A portal to her mind (teen titans Fan Fic)

[Sproxie]

Look this is my first fan fiction and honestly i didnt want to post it, i hate having other people read my work.... but anyway here goes nothing...

Chap 1

Pain, death, murder. Horrible thoughts flowed through out Raven's mind, thoughts of her past. Then she woke up with a gasp. She looked around the room and calmed down. "Just a nightmare" she murmered. She looked over and it was 5:43 she got up off her bed, grabbed her cloak and belt and headed for the living room.

She was the first one up, that was usually the case every morning. She walked over to the bookcase and picked out a large leather bound book and started reading, After about 15 minutes, she couldnt seem to concentrate, she looked up and saw Beast Boy standing in front of her staring at her with one of those "u need to get a life" looks. "What?" asked Raven slightly confused. "Is that all you ever do, read and meditate?" replied Beast boy. "Why?" asked Raven "It just seems so boring. Do You consider it fun?" "Honestly no," replied Raven "but there's not much else i can do, practically everything else requires emotion." "Oh" he said walking away. Raven went back to reading, or tried. and Beast boy noticed she couldnt concentrate, so he tried to start a conversation, one that would let him get to know her a little bit, none of the titans knew much about her, she was always so quiet and secretive. "have you ever been able to have emotions?" he asked. She looked up a slight hint of sadness in her eyes and then it vanished. Her only Reply was "once, i tried" then Beast Boy, knowing it would be a big jump asked, "what Happened?" but this time Raven didnt look up, or respond, but Beast Boy was slighlty expecting that, but trying to be more careful, this time he said "well would it hurt to try again?" then Raven Closed her book and left to her room, on the way she said "yes, and in certain cases it could Kill" and then the door shut. BB slaped his forehead, "is it just me she doesnt like or am i extremly bad with making small talk with dark and creepy people?" "I think its the first one" said Cyborg walking in, U know we all want to try getting closer to her BB especially Star, but i think from now on stay away from the subject on her past when u talkto her...

[rrarbecy]

It was only a matter of time before Sprox posted a fic, and now it's finally happened. RAVEN BASED FICS ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!! This one looks promising.

My next fic will be centered on Raven and a new character.

[raven54]

yeah dude this is a good start. i also hate having others read my work... but you shouldn't worry about sucking cuz this is very nice:D .

[Sproxie]

yeah dude this is a good start. i also hate having others read my work... but you shouldn't worry about sucking cuz this is very nice:D .
thanx but now there is a slight problem... i have writers block all of a sudden... :shrug:

[raven54]

totally normal- maybe make something weird happen or introduce a new character. thats what my fav author's advice is (Tamora Pierce). and if you haven't read her books you should- ALI, DAINE, and KEL ROCK!!:D

[Panda22]

I get writers block ALL the time.

[Raven37]

OoOoh intresting, in a good way! I like it, keep writing! :D

[RavenBlackfire3]

im lovin it so far! really lovin it! keep on goin!:D

[oneeyemonkeypie]

so many new TT fics!
but I like this one.
OK, helpful hint time. no offense meant, I'm just offering some writing tips.

1. paragraphs
2. type it in word
3. write more per chapter (i like this story, I hate reading 20 second chapters)

But this is really better than most of the other fics here. Nice work!

who else loved the new episode? best ending to any episode, in any series, ever!

[rrarbecy]

so many new TT fics!
but I like this one.
OK, helpful hint time. no offense meant, I'm just offering some writing tips.

1. paragraphs
2. type it in word
3. write more per chapter (i like this story, I hate reading 20 second chapters)
who else loved the new episode? best ending to any episode, in any series, ever!

I agree. Read what I posted in All For Nothing.

I also agree that 20 second chapters are annoying, but its better than the 20 minute chapters in "Winds of Fate-X Factor"

[starburn1116]

who else loved the new episode? *raises hand*
ooh! ooh!
me! me! me!
i loved it!

*sigh*
another day
another raven fic
so far on this site i have seen 3 types of fics
1)new characters
2)starfire/robin relationship
3)raven
i have seen very few purely starfire
and no beastboy or cyborg
ofcourse i'm not sure about rrarbecy's story

but don't understand me
i am certainly not conplaining
i don't care what kind of tt fic it is as long as it is one

please sprox
post more!

[Sproxie]

so many new TT fics!
but I like this one.
OK, helpful hint time. no offense meant, I'm just offering some writing tips.

1. paragraphs
2. type it in word
3. write more per chapter (i like this story, I hate reading 20 second chapters)

But this is really better than most of the other fics here. Nice work!

who else loved the new episode? best ending to any episode, in any series, ever! i would have but my word is cheep and i also hate twenty second chapters i had a great story on my mind, but when it came time to write it, it didnt come out so well.... but thanx anyway ill do the paragraphs next time! :sweat:

[Panda22]

*sigh*
another day
another raven fic
so far on this site i have seen 3 types of fics
1)new characters
2)starfire/robin relationship
3)raven
i have seen very few purely starfire
and no beastboy or cyborg Are you dissing MY story now?:mad:

[Sproxie]

i dont think this chap is gonna be to good i wrote it in 10 minutes i got a wedding to go to now!

After Raven left, Cyborg gave BB the evil Eye and he went to go cook breakfast, behind him Beast Boy yelled "TOFU WAFFLES!" and then the day began, starting off with Cyborg and BB all ready arguing. Robin walked in looking extremely tired and yelled "WHATS WRONG WITH YOU?? ITS 6:30 IN THE MORNING!" he sighed and walked over to the kitchen with BB and Cyborg to help them figure out what was gonna be for breakfast. About 5 minutes later Starfire walked in, happy as always.

The day went on and Raven was no where to be seen. She hadnt come out for breakfast, or lunch, only to help the titans stop Cinderblock. After cinderblock was taken to jail, Starfire asked "where have you been Raven, you did not even come out to try my new.." and then she was cut off when Raven opened a portal and walked in, leaving starfire talking to herself. All the titans looked at each other and shrugged. at the Titans Tower Cyborg turned to Beast Boy, exactly what did you two talk about this morning? Beast boy shuffled his feet. "I dunno, i was just trying to get to know her and well i guess you can say we went to the subject of her past..."

"Look, I just asked her little things like if she was ever able to have emotions," said Beastboy. "Well there is alot you guys dont know about her past, try stayin away from that subject, everyone." said Cyborg" there's alot We dont know about her past?" "Cyborg do you know something we dont know?" asked Robin curiously "no" he said quickly and walked away. Robin and BB eyed him curiously and glanced at eachother. "Cyborg please, we wish to know Raven more to become closer friends with her." star said then Cyborg sighed, "i dont know anything really, just that she had a cruel past..."

[rrarbecy]

This is leading to something dramatic. I can feel it.

[Raven37]

I need more!!!! This is good so far!!!! MORE!!!!:D

[Crowgirl]

so many new TT fics!
but I like this one.
OK, helpful hint time. no offense meant, I'm just offering some writing tips.

1. paragraphs
2. type it in word
3. write more per chapter (i like this story, I hate reading 20 second chapters)

But this is really better than most of the other fics here. Nice work!

who else loved the new episode? best ending to any episode, in any series, ever!
Sniffle, sniffle, you make us all sound so inferior....

This is a nice fic, if you do not continue I will find you.... I have my ways...

SPELLBOUND RULES!!!

[Raven37]

I know!!!!Spellbound was so cool!:D

[raven54]

i was sooooo mad at myself- i put in the wrong date so the VCR didn't record Spellbound! Let's just say that there are several new broken things around here... but it'll be on @ 9, I hope.

[Rae]

I am soooooooooo jealous!!!

I really want to see Haunted and Spellbound but the new ep's aren't out here yet!!!

I'm gonna die of anticipation of both the new ep's and this story

So Sprox please write more!!!

[Sproxie]

am i the only one who has issues with my father? he LOVES to kick me off the computer... (and just downright annoy the hell outta me) but anyway sorry if i dont post very much on weekends (that is when he is actually home...) :mad:

anyway i sound evil soooo ill try to post soon....

[Sproxie]

ok so it was sooner than i thought....

"Alright everybody, Story Time!" yelled Beast Boy. "What??" said Cyborg? "well, you obviously know something we dont!" said Beast Boy. "I said..." then he stopped "fine, but i told you I dont know much!" "all I know is one day, before I was turned into a half man half machine, I was on my way football practice and I saw a portal open up from the ground and girl came out of it. she looked horrible!" "CYBORG!" Starfire said cutting him off. "NO not in that way! I mean she was all beaten up bruises everywhere cuts scratches, just about everything, and she was just laying there in pain" "I went to go help her up but I couldnt, she blocked me off with a dark force field." "which is why i now know it was raven" "she looked like she was afraid of me, the whole world..." "then she imediately left, through another portal." "and You think it was her father who did that to her? said Beast boy still remembering the last time he saw him, in Raven's mind. "yea, and there are probably other horrible things that have happened to her through out her life..." cyborg said camly.

thats it for now cause i gotta go somewhere quick!
i know it was quick and all but i had to write it fast!

[Rae]

Short but sweet

I like it!!!

[Raven37]

Like Rae said, short but sweet:anime:
Like it so far, write more!!!:D

[Sproxie]

it didnt come out at all how i thought of it....
sigh....

[rrarbecy]

it didnt come out at all how i thought of it....
sigh....

Hey, it was great anyway. Love it. :)

[Sproxie]

o and his memory was of when they were both 7

unnecssary info i know but....

[Raven37]

More!!!!!!PLEASE!!!:D

[CaligoRae]

Now y would u stop such a great story???? PLease please continue

[Sproxie]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! :eek:
WHO BROUGHT THIS BACK!!!?!?? :crying:

Now y would u stop such a great story???? PLease please continuenope, not finishing it. it's a disgrace to one of my newer stories. (that i'm not gonna post either) :p

[rrarbecy]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! :eek:
WHO BROUGHT THIS BACK!!!?!?? :crying:

nope, not finishing it. it's a disgrace to one of my newer stories. (that i'm not gonna post either) :p
What is wrong with you. You're killing me!

[Sproxie]

What is wrong with you. You're killing me!huh...? :sweat:

[rrarbecy]

huh...? :sweat:
Not finishing this great story, and not posting your other one.

[raven54]

HAHHAHAHAHAAAAA!!I didn't even need to go and bring it back!!!

dude, if you don't post it...nvm, you should definitely post. If you're THAT nervous about it, send it to one of the Freakishly:p Talented Writers... you know who they are.:anime: then plead for help...

[Crowgirl]

Okay, Sprox, if you don't finish this, then I will have to choose from the following options:


Force you to finish it by poking you repetitively with my chopsticks
Finish it myself
Create a petition that will make you finish it
Did I mention using my chopsticks on you?

[raven54]

oooooh, i'd listen to Crowgirl, Sprox. repetitive poking is possibly one of the most annoying things on the planet. Also excessively painful, what with the shiny, pointy redness of THOSE infamous chopsticks.

[Kregor8]

Eh, CaligoRae is the one who brought it back. I guess I ought to thank her. As simple or crude as this story may be (crude as in "rough," not as in the other), it still strikes me for some reason. If you still have an idea where it ought to be going, then feel free to write it. And you don't need to be ashamed of where you've come from. You have the guts to post your stuff online - and leave it here. I just came across some of the stuff I wrote five years ago. It's so painful to read...I'd never let any of you see it, that's for certain. And this isn't really bad. I has some rough edges - paragraphs, quotation marks, all that. Yet, I still like it. Explain? Sorry, I can't. It's just that way.

7<regor

[Raven37]

Eh, CaligoRae is the one who brought it back. I guess I ought to thank her. As simple or crude as this story may be (crude as in "rough," not as in the other), it still strikes me for some reason. If you still have an idea where it ought to be going, then feel free to write it. And you don't need to be ashamed of where you've come from. You have the guts to post your stuff online - and leave it here. I just came across some of the stuff I wrote five years ago. It's so painful to read...I'd never let any of you see it, that's for certain. And this isn't really bad. I has some rough edges - paragraphs, quotation marks, all that. Yet, I still like it. Explain? Sorry, I can't. It's just that way.

7<regor
What he said! EXACTLY what he said! You are becoming outnumbered, I say you write more!:D

[Sproxie]

HAHHAHAHAHAAAAA!!I didn't even need to go and bring it back!!!

dude, if you don't post it...nvm, you should definitely post. If you're THAT nervous about it, send it to one of the Freakishly:p Talented Writers... you know who they are.:anime: then plead for help...OOO your evil.....

*gets poked by a chopstick* ow! *turns around and sees Crowgirl* woa, where did you come fro-*poke* Ow! Anyway, I don't even remember what the point of the story was! :sweat: it was quite a while ago. I'm considering posting my other story here though... AFTER I complete it, (again) stupid computers.....*poke* Ow!

[CaligoRae]

HEHE. Sry i thought it was a good story so i brought it back.:sweat: Well now that everyone knows it was me. I just wanted to take this time to say.....POST OR BURN!!!!:evil: Your being Way out numbered and now i'm bring it back to the front page so everyone can see and read it. Mwhahahaha. It was really good. So stop being so selfish and finish it.

[Lord Welshi]

Please continue this story. It has a very promising start, and needs to be finished. One of the most annoying things on a fiction site is stories that don't get finished, and this one deserves to be finished. It's intriguing, interesting, and invigorating. Entertaining and exotic (well, maybe not exotic, but i'm running out of words.) Please continue.

Lord Welshi commands it :general:

[rrarbecy]

Yeah. Don't go Selena Kyle on us.

[Sproxie]

:sad: alright, i'll try to finish it, but it will take a while, because i have to remember what the point of the story was and what the plot was and so on... but at least i'll TRY, and the chapters won't be as small and crappy-like. i've listened to enough feedback from other stories. *poke* What the...?

[rrarbecy]

HA. We win.

[Raven37]

We always win when we have Lord Welshi on our side.:D

[rrarbecy]

We always win when we have Lord Welshi on our side.:D
Yeah, that's a good point.

[CaligoRae]

oh yeah u know it!!!!

[Crowgirl]

Erm... this isn't going to be finished, is it? :(

[Matt A]

I wouldn't bet on it. Then again, I wouldn't bet on Sproxie giving us any more stories at all.:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:

Ta,
Matt A

[Anime]

Thats just harsh.:crying:

[rrarbecy]

Sproxie has never been too thrilled with her writing. Why? I'll never know.

[Matt A]

Nobody likes their own writng, regardless of how good it may actually be. It's a sad fact, but there you go.

Matt A,
The Sultan Of Shock

[rrarbecy]

I like my writing. But only because others like it.

[Matt A]

Same here: if it wasn't for you guys, I'd hate it.

Matt A,
The Sultan Of Shock

[Crowgirl]

Nobody likes their own writng, regardless of how good it may actually be. It's a sad fact, but there you go.

Exactly, I think mine is total crud.

[rrarbecy]

Isn't it shocking how the best writers(myself not included) think their writing is crap?

[Matt A]

It is indeed, but then again we shouldn't be all that surprised: nothing that you create can ever quite match the vision that you originally have for it.:sad:

Matt A,
The Sultan Of Shock

[Rae]

It is indeed, but then again we shouldn't be all that surprised: nothing that you create can ever quite match the vision that you originally have for it.:sad:

Matt A,
The Sultan Of Shock
That sums it up nicely!

For example, that short story i wrote for the Thanks giving comp...I thought it was trash and it won! I was in shock for the best part of a day!

Rae

[Sproxie]

People, PLEASE stop bringing this thread up. :crying: i dont think it's trash,i know its trash. The other one i'm editing and will finish eventually when i have time.

Oh, and Crowgirl, If anyone ever brings up the other story, just you wait... I will get you while you sleep, MARK MY WORDS! :evil:

[Matt A]

Okay, I'll let this thread die a death. Even though it shouldn't.:sad:

Matt A,
The Sultan Of Shock