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Star/Robin4ever
10-07-2004, 08:14 AM
ok this is my first story ever because i just signed up if it's anything goes wrong i'm sorry here goes nothin
Chapter 1
The day started out as any other day,BeastBoy and Cyborg playing video games, Star and Raven meditating together, and Robin making breakfast while staring at Starfire(he does this every day now). Just as Cyborg beat BeastBoy and Star and Raven stoped meditating and when Robin stroped staring at Starfire because he was burning the waffles ......... the alarm went off.
"Looks like someone new," yelled cyborg "he calles himself Robo from the future?""ok then titans go!"yelled robin"and there it is the 200th time how do you feel?"exclamed BeastBoy"uhhh BeastBoy can we do this later robo is trying to steal something from the museum" said robin "uhhhh yeah sure, i mean who calles themself Robo from the future! PLEASE!!!!!"BeastBoy answered and changing the subject"yeah and who calls themself BeastBoy?"asked raven"yeah- hey!!!!" beastBoy said while changing into a tiger and about to attack her when robin yelled " guys stop lets go!NOW!!!!! and they left.
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ok thats it, please don't hate me the next chapter is much better:sweat:
rrarbecy
10-07-2004, 01:30 PM
It looks promising. Welcome to the corner. Good luck on the rest.
oneeyemonkeypie
10-07-2004, 03:51 PM
start a new paragraph every time the speaker changes. makes it easier to read
Sproxie
10-07-2004, 04:55 PM
great keep writing!
Star/Robin4ever
10-07-2004, 05:40 PM
ok thanks for the tips, here is the second chapter
when the teens got to the museum, Robo was trying to steal an ancient egyptain tablet
"Stop robo please do not steal anything or you will pay"Star yelled the man paused
"ok i wont steal any thing IF i can have a little chat with Robin"
confused Robin started to walk over then he felt a hand on his shoulder and he turned around and saw Starfire with a worried epression
"Don't worry Star i'm ok"Star looked down and let go and Robin went over to Robo
"What do you want?" asked robin
" I have been over hearing that you want to see what the future, yes?" asked Robo
"Yeah" said robin confused more than ever
"well i have come to show you if you want to see the future meet me outside of titans tower got to go bye." said robo as he dissapeard in to a portal
"dude what was that about " asked BeastBoy
"nothing lets go home."said robin
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ok thats it if you don't like it the next chapter is in the Future
Sproxie
10-07-2004, 05:58 PM
sound interesting.... keep writing!
starburn1116
10-07-2004, 06:11 PM
that was pretty good
please continue soon
*what will the future hold?*
Star/Robin4ever
10-08-2004, 08:32 AM
all right people here's the third chapter it's the best one so far :D ;) there are also some new charcters that me and my friends made up. Enjoy!
(in the future)
"Star i'm home!"yelled (future) Robin.
"I'm in the kitchen making dinner!" said Starfire.Robin walked in to the kitchen at Titans Tower
"How's our little girl doing?" he asked patting star's stomach.
star giggled "She's doing just fine."
"Ok, well i'm going to see the other titans." said robin walking out of the room and he started down the hall and when he got to cyborg and Lightfire's room he knocked on the door
"Come in!"
"no thanks i just came to tell you that dinner's ready " said robin
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all right that's one half of chapter 3 give you more later :anime:
This is good!
But who is Lightfire? Is she Star's sister?
So many questions.........
Please update!
rrarbecy
10-08-2004, 02:40 PM
This looks promising.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
oneeyemonkeypie
10-08-2004, 04:39 PM
i like it. If robin and star are having a kid I can only assume they're like 20 or 25, right? at that point I think Robin would become Nightwing. and do they really still live in the tower after all these years?
interesting...
Panda22
10-08-2004, 06:33 PM
Listen up missy! Panda should want a chid, and have short hair, Oh, and look human instead of how she normaly looks. ok??:anime: :anime: :anime: GOOD!!:sweat:
Panda22
10-08-2004, 06:38 PM
I meant child. ERRRG! Oh, and what I said before about robin and the child thing, please do that!!!! It would be SOOOOOOOOOOOOO funny!!!!
Sproxie
10-08-2004, 09:16 PM
story sounds good so far, keep writing!
Panda22
10-09-2004, 08:57 AM
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
now
Star/Robin4ever
10-09-2004, 10:42 PM
all right people here is chapter 3 continued. oh yeah robin is nightwing i'm just used to writing or typing Robin, and no lightfire is not stars sister she is her cousn who is half robot like cyborg, and panda is, well.... used to be like bb and then she turned human.( created by Panda22)and nighttiger is like Raven only a boy, and yes they still live in titans tower because well ..... lets just say they couldn't say find a house to fit enough people that's all i can say so here goes nothin:sweat: :D ;)
robin continued to walk down the hall when he got to Panda and Beast Boy's room he knocked
"come in " someone whispered frome inside and robin walked in
"shhhh Beast Boy is asleep."panda whispered robin looked at the still figure on the bed
" oh well any way how was your honeymoon?" he asked
"it was great spending time with BeastBoy is great."Panda whisperd "here are the photos " wow looks like you guys had fun tell me more at dinner ok."whispered robin as he walked out of the room when he got to raven and night tiger's room no one was there then his comunicator rang it was Star
"dinner is served"star said and she siged off
"Mmmmmm smells good star" robin said walking into the kitchen it looked great roasted turkey,corn on the cob,and cranberry sauce, it was like thanksgiving all over again when every one sat down star fell over moaning
" Robin she is having the baby!"yelled Raven
"ooooooohhhhhhhh man how can women do that."Beast Boy said falling over
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ok people thats it g2g tell u morer later
rrarbecy
10-10-2004, 08:11 AM
You know, after I read this, I just sat here gaping for 10 minutes. *just sits staring at the screen* Look at me! I'm still doing it! That was just too awesome to put ino words. Well, this chapter wasn't awesome, but chapters building up to something big always, well, do this to me. *sits in shocked silence*. Must....Have...MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE
Crowgirl
10-10-2004, 09:53 AM
Um.... Star has the baby right then? :eek: I don't exactly want to be there.
Other than that, it looks very promising. MORE!
rrarbecy
10-10-2004, 10:15 PM
I don't think she's giving birth right there. She's just going into labor. So many perverted minds (myself included). sheesh.
Star/Robin4ever
10-11-2004, 08:18 AM
hi people all of you are my new friends sorry im happy and i would like 4 all of you 2 be my friends if u want well anyway here is chapter 4
(in the past )
robin snuck out of his room
"robin what are you doing in the hall?"star asked coming out of her room,
"ahhh"yelled robin jumping up
"please don't ever do that again and im going to the um...um...the, uh bathroom, bathroom yeah thats it the bathroom"Star stared at him
"ok see you in the morning"she said walking in to her room
"uh yeah see you."robin said walking away when he got outside robo was waiting
"what took you so long?"he asked
"lets just go ok " robin said getting ready for anything
"ok then jump in"robo said opening a portal. Robin jumped in and robo followed him
meanwhile in the future
"robin is this suposed to happen?"Star asked in a quiet voice
just then future robin was sucked in to a portal and he swiched places with past robin
"umm ye-OH MY GOD!!!!:eek: :o:ack: " past robin yelled
"uh sir would you like to cut the cord?"the doctor asked
"uh sure hehehe.":sweat: :sweat: :anime: :o robin said closing his eyes cutting it.
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all right if you thought it was funny tell me ok
rrarbecy
10-11-2004, 08:49 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! That was funny. hee hee hee.
This is awesome, new friend.
Wow. Need...More...Now...
Sproxie
10-11-2004, 01:45 PM
ugh.... cord....
:sweat: anyway.... it was pretty good except got sorta confused in the begining keep writing!
Star/Robin4ever
10-12-2004, 08:15 AM
Hiz Pepolez Sorry I'm Happy And Sad At The Same Time The Bad News Is I Might Not Be Able 2 Write Any More I Have 2 Consult With My Friends.and The Good News Is I'm Happy Not That I Can't Type Anymore It's Just I Made A Bunch Of New Friends Here And If Any One Wants 2 Be My Friend Just Tell Me Okz Okz
Bye
oneeyemonkeypie
10-12-2004, 03:24 PM
huh?
G-R-A-M-M-E-R, it's your friend:) .
Crowgirl
10-12-2004, 03:27 PM
Don't worry, I'll be your friend ONLY if you continue this story...
Nah, I'll be your friend anyways.
WRITE MORE OR DIE!!!:evil: (Your choice...)
Star/Robin4ever
10-12-2004, 04:53 PM
DEAR CROWGIRL,
IF I CHOOSE TO DIE KEEP IN MIND THAT I WILL NOT BE ABLE TO WRITE ANY MORE..........(OBVIOUSLY)............YOU CHOSE.:D ;) :) :p :anime:, :sweat: ........:eek: AHH WHAT AM I SAYING!?!?!?!?
:D :) :p ;) :anime: :sweat: :ack: :( :confused: :mad: :evil:
Sproxie
10-12-2004, 05:05 PM
um... im sorta confused but if what you said means u cant write more for some reason.... this guy will explain what will happen to me -->:evil:
raven54
10-12-2004, 05:09 PM
G-R-A-M-M-E-R, it's your friend:) .
Grammer freaks, UNITE!:D
Panda22
10-12-2004, 06:15 PM
Hiz Pepolez Sorry I'm Happy And Sad At The Same Time The Bad News Is I Might Not Be Able 2 Write Any More I Have 2 Consult With My Friends.and The Good News Is I'm Happy Not That I Can't Type Anymore It's Just I Made A Bunch Of New Friends Here And If Any One Wants 2 Be My Friend Just Tell Me Okz Okz
Bye whats that about??? please tell me...I'm your frined.:D
Star/Robin4ever
10-13-2004, 08:27 AM
sorry i was really hyper then and well i need more ideas sorry
Star/Robin4ever
10-27-2004, 08:13 AM
im bbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaacccccccckkkkkkkkkkk,
and i have lots of ideas for my story/thread and i will later post my friends thread (she lives in kansas and she can't sign up so i will be typing it 4 her!)
g2g,
give u guys more 2morrow,
kit-kat
rrarbecy
10-27-2004, 01:31 PM
HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU STOLE MY AVATAR! :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:
GRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!
oneeyemonkeypie
10-27-2004, 04:45 PM
HEY! I WANNA YELL TOO!
ARGHHH!
:mad: :mad: :mad:
WAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
AHHHHHHHH!!!!111!!!11one!ONE!!!!!!11!
sorry, had to do that.:sweat:
Panda22
10-28-2004, 08:03 AM
HEY! I WANNA YELL TOO!
ARGHHH!
:mad: :mad: :mad:
WAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
AHHHHHHHH!!!!111!!!11one!ONE!!!!!!11!
sorry, had to do that.:sweat:can you say FREEK? yup, I can!:D I'ms a bit depressed, so I'm nots all that hypers.....:sad:
oneeyemonkeypie
10-28-2004, 03:02 PM
ouch...that hurt.
I didn't do that to add to the confusion, or even because I thought it was fun. That was sarcasm, pointing out that he was yelling a whole lot. I just did the same thing to point it out in a humorous manner.
rrarbecy
10-28-2004, 03:04 PM
ouch...that hurt.
I didn't do that to add to the confusion, or even because I thought it was fun. That was sarcasm, pointing out that he was yelling a whole lot. I just did the same thing to point it out in a humorous manner.
I really am angry though.
I LOVE MY AVATAR.
Panda22
10-28-2004, 04:43 PM
I really am angry though.
I LOVE MY AVATAR. I know you do.....I love mine too. Thats why i make mine!:anime:
rrarbecy
10-28-2004, 04:57 PM
I know you do.....I love mine too. Thats why i make mine!:anime:
I wish I knew how to do that
oneeyemonkeypie
10-28-2004, 05:03 PM
I know Rrarbecy, its a cool av.
I gotta say tho, mine is awesome. Knives is such a BADASS!
Just look at him! He is so cool! What with the relflective visor, and the big shoulders and the awesome armor...
Yeah, Knives rocks. Kregor8's new av is very sweet also.
rrarbecy
10-28-2004, 05:17 PM
Oh! Thats what your avatar is.
oneeyemonkeypie
10-28-2004, 07:34 PM
Ja, it's real close.
Except that Knives doesn't have a gun in his helmet, the antenna on the side are smaller and he has a slight overhang over his eyes and two pseudo-spikes that sweep backwards from the sides. Basically the same, but Knives looks just a little cooler.
I dunno about anyone else, but I think he looks like a badass.
raven54
10-28-2004, 08:26 PM
Knives is badass.
Reket
10-28-2004, 08:37 PM
good writing, good story, but kinda short chapters.
Pookey
10-30-2004, 04:42 PM
The chapters are pretty short, but other than that the story kicks butt:D
Crowgirl
10-30-2004, 09:34 PM
Knives is very cool. I give you props. I may post a picture of Crow on my fic, but not as my avatar. I'm not that good an artist.
As for gramer? Who neds tat suff? (:sweat: )
Yes, drawn avatars are very creative. But would the author (I forget, my memory sucks) PLEASE POST SOON? Now that my computer is working okay, I want to know what happens next!!!:evil:
starfire0639
12-08-2004, 01:58 PM
im sorry im new and whatever but i really wish for you to finish this poat i get entrested very easily and i am now well my brain is anyway attached to this story please post soon!!!!!!!:D
Crowgirl
12-08-2004, 02:11 PM
Yeah, it this over already? Doesn't seem over to me....
Star/Robin4ever
12-09-2004, 08:31 AM
i am realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy sorry i have been so busy ash will tell you what i told him
PS i am really sorry 4 taking your atavar:sad:
CaligoRae
12-09-2004, 09:06 AM
Oh, how sad.:crying: PLs continue soon.
rrarbecy
12-09-2004, 01:55 PM
PS i am really sorry 4 taking your atavar:sad:
I forgave you a while ago. Don't worry about it.
Star/Robin4ever
12-09-2004, 06:02 PM
ok thanks
starfire0639
12-14-2004, 03:15 PM
well if yas need some help the ash is always here!:D
Crowgirl
12-14-2004, 03:22 PM
Yeah, if you need help, I'll always be here. Just send me a PM.
rrarbecy
12-14-2004, 03:41 PM
Same here. You can always count on me darlin'.
starfire0639
12-21-2004, 09:50 PM
hahaha darl'n im sorry just noones posted on the forum and i needed to say sometin:anime: as for you star hope you write more soon
rrarbecy
12-22-2004, 01:38 PM
hahaha darl'n im sorry just noones posted on the forum and i needed to say sometin:anime: as for you star hope you write more soon
I call everyone "darlin'" darlin'. (at least the girls) Um... can you write more now?
Star_Fire_Chick
12-22-2004, 08:55 PM
ya i really wish you would write more
starfire0639
12-22-2004, 10:18 PM
hehehe-girly-laugh-thats cute partner!but yes star are you still there or did you run away to some far away land?:sweat:
Star_Fire_Chick
12-23-2004, 10:36 AM
me i ran away to far far far away
starfire0639
12-25-2004, 06:14 AM
hey wait!not you star the other star but you are star and that is star and hey wait i am styar but ....oh my head hurts:sweat:
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