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CaligoRae
11-17-2004, 05:10 PM
A/N:OK guys, this is my first fic so be nice. Its a Rorak, Raven and Malchior fic. It might start off slow and weird, but I promise it will get better. Thanks to all the peeps who helped me get this story started. and, no, the intro is not mine, but I want to say that it is J. K. Rowling's work and I don't own it.





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Blood becomes life, becomes fire, becomes air, becomes water, becomes wind, becomes earth, becomes lightning, becomes light, becomes darkness, becomes death, and death, in turn, becomes life once again. So is the endless cycle, the spiral in which no living being can escape, though many have tried.





Blood is first, the liquid of the body that sustains the second, life. That which is circulates, also, through the mind, absorbing memories, thoughts, and feelings that are relinquished to the earth through a cut in the flesh. Merely by blood, by thoughts, by being, all things can be accomplished.





Blood is life, blood keeps life, but blood can also take life. The living blood of a dead god is poisonous to dragons, phoenix, and unicorns alike. In turn, the blood of a dragon is coursing with magic, magic that can be made fatal to any creature. The blood of a phoenix, though, if mixed in the right potion, can also kill any who drink it. However, the blood of a unicorn is so pure, that it can sustain immortality in a being for a period of time, though with a high price,





Life is the second, and life is everything, in life all elements connect and are connected, they are---





"Hey RRRRaaavvveennn!!!!" It’s no use. Every time you settle down with a good book, he always comes a ruins it.





Raven walked over to her door and opened it slightly so that only half of her face was showing, only to be bombarded with Beastboy and Cyborg.





"What do you want!?!” Asked a very irritated Raven.





"We got this really cool new movie!!!" Said Beastboy while jumping up and down.



"What is it?" Asked Raven with a spark of curiosity.





"Urrr..well..yeah see...were not exactly sure what's on it, but its gota be good!!!" Answered Beastboy with a bit of nervousness in his voice.



"Yeah, it better be, we paid 30 dollars for it!!" Said an annoyed Cyborg





"Hmmm...I think I’ll have to say.. "The excitement was building up now. "Ummm.... NO!!!" Yelled Raven and with that she slammed her door in their faces. She had started to get on her bed where her book was when...





"OOOOHHH PPPLLEEEAASSEE!!! No one else will watch it with us." Called Beastboy from behind the door.







"I wonder why." Raven called back.







Just as she heard footsteps leavening a large pain entered her head. "What’s going on!!" Asked Raven to herself while holding her head. As just as she finished asking darkness covered her vision and she slipped into nothingness.







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A/N: Ok there ya go, the first chapter. I thought I Should leave it in a cliffhanger since everyone else does. So I hope u like it. I will start the next chapter soon depending on what u all think. Thanks for listening. CaligoRea





"This is the beast pie, in the history of pies." BB





"Well maybe you should call me...BEASTMAN!!! Beastboy were having a moment….don’t ruin it.... Beastdude?!? Rae and BB





"I shall go cultivate the fungus!!!" Starfire





"Your just jealous 'cause I sound like a rock star." BB

Raven37
11-17-2004, 05:22 PM
Hey, COOLESS! I'm the first one to post! Yay! Anyway.....Wow. This looks pretty good so far:anime: (although it's kinda exactly like spellbound):shrug: Hopefully it will turn out different.

P.S. In you quotes, it's "I shall go cultivate the fungus." ;) Just so ya know.

rrarbecy
11-17-2004, 05:47 PM
*sits gaping* woah... did you make up those first few paragraphs. Those were amazing.

T.T.Raven4
11-17-2004, 05:49 PM
Never seen spellbound, and I hate myself for missingit. This fic is interesting. Great BB and Cy play out, that's exactly how they act. Same with Raven

Keep Writing!:anime:

nevermore
11-17-2004, 05:58 PM
Isn't Teen Titans copywrited? If this turns out to be too much like spellbound, I'll report you to the cops.:evil: (I hate it when people make it to much like other episodes,)

CaligoRae
11-17-2004, 06:01 PM
Wow thanx yall. And T.T raven I got my avatar from u, I hope u don't mind tell me and i'll change it. Sry about the starfire thing i'll change it. And no i didn't make the first few lines, that would have been cool. Don't worry it will really change in later chaps well see ya

CaligoRae
11-17-2004, 06:02 PM
Oh yeah and if ya'll don't mind me asking then were do u get raven avatars? I've looked everywhere and there is just dumb stuff.

T.T.Raven4
11-17-2004, 06:05 PM
Raven 54 and Raven 37 can help you there. They know where to find sweet stuff.

TeenTitansGO!
11-17-2004, 08:10 PM
Hey, CR. Nice job, as I said before.

T.T.Raven4
11-17-2004, 09:33 PM
Don't think I've seen you around...Nice to meet you TTG.

Meanwhile, WRITE MORE!

JazzyChick
11-18-2004, 10:26 AM
See, I told you people would like it CR! You're doing awesome, just watch out 'cause its sounding almost exactly like Spellbound. so uh yeah, just keep writing and don't take too long to post please!

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 10:31 AM
OK ya'll, Like i said its not gona be anywhere close to spellbound. It will mega change later, but u r going to have to find out on ur own. Soo to get to the point.....STOP WARNING ME ABOUT IT!!!!:mad: It WILL Change. OK, gooooood. Now don't mean to be mean, but it just gets annoying. Thanx:anime: :dot:

TeenTitansGO!
11-18-2004, 10:35 AM
Hey T.T.Raven4! I've been here for a while just to let ya know. I've got a fic too, but it's on the second page. That's because ppl won't post on my thread like they will on CR's, my beloved wonderful friend WHO GETS MORE POSTS IN 30 MINUTES THAN I HAD IN 2 WEEKS!!!!!!:evil: ok i'm fine now.

Raven37
11-18-2004, 04:42 PM
Why, thank you for the recognition T.T.Raven, and yes, I can be of much help on the avatar thing if you want. If you have Instant Messaging, that would be a good way for me to tell you about it. If not I can private message you.;)

Anyway, It's good to hear you have ideas to make it different from spellbound. It's good so far, and keep posting! http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/320/d/4/True_Colours_Shining_Through_by_adamguest1985.gif

P.S. I like this dude:http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/320/5/3/_cane__by_ilphin.gif (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12329935/)

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 06:55 PM
A/N: Hey guys, I’m back!!!(Horror music plays in the background,) OK well here is the 2nd chapter and I don’t own any of the ‘fire becomes whatever’ stuff ok: ) Just like I said in last chapter. I’m go to try and make this one little longer, of chores my Thanksgiving break thing is coming up so I’ll be able to update sooner and write more, well anyways thanks for all of ya’lls great reviews. Well here we go.



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Raven woke up about 3 hours later. “Wow, what happe…"she looked around and saw her room on a mess. Books and clothes and other things were thrown around the room like a tornado had come threw. She looked at her roomed and remembered. “But how could I have do this unless….NO!!! It can’t be, I won’t let it be. Ok, ok I have to calm down and think things threw, if this did happen then one of the other would have heard me…THE OTHERS!!! Oh no they have to be ok!!!!” Raven ran to her door and opened it. She looked down the hall and saw that they were in about the same condition as her room. “They have to be ok, they have to be ok!!!” She repeated this to herself again and again until she stopped in front of the main room door. She slowly took a timid had and placed it on the doorknob. She pushed the door open to reveal the sight she was most afraid of.

She looked around the room only to see Robin’s, Starfire, Cyborg’s and Beastboy’s broken bodies. “This can’t be, THIS CAN’T BE!!!” She said as she fell on her knees crying. “Oh, but it is child. And it was you who did this to them, it was you who listened to them as they screamed in pain, it was you who killed them. You are truly my child.” Said a dark, booming voice. She knew that voice all to well. “ Come my child, join me and we shall rule all that we desire.” Said the voice. She glanced once more around the room before bowing her head in defeat and in a soft, low voice answering” As you wish…father.”



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“NOOOOOO!!!!!” shouted Raven as the upper half of her body shot up off the ground. She looked at her clock and it said it was 3:45 A.M. The words of her father still rang in her head, the images of her only friends bodies, twisted and mangled in abnormal ways and the thought that she had done it all. Just as she finished thinking there came a pounding on the door.



“ RAVEN, RAVEN, OPEN UP!!!!!” Came Robin’s voice from behind the door.



After there was no answer



Robin said, “alright, Cyborg, break it down…1…2…”



Just as Robin was about to say three the door, slightly opened to reveal half of Raven’s face.



“WHAT DO YOU WANT!?!” Shouted Raven.



“Everyone jumped back at the tone of her voice.

“Ummm…we heard you scream and we thought you might be hurt or something.” Robin answered regaining his composure



“I am NOT a child; I don’t NEED to be checked on!!!” Raven said, said trying to clam down.



“Ok, ok, we were just check’ in on ya, we heard you scream and we were afraid, no need to bit our head off.” Cyborg said, putting his hands up in defense.



“ Yes friend Raven, we care about you dearly, we would not want anything bad to happen to you. Please tell us, why did you scream?” asked Starfire, smiling sweetly.





“Are you ok and can we go back to bed now?” asked a very tired Beastboy.



“Yes, I am fine; I just need to meditate for a while.” Answered Raven.



“Ok, well call us if you need anything.” Said Robin.



“Don’t worry I won’t.” was ravens reply before she shut her door.



She listened to all the footsteps go down the hall before jumping back on her bed. She sat there for a few minutes before standing up and going to a tapestry on the wall. She moved it back to reveal a wooden door with a star engraved on it. She touched the star and the door started to open. Once the door was finished opening, it revealed a lot of mystic treasures, mostly positions and scrolls and a few odd objects here and there, but the majority was taken up by books and a chest, but not just any books and chest though, they were the books that Malchior had magically morphed into her room and as for the chest, it was chest that with held the book Malchior was trapped within. She moved over to the chest and hesitated before opening it up. When she opened it she grabbed Malchior’s book and headed out of the secret room, when she got out she sat down on her bed. After taking many deep breaths, she closes her eyes and opened the book quickly. After she had opened the book, she opened her eyes only to see what looked like the inside of a normal looking book, but she knew better. When she was done, she put the book back in the chest, but before closing the lid she looked once more at the harmless looking book. She wondered if he could see her now, she wondered if he was thinking of her, how she wished she could just let him out again to be with her and hold her once more. Sure her friends did give her attention and love and stuff, but it wasn’t the same. Luckily she knew better this time; the only thing he would do if she let him out would be kill her and destroy everything. She closed the lid and thought once more, ‘maybe one day I could let you out again Malchior, maybe one day.’



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A/N: OK guys there it is. Sry I didn’t add any cool sounding stuff, u know what I’m talking about. Anyhow, did u guys like it. I was kind of amazed that I had written so much, but I guess that’s what happens when u lose track of time. Any ways I don’t think it was that good. If u guys don’t like it, then I’ll stop, but suggestions are welcome. Thanks for listening. CR



P.S. Oh yeah and sry for the less ness(hehehe) of spacing.



This is the beast pie, in the history of pies." BB


"Well maybe you should call me...BEASTMAN!!! Beastboy were having a moment….don’t ruin it.... Beastdude?!? Rae and BB





"I shall go cultivate the fungus!!!" Starfire





"Your just jealous 'cause I sound like a rock star." BB
"I'm not creepy, I'm just...different." Raven

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 07:01 PM
Scared ya didn't I. I knew the first part would get some jaws to drop b/c mine dropped when i wrote it. Sorry about all the editing and sps. I just want to make it PERFECT for ya'll. Now was like still to much like Spellbound?!? Nope didn't think so. well see ya

TeenTitansGO!
11-18-2004, 07:06 PM
Good job, but it was a little bland. I don't know, and please, please work on your grammar. Ask Mrs. Priest about it if you need help with proofreading or ask me or Jazzy.

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 07:07 PM
Oh be quite TTG. I'll work on my grammer as soon as U work on ur writeing.:evil:

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 07:08 PM
What are u doing on now anyway?

Crowgirl
11-18-2004, 07:13 PM
Very nice indeed, love it. I like how she misses Melchior/Rorek. This is gonna be good. What is this bland, TTGo? This stuff is edible, NOT bland at all.


Have you ever heard of a place called Ashland? Sorry, just wondering.

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 07:16 PM
Fraid not CG( for the Ashland thing, though it does sound familar,weird), don't worry bout TTGO. He's just messing w/ me. And i have read your story, i think its awsome!!! :eek: <<<(I think hes cute)

Sproxie
11-18-2004, 07:20 PM
good chapter, and i like your new avatar caligoRae. ;)
Ashland...? nope.

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 07:35 PM
Hey sprox, Yep and its all thanx to u!!! I could not get the one i really wanted b/c after i changed it to 75 pix, it said that it wasn't JPG or something!?! Any ways glad u liked it. WOOOHHOOO, PEEPS LIKE MY STORY:anime: MOre than TTG.
Ha, i laugh at u TTG:evil:

Crowgirl
11-18-2004, 07:38 PM
Aww... I know a Mrs. Priest who lives in Ashland. I was hoping for some company here in Trashland. That's what we call it here. As for the bland thing, I was messing too.


PLEASE POST SOON!!!!

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 07:41 PM
Are u talking about the story or a reply? And Mrs. Preist is a teacher at my school well mine TTG'S and Jazzychicks at least. I hope they don't get mad at me for telling that. They better not ar i'll have to beat them up!!!:evil:


Anywho where do u live? Well i mean what place ya know like state of country.

Man i have edited this like 3 times. So i have an off day for spelling and TTG starts to pick on me!!!:crying: :crying: :crying:

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 08:50 PM
OK ya know what i'm gona post the 3rd chap, but u guys are sooo mean:crying: Only a few peeps reviewed:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: Ok well this is for the peeps who care. * Starts to cry.* of coures as soon as i get done w/ it HEHEHEH which will hopefully be tonight.

CaligoRae
11-18-2004, 09:16 PM
ok so i won't be able to do it tonight. I have to go "Study". Oh well i hope i get more reviews. * sniff*

Raven37
11-19-2004, 08:29 AM
The triple post burns!!!!! You should use the edit button, and put it all on one.;) Anyway, Your story's coming along nicely, and I do hope you post more soon!!!!:D

JazzyChick
11-19-2004, 01:51 PM
I'm really liking it Caligo! and NEVER ask me to profread ANYTHING! my english teachers all tell me that i don't understand grammer (or spelling for that matter...) anywho, you better not take too long for your next post, and don't give me any of your false humility junk about not being a good writer. just kidding, but you are a lot better than you give yourself credt for.


oh, you're doing a good job of making it not sound like Spellbound.

CaligoRae
11-19-2004, 02:04 PM
OK guys. I a working on the 3 chap and this is where things get...interesting. It should not take too long, b/c this is Jazzychicks, TTG, and my last day at school.:anime: Anyway this means i will have more time to work in it!!!!!

OK well i hope more peeps will see this well have a good read?


CALIOGO

Crowgirl
11-19-2004, 02:39 PM
If you want, you can PM the chapter to me and I'll proof read it for you. I'm okay at it, so if you want to, go ahead. I won't stop you.

Raven37
11-19-2004, 04:44 PM
Whatever you do, DON'T send it to me or Aquagirl!!!! Especially Aquagirl....no offence Jessie but you know what I mean.....;)

CaligoRae
11-19-2004, 09:32 PM
NOTICE:If this is your first time to read this then pay not attention, but if you have read this before, i had to delete a chapter.:crying: Well i mean i'll put it up later and edit it. It was not really helping me with the rest of the story and i couldn't fit it in. It was a chapter about the Titans getting jobs, i'm going to put it in later, but i want to put it in to where i can work with it. Thanks for everything amd i really sry.

Lord Welshi
11-19-2004, 09:44 PM
Well, the story is pretty good. Having not seen any episodes of the 3rd season (british TV sucks), i only have the vaguest idea about the whole malchior.Raven thing. But, that aside, this is shaping up to be pretty good.

However, this chapter seems to be trying to do too much. I'm not saying it's bad, necessarily, quite the contrary, i enjoyed reading it. But it went by a little quick. The scene in the bookstore could have been much longer. Perhaps describing the place in more detail, or describing the owner and Estella (sp?). Oh, and would Raven have made a friend quite that quickly? She may very well have done, but we hear nothing about how it came to be!

Mostly tho, just work on the descriptions a little bit, both for actions and locations. Other than that, this is good stuff.

Oh, and "OK Team: let's go get a newspaper!" I LOVED IT!!!!

JazzyChick
11-19-2004, 09:50 PM
you're doing great babe, just slow down when you type! i bet you wouldn't have half the type-os (how the heck to you spell type-os???? oh well, i guess it doen't really matter. :shrug: )

nevermore
11-19-2004, 09:55 PM
I wish that I could work where Raven worked. It sounds like my kind of place. I like dark. Wisdom and common sense is found in the darkness. At least, that's my experience. Very good

Sproxie
11-19-2004, 10:16 PM
i like how this story is coming along! very good chapter, post soon!

CaligoRae
11-19-2004, 10:22 PM
ok guys sry it was fast and thanx. Sry i think i'll cahnge the part with Estella lord welshi you were right, she wouldn't have made friends THAT quick.;)

Ok, sry for the changes. I hope that didn't mess ya'll up to bad.:sad:

TeenTitansGO!
11-21-2004, 04:32 PM
I have an absolutely grand idea! Do a rewrite of that chapter! You could split it into two sections. One section would last throught the bookstore scene, and the second would take on, in a more elaborate and descriptive approach, the whole room thingy. If you agree, everyone that reads this will understand that you are doing a rewrite. BTW! I loved the Joe and Estella thing. GREAT STUFF! I think you were just short on character names, though. LORD WELSHI IN YOUR'S TOO?!?!?!?!?! you and Jazzy get all the attention! URGH! He's mine. I FOUND HIM! HE CAME TO ME! *thinks slowly about his next statement* ummmm....you should...um...get a..um..uh.um...proofreader. AHHHH! don't hurt me! runs far, far away into the darkness.

JazzyChick
11-21-2004, 05:02 PM
don't be jelous(sp?) TTG, you need to relax, deep breaths. that's right, inhale....exhale...

anywho, you better post soon! i mean, you can't give us a cliff hanger (:evil: which are evil :evil: ) and then take forever to post!!!! you must give me more!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

Raven37
11-21-2004, 06:55 PM
That was Great!!! but,Why? Why must you set a cliffhanger for us? please don't let me fall off the cliff. (basically i'm saying, WRITE MORE SOON!!!)

-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/306/9/0/Cunyao_by_zau.gif

T.T.Raven4
11-21-2004, 07:37 PM
Ok, I have not seen Spellbound, so this is why I'm confused probly.

1. Who is Malchior?

2. What was in the book? Like in Spellbound, what was in the book? And what did it do?

3. Not a question, a compliment. Great job! The Job thing was hilarious. It does make a good point that they do eat too much and all that stuff. Nice Long chapter. WRITE MORE! OR I WILL BE FORCED TO POKE YOU FOR LONG PERIODS OF TIME WITH THIS STICK! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

CaligoRae
11-21-2004, 08:08 PM
Ahhhhh!!! Ya'lll Rock. HAHAHAHAHA, Yeah TTG, u better run, far and fast!!!:evil:


U r so funny!! Anyway, sry to leave it in a cliffy, but i'm suffering from writers block at the moment. I might just slip it into, but i don't know. Anyways i was planning to do a better thingy of the store and stuff in later chaps. AAAAAHHHHHH!!!! I HATE WRITERS BLOCK!!!! Now i know how u felt JC. Anyway, sry Lord Welshi if my friend scared u. He was abnormally weird when he wrote that, but he is the one who showed me and JC this site and showed us Vanishing Act, which was really good i might add. Anywho, Well ya'll with help from my friends to get over writers block, then i think i'll write the next ones soon.:anime:

T.T.Raven4
11-21-2004, 08:10 PM
Writers block sucks so much. I hate it. I sit there awake at night like...Must...think...of...idea...

CaligoRae
11-22-2004, 07:08 PM
Ok well, i think i'm gona post a few poems and that should get my mind goin. Don't worry i already have them writen and i WILL NOT leave Turning OK. So don't wry, i'm just posting someother stuff. K , forget that, i left all my poems at school so i'm almost done with chap 4 so i'll try to hurry.

CaligoRae
11-24-2004, 10:48 PM
A/N: OK, NOW I HOPE YA”LL READ THE A/NS B/C I NEED TO SAY I CHANGED THE END OF THE LAST CHAPTER. I came upon something much better and I can’t have the ending of the last chapter stay the same if I want the story to turn out like I want it to. Sry it took sooo long guys. I hope this time my thread becomes “hot” Other than that I think I have gotten over my case of writers block. Anyways, I finally finished this chapter. Well this is where things kind of start to get hot. Well thanks for the support and I hope ya’ll like it. And its gona pick right up were it left off, so if u don’t get the beginning then I think u should go back and read the end of the last chapter.

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With elements, though, there is no third or forth on a line, they are all together, they are all third, while Death is the forth. Some select elements can be combined to create new ones, but these new elements are still products of the original. For example, water and air can be combined to make rain, water, air and wind can create storm, which will, in turn, generate its own lightning. Lightning is so pure energy, this combined with anything becomes a more powerful and, in some cases, more destructive elements. But lightning



Can also be used as a source of power that can be used to obtain different results for different spells.







In fact, taking apart any element can have very interesting, thought dangerous, effects. Consequentially, this is also true with life, Death, and even Blood. But even those wizards powerful enough to safely handle these three non-elements do not dare try to master their spells. They are merely there as points of reference in the endless cycle. In this book, the reader will learn to master the elements, an understand the non-elements as well. But be warned, reader, of the danger you face if you are a truly capable sorcerer.

Raven had been reading here book when she heard a noise. She looked up from her book and around her room. When she found nothing wrong she looked back down at her book. She was just getting back into her book when she saw something move out of the corner of her eye. She looked up and saw an odd looking shadow, but she didn;t know for sure. She went back to her back once agin, but payed more attention to the shadow. Moments passed and the shadow moved slightly, but that was all she needed.






“Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos!”



Raven was suddenly sitting straight up in her bed, her eyes filled with white lightening, her hands glowing a black even darker than the night, and the shadowy figure was suddenly with a rope of black light turned to matter.



“No one comes into, nor defiles, my room without suffering the consequences.” She said.



As if her voice didn’t scare the figure enough, she was now floating in the air before the one who had broken into her room, the force of the energy surrounding her was causing her dress (or night gown, whatever.) and flared sleeves (Sry that wasn’t in the description.) to flow about her form, black lightening crackling from her hands and all about her room.



“I can understand that, believe me I had no intention of ‘defiling’ your room in the least.” Said a pained, British accent.



“But, you see, I had little choice in the matter. If you’ll just let me explain.” The voice, she KNEW THAT VOICE!





Raven relinquished the power she had summoned, including the rope that was binding the figure, and turned on the lights. White hair, black body suit, armor, a scarf over half his face, and those crystal blue eyes she knew so well, yet didn’t at the same time.



“Rorek?!?” She gasped



Raven leered, “No, it’s impossible, who are you?” She demanded, her eyes turning white again.



“No, you were right, I am Rorek. But how do you know me?” He asked, gathering himself up.



“Wait, you must have read the book, so you do have it then.” He said.



“You’re not Rorek, he lived over a thousand years ago, who are you and why are you so interested with the book?” Raven asked, not relinquishing her powers again as she stood before him, prepared to bind him again incase he tried anything.







“Please, let me explain, I am Rorek, I am the one who sealed the dread dragon Malchior in that book. It may seem impossible that I could be so old, but if you will allow me to explain everything will become clear.” He assured, holding his hands up in an attempt to show that he had no weapon or any intention to do harm.



Raven allowed the lightening to die down, but her eyes still glowed white with power to she still wasn’t going to trust him. She fell for this once, she wasn’t about to do it again.



“Start talking.” She ordered.





“ It’s true, the battle was wedged a thousand years ago, and since then I have had my share of adventures, none of which proved quite as dangerous, but then a seer revealed to me that one day Malchior may be risen again, and then no one would be able to stop him unless I was able to preserve my power. So I sealed myself in a jewel that had been imbedded with a torn page of the book so that, if even Malchior’s power might surface, I would be awakened to do battle one last time. Fortunately, I see Malchior has yet to be fully released, bit I know that it is only a matter of time. Please, I implore you, give me the book. I must destroy it soon, or Malchior will awaken.” He explained.



Raven let her power die down, but took caution when doing so. He didn’t know that Malchior had already been awakened, nor did he know that she had resealed him in the book. Perhaps she could trick him into revealing himself, and the instant he did, not ONLY was he going back out the window the painful way, but he would have all 5 of the Titans to deal with.



“Alright, say I believe your story, how do I know your not some imposter whose real intentions are to awaken Malchior yourself? And if you are really Rorek, why didn’t you destroy the book a thousand years ago when you had it?” She asked him.







“I had thought to seal the book away forever with powerful and ancient magic’s, magic’s that not even I could get back through, nor relinquish. But it seems that, because I was sealed instead of killed, my spell’s power slowly diminished, and then dissipated altogether. Either that, or a wizard greater than I was able to take the book from its place. I do not know. And also, at the time I had not the means to destroy the book and destroy Malchior both together.” He explained





“How do you know the book is here?” She asked him.



“This is where I felt the awakening power flow from and into the jewel I was sealed in.” He answered.





Raven frowned, so far everything he said was quite probable. From Malchior’s teachings, she knew the spell he had used to seal himself, and to make sure he reawakened when Malchior’s power was beginning to surface, or awaken. But maybe she could still catch him.



“What jewel did you use?” She asked





“Alabaster.” He answered almost immediately, “Encased in a silver set.”



“What was the incantation to the curse you used to seal Malchior?” She asked him.



“Is this an interrogation of some sort?” He asked.



“Maybe.” She answered.



“You’ll never be satisfied that way.” He said.



“Especially if you are convinced I’m not to be trusted. And, to be honest, I am not at all convinced YOU are to be trusted either.”





“Oh, and I suppose that’s why you decided to plunder my room instead of confronting me?” She asked.





“Would YOU be inclined to trust someone who often hides their face in the shadow of a cloak? Not to mention your choice of décor.” He questioned.





“You’re on to talk.” She muttered back. “All I can see of your face are your eyes.”





“Touché. It seems we are both on equal grounds.” He said. “Perhaps there is a way to find a common ground, but now is not the time. I assure you, my only intentions are to destroy the book.” He told her.



Rave frowned, something wasn’t right here. If the natural way to destroy the book would set Malchior free, wouldn’t he have told Raven to do it? Perhaps he didn’t know, said a voice on her head, It is possible that Malchior would think that, because he was bound to the book, he would burn with it if it was also burned. She thought. Perhaps she would give him the benefit of that doubt, but she wasn’t just going to give him the book.





“I cannot let you have it.” She said.





“You don’t understand, if I do not destroy it quickly, Malchior might be released!” He exclaimed, taking a step forward in his urgency. Raven began to crackle with power again. Rorek stepped back, his eyes were unsure; they were telling her that he was considering whether or not to challenge her power. She appeared the formidable foe indeed. Then suddenly his eyes widened slightly, and something was shut off. He blocked her empathy. “You are powerful, I do not wish to fight you.” He said, “But I must insist that you give me the book, if you have it here.” He said.



“It’s here, but it’s been locked away.” She told him.





“A wise decision, bit I’ afraid it won’t hold Malchior if he truly awakened.” He said.



“He won’t I made sure of that.” She told him.





“How can you be certain?” He questioned.



“And if I didn’t want you to know?” She asked him, raising an eyebrow as if to dare him to challenge her.





“Well met, sorceress. Perhaps, the, there is time for us to find a common ground.” He said. Raven opened her mouth to reply,





BWEEEEP BWEEEP BWEEEP!!!!!!!





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A/N: Ok, there it is. It took me forever. Sry if it was weird at first, like I said go back and read the last part of chapter 3 if u are confused. Well anyways, I hope u like it, and maybe this time it will turn into a “hot thread.” Well see ya.





“You’re just jealous ‘cause I sound like a rock star.” Beastboy



" I not creepy, i'm just....different." Raven

" Maybe you should call me....BEASTMAN!!!! Beastboy were haveing a moment, don't ruin it.......Beastdude?!?" RAE AND BB

Sproxie
11-25-2004, 12:47 AM
Good chapter! but isnt Malchior the actual Wizard and Rorek was the dragon?

raven54
11-25-2004, 02:10 AM
nope, CaligoRae had it right.nice chapter. i wonder if this is really the real Rorek, or another trick? meh... post more soon so i can get my brain untwisted!

Raven37
11-25-2004, 06:21 PM
Ooh!!! Please post more!!! There are soo many questions to be answered!!!! MORE!!!!!

-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/306/9/0/Cunyao_by_zau.gif

JazzyChick
11-26-2004, 02:30 PM
yeah!!!! you posted!!! EVERYBODY DANCE! its an inside joke, sry if you don't get it. anywho, i liked it, there were a lot less typo's (i still don't know how to spell that...)! yeah! so uhhhhh, post soon please! :crying:

CaligoRae
11-26-2004, 03:57 PM
* stops danceing* Yep!! I'm sooo glad u liked it. I don't think that TTG has seen it yet

CaligoRae
11-26-2004, 06:46 PM
*sniff* My tread is not hot anymore:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:

starburn1116
11-26-2004, 06:55 PM
please don't cry

i loveyour story
please continue

JazzyChick
11-26-2004, 06:59 PM
yes it is babe, when it turns red that means 'hot thread with new posts', but when there are no new posts it'll just be blue with black lines comming off of the top.

CaligoRae
11-26-2004, 09:01 PM
ohh , thanks and i just wanted to say that i'm almost done with the next chapter!!!:anime: :anime: It will be up soon. I'm lookin at today or tomorrow

starburn1116
11-26-2004, 09:43 PM
yay!

by the way. i thought that this would be a good place to show off my new sig.
thanks again caligorae

Adrastea
11-26-2004, 10:10 PM
I LOVE IT!!!

This is very cool. carry on quickly, i am held in suspence!!!

CaligoRae
11-26-2004, 10:14 PM
Sry to post again, but how do u guys keep those things on the bottom of ur posts? U know the things like " Your just jealous cause i sound like a rock star." and things like that. Do u type them each time???? Sry to bother ya'll, but i really want to know.

raven54
11-26-2004, 11:56 PM
go to the user cp and click on the signature tab.

T.T.Raven4
11-26-2004, 11:59 PM
Sry to post again, but how do u guys keep those things on the bottom of ur posts? U know the things like " Your just jealous cause i sound like a rock star." and things like that. Do u type them each time???? Sry to bother ya'll, but i really want to know.
User CP, Edit Signature, then type in whatever you want for your sig!

edit: Whoops! Raven54 beat me too it, so sorry for duplicating!:sweat:

CaligoRae
11-27-2004, 08:46 PM
OK i'm doing th enext chapter tommorrow. I hope it goes over well. I'm not sure what time, but it WILL (hopefully) be up tommorrow. Unless my parents decied(SP?) to be mean and annoying.

TeenTitansGO!
11-28-2004, 05:05 PM
WOW! I MUST SAY WOW! *finally stops dancing two days after the dance* I'm sorry for my previous...umm....encounter with this thread. I am a very rude and picky guy(hey! I can admit it!). Your vocabulary was awesome! (I have a thing for big words, even though I don't know many.) This story rocks, and, frankly, I'm glad and jealous that your thread is a hot thread. We shall meet later and speak of these issues. LOL! I'll tty2m CR! cya

P.S. AHHH! CR, your sig is gonna get you in trouble. it can only be 6 lines i think. hurry and shorten it.

TTG~I'm lovin' it

CaligoRae
11-29-2004, 04:29 PM
Thanx ya'll. Anyways sry i didn't get it up yesterday or Saterday(SP?) I got a new ps2 game.:sweat: Anyways i have 9 to 10 pages saved on word and i'm gona break it up and put three pages for each chap. This staory is VERY far from over. So if the next chaps i put up don't end in cliffys then don't think its over. I wrote it all together so it most like like will not be in a cliff hanger at the end. I'll try to make it one thought. Anyways it should be up hopefully tonight. Anywho JE NE.

Love Cal:jerry:

Crowgirl
11-29-2004, 08:19 PM
Well, hurry it up and post the next chapter, or I will have to get my chopsticks....

Yes, I do mean it.:evil:

CaligoRae
11-30-2004, 07:17 AM
A/N: Ok guys, here’s the next chapter. I hope everyone likes this one just as much as the last. I might not do much for the fighting parts b/c I’m just not good at them. Ok anyways here I go. And just to tell ya. Its gona pick up right where it left off. Sry if it’s not really long. I had originally made 9 pages.



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“Of course.” Raven grumbled





“What is that?!?” Rorek asked looking around.



“The alarm, someone’s in trouble.” She answered going into her closet. She then used her powers to swiftly change from her nightgown into a spare costume and came back out, hood over her face. “This way.” She said.



“You want me to come with you?” He asked.



“You’re not staying in my room.” She told him flatly, opening the door.



“Fair enough.” He returned sprinting after her as she flew down the hall, down the stairs, and into the living room.



“It’s too late!!!!” Beastboy was yelling.



“Hey Raven, we have…Who’s this?” Asked Robin.



“This is the one who broke into my room.” Raven answered darkly.



“Dude! And he’s not dead yet?!? Beastboy exclaimed at Rorek with shock.





“I have gotten very little sleep; it is too late and too early at the same time.” Starfire said as she emerged.







“No time to ask questions, he’ll have to come with us.” Robin said. “Titans go!!”





They ran down to where Cyborg’s car and Robin’s bike was. Robin rode his bike and the rest climbed into the T-Car. Rorek sat in back by Beastboy.



“Hey man, how come I have to sit in back with the creepy room crasher?” He demanded



“I am sorry my presence is inconvenience.” Rorek said.





“Hey….I recognize that voice… (Gasp!) You’re-



“Beastboy,” Raven said, she leaned became and pulled Beastboy to the middle so she could whisper a few word to him in his ear then sat him back down.



Beastboy glared at Rorek, “Seriously, dude, are you sure you’re still alive?



(Ok, quick A/N here. I’m gona skip some of the fighting parts. I will have some fighting parts in the later chapters. Sry for the interruption.)



“If the alarm rings again, we are not available.” Starfire said. She was a wreck, her hair was everywhere, and there were bags under her eyes, and her eyes themselves ha d lost their sparkle.



“Sorry, Star, but we’ve still got a few things to work out.” Said Robin, jerking his thumb towards Rorek, who, Raven found, had somehow managed to get a little too close to her.

She floated away giving him a suspicious look.





“Uh, right, what’s your name again?” Cyborg asked.



“I am the wizard Rorek, a pleasure to make your acquaintance.” He said, extending his hand in friendship.





Cyborg raised an eyebrow, “RRRiiight, uh huh, you break into Rae’s room and you think we’re gona be all chummy and stuff? Well you got another thing cumin. Now, if it was anyone else’s room we might not have this problem, well maybe if it was Star’s, but going through Raven’s room? That’s just wrong. Hey, wait, did you say your name was Rorek?” Asked Cyborg suddenly.



“Cyborg,” Robin began ushering his friend over to the rest of the group, which all huddled a ways away from Rorek. “Could you excuse us for a sec?” He asked.



“Of course.” Rorek nodded.



“That’s the guy who-“Cyborg began, realization in his eye. No on was asleep anymore.



“We aren’t sure, he could be an imposter.” Robin said.



“Either way, if any of you tell him anything,” Raven started, dangerously.



“We get the picture.” Beastboy said, holding his hands up in defense. “But what do we do? We can’t keep him here, how can we thrust him? We’ll have to keep an eye on him otherwise he’ll just break into Rae’s room again, by the way, why was he in your room?” He asked.



“He wants me to give him Malchior’s book; he claims he wishes to destroy it once and for all.” Raven answered.



“Right, but what is he doing here? Isn’t he over a thousand years old or something?” Robin questioned.



“Actually, it’s quite possible, especially if he’s the wizard he says he is.” Raven said, crossing her arms in consideration.



“If he were lying, he’d probable think up some more plausible story, then. How would he know that we’d be able to tell what he said was possible?” Robin asked.



“Say what?” BB asked “I don’t get it.”



“If he wanted us to believe him, he’s have come up with a more believable story, which makes the one he has seem more truthful, especially since Raven says it can be done.” Robin explained.



“He still went into Raven’s room.” Said Cyborg with a rather creepy look in his eye.



“He went thought Raven’s room, that’s, if possible, worse.” BB said with the same expression. Raven sweat dropped.





“He clams not to trust ,e, as if he’s even in a position to chose whether he does or not.” Raven said.





“Yeah, that’s bogus!” Cyborg exclaimed.



“He defiled the sanctuary of a fellow girl! Dear friend Raven, would you like me to join you in doing something incredibly unpleasant to him?” Starfire asked.



“Uh, Starfire? Are you feeling okay?” Raven asked



“We could throw him in the laundry shot for ya!” Cyborg offered, grinning scarily.



“That’s it, all three of you, just go to bed.” Raven told them.



“Uh, yeah, Raven and I can handle this.” Robin said.

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A/N: Told you it would not end in a chillfy.I tryed:yawn: Anywho, you know the drill and sry for not posting it yesterday. I kinda lost track of time.:sweat: Hoped ya'll liked it.;)

Sproxie
11-30-2004, 04:58 PM
OOOooOoo i liked this chapter alot!

Dear friend Raven, would you like me to join you in doing something incredibly unpleasant to him?” Starfire asked.
Hilarius! :D

JazzyChick
11-30-2004, 05:05 PM
yay!!! i liked it a lot CR. uhh yeah that's all i wanted to say.

Oh! and post more soon!

TeenTitansGO!
11-30-2004, 08:12 PM
NICE CHAP GIRLYIRLYIRL! I've got one comin' in my fic.

JazzyChick
12-02-2004, 10:04 AM
ummm are you posting anytime soon?

I might have to make my army of killer ninja hamsters hit you with a bananna! (muhahahahah :evil: ) so, uhh POST SOON!!! (or else :anime: )

Adrastea
12-03-2004, 12:36 AM
I really like this. oh so cool.

Good work.

CaligoRae
12-03-2004, 08:53 AM
I think i might stop my story. I'm not getting very much FB sooo......I don't know. Do ya'll want me to stop it? I need to know.:crying:

Lord Welshi
12-03-2004, 12:16 PM
You think you're not getting much feedback? Go look at my story, Vanishing Act. Look at my first 3 chapters. Then look at the amount of feedback i got. The most i got was about 2/3 replies. There were some chapters where i had NO feedback between them! But i continued, and look what happened! You should continue. If you do not....

Lord Welshi commands it! :general:

CaligoRae
12-03-2004, 01:34 PM
Hahaha, OK maybe i will. After all, i enjoy writing it. So yeah i guess i will. I just didn't think anyone really liked it. I thought that mine sucked b/c everyone else had awsome fics and , well, i thought mine sucked, lets just leave it at that.:anime:
Anyways, thanks for the post.

TeenTitansGO!
12-05-2004, 02:21 PM
I know whatcha mean girl. I have the same feeling. No one frickin' replies.

Rae
12-05-2004, 02:47 PM
This is a great fic!

I can't believe that i never read it until now!

I like what your doing (although like lord welshi i have only very basic knowledge of the whole Raven-Malchior thing) so keep writing

Adrastea
12-05-2004, 03:25 PM
I post!!! At least i try to. So, because threatening people is mean, and shamelessly begging is annoying, please just post soon!!

CaligoRae
12-05-2004, 07:28 PM
a/n: OK, here's the next chapter. I hope ya'll like it. And again its not gona end in a really good cliffy or anything so i'm giving you fair warning.

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“Are you*yawn* sure?” Cyborg asked.






“Yes.” The two said at the same time. They went without another complaint.





“What has been deiced?” asked Rorek, standing up from his seat on the floor.





“Nothing yet, it’s pretty late after all.” Robin answered. “I guess you could crash with me until something is, though.”





“’Crash’?” Rorek questioned.



“Uh, I mean you can sleep in my room for the night.” Robin answered



“Right, that being said, I think I’ll go ‘crash’ in my own room now? Raven said floating up the stairs. She eventually got to her room and, with out bothering to change, fell onto her bed.



It wasn’t long before she was once again disturbed by a knock on her door. “Who is it?” She called groggily.



“It’s me.” Said Beastboys voice.





Raven walked over to her door and opened it just enough for half her face to be visible. “Yes?” she asked.



“Um, well, I couldn’t sleep without asking, are you okay?” He asked in concern. “I mean, I know that Malchior guy pretended to be Rorek and all…but you know, if this dude isn’t the real Rorek then, Cy and I will give him a good beating, what’d ya say?” He asked, trying to be cheery. When it didn’t work his smile fell, “Well, I just wanted to make sure….”



“I’m fine Beastboy and even if I wasn’t its not like I could show it.” She said





“Yeah I know, but if you ever need a shoulder or something, we’re here for you.” He said.



Raven’s expression softened, “Thanks, I’ll remember that. Goodnight.” She said closing her door.



“Goodnight Raven.” Beastboy said before leaving.







“Friends Raven?” Called an overly cheery voice from behind her door.





“Yes?” Raven called back, trying her best not to sound irritated.





“In light of the new discovery, Robin says that we must postpone our trip to the mall of shopping until later, but bow he would like to see us all in the living room to discuss that which is delaying our trip.” Starfire called.



“I’ll be right down.” She said.



“I shall be awaiting your companionship eagerly!” Starfire said.



Mental note, don’treturn Starfire’s magazine I found in the hall to her, they’re doing enough damage already. Raven thought. She then closed her eyes and cleared her head.

I must suppress my emotions, Malchior hurt me with his trickery, but I have risen above that. I am untouchable, I will not be broken again. I will face this one who claims to be Rorek with a clear mind. I will let all possibilities, no matter how unfavorable, enter my mind. I will no lounger be clouded by the past. She told herself. Meditating on that day only for a little while before she deemed herself empty and cleansed of her worldly thoughts and feelings.



Raven pulled her hood up over her head and phased through the floor and a wall before floating into the living room.



“Alright, all that’s left is Beastboy.” Robin said.





“Want me to wake him up?” Cyborg asked, look way to hopeful.



“Uh, no.” Robin answered.



“I shall sing the Sonnet of Insomnia in order to relieve him of his laziness!” Starfire exclaimed.





“I’ll get him.” Raven said.



“No need,” Beastboy emerged with a large yawn, “I’m here, and I’m up.” He assured them, thought he hardly looked ‘up’ at all.



Robin cocked an eyebrow, but turned to Rorek, “Alright then. Why don’t we start? Raven told us why you’re here, but why don’t you tell us.” He said.

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a/n: Told you so. The ending suck badly. Oh well. Thats it for now. Thanks for reading.

Sproxie
12-05-2004, 08:25 PM
Nah, the ending didn't suck ;) that was a good chapter! i didn't really get the part about Starfire's magazine though.... anywho, please post soon!

Rae
12-06-2004, 12:46 PM
That so did not suck! What are you talking about?

JazzyChick
12-06-2004, 09:19 PM
CR, of course the ending didn't suck. Now, what'd I tell you about false humility? (better yet, what did Mary say about false humility. i know you remember the pride talk) anywho, hope you get the next chap up soon. no one has posted in any of the fics i'm reading and i'm kinda looking for a good reason not to work on my own.....oh well, :rolleyes: guess i'll go work on mine.

post soon or i'll sick herbert and the evil furby returned from the crypt on you :evil: (muhahahaha)

Adrastea
12-08-2004, 11:43 PM
This fic is so cool, please don't stop it. It can get very discouraging, but every story needs an end, and who better to come up with it that the person who dreamed up the idea in the first place?

So. Please post soon, cause I really like the way you portray this story, it sounds natural and unforced, so please contintue and post a new chapter soon

CaligoRae
12-12-2004, 05:34 PM
A/N” Wow. Sry for taking so long. I hope you enjoy this chapter. And PLS REVIEW!!!



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“Perhaps I should start from the very beginning then. A thousand years ago, as you many already know, I wedged a war with a terrible dragon who went by the name of Malchior. He was so powerful; it seemed none could stop him, not even another dragon. I defeated him, but only just so that he was sealed within my book. I was indeed a great wizard at the time, but not powerful enough to destroy the book without releasing the dragon. So I sealed it within the bowls of the earth, with magic’s so ancient I only had a basic knowledge of them. So, after many more adventures, I came across a seer who told me that one day Malchior would be released again, and if my power was not preserved, he would be free to wreck his vengeance on the earth and none could stop him. So, once again, I called upon ancient magic’s, sealing my soul to a jewel imbedded with a page I had torn from the book previously, so that when my body died, I could be resurrected, and I would be there the moment Malchior awakened once again.” He explained





“you say you tore a page from the book, if the book was sealed away so that not even you could get to it, how did you get the page?” Raven, who had been listening very closely for just such an occasion, asked.





“Well met again, Lady Raven, but you see I had taken the page before sealing the book. I knew that, with it, I would know the condition and whereabouts of the book itself with only a simple spell. And even had I kept it with me, I may have found a way to make sure I was released when Malchior was.” He answered.









“You couldn’t not with out using very powerful dark magic.” She told him, crossing her arms over her chest.





“Magic itself is not dark or evil; it is the person who uses it that is.” He said.





“That is not true, dark magic has a mentality of its own. It seeks destruction, and not just physical destruction either, it can break the mind of one who is unable to properly use it, the effects of a dark spell gone wrong awry are catastrophic at best.” She told him.





“So it is only true evil, and dangerous, if the caster is not in full control.” Rorek refuted.



“Hey, can you two save the magic talk for later, the rest of us are having a hard time following.” Beastboy said. Raven looked around and found that, sure enough, the rest of the titans were starting at them with bemused looks on their faces.





Rorek chuckled, “Very well. After I was awakened, thought that Malchior had arisen, I believe I caused quite a scene, especially when the jewel I had been sealed in was a center piece for a fair lady’s accessory. I was surprised to find that I could not sense Malchior, but fortunately I knew where his power had awakened and I knew that, if I was to find him, I would have to become familiar with this future time. Thankfully, the maiden who owned my jewel was kind enough to help me. I have since been learning more about your society. Eventually I was able to find out that the place Malchior had awakened in was in this very tower. I learned more about you through the people of the city, and actually saw when you saved many a life from some horrible creature. I saw that Raven was a powerful sorceress, and deduced it back up once I had found the book, I assure you.” He said.





“At least nothing was broken or ruined, except for my curtains and maybe my window.” Raven put in.









“Sorry about that, I wasn’t concentrating well enough when I tried to leave. I was that startled if you can believe it.” He apologized.





“That still doesn’t erase the fact that you went into MY room.” She said, her voice becoming more and more scary with each word. But she relaxed her face again and took deep, silent breathes to calm herself down. I will NOT let him get to me. I will suppress my emotions. She told herself.





“Well, I guess I can understand why you broke in instead of confronting us about it all, but what I don’t understand its so important that you have the book.” Robin said.





“It must be destroyed, or Malchior will forever be awakened, even if I have to reseal him this time, he will still be able to come back. That must no happen.” Rorek told them.



“Dude, I’m all for destroying that thing!” BB exclaimed.



“I don’t know about all this, if you weren’t confident enough in your own power to confront Raven fact-to-face, what make you think she won’t be able to find the spell that will destroy it herself?” Robin asked





“Yeah and how do we know that you’ll destroy it?” Asked Cyborg giving him the evil eye.





“How do I know that she’ll destroy it?” Rorek asked.





“Uh, maybe we should discuss this in another room.” Robin suggested.



“Robin.” Raven said. Robin looked and backed away. He wouldn’t wish that look on Slade, much less himself.



“Okay, maybe not.” He said, giving Raven a nervous smile. Rorek gave them both questioning looks, and then looked at the others, who stiffened and gave him ceezy smiles. If there was one thing they could have done to tell him they were hiding something without outright saying it…….





“Now I have a question, why is it that all of you know of Malchior and I, and yet the book is in the sole possession of Lady Raven?” He asked. They all looked at each other, as if asking the other for an answer. ”How, also, are you aware that Malchior is a dragon which was trapped inside that particular book. Even if you had read it, you would not have known.” He said. “Unless your sorceress sensed the power in the book.” He added



“Um, actually,” Robin started.



“Dude, shut up!” Beastboy exclaimed a little too loudly.





“It seems you are not telling me everything now.” Rorek said crossing his arms over his chest.





“It’s ok Beastboy, I got it.” Robin said, giving Raven a reassuring glance. “We don’t like to talk about it, but the truth is Malchior did get free.” He said.







“What?!? How, I mean, how did you defeat him?!?” Rorek questioned.







“We didn’t, it was Raven, actually.” Robin answered.



“Uh, yeah, we don’t like to talk about it because of, um, it’s a pride issue.” Cyborg inserted.



“Yeah, we got our butts handed to use. Not surprising because it was a DRAGON!” Beastboy put in.





“How did you defeat him?!?” Rorek questioned, now looking at Raven.





“I used a spell I learned from reading your book, the very same spell that sealed Malchior into it was written down. I believe that’s what the seer meant when she told you he could only be defeated if you preserve your power.” Raven answered.





“Of course!” Rorek hit his hand with his fist, “I didn’t have to preserve myself, because she never said I had to be the one to reseal him! All I had to do was make sure my powers and spells were preserved.” He said “And, it seems, I did enough by recording that particular spell it seemed. You truly are powerful if you were able to learn it merely by reading it,” He told Raven.





“But that’s so sad!” Starfire exclaimed. “You sealed yourself away for no reason at all, and now you have awakened into a strange and different world, there is not need for you! What shall you do?! Where shall you go?!” She exclaimed.



“Hey, it wasn’t a complete waste, without him we wouldn’t know that Malchior could be revived again! And without him we also wouldn’t have known there’s a way to completely destroy the book and the dragon along with it!” Beastboy pointed out.



“You know, you did kick some pretty good butt last night, really helped us out on the mission.” Cyborg pointed out.



“Uh, you’re not suggesting that….” Raven started, too late.



“Oh yes!!! You can become one of us and stay here!” Starfire exclaimed joyously. She took Rorek’s hands, “We can all become good friends and you can help us in our fight against the wrong-doers!” She said.





“I would very much like to do just that, if there is no objection.” He answered, though a little nervous with Starfire’s outgoing personality.



“Well, I’m all for it!” Said Beastboy.



“Uh, we have to take an official vote, and the vote has to be unanimous. But the vote can be issued after we’ve known you for a while.” Robin said.



“Yes, for now we shall take a vote on allowing him to stay with us for a said period of time, correct?” Starfire asked.



“Uh, yeah, but, guys, we—uh…” Robin looked around, “Raven?”



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A/N: Wow that took a while. Again I hope you liked it and sry for taking so long that next chapter should be up sooner than the last one.



Caligo

Sproxie
12-12-2004, 06:11 PM
Wow.... i love this! i'm gonna add this to my sig... if it even fits..... :sad:

JazzyChick
12-12-2004, 06:15 PM
you posted, EVERYBODY DANCE!!!! (sry if you aren't in on the joke, oh well. more fun for me...) *jumps up from chair and starts doing the cotton eye joe*

uhhhhhh, good job and PLEASE POST SOON!

CaligoRae
12-12-2004, 06:37 PM
YES!! * jumps up and jions JC* I finally finished that chapter!!!:anime:

Raven37
12-12-2004, 08:18 PM
That was a great chapter. I'm so glad you posted more! This story is really getting interesting. Post more or I will send the emloyees of the Pink Store for you!:evil: (If you don't know what the Pink Store is, don't ask...):sweat:


-Raven37http://fs5.deviantart.com/i/2004/331/c/4/_raven__by_FreeLancerFox.gif

Adrastea
12-12-2004, 09:39 PM
I love it!!!!!

He jumped out of somebody's piece of jewlery, that's hilarious!!!!

TeenTitansGO!
12-15-2004, 08:01 PM
*jumps up to join CR and Jazzy* Chicken is good. :D I'm rightin' a fic too. u should read it. please. nOW! SQUEAKY!:p

TTG~Who the Dickens is Boz?

CaligoRae
12-17-2004, 10:17 PM
I'm really sry to leave you hanging for sooo long. I have finals this week and they go on till thusday so i'll try to post wednesday or Thursday or something, but i'll try to post this weekend if posable. Pls don't give up on me yet.

Vivace
12-17-2004, 10:25 PM
It's okay I'm sure you'll do as well as i do well mabye not THAT good but really CaligoRae your gonna do fine.

CaligoRae
12-29-2004, 11:57 PM
A/N: Hey, sry I haven’t posted in a while. I’ve had a lot of thing going on and I’m afraid that this chapter isn’t going to be as long as the others. I have had so family issues lately and I hope to get things settled, but until then pls be patient and PLS post back. Thanks and enjoy.

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He doesn’t bother me, he’s not the same person, why should I care if he’s on the team or not? That means less work for me, doesn’t it? And, besides, if everyone’s occupied with him, I can have time to myself. It won’t bother me; it is illogical that it would bother me. It was Malchior pretending to be him, not him at all. This isn’t working, I must clear my mind, think logically. He is a wizard, a great wizard. Not only could I benefit from his knowledge, but he would be a great addition to the team as well. So why does it feel that my heart is being strangled when I look at him?!?



Raven opened her eyes to find that black energy waves were surrounding her whole room, threatening to start working their destructive force if she did not calm herself. She forced her body and mind to relax, concentrating only on floating cross-legged, in mid air. “Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos…Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos…” She repeated, feeling her power leave the room and renter her being where it all was safely kept at bay. She cleared her mind, thinking of wide, open spaces, fields of grass, endless skies. Her mind was free from all earthly ties; it was free to touch the endless expanse. Nothing could touch her, nothing could keep her back, she was----



Knock, Knock, Knock.



Of course, she should have expected it. After all, most of the tension in the air was because of her; of course her presence would be missed. She should have known.



“Raven?” It was Robin this time; she had expected Beastboy or Starfire.



Raven opened the door so that only half her face was visible.



“Yes?” She asked, as if it was a normal day and she was going through her normal meditation exercises.



“Um, you kind of left us and…well, I want to let you know, that if this bothers you, Beastboy and I will vote against him joining with you..” He told her.



“Beastboy?”



“Yeah, we’re here for you Rae!” The green teenager said, squeezing his head into view from behind Robin.



“If Rorek makes you uncomfortable then he doesn’t have to join! Besides, we already have the beat magic-user in the universe, right Robin?”



“Right” So should we tell the others it’s a no go?” Robin asked her.



If I am to truly set my mind free, I must confront that which causes my emotions to surface, head on. Hiding will not fee my mind. Raven told herself.





“No” She said after a moments thought, “Count my vote as a go.”





“Are you sure?” Asked Beastboy.





“Logic says that we will only benefit from his presence, logic also says that if there is a problem, his membership is not permanent until we have all worked together for a few months.” Raven said.



“Logic doesn’t always have a right solution.” Robin pointed out.





“No, but running away from one’s problems is never the answer. Count me in.” She said.



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UURRGGG!! That was horrible!!!! Oh well I hope someone enjoyed it. I truly am sry for the late up date, but hey, conceder this a late Christmas present. Better yet, conceder this an early New Year’s Present. Well I hope to get the last chapter up soon, but as of now I don’t k now when, just pls hang in there.



Thanks again,

Caligo



P.S. I hate p.s



P.S.S sry, the real thing is…do ya’ll think I should change my avatar???? Let me know what you think. And if ya have any good suggestions let me know, but it has to be Raven and one of a kind. Thanks again.

Sproxie
12-30-2004, 04:18 AM
It wasn't horrible, I liked it. It was just a bit short. I liked the begining, it was funny, alway showing how someone is annoying her. And as for your avatar, you can keep it, it's nice. But if you ever need a good unique (sp?) raven (or any character) avatar you can ask me. :D

Rae
12-30-2004, 08:30 AM
You can't call that horrible!!

I liked the bit where Raven was having a chat with her slef and i liked the way both Robin and BB were willing to vote against Rorek for her

You don't have to change your avatar if you don't want to, it gets confusing when people constantly change thier avatars *cough*Drae*cough*rrarbecy*cough*

Rae

TeenTitansGO!
12-30-2004, 02:15 PM
Great. It was very short, but it was very good as well. Change your av if you like. Cool.

TTG~I knew there was something

CaligoRae
12-30-2004, 04:07 PM
i told ya it would be short, but i promise, the next one will be nice and long for ya.;)

JazzyChick
12-30-2004, 04:36 PM
it was good Caligo, just one complaint. its p.p.s not p.s.s. p.s. stands for 'post script', so it'd be 'post post script', not 'post script script'. sry, but i did that for a long time and my sister made fun of me relentlessly, thought I'd save you the pain. :shrug:

anywho, post more soon, PLEASE! :crying:

Crowgirl
12-31-2004, 10:35 AM
I know I haven't posted here in a while, but THIS IS AWESOME!!!

I like how Robin and Beast Boy were ready to stick up for Raven, ooooooo.....

Can't wait for more!

Crowgirl

P.S. I like your avatar, so you don't have to change it if you don't want to.

CaligoRae
12-31-2004, 11:32 AM
Now say what JC?????? I just did that b/c it was fun. I don't really care about what it is,:rolleyes: but thanks for careing. :anime:

Vivace
01-01-2005, 08:13 PM
Keep on keeping on Cali. You're doing great. Don't judge your own story just write it. Let the feedback say how you're doing. Because, well the feedbacks pretty good and so it you're story

CaligoRae
01-17-2005, 01:30 PM
A/n: NOTICE, NOTICE, NOTICE!!!!!! Sry I haven’t posted in forever. I was having some problems with my parents. And there is also the fact that I have school. YUCK!!! Well anyways, just as I promised. A nice looong chapter. Enjoy! Oh and I just want to say that I’m moving the job thing so I hope ya’ll caught that. Its still gona be in there, just not at that point. Pls go back to the 3rd page and read that chapter. I redid a lot so pls reread or you won’t get in. you only have to read that chapter.

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“No really, man, this movie rocks! You gotta see it!!!” Beastboy exclaimed, as he and Cyborg proceeded to drag Rorek into the entertainment room.



“Run while you still can.” Raven said while passing them in the hall.



“I think I will take your advice.” Rorek said, suddenly changing directions and following her now. The two guys discovered ( three moments later.) that they were no longer holding onto anyone.





“Aw mannnn,” they whined, sulking on down the hall in defeat.



He’s not following me, this is just the only other way to go, it is, after all, a hall. He is not following me. Raven told herself as she headed for the living room and settled herself, cross-legged, in the air before ( as in, in front of.) the view. She’d missed being able to meditate here, It had such a nice view, especially at might when the buildings were all alight and the lake (not sure if it’s a lake or not.) sparkled with the reflection. But it wasn’t so bad during the day either.





“Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos. Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos.” She repeated. My body is a barrier; the physical world is all that keeps me from the limitless expanse. But my mind is free, my mind is vast. I cannot be touched, I will not be limited. My mind is clear of all worldly thoughts….why is he still here? “Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos.” He is not here, nothing is here, there is no here, there is no there. Space is but an illusion, the body is a shell, a shell that I can be released from. I must purify my mind, clear it of all thoughts, all worldly feelings, of all emotions. What is he staring at?!? “Excuse me; it’s really hard to concentrate when you’re staring at me.” She said, a note if irritation in her voice.



“Oh, forgive me; I was wondering if I could join you?” He asked.



Raven sweat dropped. Well, if he was meditating instead if staring at her, she could concentrate much better. “Suite yourself.” She said, turning back around to face the window again. She floated over to the side so that he had plenty of room. He settled himself in the air beside her, mimicking her position.



“Could you explain your method to me? I’m afraid I’ve never come across your form of meditation.” He asked.

“Very well. First you must find your center, concentrate on it, and obtain a connection with yourself. Your center is your inner self, the point where everything is emitted from, thoughts, feelings, emotions, reactions, everything. Then you must clear your mind, think of nothing and everything at the same time. Thoughts and memories that trouble you the most, or will get in your way, will come to you. You must take them apart, weed through them, and cleanse yourself of them. You must take control of yourself, be in complete command of all emotions, all thoughts, and then push them all away. Purify yourself of these worldly things, the body is a shell, and these things are barriers that will leave you forever untouchable, but you can only do this through complete purification. Nothing in the outside world matters, nor should it hold your attention. Meaning you have to stop staring at me.” She added opening one eye at him.



“Oh! Right!” He said, turning his head towards the window and closing his eyes.



“Now, repeat after me.” Raven said, closing her eyes again, “Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos. Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos.” She said. He then said it after her, “Now say it with me and remember what I told you.” She instructed. Their voices then became one, saying that same thing at the same time. Raven relaxed her body and her mind, and then began to cleanse herself.



“This is difficult to do while flying.” He said.



“You don’t have to do it while levitating, though I would suggest it as it will improve your focus. I never said you’d be able to accomplish all of that on your first try after all.” She told him.



“I see. I suppose I will merely concentrate on finding my center then.” He said.



“A wise choice. Try again. Azrath, Metrion, Zynthos.” She said, once again going through the process of cleansing herself. And then,





SMACK! Raven twitched and slowly grabbed the blob of smelly socks off her head.



“STANK BALL!!!” Cyborg yelled.



“Dude, you just hit Raven…see ya!” BB exclaimed, high tailing it away.



“Huh?” Cyborg looked over, and found Raven, eyes glowing white, holding the stinkball which was engulfed in her black fire. “Uh, now, now Raven, it’s all fun and games. I mean, you love Stink Ball, dontcha?!?” He asked nervously. Raven threw the blob. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!” Cyborg yelled, running away from it. The ball followed him around corners and would keep following him until it hit and left a nice bruise.



“hn, hnhnhn.”

“What are you laughing at?” Raven asked, not at all amused.





“We’re supposed to be controlling our emotions, aren’t we?” He asked.



“And who says I wasn’t in control?” She responded, taking her place in the air again, “They know better that to ‘stink ball’ me while I’m meditating.” She told him.



“I see, shall we continue then?” he asked





“Oh Raaavvveeenn!” Called a cheery voice. “There you are!”





“Actually, it seems you’ll have to continue without me.” Raven said, sweat dropping as Starfire grabbed her arm.



“Oh you will not believe it, Raven! I found a set of clothing that you would look absolutely gorgeous in! I took the measurements of the costume still in the laundry room and went shopping for something when I found it! Come on, you must try it on!” Starfire exclaimed, dragging Raven along behind her.



Raven’s eyes widened in dread, “Oh no, Starfire? Can’t we talk about this?” Raven asked.



“We can talk about anything, Raven!” Starfire exclaimed, “Let’s go to my room to talk!” Raven grimaced

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A/n: wow, told ya it would be long. The next chapter is gona be really funny. Well i hope i can update soon. Until then i hope you liked it! Caligo

Rae
01-17-2005, 04:13 PM
that was long overdue and really great!

That last bit with the stinkball and Starfire shopping was hillarious!!!

Rae

Sproxie
01-17-2005, 06:06 PM
LOL, that was great! The way Raven keeps getting distracted from her meditation was hilarius! can't wait to hear more!

JazzyChick
01-17-2005, 09:18 PM
YEAH!!!!!! so glad you got this up! like Rae said, its long overdue. anywho, i liked the lighted-heartedness, i've been reading so many sad and/or dramatic stuff lately, it was nice to laugh. can't wait for your next post!

this is for viviance (or however you spell his name...) Reanoldtastic!

Adrastea
01-18-2005, 07:10 PM
YAHOO!!!

She came back! and still kicking, wonderful work, i love it!

Vivace
01-18-2005, 09:15 PM
Oooo, shiny stuff. Errrrr.....good chapter, great comadey in it. Soo, I expect it won't take a month for you to update this time? Just kidding take your time as long as you bring results. We need more, feed us.

CaligoRae
01-22-2005, 07:49 PM
A/N: I’m back!!!!!! And yes, I am still kicking!!!! I actually to update sooner than I thought. This is mostly for JC, since we didn’t get to do our thing today, I thought I would make up for it with a nice juicy post. Oh, and don’t worry, I didn’t forget bout ya’ll, it’s for u too. ENJOY!!!!!



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“Uh, Star? While this outfit might look good on you, it is not something that I could wear even if I wanted to.” Raven said.



Starfire had, somehow, gotten her into a soft pink, long sleeved, tankini top, cream-colored skirt, a pair of white boots that came to her knees, some gold and silver jewelry that went with the outfit, and also put her hair up in a pink ribbon ponytail with two locks of hair framing her face. (Had WAY too much fun with this.) All in all, she looked like a crow trying to wear peacock feathers. Likely, Starfire’s image of her in it had her with a completely different skin-color and hair style. Starfire sighed sadly; even she cheery colors did NOT work with Raven’s complexion.



“Perhaps next time, then, I shall make sure to buy dark and dreary colors.” Starfire said.



Raven frowned at her reflection in the full-length mirror. She didn’t want to wear the outfit no matter what color it was in, but Starfire had only meant to do something nice for her, even if she was vastly overdoing the ‘Girl friends’ thing a little. Raven inwardly sighed. She closed her eyes and out her hands together, murmuring a quiet spell. (Don’t know if she can really do this, but it’s MY fic, so she can.) When she opened her eyes the sight that greeted her was actually rather pleasing. She had turned all the pink clothes to black, the white into blue, and all the gold turned silver. The only thing that needed manual alteration was the bow on the ribbon. Raven undid the bow and instead turned it into a regular knot.



“Oh Raven!” Starfire exclaimed with a gasp of delight. That is so wonderful! I am overjoyed that you have turned my misguided gift into something that looks so good on you! I am overjoyed!” She said. “We must show the others!”



“Ummm.” Raven’s eyes went wide. ‘Show the others’? She’d rather die that let ANY of the boys see her wearing this! Especially Ro—no, especially ANY of them!



“Starfire, I don’t think—“She tried, no good.



“Oh but we MUST show them! It looks so good on you. Come, I shall call them all together.” She said, dragging Raven out the door.



“No, no no no no no.” Raven grabbed onto the doorframe with her free hand and tried to stop Starfire from getting her into the living room. To bad.

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A/n: Ha-ha, gotcha, well hoped ya liked it. The next one is gona be great. Now, post!!!!

Crowgirl
01-22-2005, 08:47 PM
Great chapter, loved the outfit thing. But one problem. WAY too short. Other than that, really really good.

Oh yeah, if you want to leave a not in your writing, do it like this:

Starfire had, somehow, gotten her into a soft pink, long sleeved, tankini top, cream-colored skirt, a pair of white boots that came to her knees, some gold and silver jewelry that went with the outfit, and also put her hair up in a pink ribbon ponytail with two locks of hair framing her face.*

* Had WAY too much fun with this.

Instead of just putting it into these: ( ) (I forget how to spell it... :sweat: ) Other than that, can't wait for more!!

CG

JazzyChick
01-22-2005, 09:09 PM
that was really funny! i'm still laughing, but it was really short. i know you're having.....issues.....getting onto the computer (and my and TTG's ideas for stories are getting you all depressed and junk) but we didn't have to wait a month for it, so i guess it all works out....see ya later

TeenTitansGO!
01-22-2005, 09:40 PM
lovin' it. THat was pretty funny. SOmeone should draw Raven in that.

Raven_909
01-22-2005, 09:47 PM
Hey!!!!!!!!!

I love your fic, and I don't want to be evil in this fic, though, being evil is a big compliment, I'm too tired.Anyway, write more!:anime::anime::anime:(^_^)

~Ra\/en_909~

Sproxie
01-23-2005, 04:23 AM
‘Show the others’? She’d rather die that let ANY of the boys see her wearing this! Especially Ro—no, especially ANY of them!
Hmmm....... what's this I see? Was 'Ro' short for Robin?? Will this be a Rae/Rob fanfic??? :anime:
That was a good Chapter, A little on the short side, but still pretty good.
SOmeone should draw Raven in that.I would, but i can only draw real people, not cartoons. :shrug:

Rae
01-23-2005, 08:22 AM
Was 'Ro' short for Robin??

I think it was 'Ro' short for Rorek, as he's in this fic!

Great chapter CaligoRae only down side is the size but that's only a small thing

Rae

Crowgirl
01-23-2005, 10:13 AM
SOmeone should draw Raven in that.
I could try... :sad: I don't know if I'll show anyone though.....

CaligoRae
01-23-2005, 08:25 PM
Yeah, i know it was really short,bu tdue to some "issues" Isome will be long ad some will be short. Anyways, TTG, where did you get that picture???!!!??? I have to know!!!! I must Know!!!! You can't resist the frog!!!!!:evil: :evil:

CaligoRae
01-23-2005, 08:26 PM
Yeah, i know it was really short,bu tdue to some "issues" Isome will be long ad some will be short. Anyways, TTG, where did you get that picture???!!!??? I have to know!!!! I must Know!!!! Tell me or i'll throw my frog at you!!! You can't resist the frog!!!!!:evil: :evil:

CaligoRae
01-23-2005, 08:30 PM
sry for posting twice:sweat:

Crowgirl
01-24-2005, 11:02 AM
TRIPLE POST!! MY EYES.............

It burns! Ahh!!!

Vivace
01-24-2005, 07:43 PM
Two words. Too. Funny. I'm surious I think i just laughed out my spleen.

CaligoRae
02-09-2005, 08:07 AM
Like my Avatar??? I think its awsome and that episode was CRAZY!!!!! AHHH!!!! It made me scream!!! Ok well now that thats said io will be writeing the next chapter shortly. Thanks

Raven_909
02-15-2005, 07:52 PM
I love your avatar. But she doesn't look like Raven in it... she looks like lily... WRITE MORE

rrarbecy
02-15-2005, 07:58 PM
I love your avatar. But she doesn't look like Raven in it... she looks like lily... WRITE MORE
The sexy Raven ROCKS!

CaligoRae
02-21-2005, 02:03 PM
A/N: I’m back once again!!!!! Yep, It’s finally time for an update. Once again I’m gona say sry for the wait. I know it was a little longer than usual, but I hope this chapter will make ya happy! This should be a nice big one, so hold on to your seats! Here ya go! Enjoy!



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“You beat me! How did you beat me! No one has ever beaten me! Are you SURE you’ve never played this game before?!?” Cyborg was yelling. Raven made a desperate grab for the banister….and missed.





“I assure you I have not.” Answered Rorek’s voice. Raven caught the banister this time and held onto it for dear life.



‘Plleeeaassee don’t let him see me like this! She mentally begged.





A door opened, ‘Oh good, your all here, where’s Raven and Star? Robin’s voice asked.





“I dunno, I think they went out.” Beastboy answered.





“We are here, Robin!” Starfire called, emerging into view from the door that lead to the stairs.



“Uh, Star? What’s up?” BB asked.



“May I present,” Starfire let out a grunt, “Raven!” She exclaimed, meticulously (funny word!!) pulling Raven out into the open.





All eight eyes went as wide as tennis balls. (That would be kind of weird….) The stupor broken only a moment later by Beastboy turning into a dog and going, “Ar Ar Aroooooo!!!!! And panting. Now it was Raven turn to stair with wide eyes and red cheeks.





“Whoa! Nice new look, Rea!” Cyborg exclaimed, suddenly at Raven’s side so he could see her up close.





“Uhhhhh.” Raven sifted uncomfortably. ‘Shoot me now.” She thought. She looked at Robin as if to say “help!”, but even HE was too surprised to do so, and apparently interpreted her glance as asking for his opinion.





“Uh, yeah. It looks ah, very good on you.” He then looked at Starfire, who was swelling with pride. “Uh, exactly HOW did you get her to wear it?” He whispered.





Starfire was about to answer, when Rorek’s voice cut the conversation like a knife, “Personally, I believe you’re dress looked much lovelier on you, Lady Raven.”





Everyone stopped to stare at him in amazement. “Uh, I mean, it’s just that…” Rorek tried, instantly recognizing that he had said something wrong, but not a moment later was everyone starting by at Raven.



“You wore a dress?!?” They all yelled at once, including Robin.



‘Alright, this is going a little too far.’ He’s talking about my nightgown.” She told them, allowing her irritation to enter her voice as a warning. No good.



“Really?!? How come we’ve never seen it on you!?!” Beastboy exclaimed.



“You must let us see you with it on. I bet it looks so pretty on you!” Said Starfire.



“Uh guys?” Robin said, apparently being the only one to notice Raven’s growing temper.



“Yeah, come on!” Cyborg out in.





“Please?!?” They all asked at the same time, (except Robin.) giving Raven large grins.





That did it.







“NO!” She yelled, the force of her anger throwing them all backwards. Rorek had to dive down in order to avoid getting hit. “I AM NOT PUTTING IT ON! WHAT AM I, SOME KIND OF DOLL NOW?!? I WILL NOT WEAR MY NIGHTDRESS JUST SO YOU CAN SEE WHAT IT LOOKS LIIKE AND I REFUSED TO WERAR THIS EVER AGAIN!!!” She yelled. The glass window and the TV screen both shattered, the furniture was turned over, and any loose, breakable objects fell off their original place and on the ground. When it all settled down, Raven was nowhere to be seen.






Raven bolted her door and went straight for her closet, changing as fast as she possibly could. She then put then took the scissors on of her drawer and began chopping the outfit into ruff pieces. About 30 minutes had passed and she had calmed down a bit. She had relaxed, she had to control her emotions, and that included her temper. She wanted to scream so bad, to cry, to laugh, to do anything to make her feel better, but she knew she couldn’t and that was how it’s was going to be, most likely, for the rest of her life. But she was just so mad!



“How could they do that?!? They made my looked like a complete idiot! Putting me in something that I never even dreamed of wanting to wear!” A glass candle holder broke in the background. “Ok, I have to calm down, emotions are pointless, there is no reason to me be upset. Just put in some music and meditate. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. After that she walked over to her boom box that Cyborg had got her one Christmas. (I know, I know, but I want a boom box, so I’m gong to live in an imaginary world, you have a problem with that!!) She used use a lot more than she thought she ever would, thought the music she played was not really happy or joyful music as Starfire would put it, bit then again she was never a joyful person. She looked on her dresser and found her Avril Lavigne cd: Under My Skin. (Have that CD. I don’t own Avril or any of her song, but I have the cd so what ever, but it’s my favy.) She turned it to number 2 (yep, that’s mine favy too! Ok, sorry to bother you, but this is my very first song thingy, so bare with me.) As the song was starting, she thought about her mother and her poor excuse for a father. She thought about what she was and that the truth she had been running from was slowly catching up to her.







‘Something just isn’t right

I can feel it inside

The truth isn’t far behind

You can’t deny





She walked over to her bed and turned the lights of with her powers. She sat down in the middle of the bed and got in her meditation position. Slowly listening to how the song related to her.





When I turn the lights out

When I close my eyes

Reality over comes me

I living a lie



She thought about the song and listened to the words. She so deep into the song that she turned the volume up as loud as it could go (Which is loud if you own a boom box.) with her powers.



When I’m alone

I feel so much better

And when I’m around you

I feel…..







Rorek. Rorek, was the one that was doing this to her, he was the one making her feel this way. He was always so nice to her and always had that thing in his eyes. ‘I can’t trust him; he will betray me just like Malchior. No matter what he says.’ She thought to herself.





Together

It doesn’t feel right at all

Together

Together we’ve built a wall

Together

Holding hand will fall

Hand will fall…..





‘He broke my heart. He did this to me. NO! That was Malchior, not Rorek. What is up with this music, this isn’t really helping. I have to get control! I’m losing it!’ She yelled at herself. But no matter how hard she tried she couldn’t move. She couldn’t open her eyes, everything was dark. All she could hear was the music. Just the music.





This has gone on too long

I realize that I need

Something good to rely on

Something for me



When I’m alone

I feel so much better

And when I’m around you

I don’t feel….



Together

It doesn’t feel right at all

Together

Together we’ve built a wall

Together

Holding hands will fall

Hands will fall

She couldn’t see anything and if she could hear anything, she would have heard the continuous pounding out side of her door. (Don’t worry we’ll get to that later.) She started to cry. She could feel her warm tears dipping down her cheek. She felt so helpless.





My heart is broken

I’m here

My thoughts are choking

On you, my dear

On you, my dear

On you, my dear



When I’m alone

I feel some much better

And when I’m around you

I don’t feel





Together

It doesn’t feel right at all

Together

Together we’ve built a wall

Together

Holding hands will fall

Hands will fall





The pain of it was horrible. She felt like something was crushing her lungs and her head. With one final breath she did what she thought was the only think she could do. She screamed. Then darkness claimed her.





Together

It doesn’t feel right at all

Together

Together we’ve built a wall

Together

Holding hands will fall

Hands will fall





When I around you

When I’m around you

I don’t feel together

I don’t feel together.



When I around you

When I’m around you

I don’t feel together, no

I don’t feel together, no





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(10 minutes earlier.)







“You knock!”



“No, You!”



“No way man!”



“Look, someone has to knock.” Came the voice of none other than Robin.



They were standing out side of raven’s door after they decided that they should apologize for embarrassing her. But at the moment, they had to decide who would knock on the dark girl’s door. All afraid of having to face her wrath. (Well, that gives me some ideas. Come here vivace.)



“Ok, Ok, I got it. We’ll all go to Canada (I have nothing against anyone who is from Canada or any other part of the world.) and have a super, jumbo, burping match to see who the best burper is, and the loser will have to knock on Ravens door.” Came a suggestion from Beastboy.





“And what does that have to do with going to Canada?” Asked Cyborg.



“I…I don’t know.” Replied Beastboy.



“How bout we just draw straws?” Asked Boy Wonder.



“Yes, let us do the annual drawing of the straws!” Exclaimed a very excited Starfire. Robin and Starfire looked to Cyborg and Beastboy.



“Sounds good to me.”



“Fine.”



“Err, pardon me, but is this straw drawing some type of modern day duel?” Asked Rorek, clearly confused.



At this, everyone sweat dropped. ….2 minutes later they we’re all ready for the game. After Rorek had found out that is.



“Are we ready team?” Asked Robin and with a nod from everyone, pulled a hand full of straws out from behind his back. “Ok go!”



They all pulled out a straw to find that Beastboy had the shorter one.





“Oh man!!!! You’ve got to be kidding me!! She’s gona kill me!!” He said. But after a stern look from the rest of his team he went and knocked on the door.







“He...Hey, Raven... Umm…me and the team have been thinking and we just wanted to apologize for the thing earlier….Raven?????....RAAVVEENN!?! Come on, open up!!” He put his pointy ear to the door and heard the music. “Wow, I didn’t know Raven DID music!” He said in otter disbelief.



“What?!?” Came the reply of the team.



“Yeah, she’s listening to….”



“AHHHHHHHHH!”





“RAVEN!!” They all yelled running up to the door.





“They banged on the door fro what seems 30 minutes, but neither Starfire’s nor Cyborg’s strength could get it down.”





Then Rorek came up from behind.



“Look out! Centavo Mihas De Mali!!!!” Yelled Rorek and with that the door busted down. Only to revile a black power in the room blinding off everything. Raven’s power.

When they tried to enter, whips of the power grew and knocked them back out into the hall.



“I don’t get it; I thought Raven always had control over her emotions!” Stated Beastboy.



“Emotions?” Asked Rorek.



“Yeah, Raven’s powers are channeled by emotion. That’s why things blow up when she gets mad and stuff. Answered Beastboy.

“Really” Replied Rorek



“There’s no time, we can talk about this later. Right now we have to save Raven!!” Yelled Robin



“But how, we don’t even know what is causing this!” Said Cyborg pointing to the black storm.



“Wait! Did you say she was listening to Music?” Asked Rorek, looking at Beastboy.



“Yeah, but what does that….”



But before he could finish Rorek was concentrating on the words of the song.





When I’m alone

I feel so much better

And when I’m around you

I don’t feel..



Together

It doesn’t feel right at all

Together

Together we’ve built a wall

Together

Holding hands will fall

Hands will fall





“That’s it! It’s the music! It’s not letting her release her feelings! It’s just building them up!” Rorek exclaimed.



“Ok, someone has to go in there and stop that music!” Robin commanded. But before anyone could blink Rorek was in a transparent yellow bubble and was in the room.



He was in, but didn’t have much time. He had to smash what ever was making that noise, but what is it! He listened and followed his ears to a black looking box. After confirming that it was what was making the noise he smashed it, not knowing how to turn it off. Only a few seconds later the power was gone. Rorek looked around the room for Raven and finally found her motionless body on the bed.







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A/n: I can’t believe I wrote all that! Well, ya’ll wanted long so there it is. My longest chapter yet I think. So I don’t want any complaining about it being too long. You still got lots of story left. I hope this holds ya over till next time. Now you know what to do. Hope ya enjoyed it. Caligo:anime:

Rae
02-21-2005, 03:42 PM
That was a great chapter and well overdue!

Can't wait for more! But i will!

Rae

TeenTitansGO!
02-21-2005, 08:13 PM
YahAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! I'm lovin' it. I just want ACTION.. Muhaha, ACTION!



TTG~I love the TT comics!

CaligoRae
02-22-2005, 10:46 PM
Your a dork............:shrug:

Vivace
02-23-2005, 08:11 AM
I second that motion. (which motion you ask...why this one *does a dance that would make people cry it's so bad*)

Raven_909
04-27-2005, 12:07 PM
I love the chapter, and how you used the song Together (the second best song in this world. The best is Forgotten!) Anyway, I really hope you write more soon.