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SilentBob173
05-25-2001, 03:45 PM
Barbara walked down the stairs of the cave with an envelope in her hand. Her father had handed it to her just an hour before. She had fainted when she read what was written inside.

Bruce was blindfolded. He thrust a batarang forward. 84 yards away, the weapon contacted with and chipped of a stalagmite about 1 foot wide.

“Still got it.”

“Wow. Impressive. You can still do that after all these years, huh?”

He grinned and took off the blindfold.

“It’ll probably go as soon as the gray hair sets in.”

“My, uh, my dad gave me an envelope.”

“Important, I take it?”

“A little. Here.”

Bruce took the letter from her extended hand. His quick and experienced eyes soaked it in.

“Commissioner? Are you going to except?”

“I, I- I, uh don’t think so. I mean what about what I’m doing here?”

“You’d have to choose. I’d respect any decision you’d make, but you’d be sorely missed here. It’d be just me and Tim.”

“I know. I know.”

Bruce started walking away.

“Where are you going?”

“I have a few errands to run tonight.”

--


“How? Why weren’t you there before? In court, why?”

“Please. If I had made any signs of still being prevalent within your ‘goody goody’ psyche. They’d of locked me back up and never given me the chance I have now.”

“They must have fought you off. Why would you have left me at all?”

“God, would you look in the mirror?! You’re me! Me with a tan! There is no Jack Napier within my equation, boyo. You’re a hopeful daydream of the common public. Yes, while they’re are those who still remain weary at your integrity, but countless have breathed a sigh of relief in vain. They think my threat is gone from the city. They’ll find out. They’ll see. No one’s safe from my punchline. Least of all, you.”

“I’ll tell them! How can you keep me from giving out your secret?”

“Right now? I can’t. But enlighten me, Jackie-boy, are you really willing to sacrifice your physical freedom? If you rat me out like the rat you are, it’ll be you the lock up. Not me.”

Jack looked around, frightened.

Joker smiled wryly. “See you around, kiddo. Things to plan.”

Then Jack was all alone. He was left with his thoughts. At least, he hoped they were his.

--


Barbara walked into the kitchen of her house. Her father was sitting at the table reading the paper and drinking his coffee. He had an overly tired look in his eyes.

“Dad, I need to talk to you about your... job offer.”

“Have you decided already, hon?”

“Yeah.”

“And?”

“I can’t do it, Pop.”

Jim let out a disappointed sigh. “Okay, but why not?”

“I- I, I can’t. Its a little complicated.” She breathed out a frustrated sigh. “Screw it. I’ll just show you.” Barbara began unbuttoning her blouse.

Jim got a scared look on his face, “Um, Barb, if you have a tattoo, I’m sure you could just as well tell me about it!!!”

“No, Dad, nothing like that!” She laughed.

As she undid the last button, Jim noticed another layer of black clothing under her top. Black, with some sort of a yellow symbol.

--


Jack Napier was on the roof of the boarding house looking out upon Gotham. The wind whipped through his hair and he looked out on all the nameless faces that the Joker hadn’t gotten to yet. He didn’t want them do die. He didn’t want to be locked up. He didn’t want to have to choose between the two.

“Something on your mind, Mr. Napier?”

Jack spun around and was almost face to face with the Batman. He felt the familiar urge to run and gain distance. He had to convince himself to remember that he was no longer an enemy to this man.

“Just, Just trying to get reacquainted with freedom.”

Jack turned away and looked back over the ledge into the night.

“Freedom from the asylum?”

“Hardly.”

“Problems?”

“Nothing that anyone wouldn’t expect.”

Jack couldn’t bring himself to mention his earlier encounter, outright, to him. He didn’t want to be put away.

“If you need anything. If anything happens. Call the commissioner. He’ll call me.”

“Yes, I know how to get your attention. I know what’s going on around—“

Jack turned around.

“—me.”

Batman wasn’t there.

“I guess he finally got the joke on me.”

--


Tim tossed and turned in his tumultuous sleep. The laughing man came towards him. Worse than death. Fate. No. Please. Junior. No. God. Oh, God. Help.

--


Jim Gordon sat in his den. Barbara had long since explained her situation. Hugged him and then left all over again.

A gust of wind from the direction of the window. Oh Jesus.

“Jim?”

“Yes?”

“I heard about your decision to step down.”

“I know.”

“Don’t do it, Jim. Not yet. This town needs you. I need you.”

“Maybe it does. Maybe this town would crumble without me. But, maybe I have needs. Maybe I need peace of mind. Maybe I want to rest. Maybe I just need a friend, Bruce.”

“How?”

“Barbara. When I asked her why she wouldn’t take the job, she told me. I know everything about the four of you. Three, now. I got the whole story.”

“And?”

“No, dammit, I’m not gonna step down. Not yet. Not until something even worse happens or until I think that this city is safe with Jack Napier on the streets. Not yet.”

“Jim, thank you.”

They embraced. It felt good to know the age-old friendship had not lost its steam.

It felt good.

--


Jack wanted to cry. It was overwhelming. He honestly didn’t know if he could suppress Joker. He wanted to cry. He did cry.

It was unlike any anguish he had ever felt. He felt so selfish. He felt so wrong. He felt so torn.

There was a record player and assorted records donated by his supporters. He grabbed the first one he could find. Something. Anything.

He put the record on and flipped the switch.

Then he broke. His mind silently screamed. He felt his mind going. Joker was resurfacing. He stood to his feet and thrashed about. He clutched his hair and his fingers ran down his face. His laughter began to softly sound.

Then the music began to play.

It was Pachelbel’s Canon (http://www.angelfire.com/weird/JasonS/canon.mid) . In D Major. The music began to flood the room. Beautiful music. Unbelievably outstanding music. Music that was surely conducted by God Almighty, Himself.

Jack didn’t even notice it, but anything of the Joker’s that was surfacing before had long since vanished. All that mattered was the music.

The music.

--

-JS

SilentBob173
05-28-2001, 03:09 PM
Come on guys, you're killing me here. Anybody gonna tell me what they think of my little opus here? I slave and sweat over a hot stove all day, what thanks do I get?
Cheers.
Jason S

witness
06-02-2001, 10:39 PM
i wrote a response to this last week! i thought for sure that it had gone through! anyways, i'll write it again. i knew that you were going to make jim sign his daughter up for the job! it was a great way to put it in there. i loved what you did with that. one question though. did the music create the joker, or did the music stop the joker from coming back?

keep up the good work! i'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Daughterof_Evil
06-03-2001, 10:32 PM
I'm sorry; I face the same dilemma: no one is reading my freaking story!!!

Hm. Gordon is tired, Barbara revealed her secret, Tim is having premonitions of things to come, Dick is gone, and Jack Napier is losing his psychological battle with the Joker. Don't you just love Gotham City?

You always make us feel sorry for the most despiccable of characters, don't you? I found it very interesting the way you turned things around: before, it had always been the scared man living within the Joker, and now Joker is living within the scared man. It gives one a certain type of insight towards what happens involving Tim later. I'll try to explain it here without giving too much away. It was almost as if Joker -in his last, most disgusting act- was re-enacting his own life. That a normal and almost extraordinary boy can become the incarnation of evil. It's the same way with adult child molesters who were once molested themselves.

Well, what else can I say? You make us delve into parts of the story you don't describe with words. Have you ever taken psychology by any chance? Before I go, I'd like to say that the backround of Pacelbel -even if it was only playing in my head- was achingly sweet and tragic. I, too, touch on the fact that infinite beauty expressed in music (Pacelbel for you, Tristan und Isolde for me) can really resurrect parts of a person that have been considered dormant. Bravo.

Susie
06-04-2001, 05:09 AM
**runs in...trips on rug...flies Superman style to carpet...jumps to feet...dusts herself off...and smiles**

Okay, so I might have missed a LOT of posts, but **ta-da** here I am again!

This story has such a great set-up with the characters and how it's a prequel for ROTJ so we know what happens, but not how it got there.

Tim's nightmare sequences are terribly sad because they are prophetic and you can't help but feel bad for the kid and the future that we know is waiting for him.

Also, you are actually making me feel sorry for Jack..not the Joker...but Jack. He seems like a guy that just never got the right break.

I can't wait for more and promise to send more FB eariler.