuzzled about the Rorek, Jake, and Melchior thing, but I hope it'll clear up.

T.T.Raven4
12-06-2004, 08:54 PM
What confuses you? I decided not to even include them, cause I couldn't think of where to go.

nevermore
12-06-2004, 09:14 PM
You made Jake evil!!! Yeah!!! Ow. Don't you throw that at me.

Ha. I'm still more evil than you...trust me.

Oh yeah, Post more soon.

T.T.Raven4
12-06-2004, 09:17 PM
I beleive you. *Hides knife behind my back*

Jake's not evil, but what I'll revela later, Is Rurik can mind control people...whoops, I just revealed it! lol! oh well! Jake's just being controlled. More out tommorow!

rrarbecy
12-06-2004, 09:25 PM
:eek: That's all I have to say.

T.T.Raven4
12-06-2004, 09:28 PM
YAY! NO NEGATIVE STUFF! Normally Rrarbecy has some kind of suggestions...
Oh well, I should be happy!

rrarbecy
12-06-2004, 09:32 PM
YAY! NO NEGATIVE STUFF! Normally Rrarbecy has some kind of suggestions...
Oh well, I should be happy!
I'm too shockled to give you a suggestion.

Aquagirl15
12-06-2004, 09:48 PM
wow! you got yourself unstuck very well. and that was amazing!! *jaw droops* awesome! more soon! or face to concquences!!! :evil:

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 03:21 PM
Thanks guys! I Have SOOOO many ideas for the next chapter. It'll turn out great. I'll put a big fight scene in just for you guys ;) :D

moro loci
12-07-2004, 03:36 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sweat:

Sproxie
12-07-2004, 05:30 PM
have I posted here? NO. i can barely remember where i have and haven't posted. :shrug: Wow, Great chapter! Jake, Evil? hmmm..... interesting, cant wait for more!

Crowgirl
12-07-2004, 06:13 PM
I'm too shockled to give you a suggestion.
I'm sorry, I don't think I heard you right. Shockled?

I did!?!?! Oh...

First Lordeykins and now this?!?! What a tangled web we weave....

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 06:15 PM
I didn't think it was that good, but i am my worst crictic :anime: so thanks!

rrarbecy
12-07-2004, 06:19 PM
I didn't mean to put the "l" in there. It was supposed to be "shocked." And did you HAVE to bring up lordeykins again.:mad:

CaligoRae
12-07-2004, 06:43 PM
:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: Wow. that was good. PLs write more soon.

Sproxie
12-07-2004, 06:49 PM
I didn't mean to put the "l" in there. It was supposed to be "shocked." And did you HAVE to bring up lordeykins again.:mad:thats how i felt about my thread.....

rrarbecy
12-07-2004, 06:50 PM
thats how i felt about my thread.....
??? I'm confused.

Crowgirl
12-07-2004, 06:56 PM
First Lordeykins and now this?!?!
No, sorry about that. :D

Sproxie
12-07-2004, 07:00 PM
??? I'm confused.And did you HAVE to bring up lordeykins again.:mad:
I didnt want anyone to bring up my thread....

now i'm forced to finish it.... :crying:

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 07:07 PM
Someone please explain what's going on here. And here's more. It's NOT the end.
***
Jake looked up, and he glanced at all of the Titan’s. Rurik’s words ringing in his head.





“Destroy the Teen Titan’s.”



The black wall disappeared, and nothing stood between Jake and the Titan’s. Jake’s eyes were radiating a bright purple. Purple flames swirled around him.



“This is the end!” Jake yelled.



It was like Jake and Ruriks voices put together.



“Titans Ready!” Robin yelled.



“Nothing will save you now Robin.” Jake said.



Jake leaped into the air, and hovered right in the line of the sun. It made it almost impossible to see him. Then, Jake seemed to disappear. Then, in the blink of an eye, he lunged right at Robin. Robin was on guard, but it was hard to dodge it. Robin pulled out his staff quickly, but Jake kicked it, and cracked it in half.



“Using your pathetic toys?” Jake asked.



Robin growled, and tried to sweep Jake’s legs. Jake jumped and swung a fist. Robin jumped backwards, and kicked Jake in the chest. Jake flew back, but flipped, and landed on his feet. Just then, Beast Boy charged him, in the form of a bull. Jake jumped up, and kicked him in the head. Beast Boy morphed into a gorilla, and swung his fist as tim. Jake grabbed his hand, and threw him behind him, into a wall. BB rubbed his head, and closed his eyes. When he re-opened them, Jake had sent a fist to his chest. Beast Boy’s mouth flew open as he tried to regain his breath. Jake elbowed him in the back of the head. BB was pinned against the wall. Jake placed his foot on Beast Boy’s throat, and began choking him. Beast Boy tried to yell, but his attempts were in vain. Before BB seemed to go unconscious, Starfire fired a few starbolts at Jake, sending him off of Beast Boy. He looked up at her, and fired a fireball at her. She dodged, and tried to kick him. Jake fired a beam of flames at her, hitting her dead on, and sending her to the ground. Robin fired his Bird-a-Rang at Jake, and it wrapped around him. Jake’s eyes glowed darker purple, and flames surrounded him. The Bird-a-Rang burned to ashes. Jake kicked Robin, and he fell to the ground. Jake began stomping his chest madly. Then, Raven surrounded Jake with black energy, so he was immobile. She hovered in front of him.



“Jake you must fight.” She said.



“Your attempts are in vain.” Jake said. “You can never get him out.”



Raven growled, and fired a motorcycle at him. Jake somehow broke free from the energy, and ducked, just avoiding the motorcycle. He lunged forward, and punched her in the face. She held her balance, and punched him back. It became a fist fight, as they exchanged blow after blow. Jake hit her with all her might, and sent her backwards.



“What’s the matter?” Jake said. “Can’t take the HEAT!?”



Jake fired a fireball at her, but she rolled out of the way, and kicked him in the jaw. He stumbled backwards. Raven jumped back up, and used her powers to launch 3 rocks at him. Jake dodged two, but one crashed into his legs. He fell, and held his leg in pain. Raven kicked him in the knee, and sent him flying to the ground.



“You can fight it Jake!” Raven said.



Jake looked at her, and groaned. Raven knelt in front of him.



“You have to fight.” She said.



Jake placed his hand in front of him, and before Raven could react, he fired a beam of fire at her. It sent her backwards, and onto the ground. She fell right next to Jake’s daggers. She looked up at Jake, who had his hand in front of her head.



“NOW, YOU DIE!” He yelled.



Raven grabbed the daggers, and held them tightly.



“I don’t have a choice!” She screamed.



Raven stabbed one dagger through Jake’s chest. He fell to his knees.



“I know it may kill you too Jake, but we must rid Rurik from this world.”



Jake held his chest. He had blood streaming down it. Raven looked at him, with tears streaming down her face. She leaned forward, and kissed him. Her emotions made a fire hydrant explode, but she didn’t care. She looked at him one last time, and stabbed the second dagger through his chest. Jake screamed in pain, as Rurik’s spirit rushed out of him, and faded into the sky. The daggers in Jake’s chest were glowing. He fell to the ground motionless. Then, there was a huge explosion that sent raven into a wall of a building. She went unconscious as the explosion engulfed the area around them.

CaligoRae
12-07-2004, 07:33 PM
Thats soo cool!!! Pls continue soon!!!!!:anime:

Aquagirl15
12-07-2004, 07:38 PM
you said it wasn't going to be bloody. JK but that was sooooo sad. :crying: i couldn't ever do that! is this the end for Jake? please don't let it be! case then it would be all Raven's fault.

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 07:38 PM
OH YEA! I'M COOL! Lol! Thanks CaligoRae.

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 07:40 PM
you said it wasn't going to be bloody. JK but that was sooooo sad. :crying: i couldn't ever do that! is this the end for Jake? please don't let it be! case then it would be all Raven's fault.
Sorry for the double post,

But It was just one time! And it was just...well you get it.

Is Jake gone, could it be all Raven's fault? Maybe:evil: I'll write more tommorow.

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 08:03 PM
I couldn't wait! I wanted to write more! Here's the last chapter! Epilouge comes next!
***

Raven slowly woke up. All the Titan’s were watching over her. The second she awoke, a sharp pain engulfed her whole body. Once her eyes opened the littlest bit, her eyes shot open completely.



“Where is Jake?” Raven asked.



All of the Titan’s suddenly had frowns on their faces.



“No…There’s no way.” Raven said. “Please tell me he’s okay.”



“I wish I could.” Robin said.



Robin glanced over at a bed a few feet away, and Jake was lying on it, motionless.



“He’s not going to make it.” Robin said.



Raven’s eyes shut tightly, but a tear managed to roll out.



“It’s my fault.” She muttered. “I killed him.”



“You did what you had to do.” Robin said.



“Yea.” Beast Boy said. “You beat Rurik.”



“But at what price.” Raven shot back.



Beast Boy backed up, just because of the intensity of her words. Raven sat up, and a sharp pain shot through her leg.



“Raven!” Robin said. “You can’t get up! You’re hurt!”



“I…don’t…care…She muttered through her pain.



“Friend, you must rest, for you are injured.” Starfire said.



Raven glared at Starfire, and that was enough for her to know to back off.



Raven hovered into the air, and went over to Jake’s bed. The meter above him said that he was close to his death. Raven examined his wounds, which were bandaged up. The bandages were red, soaked in blood. Raven knelt in front of his bed, and closed her eyes.



“His injuries are beyond your healing.” Robin said.



Raven didn’t listen. Her hands were surrounded in an icy blue aura. She placed her hands over his wounds, and tried to heal him. After a few minutes, there were no signs of it working. Raven’s eyes shot open, and she just stared at him. After a few seconds, the meter slowed down ever more. Raven looked at it, and slammed her fist onto his bed. Windows all around the room smashed. Jars holding medical equipment and other things exploded. Cyborg and Robin rushed up, and grabbed Raven.



“Raven, you have to calm down!” Cyborg yelled.



“There’s nothing we can do!” Robin said.



Raven stood up, and looked over at him. She walked over to him, and stared at him for what seemed like forever. Then, she kissed him softly on the cheek.



“Goodbye.” Raven said. “I’ll never forget you. I love you.”



A lone tear rolled down her cheek, and landed on his face. As it landed on him, Jake seemed to stir. The charts picked up, and his eyes opened a small little bit. Jake muttered 4 words.



“I love you too.”

Aquagirl15
12-07-2004, 08:17 PM
:D :D :D not dead, not dead, not dead!!!! YAY!!!! you didn't kill him!!! this is good and i don't want it to end. :crying: but all good things come to an end so i'll live. :sad:

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 08:22 PM
Sigh, I guess it was kinda short, but I think that this would make a good ending, plus I don't know what else to do...

rrarbecy
12-07-2004, 08:23 PM
What is it with the "healing power of tears." Anyway, that was a very touching pair of chapters. Excellent fight scenes, EXCELLENT!

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 08:26 PM
I like to do that. GOT A PROBLEM WITH IT!?!?!?!?!?!?

Didn't think so. Jk :D

Glad you liked it. I will have the prolouge out tommorow. I hate to say, but my body tells me to keep going, but I might just do a different fic, not including Jake, but we'll see. Either way, chances are,you haven't seen the last of my fics!!!!!

Crowgirl
12-07-2004, 09:01 PM
GOT A PROBLEM WITH IT!?!?!?!?!?!?


YES!THat was awesome!!! I loved it so much. It was really sweet. Please decide to post more!

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 09:03 PM
What do you mean by post more???

Just to say, I MIGHT not stop it here. If you guys want me to keep going, please say.

rrarbecy
12-07-2004, 09:05 PM
What do you mean by post more???

Just to say, I MIGHT not stop it here. If you guys want me to keep going, please say.
That was a dumb question. HOW CAN YOU END THE STORY THERE?????? IT MUST GO ON!!

T.T.Raven4
12-07-2004, 09:07 PM
I read when you said "That's a dumb Question" and before I went on I was like, IT ISN'T THAT BAD IS IT? Then I read the rest! Thanks! I'll keep going then!

T.T.Raven4
12-08-2004, 05:27 PM
K, here's the deal. There's two ways I could go.

1: Write more in the fic. Maybe like anywhere from 7 chapters, and maybe a lil more.

2: I'm thinking of writing a Teen Titan's Mini Series, and that would be a lot more stuff probly.

If I do 2, Epilouge will come next, and it'll end. If 1, I'll keep going. The choice is yours...

Aquagirl15
12-08-2004, 06:15 PM
um... um... uh... er. i don't know!!! :crying: it would be good both ways! i can't decide. why don't you do both? extend the story then write a mini series.:D it would work... :shrug:

T.T.Raven4
12-08-2004, 06:24 PM
True, But...sigh, I saw this coming. I guess I COULD, but I'd really prefer one or the other. I'll wait for some more opinions.

Sproxie
12-08-2004, 06:29 PM
i say do em both! or just # 1..... but- hey! i havent even commented yet on the last chapter! I enjoyed that chapter very much and- i haven't commented on the chapter before that either??? :rolleyes: they were both great! :sweat:

T.T.Raven4
12-08-2004, 06:39 PM
K. Thanks! I'll probably continue, and after that, I'll see how I feel. No Chapter out tonight. Hockey Practice! GO BRUINS!

rrarbecy
12-08-2004, 07:21 PM
K. Thanks! I'll probably continue, and after that, I'll see how I feel. No Chapter out tonight. Hockey Practice! GO BRUINS!
We beat them in 1974! LETS GO FLYERS!!!!

T.T.Raven4
12-08-2004, 09:33 PM
That's my teams name...I hate the Bruins.

I'm a Torornto Maple Leafs fan, GO LEAFS!

I'm not gonna write a chapter yet, casue I want to confirm with what I'm going to do.

T.T.Raven4
12-13-2004, 03:47 PM
Ouch. This fight scene blew so much, or at least I thought. Sorry if it sucks, which it does.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



After about 3 weeks, Jake was back to normal, and maybe even better. Despite the large scars on his chest, you’d never know what happened. Crime had been at an average rate, and the Titan’s handled it easily. It was different without Jake, but they had done it for a few years before he came. Everything had gone back to normal. Jake seemed a lot less stressed after Rurik’s defeat. At around 3:00 PM, about 2 weeks after Jake was stabbed, the alarm went off again.



“Titan’s trouble!” Robin said.



“Can I come with?” Jake asked.



“Are you sure you’ll be okay?” Robin asked.



“I’ll be fine.” Jake promised.



“If you say so.” Robin said unsure.



The Titan’s approached the crime scene, Cinderblock could be seen wrecking havoc around of an apartment building.



“Titan’s GO!” Robin yelled.



The Titan’s sprung into action. Starfire picked up Robin, and threw him into Cinderblock. Robin stuck his foot out, and kicked Cinderblock. Cinderblock endured the hit easily. Then, Star fired a barrage of Starbolts at Cinderblock, followed by one of her eye beams. Smoke shrouded Cinderblock, and when it cleared, a large stone fist reached through, grabbed Starfire, and threw her into the ground. Beast Boy followed up from behind, and morphed into a T-Rex. He rammed Cinderblock with his head, and sent Cinderblock flying. Cinderblock got up, and grabbed Beast Boy. He held him into the air, and threw him next to Starfire. He morphed human as he fell. When he landed, he stood up and wobbled.



“But Mommy!” He yelled. “Daddy ate all the chocolate fudge bars!”



He fell to the ground.



Raven lifted up a few large rocks. She fired them at Cinderblock. One hit, and sent him staggering backwards and the other hit and sent him to the ground.



Raven flew at him, and fired a few balls of black energy. They all hit, but Cinderblock brushed it off, and swatted her away. She jumped up, and kicked him in the face. Cinderblock swung his fist downward, and forcefully sent her to the ground unconscious. He grabbed her and held her tightly between his fists. Cyborg let out a loud yell, and punched Cinderblock with all his might. When Cinderblock turned around, Cyborg got out a few sonic cannon shots that hit Cinderblock on his chest. Cinderblock dropped Raven, but Jake caught her. Raven awoke.

“You okay?” Jake asked.



“Yes.” She muttered softly.



Jake looked up to see Cinderblock throw him backwards.



Jake let out a yell, and rushed forward at Cinderblock, but Cinderblock dodged quickly. Jake leaped up into the air, and attempted to kick Cinderblock, but Cinderblock grabbed his leg, and threw him down. Jake yelled as he fell to the ground. He landed with a grunt, and got back up. He ran forward as fast as he could. Cinderblock tried to punch him, but Jake ran to the side and kicked him down. By now, Robin had gotten up. He threw 3 exploding disks that hit him dead on. Those were followed by Starbolts and sonic cannon blasts. Cinderblock growled, and slammed both fists on the ground, which made a miniature earthquake. The Titan’s were all throw off their feet. Jake got up, and looked at Robin. He looked at his belt that had one exploding disk left.



“May I borrow that?” Jake asked.



“Sure.” Robin muttered in pain.



Jake grabbed it, and threw it at Cinderblock. Before it exploded, Jake hit it with a ball of black energy, and it exploded sending him backwards. When the smoke cleared, Cinderblock was down, seemingly unconscious.



Jake let out a sigh of relief, and looked at all the Titans. They all got up slowly.



“Nice job.” Robin said.



“Glorious!” Starfire exclaimed.



“Nice dude!” BB said, seeming a little dazed.



“Good work.” Raven said.



“Oh yea!” Cyborg said.



Jake loved the thanks. He missed it a lot during his injuries.



“Thanks guys.” Jake said. “Hey, why don’t you guys go back to the Tower, and I’ll bring him in?”



They all gave slightly concerned looks.



“Are you sure?” Robin asked.



I’ll be fine.” Jake said. “ I promise.”



The Titan’s hesitantly let him go, and Jake flew away, making Cinderblock hover next to him. After a few minutes, Jake approached the jail, and entered.



“Hope you guys have a big cell left.” Jake said.



“No problem.” A guard said. “We’ll take it from here.”



Jake set Cinderblock down, but the moment he did, Cinderblock jerked awake, and in a rage. Cinderblock reached into the floor, and pulled out a large hunk of cement. He threw it at Jake. Jake closed his eyes, and luckily moved out of the way. When he re-opened them, he was hit by a large rock, and he was surrounded by darkness.



Jake woke up in the exact spot a couple hours later. When he opened his eyes, he saw no one. There were rocks and debris everywhere, but no Cinderblock.



“NO!” Jake yelled slamming his fist on the ground. “I let him get away!”



Jake inched up slowly, and flew slowly back to the Tower. When he finally arrived, the Titan’s were all there sitting in the living room.



“What happened?” Raven asked.



“Yea.” Cyborg said. “Where were you?”



“I don’t want to talk about it.” Jake said.



Raven immediately knew what was wrong.



“Cinderblock got away?” She asked.



Jake shot her a glare, and stormed to his room.



“I can’t believe it!” Jake yelled. “I’m so weak! Why couldn’t I stop him?”



“I see you are in distress.” A voice said from a corner of his room.



A figure walked out.



“And I think I can help.” He said.

Sproxie
12-13-2004, 05:31 PM
*drool*
Nice...
Great fighting scene!
Cliffhangers + Great story = Evil
Who is that "figure"???!?

T.T.Raven4
12-13-2004, 06:36 PM
Eww? What was gross?

You shall see soon enough...Like tommorow!

rrarbecy
12-13-2004, 07:49 PM
oh NO! Not HIM again.

T.T.Raven4
12-13-2004, 08:18 PM
Who do you think it is? Who could it be...

rrarbecy
12-13-2004, 08:49 PM
Who do you think it is? Who could it be...
I would think it was obvious.

T.T.Raven4
12-13-2004, 09:01 PM
You will have to wait and see...could be right...

You're probably wrong. Chances are, you don't know who it is.

rrarbecy
12-13-2004, 10:14 PM
You will have to wait and see...could be right...

You're probably wrong. Chances are, you don't know who it is.
meh...whatever. I probably am wrong. maybe...

Aquagirl15
12-14-2004, 08:25 AM
well you posted more! :D and unless it's a new chacter he might know who it is. but i hope that this time Jake doesn't accept who-ever-it-is's help. the last time he did that he almost died. he shouldn't be that gulliable (sp?)! :rolleyes: this was good fighting scenes and all! POST MORE OR THE WEAPONS JAMBORIE WILL TRANSFER THEIR TARGET TO YOU!!!!!!! (my fic don't try to understand if you haven't read it :sweat: JK! they're out to get me. i have no power over them!!!! :crying:

Raven37
12-14-2004, 08:43 AM
I must say, I love this story. LOVE. I know you havn't seen much of my posts on this thread (*counts on fingers* Um, that's uhh.... none...) But I have been reading it. (I just am so time consumed and didn't have much time to post) But I decided that I had to let you know how good your story is, because it deserves that honor (As Ephidel would say). Anyways, WRITE MORE OR I WILL SEND THE EMPLOYEES OF THE PINK STORE FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!:evil:


-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/331/c/4/_raven__by_FreeLancerFox.gif

P.S.POST MORE OR THE WEAPONS JAMBORIE WILL TRANSFER THEIR TARGET TO YOU!!!!!!! We would never do that Aquagirl. We love to torture you the most! IT IS FUN!!!!!!!!!!:D

T.T.Raven4
12-14-2004, 07:55 PM
Jake turned quickly at the figure.



“W-who are you?” Jake said in fear.



“Do not fear me.” The man said. “I’m only here to help.



“Why should I trust you?” Jake said.



“Because I realize your problems, and I can make you better.” He said.



“What are my problems?” Jake asked.



“You think you’re weak.” The man said. You think that you are the one who causes everyone to get hurt. You wish you were stronger.”



However much Jake didn’t want to believe it, the man was right.



“I…” Jake said.



“You know I’m right child.” The man said. “Let me help.”



Jake looked at him, and closed his eyes.



“Fine.” Jake said. “I accept your help.”



The man nodded. He reached into his pocket.



“What are you doing?” Jake asked.



The man pulled out a small pocket watch.



“Helping you.” He said.



The man held the watch in front of Jake’s face, and the watch slowly moved from side to side. As it moved, Jake followed. His eyes followed the watch. After a few seconds, his iris seemed disappear. Jake’s gaze remained on the watch. The man pulled the watch away and snapped. Jake fell backwards onto his bed. The man reached into his back pocket, and pulled out what looked like the hilt of a sword. It had a small metal ball with spikes on it at the tip. (If any of you have played Soul Calibur 1 or 2, it’s Ivy’s weapon. I liked it, and decided to give it to Jake)



Jake awoke the next morning exhausted. He hardly remembered anything. He remembered seeing the man, a watch, and his memories were cut off there. Jake looked beside him, and saw the weapon.



“What’s this?” He asked himself.

“It is your weapon.” A voice rang in his head.



“Jake looked around.



“Where are you?” Jake asked.



“In your mind.” He said. “Last night, I used a form of hypnotism on you. This way, I can explain anything that needs explaining.



“What’s this sword?” Jake asked.



“It’s what I like to The Proto-Blade.” The man said. “It is a much better weapon than your powers alone.”



“How does it work?” Jake asked.



“Swing it.” The voice said.



Jake stood up and grabbed the blade. He swiped it sideways, but nothing happened.



“Try again.” The voice said.



Jake swung again. Nothing.



“One more time.” The voice said.



Jake mustered up all his strength, and whip lashed it forward. A long chain-like blade extended. After it went its full distance it pulled back.



“Whoa.” Jake said.



Jake swung it around, and began doing moves with it. He flipped backwards, and slashed it forward. He swiped it across his feet, and extended the chain towards the ceiling. It hit the ceiling, and knocked a huge chunk of it off. Jake then heard knocking at his door. Jake’s eyes widened. He used his powers to move the rock back into place, and he hid the weapon under his bed.



“Jake?” Raven asked from outside. “Is everything okay? I heard you talking.”



“I’m fine.” Jake said.



Raven walked in.



“Don’t lie to me.” She said. “I can tell when you’re lying to me.”



“I’m not lying Raven.” Jake said.

“Jake.” Raven said.



“I’m not lying Raven! Jake yelled.



Raven backed away.



“I’ll find out sooner or later.” She said.



She walked out of the room. Jake felt bad. He didn’t need to yell at her, but it was too late now. Just then, the alarm went off. Jake sprung up. He grabbed his new weapon, and placed it in his pocket.



“It’s Mumbo!” Robin yelled as all the Titan’s approached. “He’s wrecking everything. We need to stop him. Titan’s GO!”



All the Titan’s approached the scene, Mumbo could be seen. He was turning everyone around him into different magical things. Rabbits, cards, and all kinds of other stuff.



Mumbo looked over at the Titan’s.



“Lady’s and gentleman, and everything in between, meet out special guests, the Teen Titan’s!” Mumbo yelled.



“Your act is over Mumbo.” Robin said. “We’re giving you the hook! Titan’s GO!



The Titan’s rushed at Mumbo.



“And for my first trick, ABRA KADABRA!” Mumbo yelled.



A house made of large cards surrounded Starfire and Cyborg.



“Aw man! C’mon!” Cyborg yelled.



“I wish to get out now!” Starfire screamed.



Cyborg and Starfire pounded at the house with blasts of a sonic cannon and starbolts, but their attempts were in vain. Robin leaped at Mumbo with his staff ready.



“SHAZAM!” Mumbo yelled.



Robin’s staff turned into a snake.



“Oh that’s so original.” Robin said.



He dropped the staff, but the snake bit him in the leg, and he swelled up into a balloon like thing. He floated in midair. Beast Boy suppressing laughter attacked. He morphed into a rhino and charged.



“ALAKAZAM!” Mumbo yelled.



Beams of magic energy shot at Beast Boy. One was about to hit him, but he morphed into a mouse, and ran farther.



“ALAKAZAM!” Mumbo yelled again.



This time the beam hit BB, and he was smashed into a small box. His muffled screams could be heard from inside. Raven followed up. She rushed at Mumbo and tried to kick him, but Mumbo pulled off his hat, and it grew 5 times its normal size. It swallowed up Raven, and closed up, holding her inside. Jake growled, and rushed at Mumbo.



“And for the grand finale!” He yelled.



Mumbo held his wand in front of him.



“ALAKAZ-“



Jake sent a knee into Mumbo’s jaw. Mumbo jumped up, and Jake drew the Proto-Blade. Mumbo zapped a beam of magic at Jake, but Jake dodged. He extended the chain, and wrapped it around Mumbo’s neck. He pulled forward, and slammed him into the ground. Jake pulled him up by his neck. When Mumbo was standing, he wrapped the chain around his legs, and tripped him. Then, Jake heard a voice in his head.



“Nightmare.” The voice said.



Jake’s eyes widened. His iris seemed to disappear, but it returned at a bright orange. An evil smirk crept across Jake’s face. Mumbo had dropped his wand, and was crawling towards it. Jake placed his foot on Mumbo’s back, and crushed the wand with the other. Mumbo turned into a small man in a white shirt, and grey hair. He was whimpering in fear as Jake’s weapon approached him. Jake wrapped the chain around his neck, and began strangling him. Mumbo grunted and tried to bring air into his lungs, but he was unsuccessful. Jake then heard Robin’s voice.



“JAKE STOP! Robin yelled.



Jake snapped out of it, and the weapon uncurled from Mumbo’s neck. Jake then fell to the ground unconscious.

******



About 15 miles away, and about 100 meters underground.



A man stood in a dark room surrounded by monitors. The man looked on at Jake and Mumbo’s battle.



“Everything is going according to plan.” The man said.

***



Ok, in case you didn’t know yet, Yea, I lied! It was



Slade



Unless that’s not who you guessed.

Aquagirl15
12-14-2004, 08:11 PM
i thought i might be Slade but i wasn't sure... you will tell us what happens next or suffer!!!! :evil: very very good btw! :D

Sproxie
12-14-2004, 08:46 PM
man, i keep forgetting to sign off in this place!
ANYWAY, Cool chapter! and nice weapon... i only have one gripe, in Titan's it should be Titans without the apostrophe. you only put an apostrophe when you show ownership of something. (yea, i'm a grammer freak...) otherwise, great chapter!

T.T.Raven4
12-14-2004, 09:00 PM
I blame word. For Titan's (Or as it's supposed to be Titans,) The word won't tell me it's wrong. Same with the ownership. It's kinda hard to do when you don't know if it's right or wrong.

Thanks for the feedback guys!

nevermore
12-14-2004, 09:04 PM
Ivy? Ivy's my least favorite on the game. Voldo is the best. Hardest to master, but still the best. Nightmare is awsome too.

Good chapter. Keep it going.

T.T.Raven4
12-14-2004, 09:18 PM
Me? I know you didn't ask, but...

My top 5 in order:

Mitsurugi
Nightmare
Taki
Raphael
Cervantes

That's who I'm best as. I guess I'm not bad as anyone except Charade (When he gets bad weapons) and Seung Mina. They suck. Besides that, I'm pretty much good or average as everyone else. I love that game. I still play it today. If you can get off Ivy's signature grapple thingys where her blade snaps into pieces and goes through their head, you have her mastered. She's invincible with those moves. Sorry, I felt that needed stated.

And, thanks Nevermore for the feedback!

Raven37
12-14-2004, 09:34 PM
Very good! Sooooo interesting. Need.... more.... or.... will... strangle... Aquagirl...... Anyways, TTr4, I wasn't sure if you noticed, but Aquagirl said the spoiler out loud in her post.:rolleyes: Oh, and I'll have to get thatt game you speak of.... it sounds very fun....:D


-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/331/c/4/_raven__by_FreeLancerFox.gif

Aquagirl15
12-14-2004, 09:45 PM
well everyone was gonna read it anyway i mean come on!!!! :shrug: however why am i the one being strangled? you shouldn't strangle me strangle uh... EPHIDEL!!!! yeah she's not writing a story so you can strangle her! :D and it would be at no cost!!! sorry 4 the spam but i just wanted to save my life. :sweat:

T.T.Raven4
12-15-2004, 03:47 PM
It is. I love it. Mitsurugi is my homie!

You know Raven37, we could just...strangle both of them. :evil:

Thanks guys. I won't have any up tonight. Stupid hockey. :crying:

nevermore
12-15-2004, 08:06 PM
Me? I know you didn't ask, but...

My top 5 in order:

Mitsurugi
Nightmare
Taki
Raphael
Cervantes

That's who I'm best as.

My best 5 starting from the best, and what weapons they use :D :

Voldo, katars
Cervantes, Soul Edge and pistol sword
Kilik, rod
Maxi, nunchuks
Yoshimitsu, katana

If I use any of those, you know that you are dead. I am undefeated with Voldo! :evil:

Sorry. Please continue writing.

rrarbecy
12-15-2004, 09:51 PM
1. Yoshimitsu ROCKS!!!!
2. Hockey...is...not...stupid! LABOR CONTRACT NEGOTIATIONS ARE STUPID! I WANT A SEASON!!!!!

T.T.Raven4
12-15-2004, 09:52 PM
So that's why Nevermore has Katars...lol!

I was at hockey today, and we did a checking drill, and I was skating up on the ice, and I wrapped around, looked up, and got hit so freaking hard. I can still hear the ringing. Good thing is, it gave me an awesome idea! Thank you Nick! (He hit me) Now I have an awesome idea!

I suck as Voldo. How are you good?

nevermore
12-16-2004, 05:01 PM
So that's why Nevermore has Katars...lol!

I suck as Voldo. How are you good?

Katars are cool, it's not my fault, or Voldo's, that I like them.

I just am good with Voldo. I can make him jump at the opponent and bite their neck, TWICE!!! I can also do the freaky wheel thing. I am extremely weird, so it just makes sense that I'm really good with the weirdest character.

I've never really played hockey. I have only played the floor hockey at school. That unit is coming up, and I am one of the most feared people. :evil: Watch out everyone. When Nevermore gets his hands on a hockey stick, you're all dead, I mean....lol

Please write more soon... I need something to do. :sad:

T.T.Raven4
12-16-2004, 08:48 PM
Voldo, katars
Cervantes, Soul Edge and pistol sword
Kilik, rod
Maxi, nunchuks
Yoshimitsu, katana

I just noticed, what system are you playing it on? Cause in my game, those aren't listed weapons. Do you mean their original weapons? or...

Sproxie
12-16-2004, 08:53 PM
WHAT are you guys talking about???!? :confused:
And remember, Fluff = EVIL.

T.T.Raven4
12-16-2004, 09:14 PM
To keep this tpic right, here's the next, short chapter. This chapter is meant to get a whole new plot starting. Thanks again to Nick for the idea, and the pain!
***

Jake woke up slowly, and looked into the eyes of all the Titan’s. His vision was blurry, so it was hard to make out who was who. Once Jake’s eyes focused, Robin spoke.



“What happened?” Robin asked.



“I don’t know.” Jake said innocently. “The last thing I remember is hearing the word nightmare in my head, and then waking up here.



All the Titans scratched their heads.



“You mean you don’t remember anything you just did?” Raven asked.



“What did I do?” Jake asked.



Jake’s gaze transfixed on a small man lying on the ground. His neck was cut in several places, and he seemed to be having difficulties breathing. Jake’s eyes widened.



“I…did that?” He asked.



The Titans nodded.



“I think…I should go home.” Jake said.



Jake flew off towards the Tower. He arrived, punched in the input code, and entered. It was dark inside, and hard to see anything. Jake flicked on a switch, and the lights kicked on, revealing about 100 of Slade’s sentinels. Jake’s eyes widened, but before he could do anything, a sentinel wrapped its arms around Jake’s neck. The sentinels began piling onto Jake, so he was completely immobile. Jake tried to yell, but he wasn’t able to get anything out. Jake opened his eyes, and saw a dark figure. Jake couldn’t see any of his facial expressions, but he knew it was Slade. Just by the aura of menace he gave off.



“Let him go.” Slade commanded.



The sentinels released Jake.



“What do you want with me?” Jake asked.



“Nothing that I can’t obtain myself child.” Slade said. “You see, it was I who came to your room that night Jake.”



Jake felt the anger rising within him. Slade pulled out the watch.



“Remember this?” Slade asked.



Jake turned around, and closed his eyes.



“You don’t think I need the watch anymore do you?” Slade asked. “For little did you know, I’m right inside of you.



Slade began laughing. Jake held his ears.



“WHY WON’T YOU GO AWAY?” Jake yelled.



This just made Slade laugh harder. Jake looked over at Slade who was still holding the watch in his hand.



“Tell me this, where’d you get it?” Jake asked.



“I’ll admit, I couldn’t have done it alone.” Slade said.



Slade looked over at a doorway. The door opened, and a man walked out of it. He had a white robe, with a yellow skull on the front. He had grey hair that curled up on the sides.



“Jake, I would like you to meet my new partner, Brother Blood.” Slade said with a twisted grin.

rrarbecy
12-16-2004, 09:16 PM
BROTHER BLOOD AND SLADE TOGETHER!? *girly squeel*wwweeeee!
One question. HOw can you tell if SLade is smiling or not? He's wearing a mask.

T.T.Raven4
12-16-2004, 09:27 PM
He did it under the mask okay...Get over it...Jk. Lol

He's not the only character I'm bringing in. I advise you to go to a site that lists all the old Titan's, cuz I'm using a ton of em.

Raven37
12-16-2004, 09:43 PM
Ooh! New plot! Yay! No, wait, let me rephrase that: New interesting plot!!!:D I can't wait ot see what happens. POST MORE SOON!:anime:


-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/331/c/4/_raven__by_FreeLancerFox.gif

Sproxie
12-16-2004, 09:46 PM
BROTHER BLOOD AND SLADE TOGETHER!? *girly squeel*wwweeeee!
^ I agree, Awesome Chapter!

Aquagirl15
12-17-2004, 08:33 AM
awesome!!! that was deffinatly a plot twist. Slade inside of Jake! :eek: i can see bad things... bad things. :sweat: and Brother Blood would make Cyborg come into the picture more wouldn't it? i mean B. Blood is his villian! :D ok enough rammbling. kepp writing or i shall be forced to paint your room pink and w/ dare i say it? TELLIE TUBBIES!!!!! :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: (Ephidel500 made up the pink room thing i just took her idea and made it much worse!:evil:) ok if i spelt it wrong that is cause i never watched it when i was little. :rolleyes:

T.T.Raven4
12-18-2004, 01:03 PM
Jake stared at Brother Blood for a few seconds.



“Who is he?” Jake asked.



“You will find out everything soon enough, for our plan will soon go into action.” Slade said.



Jake smirked.



“What are you two going to do?” Jake asked. “If we call in the Titan’s from all around the world, you’ll never stand a chance.”



Brother Blood smiled slightly.



“Jake, there are a few things you should know about me.” Brother blood said. “Have you ever heard of the Hive academy?”



Jake had heard about the Hive a lot. It was said to be a school of super powered kids.



“Yes.” Jake said, even though he wasn’t entirely sure.



“Maybe you would like to meet them?” Brother Blood said.



Before Jake could object, a huge steel door opened. Jake looked on, and saw what seemed like hundreds of teenagers, some older, some younger. Jake looked on at them all.



“Jake, this will be your team.” Slade said.



“What team?” Jake spat.



“The team you will use, to dominate this world.” Brother Blood said.



“I WON’T listen to you.” Jake yelled.



“It’s not like you have a choice.” Brother Blood said.



“You’re ours now.” Slade said.



Jake shook his head.



“YOU’LL NEVER CONTROL ME!” Jake yelled.



Then, Brother Blood and Slade simultaneously said the one word.



“Nightmare.”

Jake was surrounded in black energy. He fell to his knees, and began screaming out in pain. Then after about 10 seconds, the room went silent. Jake opened his eyes, and a bright orange glow shone from his eyes. The Hive members watched on. Jake turned towards all of them.



“Now Jake, your first mission is to inform everyone of our presence.” Slade said.



“Meaning you must show the world what we are here for.” Blood said. “You must deliver our message.”



“Yes master.” Jake said.



“Now, to assist you, you may choose three Hive agents. Any more may attract attention.” Blood said.



Jake walked over where all of the Hive members stood. He saw 3 of them standing together. One was a short kid. He wore a green bodysuit, goggles, and a mechanical backpack on his back. Next to him, there was a girl. She had pink hair, and flustered cheeks. She wore a black shirt, and high heels. Above here, standing tall was a tall man. He had long orange hair, and a black shirt with a gold M on the front. Jake seemed interested.



“State your names and abilities.” Jake commanded.



“Jynx.” The girl said. “I use bad luck to destroy my opponents.”



Jynx fired a blast of pink energy at the ceiling, and a few tiles swooped down, and hit a few of the Hive members on their heads. Jynx smiled.



“Gizmo.” The small boy said. “I’m a master of mechanical devices.”



Gizmo made his spider walker appear, and he flipped around, doing an assortment of moves on it. Gizmo smiled triumphantly.



“Mammoth.” The man said in a deep voice. “No one can compare to my strength.



Mammoth picked up a giant machine next to Slade, and set it back down after a few seconds.



“Good.” Jake said. “I’ll take you three.”



The 3 smiled.



“Master.” Jake asked Slade. “Where do we strike?”



Slade pulled out what looked like a laser pointer, and he pressed the button on it. On the wall, a picture appeared of a large building.



“The gem of Mekki-Marri.” Slade said. “Prove to me what you can do.”



“Yes master.” Jake said.



“As he said.” Blood said to them. “Go, strike fear into the hearts of them all.”

Aquagirl15
12-18-2004, 11:10 PM
ooooooo creepy! this seems a lot like the 4th Series of Unfortunate Events book. how Klaus got hyptonized. well i don't know if you've read it but that's what it sounds a lot like to me. :shrug: anyway... cool! i like how you pulled Jinx, Mammoth, and Gizmo into the picture. this is going to get intersting... :D

T.T.Raven4
12-19-2004, 09:16 AM
ooooooo creepy! this seems a lot like the 4th Series of Unfortunate Events book. how Klaus got hyptonized. well i don't know if you've read it but that's what it sounds a lot like to me. :shrug: anyway... cool! i like how you pulled Jinx, Mammoth, and Gizmo into the picture. this is going to get intersting... :DI've read that book at least 10 (Literally) times. Those are the best books ever. I love them. I'm so glad bout the movie too.

Now, to the fic. This was kind of an introduction chapter. Jut to say the plan. I am planning on bringing in people that you've probably never heard of.

(Go to http://www.titanstower.com/meeting.html
once I post the chapter when I bring them in. That will inform you of all the characters I might bring in.)

New chapter up tonight, I sware!

~TTR4~

rrarbecy
12-19-2004, 09:18 AM
New chapter up tonight, I sware!~TTR4~
You should never swear. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm funny...

Raven37
12-19-2004, 11:38 AM
Ooh, I can tell this is gonna gety interesting. Please post more soon!:anime:


-Raven37

P.S. I've never read any of the Series of Unfortunate Events books, but I plan to someday when I get the time.:sweat:

Aquagirl15
12-19-2004, 12:05 PM
well i didn't think the Series of Unfortunate Events movie was as good as the books. they changed and added too much stuff. :shrug: and took important stuff away. but other than straying from Lemony Snicket's orginal works, the movie was pretty good.

so any way good more out soon!!!! :D

nevermore
12-19-2004, 12:31 PM
I have never read any of Lemony Snickets books. I read the Redwall series instead. I read three of the books in one quarter, and all of them were over 300 pages.

All right, right now I want to see more of this fanfic, if you'd please.

T.T.Raven4
12-19-2004, 12:36 PM
Nevermore: Yea, those are good too.

rrarbecy: Bite Me :D :p

Everyone: I will have more out tonight. I swa...Promise.

Aquagirl15
12-19-2004, 12:45 PM
ok ignoring how that made no sence at all... when do you think you'll get more posted? i wanna find out what happens!!!! :crying: please!

T.T.Raven4
12-19-2004, 12:52 PM
I'm working now. If Yall'd shut up, maybe I'd finish! Jk. LOL

More out...idk...soon...like within the next 1-2 hours.

T.T.Raven4
12-19-2004, 02:27 PM
Jake and the H.I.V.E. members departed from the Tower. After about a half hour of flying on one of Slade’s compact jets, the 4 of them arrived in a dark city. There were few street lights on, and those were even very dim. Jynx landed the jet on the roof and the four got off. They recognized the building they were on as the museum Slade had described. It was about 3:00 AM, so the museum was closed. Jake looked around. No one was anywhere in sight.



“Jynx, begin.” Jake said.



Jynx Nodded, and blasted a beam of pink energy on the rooftop. She then moved it in a circular motion. When it formed a full circle, Mammoth pulled the piece of cement out, and placed it aside. Then, Gizmo attached a thick rope around Jynx’s waist. Mammoth held onto the rope, and slowly lowered her down. As she got down about 15 feet, she saw a bright red gem. Even though it was dark, the gem still shone. Jynx smiled. She reached for it, but Gizmo’s yell stopped her.



“Wait!” He yelled.



Gizmo pulled out a small metallic, sphere shaped ball. He threw it down the hole, and it landed under Jynx. It exploded in a plume of grey smoke. When the smoke cleared, red beams could be seen surrounding the gem.



“Nice thinking Gizmo.” Jake said.



Gizmo nodded. Jynx stuck her hand through the red beams, and grabbed the gem.



“Got it!” She yelled.



“Bring her up.” Jake told Mammoth.



Mammoth nodded, and began pulling. Right as Jynx got about half way up, Jake heard the rope snap, and her fall to the ground with a loud grunt. Jake and the others looked down into the hole. There, they saw Jynx and 4 other figures. Jake groaned.



“You have GOT to be kidding me.” He said. “This was supposed to be an easy heist.” Jake pulled his head out of the hole.



Then, he heard the all too familiar words.



“Titans GO!” The person said.



Jake’s eyes widened, but then returned to normal. He thought it was Robin, but it sounded like a female voice. Jake looked back in at Jynx who was trying to fight off one of them. Jake and the others jumped through the hole, and landed next to Jynx. Jake glared at all of the intruders.



“Who are you?” Jake growled.



“We are the Teen Titans.” A girl said.



There were four of them. The girl who spoke had a red bodysuit, and long black hair. She also had golden wristbands, and a gold lasso hanging from her waistband. The second was a boy. He was wearing a yellow bodysuit that had a red lightning bolt down the front. He also had a yellow maks that covered the back of his neck, and the area around his eyes. He had red earpieces attached to his mask too. The third Titan was a girl. She had long red hair, a white shirt, with a magenta jacket. She also wore a bright pink skirt. The last one was what seemed like a robot. His head was oval like. It was orange, and had bright red eyes. He also had blue armor, and orange boots. Jake gazed at all of them and could just sense their power. Then, his ear communicator beeped. Jake pressed a button on the communicator and heard Slade’s voice.



“They are the Teen Titans from this city.” Slade said.



“Who are they?” Jake asked.



“The girl with black hair is Wonder Girl. She has super strength, and her bracelets can deflect almost anything.” Slade said. The boy in yellow is Kid Flash. He has super speed. The girl with red hair is Lilith Clay. She has telekinetic powers, meaning she can read minds, predict the future, and use her powers as weapons. The robot is Robotman. He is a robot with super strength and agility.”



“Okay.” Jake said.



“One last thing Jake.” Brother Blood said kicking into the transmission. “You WILL take them down at all costs.”



“Yes master.” Jake said.



Jake looked over at the Hive students.



“Let’s go!” Jake yelled.



“Titans GO!” Wonder Girl yelled.



Jake pulled out the Proto-Blade and extended the chain. It wrapped around Mammoth’s legs, and launched him forward. He crashed into Robotman, and began a vicious fist fight with him.



Meanwhile, Jynx tackled Lilith, and brought her to the ground. Lilith kicked her off and sprung up. Jynx fired a blast of pink energy at Lilith, but Lilith met it with a blast of her own. Lilith fired purple energy and their energies met. They swayed back and forth for control, until they both jumped out of the way. Jynx then rushed forward, kicked Lilith, and fired a large ball of energy at her. When the smoke cleared, Lilith broke through, and tackled Jynx. Their fight resumed. Gizmo had taken Kid Flash. Kid Flash ran quickly at Gizmo, but Gizmo extended his spider legs, and Kid Flash ran right under him, giving Gizmo enough time to knock him into the wall with one of his spider legs. Kid Flash crashed into the wall, but recovered quickly. He ran around Gizmo quickly and formed a tornado that sent Gizmo into the ceiling. Gizmo hit the ceiling, and crashed to the floor. After he crashed, he opened his eyes dizzily.



“I’ll get you booger brain!” Gizmo said.



Kid flash flicked him, and he fell over. Kid Flash smirked, and began running towards Lilith to help, but before he could take a second step, Gizmo grabbed his leg and tripped him, sending him to the ground. Kid Flash stood up, but Gizmo knocked him away with one of the metallic legs. KF crashed into the wall headfirst and went unconscious.



Meanwhile, Jake was fighting with Wonder Girl. Wonder Girl slammed a fist into Jake’s chest. Jake leaned forward holding his chest. Wonder Girl followed up with an elbow to Jake’s back sending him to the ground. Jake didn’t get up, but instead wrapped the Proto-Blade’s chain around her legs and sent her next to him. He then sprung up, and stomped her chest. She groaned, but got up. Jake swung the chain under her legs, but she jumped and dodged. Jake then wrapped it around her neck and sent her through a table nearby. She had trouble getting up, but she still did. Jake growled in anger, and whip lashed the chain at her face. It hit her, and a large cut formed on her forehead. She fell to the ground, almost screaming in pain. Jake smirked.



He then spotted the gem on the table where Jynx had dropped it. He reached for it, but Lilith stopped him, and grabbed it herself. Jake growled, and kicked her in the stomach. Jynx followed up, and kicked her down. Mammoth had throw Robotman through a wall, and Gizmo had been throwing bombs at Kid Flash who had woken up.



“Mission accomplished!” Jake yelled. “Retreat!”



Jake ran out of the museum, and the Hive members followed. Before the Titans could stop them, they had reached the roof, and were gone in the jet.



After about a half hour, they arrived at Slade and Brother Blood’s hideout. Jake knelt before Slade and handed him the gem.



“Excellent.” Slade said.



“Now that you’ve proven yourself, it’s time for the real mission to go into action.” Brother Blood said. “World Domination.”

Aquagirl15
12-19-2004, 03:18 PM
:eek: wow! that was cool! i never knew that there were Titans in every city or did you just make that up? either way it was awesome. i better go look @ that site you put up. before i got a chance to my brother kicked me off the computer. :shrug: so keep going that was a very good fight scene. :D

rrarbecy
12-19-2004, 04:26 PM
Incoorporating every Titan into the story? Cool, good thinking.

T.T.Raven4
12-19-2004, 08:19 PM
That's my basic idea. Bring in a bunch of Titans.

I made it up. I don't know if there's one in every city, but I thought it made sense.

T.T.Raven4
01-03-2005, 09:26 AM
Okay, sorry if this is considered bumping, but I'm just keeping an update.

Sometime soon Titans East will air. That will reveal to us what those twin dudes (Some members of Titans East) powers. I can't find any sources that talks about them yet, and I want to use them. Once Titans East airs, I will get more out. That's all I needed to say. Thanks.

~TTR4~

Crowgirl
01-03-2005, 03:28 PM
Mas y Menos have super speed. In case you were wondering (Which you are).

Since I am in a good mood (mainly because I told my arch enemy that she was a flat out snob and got her ticked at me), I will say that THIS IS AWESOME!!!!! And that's not just due to my good mood.

Brother Blood and Slade, oooooo..... Now there is a unstoppable team. Having all of the Titans is a great idea. Wonder why I didn't think of it... Oh well. Following Jake around is cool, and I like how you've put him with the H.I.V.E. (And Jinx! Woot woot!!)

Can't wait for more!!!

T.T.Raven4
01-04-2005, 10:01 AM
It's because you don't have my fan-fictiony genius! (Yea, Right) Thanks for the comments, and congrats on confronting your arch-enemy.

~TTR4~